1. Cosmos (5,98 stars, 1651 notes)

Lazer wrote:

General
Great song, mapped a little too hard :^>

Cosmos
00:00:550 (3) - Move 3 more down fixed
00:02:264 (4,5) - Blanket these two (Remember to turn off grid snap for slider detail changes!) fixed
00:03:636 (4,5) - Maybe another blanket, with the slider end of (5) stacked with (3)'s end fixed
00:05:007 (4,5) - These need better flow changed a bit not sure if ok
00:13:578 (7,1) - These two do not transition well as the spacing between the two seem very off (They are too close to each other) moved further
00:21:978 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make this more fancy :^> changed the first 3 notes patern, not sure what to do about the 4th
00:33:464 (4,5) - (5) is too far away in comparison to (3!) yep, evened out the spacing
00:38:950 (4,5) - Please obey DS in these jumps fixed
00:40:321 (4) - Improve blanket fixed
00:43:236 (5,6) - Obey DS! fixed
00:44:436 (4,5) - Obey DS! fixed
00:46:150 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:47:350 (1,1) - These are not aligned perfectly if thats what you were going for fixed
00:53:178 (7) - DS againfixed
00:53:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - DS fixed
01:11:178 - I suggest just placing another beat in here I feel like it's more fun to jump like that when there's no other beat, but I might consider I slider or something if majority will think that way
01:11:350 (1,2,3) - Weird DS fixed
01:05:864 (1) - You should've increased the sliders velocity a bit higher to pair with these jumps :^> agreed, feels much better
01:20:950 (6) - NC fixed
01:22:321 (1) - Too many forced jumps, should add some sliders I'll keep this for now since those jumps are "forced" consistenty
01:35:007 (2) - Ctrl+J then re-adjust to better spot changed it's place
01:38:093 (3,4,5) - Should be further away from (2), remember to move (6) too fixed
01:49:750 - This entire Kiai has a ridiculous amount of forced jumps, remember that this is not a jump practice map~! (Aka might have to remap it with sliders included) I'll keep this for now
02:16:150 (2) - blanket it
02:17:521 (2) - unreadable I think it's not that hard to read such simple patern.
02:19:407 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - this does not work with the current DS x SV changed
02:21:636 (2) - blanket changed a bit
02:25:750 (2) - ^ fixed
02:26:778 (1) - ^^ fixed
02:58:321 - too many forced jumps yep I'll only leave them in kiai and at 03:15:121 -

You need some improvement on your placement, otherwise I like the map ^^ I'll try to fix them ^^

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hi

Mods

General

• 
  02:11:689 - Kiai end's time isn't snapped
  04:23:346 - ^

Cosmos

• 
  00:12:036 (6,7,8,9) - Remove 7. The stream starts from 8. fixed
  00:20:264 (6,7,8,9) - ^ fixed
  00:27:978 (4) - Give about 3 degrees rotation to make it more fun why not
  00:48:721 (6,7) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/hwldd/6ec3b3d5c7.jpg why not
  00:49:407 (1,2,3) - This will more awesome http://puu.sh/hwle6/13d143acfd.jpg yep and better flow
  01:16:150 (3,4,5) - Make some DS at the stream. The problem because it'll be invisible for anyone who uses Normal type skin added 0,1 ds
  01:33:636 (2) - Ctrl + G will make the pattern better fixed
  01:38:093 (3,4,5) - Same as 01:16:150 (3,4,5) added 0,1 ds
  01:39:464 (3,4,5,6) - Oh no, My Friend. Don't make overlap like that. Why don't you give a bit DS Multiplier in 5 and 6? fixed
  01:40:493 (2) - Same as 01:33:636 (2) fixed
  01:41:864 (2) - ^ fixed
  01:48:036 (4) - Move it to x:424 y:292 placed it somewhere else
  01:52:493 (1,2,3,4) - It'll be better like this http://puu.sh/hwlww/efe879e4bc.jpg fixed
  02:00:036 (3,4,5) - Same as 01:38:093 (3,4,5) fixed
  02:03:807 (2) - Ctrl + G fixed
  02:07:578 (1,2,3,4) - Give some DS Multiplier in 3 and 4 fixed
  02:08:264 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
  02:09:636 (3,4,5,6) - Give some DS Multiplier in 5 and 6 fixed
  02:12:378 (3,4,5) - Same as 02:00:036 (3,4,5) fixed
  02:13:750 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed
  02:17:521 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give some DSM at the stream to make the stream more visible changed
  03:24:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ changed
  03:38:436 (2,3) - Ctrl+G Them; After that Ctrl+G the 2 fixed
  04:11:693 (5,6,7) - Same as 02:12:378 (3,4,5) fixed
  04:32:950 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
  04:34:321 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
  04:48:550 (3,4) - (Attention) Avoid theses two touching each other fixed
  05:06:893 (6) - Move it to the 4? It'll be better you know I have to disagree, it would work if 5 and 6 didn't have the same sound
  05:17:521 (5,6,7) - Same as 04:34:321 (1,2,3) fixed
  05:18:207 (1,2,3) - ^
  05:19:578 (1,2,3) - ^
  05:23:693 (1,2,3) - ^
  05:25:064 (1,2,3) - ^ I'll leave this section as it is

Your map need more improvement on overlapping pattern. A bit tips : Try to stacking when overlapping.
I think that's all. Later ^_^

1. Try using different Combo Colours than the standard ones. It'd look much better if you had colours that fit the background. Do this by using F4 and click on colours.
2. 00:01:921 (3) - Move the middle node to X104 Y240 and the last node to X160 Y240 for better blanket with - 00:01:407 (1)
3. 00:02:436 (5) - Middle node X320 Y280 and last node to X256 Y304 for better blanket with 00:02:264 (4)
4. 00:03:807 (5) - First node X384 Y216, middle node X342 Y201 and last node X313 Y176
5. 00:06:036 (3) - You could make some of the sliders edgy, this one for example.
6. 00:07:236 (2,3) - I'm to lazy to make the blanket everytime, I'll just write that you could improve that blanket.
7. 00:20:607 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste to blanket these.
8. 00:21:293 (3,4,5,6) - These look really out of place, use the DS to make a pattern and switch them for jumps afterwards, I think it'd look better.
9. 00:27:978 (4) - I'd like the slider straight like the one afterwards, I dunno how feel about it, but opinions are different.
10. 00:30:721 (5,6) - These aren't as close together as these are - 00:30:036 (3,4) - it's confusing.
11. 00:33:121 (2) - X128 Y248, 00:33:293 (3) - X128 Y76, 00:33:464 (4) - X295 Y76 so this pattern - 00:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - is symmetrical.
12. 00:35:864 (1,2,3) - I don't like these touching these - 00:35:178 (5,6,7)
13. 00:38:436 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance snap sometimes, it'd make this pattern look much better.
14. 00:38:436 (1,5) - These are slightly touching.
15. 00:49:064 (6) - You could use CTRL-H to turn it and blanket - 00:47:350 (5) - with it.
16. 00:51:464 (4,5,6,7) - Try to make that stream straight.
17. 00:54:550 (8,2) - Improve that blanket.
18. 00:57:636 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks so unsymmetrical I can't stand it. Could you use Distance Snap or shortcuts like CTRL-H amd CTRL-J pleaaase?
19. 00:59:007 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.
20. 01:00:036 (3,1) - Why are these so close to each other? Btw, they're touching each other, it'd would be okay if it were some kind of 1/4 circle after the slider, but this doesn't looks good to me.
21. 01:11:350 (1,3) - Making these equal looks good to me.
22. 01:12:378 (5,2) - Everytime I map, I try to avoid overlaps, this overlap doesn't look good.
23. 01:14:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How did you made that pattern? Surely not with DS. It looks weird.
24. 01:19:578 (1) - You could copy that, paste it here - 01:19:921 (2) - and use CTRL-J and CTRL-G.
25. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern is a mess. Use shortcuts pleeaase.
26. 01:32:264 (2) - You could blanket - 01:31:578 (5) - with this slider.
27. 01:32:778 (4,1) - Slightly overlapping.
28. 01:36:036 (1,2) - Make these equal?
29. 01:37:750 (2) - That's a perfect blanket. Nice.
30. 01:39:121 (2) - Move to X337 Y59 for perfect blanket with - 01:38:607 (6) -
31. 01:40:836 (3,4,5,6) - Shortcuts and DS please. I wouldn't mind these sort of jumps, if they'd stack with something at least.
32. 01:44:093 (6,2) - Overlapping.
33. 01:44:264 (1,2) - You could make these equal.
34. 01:44:950 (3,4,5,6) - DS and shortcuts.
35. 01:45:293 (5,1) - Improve this blanket.
36. 01:44:950 (3,5,1,2) - ^
37. 01:46:493 (4,1) - ^
38. 01:48:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I like that stream~
39. 01:49:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern's messy. Use DS and shortcuts.
40. 01:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
41. 01:53:864 (1,2) - Make these equal?
42. 01:54:721 (4,1) - These are overlapping.
43. 01:57:293 (5,7,1,2) - Overlapping.
44. 01:58:664 (3,4) - That looks weird, you could make them equal at least.
45. 02:00:721 (1,2,3,4) - Copy this pattern, paste it instead of these - 02:01:407 (1,2,3,4) - and use CTRL-J.
46. 02:03:464 (1) - Pull this slider one down, so it's equal to - 02:03:807 (2)
47. 02:03:464 (1,2) - Now pull these two down to X208 Y136, so they aren't overlapping with - 02:04:493 (4)
48. 02:10:321 (1,2) - Improve that blanket.
49. 02:21:293 (1,2) - These two look weird, I dunno what you could do about tho.
50. 02:22:493 (6,7,1) - Stack these with - 02:22:150 (4) - ?
51. 02:28:493 (2) - Move the middle node to X52 Y308 for better blanket with - 02:28:150 (1) -
52. 02:32:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - That pattern doesn't follow anything, it's just circles put anywhere on screen. Please use DS and shortcuts to fix this.
53. 02:47:864 (7) - Move to X192 Y136 for better blanket with - 02:47:178 (5) -
54. 02:48:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is good.
55. 02:49:578 (5,6,7,2) - Slightly touching.
56. 03:00:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks weird.
57. 03:04:493 (4,5,6,7) - ^
58. 03:07:578 (4,1) - Improve that blanket.
59. 03:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - That pattern is awesome.
60. 03:16:836 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't it. 03:17:007 (2,4) - These are close than these - 03:16:836 (1,3)
61. 03:29:007 (3,4) - Slightly touching.
62. 03:48:207 (3,5) - Improve that blanket.
63. 04:02:778 (1,3,5,7) - Copy these, paste them instead of these - 04:02:950 (2,4,6,8) - use CTRL-H and CTRL-J and press NC two times. Now it's a perfectly symmetric pattern.
64. 04:07:407 (4) - These are closer to each other, than the rest of that pattern.
65. 04:08:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks messy. I dunno how to fix it. Try doing something else there.
66. 04:12:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could improve that pattern with DS and shortcuts and some adjustment.
67. 04:13:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
68. 04:21:636 (5,6) - You could stack these with - 04:21:464 (4) - it'd look smoother.
69. 04:23:178 (8,1) - Improve that blanket.
70. 04:44:950 (6) - Move to X336 Y104 so these - 04:44:607 (4,5,6) - are forming a triangle.
71. 05:20:093 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - That blanket looks weird.
72. 05:22:150 (6,1) - Improve that blanket.
73. 05:29:178 (1) - You could stack it with - 05:28:493 (5,6)

1. Needs combo color

1. Hardly any past stacks just to make the map neater, when mapper attempts to past stack, mapper fails.
2. Jumps are random and seemingly unplanned, and stretched out
3. The jumps occur at random intervals, with nothing showing in music

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

Hey, here's the requested NM mod from my queue.
These are all suggestions and I'm not trying to be rude or something, don't take it personal when I criticize something. :3
I didn't mod for quite a time so I could be a bit, well, out of practise I guess. c:

[Cosmos]

1. Try using different Combo Colours than the standard ones. It'd look much better if you had colours that fit the background. Do this by using F4 and click on colours. fixed
2. 00:01:921 (3) - Move the middle node to X104 Y240 and the last node to X160 Y240 for better blanket with - 00:01:407 (1) fixed
3. 00:02:436 (5) - Middle node X320 Y280 and last node to X256 Y304 for better blanket with 00:02:264 (4) fixed
4. 00:03:807 (5) - First node X384 Y216, middle node X342 Y201 and last node X313 Y176 fixed
5. 00:06:036 (3) - You could make some of the sliders edgy, this one for example.
6. 00:07:236 (2,3) - I'm to lazy to make the blanket everytime, I'll just write that you could improve that blanket. fixed
7. 00:20:607 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste to blanket these. fixed
8. 00:21:293 (3,4,5,6) - These look really out of place, use the DS to make a pattern and switch them for jumps afterwards, I think it'd look better. Changed a bit
9. 00:27:978 (4) - I'd like the slider straight like the one afterwards, I dunno how feel about it, but opinions are different. Changed a bit
10. 00:30:721 (5,6) - These aren't as close together as these are - 00:30:036 (3,4) - it's confusing. fixed
11. 00:33:121 (2) - X128 Y248, 00:33:293 (3) - X128 Y76, 00:33:464 (4) - X295 Y76 so this pattern - 00:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - is symmetrical. fixed
12. 00:35:864 (1,2,3) - I don't like these touching these - 00:35:178 (5,6,7) fixed
13. 00:38:436 (1,2,3,4) - Use distance snap sometimes, it'd make this pattern look much better. fixed
14. 00:38:436 (1,5) - These are slightly touching. fixed
15. 00:49:064 (6) - You could use CTRL-H to turn it and blanket - 00:47:350 (5) - with it. Changed it in a little different waye different way
16. 00:51:464 (4,5,6,7) - Try to make that stream straight. fixed
17. 00:54:550 (8,2) - Improve that blanket. fixed
18. 00:57:636 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks so unsymmetrical I can't stand it. Could you use Distance Snap or shortcuts like CTRL-H amd CTRL-J pleaaase?
19. 00:59:007 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. fixed both
20. 01:00:036 (3,1) - Why are these so close to each other? Btw, they're touching each other, it'd would be okay if it were some kind of 1/4 circle after the slider, but this doesn't looks good to me. fixed
21. 01:11:350 (1,3) - Making these equal looks good to me. fixed
22. 01:12:378 (5,2) - Everytime I map, I try to avoid overlaps, this overlap doesn't look good. fixed
23. 01:14:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How did you made that pattern? Surely not with DS. It looks weird. Changed the patern
24. 01:19:578 (1) - You could copy that, paste it here - 01:19:921 (2) - and use CTRL-J and CTRL-G. fixed
25. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern is a mess. Use shortcuts pleeaase. I'll keep this for now ( might consider changing later)
26. 01:32:264 (2) - You could blanket - 01:31:578 (5) - with this slider. fixed
27. 01:32:778 (4,1) - Slightly overlapping. fixed
28. 01:36:036 (1,2) - Make these equal? fixed
29. 01:37:750 (2) - That's a perfect blanket. Nice.
30. 01:39:121 (2) - Move to X337 Y59 for perfect blanket with - 01:38:607 (6) - fixed
31. 01:40:836 (3,4,5,6) - Shortcuts and DS please. I wouldn't mind these sort of jumps, if they'd stack with something at least. changed ds
32. 01:44:093 (6,2) - Overlapping. fixed
33. 01:44:264 (1,2) - You could make these equal. fixed
34. 01:44:950 (3,4,5,6) - DS and shortcuts. fixed
35. 01:45:293 (5,1) - Improve this blanket. fixed
36. 01:44:950 (3,5,1,2) - ^ fixed
37. 01:46:493 (4,1) - ^ fixed
38. 01:48:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I like that stream~
39. 01:49:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That pattern's messy. Use DS and shortcuts.
40. 01:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I'll keep these for now
41. 01:53:864 (1,2) - Make these equal? fixed
42. 01:54:721 (4,1) - These are overlapping. fixed
43. 01:57:293 (5,7,1,2) - Overlapping. fixed
44. 01:58:664 (3,4) - That looks weird, you could make them equal at least. Changed
45. 02:00:721 (1,2,3,4) - Copy this pattern, paste it instead of these - 02:01:407 (1,2,3,4) - and use CTRL-J. fixed
46. 02:03:464 (1) - Pull this slider one down, so it's equal to - 02:03:807 (2) fixed
47. 02:03:464 (1,2) - Now pull these two down to X208 Y136, so they aren't overlapping with - 02:04:493 (4) fixed
48. 02:10:321 (1,2) - Improve that blanket. fixed
49. 02:21:293 (1,2) - These two look weird, I dunno what you could do about tho. Changed
50. 02:22:493 (6,7,1) - Stack these with - 02:22:150 (4) - ? fixed
51. 02:28:493 (2) - Move the middle node to X52 Y308 for better blanket with - 02:28:150 (1) - fixed
52. 02:32:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - That pattern doesn't follow anything, it's just circles put anywhere on screen. Please use DS and shortcuts to fix this. I think it's ok, don't want to have same jumps on the strong beat
53. 02:47:864 (7) - Move to X192 Y136 for better blanket with - 02:47:178 (5) - fixed
54. 02:48:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is good.
55. 02:49:578 (5,6,7,2) - Slightly touching. fixed
56. 03:00:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks weird. It does, but it still follows the triangles I guess
57. 03:04:493 (4,5,6,7) - ^ moved the circles a bit
58. 03:07:578 (4,1) - Improve that blanket. fixed
59. 03:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - That pattern is awesome.
60. 03:16:836 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't it. 03:17:007 (2,4) - These are close than these - 03:16:836 (1,3) not exactly sure what you meant, but moved 1 and 3 closer to each other
61. 03:29:007 (3,4) - Slightly touching. fixed
62. 03:48:207 (3,5) - Improve that blanket. fixed
63. 04:02:778 (1,3,5,7) - Copy these, paste them instead of these - 04:02:950 (2,4,6,8) - use CTRL-H and CTRL-J and press NC two times. Now it's a perfectly symmetric pattern. yes, I like that a lot!
64. 04:07:407 (4) - These are closer to each other, than the rest of that pattern. fixed
65. 04:08:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks messy. I dunno how to fix it. Try doing something else there. fixed
66. 04:12:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could improve that pattern with DS and shortcuts and some adjustment.
67. 04:13:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ changed the placements a little bit
68. 04:21:636 (5,6) - You could stack these with - 04:21:464 (4) - it'd look smoother. Only stacked 5 with 4
69. 04:23:178 (8,1) - Improve that blanket. fixed
70. 04:44:950 (6) - Move to X336 Y104 so these - 04:44:607 (4,5,6) - are forming a triangle. agreed, looks much better
71. 05:20:093 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - That blanket looks weird. extreme blanket
72. 05:22:150 (6,1) - Improve that blanket. fixed
73. 05:29:178 (1) - You could stack it with - 05:28:493 (5,6) I'll leave it for now

I like the song and the hitsounds are well done. Good luck with ranking! c:

NolanM wrote:

Hello. : )

1. Needs combo color

00:00:550 (3) - Do not begin this slider on a red tick. That means the end of the slider is on a white tick, which is supposed to be emphasized, rather than at the end of a slider. You can maybe switch the slider with 00:00:378 (2) - , or make the slider two circles, like this (this is just a sample pattern, just to give you an idea of what I mean.)

00:01:921 (3) - ^
00:03:293 (3) - ^
00:04:664 (3) - ^
00:06:036 (3) - ^
00:07:407 (3) - ^
00:08:778 (3) - ^
00:11:521 (4) - ^
00:12:893 (4) - ^
00:14:264 (4) - ^ I won't list this anymore, but I hope you can hear that something's wrong the way it is. I know what you mean but at that part there is no real emphasis on the white ticks so slider fit just fine.

00:09:636 (1) - Messy, stack the top of this slider on top of either one of 00:10:578 (4,5) - Stacked the 4 on top of it
00:11:521 (4) - Badly placed, move down a bit or make it straight on the x axis with 00:11:007 (1,2,3) - fixed to match ds and flow
00:16:321 (7,1) - Weird DS, especially because there's nothing in the music that implies it yep replaced
00:35:521 (8) - Stack head of this on top of head of 00:36:207 (4) - fixed
00:39:978 (1,2,3,4) - Changing DS often is weird; this part of the music is repetitive, so you should have constant DS swaps yep it is repetitive, but it also has repetitive ds swaps on same places, though changed a few sliders not not make drastic ds jumps
00:43:407 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - and 00:44:607 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe you would like to go for different patterns? Symmetry does look nice, but not in this case. yep replaced
00:50:178 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make neater, as in smoother/curvier/etc fixed
00:51:464 (4,5,6,7) - ^ (see like 00:51:636 (6) - is just jutting out there) fixed
01:14:950 (6) - Try stacking on top of the tail of 01:15:464 (1) - . (I'm saying to stack so the map is neater) remade patern
01:31:236 (3,4,5,6) - I personally wouldn't go for rectangle, so many different DS changes that don't flow with the music and how the song is supposed to be played. Many of the patterns don't flow that well, honestly. And they look ugly only because they don't flow and they seem stretched out just to increase the star difficulty. But this is only SOME of the patterns. The rest are fine. reduced ds and made it into a square, remade some patterns
01:28:493 (3,4,5,6) - ^ (fix into more visually appealing, easier jumps) reduced ds
01:32:950 (5) - Stack on top of 01:31:578 (5) - fixed
01:34:321 (5,1) - Ugly visual overlap fixed
01:37:064 (5) - stack 01:36:721 (3) - blanket
01:37:750 (2) - stack 01:37:064 (5) - fixed
01:38:350 (4,5) - Horrible shift (not directly vertical), spread the triplet out more too changed
01:40:836 (3,4,5,6) - Refer to bad patterns ^ remade very little bit
01:42:550 (4) - try to stack on 01:41:178 (5) - fixed
01:44:950 (3,4,5,6) - Think about what the player has to do when they have to go back to 01:45:636 (1) - , make smoother gameplay fixed
01:50:607 (6) - stack 01:49:578 (15) -
01:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stretch it out so much, gah! It feels good
01:52:493 (1,2,3) - These three supposed to be straight? Because they're not fixed
01:54:550 (3,4,5) - What is this jump for, absolutely nothing in the music? Um, there is?
01:58:664 (3,4) - Blanket these two more remade
02:00:036 (3) - stack head on head of this 01:58:664 (3) - remade below
02:00:550 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is just horrible, no offense. Just ew though, I see you try to ctrl c and ctrl v, which is fine, but try using a pattern that looks nice when you rotate it. Should look better now
02:06:207 (1,2,3,4) - What is this quadrilateral, not a rectangle! No don't use a rectangle. And it's not even a rectangle; 02:06:550 (3,4) - is totally slanted made it a bit different
02:11:521 (8,1) - Da fuq distance snap not shown in music end of kiai it gets easier and change of rhythm
02:21:293 (1,2) - Better blanket yes
02:23:264 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is going up down up down fixed
02:31:750 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Honestly, try to make past stacks more often just to tidy it up ok

Good work, but honestly I feel like although the hitsounds, BG, music, sliders, and rhythm is good, placement is horrible.

Placement issues

1. Hardly any past stacks just to make the map neater, when mapper attempts to past stack, mapper fails.
2. Jumps are random and seemingly unplanned, and stretched out
3. The jumps occur at random intervals, with nothing showing in music

Good luck.
If you want me to ever do the rest, reapply on my queue when it's open.
Hope I helped.

NolanM wrote:

Never say that you suck at something :3
Everyone starts out low, you will get way better at it soon~!

ReeChelly wrote:

Hi from mod queue ^^

[cosmos]
00:00:378 (2) - You can put more distance on this to emphasise the beat more.
00:00:550 (3) - This slider breaks the flow awkwardly, move the slider head to some where around 220|308
00:01:064 (5) - Change to circles as the end of a slider is too weak to accentuate the start of a new pattern in the song (red tick). The beat here also doesn't seem to 'drag' as it is just a single drum beat. If you decide to change this, put more distance between (1.5/6 DS seems good enough) to emphasise it more and just to vary up the spacing. Or you can stack the circle on the red tick with the next slider, just another suggestion. I don't really think it's necessary to change this but I really think what I suggested sounds and plays better. Changed all of these sliders to circles
00:02:436 (5) - ^
00:02:436 (5) - This doesn't blanket properly around 4 (if that is what it's intended to do ). Also, this is too close to 4. As there is really no change in music, keep same spacing as the rest. Like here 00:00:893 (4,5)
00:03:121 (2) - DS not consistent here, seems kind of messy. Just my opinion though, don't really like it :C (Won't mention again for similar problems.)
00:03:636 (4) - ^
00:03:293 (3) - Change to circle then 1/2 slider. I would much prefer follow the vocal here. The vocal allows to give the pattern some variation. (Does that make sense?) yep
00:03:807 (5) - change these to circles, same reason as way above. yep
00:06:550 (5) - ^ if you change this, you should align the circle on red tick under the next slider to the start the new pattern. yep
00:07:921 (5) - ^
00:08:778 (3) - If you decided to change up the one before to follow the vocals you should change this too. yep
00:10:664 (5) - This is out of place? yep
——————— All above from before the map was updated 4 days ago———————— since some of the things above were fixed already, I just noted things I changed.
03:33:978 (1,2,3,4) - I would rather have the big jump for first then the small one, it fits the song momentum of the song better imo. Same goes with the next pattern 03:34:664 (1,2,3,4) - Agreed
03:37:750 (4) - make this same angle as 3 fixed
04:50:436 (5) - unstack this fixed

Mentional wrote:

Hey, mod here. Most of the things I point out are suggestions, feel free to ignore.

I'm also new to modding please no hate D:

• 
  

  General

1. 04:23:350 - Kiai end here isn't snapped properly. fixed

• 
  

  Cosmos

1. 00:34:836 (4) - Stack? yep
2. 00:36:207 (4) - Not stacked properly sorry haha yep
3. 01:06:893 (5) - ^ I don't see any problems here? it's stacked on the 01:05:264 (2) - and not the slider end
4. 01:07:578 (3) - Also stack this since you moved ^
5. 01:17:864 (5) - Not stacked properly sorry again fixed
6. 01:18:550 (2) - And stack this because ^ fixed
7. 01:49:064 (9) - NC? nah, I think it's ok, the patern or the spacing doesn't really change too much
8. 02:10:321 (1) - Move this down and to the right just a bit? it overlaps too much then or else I have to push it very far away
9. 03:05:178 (1) - Not stacked properly ... fixed
10. 03:06:550 (1) - Stack? fixed
11. 03:07:578 (4) - This too if you stack ^ fixed
12. 03:08:264 (2) - And this ^ fixed
13. 03:13:407 (1) - Not stacked properly fixed
14. 03:13:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Might want to check this stream because ^ fixed
15. 03:31:578 (2) - Not stacked properly fixed
16. 03:33:293 (4) - ^ fixed
17. 03:49:750 (4,5,6) - ^ if you mean the slider start it's suppose to be like that
18. 03:52:321 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like these small streams that look like this. I would change them to make the map look nicer. I'll see what I can do later
19. 05:18:207 (1) - Not stacked properly fixed
20. 05:19:578 (1) - ^ seems ok to me?
21. 05:23:693 (1) - ^ it's okay, it already faded out long ago

Cool map, I really like the jumps.

1. I am not sure about AR 9.3, this is bc your note density is not high, and AR9 feels fine.
2. The beatmap feels very unclean, and inconsistent... you are changing the Distance Snap many times to different distances without any good reason. Becasue this, the maps is very uncomfortable to play sometimes.
3. this need a lot of improvements

1. 00:12:378 (1) - in this section, this is the unique place where you use a triple-slider-triple, why not try this?:
   
2. 00:39:636 (8,1) - Ctrl+g feels better
3. 00:40:836 (7,8) - ^ (may be), this is bc you are missing somethig for push in the long white tick (ie: Start of measure).
4. 00:44:178 - missing note?
5. 01:25:750 (1) - a triple will be metter, imo.
6. 02:08:950 (1) - mm.. this is the unique place where you use a repeat slider??! xD
7. 03:07:150 - 03:07:493 - 03:07:836 - etc... missing note?
8. 03:33:207 - ^

1. Here you really will improve this.
2. 00:23:521 - to 00:43:921 - you dont are using hitsound!!!, pls, listen the musig and try adding some drum whistles.
   by example in 00:23:350 - or 00:24:721 - or 00:26:093 - etc
   
3. 00:32:950 (1,3,5,7) - (in 5, only slider head), you will add a soft whistles.
4. 00:44:607 (6,7,9,10) - you will add soft whistles. And in general, you will follow the melody with whistles.
5. ... in general, your hitsounds are veeeeery simple (and bored, sorry xD) bc follow only the drums, really you can improve >:3

1. Here is the more importante issue in the map. If you really want to rank this, you need be more consistent with the DS. This includes the DS for "normal" notes, and the DS for jumps.
   by eample, in 02:54:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the DS is very inconsistent, and this feels uncomfortable.
2. Also, the flow is very poor, especially at the beginning of the map to the end of the first kiai, but is general in all map (like 00:48:550 (4,5) - 01:14:950 (6,7) - 02:45:121 (1,2,3) - etc etc etc).
3. Many patters are really ugly xD, by example 00:04:150 (1,2,3) - if you make good blankets and place this in centre for symmetry, looks very better http://puu.sh/hRTY7/e34d264eb4.jpg
   Obviously, you donot need make all patters with symmetry, but if a patter looks like one with bad symmetry (like 00:47:350 (5,6) - or 04:55:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )... is bad xD
   Other example will be 03:23:007 (1,2) - , where slider shape are not equals.
4. 02:31:750 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - a example of a very unclean patter
5. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps like this are too extreme, but idk why you make this, if the music does not more extreme
6. 03:12:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this was actually very nice
7. 05:18:207 - why if since here feels a "increment feeling" in the music, do you keep the low spacing?

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hello hi hi
Im not good with english, if you dont understand something, just say xD

[General]

1. I am not sure about AR 9.3, this is bc your note density is not high, and AR9 feels fine. It gets rather tough to read in the jumpy parts, but you might be right, I think it still can work as ar9 too, changed.
2. The beatmap feels very unclean, and inconsistent... you are changing the Distance Snap many times to different distances without any good reason. Becasue this, the maps is very uncomfortable to play sometimes. Working on it
3. this need a lot of improvements That's what the mods are eh?

[Rhythm]

1. 00:12:378 (1) - in this section, this is the unique place where you use a triple-slider-triple, why not try this?:
   I don't know, most of my down beats start as slider I want to keep in consistant, so I just removed the tripple before.
2. 00:39:636 (8,1) - Ctrl+g feels better fixed
3. 00:40:836 (7,8) - ^ (may be), this is bc you are missing somethig for push in the long white tick (ie: Start of measure). Then I would have to change all those before too, I still think it's ok to leave how it is
4. 00:44:178 - missing note? yeah, there is a sound there but it's not as strong as I mapped to another sound.
   
5. 01:25:750 (1) - a triple will be metter, imo. fixed
6. 02:08:950 (1) - mm.. this is the unique place where you use a repeat slider??! xD is it that bad?
7. 03:07:150 - 03:07:493 - 03:07:836 - etc... missing note? I tried to ephasize the sound on the slider start in this part
8. 03:33:207 - ^Mapped to the stronger sound

[hitsounds]

1. Here you really will improve this.
2. 00:23:521 - to 00:43:921 - you dont are using hitsound!!!, pls, listen the musig and try adding some drum whistles.
   by example in 00:23:350 - or 00:24:721 - or 00:26:093 - etc fixed
   
3. 00:32:950 (1,3,5,7) - (in 5, only slider head), you will add a soft whistles. fixed
4. 00:44:607 (6,7,9,10) - you will add soft whistles. And in general, you will follow the melody with whistles. (I don't really have an idea with where to put whistles)
5. ... in general, your hitsounds are veeeeery simple (and bored, sorry xD) bc follow only the drums, really you can improve >:3 I'll get better!

[places]

1. Here is the more importante issue in the map. If you really want to rank this, you need be more consistent with the DS. This includes the DS for "normal" notes, and the DS for jumps. Does it really have to be everywhere that even? I mean jumps can't have different ds ?
   by eample, in 02:54:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the DS is very inconsistent, and this feels uncomfortable. fixed
2. Also, the flow is very poor, especially at the beginning of the map to the end of the first kiai, but is general in all map (like 00:48:550 (4,5) - 01:14:950 (6,7) - 02:45:121 (1,2,3) - etc etc etc).
3. Many patters are really ugly xD, by example 00:04:150 (1,2,3) - if you make good blankets and place this in centre for symmetry, looks very better http://puu.sh/hRTY7/e34d264eb4.jpg okay
   Obviously, you donot need make all patters with symmetry, but if a patter looks like one with bad symmetry (like 00:47:350 (5,6) - or 04:55:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )... is bad xD I am still trying to fix some paterns
   Other example will be 03:23:007 (1,2) - , where slider shape are not equals. They weren't suppose to look equal though, not sure if I should change it to be equal either
4. 02:31:750 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - a example of a very unclean patter You want me to make all of those jump even DS, or?(since I don't really get what you mean by unclean)
5. 01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps like this are too extreme, but idk why you make this, if the music does not more extreme I like extreme jumps u.u
6. 03:12:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this was actually very nice Thanks
7. 05:18:207 - why if since here feels a "increment feeling" in the music, do you keep the low spacing? Any suggestion?

The song is very cool, but you need improve your skills. I will improve!
Good luck man!, i hope see this in rank someday

VeronicaTheFox wrote:

00:10:836 (6) - Move this to x:196 y:152. It makes the DS equal for the jumps.
00:12:636 (2,3) - Have these mirror 00:12:207 (7,8) - .
00:14:264 (4) - Move this to x:168 y:44. It makes the DS equal for these jumps as well.
00:21:293 (4,5,6,7) - Select all of these and scale, playfield center, to 0.85.
00:27:293 (7) - Move to x:68 y:88.
00:30:036 (3) - CTRL+G.
00:41:350 (1) - This looks odd. Move to x:324 y:208. I remade everything from here and above except for 00:21:293 (4,5,6,7) - so you might want to recheck again (sorry)
00:47:178 (4) - I realize you are going for difficulty, but this jump is a bit absurd. Perhaps move it to x:352 y:252? True
00:55:750 (2) - Move to x:295 y:129. Moved it somewhere else
00:56:264 (1) - Move to x:376 y:212. I suppose you want me to get rid of these random high ds jumps I just changed them to be more even but thanks for noticing where.
00:56:950 (1) - Move to x:456 y:256. Changed
00:57:121 (2) - Move to x:460 y:144. Changed
00:58:493 (2) - Move to x:256 y:132. Changed
00:58:664 (3) - Move to x:256 y:288. Changed
00:59:693 (1) - Move to x:331 y:138. Changed
01:00:721 (3) - CTRL+G.Yep
01:01:236 (2) - Move to x:294 y:202. Yep
01:02:093 (3) - Move to x:316 y:289. Yep
01:04:493 (1) - Move to x:136 y:96. Changed
01:06:378 (3) - Straighten this out and CTRL+G. Yep
01:20:607 (5) - CTRL+G. Yep
01:20:264 (3) - Move to x:308 y:66. Yep
01:20:950 (1) - CTRL+G. Yep
01:21:293 (2) - CTRL+G. Yep
01:26:436 (1,2) - The jump of 01:26:436 (1) - from the prior note is freaking gargantuan. Select both these notes and move them to x:256 y:96. Changed
01:27:121 (3) - Move this to x:256 y:300. Changed
01:29:864 (3,4,5,6) - Select these and scale, selection center, to 0.680. Yep
01:45:978 (2) - Move to x:156 y:292. Changed
01:53:864 (1) - Move to x:169 y:179. Yep
01:54:721 (4) - Also move to x:169 y:179. Yep
01:56:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Select all of these and move them to x:180 y:88. Yep
02:01:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Take all of these, and CTRL+G them. Nice
02:06:550 (3,4) - CTRL+G. ok
02:11:178 (6) - Move to x:308 y:204. too close to 7
02:33:121 (1,2,3,4) - Select all and scale to 0.9. Looks kinda messy
02:48:893 (1) - Move to x:192 y:138. I want to keep this patern as it is
02:48:893 (1,2,3,4) - Select all, move to x:256 y:128, and then CTRL+G 02:49:236 (3,4) - . ^
02:49:578 (5,6,7) - Move to x:369 y:192. ^
02:50:093 (9) - Move to x:256 y:128. ^
02:54:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Select all, scale to 0.9, playfield center. Fine
02:59:693 (1) - Move to x:163 y:150. ctrl+g instead
03:16:150 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL+G these as a unit. I want to leave the patern as it is.
03:16:836 (1,2,3,4) - Select all, scale to 0.8, selection center. ^
03:36:036 (1,2,3,4) - Same this as above, but playfield center. Fine
03:38:778 (3,4,5,6) - Select all, CTRL+H. ok
04:01:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try making a better pattern here. It's not very good as is. I feel like it's okay? But will change if others thiink it's bad

• - 01:11:007
  - 01:21:978
  - 01:54:893
  - 02:05:864
  - 03:22:664
  - 03:33:636
  - 04:06:550
  - 04:17:521

• - 01:49:493(7): Note that if you do this, you should probably consider making 01:49:407(6) a 1/2 slider
  - 04:01:150(6): Note that if you do this, you should probably consider making 04:01:064(5) a 1/2 slider

Doormat wrote:

From my M4M queue-

Sorry this took so long! Right when I was about to start modding, I got bombarded with school assignments and midterms bleugh. Anyways, I ended up modding the whole map. Consider it as my apology to you if you want

Difficulties modded: Cosmos

Cosmos

- Why are there whistles at 00:33:636(5) and 02:24:893(8)? They feel out of place compared to the whole song since there's only two of them at weirdly timed places. Consider either replacing the whistle hitsound, or adding more whistles to the beatmap. The second one seems fine, changed the first ones.

- Consider making the following notes a 1/2 slider instead of just a single note. Reasoning for this is because there is a distinct beat on the offbeat (red tick) that follows these notes. I may consider this in the future, but right now it feels much more satisfying to play those jumps without a note there, even when there is beat there.

• - 01:11:007
  - 01:21:978
  - 01:54:893
  - 02:05:864
  - 03:22:664
  - 03:33:636
  - 04:06:550
  - 04:17:521

- I feel that these notes aren't necessary. Consider removing them. Why are they not necessary? I mean they obviously follow the stream correctly. It might be akward if it stopped before ending?

• - 01:49:493(7): Note that if you do this, you should probably consider making 01:49:407(6) a 1/2 slider
  - 04:01:150(6): Note that if you do this, you should probably consider making 04:01:064(5) a 1/2 slider

I don't have a whole lot of experience modding Extra difficulties, but I think the patterning is overall fine.
Good luck with your map!

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

Hey!

From the more obvious mistakes.
02:11:521 (8,1) - NC starts too close to the note before. fixed
02:13:750 (3,4,5) - Something is off, think it's the sound, it just doesn't fit at all. y
02:27:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Awkward to play. changed a little
02:29:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very bad, fix spacing because this part has no flow at all! changed a little
02:55:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Example of a good part! This is really good and emphasizes the song! That's what you need in your song! I guess something worked atleast lol
03:03:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Mix jumps up here, this is too circular for me, also the song has different tones, they don't go one way so it feels weird. alright
03:06:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Come on you can do better than this, this fits yeah but you could make something cooler there. changed
03:13:407 (1) - I think you should make it like in the first stream, start with stream and end with this note instead of having two in a row, it feels weird. It might feel weird, I agree, but I still want to leave this patern.
03:25:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Another part I really liked! aye, I should have made more of these kind
03:55:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Parts like this have no flow, they are just weird and it's a lot of them in this song. I'll look into these at later date since there's quite a lot of such snaps
04:04:836 (4,5,6,7) - Breaks everything about your flow, it just doesn't fit at all. changed a bit
04:06:721 - There is a beat here which you should left it out everywhere else so will keep the same.
04:16:493 (1,2) - If you are going for symmetry, this is what it should look like --> http://puu.sh/ici48/9ac031a7b0.jpg nah didn't go for symmetry, but curved sliders a bit
04:17:693 - Map this part imo aswell. I think it plays better without, but will consider
04:23:178 (8,1) - Too close, you are transitioning to another part from a jumpy one, it's like a trap. fixed
04:36:036 (2,3,8,9) - Should be equal spacing between those parts, the 2nd one is closer but the rhythm is the same, feels like it should be the same. k
05:03:978 (4,5,6) - Spacing. I think it's ok 4 to 5 is much stronger
05:05:864 (1,2) - Spacing fixed

Alright I think it's enough here!

The whole map is how to say it.. correct. Doesn't make it rankable though.
You have a lot of flow issues, it feels random except some parts but most of it has same rhythm patterns, no hard parts and it's 6 star solely because of the jumps but when you look at the slider parts, they could be found in a 4 star map which isn't good. You should try making some harder parts, I could almost FC this song at first try and it took me 100 + to FC United which is not even 6 stars! United hardest parts are streams even when the star rating comes from jumps in that map and I don't have some extreme weird stream patern, cause it's just not my thing to overspace them. Though I will agree with flow being random at many parts, but even if it wasn't it would be like play 5 star map I think. I didn't make any hard paterns cause I wanted to make this simplier, just some spaced jumps, but I guess the jumps overweight the star rating.
Every Kiai feels the same, it's the same rhythm, the same repetetive patterns even if the jumps are palced differently, it feels the same on every level, try to mix up with something like this maybe? --> http://puu.sh/icj9W/64ba442d24.osz Check this 04:06:893 (1,2) - starting from here, you'll see what I made, it isn't perfect, made it in one minute, not the best flow but there are variations which you don't have. You're right, also thanks for the ideas.

To sum it up, most of your 6 star map is this SLIDER SPAM, SLIDER SPAM WITH TRIPLE, RANDOM JUMP PART WHICH IS HARD, SLIDER SPAM, QUINTS + SLIDERS. It feels like that, I've asked people for opinions, they said the same. Those things are not about 6 star but extra diffs I believe. My map just happened to be just jumps really. But I'll see what I can do about harder paterns.

It feels like playing the same thing over and over again, which could be good if the patterns were better, but there is no good flow and you should diverse more. Yeah, I guess the diversity really ends after the break.

Hit me up if you need extra help! sure thing!

Regards

WPEU

1. AiMod: Look alright, a lot of kiai
2. Timing: Looks solid
3. Folder: You've what appears to be an unused .osb. Remove it pls

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey from my queue

[General]

1. AiMod: Look alright, a lot of kiai
2. Timing: Looks solid
3. Folder: You've what appears to be an unused .osb. Remove it pls ok

[Cosmos]

00:05:521 (1,3) - Bad transition here, for better flow and consistency I recommend making the sliders the same Yeah changed

00:21:636 (6) - For a more even triangle, this should be moved to here instead: (X:240 Y:32) k

00:43:236 (5,6) - I don't understand the gap here, I would make the part from note 5 all a stream. There is no sound in the gap it would be overmap

01:22:150 - Add note? better without

01:22:493 (2) - I think the next note should start where this note is placed for better flow and to complete the square jump putting emphasis on the next patern by breaking the flow

03:05:521 (2,3,4,5) - Why is this pattern uneven, I don't understand and I think it would look better if it were even fixed

03:11:350 (3,4) - Why does this break flow so harshly, I would keep it consistent and follow the pattern you've just created before. I'm kinda unsure, it looks cooler that way and better flows into stream while the other one has better flow on the beat before.

04:02:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why does the difficulty in jumps spike here, it isn't really different from previous, I would tone it down a bit. okay, reduced somewhat

04:32:607 (8) - This part shouldn't reverse on a 1/4 because no music is there for it to do so. I would make it either a 1/2 slider or 2 notes instead. It's not really on music, but I think it fits, will change if others think so too.

I can't mod hard maps. Good luck with your map

1. 1365x768 BG resolution um... allright, would be cool if you could fix it but k.
2. normal-hitwhistle has above 5ms delay, fix this.
3. You got a .osb-file without a SB but whatever I guess
4. Combo colours 1,2,3 look really similar to each other, especially the first two which might be an issue while playing. Please make these more distinct.
5. Add Audio-Lead In of 1500 please.

1. Why OD9,2, the decimal doesn't do anything here. Just stick to 9 and you will still be fine.
   Also please increase the HP+1, this is way too forgiving for an extra difficulty stage.
2. This map is currently lacking quality. There's still a lot of room for improvement, so I'll just point out the most critical issues with some suggestions to it. Here the main reasons:
   
   1. Unpolished patterns - While it's a good thing to keep things as simple as possible, this map just lacks remarkable patterns in general. There are some good approaches, but they mostly don't complement the overall image of the map:
      Up to 00:09:978 - This feels just way too plain to play because 1.) Everything is snapped to 1.3x/1.4x (and not consistently either), 2.) no accentuations to stronger beats like 00:01:407 (1) - 00:02:778 (1) - 00:04:150 (1) - 00:06:893 (1) - etc. were set and 3.) you keep following the same flow.
      It is consistent, yes, but it's neither fun to play nor does it reflect the song really well. You should vary the motion of this section more e.g. using more sharp-angled flows on stronger beats of the music.
      00:27:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - You start doing some 90° patterns here, but for what reason? There's no particular change of tone of the music, this doesn't fit the previous style of this map at all.
      00:33:636 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This probably explains itself. Make patterns that flow well and properly to the music.
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:39:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unpolished pattern and inconsistent structure. 1st combo has a decent pattern, but then the 2nd combo is 90° structure again with really weird transitions like 00:41:350 (1,2,3) - . Again, consistency is frecommended and you shouldn't drift apart that much.
      00:54:893 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Unpolished jump patterns. Just try to avoid overlaps unless you know what you're doing, also symmetry is a good start to provide neat-looking jump-sections:
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:58:321 - to 01:04:321 - , this looks like you just put 2circles+1slider patterns randomly on the field, which lacks really proper structure. There's a lot of ways how to improve this, like making each pair of these into one pattern:
      
      SPOILER

      
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      SPOILER

      
      01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is actually pretty nice, but in this map's current state, it just doesn't complement with the overall image because sudden high-space octagons jumps.
      There are several original shapes scattered throughout the map like 01:47:007 (1,2,3,4) - windmills, 01:55:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - an octagon variation, 02:06:207 (1,2,3,4) - some symmetry patterns etc. but they don't feel connected to each other. Try to put more system into it, e.g. setting up symmetry patterns at the last part of kiai's only.
   2. Bad spacing and awkward transition between patterns. Just a few to show you the prime examples:
      00:09:978 (2,3) - Almost linear movement takes away the pressure on the slider 3, making it less impactful to play although there is a really strong vocal beat on this sliderhead.
      You want to snap the movement or a higher jump to make it fit properly, here two examples:
      
      SPOILER

      
      OR
      
      00:10:664 (5,6,1) - This is a really sharp movement and causes tension for no apparent reason, so broaden the angle and make it more natural to play.
      02:02:778 (1,2,3,4) - You jumped heavily in the previous combo and suddenly tone it down here, but why though.
      01:05:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.) Care with jumps, these are generally used only to emphasize strong beats in the track, so 01:06:207 (2,3) - and 01:06:378 (3,4) - are really overdone.
      2.) Avoid nasty overlaps like 01:06:378 (3,5) - , they just aren't pretty.
      01:21:636 (3,4,5) - 90° jumps aren't that nice really xD
   3. Poor rhythm choice:
      00:24:550 (4) - 00:25:921 (3) - 00:28:664 (6) - 00:30:036 (3) - Bad offbeat sliders. You usually don't want sliders to start on a weaker beat than were they end unless they follow something more dominant in the track. They can be avoided if you replace them with circles:
      
      SPOILER

      
      This is a continuous issue throughout the map, so have a thorough look at this again.

Pho wrote:

Thank you for your patience~ From my queue (only took me 2 months or so lol)

[General]

1. 1365x768 BG resolution um... allright, would be cool if you could fix it but k.
2. normal-hitwhistle has above 5ms delay, fix this.
3. You got a .osb-file without a SB but whatever I guess
4. Combo colours 1,2,3 look really similar to each other, especially the first two which might be an issue while playing. Please make these more distinct.
5. Add Audio-Lead In of 1500 please.

[Cosmos]

1. Why OD9,2, the decimal doesn't do anything here. Just stick to 9 and you will still be fine. This map is extremely easy to acc so even od 9 feels low also it matches AR
   Also please increase the HP+1, this is way too forgiving for an extra difficulty stage.
2. This map is currently lacking quality. There's still a lot of room for improvement, so I'll just point out the most critical issues with some suggestions to it. Here the main reasons:
   
   1. Unpolished patterns - While it's a good thing to keep things as simple as possible, this map just lacks remarkable patterns in general. There are some good approaches, but they mostly don't complement the overall image of the map:
      Up to 00:09:978 - This feels just way too plain to play because 1.) Everything is snapped to 1.3x/1.4x (and not consistently either), 2.) no accentuations to stronger beats like 00:01:407 (1) - 00:02:778 (1) - 00:04:150 (1) - 00:06:893 (1) - etc. were set and 3.) you keep following the same flow.
      It is consistent, yes, but it's neither fun to play nor does it reflect the song really well. You should vary the motion of this section more e.g. using more sharp-angled flows on stronger beats of the music.
      00:27:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - You start doing some 90° patterns here, but for what reason? There's no particular change of tone of the music, this doesn't fit the previous style of this map at all. There is a specific sound I follow on most of those squares
      00:33:636 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This probably explains itself. Make patterns that flow well and properly to the music.
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:39:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unpolished pattern and inconsistent structure. 1st combo has a decent pattern, but then the 2nd combo is 90° structure again with really weird transitions like 00:41:350 (1,2,3) - . Again, consistency is frecommended and you shouldn't drift apart that much.
      00:54:893 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Unpolished jump patterns. Just try to avoid overlaps unless you know what you're doing, also symmetry is a good start to provide neat-looking jump-sections:
      
      SPOILER

      
      00:58:321 - to 01:04:321 - , this looks like you just put 2circles+1slider patterns randomly on the field, which lacks really proper structure. There's a lot of ways how to improve this, like making each pair of these into one pattern:
      
      SPOILER

      
      SPOILER

      
      SPOILER

      
      01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is actually pretty nice, but in this map's current state, it just doesn't complement with the overall image because sudden high-space octagons jumps.
      There are several original shapes scattered throughout the map like 01:47:007 (1,2,3,4) - windmills, 01:55:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - an octagon variation, 02:06:207 (1,2,3,4) - some symmetry patterns etc. but they don't feel connected to each other. Try to put more system into it, e.g. setting up symmetry patterns at the last part of kiai's only. I'm not sure exactly what you mean, it looks fine to me, maybe you could explain better why they don't connect?
   2. Bad spacing and awkward transition between patterns. Just a few to show you the prime examples:
      00:09:978 (2,3) - Almost linear movement takes away the pressure on the slider 3, making it less impactful to play although there is a really strong vocal beat on this sliderhead.
      You want to snap the movement or a higher jump to make it fit properly, here two examples:
      
      SPOILER

      
      OR
      
      00:10:664 (5,6,1) - This is a really sharp movement and causes tension for no apparent reason, so broaden the angle and make it more natural to play.
      02:02:778 (1,2,3,4) - You jumped heavily in the previous combo and suddenly tone it down here, but why though.
      01:05:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.) Care with jumps, these are generally used only to emphasize strong beats in the track, so 01:06:207 (2,3) - and 01:06:378 (3,4) - are really overdone.
      2.) Avoid nasty overlaps like 01:06:378 (3,5) - , they just aren't pretty.
      01:21:636 (3,4,5) - 90° jumps aren't that nice really xD
   3. Poor rhythm choice:
      00:24:550 (4) - 00:25:921 (3) - 00:28:664 (6) - 00:30:036 (3) - Bad offbeat sliders. You usually don't want sliders to start on a weaker beat than were they end unless they follow something more dominant in the track. They can be avoided if you replace them with circles:
      
      SPOILER

      
      This is a continuous issue throughout the map, so have a thorough look at this again.

The mentiuoned issues occur throughout the whole map in variations, so I won't point them all out for now.
This mapset needs a lot of work, but it's a good basis. Keep working on it, you'll eventually make a good map out of this song with enough experience ~

Ant wrote:

Mod from my queue!

Blue for personal taste.
Red for something I see as a major problem.
Orange for a small problem.

Cosmos

00:01:236 (6,1) - It looks kinda like the spacing is bigger here for emphasis, but I think it'd be a bit better (for that emphasis) to space it a little further away, and to have the flow go into the slider. Somthing like this http://puu.sh/iVSLd.jpg maybe? k
00:08:093 (6) - I think it'd look a bit better if you moved this down-right, so it doesn't make a straight line with 00:07:750 (4,5) - k
00:11:864 (5,6) - What's with this jump? music
00:25:921 (5) - I think it'd look nicer somewhere like (289,97) moved a bit up instead
00:32:950 (1,2,3,4) - This seems a little hard, with the music being so calm here. it's only a bit more spaced compared to paterns before
01:13:750 (4) - I think it'd look nicer if it was a ctrl+h ctrl+j copy of 01:13:407 (3) - k
02:06:207 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These patterns feel forced. not sure how are they forced
02:23:264 (3,4,5,6) - This curve is a bit wobbly, try making 5 and 6 aim a bit more downwards. curved slightly
02:31:493 (3,4) - Try making these flow off the slider a bit more, like http://puu.sh/iVTHV.jpg. Consider whether or not you want to rotate it too, while you're at it. k
03:33:978 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I also think these feel forced. then all of my jumps are forced?
03:43:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The hitsounds here are different from the rest, but I don't know why. more emphasis on the music
04:11:950 (6,7) - I think it'd also look nicer here if the circles flowed off the slider more, like I mentioned above. k
05:20:950 (1,2) - I don't think these should be touching. k
05:22:664 (2) - Try rotating it a bit and moving it a bit down, like http://puu.sh/iVU66.jpg k
That's it!

The map's a bit unpolished, but otherwise fun (with a couple of pretty hard jumps). Good luck with it!