hi and
1 - 4 lets go
level 6um, well, you see, I've goes through your map, and it seems that my suggestions regarding PR would be overkill and will definitely rip apart your pattern, but I guess it won't hurt to state my opinion, on rough basis. I'd put them in spoiler, so you can either close your eyes and pretend to see nothing, or if you're curious you can click onto the horizon line of spoiler.
first of all, from 00:00:621 (621|0) - to 00:03:954 (3954|0) - is good.
Normally, i would ask you to align 00:01:097 (1097|2,1811|3,2525|0) - on the same column for better emphasizing the notes placement, fitting with the rhythm. Making your notes goes stair mode all the way is a good move as a pattern in a long term, but it's not a wise choice to ignore pr at this point, imo.
00:07:287 (7287|0) - being the loudest and highest pitch, try to exclude it from your stair notes, move it to 4
00:07:525 (7525|2,7763|3) - move them 1 time to the left
00:21:573 (21573|0,21573|1) - very weak and meaningless sound, there's no reason to put 2 notes here
00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1) - same reason
00:26:573 (26573|1) - missing note, add note for consistency and readable pattern, refer 00:25:382 (25382|1,25620|2,25859|0) -
00:28:478 (28478|3) - same reason
00:30:144 (30144|0,30144|3) - well, instead of 2 notes here, i would delete 00:30:144 (30144|3) - , and move 00:30:144 (30144|0) - sync it with pr.
00:30:620 (30620|3) - obviously, moved to 1
00:37:049 (37049|0,37287|3,37525|0,37644|1) - looks quite random to me. well, i suggest:
00:37:049 (37049|0) - move to 2
00:37:287 (37287|3) - move to 1
00:37:525 (37525|0,37644|1) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:38:001 (38001|3) - move to 2
00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0,46097|2,46335|1,46335|3) - well.. it does look okay i suppose..
00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - I agreed you put 2 notes here, because it's necessary to represent loudness here. But, you're making 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0) - having 2 notes as well, despite just being a kick sound. moreover, this is killing off meaning on 00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - which have 2 notes to emphasize the loud sound.. I suggest to use only 1 note on 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|0,45859|3) -
00:48:954 (48954|3,49192|2,49430|0,49668|1,49906|3,49906|2,50144|1,50144|0) - you know what, just press ctrl + H and they'll look better and sync, pr-wise as well
00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1,52525|0,52763|1,53001|3,53001|2) - copy-pasta clone notes, avoid excessively cloning your notes from 1 to another diff- Also, i suggest you to plot notes based on different sound base here.
00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1) - despite being a copy-pasta, you also did this wrong because it has the wrong base sequence. Actually, it should start 00:50:620 (50620|1) - . Deleting this doesn't mean you make this diff easier, but you made the pattern lose its balance
Solution for above statement: Delete 00:51:335 (51335|1,52287|1) - and re-pattern the rest 00:50:620 (50620|1,50859|3,51097|2,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2) - use pr
00:53:001 (53001|2,53001|3) - is not equal to 00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3) - , listen deeply, it's different sound. But, 00:53:716 (53716|0,53716|1) - is equal to 00:53:954 (53954|3,53954|2) - , so they should be in the same column instead- do something about them
01:02:406 (62406|2,62763|2) - , nah don't use jack pattern yet, for the time being implement different pattern variation. I suggest:
01:02:763 (62763|2) - move to 2
01:03:001 (63001|0) - move to 3
- 01:06:216 (66216|1) - starting at this point you may kept your jack notes -01:08:120 (68120|1,68478|2) - you need to plot them in the same column, the same as you did with 01:06:216 (66216|1,66573|1) - to preserve notes consistency
01:08:716 (68716|0,68716|1) - gives wider gap, for pattern flow. suggest move them to 1 and 4 respectively
01:08:954 (68954|3) - move to 2
01:09:192 (69192|1) - move to 4
01:10:620 (70620|3) - um, put this to 1 for cow sake
01:10:859 (70859|0) - move to 2
01:11:097 (71097|1) - move to 4
01:11:573 (71573|0,72049|0) - move them to column 4, sequence repetition with 01:09:668 (69668|3,70144|3) -
Well, I'll stop here
Good luck with your map <: