SPOILER
mod from PM.
i'm really really sorry to tell you this beforehand but.
there are too many issues with your map that i just don't know where to start....
In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )
i can only point out some general stuffs at the moment because i just don't know where to start..
you still need a lot of work to fix your mania (esp. HD)
i will just go through the main issue one by one, without getting into specific because i'll just give examples (too many mistake, i'm so sorry)
lvl 14
long notes abuse
00:00:422 (422|3,900|0,1379|1) -
your LN across the diff is very random. it is extremely recommended not to map beat and express them as LN.
and also vocal. it's extremely discouraged to map vocal as well in mania. please consider that when you map.
and next. your LN, if you're following the background instrument (electric guitar, or whatever it is that you're following) be sure to snap it properly
00:00:422 (422|3,900|0) - these are 2/4 beat too short if you're mapping the bg electric guitar
00:02:496 (2496|3) - LN abuse.
00:04:411 (4411|2,5049|0,6964|0,7603|1) -
00:13:028 (13028|0,13985|1,14464|2,15422|3,15741|3,16060|3,16379|3,16698|0,17017|0,17337|0) - and so on.
00:17:975 (17975|3,18613|2,19092|1,20368|0,20847|1) -
00:19:890 (19890|1,20049|2,20368|0,20847|1) - from this, i am now 90% sure that some of your LN follows the singer?
this is extremely discouraged and it would be better for you not to map it.
wrong / incorrect emphasis
00:12:868 - this doesn't make any sense. why only 1 note here? beat emphasis is here because it signals a new phase.
and from this point onward, your placement are (imo) all incorrect unfortunately.. the emphasis of the beat is on the white line, yet you have 2 notes all on the red line. please recheck across your whole diffs. use 25% playback.
00:33:613 - here again several examples, there are too many that i cannot possibly point them out to you one by one,
00:40:954 - 00:42:230 -
and so on.
low quality MP3
this is the case for many anime song. but you need at least a decent quality mp3 to be able to distinguish the sound and map properly, i will provide you with some links below at the end of the mod which i hope you could take a little bit of time to read through and do some research first.
incomplete / inappropriate hitsound
you only use 1 hitsound across the whole map, which means you don't really use anything after all. you need at least 2 or 3 to distinguish the sound and also to give emphasis. for example
00:42:868 - this here, have stronger beat.
00:51:485 - this one is similar with snare sound, a rather high-pitched beat.
and so on. i can give you some recommendations on hitsound later, but the most important thing now is to actually getting your map fixed.
unnecessary - and abusive - jack / hammer
you do not have any pattern at all, or at least your pattern does not allow you to flexibly place the notes, and most of the hammer are not justified here imo. there is practically no exact pitch whereby a hammer is needed, some of the parts are also over-mapped because of the hammer abuse. here are examples
00:36:725 (36725|2,36805|2) -
00:27:709 (27709|0,27868|0,28028|0,28188|0) -
00:28:347 (28347|2,28507|2,28826|2,28985|2,29145|3,29305|3,29464|0,29624|0) -
01:07:443 (67443|3,67603|0,67603|2,67762|1,67922|2,67922|1,68081|0,68241|2,68241|0,68241|1,68400|3,68560|2,68560|3,68560|0,68720|1,68879|0,68879|3,69039|2,69198|1,69198|0,69278|2,69358|2,69517|1,69517|2,69517|0,69677|3,69837|1,69837|3,69837|2) -
basically it exists on the whole map. please reconsider.
lastly, this is my opinion, and again i deeply apologise, and i am sorry if i offended you in any way (because i did not intend to offend you)
however. at it's current stage the mania mode is (probably) not safe-able (i.e. cannot be saved). the only way for you to fix all these, imo, is to actually remake the whole diffs...
and if you're very new to mania mapping its better for you to take a look at other ranked map and copy their style / patterning for exercise. you may also want to request your friend to do GD for you to make it easier, and you can learn from that GD-ers.
here are the links that i promised to you
some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked
extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide
wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue
wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue
tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)
good luck o(≧v≦)o~~
i'm really really sorry to tell you this beforehand but.
there are too many issues with your map that i just don't know where to start....
In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )
i can only point out some general stuffs at the moment because i just don't know where to start..
you still need a lot of work to fix your mania (esp. HD)
i will just go through the main issue one by one, without getting into specific because i'll just give examples (too many mistake, i'm so sorry)
lvl 14
long notes abuse
00:00:422 (422|3,900|0,1379|1) -
your LN across the diff is very random. it is extremely recommended not to map beat and express them as LN.
and also vocal. it's extremely discouraged to map vocal as well in mania. please consider that when you map.
and next. your LN, if you're following the background instrument (electric guitar, or whatever it is that you're following) be sure to snap it properly
00:00:422 (422|3,900|0) - these are 2/4 beat too short if you're mapping the bg electric guitar
00:02:496 (2496|3) - LN abuse.
00:04:411 (4411|2,5049|0,6964|0,7603|1) -
00:13:028 (13028|0,13985|1,14464|2,15422|3,15741|3,16060|3,16379|3,16698|0,17017|0,17337|0) - and so on.
00:17:975 (17975|3,18613|2,19092|1,20368|0,20847|1) -
00:19:890 (19890|1,20049|2,20368|0,20847|1) - from this, i am now 90% sure that some of your LN follows the singer?
this is extremely discouraged and it would be better for you not to map it.
wrong / incorrect emphasis
00:12:868 - this doesn't make any sense. why only 1 note here? beat emphasis is here because it signals a new phase.
and from this point onward, your placement are (imo) all incorrect unfortunately.. the emphasis of the beat is on the white line, yet you have 2 notes all on the red line. please recheck across your whole diffs. use 25% playback.
00:33:613 - here again several examples, there are too many that i cannot possibly point them out to you one by one,
00:40:954 - 00:42:230 -
and so on.
low quality MP3
this is the case for many anime song. but you need at least a decent quality mp3 to be able to distinguish the sound and map properly, i will provide you with some links below at the end of the mod which i hope you could take a little bit of time to read through and do some research first.
incomplete / inappropriate hitsound
you only use 1 hitsound across the whole map, which means you don't really use anything after all. you need at least 2 or 3 to distinguish the sound and also to give emphasis. for example
00:42:868 - this here, have stronger beat.
00:51:485 - this one is similar with snare sound, a rather high-pitched beat.
and so on. i can give you some recommendations on hitsound later, but the most important thing now is to actually getting your map fixed.
unnecessary - and abusive - jack / hammer
you do not have any pattern at all, or at least your pattern does not allow you to flexibly place the notes, and most of the hammer are not justified here imo. there is practically no exact pitch whereby a hammer is needed, some of the parts are also over-mapped because of the hammer abuse. here are examples
00:36:725 (36725|2,36805|2) -
00:27:709 (27709|0,27868|0,28028|0,28188|0) -
00:28:347 (28347|2,28507|2,28826|2,28985|2,29145|3,29305|3,29464|0,29624|0) -
01:07:443 (67443|3,67603|0,67603|2,67762|1,67922|2,67922|1,68081|0,68241|2,68241|0,68241|1,68400|3,68560|2,68560|3,68560|0,68720|1,68879|0,68879|3,69039|2,69198|1,69198|0,69278|2,69358|2,69517|1,69517|2,69517|0,69677|3,69837|1,69837|3,69837|2) -
basically it exists on the whole map. please reconsider.
lastly, this is my opinion, and again i deeply apologise, and i am sorry if i offended you in any way (because i did not intend to offend you)
however. at it's current stage the mania mode is (probably) not safe-able (i.e. cannot be saved). the only way for you to fix all these, imo, is to actually remake the whole diffs...
and if you're very new to mania mapping its better for you to take a look at other ranked map and copy their style / patterning for exercise. you may also want to request your friend to do GD for you to make it easier, and you can learn from that GD-ers.
here are the links that i promised to you
some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked
extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide
wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue
wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue
tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)
good luck o(≧v≦)o~~