m1223961117 wrote:

From my Queue~

[General]

1. 只有Insane沒去掉http://puu.sh/h06ZD/b984e3bd48.png oops
   
2. 你之前的難度Chris，留著當紀念吧 ;~; 好懷念
   http://puu.sh/h05wz/0fb55dca79.osu
   

[Insane]

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  00:05:103 (5,6) - 我覺得之前擺在Chris的5連Circle比較適合當這首歌的開頭，全疊在一起會更棒http://puu.sh/h05IH/80a8db7d8a.jpg 我個人喜歡kickslider拉, 沒改成stream但還小改了一下
  00:23:666 (6) - Ctrl+G 覺得這樣的flow好玩
  00:58:473 - 到01:01:954 - Clap太吵了，去掉這段紅線上的Clap 但應該有鼓聲吧 先留著

1. 題外，我覺得這是Extra不是Ins，不能用Rule去做判斷，我是真心認為 我最近狂做EX大概忘了怎麼做IN了吧 orz

[Hard]

• 
  00:27:644 - 我還以為這裡怎麼少了聲音...既然都放點了，把鼓聲弄出來??
  00:30:130 (3) - ^
  00:43:390 (3) - ^
  00:46:042 (2) - ^ 之前太懶了, 好吧好吧
  
  00:30:628 (4) - 沒疊好 盡力了 orz
  00:58:473 - 到01:02:948 - 比照Insane辦理 也一樣

[Normal]

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  00:27:479 (3) - 這我就不多說了，如果你有家上Slidertick的話，這張圖得這個也一併改，比照辦理 其實沒關西拉 又不是一定要把鼓聲都全map到 畢竟是 nm 嘛
  (需要其他理由的話，那Slider是跟背景音，若是跟人聲無視掉鼓沒有差)
  00:47:865 (1,2) - 直接跟人聲比較好，我想到的不動到結構的方法就是加Circle在00:48:363 - 改成1/2 滑條

1. 沒了，話說這Normal還真難 為了spread拉

[Easy]

1. 沒問題，不過我看到這排列，DS放大做另一個Normal會更精彩，看大大有沒有興趣 太懶了orz

加油，早日Rank

Meyrink wrote:

The SV And DS In Easy and normal are really wierd for me ! just for me ! it's like SV so high so mouse mouvement is fast but and next object is close , it's not rlly comfortable ! i suggest easy 0,8sv and 1.1 DS ! Normal 1.1 SV and 0,9 DS ! /me runs

/me hides too

General

1. Try to remove video ! and update ! the put it agai with diffirent file name ! and update ! blame peppy =u=
2. add AudioLeadIn oops
3. rip kiai ! why u didn't add it here 01:05:766 - ? rip kiai!
4. normal sampelset is loud for that start i think soft is better =u=
5. that end of mp3 so wierd =u= blame mp3 =u=

Easy

1. OD 3 ? k
2. 00:23:003 - it'l be good if u map this follow vocals
3. 01:24:163 (1,3) - tricky think fix

Normal

1. 00:21:346 (1,4) - nazi blanket lol k
2. 00:26:650 (1) - u can do same as 00:29:302 (1) - for consistency ur right but i just dont feel like it idk why :u
3. 00:39:910 (1,2) - those are to much merged ! try somthing like http://puu.sh/h2TU3/1a3a7511d5.jpg !???stolen pattern from randy /hides
4. 00:55:821 (1) - nazi ! u can jst remove the red anchor andkeep slider straight made bend more prominent

Hard

1. 00:05:103 (1) - i fell this rlly need NC all these NC's would break my consistency since im doing it every 2 measures
2. 00:41:567 (1) - NC ?
3. 00:09:744 (5,7) - stack ? small jump o3o
4. 00:18:031 (1,2) - switch nc
5. 00:39:247 (8,1) - ^
6. 00:25:987 (6) - i feel like this need nc even if it's not downbeat! to have a combo of 4 circles ! 00:25:987 (1,2,3,4) -
7. 00:28:639 (1) - ^
8. 00:36:097 (1) - NC ?
9. 00:58:473 - this combo is so big ! try nc here 00:59:799 (5) -
10. 01:02:119 (1) - ^

Insane

• 
  looks fine

CelsiusLK wrote:

k

[general]

1. wtf why soft-hitwhistle wave looks like this lol idk =w=
   SPOILER

   
2. widescreen checked in easy
3. combo colour 5 ( looks white ) might somehow blend with the bg a bit at some part which make it hard to see approach circle like p/4261080

[insane]

1. 00:04:274 (2,3) - can lower spacing here a bit imo , high spacing just like previous notes feel a bit weird here , try move 00:04:440 (3) - to around x236 y216 but that makes spacing from 5 to 1 higher lol, i did move it around a little tho
2. 00:16:042 - to 00:26:484 - hmm I still think that you can decrease spacing here on some notes a bit more , I assume this is somehow sound like calm part so better not use too much long jumps here like 00:20:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 00:17:534 (2,3,4,5) - ,00:22:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . etc well your spacing actually looks nice on this 00:31:954 - which sound similiar like the part I mention lol
3. 00:37:258 (1) - the 3/4 slider here sound not that good imo , 1/2 would sound quite better , the emphasis on 00:37:589 (1) - would still sound nice eventhough you change this 00:37:258 (1) - to 1/2 slider also dq reason tho
4. 00:54:661 (2,3) - nazi lower spacing a bit would be nice , try move 00:54:992 (3) - to around x224 y184 it's already at the coordinates u put down -3- oh well moved it down slightly lol
5. 01:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - gap problem with hard diff here , I don't see hard use much 1/4 slider here so it better to convert some stream here to 1/4 repeat sldier , I would convert this 01:02:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - to 1/4 repeat slider lemme get some opinions on this tooooo, i like this stream shape ;w; jk fixed but i put the reverse first because the music builds up that way (and also from personal experience this is easier to play =3= )
6. 01:14:716 (5,1) - spacing here should be a bit bigger than 01:14:550 (4,5) - but I guess it hard to do spacing thing here so just try do something with flow here kkk , try move (5) to around x176 y228 so flow would fit the song here better , 01:14:882 - is more emphasized than 01:14:716 (5) -

[hard]

1. 00:01:456 (4,5) - mmhm I think it better to make spacing here looks like 00:04:108 (4,5) - since the beat here sound pretty much same lol

[normal]

1. 00:10:075 - it sounda bit weird that you skip this beat , better map it since you actaully did map this on others part , try this rhythm
   SPOILER

   

[easy]

• so the thing that I'm a bit concern is the overlap thing which also still looks hard for beginners to play eventhough ar is 4 , I still think it still have a bit slightly overlap from previous notes like 00:11:070 (2,4) - , 00:26:650 (1,3) - , 00:38:418 (3,5) - , 00:32:285 (2,4) - , etc so mmm would be better if you not do overlap like that and decrease ar to 3 so it suitable for beginners more imo in chorus part you didn't even use overlap which make it looks nice
  fixed all except 00:28:307 (3) - because if you test play it you won't notice the overlap at all

1. 00:41:070 (2,3) - a full overlap like this is considered to be hard for beginner to play it properly

k

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Gonna mod this soon, hopefully today o3o/
"Today" = after 7 days lol rip


Easy:

1. 00:20:683 (4) - I really suggest you to remove this 1/2 repeat, since it's kinda hard for easy diff to be honest, and I really don't think you should use them in easy diff, since it's a bit too much orz 1/2 repeats are ok in easy diffs imo, it also helps with the spread ;w;
2. 00:26:981 (2) - maybe you want to add a whistle on slider's tail, it's kinda feels like something missing there so yeah =3=/
3. 00:36:595 (4) - like i've said here 00:20:683 (4) -
4. 00:42:893 (1) - maybe a whistle on the tail? would be really good imo, same as this 00:26:981 (2) -
5. 00:45:545 (1) - ^
6. 00:50:186 (3) - maybe a clap on this slider's start would be good imo, since i clearly hear it in the background. So yeah ></ you shouldn't avoided it orz but the clap is on the red tick so it feels off ;w;
7. 00:55:490 (3) - ^

Normal:

1. 00:27:479 (3) - maybe add a SC:2 for slidertick sound on this slider on here 00:27:644 - I would if there was a slidertick there LOL
2. 00:27:976 (4) - maybe you want to add a while on this slider's start? it'll fit with the music imo =3=
3. 00:30:130 (3) - same as i said here 00:27:479 (3) -
4. 00:43:390 (3) - ^
5. 00:43:887 (4) - same as i said in here 00:27:976 (4) -
6. 00:46:042 (3) - same as i said here 00:27:479 (3) -
7. 00:46:539 (4) - same as i said in here 00:27:976 (4) -

Insane:

1. 00:05:103 (1,2) - Don't you think this is a bit too much for Insane, this jump is a bit too big to be honest, you should lower it down a bit, it's looks a bit bad right now, so yeah ;w;

That's all, call me back once you're done with this o3o/ *SLAPS YOU =3=*