1. 00:19:787 (2) - I would make here a slow slider
2. 00:24:820 - It can be really cool circles combination, if you will try
3. 00:43:787 - Honestly, I hear more beats here, so make faster stream (not recommended) or try to make some sliderart (recommended)
4. 01:02:175 (2) - Increase slider velocity here maybe?
5. 01:22:691 - 01:44:755 - Very repetitive, maybe add sometimes something like...: short_slider-->short_slider-->short_slow_slider
6. 01:31:400 (1) - I would end this slider here: 01:31:787
7. 01:40:691 (1) - Same here

1. 00:10:884 (5) - I think that should be NC for consistency you make New Combo on every two downbeat
2. 00:22:497 (1,3) - Swap NC between them? for consistency New Combo
3. 00:54:239 (5) - Should be NC imo, same reason as above and to make the combo shorter
4. 01:59:271 (4) - Should be NC too same as this one 01:03:529 (1) -
5. 00:01:594 (1) - Maybe move up a bit to x:468 y:272, so it can have better flow between (1) and (2)
6. 00:20:175 (1,2) - Maybe you can move up (2) a bit, so it can produce a better zig zag patern http://puu.sh/gRLm8/d6fc9a6bd4.jpg instead to have a straight patern between (1) and (2)
7. 01:56:175 (1,2) - In my opinion for a better rhythm you can ctrl+g them so it can have rhythm like this http://puu.sh/gRLNh/e3c6e8072d.jpg, because it fit well if we click the slider on this 01:56:562 - because you can hear "hyuuuu" like siren sound on the bgm, hahaha god I'm bad at describing things XD
   
   Some circles can be changed into slider imo to lower the star rating, but as far as I can see thiss diff very nice and easy to play for beginner

1. 00:13:594 (5) - Maybe it's just me, but prety not comfortable when play on that one, since the end of that slider is on 1/6, so maybe in my opinion that (5) slider can be start here 00:13:400 - the start of the drum sound that you follow and maybe add more reverse so the end of the slider can be on red tick so the player less confused when playing, something like this maybe http://puu.sh/gROIe/76322ccfe2.jpg
2. 00:18:820 (6) - How about change that into 1/1 slider instead? because you miss important beat here 00:19:207 - so sugested rhythm: 1) http://puu.sh/gRPbv/1fc8d3e30a.jpg or 2) http://puu.sh/gRPf7/195af841a5.jpg
3. 01:03:529 (1) - Move that somewhere else maybe move to x:164 y:176? because flow kinda not good if you stacked that under (8) imo
4. 01:28:304 (1) - I think it's better if normal-finish on head is replace by normal-whistle instead because same as 01:34:497 (1) - and 01:40:691 (1) -

1. 00:09:916 (9,10,11) - Those rhythm really hard to follow imo, so maybe you can consider to make them a bit easier, a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/gRQPB/e2c93dc080.jpg might sound and play better
2. 00:25:691 (9,10) - It's more comfortable to play when those on triplet imo, because (10) is easily to miss click
3. 01:03:336 (5,6,7) - Make the jump on 2.00x? not sure but it's play well when it's a bit far from (4)
4. Some streams after break time is still too hard for me, maybe it's just mee hahaha XD
   
   Maybe you should shorter the combos, prety confused when the combo is up to 10 or 14

m1223961117 wrote:

Wow...very cool map

[Easy]

• 
  Fine.

[Normal]

• 
  00:06:820 (5) - I think remove circle is very good okay!
  00:11:271 (2,3,4) - Follow drum?? like this: http://puu.sh/gXrAi/f945bc65a1.jpg agreed
  00:42:433 (2) - move circle to 00:43:207 - ?? umm, keep this fine.
  00:46:304 (5) - del circle?? I think ignore this is fine sorry, i should keep this difficulty.
  00:58:691 (5) - ^
  01:49:013 (5) - ^
  01:57:723 (7) - NC okay.

1. Very hard Normal I think, but nice

[Hard]

• 
  00:03:142 (5) - NC
  00:09:336 (7) - ^
  00:12:433 (6) - ^
  00:24:820 (6) - ^
  00:27:916 (8) - ^
  00:31:013 (8) - ^
  00:34:110 (7) - ^
  00:37:400 (8) - ^
  00:40:304 (6) - ^
  00:43:400 (6) - ^
  00:46:497 (7) - ^
  00:49:981 (10) - ^
  00:52:304 (6) - ^
  00:56:175 (7) - ^
  00:58:884 (6) - ^
  01:03:336 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+G?? I think it is very hard, don't jump this flow is not bad and x2.00. not very hard imo.
  01:17:658 (3) - remove this?? no sound here i can here this.
  01:20:562 (7) - NC
  01:51:529 (5) - ^

1. I can't read NC from 01:22:110 - to 01:46:497 - lol it's speed change added NC also, your NC pettern bit weird this part haha. so keep
   NC all done and other some changed.

Sorry I can't mod over 5.5 star (Because I can't read anything )
Nice map^^
Give you a star

Midge wrote:

m4m dude nice. really hard map to read, lol

[EX]
00:13:594 (1,1,1) - i'm sure you've gotten this comment before, but this is fairly unreadable T~T yes,almost testplayer said hard. i changed this!
00:16:400 (5,6,7,8) - ki see what you wanted to do, but it's still ugly imo it's feel fine play.
00:19:594 (6) - remove 1 repeater and add a circle on the white tick okay.
00:38:110 (1) - remove nc it's 1/3 change rhythm part. no change.
00:57:142 (5,6) - ctrl+g? sorry, i like keep flow.
01:02:175 (1,2,3) - try this? https://a.pomf.se/foxtfw.png lol coockieizi. i'll consider this.
01:04:207 (8,1) - ds may be a bit too extream for a chiller part of the song such as this. (just my opinion, you can keep lol) I try hard map but flow is nice mapping. sorry, i want challenge.

everything else seems good to go imo. star'd.

chaee wrote:

Fromchaee mods things (❁´ο`❁)

[Easy]

00:07:023 (5) - Is whistle hitsound really necessary? In my opinion it sounds better without it's need imo.
00:51:926 (2,4) - I don't really like how these look with eachother. Maybe rotate 4 by 6? ok

[Normal]

01:24:055 (5,7) - Blanket looks weird to me.. It may just be my eyes playing tricks but curve 7's end a bit maybe? no change, i think fine imo.

[Hard]

00:52:701 (1) - Curve a bit more maybe? It looks better visually imo. Something like 00:53:862 (5) - would like nice bit changed.
01:34:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Don't see why this combo is so long orz. NC at 01:35:668 (1) - Would be fine NC pettern fixed.
01:42:636 (1) - NC, too long imo ^
Comments: Lovely hitsounds thanks!

[EX]

00:29:862 (3,4) - Stack? done.
00:44:572 (6,1) - ^ no.

That's it for my mod. Good luck!

Priti wrote:

Will mod this soon~
Just something that heavily bothers me first: AngelHoney's Insane has REALLY low OD, please put it up to 8.

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

Easy:
00:50:378 - I really miss a note here. It would be great if you add a note here. nothing sound.
01:59:281 (1) - I would remove a NC here. i changed NC pettern.

Normal:
00:42:636 (3,4) - Blanket? bit fixed.

Other diffs seems fine to me.
Hope that at least this helps.
Good Luck!

Euny wrote:

sotty for late P o M u T a. as your request!♥ came from my queue

• General

1. Found unused .wav files:
   - normal-hitwhistle3.wav
2. yeah, i agree wendao's opinion. its not Kpop. but i think you add tag agency and support company name.
   so, add ' 다날 엔터테인먼트 ' and ' 모모 '
   this is source and... screen shot.
   

• Easy

1. everything is beautiful.
   hmm.. lets see,,
   how about less slider tick? because, seems to dont need to 1/2 tempo in your easy diff. i think that tick destruction newest user's cursor xD....!

• General

1. looks fine too. just same as above. i recommend less that slider tick.

• Hard

1. 00:59:475 (3,4,5,6) - how about change that for 1/4 sliders? it will be better to streaming.
   
2. 01:03:152 (4,5,6,7) - hmm.. i recommend this time line. its more fit for music sorry, i want keep this. rhythm is fine imo.
   

other diffs looks good to me and i'm not good at extramod though /w\
hope this is helpful...

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

LEGEND]
BLUE = suggestion/comment
BLACK = problems

FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments

00:00:00 - changes - reasons
If theres a reason please read that first before trying the changes!

[Easy]
This is actually pretty exciting for an easy! I just don't like the spinner you put at the kiai time

01:28:314 - I think forgot a green timing line to change the custom hitsound here done.
01:41:475 (1) - i see why you used this spinner here but I think you should just map the melody instead because its so much louder spinner is fit song.

[Normal]
Fine. Again i'm not feeling the spinner!

01:41:475 (1) - see the easy same easy.
01:56:959 (5) - change to auto hitsound here it's fine.

[Hard]
Fine. Its a bit complex for a hard but thats ok

00:21:733 (4) - NC done.
00:56:185 (2,3) - delete 3 and extend the slider - to make it easier, even number of notes means they will have to end on the other finger changed pettern.
01:32:959 (4) - NC fixed.

[EX]
This looks awesome, really cool map!

OD = 8 - because its so easy to miss the end of some sliders? Also see 00:00:830 changed OD8.
00:00:830 (1) - this spinner is illegal unless you lower the OD! autoplay cant score 1000 yes.
00:31:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try putting NC on 00:31:314 - 00:31:604 - 00:32:185 - to make it easier to read It's same spacing. not hard read.
01:22:120 - this section is so good! I like the hitsounds used for 01:25:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - thanks!

Total time spent on mod: 1:15 ~ 1:30

Well this map is really good so its a short mod, and I hope this gets ranked soon!

That's all. Good luck!
/me gives star

Euny wrote:

omg seems to fucking sleepy xD

...its for normal diff xDDDDDDDDDD

and sorry for late shoot.

i dont have star anymore xD

hope it ranked.♥

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:07:023 (5) Delete the slider and put a single circle there instead to have a little break for beginners unnecessary change imo.
00:35:668 (1) I think this slider should repeat at 00:36:443 . Otherwise its skipping so many beats, but like that, it wont be the case please listen song, i can hear long sound. (but, low volume). it's took sound. also, have tick. no problem.
00:53:475 (4) Make this one straight like 00:51:926 (2) . It looks better nice.

Normal

00:02:378 (3,4) Arent they a bit too close? Looks weird imo looks fine for me. also, spacing is fine.
00:13:604 (5) I think the sudden 1/3 is a bit too confusing for a normal I have Easy diff. also, Hard diff is harder. so, Normal diff more harder better. but, If BN or QAT say should change, i'll delete.
00:34:701 (5) Delete this circle and put a slider from 00:34:894 till 00:35:088 . Fits more to the map and song okay.
00:37:991 (4) Same as 00:13:604 (5) same as reason keep.
00:45:733 (3,4,5,6,7) This is a bit too hard. (4,5) should be sliders too and (6) should repeat. Delete (7) I'll consider. but, i want more harder normal diff. so, mapset balance. so, I want keep my pray.
00:53:281 (5) Same as 00:34:701 (5) no.
00:58:120 (3,4,5,6,7) Same as 00:45:733 (3,4,5,6,7) same for reason.
01:02:765 (7) Same as 00:34:701 (5) no.
01:57:733 (1) Im not a fan of multiple repeats, maybe like this? I don't like use blue line for normal diff. it's fine.

Hard

01:03:346 (5,6,7) I think a repeat slider would fit more finally done.
01:57:733 (1) Same as in Normal i don't think so your opinion. sorry.

Overall i have the feeling that its a bit too hard for a hard, could be just me though

AngelHoney's Insane

This diff seems alright to me.
Im a bit curious, why no kiai time? He used kiaitime.

EX

Wow, this diff is amazing! thanks!!

Really awesome map, i really enjoyed it~
Good Luck!

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Mod requested from my queue :3

SPOILER

~ Legend ~

1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this

Please reply with:

1. Green = Fixed
2. Red = Didn't fix
3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]

1. The image "1269984297426_R.jpeg" isn't used in any of your diffs, so consider removing it

[EX]

1. 00:16:410 (5,6,7,8) - & 00:17:959 (5,6,7,8) - I'm not going to say anything on this, because it's fine right now. I just want to say that your pattern can be misunderstood by people. I guess most players will just think that that's a sort of a stream while they are 2 consecutive doubles. If you want to enphasize your pattern more consider adding NCs on both 5s and 7s keep it. but, consider..
2. 00:31:797 (4) - The reasoning is kinda the same as above. Add a NC here if you want to enphasize your pattern　done.
3. 01:38:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Why this pattern isn't the same as 01:25:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ? I'm referring to the increasing spacing from the first Nevermind, it was silly. Instead I'd like you to trydoing a Ctrl + G on 01:38:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - and another Ctrl +G on 01:39:539 (6,7) -. What do you think? i want keep is flow. about spacing is done.
4. 01:53:475 (3,4) - You usually put a jump after 4 elsewhere in your map, yet not here, which is misleading. My suggestion is to add a NC, because I don't know where you can move that note in order to make that jump not need imo.

[Light Insane]

1. 00:44:185 (6,10) - This pattern is hard to understand if you don't put NCs there :/ (sorry, I know I'm being nazi, but there isn't much to mod at all xD)
2. 01:34:507 - Duplicated green line. Remove one
   all done.

[Hard]

1. 01:30:055 (2,3) - What about merging them into a 1/2 slider ? It's fine for me.

[Normal]

1. Nothing here ~

[Easy]

1. Nothing here ~

Man, every single mod you ask me is a new challenge in finding unexisting errors xD
Nice mapset and song, good luck ~

P o M u T a wrote:

lol thanks many star euny!
i haven't pen haha.

No your pen is black