Hi! From my queue~
[General]
01:15:093 - Why did you end Kiai here? You should keep Kiai section going since its still the chorus. What you *could* do is create a Kiai reset here. Add a green line at 01:14:999 - to disable Kiai. Then make the green line at 01:15:093 - Kiai again. That way you get a nice reset. Apply this to all your difficulties.
[Lunatic]
00:04:499 (2) - This is a quiet section of the song... using 1/4 notes doesn't really fit
. Also its barely audible anyways so its better if you take this out.
00:24:280 (2,3,4) - Try and make slider 3 flow better into the streams. You can try rotating the slider 180 degrees from selection center.
00:40:593 (4,5) - It's always better to have sliders begin on white ticks instead of red ticks. Ctrl+G this rhythm.
00:56:718 (6,7,1) - Try and angle slider 7 a bit further to the left. Right now the spacing makes it seem like theres a jump from 7> 1 since the spacing is very similar to what you used for the entire previous pattern.
01:09:280 (2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt flow well for me
. The angle going into 4 is really sharp. You can improve this by rotating the slider a bit,. I think curving the sliders would also fit nicely with the vocals here~.
01:25:593 (1,2) - Instead of 5x repeat sliders, try using 2x repeats instead.
01:35:155 (9) - This note isnt audible. Extend the previous slider.
[Hard]
00:17:905 (1,4) - See if you can reposition slider 4 a biiit so its less overlapped with 1. I'm mainly talking about the slider-head. The AR is low enough that the overlap is still noticeable in game play ;P.
00:30:280 (6) - This note isnt really audible. Better to either extend the previous slider ot change the rhythm.
00:59:530 (5) - Rotate this 90 degrees by selection center for better flow.
01:06:093 (1,2,3,4) - Not good to overlap so many times
. Stick with one overlap, either 1 and 3, or 2 and 4 and reposition the other object for better readability.
01:18:843 (3,4,5) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:593 - Why is there a break :S. It's a 1 minute 30 second song... You mapped this part out with Hard/Lunatic you can map this on Normal too
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01:14:343 (5) - Making this slider a repeat would play a loot nicer, but you'll have to do some pattern reworking. I still highly recommend it.
01:30:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You're using 1/2 rhythm throughout this section, but its supposed to be calm and easier than your Kiai section... Compare this section with: 01:15:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - which is much stronger musically, but yet mapped much simpler.
Good luck~