Hey, here's the requested NM mod from my queue.
These are all suggestions and I'm not trying to be rude or something, don't take it personal when I criticize something. :3
I didn't mod for quite a time so I could be a bit, well, out of practise I guess. c:
[Cosmos]
These are all suggestions and I'm not trying to be rude or something, don't take it personal when I criticize something. :3
I didn't mod for quite a time so I could be a bit, well, out of practise I guess. c:
[Cosmos]
- Try using different Combo Colours than the standard ones. It'd look much better if you had colours that fit the background. Do this by using F4 and click on colours.
- 00:01:921 (3) - Move the middle node to X104 Y240 and the last node to X160 Y240 for better blanket with - 00:01:407 (1)
- 00:02:436 (5) - Middle node X320 Y280 and last node to X256 Y304 for better blanket with 00:02:264 (4)
- 00:03:807 (5) - First node X384 Y216, middle node X342 Y201 and last node X313 Y176
- 00:06:036 (3) - You could make some of the sliders edgy, this one for example.
- 00:07:236 (2,3) - I'm to lazy to make the blanket everytime, I'll just write that you could improve that blanket.
- 00:20:607 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste to blanket these.
- 00:21:293 (3,4,5,6) - These look really out of place, use the DS to make a pattern and switch them for jumps afterwards, I think it'd look better.
- 00:27:978 (4) - I'd like the slider straight like the one afterwards, I dunno how feel about it, but opinions are different.
- 00:30:721 (5,6) - These aren't as close together as these are - 00:30:036 (3,4) - it's confusing.
- 00:33:121 (2) - X128 Y248, 00:33:293 (3) - X128 Y76, 00:33:464 (4) - X295 Y76 so this pattern - 00:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - is symmetrical.
- 00:35:864 (1,2,3) - I don't like these touching these - 00:35:178 (5,6,7)
- 00:38:436 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance snap sometimes, it'd make this pattern look much better.
- 00:38:436 (1,5) - These are slightly touching.
- 00:49:064 (6) - You could use CTRL-H to turn it and blanket - 00:47:350 (5) - with it.
- 00:51:464 (4,5,6,7) - Try to make that stream straight.
- 00:54:550 (8,2) - Improve that blanket.
- 00:57:636 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks so unsymmetrical I can't stand it. Could you use Distance Snap or shortcuts like CTRL-H amd CTRL-J pleaaase?
- 00:59:007 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.
- 01:00:036 (3,1) - Why are these so close to each other? Btw, they're touching each other, it'd would be okay if it were some kind of 1/4 circle after the slider, but this doesn't looks good to me.
- 01:11:350 (1,3) - Making these equal looks good to me.
- 01:12:378 (5,2) - Everytime I map, I try to avoid overlaps, this overlap doesn't look good.
- 01:14:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How did you made that pattern? Surely not with DS. It looks weird.
- 01:19:578 (1) - You could copy that, paste it here - 01:19:921 (2) - and use CTRL-J and CTRL-G.
- 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern is a mess. Use shortcuts pleeaase.
- 01:32:264 (2) - You could blanket - 01:31:578 (5) - with this slider.
- 01:32:778 (4,1) - Slightly overlapping.
- 01:36:036 (1,2) - Make these equal?
- 01:37:750 (2) - That's a perfect blanket. Nice.
- 01:39:121 (2) - Move to X337 Y59 for perfect blanket with - 01:38:607 (6) -
- 01:40:836 (3,4,5,6) - Shortcuts and DS please. I wouldn't mind these sort of jumps, if they'd stack with something at least.
- 01:44:093 (6,2) - Overlapping.
- 01:44:264 (1,2) - You could make these equal.
- 01:44:950 (3,4,5,6) - DS and shortcuts.
- 01:45:293 (5,1) - Improve this blanket.
- 01:44:950 (3,5,1,2) - ^
- 01:46:493 (4,1) - ^
- 01:48:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I like that stream~
- 01:49:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern's messy. Use DS and shortcuts.
- 01:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:53:864 (1,2) - Make these equal?
- 01:54:721 (4,1) - These are overlapping.
- 01:57:293 (5,7,1,2) - Overlapping.
- 01:58:664 (3,4) - That looks weird, you could make them equal at least.
- 02:00:721 (1,2,3,4) - Copy this pattern, paste it instead of these - 02:01:407 (1,2,3,4) - and use CTRL-J.
- 02:03:464 (1) - Pull this slider one down, so it's equal to - 02:03:807 (2)
- 02:03:464 (1,2) - Now pull these two down to X208 Y136, so they aren't overlapping with - 02:04:493 (4)
- 02:10:321 (1,2) - Improve that blanket.
- 02:21:293 (1,2) - These two look weird, I dunno what you could do about tho.
- 02:22:493 (6,7,1) - Stack these with - 02:22:150 (4) - ?
- 02:28:493 (2) - Move the middle node to X52 Y308 for better blanket with - 02:28:150 (1) -
- 02:32:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - That pattern doesn't follow anything, it's just circles put anywhere on screen. Please use DS and shortcuts to fix this.
- 02:47:864 (7) - Move to X192 Y136 for better blanket with - 02:47:178 (5) -
- 02:48:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is good.
- 02:49:578 (5,6,7,2) - Slightly touching.
- 03:00:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks weird.
- 03:04:493 (4,5,6,7) - ^
- 03:07:578 (4,1) - Improve that blanket.
- 03:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - That pattern is awesome.
- 03:16:836 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't it. 03:17:007 (2,4) - These are close than these - 03:16:836 (1,3)
- 03:29:007 (3,4) - Slightly touching.
- 03:48:207 (3,5) - Improve that blanket.
- 04:02:778 (1,3,5,7) - Copy these, paste them instead of these - 04:02:950 (2,4,6,8) - use CTRL-H and CTRL-J and press NC two times. Now it's a perfectly symmetric pattern.
- 04:07:407 (4) - These are closer to each other, than the rest of that pattern.
- 04:08:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks messy. I dunno how to fix it. Try doing something else there.
- 04:12:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could improve that pattern with DS and shortcuts and some adjustment.
- 04:13:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 04:21:636 (5,6) - You could stack these with - 04:21:464 (4) - it'd look smoother.
- 04:23:178 (8,1) - Improve that blanket.
- 04:44:950 (6) - Move to X336 Y104 so these - 04:44:607 (4,5,6) - are forming a triangle.
- 05:20:093 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - That blanket looks weird.
- 05:22:150 (6,1) - Improve that blanket.
- 05:29:178 (1) - You could stack it with - 05:28:493 (5,6)