Hello
Im not good with english, if you dont understand something, just say xD
[General]
[Rhythm]
[places]
The song is very cool, but you need improve your skills.
Good luck man!, i hope see this in rank someday
Im not good with english, if you dont understand something, just say xD
[General]
- I am not sure about AR 9.3, this is bc your note density is not high, and AR9 feels fine.
- The beatmap feels very unclean, and inconsistent... you are changing the Distance Snap many times to different distances without any good reason. Becasue this, the maps is very uncomfortable to play sometimes.
- this need a lot of improvements
[Rhythm]
- 00:12:378 (1) - in this section, this is the unique place where you use a triple-slider-triple, why not try this?:
- 00:39:636 (8,1) - Ctrl+g feels better
- 00:40:836 (7,8) - ^ (may be), this is bc you are missing somethig for push in the long white tick (ie: Start of measure).
- 00:44:178 - missing note?
- 01:25:750 (1) - a triple will be metter, imo.
- 02:08:950 (1) - mm.. this is the unique place where you use a repeat slider??! xD
- 03:07:150 - 03:07:493 - 03:07:836 - etc... missing note?
- 03:33:207 - ^
- Here you really will improve this.
- 00:23:521 - to 00:43:921 - you dont are using hitsound!!!, pls, listen the musig and try adding some drum whistles.
by example in 00:23:350 - or 00:24:721 - or 00:26:093 - etc - 00:32:950 (1,3,5,7) - (in 5, only slider head), you will add a soft whistles.
- 00:44:607 (6,7,9,10) - you will add soft whistles. And in general, you will follow the melody with whistles.
- ... in general, your hitsounds are veeeeery simple (and bored, sorry xD) bc follow only the drums, really you can improve >:3
[places]
- Here is the more importante issue in the map. If you really want to rank this, you need be more consistent with the DS. This includes the DS for "normal" notes, and the DS for jumps.
by eample, in 02:54:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the DS is very inconsistent, and this feels uncomfortable. - Also, the flow is very poor, especially at the beginning of the map to the end of the first kiai, but is general in all map (like 00:48:550 (4,5) - 01:14:950 (6,7) - 02:45:121 (1,2,3) - etc etc etc).
- Many patters are really ugly xD, by example 00:04:150 (1,2,3) - if you make good blankets and place this in centre for symmetry, looks very better http://puu.sh/hRTY7/e34d264eb4.jpg
Obviously, you donot need make all patters with symmetry, but if a patter looks like one with bad symmetry (like 00:47:350 (5,6) - or 04:55:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )... is bad xD
Other example will be 03:23:007 (1,2) - , where slider shape are not equals. - 02:31:750 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - a example of a very unclean patter
- 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps like this are too extreme, but idk why you make this, if the music does not more extreme
- 03:12:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this was actually very nice
- 05:18:207 - why if since here feels a "increment feeling" in the music, do you keep the low spacing?
The song is very cool, but you need improve your skills.
Good luck man!, i hope see this in rank someday