Negri_sk wrote:

[Cosmic mind]
02:05:074 (4,5) - 1 spap to the right wich does not mess up the flow - Fixed!
02:25:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3153883 Basicaly switch sides between what note should start first i promise you this plays out ALOT better. - Fixed!
03:49:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ - Fixed!
03:18:845 (4) - x320 it feels kinda useless otherwise really. - Fixed!
HP6? - Fixed!

globerosss wrote:

02:05:074 (4,5) - 1 spap to the right wich does not mess up the flow - Fixed!
02:22:124 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - i think this moment need stop to slider - It is fine.

03:28:271 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - you can move more to left (singletapping) - I think this is fine.

Kurokami wrote:

[mod]

00:19:665 (1,1) - I know I didn't pointed this out and actually is fine but the note comes really sudden after the spinner which most likely cause some rage in the future. How about shortening the spinner by 1/2? - This is fine, due to the note comming at the last fruit of the spinner.
00:45:894 (2,3) - I don't really like the movement here and I don't think anyone expect the next fruit on the right side. I can't think any good solution now but maybe something like http://puu.sh/i0WDg/e6ac3db2ba.png and ctrl+H on 00:46:386 (3,4,5,6,7) then move it back to x432 would work better. - Fixed!
00:55:074 (1,2,3) - This flow kinda weird again, better than before but still can throw me off. Try to repeat the same pattern as (8,9). - I actually like this, so wont change it.
01:27:206 (3,4) - This jump and the placement is really sudden. I recognize your pattern but while at (1,2,3) there is a flow here is just the pure jump. It would be better to place (4) to the right side, for example x:432 though you will need to remodel the next patterns a bit. - I would preffer this as it is, due to i mapped the jump to follow the vocal.
01:29:829 (4) - Try this instead. And add a jump at (5,6). - I would like tho keep this
01:39:008 (3,1) - This HDash is really weird because of the 1/1 distance. How about moving (3) 1/2 later and add a circle to 01:39:008 instead?- Fixed!
01:40:320 (3,1) - ^ - Fixed!
01:51:140 (3,4,1) - This supposed to be a calm part yet this jump is quite high. Try to reduce it a little. - Fixed!
01:56:714 - 02:04:583 - I know you followed the drums here but at the same time the melody is quite strong. I suggest you to use long slider at some point instead of circle since its kinda hard to follow the pure drums. - But ;_; This part so precious! ;_; Wont change it ;_; sorry ;_;
02:06:878 (5) - Put this on the left side instead. - Fixed!
02:08:189 (5,1) - Why no jump? q.q - Fixed!
02:09:501 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed!(But no hyper)
02:11:467 (3,4) - ^ - Fixed!
02:25:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is way too much at this part. I can't hear anything here which needs to be followed with this brutal HDash pattern, this can me the problem of my died earphone though. But I still suggest you to try to make something which is easier to follow but still hard. You know, some non HDash jump sometimes can be harder than a simple HDash. And if you ask me, the two (4,1) can be the only HDash at this section. - Rip headphones ;_; But it follows something, trust me. And i would like to keep this.
02:34:419 (1) - If I remember right I was the one who suggested this dash patter but I think it will be easier if you move this note to x:176. - Actually, when you suggested it, i fell in love with it. It follows the vocals very well. so wont change D:
03:03:271 - There is a clear sound here. Try to use an 1/2 slider instead of circle to fill the 1/1 gap. - Fixed!
03:23:763 (2,3,1) - The hell?! When I mentioned high end jumps, this was one of them, I just forgot to mention somehow. Anyway, try to use 1/2 slider instead of (3) again and lower the HDash between (2,3) a lot. Its really hard to recover the catcher after this pattern atm. - Fixed!
03:25:238 (4,5,1) - ^ - Fixed!
03:29:829 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same to what I said before. I don't really think this jump pattern fits. It entertaining but kinda makes no sense imo.
03:55:402 (3,4) - If you really want to use 3/4 HDashes (quite fitting) try to not use sliders like these because its hard to go immediately back to where you just came, instead try to move the tail of the slider (4) to the right side to make some good flow. But I think you will need to rework the patterns here a little if you want to apply this. o.o - I do not want to apply this personally, as i feel the current pattern is quite fitting ;_; sorry :c
03:58:681 (1) - Move this slider back to right a bit. Try to keep the HDashes. - No, just not. I dont feel that another distance fits this :c
04:01:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Try to reduce the curve a little. Since this is 1/8 its easy to miss a fruit so better to make the pattern as easy as possible. The pattern itself is a good idea, just reduce the curve and it will be fine. :3 - Fixed!
04:37:533 (3,1) - Slider at (3) please. q.q - Fixed!
04:38:845 (5,1) - ^ - Fixed!
04:49:172 (7) - Two 1/2 slider and a circle instead. - Would love to keep this, sorry ;_;
04:52:124 (6,1) - Where is the HDash? >.< - Added!
05:04:911 (1) - Separate this and add some left curve. Its really hard to stop after that HDash atm. - Fixed!
05:05:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wait wat. No. This is hardly makes any sense. Just follow your previous style from 01:46:222 (for example). No need for this high end dash pattern after the end of the kiai. - I will not change this. Due to this being a "brutal" part in the song, and i wanted to keep it hard.

Okey, I'm not sure who are you trying to satisfy with the part of 05:05:566 - 05:26:550 - but that part is hardly rankable as it is. This part should be a bit calm, the vocal is in silence, just the melody remained. Some HDash is acceptable but you just spammed them. Remember, ranked maps are not for show, players will play them eventually and we need to pass the QATs as well. So I highly suggest you to follow the same method as at the beginning (a few more HDash wouldn't hurt) and remake this part. I'm not really satisfied with the rhythm either anyway. - I removed every timing jump after a hyper. Rest is rankable. So wont change the other.
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Feel free to poke me after you checked this and I will see what I can do for you. *hides*


The hell, this ended up as a wall of text again. Please kill me. q.q - You know, there is a Box thing..

Kurokami wrote:

Well, I see no point holding this back. While I still have some doubt you rejected those changes so lets move this forward.

Here is your #1. o/

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Halozy - Kanshou no Matenrou [CatchTheBeat Modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problems
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Doesnt have
- Hitsound: No Delay
- Timing: Good

Since all things are fixed w/ lets go for rebubble, no problems appears
Was rechecked but not found anymore problems

2nd Rebubbled

Congratulations Razor xD Waiting for Approval

Good luck, Razor

Because this a Approval map, so its need 2 bubbles before Approval!
Noticed for the 3rd BN: Check on patterns and snap

Krfawy wrote:

#QualifyHighQualityMaps2015 #Krfawy4QAT2015

General

1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : Would be great to have 'Touhou project' in the tag
5. Timeline Issues : ☑
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues : Overall hitsounds are lack of quality imo, should be better by receiving some more mods & suggestions and tips
9. Inaudible hitsounds : Check my suggestions below

Cosmic Mind

1. 00:47:533 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Expecting a little more space between 2 and 3. you may move 3~7 to a bit right to make the flow better
2. 01:11:468 (3,4) - Do you mind moving 3 to the left slightly? (probably around x:243 would be great). It improves the movement here a lot
3. 01:16:386 (1,2,3) - The flow here is quite awkward. Would be better to have hdash between 1 and 2 as well (try this)
4. 01:22:124 (6,7,8) - This is something really unrankable imo
5. 01:22:943 (1,1,1) - I'd say these sliders are just unacceptable. At least there should be hdashes between them. Plus, it's better to make the jumps in 1/4 like this pic instead of 1/8
6. 01:27:206 (3,4) - Anti-flow which isn't really fun to play with. I'd redesign this part, or at least reduce the distance between them
7. 01:46:222 (1) - This should be more horizontal as there's a strong hdash right before the slider. Otherwise it'll obscure the movement
8. 01:52:288 (3) - Just optional, but i'd put a bit more space between 2 and 3. It's kinda plain imo
9. 02:06:878 (5) - This is quite unexpected and too left-sided. I'd move it to the right slightly
10. 02:09:501 (1,2) - I may say that this is what we call anti-flow. How about doing this instead? or just getting rid of jump would be great as well
11. 02:25:238 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't understand the flow here actually. If you'd like to keep 1/4s, would be better of to make them more horizontal like this pic(also it's recommended to have hdashes between them)
12. 02:26:222 (1,2,3,4) - If you're fixed above one. Ctrl+h these sliders and try move them to about x:470
13. 02:26:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I'd make these notes into just one repeating slider as there're some intense 1/4 jumps before this 1/8. This kind of 1/8 notes would make the game even harder
14. 02:29:173 (1) - It seems to be just random NC. Please remove it
15. 02:52:779 (4,5,1) - This part is pretty easy to make a miss, meaning it's pretty random and unexpected. I'd just convert 4,5 into single slider and place it like this
16. 02:54:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why suddenly the distances are getting lower? Would be better if you just make this part normal like the other parts.
17. 02:55:730 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of jumps, so-called anti-flow hdash jumps, are highly recommended to be removed as they're literally too hard to get & break the flow at all. I'd move 4 to the left side (about x:52?) and remap 5 and 6
18. 02:57:370 (2,3) - The jump here is pretty rough.. at least there should be a hdash between 2 and 3.
19. 02:58:353 (5,6) - I'd make the distance here more exciting as well.
20. 03:09:501 (1,2) - These sliders are literally inaudible which can cause dq. Please upper the volume here
21. 03:14:747 (1,2) - ^
22. 03:29:009 (2,3) - Inaudible as well. Making them at least to be 30% is recommended
23. 03:30:648 (3,1) - I'd say that the movement here is broken as you'd need to stop the catcher at 03:30:730 - and then the rough 1/8 notes come right after that moment. I'd add hdash for the better flow
24. 03:32:287 (1) - How about moving this to the left slightly? It'd help flow be better
25. 03:49:418 (8,1) - This, is really hard as it's lack of hdash between 8 and 1. Also the 1/4 sliders kinda make no sense just like 02:25:238 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
26. 03:51:222 (6,1) - Expecting a hdash between 6 and 1(or even, you can just remove the space between them). Otherwise it feels pretty random and will force the movement
27. 04:00:812 (3,4) - The edge jump here is pretty unacceptable as it comes after the hdash which is anti-flow. You'd better reduce the distance for a bit
28. 04:21:960 (1,1) - 1/16 long jump. This is just unacceptable imo orz
29. 04:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - and again, these sliders should be audible otherwise it's unrankable
30. 04:43:189 (4,1) - They shouldn't be place at the same spot. Again, It's highly recommended to add a hdash between them.
31. 05:05:566 - It's the beginning of the most intense part of the map(and song). How about adding a kiai here as well?
32. 05:07:206 (2) - Could you please move slider's head to a bit left? It flows quite ugly imo
33. 05:09:337 (1,2,3) - The jump between 1 and 2 is literally blinded. Mind holding 2~3 and moving them to about x:292? It'd make the flow better
34. 05:11:140 (2,3) - This is really tough to do actually. I'd make (2) more vertical-shaped and add a hdash between 2 and 3

1. 00:32:779 (1) - until 00:40:566 (8) - Definitely not justified. The background noise makes a fade-in, but that's just a flutter and not a constant 1/4 stream.
2. 00:59:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can understand this one, since the 1/4 notes can be heard. Slightly overdone, but okay.
3. 01:14:746 (1) - until 01:22:452 (8) - The fade-in appears here as well, so it can lead to misunderstandings. The first part of the stream is overdone, since you can still hear the clear "X X X XXX X X" rhythm of the drums. I'd vow for using something similar for that part, and not the constant 1/4. However, from 01:21:304 (1) - on, there's an audible constant stream. In that case, it's okay to keep it.
4. 02:22:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This one looks safe as well. However, I'd start the 1/8 notes at 02:26:713 - already, since that's where the rhythm change happens.
5. 03:50:648 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It's strange that you didn't use 1/8s for that part :p
6. 04:13:107 (1) - until 04:20:894 (8) - It's the same "fade-in" sound that appeared in other patterns. In this case the 1/4 stream is only audible from 04:18:353 (1) - on, so the notes before this part need to be cropped.

1. 01:56:877 - until 02:06:877 - That section needs definitely to be lowered, or at least use lower hitsounds. The melody is quite calm, so it doesn't need such strong hitsounds.
2. 01:23:927 (1,2) - 03:09:501 (1,2) - 03:14:747 (1,2) - 03:28:517 (1,2,3) - 04:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are not audible at all. You'll need to raise the volume slightly.
3. 05:31:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Apart of the fact that those notes are (borderline) inaudible, I would've added the default S-whistle to some of them to emphasize them

1. 01:02:615 (5) - This slider doesn't flow quite well to the next one. I'd rather keep it as a single note (makes even more sense than having a 3/4 slider).
2. 01:22:615 (1,1,1,1) - Flow-breaker sliders, which are also rather hard to catch. Reduce the distance between them, or try to create something else with single notes that can flow better than that. Kick-sliders are the quickest effective option, but they don't always work.
3. 02:27:335 (12,1) - Quite uncorfotable transition. A 1/8 HDash followed by some more zig-zag'd HDashes isn't recommendable.
4. 02:57:376 (2,3) - Such dash is not suitable after having the previous HDash (anti-flow jump). Try to reduce it.
5. 03:14:753 (1,2) - That jump doesn't flow well (moreover using that 1/4 HDash), which makes the transition (1,2) a real pain. Try something else there.
6. 04:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unacceptable 1/8 sliders. Just see how the ryuuta moves while catching them. Totally unnatural 8,90x and 11,20x jumps.
7. 04:21:966 (1,1) - 29,52x wtf. Just no...
8. 04:33:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Just as a reference, those 1/8 jumps were okayish compared to the others.
9. 04:43:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - And those ones look much better and flow well.

1. Offset: Sounds better to add +6 to it (1310). It sounds slightly early in its current state.
2. 00:19:665 (1) - Even though the distance spinner-note is rankable, I'd let that spinner end at 00:21:959 - . Due to the high AR (and relatively high BPM) and also the shape of the spinner, it's rather hard to get those first notes while sightreading.
3. 00:45:812 (10) - Sounds more reasonable to put the HDash 1/4 later, where the main beat occurs. You can achieve that by placing this note near (9), instead of the next slider.
4. 01:10:156 (3,4,5,1) - This zig-zag isn't quite comfortable to play. I'd try moving (4) a few grids to the right, at about x:240.
5. 01:13:927 (3,4,5) - Rather tricky dash structure, not recommendable at all. Also, place (4) near (3) instead of near (5).
6. 01:29:829 (4) - It's a pity that this slider has a repetition. The stanza change suggest to make a bigger distance for the last 2 notes, so I'd suggest to remove that repetition and add a note at 01:30:484 - somewhere further to create a better effect.
7. 04:49:172 (7) - Something similar happened to this slider ^
8. 01:32:943 (1) - A jump can be added there. It'd fit quite well to the melody.
9. 02:54:753 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Something like that would fit better for a calm part, but not there. Try to make something more interesting.

Bathory Witch wrote:

Lol gj Krfawy! Zawsze wiedziałem że ludzie mogą na tobie polegać.

Deif wrote:

Hi Razor Sharp! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:

Inappropriate usage of some structures:

1. 04:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unacceptable 1/8 sliders. Just see how the ryuuta moves while catching them. Totally unnatural 8,90x and 11,20x jumps.
2. 04:21:966 (1,1) - 29,52x wtf. Just no...

Deif wrote:

Hi Razor Sharp! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:

Overmapping (and some other timeline errors):

1. 00:32:779 (1) - until 00:40:566 (8) - Definitely not justified. The background noise makes a fade-in, but that's just a flutter and not a constant 1/4 stream.
2. 00:59:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can understand this one, since the 1/4 notes can be heard. Slightly overdone, but okay.
3. 01:14:746 (1) - until 01:22:452 (8) - The fade-in appears here as well, so it can lead to misunderstandings. The first part of the stream is overdone, since you can still hear the clear "X X X XXX X X" rhythm of the drums. I'd vow for using something similar for that part, and not the constant 1/4. However, from 01:21:304 (1) - on, there's an audible constant stream. In that case, it's okay to keep it.
4. 02:22:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This one looks safe as well. However, I'd start the 1/8 notes at 02:26:713 - already, since that's where the rhythm change happens.
5. 03:50:648 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It's strange that you didn't use 1/8s for that part :p
6. 04:13:107 (1) - until 04:20:894 (8) - It's the same "fade-in" sound that appeared in other patterns. In this case the 1/4 stream is only audible from 04:18:353 (1) - on, so the notes before this part need to be cropped.

Hitsounds can still be improved:

1. 01:56:877 - until 02:06:877 - That section needs definitely to be lowered, or at least use lower hitsounds. The melody is quite calm, so it doesn't need such strong hitsounds. - Lowered it. Should be ok now!
2. 01:23:927 (1,2) - 03:09:501 (1,2) - 03:14:747 (1,2) - 03:28:517 (1,2,3) - 04:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are not audible at all. You'll need to raise the volume slightly. - Raised to 30%!
3. 05:31:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Apart of the fact that those notes are (borderline) inaudible, I would've added the default S-whistle to some of them to emphasize them - Fixed!

Inappropriate usage of some structures:

1. 01:02:615 (5) - This slider doesn't flow quite well to the next one. I'd rather keep it as a single note (makes even more sense than having a 3/4 slider). - Fixed!
2. 01:22:615 (1,1,1,1) - Flow-breaker sliders, which are also rather hard to catch. Reduce the distance between them, or try to create something else with single notes that can flow better than that. Kick-sliders are the quickest effective option, but they don't always work. - Kept it 1/8, but reduced distance!
3. 02:27:335 (12,1) - Quite uncorfotable transition. A 1/8 HDash followed by some more zig-zag'd HDashes isn't recommendable.
4. 02:57:376 (2,3) - Such dash is not suitable after having the previous HDash (anti-flow jump). Try to reduce it. - Fixed!
5. 03:14:753 (1,2) - That jump doesn't flow well (moreover using that 1/4 HDash), which makes the transition (1,2) a real pain. Try something else there. - Fixed!
6. 04:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unacceptable 1/8 sliders. Just see how the ryuuta moves while catching them. Totally unnatural 8,90x and 11,20x jumps.
7. 04:21:966 (1,1) - 29,52x wtf. Just no... - Removed last note on the cluster, so its a 1/8 jump. SHould be ok.
8. 04:33:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Just as a reference, those 1/8 jumps were okayish compared to the others. - The power of a curve!
9. 04:43:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - And those ones look much better and flow well. - \o/

Since most of them should be remade I ommited some of the potential flow-breakers, which were placed in some 1/4 streams. Get a BN to take a look at them after fixing the overmapping issue.

I feel like the map has great potential, but it wasn't ready to be qualified yet. From now on, the BNG will handle the ranking process once more. Good luck!

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Deif wrote:

@Spectator: Make a quick reply after this post, so I can give you a kds!

Spectator wrote:

Deif wrote:

@Spectator: Make a quick reply after this post, so I can give you a kds!

Here it is!

Good luck with the map, Razor

Kurokami wrote:

Again a bubble and qualify w/o checking anything. This way, even a 1 day old map can be ranked immediately. *facepalm*

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

Bathory Witch wrote:

Lol gj Krfawy! Zawsze wiedziałem że ludzie mogą na tobie polegać.

Agree!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

sorry for the troubles ...
I will becareful next time ...
Im so sorry about this! And i will help you on fixing the map, good luck

Deif wrote:

Hi Razor Sharp! The QAT decided to DQ your beatmap over the following reasons:

Overmapping (and some other timeline errors):

1. 00:32:779 (1) - until 00:40:566 (8) - Definitely not justified. The background noise makes a fade-in, but that's just a flutter and not a constant 1/4 stream. - FOund out the stream starts from 00:34:091 (1) actually. So fixed that!
2. 00:59:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can understand this one, since the 1/4 notes can be heard. Slightly overdone, but okay. - Guess its ok then?
3. 01:14:746 (1) - until 01:22:452 (8) - The fade-in appears here as well, so it can lead to misunderstandings. The first part of the stream is overdone, since you can still hear the clear "X X X XXX X X" rhythm of the drums. I'd vow for using something similar for that part, and not the constant 1/4. However, from 01:21:304 (1) - on, there's an audible constant stream. In that case, it's okay to keep it. - Stream sound starts from 01:16:386 (1) as i can here, so will fix it up to this point!
4. 02:22:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This one looks safe as well. However, I'd start the 1/8 notes at 02:26:713 - already, since that's where the rhythm change happens. - Fixed!
5. 03:50:648 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It's strange that you didn't use 1/8s for that part :p - ^
6. 04:13:107 (1) - until 04:20:894 (8) - It's the same "fade-in" sound that appeared in other patterns. In this case the 1/4 stream is only audible from 04:18:353 (1) - on, so the notes before this part need to be cropped. - Starts on 04:14:418 (1) , so will keep stream from there. Else, changed.

Inappropriate usage of some structures:

1. 02:27:335 (12,1) - Quite uncorfotable transition. A 1/8 HDash followed by some more zig-zag'd HDashes isn't recommendable. - Should be fine now!
2. 04:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Unacceptable 1/8 sliders. Just see how the ryuuta moves while catching them. Totally unnatural 8,90x and 11,20x jumps. - Changed it!

Since most of them should be remade I ommited some of the potential flow-breakers, which were placed in some 1/4 streams. Get a BN to take a look at them after fixing the overmapping issue.

Spectator wrote:

General

1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : Would be great to have 'Touhou project' in the tag - Fixed!
5. Timeline Issues : ☑
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues : Overall hitsounds are lack of quality imo, should be better by receiving some more mods & suggestions and tips - Will do!
9. Inaudible hitsounds : Check my suggestions below - I think Deif mentioned them all, but will do!

Cosmic Mind

1. 00:47:533 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Expecting a little more space between 2 and 3. you may move 3~7 to a bit right to make the flow better - Fixed!
2. 01:11:468 (3,4) - Do you mind moving 3 to the left slightly? (probably around x:243 would be great). It improves the movement here a lot - Fixed!
3. 01:16:386 (1,2,3) - The flow here is quite awkward. Would be better to have hdash between 1 and 2 as well (try this) - Fixed!
4. 01:22:124 (6,7,8) - This is something really unrankable imo - No its not. It is a sipmle left right pattern, followed by another doublet to the right. Deif did not mention it. Therefor, i will not change this.
5. 01:22:943 (1,1,1) - I'd say these sliders are just unacceptable. At least there should be hdashes between them. Plus, it's better to make the jumps in 1/4 like this pic instead of 1/8 - Changed this when applying the DQ reason mod. Its perfectly fine now!
6. 01:27:206 (3,4) - Anti-flow which isn't really fun to play with. I'd redesign this part, or at least reduce the distance between them - Fixed!
7. 01:46:222 (1) - This should be more horizontal as there's a strong hdash right before the slider. Otherwise it'll obscure the movement - Fixed!
8. 01:52:288 (3) - Just optional, but i'd put a bit more space between 2 and 3. It's kinda plain imo - Fixed!
9. 02:06:878 (5) - This is quite unexpected and too left-sided. I'd move it to the right slightly - Fixed!
10. 02:09:501 (1,2) - I may say that this is what we call anti-flow. How about doing this instead? or just getting rid of jump would be great as well - Fixed to what you suggested!
11. 02:25:238 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't understand the flow here actually. If you'd like to keep 1/4s, would be better of to make them more horizontal like this pic(also it's recommended to have hdashes between them) - Fixed!
12. 02:26:222 (1,2,3,4) - If you're fixed above one. Ctrl+h these sliders and try move them to about x:470 - Changed these during Deif's DQ reasons.
13. 02:26:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I'd make these notes into just one repeating slider as there're some intense 1/4 jumps before this 1/8. This kind of 1/8 notes would make the game even harder - Wont change it, as the 1/4 part is not as intense anymore.
14. 02:29:173 (1) - It seems to be just random NC. Please remove it - Fixed!
15. 02:52:779 (4,5,1) - This part is pretty easy to make a miss, meaning it's pretty random and unexpected. I'd just convert 4,5 into single slider and place it like this - Fixed!
16. 02:54:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why suddenly the distances are getting lower? Would be better if you just make this part normal like the other parts. - Fixed!
17. 02:55:730 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of jumps, so-called anti-flow hdash jumps, are highly recommended to be removed as they're literally too hard to get & break the flow at all. I'd move 4 to the left side (about x:52?) and remap 5 and 6 - Fixed!
18. 02:57:370 (2,3) - The jump here is pretty rough.. at least there should be a hdash between 2 and 3. - Fixed!
19. 02:58:353 (5,6) - I'd make the distance here more exciting as well. - Fixed!
20. 03:09:501 (1,2) - These sliders are literally inaudible which can cause dq. Please upper the volume here - Fixed!
21. 03:14:747 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed!
22. 03:29:009 (2,3) - Inaudible as well. Making them at least to be 30% is recommended - Fixed!
23. 03:30:648 (3,1) - I'd say that the movement here is broken as you'd need to stop the catcher at 03:30:730 - and then the rough 1/8 notes come right after that moment. I'd add hdash for the better flow - Fixed!
24. 03:32:287 (1) - How about moving this to the left slightly? It'd help flow be better - Fixed!
25. 03:49:418 (8,1) - This, is really hard as it's lack of hdash between 8 and 1. Also the 1/4 sliders kinda make no sense just like 02:25:238 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - - Fixed!
26. 03:51:222 (6,1) - Expecting a hdash between 6 and 1(or even, you can just remove the space between them). Otherwise it feels pretty random and will force the movement - Error, 6 and 1 not found?
27. 04:00:812 (3,4) - The edge jump here is pretty unacceptable as it comes after the hdash which is anti-flow. You'd better reduce the distance for a bit- I actually increased the distance, as i find it quite interesting. Is not hyper!
28. 04:21:960 (1,1) - 1/16 long jump. This is just unacceptable imo orz - Fixed on Deif DQ post!
29. 04:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - and again, these sliders should be audible otherwise it's unrankable - Fixed!
30. 04:43:189 (4,1) - They shouldn't be place at the same spot. Again, It's highly recommended to add a hdash between them. - Fixed!
31. 05:05:566 - It's the beginning of the most intense part of the map(and song). How about adding a kiai here as well? - Fixed!
32. 05:07:206 (2) - Could you please move slider's head to a bit left? It flows quite ugly imo - Fixed!
33. 05:09:337 (1,2,3) - The jump between 1 and 2 is literally blinded. Mind holding 2~3 and moving them to about x:292? It'd make the flow better - Fixed!
34. 05:11:140 (2,3) - This is really tough to do actually. I'd make (2) more vertical-shaped and add a hdash between 2 and 3 - Fixed!

Deif wrote:

Additional modding:

1. Offset: Sounds better to add +6 to it (1310). It sounds slightly early in its current state. - Fixed!
2. 00:19:665 (1) - Even though the distance spinner-note is rankable, I'd let that spinner end at 00:21:959 - . Due to the high AR (and relatively high BPM) and also the shape of the spinner, it's rather hard to get those first notes while sightreading. - A player usually do follow the spinner notes, and since this spinner got a pattern that follows until the first note, i would preffer to keep this.
3. 00:45:812 (10) - Sounds more reasonable to put the HDash 1/4 later, where the main beat occurs. You can achieve that by placing this note near (9), instead of the next slider. - Fixed!
4. 01:10:156 (3,4,5,1) - This zig-zag isn't quite comfortable to play. I'd try moving (4) a few grids to the right, at about x:240. - Fixed!
5. 01:13:927 (3,4,5) - Rather tricky dash structure, not recommendable at all. Also, place (4) near (3) instead of near (5). - Fixed!
6. 01:29:829 (4) - It's a pity that this slider has a repetition. The stanza change suggest to make a bigger distance for the last 2 notes, so I'd suggest to remove that repetition and add a note at 01:30:484 - somewhere further to create a better effect. - Fixed!
7. 04:49:172 (7) - Something similar happened to this slider ^ - Fixed!
8. 01:32:943 (1) - A jump can be added there. It'd fit quite well to the melody. - Fixed!
9. 02:54:753 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Something like that would fit better for a calm part, but not there. Try to make something more interesting. - Fixed!

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I feel like the map has great potential, but it wasn't ready to be qualified yet. From now on, the BNG will handle the ranking process once more. Good luck!

Storm- wrote:

storm-'s sexy lewd mod

SPOILER

just kidding i am awful

i think 6.5 star is insanely high for this map, it's mostly hyper jumps and abuse of the star system maybe you could lower it a bit to maybe 6 or 5.8
i think this map is legitly just free pp but i know that's not your intention but i feel like it abuses the pp system slightly. - I might have. Well then, lets make it worth the pp and star rating!

there is no quality key parts in this map that makes it stand out from the rest, you need to make a part in this map that is interesting and unique like a left right part or some crazy stream, a good example is clsw's xi map, where at the very end theres a crazy left right stream or his neu map with the deathstream at the end, when I play this map I want to feel this map and when i think of it i want to think of that part, aka if i played razor sharp's halozy map there is a crazy fun left right pattern in the middle! and the jumps and streams are nice! not just stream and jumps and somewhat interesting jumps. that is what being a quality mapper is all about, now try to make a interesting part that differs from the rest of a map aka a challenge part, you're not going to offer up a fc on this map just for fun. Good luck! - Let me see what i can do. Thanks!

Interesting parts that stand out, (lacking the main feature of the map)

03:54:419 (5,1,2,3,4) - this is cool - Thanks!
04:07:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is also cool because it flows really nice and goes into a jump as the same as 03:54:419 (5,1,2,3,4) -
the entire end of this map is sooooo nice, i loved it. - Thank you!


03:52:123 (1) - the intro to this part up until 04:01:632 (2) - feels the same as the chorus of 01:25:238 (1) - and 02:28:189 (1) -

you need to make each kai time interesting and not feel like the same - Should be ok now!


00:43:025 (3,4,5,1) - this feels better with jump like a intro into a difficult song - Fixed!
00:53:435 (8,9) - this looked funny, change it a bit i think - Fixed!
01:06:386 (4,5,6) - why not reverse slider - Fixed!
01:16:386 (1,2,3) - holy macaroni this looks insanely hard to hit (troll part) - Fixed!
01:35:402 (5,6,7,8) - this stream looks weird perhaps make the jump to the right side and add more curve to it - Fixed!
02:17:042 (3,1) - add jump increase distance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3183758 - Fixed!
02:20:812 (3,4,5) - un-needed pattern - Fixed!
02:50:320 (3,4,1) - this jump and hyper looks forced - Fixed!
03:40:976 (4,1) - same as 02:17:042 (3,1) - - Fixed!
04:00:812 (3,4) - this looks forced - Fixed!
04:13:107 (1) - wasted deathstream, you could of done something really interesting with this something not to crazy but make it interesting enough to differ from the rest of the map - Fixed!

The ending to this song is sick and way different from the rest of the map the jumps are juicy and flow really nice, plus the curved mini streams are a + - THANKS!!!!!

I think to make that "interesting part" i was talking about you could take advantage of that deathstream at 04:13:107 (1) - - Fixed!

i'm sure i missed some of the forced jumps in this map but go over a careful check and make sure there isn't any jumps like the ones i said in my mod - Fixed!

Seph wrote:

non CtB BNs can qualify now? didnt know

Seph wrote:

non CtB BNs can qualify now? didnt know