LixRei wrote:

Some IRC modding (#modhelp)

Removed some chitchat.

21:37 LixRei: I'm bored... Do anyone of you have a cool song I can give a quick checking? (not the best modder, tho)
21:37 monstrata: me
21:37 monstrata: please
21:37 LixRei: Ye, np it naow
21:37 *monstrata is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/667021 Datsuji-P - Anison Sprint IV (Anime Song Medley) [TWO DIMENSIONS]]
21:37 monstrata: thx <3
21:37 LixRei: aaa net too slow. ;w;
21:37 amlink: im downloding it im curious
21:39 LixRei: Oi, I'm checking it.
21:39 *LixRei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/667021 Datsuji-P - Anison Sprint IV (Anime Song Medley) [TWO DIMENSIONS]]
21:39 monstrata: cool :D
21:39 LixRei: And I found something as soon as it started.
21:40 LixRei: 00:06:440 (1) - You should end this on previous red tick, since it's the loudest sound
21:41 LixRei: Yeh, but it sounds kinda ankward as overmapping...
21:42 LixRei: ;w;
21:42 LixRei: And this too 00:21:440 (1) - is kinda in a soft beat now...
21:42 monstrata: O ya someone else brought that up too haha
21:42 LixRei: Imo the spinner 00:21:518 (1) - would have major impact if you start it after 00:21:283 (7) - 
21:42 LixRei: :P
21:44 monstrata: 00:21:361 - ?
21:44 LixRei: Yeah. xD
21:45 LixRei: Waa holding 00:25:815 (2) - when there is an interesting beat on 00:26:049 - is kinda curious.
21:45 monstrata: Changed the spinner :3
21:45 LixRei: Nice; and for the last thing I said, [http://puu.sh/h9lpH.jpg this is fun]. :o
21:47 monstrata: LixRei - i prefer the 3/4 repeat slider actually haha. Since i use it a lot. I don't like rhythm with blue tick unless its streams haha
21:47 LixRei: k but it would also work for a warning since next notes are streams.
21:47 LixRei: lots of 'em
21:52 LixRei: 01:58:627 (4,3) - o and yeah, maybe you should stack the tail of slider and circle (still checkin')
22:09 LixRei: 05:45:814 (4,1) - I ACTUALLY CAME WITH SOMETHING
22:09 LixRei: Sorry
22:10 LixRei: I think you should actually start holding the 1/1 slider on 05:45:970 - since the holding sounds starts there
22:10 LixRei: More interesting thing.

o this mapset becomes better with every minute.
Also, some additional things I found:

1. I recommend to use Slider Tick 2 as the song has lots of 1/2 beats and using this can be a little useful with long sliders. Ehh, sure why not.
2. 09:44:642 - and 09:44:798 - Continue the stream in those beats. There are clearly audiable 1/4 beats here. I really wanted to distinguish the beat at 09:44:720 (11) - . So that's why i stopped the stream. Cuz if I continued the stream, that beat would get lost.
3. As soon as Guren no Yumiya starts (10:12:377 - ) you start to use a lot of streams. ;w; Create a bit more of variety, using the 1/4 sliders or other stuff. ;w; It's boring, tiring and monotonous to tap-stream-tap-stream (and so on) during this part, until 10:21:127 - when you actually started to variate a bit more. I originally wanted this part to be the most intense section of the song haha. But then I decided, screw Kiai Times, cuz all anime songs should be equal (y). I turned all the triplets into 1/4-repeating sliders. I think that should help .
4. 11:24:720 - It's actually in here where you should start using the normal hitsounds again, since 11:24:252 (2,3) - are still inside the "soft part". So, you should change the sampleset of those to soft. Nice. Okay. fixed.

I think that's it. Sorry for such a minimal mod but I think this map is too good. >.<
Also, don't map a lot to the metronome. You spam place lots of 1/2 notes everywhere, but I think you can do a bit more of variety, like mapping hold sounds in a more remarkable way (1/1 sliders?) or using more reverses on your 1/2 sliders (I think you don't have 1/2 sliders that do reverse lol). It makes map a bit more fun and interesting (in this sense, your 3/4 sliders helped a lot :^)

Good luck.

Kite wrote:

Alright, had a recheck on the map and went over the hitsounds with monstrata via IRC.
Fixed a few sliders that randomly became 1 tick shorter / longer.
Hope it helped and you are happy with the outcome!

SPOILER

21:51 Kite: y
21:51 Kite: o
21:51 Kite: wanna get started?
21:57 monstrata: hey
21:57 monstrata: sure
21:57 *monstrata is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/667021 Datsuji-P - Anison Sprint IV (Anime Song Medley) [TWO DIMENSIONS]]
21:59 Kite: alright
21:59 Kite: first off, are you sure you dont want to use a custom clap?
22:00 Kite: the songs in the medley are composed in the same manner so you could use a custom clap for the whole marathon
22:00 monstrata: did you have a custom clap in mind? ;o
22:00 Kite: i got a bunch
22:01 monstrata: ooo
22:01 Kite: havent tried applying them to the map yet
22:01 Kite: let me see
22:05 Kite: http://puu.sh/hbraC/9a47e73a73.wav
22:05 Kite: this fits really good
22:05 monstrata: alright letm e try
22:06 monstrata: o wow thats nicee
22:06 monstrata: hmm
22:07 monstrata: should i increase hitsound volume tho? or is 70% okay
22:07 Kite: its ok
22:07 Kite: the way it is
22:07 monstrata: this clap isnt as loud as the default
22:07 monstrata: okay
22:07 Kite: most players have hitsound louder than music volume in settings
22:08 monstrata: oooh. ic
22:09 Kite: 00:16:440 (1) - normal sampleset with either normal finish or soft finish
22:09 Kite: whatever sounds better to you
22:09 Kite: 00:20:971 (5,6,7) - soft sampleset on these sounds better
22:09 monstrata: Okay. i'll use soft finish
22:10 Kite: 00:22:690 (1) - finish on start
22:10 monstrata: k
22:11 Kite: 00:27:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - drum sampleset, addition normal
22:11 monstrata: oh. thats nice ;o
22:11 Kite: i actually need to restart my osu, lagging really bad atm
22:12 Kite: sry about that
22:12 monstrata: no worries
22:12 monstrata: should i apply that drum sampleset + addition normal change to other streams too? or was this one specific
22:14 Kite: yeah apply here to 00:29:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
22:14 monstrata: Haha already did
22:14 Kite: 00:32:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
22:14 monstrata: sounds better now actually
22:15 Kite: 00:33:314 (4) - soft addition whistle
22:15 Kite: 00:33:471 (5) - ^
22:15 Kite: 00:33:783 (7) - ^
22:15 Kite: 00:34:096 (3) - ^
22:15 Kite: 00:34:721 (7) - ^
22:15 Kite: 00:34:564 (6) - ^
22:15 monstrata: ok
22:16 Kite: 00:32:690 (1) - finish on start
22:16 Kite: 00:37:690 (1) - finish on start
22:17 monstrata: Okay.
22:17 Kite: 00:38:002 (2) - soft addition whistle on end
22:17 Kite: 00:38:314 (4) - soft addition whistle
22:17 Kite: 00:38:471 (5) - ^
22:17 monstrata: i should take out the whistles on those finishes then
22:18 Kite: 00:38:783 (1) - set sampleset on all sliderhits to auto and add soft whistle addition on sliderend
22:19 Kite: 00:39:096 (2) - same here just soft whistle addition on sliderstart
22:19 Kite: 00:39:408 (3) - auto sampleset
22:19 Kite: 00:39:565 (5) - ^ on start
22:20 Kite: 00:42:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - drums as before
22:20 Kite: 00:42:690 (1) - finish on start
22:20 Kite: also brb real quick
22:21 monstrata: okay xD
22:21 monstrata: Alright, i caught up haha
22:23 Kite: alright back
22:23 Kite: sorry if i am going too fast orz
22:23 monstrata: nah dont worry about it
22:24 Kite: 00:43:627 (3) - you could do soft sampleset with normal addition
22:24 Kite: to keep the clap but have calm hitsounds still
22:24 Kite: if you like that do it for all the others on this section
22:25 monstrata: Damn. i barely hear a difference lol
22:25 monstrata: But yea, having soft-sampleset makes more sense in this section
22:25 Kite: well its just that you have all sliders as soft
22:26 Kite: and the normal inbetween sounds a lil odd
22:26 Kite: 00:43:627 (3,2,4,2,4,2) -
22:26 Kite: just these
22:26 monstrata: Okay applied to all the claps on this section
22:26 Kite: 00:47:377 (4) - that slider too
22:27 monstrata: yep~
22:27 Kite: 00:52:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same story with drums
22:27 monstrata: K~
22:28 monstrata: I should just apply that to all streams huh?
22:28 Kite: hmm yeah probably
22:28 Kite: 01:12:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:29 monstrata: K
22:30 Kite: 01:31:440 (1,2,4) - soft whistle addition
22:30 Kite: 01:32:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - drums
22:31 monstrata: K added soft whistles
22:31 monstrata: o ya that stream
22:31 monstrata: i changed addition to soft instead of normal
22:31 Kite: 01:33:783 (5) - soft whistle addition
22:32 Kite: 01:34:408 (4) - ^
22:32 Kite: 01:34:721 (6,7) - ^
22:32 Kite: oh wait nvm the 7
22:32 Kite: 01:35:190 (1) - finish on start
22:32 Kite: 01:35:033 (8) - soft whistle addition
22:33 Kite: 01:37:690 (1) - finish on start
22:33 Kite: soft finish* forgot to mention
22:33 monstrata: Oh
22:33 monstrata: okay
22:34 Kite: 01:42:377 (3,4,5,6) - drum + normal
22:34 monstrata: k
22:35 Kite: 01:47:377 (7,8,9,10) - ^
22:35 monstrata: k
22:35 Kite: 01:57:065 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
22:35 Kite: but hey this is going faster than expected haha
22:36 monstrata: lol thats good~
22:36 Kite: 01:58:002 (2,4,2,4,2,4) - same as before
22:36 monstrata: I should change the claps to
22:36 monstrata: yea
22:37 monstrata: Okay did that for the next section too~
22:39 Kite: 02:01:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - i am not sure about these here
22:39 Kite: auto is fine i guess
22:39 Kite: 02:07:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - drum + normal again
22:39 Kite: 02:07:690 (1) - finish
22:40 Kite: 02:12:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - drum + normal
22:40 monstrata: k
22:40 Kite: 02:12:690 (1) - finish on start (i guess)
22:40 Kite: 02:16:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - drum + normal again
22:41 monstrata: I'm just gonna apply drum + normal to all streams k xD just bring up the ones that you think dont need the drum + normal~
22:41 monstrata: saves you some time haha
22:41 Kite: 02:18:315 (3) - remove finish on start
22:41 Kite: and ok
22:41 Kite: 02:18:940 (1) - soft whistle addition
22:42 monstrata: oh oops that finish was my bad haha
22:42 Kite: 02:19:721 (7,9) - ^
22:42 Kite: 02:20:815 (3) - remove finish
22:42 monstrata: k
22:43 monstrata: k
22:43 Kite: 02:21:440 (1,7,9) - s w a
22:43 Kite: soft whistle addition ^
22:43 monstrata: okay
22:43 Kite: 02:22:690 (1) - finish on start
22:44 Kite: 02:26:752 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
22:44 Kite: 02:27:690 (1) - finish on start
22:44 monstrata: k
22:44 Kite: 02:32:690 (1) - finish soft addition
22:45 Kite: you could probably add a bunch of soft whistle additions to various beats throughout this marathon
22:46 Kite: 02:58:315 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
22:46 Kite: overall your hitsounding is really solid tbh, pretty much just repeating same suggestions
22:46 Kite:
22:47 Kite: 03:03:002 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
22:47 monstrata: Lol thanks. and ya i probably could add more whistles, but x___x im not really sure where honestly
22:47 Kite: 03:07:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
22:48 Kite: 03:08:940 (1) - finish
22:48 monstrata: im just following the hit-sounding guide most of the time for whistles lol
22:48 Kite: 03:10:815 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
22:48 Kite: 03:12:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
22:49 Kite: 03:13:940 (1) - finish on start
22:49 Kite: 03:14:408 (3) - s w a
22:49 Kite: 03:14:721 (5,7) - ^^
22:50 Kite: 03:18:393 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
22:50 monstrata: k
22:50 Kite: 03:23:471 (5) - s w a
22:51 Kite: 03:24:721 (5) - ^
22:51 Kite: 03:29:408 (3) - auto sampleset on start
22:51 monstrata: k
22:52 Kite: 03:32:690 (1) - finish on start
22:52 monstrata: k
22:53 Kite: btw hit ctrl+s just incase osu might crash
22:53 Kite: it happens frequently on marathon maps in editor
22:53 monstrata: okay
22:53 monstrata: yea i know ;P
22:53 Kite: 03:54:565 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
22:53 monstrata: it lags a lot when i try to update haha
22:53 monstrata: 03:55:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -
22:54 monstrata: This part idk if my hitsounding is right x___x
22:54 Kite: 03:58:940 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:54 monstrata: i was kinda confused about it honestly
22:54 Kite: its good
22:54 monstrata: o actually? lol
22:55 Kite: 04:05:658 (4,6) - s w a
22:55 Kite: 04:06:127 (7) - same on end
22:55 Kite: 04:08:158 (4,6) - ^
22:55 monstrata: k
22:55 Kite: 04:08:627 (7) - ^
22:56 Kite: 04:24:565 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:56 Kite: 04:32:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:56 Kite: 04:25:190 (1) - finishon start
22:56 monstrata: k
22:57 Kite: 04:46:752 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
22:57 Kite: i think its mostly just the streams now tbh
22:57 Kite: and some missing finishes
22:57 Kite: 04:47:377 (1) - finish
22:58 monstrata: oh. sweet
22:58 Kite: 04:50:970 (1) - slider seems broken, too short?
22:58 monstrata: oh
22:58 monstrata: dam
22:58 monstrata: ya nice catch
22:58 Kite: 04:51:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:59 Kite: 04:52:611 (3,8) - soft sampleset
23:00 Kite: actually, not sure on those triplets because you used another hitsounding pattern on the upcoming triplet section
23:00 Kite: keep them consistent here i guess
23:00 Kite: either soft the first 2 beats of the triplet or keep it auto for all
23:00 Kite: i like the 2 soft ver more
23:00 Kite: but thats just me
23:01 monstrata: I'll try 2 soft
23:02 monstrata: Yea i like this more
23:02 Kite: 04:56:752 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
23:02 Kite: 04:57:377 (1) - finish
23:02 Kite: 05:01:752 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
23:02 Kite: 05:02:377 (1) - finish
23:02 monstrata: k
23:02 Kite: 05:06:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23:02 Kite: 05:07:377 (1) - finish
23:03 monstrata: Its like a pattern now haha
23:03 Kite: 05:11:908 (4,5) - this is strange, i dont remember seeing this the first time i modded this
23:03 monstrata: streams = drum/normal, and last object = finish
23:03 Kite: a bit outstanding difficulty wise with the rest of the map
23:04 Kite: dont think you have 1/4 jumps anywhere else
23:04 monstrata: Ehh, is it?
23:04 monstrata: It's been there since the beginning. since the 1/4 functions much like a 1/2 note
23:04 Kite: well, nobody will expect it
23:04 Kite: it plays ok
23:04 Kite: just
23:04 Kite: you dont have it anywhere else
23:05 Kite: thats all
23:05 monstrata: Okay i changed it to a circle
23:05 Kite: 05:34:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:05 Kite: 05:34:877 (1) - finish
23:06 Kite: 05:37:377 (1,3) - broken sliders again?
23:06 monstrata: wtffff T___T
23:06 Kite: i see no reason to end them on blue ticks
23:06 monstrata: ya ty
23:07 Kite: 05:38:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:07 monstrata: yea lol idk how that happened
23:07 Kite: 05:39:877 (1) - finish
23:07 monstrata: maybe cuz i was scaling the sliders up and accidentally scaled them too far
23:07 Kite: oh maybe
23:07 Kite: 05:48:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:07 Kite: 05:54:095 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:08 Kite: 05:54:877 (1) - finish
23:08 Kite: 05:55:970 (1,4) - finisho n start
23:08 Kite: 05:59:252 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
23:08 monstrata: k
23:09 Kite: 05:59:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these are hitsounded completely different
23:09 Kite: despite being mapped to the same melody
23:09 Kite: o:
23:10 Kite: you have more soft sampleset on the 2nd set
23:10 Kite: of sliders
23:10 monstrata: o dam ya
23:11 monstrata: soft sampleset sounds better to me
23:12 Kite: 06:19:252 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
23:12 Kite: 06:19:877 (1) - finish
23:12 monstrata: k
23:12 Kite: 06:24:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:12 Kite: 06:24:877 (1) - finish
23:12 Kite: 06:29:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:13 Kite: 06:29:877 (1) - finish
23:13 Kite: and remove clap
23:13 monstrata: oh
23:13 monstrata: kk
23:13 Kite: 06:33:470 (1) - finish
23:14 Kite: 06:34:252 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23:14 Kite: 06:34:877 (1) - finish
23:14 monstrata: k
23:14 Kite: 06:39:877 (1) - finish
23:14 Kite: 06:44:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:15 Kite: 06:44:877 (1) - finish
23:15 Kite: 06:49:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:15 Kite: 06:54:877 (1) - finish
23:15 Kite: 06:56:127 (1) - auto sampleset on start
23:16 monstrata: ah
23:16 monstrata: k
23:16 Kite: 06:58:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
23:16 Kite: 06:59:877 (1) - finish
23:17 Kite: 07:19:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:17 Kite: soft sampleset
23:17 Kite: or normal + soft addition
23:18 Kite: 07:24:877 (1) - finish
23:18 monstrata: k
23:19 Kite: 07:49:330 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:19 Kite: 07:49:877 (1) - finish
23:19 Kite: 07:54:330 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:20 Kite: 07:59:408 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:20 Kite: 07:59:877 (1) - finish
23:20 Kite: 08:09:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:20 monstrata: k
23:20 Kite: 08:09:877 (1) - finish
23:20 monstrata: damn i should really stop adding whistles to every white-tick after a stream lol
23:21 Kite: xD
23:21 Kite: whistles are fine
23:21 Kite: just lacking a bunch of finishes
23:21 monstrata: but finishes are so much better now that im putting them in <3
23:22 Kite: 08:12:377 (1) - finish
23:22 Kite: 08:14:173 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23:22 Kite: 08:14:877 (1) - finish
23:23 Kite: 08:29:877 (1) - finish
23:23 monstrata: k
23:23 Kite: 08:38:939 (2) - x435 y116
23:24 Kite: 08:41:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:24 monstrata: Ah that looks nice ;o the coordinate
23:24 Kite: 08:47:377 (1) - finish
23:25 Kite: i think the first time i modded this i was a bit sloppy, missed some things haha
23:25 Kite: but this a good chance to recheck all
23:25 Kite: 08:51:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
23:25 Kite: 08:52:377 (1) - finish
23:25 monstrata: no worries xD i think i might have messed up those sliders in between your mod and some other mods haha
23:26 Kite: 09:02:377 (1) - finish
23:26 Kite: 09:07:377 (1) - finish
23:26 Kite: 09:12:377 (1) - finish
23:27 Kite: 09:16:908 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:27 Kite: 09:17:377 (1) - finish
23:27 Kite: 09:18:627 (1) - finish
23:27 Kite: 09:19:877 (1,4) - finish
23:27 Kite: 09:20:970 (7) - finish
23:28 Kite: 09:22:064 (5,6,7,8) -
23:28 monstrata: k
23:28 Kite: 09:22:377 (1) - finish
23:28 Kite: 09:23:627 (1) - auto sample set finish
23:28 Kite: 09:24:095 (3) - ^^
23:29 Kite: 09:24:564 (5,6,7,8) -
23:29 Kite: 09:24:876 (1) - finish
23:29 monstrata: k
23:29 Kite: 09:29:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
23:29 Kite: 09:29:877 (1) - finish
23:30 Kite: 09:34:252 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
23:30 Kite: 09:34:877 (1) - finish
23:30 Kite: 09:43:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:30 Kite: 09:44:877 (1) - finish
23:31 Kite: 09:47:220 (1) - finish ( soft)
23:31 Kite: 09:49:720 (6) - finish
23:31 Kite: 10:02:377 (1) - finish
23:32 monstrata: k
23:32 Kite: 10:04:486 (6,7,8,9,10) -
23:33 Kite: 10:04:876 (1) - finish
23:33 Kite: 10:11:986 (4,5,6,7,8) -
23:33 Kite: 10:12:377 (1) - finish (remove drum sampleset)
23:34 monstrata: o dam. i think this attack on titan part i use drum whistle a lot
23:34 Kite: i am not sure about this 10:12:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - if drum + normal works better or not
23:34 Kite: you have to decide
23:35 monstrata: Hmm.. well this section is like the most intense part of the song in terms of note density. so i felt like adding extra drum hitsounds here
23:36 monstrata: I think i'll keep it with normal for this part. since i use drum claps in the streams
23:37 Kite: yeah its fine the way it is
23:37 Kite: drum + normal sounds good to tho
23:37 Kite: on the small streams + big stream
23:37 monstrata: oh. ill add to the big streams
23:37 monstrata: yaaa
23:38 monstrata: I only added the drum claps in for small streams
23:38 Kite: 10:17:376 (1) - finish here
23:38 Kite: 10:22:377 (1) - ^^
23:39 monstrata: k
23:39 Kite: 10:32:065 (5) - make this into a 1/2 repeast slider instead`?
23:39 Kite: with finish on the end
23:40 Kite: 10:31:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - also drum + n
23:40 Kite: 10:47:377 (1) - finish
23:40 Kite: 10:51:595 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
23:40 Kite: 10:52:377 (1) - finish
23:41 Kite: 10:57:377 (1) - finish
23:41 Kite: 11:02:377 (1) - finish
23:41 Kite: 11:07:377 (1) - finish
23:41 Kite: 11:12:377 (1) - finish
23:42 Kite: 11:17:377 (1) - finish
23:42 monstrata: I'd prefer not to put a repeat there
23:42 Kite: thats fine was just a suggestion
23:42 Kite: 11:20:970 (1) - finish
23:42 Kite: 11:22:377 (1) - finish
23:43 Kite: 11:26:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:43 Kite: 11:27:377 (1) - finish
23:43 Kite: 11:32:377 (1) - finish
23:43 Kite: 11:36:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23:43 Kite: 11:37:377 (1) - finish
23:43 Kite: 11:42:377 (1) - finish
23:44 Kite: 11:46:361 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:44 Kite: 11:47:377 (1) - finish
23:44 Kite: 11:51:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
23:44 Kite: 11:52:377 (1) - finish
23:44 Kite: 11:56:752 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:45 Kite: 11:57:377 (1) - finish
23:45 Kite: 12:02:377 (1) - finish
23:45 Kite: 12:06:127 (1) -
23:45 Kite: finish
23:45 Kite: 12:06:908 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:45 Kite: 12:07:377 (1) - finish
23:45 Kite: 12:12:377 (1) - finish
23:46 Kite: 12:17:064 (7,8,9,10) -
23:46 Kite: 12:17:377 (1) - finish
23:46 Kite: 12:22:377 (1) - finish
23:46 Kite: 12:26:127 (1) - finish
23:46 Kite: 12:27:377 (1) - finish
23:46 Kite: 12:31:752 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:46 Kite: 12:32:377 (1) - finish
23:47 Kite: 12:37:377 (1) - finish
23:47 Kite: 12:41:752 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:47 Kite: 12:42:377 (1) - finish
23:47 Kite: 12:46:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:47 Kite: 12:54:720 (1) - finish
23:48 Kite: 12:57:377 (1) - finish
23:48 Kite: 12:59:720 (1) - finish
23:48 Kite: 13:02:220 (1) - finish
23:48 Kite: 13:04:720 (1) - finish
23:49 Kite: 13:09:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:49 monstrata: Whewwwww i caught up lol
23:49 Kite: 13:09:720 (1) - finish
23:49 monstrata: suddenly rapidfire lol
23:49 Kite: oh haha
23:49 Kite: woops there is a finishon the last one
23:49 Kite: mybad
23:49 Kite: woo thats all
23:50 monstrata: woooow
23:50 monstrata: damn. thank you so much!!!
23:50 Kite: you can still go over it and hunt down some notes to add s w a to
23:50 monstrata: you should post this log for kd's lol <3 hellla long post tho haha
23:50 Kite: up to you though
23:50 monstrata: Yaa

1. ur bar thingy is too low man i can barely see it
2. transition is a little meh, could use some fading
3. 00:52:768 - where's the text? why r there places with empty text, if it's transition you can put something like -transition-
4. 03:13:940 - this part definitely is not just transition lmao. ik this song, its from that mecha anime i think
5. u know, itll look much more professional if u used the actual names of the songs instead of 'blah blah anime op"

• 
  what the fuck HP 4. at least 6-7?

1. 00:06:440 - if ur gunna simplify rhythm here, use lower sv man, long sliders look retarded o/ unless u use slider art
2. 00:10:815 (2,1,2,1,2) - i don't see the need to simplify the rhythm that much. start with a bang
3. 00:37:143 - triplet will fit nicely here imo
   unranked for unsnsapped bookmarks
4. 01:58:158 (3,1) - eww overlap
5. 02:07:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this is 1/6
6. 03:34:877 (4) - silence slider end when u do this man (i would just change it to soft sample)
7. 07:32:377 (1,3) - overlap these less to stay consistent with the rest of these

Kibbleru wrote:

this is so freaking long man

sb

1. ur bar thingy is too low man i can barely see it
2. transition is a little meh, could use some fading
3. 00:52:768 - where's the text? why r there places with empty text, if it's transition you can put something like -transition-
4. 03:13:940 - this part definitely is not just transition lmao. ik this song, its from that mecha anime i think
5. u know, itll look much more professional if u used the actual names of the songs instead of 'blah blah anime op"

diff

• 
  what the fuck HP 4. at least 6-7? Nah, 4, cuz it's such a long marathon lol. Plus i have OD 8.

1. 00:06:440 - if ur gunna simplify rhythm here, use lower sv man, long sliders look retarded o/ unless u use slider art I think this is fine... but i'll experiment with SV 0.6x on the earlier sliders.
2. 00:10:815 (2,1,2,1,2) - i don't see the need to simplify the rhythm that much. start with a bang This is fine imo D:. First section (Miracle Rush section) is mapped a bit simpler. I also used a spinner instead of stream.
3. 00:37:143 - triplet will fit nicely here imo it's fine imo~ too many triplets already in this section. Plus i map all the triplets to the main melody so having a triplet here that maps to the drums in the background is a bit odd for me.
   unranked for unsnsapped bookmarks ;___;
4. 01:58:158 (3,1) - eww overlap Fixed
5. 02:07:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this is 1/6 Damn. Guess i'll have to use repeat sliders.
6. 03:34:877 (4) - silence slider end when u do this man (i would just change it to soft sample) Okay added.
7. 07:32:377 (1,3) - overlap these less to stay consistent with the rest of these I'm making a linear pattern with the slider-heads so i'm keeping this. The overlaps become progressively less and less.

ok to compensate for my crappy half assed mod i made something that will make ur life easier for the SB Thanks <3.

ill pm u the details

byfar wrote:

hey monstrata

[maratahon]

• so i'm not really good at dealing with these kinds of maps (geometric shapes + straight sliders etc) so i'll do my best to drop off some opinions.

1. 00:48:158 (4) - i feel like you dont have to stay strictly to the DS. 00:48:783 (1) - copy paste this one into this slot and stack it up http://puu.sh/hded2/0cc308dfc1.jpg I like this better, change in DS doesn't fit imo.
   
2. 01:38:940 (1,2) - there's an emphasis here so i feel like you could do something different like > 01:38:940 (1) - ctrl + g & 01:39:252 (2) - ctrl + g Ehh, but that would kinda make the flow pretty bad .
   
3. 02:04:408 (3) - same sound as before, no need to have a straight slider part. make it curvy to keep consistency Putting some variety in xD.
   
4. your maps could really use some curved sliders imo. i understand it's your style, but some curvy sliders would help this map improve a ton Hmm... I thought i had a lot lol. I guess i'll take another look
   
5. 03:39:721 (5) - place this on 03:40:190 (1) - 's slider tail. imo better emphasis. after this move 03:39:877 (6) - to x:377 y:240 for a more geometric shape Did something similar~
   
6. 03:47:065 (4) - nc for consistency Sure. Applied to the pattern before too.
   
7. 04:12:690 (1) - move to x:187 y:190. looks better. then after that, space 04:11:752 (3,3,1) - these out together accordingly however to please the eye I think this is fine. I'm making a linear pattern with the later sliders instead of a triangular one with the earlier sliders.
   
8. 04:12:221 (5,6) - do something to align these patterns by moving 04:12:221 (5,6) - to x:144 y:344 This is fine~
   
9. 04:25:658 (3,4) - try circular motion. i think it feels better http://puu.sh/hdfha/dd51d30557.jpg Circular-enough imo xD. Players aren't going to play these sliders perfectly anyways so this is more visual flow.
   
10. 05:12:845 (3) - 05:13:470 (1) - should make this curvy to keep consistency with 05:12:377 (1) - ..
    
11. 05:18:002 (3,4,5) - pls geometric square T_T xPPP I don't like squares D:
    
12. 05:58:002 (3,1) - do something to make it not touch please O dam. Okay changed the whole pattern lol. (Also cuz I found something else here)
    
13. 07:15:502 (3,4,5,1) - imo should keep this kind of straight linear flow same spacing, but if it's ur style i guess its ok This is fine imo~
    
14. 07:36:127 (1,2) - this is pretty bad flow. use the curve in the slider to assist flowing to the next note please. like do some circular flow or whatever. rough example http://puu.sh/hdfTD/75d36e49e5.jpg This flow's fine if you use slider-leniency. Actually some of my patterns require slider-leniency to flow well.

i feel like there are a lot of questionable flow in this map, like there are parts that look super nice and neat but the flow is just ehh. the spacing sometimes feel random. just something to keep in mind next time you make a map. good luck man

Asfano wrote:

random small mod

[Insane]
00:44:252 (2) - how about stacking this on 00:44:408 (3) - I don't like the flow like this~

00:46:752 (2,3) - ^ Same

01:31:440 (1,2,3,4) - these sharp angles are a bit hard to play maybe move like [http://puu.sh/hgVt4/9714c3bc22.jpg this] Okay. I changed this pattern up.

01:33:940 (1,2,3,4) - ^ This one's fine, I like how it plays. There are enough circles this time for the player to appreciate the jump pattern (unlike the one before)

01:42:065 (2) - this might be a bit boring as is maybe increase the SV for this slider give more impact Idk, I'll try, I don't really want to map SV changes tho, because then i'd have to map SV changes to all the other instances in the song with a similar emphasis.

02:28:315 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this part is inconsistent with this part 02:30:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
the first part has even spaced jumps on 02:28:315 (3,4,5) - and 02:29:096 (2,3,4) - while the other one hasn't, feel like you either have to have even spaced jumps on both or neither. This is fine, since i'm creating a DS build up. (Evenly spaced early, then larger spaced but slider-jumps, then jump pattern)

1. 00:10:190 (1,2) - this stuck out to me as looking not quite as neat as other sections, dunno if it's just me
2. 00:15:033 (6) - soft sample + whistle
3. 00:16:440 (1) - normal sample + soft addition with finish
4. 00:21:283 (7) - whistle
5. 00:24:408 (4) - remove whistle
6. 00:25:815 (2) - remove whistle from repeat, add to head
7. 00:48:158 (4,1) - remove whistle from end, better emphasizes effect of the slider end ending on weak beats
8. 00:55:814 (4) - soft addition + whistle
9. 00:56:283 (7) - auto sample + soft addition with the whistle
10. 00:57:533 (8,9,1) - either have this be all soft or all normal, switching mid triple isn't a good idea
11. 01:07:065 (6) - similar to ^
12. 01:33:158 (3) - remove whistle from end, should focus either 1+3 beat whistles or melody whistles, but don't try to do both, will end up feeling like too much
13. 01:33:471 (4) - soft addition + whistle on head
    
    don't really have the brainpower to charge through the rest of the map like this, but can more or less be summed up as:
    
    1. whistles should always be clear what they're following, and should be consistent within sections
    2. avoid using soft sample on strong beats, if you need the whistle use soft addition instead
    3. avoid changing between soft and normal mid triple. exception could be using soft on first two and then normal on the end, but should only be used if the music warrants that

captin1 wrote:

hitsounds are suggestions and will have little explanation, just based on what i'm hearing in the song and in your patterns
[TWO DIMENSIONS]

1. 00:10:190 (1,2) - this stuck out to me as looking not quite as neat as other sections, dunno if it's just me To me this is fine. I tried making 1 a sort of wavy slider instead but it didn't seem that neat to me.
2. 00:15:033 (6) - soft sample + whistle k
3. 00:16:440 (1) - normal sample + soft addition with finishk
4. 00:21:283 (7) - whistlek
5. 00:24:408 (4) - remove whistle
6. 00:25:815 (2) - remove whistle from repeat, add to head
7. 00:48:158 (4,1) - remove whistle from end, better emphasizes effect of the slider end ending on weak beats
8. 00:55:814 (4) - soft addition + whistle
9. 00:56:283 (7) - auto sample + soft addition with the whistle
10. 00:57:533 (8,9,1) - either have this be all soft or all normal, switching mid triple isn't a good idea I used Normal for both
11. 01:07:065 (6) - similar to ^
12. 01:33:158 (3) - remove whistle from end, should focus either 1+3 beat whistles or melody whistles, but don't try to do both, will end up feeling like too much
13. 01:33:471 (4) - soft addition + whistle on headFixed all~
    
    don't really have the brainpower to charge through the rest of the map like this, but can more or less be summed up as:
    
    1. whistles should always be clear what they're following, and should be consistent within sections I'll double check. I thought my hit-sound rhythm was consistent throughout sections but i'll definitely have to double check.
    2. avoid using soft sample on strong beats, if you need the whistle use soft addition instead Alright, i'll fix.
    3. avoid changing between soft and normal mid triple. exception could be using soft on first two and then normal on the end, but should only be used if the music warrants that I wasn't aware of this. Will fix.

call me back once you've checked the map with this in mind and i'll look it over again

Kroytz wrote:

Hihi~

SPOILER

[TWO DIMENSIONS]

1. 07:30:658 (7,8,1) - You keep the same spacing in this section but the music builds up into that loud 1 slider. There isn't a build up here actually. Build up is at 07:32:377 (1,2) - etc..
2. 07:34:877 (1) - sweet baby jesus :D
3. 07:39:408 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern makes sense but there's a lot of contradicting flow. Hmm... Flow is fine for me. The main flow-change occurs at 07:40:502 (3,4,5,1) - But I used a symmetrical jump pattern to ease the change.
4. 08:01:752 (5,6) - Flow here also feels awkward because of the sharp angles. Perhaps stacking the 5 over the 4 would create more emphasis and re-positioning the 6 to this slider end 08:00:814 (5) - This is fine, since this is a jump pattern. I'm going for an up/down motion.
5. 08:38:470 (8) - There's a strong emphasis on this note that the pattern doesn't help support. Not really strong, but I get ur point.. will try something different here maybe. since I realize the spacing from 7>8 is less than from 6>7.
6. 08:43:783 (3) - Would prefer a straight slider. I like the way this pattern sets up a blanket with 7 xD.
7. 09:09:877 (1,3) - If the 3 slider imitates the direction of the 1 slider, it would compliment the music a little more. Though, the pattern you have here works too I suppose. Wouldn't flow as nice imo.
8. 09:17:377 (1,3,1,3,1,2,3,4) - Playing with SV increases and more spacing can help emphasize where the music picks up. I get what you mean with spacing/emphasis here. Changed, the spacing but no SV's .
9. 09:44:877 (1,2,3) - Slider, note, slider, note would compliment the dominant part of the music. Calm part, so I think the simpler metronome rhythm works just as well.
10. 10:28:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feel awkward. The jumps feel fine for me. I don't take flow into account as much for jumps. More of the motion i want them to achieve. In this case it's reversing the flow set up from the pattern before.
11. 10:55:345 (4,5,6,7) - Flow killer :s This is intended for up/down motion, Doesn't really kill flow, since jumps basically move in sharp angles anyways lol.
12. 10:56:283 (2) - Many pianos in this song I would've loved to see streams ;_; I know it'll never happen lol Nope lol.
13. 11:18:939 (2,3,4,5) - Awkward because of sharper angles when the song doesn't really ask for much. Okay fixed.
14. 11:19:564 (6,7,1) - This should be more emphasized than the previous triangle. Changed to something different.
15. 11:22:377 (1) - Undermapped. Fine. fine lol.
16. 11:25:814 (5,1) - I feel like the stream could be elsewhere than underneath the slider. Doesn't look to appealing this way. And maybe use 4 kick sliders for the beginning stream and let the dominant sounds be note streamed. I think this is fine. Also it would have to be 3 kick sliders since the 1st stream is only a set of 6. I prefer streams to kick sliders tho.
17. 11:45:502 (5,6) - These could be more emphasized than keeping the short spacing. I don't hear anything worth additional emphasis honestly.
18. 11:59:877 (1,2,3,4) - You used close spacing on the previous slider section but for the music I think spacing these out a little more would compliment better. Or at least change the direction/angle of the sliders to set apart from the former. Yea, i used a different angle in lining up the slider-heads.
19. 12:08:627 (1) - This and a little bit onwards could be mapped more to the dominant sound, be more fitting. Feels a little random as to what is being followed around here. Following the drums more than the main melody actually. This rhythm fits better with the rest of the section too so I'm keeping for consistency.
20. 12:49:877 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasized more. I think this is adequate D:.
21. 12:52:377 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same.
22. 13:26:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Noice. :D.

1. is there any big reason to HP 4 ? This isn't Hard diff anyway. HP 5 would be good enough
2. 03:13:940 - dunno the sb didn't show here, this part is from kakumeiki valvare's op (incase if you didnt add this yet)

1. 00:10:190 (1) - : remove nc would be good, move the nc to 00:10:815 -
2. 00:12:533 - : idk why did you ignored this beat T_T. how about move 00:12:690- to here and add circle on 00:13:315 -
3. 00:49:252 (3) - : rearrange like this? it'll make good flow
   
   SPOILER

   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/3064813[/img]
4. 02:02:533 (1) - : too bad you ignored the strong beat on long white tick and the flow is kinda messed up too imo. how about rearrange like this?
   
   combo 7 and 1

   
5. 02:11:752 (3) - : bad stacking with 02:11:127 (4). how about move this to x108 y228 to make better jump and flow
6. 03:03:002 - : I think you can make the streams more neat.. q_q
7. 03:04:565 (4,5) - : is it intentional? q_q move (5) to 128 136 would better, the stacking is really bad imo since it hit the slider body
8. 03:05:815 (4,5) - : ^
9. 05:19:877 - : add circle with finish sounds good for me, this is Insane diff anyway q_q
10. 06:06:595 (3) - : ctrl < this and put on 208 308 would make better flow
11. 06:59:252 (1,2,3,4) - : i think you can rearrange them like this, it'll more neat imo. and you can put 06:59:877 - to 128 256
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 08:53:002 (3) - : i'm sure put this to 184 256 would make better flow
13. 10:32:377 - : same as 05:19:877 -
14. 10:56:908 (6) - : rotate 40 degrees and put on 152 144 would make better flow to next slider
15. 12:23:470 (4,5) - : put this on exactly in the middle of the screen would be good, like on 256 132

10nya wrote:

hiya
sorry for the super pending req from my queue q_q

[General]

1. is there any big reason to HP 4 ? This isn't Hard diff anyway. HP 5 would be good enough Keeping the drain low since its such a long marathon with so many streams. People wanted higher OD so i compensated that with lower HP.
2. 03:13:940 - dunno the sb didn't show here, this part is from kakumeiki valvare's op (incase if you didnt add this yet) Hmm, its showing for me, you might have to delete and redl for the SB texts to update.

[2D]

1. 00:10:190 (1) - : remove nc would be good, move the nc to 00:10:815 - I NC'ed because of SV change.
2. 00:12:533 - : idk why did you ignored this beat T_T. how about move 00:12:690- to here and add circle on 00:13:315 - Trying to keep a simpler rhythm and slowly introduce the player to the pace of the map.
3. 00:49:252 (3) - : rearrange like this? it'll make good flow Nice, did something similar
   
   SPOILER

   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/3064813[/img]
4. 02:02:533 (1) - : too bad you ignored the strong beat on long white tick and the flow is kinda messed up too imo. how about rearrange like this? I don't hear a strong beat on the white tick tho. It's more like a held note that begins on the red tick before
   
   combo 7 and 1

   
5. 02:11:752 (3) - : bad stacking with 02:11:127 (4). how about move this to x108 y228 to make better jump and flow Not trying to stack ;P And i think the pattern flows fine as is
6. 03:03:002 - : I think you can make the streams more neat.. q_q Added an NC to the stream for clarity.
7. 03:04:565 (4,5) - : is it intentional? q_q move (5) to 128 136 would better, the stacking is really bad imo since it hit the slider body These are both intentional.
8. 03:05:815 (4,5) - : ^
9. 05:19:877 - : add circle with finish sounds good for me, this is Insane diff anyway q_q I'll juse use the break lol. If I map that note then the whole break becomes awkward imo... since i map the first note of the song, rather than ending on the last note of the previous song.
10. 06:06:595 (3) - : ctrl < this and put on 208 308 would make better flow I like this better. I think the angle from 2>3 works since it works with the music, intentionally harsher flow since i didn't really map a jump here.
11. 06:59:252 (1,2,3,4) - : i think you can rearrange them like this, it'll more neat imo. and you can put 06:59:877 - to 128 256 That would create really poor flow tho, since now the player has to jump to all the sliderheads which are further away now. Wouldn't be comfortable to play those kick sliders anymore .
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 08:53:002 (3) - : i'm sure put this to 184 256 would make better flow Feels the same to me... Players aren't going to play these sliders perfectly anyways cuz of slider-leniency, so it honestly wouldn't matter too much where I put these sliders. With your suggestion i lose the double-blanket pattern with 2>3 ;c.
13. 10:32:377 - : same as 05:19:877 - Same reason, I extended the time before the break to try and "map" the note.
14. 10:56:908 (6) - : rotate 40 degrees and put on 152 144 would make better flow to next slider Nice. Used another location, but same idea~
15. 12:23:470 (4,5) - : put this on exactly in the middle of the screen would be good, like on 256 132 No reasons to make it centered. I'm not using symmetry here so it just looks out of place.

good luck!

1. 00:30:815 (2) - soft sample to fix
2. 01:46:283 (1) - you could do soft sample on the end of this to emphasize the lack of sound on the end
3. 02:07:065 (1,2) - i'd extend these by one more repeat personally, up to you though.
4. 02:23:002 (2) - '^' the stack lel. there's a couple of these that you can catch pretty easily with just a watch on editor, seems like they matter to you so check it out
5. 03:22:533 (1) - spots like this sliderend are good places where you can use soft sample instead of addition, since the absence of the hitnormal will emphasize the red tick beats. applies for a good chunk of this section
6. 05:16:127 (1,2,3) - personally I'd map this out with circles and then start the stream at 05:16:752 - like it does in the music, would fit more to me
7. 06:37:377 (1) - soft sample to fix
8. 06:51:908 (3,5) - automatic stacking causing this to overlap

1. 00:27:690 (1) - 00:27:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You could make the stream look much nicer here, right now it looks very very unclean, the curve can be tidied up.
2. 00:39:877 (6,7,8,9,1) - Same, i think this stream would look better if you could just make it straight.
3. 01:25:971 - Not Adding a note here and 01:26:283 ? is intentional? I think they would fit better, the bell sounds are very strong there.
4. 04:22:533 (6) - This jump feels forced, I think its better if you put it in a triangle, something like this : http://puu.sh/hy3t2.jpg Would work better, the movement to 6 is very awkward.
5. 04:51:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - You could improve the blanket that these sliders make, currently it looks very very awkward in my point of view. and yeah I can see that your trying to blanket there.
6. 05:59:252 (5) - New combo? this is a new blanket stream your doing it, + new pattern it should have its own new combo to differniate it from the other notes in this combo.
7. 06:08:627 (1) - Same , the new combo here doesn't make sense, this slider is part of the other two sliders before, they help form they're own pattern. try to remove it here and add one at 06:08:627 (1) -
8. 08:51:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - As well, as mentioned before you can make this stream look a bit nicer, and more streams like this. do so for other streams coming up.
9. 10:12:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - What are you trying to do here? looks like a failed stream blanket. if your going do this, might as well remove the whole stream because this blanket looks atrocious.
10. 13:09:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make this symmetrical, even if you make it symmetrical, you can still keep the blanket and if you do make it symmetrical, your making the blanket look more pretty too in the process.

captin1 wrote:

1. 00:30:815 (2) - soft sample to fix k
2. 01:46:283 (1) - you could do soft sample on the end of this to emphasize the lack of sound on the endk
3. 02:07:065 (1,2) - i'd extend these by one more repeat personally, up to you though. I'd prefer not to, just to give more leniency to the players.
4. 02:23:002 (2) - '^' the stack lel. there's a couple of these that you can catch pretty easily with just a watch on editor, seems like they matter to you so check it out Yep. I fixed a few others. Going through the map again, damn, i was so sure they were all stacked correctly.
5. 03:22:533 (1) - spots like this sliderend are good places where you can use soft sample instead of addition, since the absence of the hitnormal will emphasize the red tick beats. applies for a good chunk of this section I see. applied this to the rest of this section, and also another section later on with similar rhythm.
6. 05:16:127 (1,2,3) - personally I'd map this out with circles and then start the stream at 05:16:752 - like it does in the music, would fit more to me Yea, i agree, the circles definitely fit too. Remapped this section.
7. 06:37:377 (1) - soft sample to fixk
8. 06:51:908 (3,5) - automatic stacking causing this to overlap Its barely noticeable during gameplay and it's actually going to cause a lot of problems fixing x____x" believe me, i tried a bunch of things to try and fix this overlap but nothing's working to my satisfaction and this was a really nice pattern (imo anyways). I really hope its okay to keep it as is, since it's so minor x____x sorry D:

no kd, let me know how the taiko situation goes

Tari wrote:

Yooo man

[TWO DIMENSIONS]

1. 00:27:690 (1) - 00:27:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You could make the stream look much nicer here, right now it looks very very unclean, the curve can be tidied up. Oh. yea, i see, the blanket curve i was intending to create with 00:28:002 (2) - was actually quite off. Hopefully its better now
2. 00:39:877 (6,7,8,9,1) - Same, i think this stream would look better if you could just make it straight.
3. 01:25:971 - Not Adding a note here and 01:26:283 ? is intentional? I think they would fit better, the bell sounds are very strong there. This is intentional yes, but i get your point. I would add the notes, but I think that adding them there would jeopardize the consistent rhythm used during this section since I would have to add them to the other parts too (and imo they don't fit that well). I prefer the consistency~
4. 04:22:533 (6) - This jump feels forced, I think its better if you put it in a triangle, something like this : http://puu.sh/hy3t2.jpg Would work better, the movement to 6 is very awkward. I see what you mean. Okay i changed it. used another pattern with a smaller jump. I still think there should be some emphasis on 1 but yea, after considering the rest of the pattern, these jumps were too big in comparison.
5. 04:51:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - You could improve the blanket that these sliders make, currently it looks very very awkward in my point of view. and yeah I can see that your trying to blanket there. THey honestly look fine to me... also i assume you meant the sliders before this stream.
6. 05:59:252 (5) - New combo? this is a new blanket stream your doing it, + new pattern it should have its own new combo to differniate it from the other notes in this combo. I think this is fine, mainly because i don't like how it makes 05:58:627 (1,2,3,4) - seem special for being a combo with only 4 notes. I don't NC for short streams like this in other sections of the map so i feel this NC isn't that necessary.
7. 06:08:627 (1) - Same , the new combo here doesn't make sense, this slider is part of the other two sliders before, they help form they're own pattern. try to remove it here and add one at 06:08:627 (1) - I agree. Removed the NC. I think taking out the NC should be enough, since the next 3 notes actually follow pretty well (also lol you told me to remove the NC and put it on the same note haha).
8. 08:51:673 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - As well, as mentioned before you can make this stream look a bit nicer, and more streams like this. do so for other streams coming up. Okay yea, improved this stream. my intention was to blanket the slider-tail of 3 that came later, and keep the curve with 1.
9. 10:12:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - What are you trying to do here? looks like a failed stream blanket. if your going do this, might as well remove the whole stream because this blanket looks atrocious.
   It looks fine to me tho

   
   Honestly i'm not sure what's wrong with the stream blankets here. I want to map the 5-circle streams but still keep them relatively spaced for intensity, and have their shape be different from the straight streams for some diversity.
10. 13:09:095 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make this symmetrical, even if you make it symmetrical, you can still keep the blanket and if you do make it symmetrical, your making the blanket look more pretty too in the process. OOoh. Nice. Okay changed!

Map is great, get some stars!!

captin1 wrote:

let me know how the taiko situation goes

Leorda wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay...

[TWO DIMENSIONS]
02:12:690 (1,2) - These triplets feels doesn't fit in here. How about replace it with one slider without a repeating slider? I prefer the 1/4 repeats here. They play well imo.
02:31:752 (3) - ^ Same, 1/2 rhythm works here, whether its 1/2 slider or 1/4 repeat. I chose repeat so i could reverse the flow here, and there's a drum beat on the blue tick so imo it fits.
02:34:565 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't think this triplets follows the music well... how about replace with slider? They play out fine for me, also there are beats on the blue ticks.
05:54:173 (5) - Remove this note for separate the pattern between the circular and the streams? They work for me but ehh.. i see your point. Tweaked it slightly. I don't think this hinders gameplay though, players can easily see the transition from the circles to the stream.
07:53:314 (7,8) - How about reverse this placement to make a circular flow? I had felt that this would be a circular one... just opinion I was going for an up and down motion instead of a circular one.
08:04:877 (1,2) - These triplets feels doesn't fit in here. How about replace it with one slider without a repeating slider? Idk... they fit imo. Plus i already use a lot of 1/2 sliders, using a different motion here instead.

I'm sorry, I'm not good at modding an approval map, but I'll do my best... good luck

P.S. damn, how Datsuji took a hundred part from hundred song?