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Huajin - Aurora

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eveless
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eveless
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年8月14日 at 16:55:11

Artist: Huajin
Title: Aurora
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: Hatsune Miku
BPM: 110
Filesize: 2999kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.61 stars, 221 notes)
  2. Normal (2.69 stars, 138 notes)
Download: Huajin - Aurora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Quiet song
Last edited by eveless , edited 30 times in total.
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
good song nice map!
star!
SC_MSpark
4 posts
Joined October 2009
SC_MSpark
Good map .
Star XDDDD
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
yeah~ very good song.
so i decide to give you a star
NOIR-MADLAX
11 posts
Joined February 2010
NOIR-MADLAX
:) 星
SH_yuri
24 posts
Joined July 2009
SH_yuri
Star it~~~
XDDD
Kotono Yuuri
1 post
Joined June 2009
Kotono Yuuri
Stared~
- S
77 posts
Joined February 2010
- S
:D
Preiya
28 posts
Joined July 2009
Preiya
:) 星
lunarchild
348 posts
Joined March 2009
lunarchild
:3
wl8262
4 posts
Joined February 2009
wl8262
STAR
NanaDesu
NanaDesu
star :)
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
绿线：在音量和N,S转换的时候要提前加绿线
kiai ：加在这三个值上
[01:01:836]
[02:11:443]
[03:33:051]

Easy

[00:59:136] 最好开始在后面白线
[01:15:637] (2，3，4) 间距小了
[01:20:738] 向后一个白线

Normal

fine

Hard

[03:07:689] 这里有点突然

Clare

觉得note的new combo加的有点诡异。。不过还行吧

还不错，star
Asbel_old
5 posts
Joined February 2010
Asbel_old
FIGHT~~~~~I like VOCALOID~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello.
I love this song!!! :)
Thismap and skin is nice!

General
Artist: Hatsune Miku
Tags : add vocaloid and noboru P , please.(noboru P is composer.)

Easy
00:25:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Please shift to the right white line one.
I think , that the rhythm fit that way.
After , down 6 grid.
00:51:635 add note
01:20:438 (4) right 1 grid
01:20:738 add note

Normal
01:23:138 (1) finish next white line
01:39:040 (6) down 1 grid?
02:01:542 (5) left 1 grid?
02:02:742 (1,1,2,3,4) ^
02:18:043 (1) delete this spinner
Instead of , add note 02:18:043 and 02:18:334
after , add spinner or some sliders 02:18:644 - 02:19:844
03:39:652 (1) ^ same this pattern

Hard
oh!? There are overlapping note and slider. :o
This difficulty works in progress?
You must fix this problem.
00:22:232 (7,8,9,10,11,12) up 1 grid?

star☆
It is nice that you express the snow with notes. :D
Good luck. ;)
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

banvi wrote:

Hard
oh!? There are overlapping note and slider. :o
This difficulty works in progress?
You must fix this problem.
00:22:232 (7,8,9,10,11,12) up 1 grid?

star☆
It is nice that you express the snow with notes. :D
Good luck. ;)
hard is just have a problem,now correct it

thanks for modding
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
:) 先依照上一個mod post去修改Artist和Title (需要full-submit)

先star, 暫時不要kds XD mod完再給

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[General]
um...BPM為什麼不用100呢?
hitsound...音量大了點

[Easy]
slider tick rate 1? or mute slidertick...
00:42:934 (2) - 不太喜歡這個slider...
00:53:135 (1) - no clap
00:54:335 (3) - ^
01:02:136 (x) - add note?
01:20:438 (4) - 貼在slider結尾
01:21:038 (1) - 結束在01:23:759?


[Normal]
作為normal好像難了點...
01:18:638 (1) - 這一段跟隨vocal?
SPOILER
03:10:849 (3) - whistle?
03:11:449 (1) - ^
03:12:649 (1) - ^
03:13:849 (1) - ^
03:14:449 (3) - ^
03:15:649 (1) - 在slider開始whistle?
03:16:849 (3) - ^
03:18:049 (5) - ^
03:18:650 (1) - whistle?
03:19:850 (5) - ^
03:21:050 (2) - slider開始whistle?
03:22:250 (3) - whistle?
03:22:850 (5) - ^
03:23:450 (1) - ^
03:24:050 (3) - ^
03:24:650 (5) - ^
03:25:850 (1) - slider開始whistle
03:27:050 (3) - whistle
03:27:650 (5) - slider開始whistle
03:28:251 (1) - 這段像這樣放?
SPOILER
03:39:651 (1) - 在03:41:452結束
03:43:552 (1) - clap?
03:43:552 (1) - ^


[Hard]
03:20:150 (7) - clap?


[Clare]
Fine


Nice song, star
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Pokie wrote:

:) 先依照上一個mod post去修改Artist和Title (需要full-submit)

先star, 暫時不要kds XD mod完再給


Nice song, star
改完了~谢谢
Last edited by eveless , edited 1 time in total.
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

LKs wrote:

绿线：在音量和N,S转换的时候要提前加绿线
kiai ：加在这三个值上
[01:01:836]
[02:11:443]
[03:33:051]

Easy

[00:59:136] 最好开始在后面白线
[01:15:637] (2，3，4) 间距小了
[01:20:738] 向后一个白线

Normal

fine

Hard

[03:07:689] 这里有点突然

Clare

觉得note的new combo加的有点诡异。。不过还行吧

还不错，star
改完了~谢谢MOD~
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
作为Hard和Clare两难度BG的1.png大小大于1M，这个是不被允许的，请把它压到1M以内。另这两个BG最好都弄到1024*768的标准格式。
当想要在slider的音上加hitsounds时，不要图省事而直接选择slider去点音效，这也会改变slider滑动时的音效。
tag里请加上vocaloid（source里虽然有vocaloid2但在搜索vocaloid时是搜不到你的map的。
各难度有不少微小的spacing错误，有很多我可能没写出来，但建议自己多看一看，或者找个足够细致的modder（毕竟是4分钟4难度）来帮你查一查。
offset: got about -5，但是因为数很小，所以也可以忽视，但是或许测试的结果对你有参考意义
灰色不建议作为combo color使用，原因是和failed（MP时）容易混淆，但出于你使用的皮肤，还算好。。。还是提出这点。
一般来讲不要选这么长的曲（或者也可以截，4分长度在你找modder和去rank时都是一定阻碍。


[Easy]
map的长度有点过短了，我并不是觉得一定要map full song的人，但是只1/3不太说的过去。另就是略难，多用点slider吧。正常的情况下，Easy中Slider的数量不会比circl少太多（而且好像算个趋势？）
00:22:832 (5,1) - spacing.
00:24:632 (3) - 我猜你本意是在2正上方的？左一格。
00:34:233 (3,4,5) - 左下一格可以和1对称位。
00:43:234 (2,3) - 略远了吧？
00:45:634 (4,1) - 哇，好鬼畜。
00:48:635 (4,5) - 这里的节奏听的不太顺，我建议是4 end在5的位置，5再往后1/2开始，试试看？
00:51:935 (4) - 右一格放到3正下？而且为什么你之后也都是喜欢错一格放。。。
00:59:436 (1) - 这对Easy来说太短了。建议删
kiai提前结束吧，多那么多无意义。

[Normal]
仍然是建议加多slider的数量，其实有很多地方可以用它替换circles的。另外这个难度也是过难（体现在长串circle上），Normal+ = =
00:29:433 (7,1) - spacing.
01:23:438 (1) - 这里之后。。。kiai里面还包含break很那啥。。。请提前结束kiai.
01:51:341 (2,3) - spacing.
02:11:443 (4) - 我觉得该new combo
02:18:043 (1) - 结束点往后放1/4
03:30:051 (6,1) - switch new combo
03:30:651 (1,2,3) - 向左拉出一个折返slider来代替它，因为在这样叠的情况下玩Normal的人很难看出3/4拍的节奏。
03:36:051 (3) - nazi，右一格。
03:52:253 (1,1) - slider后1/2就开始note是绝对不明智的，尤其这只是个Normal.
03:57:353 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
我觉得鬼畜是手段不是目的，这个难度做的太过了。另外，你的复制粘贴用的有些多。
HP Drain Rate-1, Overall Difficulty -1.
00:21:032 (1,2,3) - 这三个音建议用个slider替换，因为玩家很难在一开始就知道自己该按多快。
00:26:582 (4,5) - 这里没有叠好。
00:51:635 (4,5) - 自重。
01:21:038 (1) - 这个之后可以停止kiai了，和break重上很悲剧。
02:14:143 (4,5) - 重叠问题。
03:49:553 (1,2,3,4) - 这间距无理。

[Clare]
和这个难度一比你就知道Hard处于何等尴尬的位置……能FC Hard的人绝对能消耗一半或更少的PC就FC Clare难度拿到两倍的分数。另就是这个难度复制粘贴痕迹也太重。虽然我很能理解map一个4分钟歌何等悲剧，但是……我不用说了吧，这给别人的观感并不好
need more hitsounds.
00:33:183 (1) - 往右一格对到之前1的正下？
01:02:136 (1,2,3) - 我不喜欢这个节奏，一般压在vocal另一半没有，感觉不伦不类。第二个kiai的第一处就比这个好
02:17:143 (5,6) - 或许6的倾斜度和5相同感觉更好。
02:52:247 (5,6,7) - 全部new combo，这个阶段note出现速度接济不上掉血速度，需要填补。
03:52:103 - 03:54:053 填点什么（spinner？）要么就插个break吧，不过我讨厌这种无谓的短break
04:01:854 (1) - 要消音请在之前加条绿线消，不要和kiai结束线混。

need more work but have my star now.
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
修改好了~
你是不試改了什麼 我這邊的都不能更新了OTL 我這還是舊的改過來的 song setup記得都改一樣的

Download: hatsune miku - snow white is (eveless) [Clare].osu
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Clare wrote:

修改好了~
你是不試改了什麼 我這邊的都不能更新了OTL 我這還是舊的改過來的 song setup記得都改一樣的
改了名字啊- -囧OTL
嘛只能等明天回去再说了

NatsumeRin wrote:

need more work but have my star now.
FIXED~谢谢~
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
嘛~幫你MOD一下

首先你的BG沒有上傳上來...改了圖片要用full submit
Easy

一點建議
00:24:632 (3) - remove clap然後在00:25:532 (1) 加上clap
01:06:036 (1) - add clap,然後01:06:336 (2) remove clap
01:08:436 (6) - add clap
01:09:637 (2) - remove clap
01:16:837 (1) - add clap

Normal

00:22:232 (5) - 這個來回的Slider把頭跟尾巴的clap留著剩下的刪掉
00:25:232 (1) - remove clap
00:27:032 (6) - 尾巴的clap刪掉
00:29:433 (7) - ^
00:30:633 (1,2,3,4) - 把2,4的clap換到1,2
00:31:833 (5) - 尾巴的clap刪掉
00:34:233 (5) - ^
00:35:733 (2) -頭的clap刪掉
00:36:333 (3) - remove clap
00:36:633 (4) - 尾巴的clap刪掉
00:38:133 (1) - remove clap
00:47:134 (1) - 這個slider移動到00:47:434然後加個note, 02:56:747 (1) 這裡也是
00:56:735 (1) - 頭的clap刪掉
00:57:635 (3) - 尾巴的clap刪掉
01:00:936 (2) - remove clap
01:51:041 (1) - ^
01:53:441 (3) - 尾巴加上clap
02:00:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把clap全部換到白線上
02:02:742 (1) - 頭尾clap都刪掉 留中間的
02:03:942 (1) - ^
02:06:342 (1) - 頭的clap刪掉
02:07:842 (3) - 尾巴的clap刪掉
02:10:243 (1,2,3) - remove clap
02:15:043 (5) - 頭的clap刪掉
02:18:043 (1) - 延長到02:19:844, and remove clap
02:24:944 (1) - remove clap
02:27:944 (1,2) - ^
02:29:145 (4) - ^
02:30:645 (1) - 這裡加上個note然後spin從02:30:945開始
02:51:047 (X) - 加個note
02:51:347 (1,2) - remove clap
03:00:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 照前面的方式下clap
03:32:151 (2,3) - remove clap
03:36:651 (5) - 頭的clap刪掉
03:40:252 (1) - 頭的clap刪掉,要不然跟前面的一樣在紅線上加clap
03:52:253 (1) - remove clap
03:56:153 (2,3,4) - ^
03:57:353 (1) - ^
04:00:654 (1,2,3) - ^

Hard

哇靠...你的slider全疊在一起了喔...問題大概是在綠線上你的2倍是不是沒了,如果一次改很多綠線的話要注意他們的bpm倍數是否都一樣不然你一改全部的bpm倍數都會變成一樣的

Clare

fine
嘛 我的diff嘛XDDD

MOD完才想到...你是不是還沒上傳....
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

Clare wrote:

嘛~幫你MOD一下

首先你的BG沒有上傳上來...改了圖片要用full submit


MOD完才想到...你是不是還沒上傳....
搞定XD......趴倒......
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) 在normal和easy中的白色notes有點難被看到，特別是在kiai time時

[Easy]
總覺得這難度裏的clap很亂... 可以弄得有規律一點嗎？ (例如在每2條白線，就加一個clap)
00:51:635 (x) 在這加一個note?
00:55:235 (5) 建議你把它拉下一點，碰到HP BAR了 (雖然大部份人也會忽視我這種建議)

[Normal]
00:20:976 刪除這timing section，把這些音量改變套用在紅色timing section上 (00:18:63)
00:21:032 (1,2,3) check spacing
00:47:434 (1) 若可以的話，拉下一點...
01:20:438 (1) 在01:22:838終止
01:23:438 (1) 在01:23:288開始? 並在01:25:838停止 (因此你可能要改一改kiai time 終止的時間)
01:57:041 (1) 拉下一點...?
03:10:19 這個timing section的音量改變實在太少了-_-，要不就改明顯一點，要不就刪除它好了。

[Hard]
這個Hard的jump程度是insane級的吧 囧!?
00:20:976 刪除這timing section，把這些音量改變套用在紅色timing section上 (00:18:63)
01:00:536 無意義的timing section?
01:25:357 這timing section不是有問題... 只是我不明白為何沒有hitobject, 但BPM卻要X2 囧
01:50:941 音量變化太小的timing section, 增加幅度? 刪除?
02:00:24 ^
03:18:349 (6) 囧, 灰色的note在灰綠色的背景上，還要放到角落裏，使我看不到這個note，直接按(1)了 (可能是個人問題)
03:31:751 無意義的timing section?
03:55:703 (2,3) spacing? 這堆重疊的都是1/4 notes，怎料2和3之間竟然不是
04:00:504 (2,3) ^

[Clare]
00:34:083 (6,7,8,9) 囧, 白色notes放在白色背景上就不要重疊得這麼亂....完全迷惘了
02:56:90 無意義timing section?
03:08:90 ^
03:31:85 ^
03:25:250 (5) 分不清這是否slider,因為被(4)的hit300覆蓋了


除了在testing時不斷擔心看不見在白色背景上的白色notes外，其他都很不錯~! star~
P.S. 我用no video的
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless
嘛HITSOUND的问题改了.......
NOTES颜色的问题......唔因为想凸显白色所以才用了白色（毕竟是白雪公主嘛XD
总而言之有选择的FIXED了- -
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • BPM: 100 // Offset: 18640 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

  • • Slider Tick Rate: 2
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
eveless

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • BPM: 100 // Offset: 18640 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

  • • Slider Tick Rate: 2
fixed~thank you~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
Nice skin

1) You need approachcircle.png
2) The spinner-metre is ugly~

[Easy]
00:22:840 (5) - Move backward to blue tick and extend. And then stack with 4?
It's sound like this object are following vocal
00:23:440 (1) - Move backward to blue tick and stack with 5 at the end?
00:51:640 (x) - Add note here?
00:58:840 (4,5,6,1) - Make a square pattern?
01:19:240 (3) - Cut short this slider to white tick and add note at 01:20:140?

[Normal]
00:25:240 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:25:540 (2) - New combo?
00:50:740 (1) - Overlapped by previous slider is not good, IMO
01:56:140 (x) - Add note here?
02:18:040 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
02:30:940 (1) - Clap looks awful.....
03:52:240 (1) - Move backward to blue tick and extend?

[Hard]
Lots of jump D:

00:21:040 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider?
00:21:640 (2) - ^
00:47:140 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
01:21:040 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:25:690?
01:56:740 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
02:56:740 (1) - ^
03:19:540 (5) - Delete this? It's not following vocal~

[Clare]
02:30:790 (B) - The breaks are too long, OMG

Good song
STAR
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
歌和图都很不错~

[Easy]
00:22:840 - Clap?
01:02:440 (5) - ^
01:07:240 (4) - ^

[Normal]
hitsound稍显混乱,尽量统一它们,像最后一段kiai那样会比较好~
01:01:840 (1) ~ 01:23:440 (1) - 这段怎么就没hitsound了?
01:47:440 (2,3,4,5,1) - 往下一格?
01:49:540 (4) - 往右一格往下一格?
01:49:840 (5) - 往下一格?
02:18:040 (1) - 在02:19:690结束?
02:30:640 (7) - 去掉,把后面的spin往前移?

[Hard]
整个难度跳的太厉害,不太符合hard的要求,spin也用的过多了.

[Clare]
需要hitsound~

Have a star~!
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