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Cobra Starship - Snakes on a Plane (Bring It)

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Glass
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May-25-10 at 7:07:26 PM

Artist: Cobra Starship
Title: Snakes on a Plane (Bring It)
Source: Snakes on a Plane
Tags: Behonkiss kingcobra52 gym class heroes sounds academy
BPM: 139
Filesize: 12183kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Behonkiss' on a Plane (4.54 stars, 337 notes)
  2. Bring It (4.89 stars, 381 notes)
  3. Cobras on a Plane (2.93 stars, 195 notes)
Download: Cobra Starship - Snakes on a Plane (Bring It)
Download: Cobra Starship - Snakes on a Plane (Bring It) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Many thanks to kingcobra52 and Behonkiss for their guest levels!
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[Bring it] - Complete (25/03/10)
Added Behonkiss's hard (31/03/10)
Added kingcobra52's normal (02/04/10)
Thrown into pending (02/04/10)
Natteke
:3
kingcobra52
Offset: 14,610?

-Remove the countdown?
-Tick rate 2?

Overall, it's pretty good. Liked the lip sliders and the ending. I'll be happy to make a normal for it. (if it's ok) :)

Starred.
Topic Starter
Glass

kingcobra52 wrote:

Offset: 14,610?

-Remove the countdown?
-Tick rate 2?
Fixed~

kingcobra52 wrote:

I'll be happy to make a normal for it. (if it's ok) :)
Of course :)

kingcobra52 wrote:

Starred.
Thank you
Behon
00:13:754 (Spinner): Add a finish instead of a whistle?
00:28:430 (1): Also a finish here, and maybe at the beginning of every "Oh, I'm ready for it"?
00:39:438 (5): It's too disorienting to have a circle come in that late on top of previous circles that are the same time apart. Move it somewhere else.
00:42:243 (3): Add a finish at the beginning of this slider, and maybe at the end of every "So kiss me goodbye"?
00:43:323 (3,4): Get rid of the finishes. You don't use them in a similar way throughout the rest of the song.
01:30:589 (1): Okay, this does have a finish and that's good, but it's in its' own timing section that has the sounds set to soft. Change it to normal.
02:12:028 (1): Same problem here.
02:59:941 (1): Add a finish here.

If you want, I can make a Normal and/or Hard difficulty.
Topic Starter
Glass

Behonkiss wrote:

00:13:754 (Spinner): Add a finish instead of a whistle?
00:28:430 (1): Also a finish here, and maybe at the beginning of every "Oh, I'm ready for it"?
00:39:438 (5): It's too disorienting to have a circle come in that late on top of previous circles that are the same time apart. Move it somewhere else.
00:42:243 (3): Add a finish at the beginning of this slider, and maybe at the end of every "So kiss me goodbye"?
00:43:323 (3,4): Get rid of the finishes. You don't use them in a similar way throughout the rest of the song.
01:30:589 (1): Okay, this does have a finish and that's good, but it's in its' own timing section that has the sounds set to soft. Change it to normal.
02:12:028 (1): Same problem here.
02:59:941 (1): Add a finish here.
Fixed most of them; but I chose to use whistles at the end of every "So kiss me goodbye" only if a slider started on the "bye" , otherwise I changed them to finishes.

If you want, I can make a Normal and/or Hard difficulty.
Please make a "hardish"~
Zairin_old
best map yet.

nice spacing.
Topic Starter
Glass

Zairin wrote:

best map yet.

nice spacing.
it's definitly not THE best one D:

thanks for the star <3
Behon
Topic Starter
Glass

Behonkiss wrote:

Sorry this took so long.
No problem ^^, added!
kingcobra52
Done. You can either keep my difficulty name or rename to "Kingcobra's normal" either is fine with me.

Download: Cobra Starship - Snakes on a Plane (Bring It) (Glasslake) [Cobras on a Plane].osu
Topic Starter
Glass

kingcobra52 wrote:

Done. You can either keep my difficulty name or rename to "Kingcobra's normal" either is fine with me.
You're the guest, so it's up for you ^^

Added and reuploaded~
aRiskOfRain
Nothing wrong. Well done, have a star.
Topic Starter
Glass
Ahh, thanks for checking anyways :P
YGOkid8
General:

- Remove "the" and "is" from tags. They're too general.

Cobras on a Plane:

...oh right, it's a diff. by kingcobra52. Had no idea ._.

Combo Mod~
00:21:524 (4,1) - New Combo at (4) instead of (1).
00:40:948 (5,1) - New Combo at (5) instead of (1).

00:30:589 (3) - New Combo.
01:18:934 (4) - ^
01:46:560 (2) - ^ (maybe?)
02:13:754 (2,3) - ^

01:30:589 (1) - No New Combo.
02:17:855 (1) - ^

Bring It:

Combo Mod~
00:30:373 (8,1) - New Combo at (8) instead of (1)
01:21:956 (4,1) - New Combo at (4) instead of (1)
01:29:510 (1,2) - New Combo at (2) instead of (1)

00:55:625 (1) - No New Combo.
02:12:028 (1) - ^

01:52:387 (4) - New Combo (maybe?)

Normal Mod~
02:59:941 (1) - This jump... doesn't seem to fit :/
Topic Starter
Glass

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

- Remove "the" and "is" from tags. They're too general. Done

Cobras on a Plane:

...oh right, it's a diff. by kingcobra52. Had no idea ._.

Combo Mod~
00:21:524 (4,1) - New Combo at (4) instead of (1). Done
00:40:948 (5,1) - New Combo at (5) instead of (1). Done

00:30:589 (3) - New Combo. Done
01:18:934 (4) - ^ Done
01:46:560 (2) - ^ (maybe?) Done
02:13:754 (2,3) - ^ Nah

01:30:589 (1) - No New Combo. Done
02:17:855 (1) - ^ Done

Bring It:

Combo Mod~
00:30:373 (8,1) - New Combo at (8) instead of (1) Done
01:21:956 (4,1) - New Combo at (4) instead of (1) Done
01:29:510 (1,2) - New Combo at (2) instead of (1) Done

00:55:625 (1) - No New Combo. Done
02:12:028 (1) - ^ Done

01:52:387 (4) - New Combo (maybe?) Done

Normal Mod~
02:59:941 (1) - This jump... doesn't seem to fit :/ Fixed
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D
Solid mapping. Not much to find here. :)

[Cobras on a Plane]

00:49:150 (3) - Feels like a little too much repeats. Maybe use a longer slider with less repeats?
01:37:496 (3) - ^

[Behonkiss's Hard]

02:52:387 (9) - I don't like where the repeat is at. Lessen it to red tick and fill in?

[Bring It]

01:05:984 (2) - Clap?
02:01:020 (5) - Clap on start?
02:29:725 (4) - Clap on both ends?
Topic Starter
Glass

Senbon wrote:

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D
Solid mapping. Not much to find here. :)

[Cobras on a Plane]

00:49:150 (3) - Feels like a little too much repeats. Maybe use a longer slider with less repeats?
01:37:496 (3) - ^

[Behonkiss's Hard]

02:52:387 (9) - I don't like where the repeat is at. Lessen it to red tick and fill in?

[Bring It]

01:05:984 (2) - Clap?
02:01:020 (5) - Clap on start?
02:29:725 (4) - Clap on both ends?
Ahhhh sorry for the late reply, didn't realize you posted here earlier ><. Only made the changes for [Bring It] because the rest seemed fine =X.

Thank you for the mod!
DeathxShinigami
Rather solid map...Nothing for me to say.

Star.
Shulin
All suggestions.

General:

-- Delete .osb and full submit.

Cobra's on a plane:

-- The rhythm is hard to grasp at first imo because notes are omitted where you might expect them.

00:30:373 (x) - Note?
00:33:826 (x) - ^
00:36:848 (x) - ^
00:37:279 (x) - ^ -- You do kind of expect to follow the vocal since that's the most prominent thing in the song.
00:40:517 (x) - ^
01:22:387 (1,2,3) - The previous pattern of stack-slider was easier to follow.
01:50:013 (x) - Note?

Suggested notes are suggestions, I didn't list them all. I'm sure newer players could get the rhythm with practice but it's not obvious on the first play through imo.

Behonkiss's Hard:

Fine.

Bring it:

01:05:229 (7) - Delete?
01:12:135 (8) - ^
01:25:625 (1) - You can't really tell where the slider is going, I managed to hit it fine some might complain =/
01:27:459 (5) - Delete?
02:00:697 (3) - ^
02:37:819 (4) - ^

Some of the triples seemed a bit out of place, like they were added for extra difficulty. Though a nice difficulty overall ^_^

Yeah that's all, nice maps :D
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Glass

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Rather solid map...Nothing for me to say.

Star.
Thanks for checking ^^

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions.

General:

-- Delete .osb and full submit.

Cobra's on a plane:

-- The rhythm is hard to grasp at first imo because notes are omitted where you might expect them.

00:30:373 (x) - Note?
00:33:826 (x) - ^
00:36:848 (x) - ^
00:37:279 (x) - ^ -- You do kind of expect to follow the vocal since that's the most prominent thing in the song.
00:40:517 (x) - ^
01:22:387 (1,2,3) - The previous pattern of stack-slider was easier to follow.
01:50:013 (x) - Note?

Suggested notes are suggestions, I didn't list them all. I'm sure newer players could get the rhythm with practice but it's not obvious on the first play through imo.

Behonkiss's Hard:

Fine.

Bring it:

01:05:229 (7) - Delete?
01:12:135 (8) - ^
01:25:625 (1) - You can't really tell where the slider is going, I managed to hit it fine some might complain =/
01:27:459 (5) - Delete?
02:00:697 (3) - ^
02:37:819 (4) - ^

Some of the triples seemed a bit out of place, like they were added for extra difficulty. Though a nice difficulty overall ^_^

Yeah that's all, nice maps :D
~ Star.
All done.
Shulin
Cobra's on a Plane:

00:29:294 (2,1) - Small jump here.
01:28:646 (6,1) - ^
02:23:898 (6,1) - Small anti jump here.

Still don't think that the triples fit that much on [Bring It], but it's okay I guess XD
Topic Starter
Glass
Fixed again, I also changed some triplets
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Cobras on a Plane]
I'm not fan of 1/2 streams for the easiest diff, although there arent many of those (2 or 3 on the whole map?) so i guess it can pass
No problems found

[Behonkiss's Hard]
No problems found

[Bring It]
No problems found

Well looks fine, so +Star
Topic Starter
Glass
Thanks for checking Sakura ^^
Topic Starter
Glass
Bump. Is any BAT gonna take a look at this yet -_-.
mm201
Bring It:
  1. More finishes? I don't think I've heard a single one. Put them on beats of strong rhythmic importance.
  2. 01:25:625 (1) - This slider is a mess. Less scrunched?
  3. 01:43:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's really counterintuitive and bad-looking how these sliders overlap. I see how they're a grid off from perfect overlap, seemingly just to work around the no-perfect-overlap rule, but they play the exact same way and suffer the exact same issues.
  4. 01:54:761 (5) - CurveTypes: Linear, then right click each red point. The same can be said for all linear sliders. osu! renders them faster and more perfectly when a Linear curve type is set.
  5. 02:38:359 (1,2,3) - lol. Lip sliders are always awesome. Any chance of sliding this over to the center of the screen?
Behonkiss:
  1. 00:49:150 (1) - This slider is packed in awfully tightly for my tastes. There are a couple others like.
  2. 00:55:517 (8) - Move forward by a 1/4. Syncing a stylized lyric is confusing to the player.
  3. 02:52:387 (9) - The rebound feels awkward.
Cobras on a plane:
  1. 00:29:294 (2,1) - How the kick slider is so close to the red (1) could trick an Easy player into clicking it too soon. Move the red combo further up?
  2. 00:42:351 (1) - I don't believe this spinner is appropriate for an Easy. It's too close to the other objects on both sides.
  3. 01:12:891 (1,2,3,4) - These slider overlaps are unrankable ... and confusing to an Easy player.
  4. 02:12:028 (1,2,3,4) - More confusing kick sliders.
  5. 02:18:934 (1) - See 00:42:351 (1).
Topic Starter
Glass
Oh sorry I forgot to reply after fixing those. Thanks for the mod~
abalee
Fine.
Topic Starter
Glass
Didn't know you checked this so fast and I accidently updated it after you bubbled ><
sesito71
Hi,

[Cobras on a Plane]

Spinner suggestions! xD
00:42:675 (1) - Start this here: 00:42:351 (?)
00:54:330 (1) - ^ -> 00:54:006 (?)
01:56:488 (1) - ^ -> 01:56:164 (?)
02:19:150 (1) - This spinner should start here: 02:18:934
02:44:833 (1) - Start it here: 02:44:510 (?)

[Bring it]

01:12:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wow, this is so amazing! :D

Awesome map, hope it gets ranked soon ^^

Star*
Larto
Can you get a better mp3? I don't believe that this is an 128 kBit/s, it sounds way worse than 128 mp3s usually do. And according to Ephemeral, the minimum audio quality is 128 kBit/s.
Here's a nice one.

Good map though. The hardest diff could have been better if you had used less claps, you don't need to change that now, but remember it for future maps.
Topic Starter
Glass
@Sesito: Thanks for checking (:, fixed one spinner since the rest seems okay

Larto wrote:

Can you get a better mp3? I don't believe that this is an 128 kBit/s, it sounds way worse than 128 mp3s usually do. And according to Ephemeral, the minimum audio quality is 128 kBit/s.
Here's a nice one.

Good map though. The hardest diff could have been better if you had used less claps, you don't need to change that now, but remember it for future maps.
I got mine off Limewire haha, the one you linked definitly sounds better, I'll use that.

As for the claps I'll try to keep a consistent pattern for my future maps, thanks ;)

I'll full sub asap. Done
Larto
Offset for new mp3 should be something from +5 to +10. I suggest going with +8 or +7 (14,626/14,625)

EDIT: Bubbled
Gens
Rebubs.

Log~

SPOILER
17:53 <Gens> : Glasslake: Just a few things
17:53 <Gens> : maybe rename behonkiss' diff to [Behonkiss' on a Plane] or something?
17:54 <Gens> : and why not letterboxing during breaks? it hides the ugly "IGN" watermark
... (PMs)
17:57 <Gens> : check #modHelp if you haven't
17:58 <Glasslake> : oh
17:58 <Glasslake> : kk
17:58 <Glasslake> : lemme fix those
18:02 <Glasslake> : done :D
18:04 <Gens> : oh, by the way, might as well fix the other diff [Bring It] instead of [Bring it]
18:05 <Gens> : just a small thing, don't kill me p:
18:06 <Glasslake> : lol okay one sec then :p
18:08 <Glasslake> : alright done that too
Larto
Hahaha! Who's your daddy now, bitch?!
Topic Starter
Glass
oi
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