Gray Veyron wrote:

Hihi, Gaia~ From my queue!

.....weird anime..... .... yeah lol

[> General <]

1. - The Second offset between the first four diffs(65,765) and Chris diff(65,766) is inconsistent by one o_o oooops lol XD
2. - Pretty fine! >w<

[> Easy <]

1. - OD -1 because it looks like an Easy+. sure
2. 00:01:954 (5,6,1) - You can possibly make a smoother pattern here, here's my preference > http://puu.sh/dQICX/8da163adf7.png okey
3. 00:14:716 (3,4) - I think you should put a head-on from slider (3) to (4). It kinda feel awkward closer and under the healthbar. i shifted it down a bit
4. 00:44:219 (3,4,1,2) - You could've completed this 'diamond' formation here. shapesssssss i dont like shapes orz
5. 01:02:119 (4,1) - Since it's an Easy diff, why would you make the spinner appear so early while beginners can't get a chance to prepare for it? uh i put my spinners 1/2 after the note in easys and there are ranked maps like this so it's alright
6. 01:17:532 (4,5) - Curve more for blanket lol lol okey
7. 01:24:825 (2,1) - ^
8. - IMO, the diff looks great! Afaik is that you've used too much 1/2 sliders because the song was too fast and you had no choice but to follow the vocals. Am i wrong? lol yeah you're right ;w; hope this isnt an issueee

[> Normal <]

1. 00:22:009 (3,4) - A bit overlap, you should bring slider (3)'s position in the other direction to make slider (4)'s head a bit clear and readable, it's not a problem. I tilted 3 a bit it should be better
2. 00:25:987 (5) - Be careful with this, touching the healthbar is unrankable > http://puu.sh/dQO3T/2acd57f7d8.png oops nice catch fixed
3. 00:39:910 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:009 (3,4) - this one isn't as bad imo, the reverse isn't overlapping but i tilted it a bit more too
4. 01:01:125 (7) - Add NC? oh yes
5. 01:01:788 (8,1) - Same reason as the previous diff, but not really much because it's a Normal diff. But it's recommended for Normal players.
6. 01:12:394 (5,1) - Sounds really nazi, but... change slider (1)'s position to not be overlapped with slider (5). okie
7. 01:26:317 (7,1) - Same as 00:22:009 (3,4) - hmm i think this wouldnt have a problem with reading tho :> is this just me?
8. - Not really much to find, great improvement you have since the last i've seen your other maps. lol rip that one i remapped it (>x<)

[> Hard <]

1. 00:01:125 (4,5) - I don't think this rhythm fits here because the new track here is quite strong. So try one of these rhythm i preferred > One / Two uhh i kept the reverse cuz i think it fits the repeating guitar sounds, but i changed things around
2. 00:09:744 (5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle :3 ahh yeah i agree it'll probably be more fun but it'll kill my current pattern keep for now
3. 00:23:666 (8) - ^ ahh i like this pattern the way it is right now ><
4. 00:41:816 (8) - I don't hear anything in this part, just the streaming drum for Insanes. So remove this and try following the main beats and vocals instead of background music. hm actually i think mapping this out is better for the spread cuz a hard without these sounds -> an insane with all the streams mapped out is a pretty big jump, same for the next few points
5. 00:48:445 (3) - ^, but nothing can be heard here, so this is an overmapped 1/4 circle.
6. 00:53:749 (3) - ^
7. 00:56:484 (3,4,5) - The overlap between slider (3) and (4) is fine, but it got worse on slider (5). Make a different pattern than this one, i prefer this > http://puu.sh/dQTfX/f852698694.png on purpose but maybe.... idk might consider
8. 01:16:289 (10) - Same as 00:48:445 (3) -
9. 01:28:306 (1) - I think you should move this circle somewhere to be visible, some players might think circle (6) is the end, but they'll get a miss with this. So move to x:348|y:52, or x:364|y:32, or x:356|y:80. okie
10. - Well, nice little jumps and pattern, but some senseless triplet needs to be reconsidered. But well, i kinda like this diff ^w^/ hehe :3

[> Insane <]

1. - Very good! most mods below are some nazi suggestions.
2. 00:11:235 (3,5) - Stack slider tail perfectly. i guess it looks bad, okie
3. 00:16:042 (1,1) - Try to make a nice parallel here. sure
4. 00:17:202 (1,2) - Since there's a downbeat, swap NC. umm i think the NC emphasizes the vocal nicely ;w;
5. 00:26:981 (1) - Remove this NC, because adding it make the circle on 00:26:650 (1) - useless. Also, they're both in the same track, so try to use one NC. also for emphasis, i think it fits
6. 00:33:943 (4,5) - Try an S formation by making the slider (5) the same position as slider (4) but flipped. The overlap on circle (3) won't matter. hmm i like to use different sliders for this kind of ctrl+> patterns lol (blame my weird style)
7. 00:50:020 (5,6) - How about extend the spacing here? it'd look nicer with greater playstyle, or do as you did on 00:28:639 (3,4,5,6) - . sure
8. - Impressive mapping! Just some minor issues to be fixed. Well done! c:

Don't have the mood to mod the Chris diff. Too insane for me, but i've seen really awesome patterns with jumps you've made! I can't even say a word when i'm checking it 8Q_____ XD it's nbd, but thaaanks
I guess i'm done here, Good Gaia Luck :3333333333333333 :33

1. The BG is kinda of nsfw, how about changing it to something more stable for all ages o3o/
2. Remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map

1. 00:05:103 (6) - I think this will fit much better with drum finish instead of a whistle, i highly suggest you to add it
2. 00:10:956 - I think this will fit much better if you switched the whistle on slider's start with a finish instead, it'll follow the song much better imo o.o
3. 00:13:390 (1) - ^
4. 00:21:346 (1) - ^
5. 00:26:981 (2) - I highly suggest you to fix the blanket on this slider and the next note, it is looking pretty weird right now
6. 00:37:258 (1,2) - switch the finish from the (2) to the (1) it'll fit much better imo
7. 00:42:893 (2) - move the last slider's point to x:376 y:320, it'll fix the blanket with the next slider
8. 01:01:125 (1,2,3,4) - how about making these notes into 2 sliders, it'll make the diff more easier to play, since it is an easy diff so it'll make a bit more since to make more sliders instead of notes imo
   
   
9. 01:21:677 (1) - I think this will fit with a finish, since it'll follow the music and the vocal

1. 00:05:103 (6) - how about adding a finish drum instead of a soft whistle, it'll fit much better imo
2. 00:07:755 (8) - how about adding a finish to slider's tail, it'll fit with music o.o
3. 00:10:407 (7) - ^
4. 00:13:390 (1) - ^ but this one on slider's head
5. 00:12:561 (5,6) - I think this will totally follow the song much better if the note started first then after it a slider, since it sounded kinda off right now. so i highly suggest you to change it
   
6. 00:17:202 (3) - how about giving this slider more curve, it'll play much better and it'll look much prettier too
   
   
7. 00:21:346 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll follow the song
8. 00:29:302 (1) - ^ but on slider's start, it'll follow great since you already add it here 00:26:650 (1) - , they both has the same beats. So yeah o3o
9. 00:37:258 (1) - finish here would follow great with the song imo
10. 00:37:589 (2) - ^ if you did the above don't forget to remove the finish on this slider's start
11. 00:45:213 (1) - ^ it'll totally follow the song great, and i mean hear at slider's head ofc =w=
12. 00:57:810 (6) - fix the blanket a bit i honestly think it's a bit off right now..so yeah, move the 2nd slider's point few grids

1. 00:03:611 (3) - how about making ctrl+h for this slider, it'll make more prettier shape imo o3o/
2. 00:05:103 (8) - just like i said about this on easy and normal
3. 00:19:854 (6) - how about adding nc to this slider, to follow the vocal o.o
4. 00:23:666 (8) - I think it'll play much better if you made this slider with ctrl+g, since atm it kinda starts pretty weird, and it'll play much better and fun if you did that imo
5. 00:25:987 (1) - how about adding a nc here, for the sudden jump pattern, i think it'll fit perfectly :3
6. 00:36:097 (5) - ^ it'll fit with music imo
7. 00:40:572 (4) - how about ctrl+g for this slider, it'll follow the song much better imo
8. 00:41:070 (6) - how about nc here, to follow the vocal :3
9. 00:46:539 (3) - this slider kinda looking weird blinding with this slider 00:46:042 (2) - I highly suggest you changing the patterns here, I honestly don't know how to fix this, but i know you might have some other ideas for it
10. 00:50:517 (1) - I think if you move the 2nd slider point few grids up, it'll make the blinding sliders much prettier shape like this
    
    
11. 00:55:158 (8) - I this slider will flow much better if you made it with ctrl+g imo, and it'll make much fun pattern imo
12. 00:56:484 (3) - I don't think the slider's end follows anything in the music, how about ending it on white tick instead, it'll have much better effect with the music
13. 00:59:799 (5) - how about nc here, cus the changing of the vocals and beats o.o
14. 01:02:451 (7) - ^ but this one fits for the sudden jumps in the music imo
15. 01:03:611 (1) - I think this would fit much better with finish instead of whistle, the stopping in the music was a little strong so yeah.. o3o
16. 01:07:754 (7) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better with the lyrics, since the lyrics kinda changed here, so i think it'll fit here
17. 01:09:578 (4) - I think this slider having kinda of weird blinding, I think it can be fixed like this
    
    

1. 00:02:782 (1) - how about sticking this slider perfect under this 00:01:622 (2) - o.o
2. 00:05:103 (5) - like i said about this on easy and normal
3. 00:18:031 (5) - how about moving this slider few grids down so it won't be too close from this slider 00:18:363 (6) -
4. 00:18:363 (6) - this slider shape kinda looking weird from all your patterns on this diff, how about moving the 2nd slider point few grids to the right to fix it :3
5. 00:31:954 (1) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better here, and it'll play well with the music too
6. 00:52:009 (2) - ^
7. 01:16:870 (3) - I'd move this slider few grids down to avoid to be too close to this slider 01:17:202 (4) - , since right now it's kinda close to it o.o/
8. 01:16:373 (1,4) - and this blinding kinda looking bad, how about moving the (4) a bit up to avoid touching each other

1. 00:05:103 (1) - same as i said about this on easy/normal
2. 00:33:445 (2) - how about moving this slider few grids left to avoid being too close this slider 00:33:114 (1) -
3. 00:33:943 (4) - ^ but move this slider down a bit
4. 00:35:766 (1) - reduce this slider to end on white tick, since i honestly don't think it follows anything on blue tick so i highly suggest you doing that
5. 00:39:578 (5) - you should move this slider few grids down, atm it's too close to this slider 00:39:247 (4) -
6. 01:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I see what you did there www
7. 01:25:489 (1) - how about moving this slider to x:128 y:308, just to fix the weird blinding between these three sliders
8. 01:25:821 (2) - how about sticking this note under this 01:24:495 (2) - it's kinda looking weird..so yeah =w=

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey baka Gaia o3o/ owo moe sekai o//


General:

1. The BG is kinda of nsfw, how about changing it to something more stable for all ages o3o/ =w= u never saw anything
2. Remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map oops fixed :3

Easy:

1. 00:05:103 (6) - I think this will fit much better with drum finish instead of a whistle, i highly suggest you to add it nicee
2. 00:10:956 - I think this will fit much better if you switched the whistle on slider's start with a finish instead, it'll follow the song much better imo o.o
3. 00:13:390 (1) - ^
4. 00:21:346 (1) - ^
5. 00:26:981 (2) - I highly suggest you to fix the blanket on this slider and the next note, it is looking pretty weird right now yeah haha fixed
6. 00:37:258 (1,2) - switch the finish from the (2) to the (1) it'll fit much better imo
7. 00:42:893 (2) - move the last slider's point to x:376 y:320, it'll fix the blanket with the next slider okie
8. 01:01:125 (1,2,3,4) - how about making these notes into 2 sliders, it'll make the diff more easier to play, since it is an easy diff so it'll make a bit more since to make more sliders instead of notes imo hmmm too many sliders imo, but might reconsider
   
   
9. 01:21:677 (1) - I think this will fit with a finish, since it'll follow the music and the vocal

Normal:

1. 00:05:103 (6) - how about adding a finish drum instead of a soft whistle, it'll fit much better imo yup
2. 00:07:755 (8) - how about adding a finish to slider's tail, it'll fit with music o.o
3. 00:10:407 (7) - ^
4. 00:13:390 (1) - ^ but this one on slider's head
5. 00:12:561 (5,6) - I think this will totally follow the song much better if the note started first then after it a slider, since it sounded kinda off right now. so i highly suggest you to change it agree!
   
6. 00:17:202 (3) - how about giving this slider more curve, it'll play much better and it'll look much prettier too okie
   
   
7. 00:21:346 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll follow the song
8. 00:29:302 (1) - ^ but on slider's start, it'll follow great since you already add it here 00:26:650 (1) - , they both has the same beats. So yeah o3o
9. 00:37:258 (1) - finish here would follow great with the song imo
10. 00:37:589 (2) - ^ if you did the above don't forget to remove the finish on this slider's start
11. 00:45:213 (1) - ^ it'll totally follow the song great, and i mean hear at slider's head ofc =w=
12. 00:57:810 (6) - fix the blanket a bit i honestly think it's a bit off right now..so yeah, move the 2nd slider's point few grids loool yup fixed =3=

Hard:

1. 00:03:611 (3) - how about making ctrl+h for this slider, it'll make more prettier shape imo o3o/ was going for a parallel here s:
2. 00:05:103 (8) - just like i said about this on easy and normal yuup
3. 00:19:854 (6) - how about adding nc to this slider, to follow the vocal o.o
4. 00:23:666 (8) - I think it'll play much better if you made this slider with ctrl+g, since atm it kinda starts pretty weird, and it'll play much better and fun if you did that imo hmm I really like this current pattern >< keep for now
5. 00:25:987 (1) - how about adding a nc here, for the sudden jump pattern, i think it'll fit perfectly :3
6. 00:36:097 (5) - ^ it'll fit with music imo
7. 00:40:572 (4) - how about ctrl+g for this slider, it'll follow the song much better imo i like this :3
8. 00:41:070 (6) - how about nc here, to follow the vocal :3
9. 00:46:539 (3) - this slider kinda looking weird blinding with this slider 00:46:042 (2) - I highly suggest you changing the patterns here, I honestly don't know how to fix this, but i know you might have some other ideas for it yeah i trieeed XD this pattern was bugging me a bit too actually haha
10. 00:50:517 (1) - I think if you move the 2nd slider point few grids up, it'll make the blinding sliders much prettier shape like this this was supposed to be a straight slider lol but i changed it a litttle bit
    
    
11. 00:55:158 (8) - I this slider will flow much better if you made it with ctrl+g imo, and it'll make much fun pattern imo jump gets big imo s:
12. 00:56:484 (3) - I don't think the slider's end follows anything in the music, how about ending it on white tick instead, it'll have much better effect with the music it does end on the white tick though o3o
13. 00:59:799 (5) - how about nc here, cus the changing of the vocals and beats o.o
14. 01:02:451 (7) - ^ but this one fits for the sudden jumps in the music imo
15. 01:03:611 (1) - I think this would fit much better with finish instead of whistle, the stopping in the music was a little strong so yeah.. o3o lol um drum finish o3o?
16. 01:07:754 (7) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better with the lyrics, since the lyrics kinda changed here, so i think it'll fit here hmm maybe.. i'll try this out XD
17. 01:09:578 (4) - I think this slider having kinda of weird blinding, I think it can be fixed like this i guess since its kiai it can have more jumps, sure :p
    
    
    
    about NC's, I NC every 2 measures so if I NC in ur places it breaks my consistency >< If I change my pattern to every measure then I'll apply ur NC mods /o/

Insane:

1. 00:02:782 (1) - how about sticking this slider perfect under this 00:01:622 (2) - o.o wow sekai's eyes so sharp >.> fixed lol
2. 00:05:103 (5) - like i said about this on easy and normal yup
3. 00:18:031 (5) - how about moving this slider few grids down so it won't be too close from this slider 00:18:363 (6) - umm lol fixed i think owo
4. 00:18:363 (6) - this slider shape kinda looking weird from all your patterns on this diff, how about moving the 2nd slider point few grids to the right to fix it :3 okay XD
5. 00:31:954 (1) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better here, and it'll play well with the music too i like my current one ><
6. 00:52:009 (2) - ^ same, on purpose s:
7. 01:16:870 (3) - I'd move this slider few grids down to avoid to be too close to this slider 01:17:202 (4) - , since right now it's kinda close to it o.o/ sure o3o/
8. 01:16:373 (1,4) - and this blinding kinda looking bad, how about moving the (4) a bit up to avoid touching each other wow didn't even notice =w= fixed~

Chris:

1. 00:05:103 (1) - same as i said about this on easy/normal mhm
2. 00:33:445 (2) - how about moving this slider few grids left to avoid being too close this slider 00:33:114 (1) - oo nice catch
3. 00:33:943 (4) - ^ but move this slider down a bit fixed from above
4. 00:35:766 (1) - reduce this slider to end on white tick, since i honestly don't think it follows anything on blue tick so i highly suggest you doing that
   extended slider o.o I might fix it if someone else points it out again lol
5. 00:39:578 (5) - you should move this slider few grids down, atm it's too close to this slider 00:39:247 (4) - okey
6. 01:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I see what you did there www =3=/
7. 01:25:489 (1) - how about moving this slider to x:128 y:308, just to fix the weird blinding between these three sliders i guess i'll blanket this cuz i did so in hard XD
8. 01:25:821 (2) - how about sticking this note under this 01:24:495 (2) - it's kinda looking weird..so yeah =w= yeah this was bothering me a bit too haha fixed :3

Good Job as always Gaia, I honestly taking liking to this map <3 <3

Good luck getting it ranked :3

Erina wrote:

Hey there~ From my mod for voice :3

Just some suggestions, feel free to apply what you want~

...isn't Chris from the second season? Isn't this song from the first season? lol, not that it matters I guess. shhhhhhhhhhhhhh ><

[Chris]
00:11:733 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like you could make a star-like pattern out of this easily (from the note positions), it'd look nice ehh i dont like stars
00:19:854 (6) - Consider changing into a single note and move to 156/112 its ok i think
00:25:158 (5) - This note feels kinda awkward, maybe better if overlap with end of 00:24:661 (4) - ? kinda causes a big jump though... it looks ok to me lol
00:38:418 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+j ctrl+h these sliders naaaah
00:58:307 (2,1) - Isn't this kinda hard to read? I never got it till I looked in the editor haha i can read this fine uhhhh >< testplayers too actually
01:19:025 (1) - Consider moving to 268/84, looks better with the sliders there okie

[Insane]
00:01:954 (3,4) - something about the positioning here is throwing my OCD off, consider moving 3 to 344/192 and 4 to 224/276 fixed stuff around but not exaaactly like urs
00:05:103 (1) - NC might be nice here considering the spacing difference yup
00:23:998 (1) - Consider something like this http://puu.sh/dZWK3/82fc44e14f.jpg, I feel like it flows better sure
00:35:269 (3) - Consider moving to 220/172, forming a triangle not exactly a triangle
00:37:258 (1,2) - Would be nice if there was some emphasis on the finish on the second slider, consider decreasing sv on slider 1? nah too random imo
01:11:069 (1) - sorry for nazi modding, but maybe move to 212/140 for perfect spacing on the triangle formed with 01:10:406 (4,5) - lol ok
01:20:683 (2,4) - consider moving to 348/268, looks better okie
01:22:837 (1) - Consider moving to 292/184 for perfect triangle okey

[Hard]
00:31:622 (7) - Consider moving to 168/40 then moving tail to 185/6 looks fine imo i-it's not like I'm not too lazy to change or anything b-baka!!
00:33:611 (6,7) - Consider ctrl+g, it's more interesting - although maybe too difficult to read? I'm not sure hmmm nah keep for now
01:14:550 (3) - Consider moving to 328/48, and then move 01:14:882 (4) - to 296/204, looks better imo uh ok

[Easy]
all fixed here!
00:14:385 (2,3) - Consider forming a diamond-like formation through blanketing like this: http://puu.sh/eabbT/9930321481.jpg, looks better imo
00:39:910 (1) - Move to 104/112 for a perfect triangle (i'm sorry my ocd kicks in sometimes ><)
01:24:163 (1) - Consider keeping the pattern consistent - current pattern sounds kinda off. Try this: http://puu.sh/eab0z/fa49e9fbfa.jpg

Didn't have too much to say, hope this is at least somewhat useful ><

Contact me later so we can confirm what you (and apparently Xinely) are going to sing!~

1. 00:25:324 - this should be drum clap.
2. 00:37:506 - slider slider end? cuz it ends on nothing eh
3. 00:20:683 (4) - could use NC here. cuz broken flow
4. 00:42:479 - map this (notorius and important) beat oout?
5. 00:47:202 (4) - tail should be drum clap.
6. ^same with 00:47:534 (5) - head. (btw reverse and tail are overhitsounded imo lol)
7. 01:03:611 (1) - drum finish? if you dislike soft finish.
8. 00:58:473 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - claps dont fit on several notes imo ><
9. 01:02:119 (7) - nc cuz new rhythm thing(?
10. 01:21:180 - it's a kick more than a snare i think heh. whistle instead of clap?

1. 00:18:031 (1,2) - 00:39:247 (1,2) - swap these NC, so you dont go up to 10 (and also makes more sense to me).
2. 00:33:611 (6,7) - ctrl g? feels cool
3. 00:36:097 (5) - NC cuz new rhythm thing?
4. 01:27:312 (2,3) - these can be placed on a more natural way. like this or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2950099

1. there is slightest delay in soft-hitclap and soft-slidertick2 , use this one instead for both hitsounds http://puu.sh/hdeFY/983f540a3a.wav

1. 00:05:103 (1,2,1) - I think flow would be better if you make angle of flow here a bit less sharp and make spacing consistent , place (2) at around x44 y176
2. 00:05:932 (2,4) - swap place of these two notes so the flow here 00:05:434 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be better , it nice to give some impact jumps at slider here 00:05:434 (1) -
3. 01:03:445 (3) - the flow here 01:03:114 (1,2,3,1) - can be a bit better if you adjust tail here a bit
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• hp 5 od 6 ?

1. 00:01:456 (4,5,6) - a bit tricky to read imo
2. 00:33:611 (6,7,8) - placing like this would make flow here 00:33:114 (5,6,7,8) - better imo
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3. 00:35:269 (2,3,4) - placing like this would make flow here 00:34:606 (1,2,3,4) - better imo
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4. 01:21:180 - whistle instead of clap ? sound better imo

1. 00:07:092 (6,7,8) - this rhythm sound better and more natural to play imo
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2. 00:09:744 (5,6,7) - this rhythm sound better and more natural to play imo
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3. 01:24:826 (2,3,4) - this rhythm sound better and more natural to play imo imo
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4. 01:27:810 (4,5) - I think these beat not really worth emphasis by stacking since it sound like same or something lol , I would stack if one of these sound emphasis more than the another so I suggest unstack this

• mmhhmm ... I think you can make some rhythm somehow a bit more simple by ignore vocal and follow the instrument mostly

1. 00:00:131 - to 00:05:103 - hmm..I think you can still try to emphasis some 1/1 here instead of 1/2 , it sound not that bad imo
   
   everything is fine for me here except the rhythm , maybe you can lower some 1/2 here lol
   I'm pretty aware about spread from easy to normal tho ;_; the spread is pretty low here while the other diffs spread is reasonable

CelsiusLK wrote:

oooooooooooooooooooo

gaia , you can call me back after fix those problems

rip

1. wtf why soft-hitwhistle wave looks like this lol
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2. widescreen checked in easy
3. combo colour 5 ( looks white ) might somehow blend with the bg a bit at some part which make it hard to see approach circle like p/4261080

1. 00:04:274 (2,3) - can lower spacing here a bit imo , high spacing just like previous notes feel a bit weird here , try move 00:04:440 (3) - to around x236 y216
2. 00:16:042 - to 00:26:484 - hmm I still think that you can decrease spacing here on some notes a bit more , I assume this is somehow sound like calm part so better not use too much long jumps here like 00:20:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 00:17:534 (2,3,4,5) - ,00:22:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . etc well your spacing actually looks nice on this 00:31:954 - which sound similiar like the part I mention lol
3. 00:37:258 (1) - the 3/4 slider here sound not that good imo , 1/2 would sound quite better , the emphasis on 00:37:589 (1) - would still sound nice eventhough you change this 00:37:258 (1) - to 1/2 slider also dq reason tho
4. 00:54:661 (2,3) - nazi lower spacing a bit would be nice , try move 00:54:992 (3) - to around x224 y184
5. 01:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - gap problem with hard diff here , I don't see hard use much 1/4 slider here so it better to convert some stream here to 1/4 repeat sldier , I would convert this 01:02:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - to 1/4 repeat slider
6. 01:14:716 (5,1) - spacing here should be a bit bigger than 01:14:550 (4,5) - but I guess it hard to do spacing thing here so just try do something with flow here kkk , try move (5) to around x176 y228 so flow would fit the song here better , 01:14:882 - is more emphasized than 01:14:716 (5) -

1. 00:01:456 (4,5) - mmhm I think it better to make spacing here looks like 00:04:108 (4,5) - since the beat here sound pretty much same lol

1. 00:10:075 - it sounda bit weird that you skip this beat , better map it since you actaully did map this on others part , try this rhythm
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• so the thing that I'm a bit concern is the overlap thing which also still looks hard for beginners to play eventhough ar is 4 , I still think it still have a bit slightly overlap from previous notes like 00:11:070 (2,4) - , 00:26:650 (1,3) - , 00:38:418 (3,5) - , 00:32:285 (2,4) - , etc so mmm would be better if you not do overlap like that and decrease ar to 3 so it suitable for beginners more imo in chorus part you didn't even use overlap which make it looks nice

1. 00:41:070 (2,3) - a full overlap like this is considered to be hard for beginner to play it properly