Senbon wrote:

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.
Solid mapping. Not much to find here.

[Cobras on a Plane]

00:49:150 (3) - Feels like a little too much repeats. Maybe use a longer slider with less repeats?
01:37:496 (3) - ^

[Behonkiss's Hard]

02:52:387 (9) - I don't like where the repeat is at. Lessen it to red tick and fill in?

[Bring It]

01:05:984 (2) - Clap?
02:01:020 (5) - Clap on start?
02:29:725 (4) - Clap on both ends?

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Rather solid map...Nothing for me to say.

Star.

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions.

General:

-- Delete .osb and full submit.

Cobra's on a plane:

-- The rhythm is hard to grasp at first imo because notes are omitted where you might expect them.

00:30:373 (x) - Note?
00:33:826 (x) - ^
00:36:848 (x) - ^
00:37:279 (x) - ^ -- You do kind of expect to follow the vocal since that's the most prominent thing in the song.
00:40:517 (x) - ^
01:22:387 (1,2,3) - The previous pattern of stack-slider was easier to follow.
01:50:013 (x) - Note?

Suggested notes are suggestions, I didn't list them all. I'm sure newer players could get the rhythm with practice but it's not obvious on the first play through imo.

Behonkiss's Hard:

Fine.

Bring it:

01:05:229 (7) - Delete?
01:12:135 (8) - ^
01:25:625 (1) - You can't really tell where the slider is going, I managed to hit it fine some might complain =/
01:27:459 (5) - Delete?
02:00:697 (3) - ^
02:37:819 (4) - ^

Some of the triples seemed a bit out of place, like they were added for extra difficulty. Though a nice difficulty overall ^_^

Yeah that's all, nice maps
~ Star.

1. More finishes? I don't think I've heard a single one. Put them on beats of strong rhythmic importance.
2. 01:25:625 (1) - This slider is a mess. Less scrunched?
3. 01:43:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's really counterintuitive and bad-looking how these sliders overlap. I see how they're a grid off from perfect overlap, seemingly just to work around the no-perfect-overlap rule, but they play the exact same way and suffer the exact same issues.
4. 01:54:761 (5) - CurveTypes: Linear, then right click each red point. The same can be said for all linear sliders. osu! renders them faster and more perfectly when a Linear curve type is set.
5. 02:38:359 (1,2,3) - lol. Lip sliders are always awesome. Any chance of sliding this over to the center of the screen?

1. 00:49:150 (1) - This slider is packed in awfully tightly for my tastes. There are a couple others like.
2. 00:55:517 (8) - Move forward by a 1/4. Syncing a stylized lyric is confusing to the player.
3. 02:52:387 (9) - The rebound feels awkward.

1. 00:29:294 (2,1) - How the kick slider is so close to the red (1) could trick an Easy player into clicking it too soon. Move the red combo further up?
2. 00:42:351 (1) - I don't believe this spinner is appropriate for an Easy. It's too close to the other objects on both sides.
3. 01:12:891 (1,2,3,4) - These slider overlaps are unrankable ... and confusing to an Easy player.
4. 02:12:028 (1,2,3,4) - More confusing kick sliders.
5. 02:18:934 (1) - See 00:42:351 (1).

Larto wrote:

Can you get a better mp3? I don't believe that this is an 128 kBit/s, it sounds way worse than 128 mp3s usually do. And according to Ephemeral, the minimum audio quality is 128 kBit/s.
Here's a nice one.

Good map though. The hardest diff could have been better if you had used less claps, you don't need to change that now, but remember it for future maps.