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Please take the BG from _gezo_ and the youtube video as baground bg and vid :^)
Topic Starter
I'm almost kicking the BNs of the team with this map lol
sorry guys
sorry guys
Kuron-kun
yes we cant...
rank this \;D/
rank this \;D/
Ranked and disqualified* I wouldn't cite a DQ'd map as a source for correct timing.Kuron-kun wrote:
I'm not complaining about the other things you mentioned, but the timing is not incorrect at all.
Maeglwn's version was ranked with 1020 offset, this was ranked with 1020 and no one mentioned that before.
Not saying you're wrong, but this probably needs multiple unbiased opinions before an actual conclusion can be drawn.
Kuron-kun
Topic Starter
someone to help me in the video conversion? I want to put it in the bg
DeletedUser_4329079
http://www.clipconverter.cc/Nhawak wrote:
someone to help me in the video conversion? I want to put it in the bg
I would upload it for you but my internet connection is too bad to upload anything
Topic Starter
thanks a lot for your opinion cherry blossom, I considered all <3Cherry Blossom wrote:
Uuuh i didn't expect another DQ (rip my HD Full Combo score on Banana diff ;w;).I don't have time to push this map forward, sorry.
- 00:27:789 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda disagree. This is not unintuitive at all, the player just need to read the pattern properly. I tried with different Approach rates and this pattern still plays well, the BPM can also have an influence concerning the playability, 260 BPM jumps are not easy at all...
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I'd like to suggest something which can improve the playability :- 00:33:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this motion is a little weird, transitioning from a zig zag to a little jump (higher distance) with 00:33:673 (4,5) - is a little weird when playing, It looks a little uncomfortable to play due to the spacing difference, i suggest you to make something else, smoother like :
Also, consider reducing the distance between 00:33:789 (5,6) - because there is nothing strong at 00:34:020 - and it sounds a little overdone (note that the BPM is 260 1/2 so, jumps are SERIOUS).
Good luck, and no kd.
oh, thanksDefault wrote:
http://www.clipconverter.cc/Nhawak wrote:
someone to help me in the video conversion? I want to put it in the bg
I would upload it for you but my internet connection is too bad to upload anything
I'll try it
Topic Starter
thank you xDLanturn wrote:
http://puu.sh/i0ca9.avi
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about the offset, I didn't change it, 1020 seems fine
THIRD TRY
Topic Starter
waiting for bbj006
my fucKING HIDDEN SCORE
http://puu.sh/i0Vvf/48ab34880e.zip
actually made sv changes move less, but different with stefan's suggestion. I think it fits better
actually made sv changes move less, but different with stefan's suggestion. I think it fits better
bbj you forgot this https://twitter.com/bbj0920/status/602959562149208064 :^)
also remove the video from my taiko diff; you can't enjoy it at its fullest :C
also remove the video from my taiko diff; you can't enjoy it at its fullest :C
i personally enjoy how some of the issues with patterns QATs found with the previous DQ, and that atrue brought up again, are still in the map. specially the hanzer wanna be stream in the collab insane at 00:06:558 (1,2,3,4,1) -
I guess you can hope to throw yourselves at the QATs enough times till they get fed up with this shit and say fuck it.
I guess you can hope to throw yourselves at the QATs enough times till they get fed up with this shit and say fuck it.
Setz wrote:
i personally enjoy how some of the issues with patterns QATs found with the previous DQ, and that atrue brought up again, are still in the map. specially the hanzer wanna be stream in the collab insane at 00:06:558 (1,2,3,4,1) -
I guess you can hope to throw yourselves at the QATs enough times till they get fed up with this shit and say fuck it.
if it keeps getting brought up, it is clear as day that they have a big issue with it. it doesn't take a genius to figure that out.Pappy wrote:
Setz wrote:
i personally enjoy how some of the issues with patterns QATs found with the previous DQ are still in the map, specially the hanzer wanna be stream in the collab insane at 00:06:558 (1,2,3,4,1) -
I guess you can hope to throw yourselves at the QATs enough times till they get fed up with this shit and say fuck it.So it's forbidden to not agree with QAT?It's just 130 BPM, what's so bad about this pattern?
1020 is not fine btw.Nhawak wrote:
about the offset, I didn't change it, 1020 seems fine
Instead of just shrugging it off, you might want to ask some really good timers for their opinions too.
Don't take this personally, I just wanted to comment before this gets popped/DQd again for timing.
Also, just because another map with the same mp3 is ranked with a certain timing, it doesn't automatically mean it's correct. In mosts cases it is but not always. There are plenty of people who you can go to if you have any doubts, QATs included, so instead of saying that something is fine based on something that has almost no correlation to this mapset is kinda irresponsible.
Just my 2c.
P.S.
Gerawak's Insane is missing a clap on 00:15:327 (4) - .
Inb4 this comment gets flamed because of this.
What's wrong with that pattern? It don't exactly belong in any 130 bpm insanePappy wrote:
Setz wrote:
i personally enjoy how some of the issues with patterns QATs found with the previous DQ are still in the map, specially the hanzer wanna be stream in the collab insane at 00:06:558 (1,2,3,4,1) -
I guess you can hope to throw yourselves at the QATs enough times till they get fed up with this shit and say fuck it.So it's forbidden to not agree with QAT?It's just 130 BPM, what's so bad about this pattern?
OMG, This video is HUE :V and NICE xDD
Nice job, bro =~=)b
Nice job, bro =~=)b
Agora eu acho que vai!
Rank it now ò.ó~
Rank it now ò.ó~
It's enough for now. Don't waste another 300 pages of discussing what QATs should do and what they should not do, etc.
Any BN or the mapper itself should contact me or any other GM to unlock.
Any BN or the mapper itself should contact me or any other GM to unlock.
Unlocked by the request of the mapper.
hype
^
It's done!
yes we can
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Topic Starter
someone help me to resize it to 100x100? :
MBomb
Hi Spec
And that's all I could find! Amazing map as always Spec! I remember mapping this, only a salad gd for a different mapset but yeah, love this song <3 Hope this is helpful
Spec's Overdose
00:05:648 (6) - Move this to x:488, this forces your catcher against the wall in a way that could throw a player off.
00:10:263 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part feels slightly overdone to me, in my opinion the hypers should only be to 1, 3, and the other 1, as these are the strong notes here, 2 and 4 are quite light drum beats.
00:13:495 (7,8) - I feel it fits the song well and plays quite nicely if you drag these notes to x:352. It makes a hyper to 7 for the strong clap and vocal, whilst keeping quite a comfortable jump to 8 after the hyper, and keeping 8 as a hyper to the next combo.
00:20:186 (4) - Take off the repeat here and add a circle at 00:20:417 - , which hypers from 4, as this is should be a hyper to due the high change in pitch here (Instead of the hyper from this to the current 5).
00:32:648 (2,4) - Ctrl+g 2 and then ctrl+g on 4 plays nicely, and fits the hyper pattern with the section before this of a similar style.
00:34:840 (6) - Ctrl+g here also feels nice for the hyper to this note, as this is quite strong, although if you do this I'd recommend moving 00:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - to the left a bit (Maybe x:416?)
00:10:263 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part feels slightly overdone to me, in my opinion the hypers should only be to 1, 3, and the other 1, as these are the strong notes here, 2 and 4 are quite light drum beats.
00:13:495 (7,8) - I feel it fits the song well and plays quite nicely if you drag these notes to x:352. It makes a hyper to 7 for the strong clap and vocal, whilst keeping quite a comfortable jump to 8 after the hyper, and keeping 8 as a hyper to the next combo.
00:20:186 (4) - Take off the repeat here and add a circle at 00:20:417 - , which hypers from 4, as this is should be a hyper to due the high change in pitch here (Instead of the hyper from this to the current 5).
00:32:648 (2,4) - Ctrl+g 2 and then ctrl+g on 4 plays nicely, and fits the hyper pattern with the section before this of a similar style.
00:34:840 (6) - Ctrl+g here also feels nice for the hyper to this note, as this is quite strong, although if you do this I'd recommend moving 00:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - to the left a bit (Maybe x:416?)
And that's all I could find! Amazing map as always Spec! I remember mapping this, only a salad gd for a different mapset but yeah, love this song <3 Hope this is helpful
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omg thanks inb4 kudosu daniedDefault wrote:
thanks for the mod- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Hi SpecSpec's Overdose00:05:648 (6) - Move this to x:488, this forces your catcher against the wall in a way that could throw a player off.
00:10:263 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part feels slightly overdone to me, in my opinion the hypers should only be to 1, 3, and the other 1, as these are the strong notes here, 2 and 4 are quite light drum beats.
00:13:495 (7,8) - I feel it fits the song well and plays quite nicely if you drag these notes to x:352. It makes a hyper to 7 for the strong clap and vocal, whilst keeping quite a comfortable jump to 8 after the hyper, and keeping 8 as a hyper to the next combo.
00:20:186 (4) - Take off the repeat here and add a circle at 00:20:417 - , which hypers from 4, as this is should be a hyper to due the high change in pitch here (Instead of the hyper from this to the current 5).
00:32:648 (2,4) - Ctrl+g 2 and then ctrl+g on 4 plays nicely, and fits the hyper pattern with the section before this of a similar style.
00:34:840 (6) - Ctrl+g here also feels nice for the hyper to this note, as this is quite strong, although if you do this I'd recommend moving 00:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - to the left a bit (Maybe x:416?)
And that's all I could find! Amazing map as always Spec! I remember mapping this, only a salad gd for a different mapset but yeah, love this song <3 Hope this is helpful
riverside, motherfucker.
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Good luck!
Spec
00:01:033 (1,2,3) - maybe try this timeline https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3206707 because of 00:01:263 - (slider ignores that sound) also this 00:01:436 - is stronger than 00:01:379 - (slider end)
00:02:879 - maybe place here note?
00:04:033 (1,2) - maybe ctrl + h and then place at x:212
00:14:879 (5) - hmm, ctrl + h maybe
00:02:879 - maybe place here note?
00:04:033 (1,2) - maybe ctrl + h and then place at x:212
00:14:879 (5) - hmm, ctrl + h maybe
Good luck!
Hi Everyone
Goodluck Rereranking it
Spec's Overdose
00:02:763 (7) - To x312 For a bit slight movement to left
00:10:725 (3,4) - Replace with One slider + Circle to emphasis that sound maybe
00:18:340 (5) - change this pattern to fit that lyrics by remove the reverse on that slider then add a 1/2 slider
00:30:340 (3) - to x236
00:33:109 (4) - Ctrl+G ?
00:17:648 (2) - maybe NC should be here, fits better imo
00:26:533 (2) - ^
00:07:263 (5) - Remove Whistle
00:11:417 (3,4) - ^
00:33:109 (4) - Remove Clap at The end
00:10:725 (3,4) - Replace with One slider + Circle to emphasis that sound maybe
00:18:340 (5) - change this pattern to fit that lyrics by remove the reverse on that slider then add a 1/2 slider
00:30:340 (3) - to x236
00:33:109 (4) - Ctrl+G ?
00:17:648 (2) - maybe NC should be here, fits better imo
00:26:533 (2) - ^
00:07:263 (5) - Remove Whistle
00:11:417 (3,4) - ^
00:33:109 (4) - Remove Clap at The end
Goodluck Rereranking it