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kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-05-27T08:25:37+00:00

歌和图都很不错~

[Easy]
00:22:840 - Clap?
01:02:440 (5) - ^
01:07:240 (4) - ^

[Normal]
hitsound稍显混乱,尽量统一它们,像最后一段kiai那样会比较好~
01:01:840 (1) ~ 01:23:440 (1) - 这段怎么就没hitsound了?
01:47:440 (2,3,4,5,1) - 往下一格?
01:49:540 (4) - 往右一格往下一格?
01:49:840 (5) - 往下一格?
02:18:040 (1) - 在02:19:690结束?
02:30:640 (7) - 去掉,把后面的spin往前移?

[Hard]
整个难度跳的太厉害,不太符合hard的要求,spin也用的过多了.

[Clare]
需要hitsound~

Have a star~!

eveless

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Topic Starter

eveless 2010-05-27T09:28:47+00:00

all fixed~

SamiPale

766 posts

Joined October 2009

SamiPale 2010-06-03T15:36:08+00:00

[General]
将combocolor设置成全部难度一致，在记事本里改
你的难度加一点finish会更好

[Normal]
03:30:040(1) - 在Normal难度下不要玩这么阴的...
03:37:840(2) - 只在这里听到连续两个clap，其他都是单clap，最好放多点让人感觉到有双clap这种节奏的存在

[jumping]
00:47:140(1) - 这里换成circle然后spinner迟一个1/2不好么?
00:58:090(3) - 叠得太丑了...叠在(2)的正上方会好看点
01:18:640(1,2,3,4,5) - 作为jump本身就难读，还突然从跟vocal变成不跟vocal会让人很迷惑的
01:42:190(6) - 这里New Combo会给人更加易读
01:56:740(1) - 同00:47:140
02:10:240(1,2,3,4) - 能等距么..
02:22:090(4) - New Combo会好看点
02:27:490(2) - slider直线好看点...
02:56:740(1) - 同00:47:140
03:03:340(2) - 远过头了吧...
03:18:340(6) - ...
03:19:540(5) - 这二连用得很不合音乐..最好改掉
03:40:990(5,6) - slider后一个1/4改成三连
03:49:540(1,2,3,4) - 太近了，本身是平均间距这么远的难度这里的间距会给人一种1/4的错觉

很多脱离distance spacing的摆放都是肉眼都能看得出来不等距的，修一下吧

[Clare]
把分数压到1500w以下，不然就尽量找好人BAT
01:10:240(7,8,9,10,11) - ugly jump,也没new combo
01:11:740(1,2,3) - 古怪的节奏
01:47:890(1) - 不要叠
01:52:840(6) - new combo
01:57:040(7) - ^
02:14:140(7) - ^
02:21:340(1,2,3) - 同01:11:740
03:21:340(1,2,3) - 你至少Ctrl+C+V了三次...
03:42:940(1,2,3) - 四次...
03:54:040(1,2,3,4,5) - 古怪的节奏

勤奋点啊亲爱的Clare同学，在排版跟音效上下点功夫你的图就很不错了，不过6月底GDM又有新碟出了估计你也没时间去研究了吧XD(说笑

==============
虽然赶作业赶得好困没有很认真地去mod..不过也有这么多东西可以指出来，说明这图还有很多kudosu可以分给人啊 ._.
高难度需要更多有用的mod，低难度还有些nazi spacing可以修的，自己也可以去检查下
hitsound还有很大的进步空间

lqz2004

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lqz2004 2010-06-17T09:49:26+00:00

very good map

ken710

145 posts

Joined February 2009

ken710 2010-06-20T09:23:42+00:00

star~

Selee

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Selee 2010-07-12T18:49:04+00:00

*

miku

186 posts

Joined March 2009

miku 2010-07-16T00:16:20+00:00

i love miku XD

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-08-05T00:42:04+00:00

[General]:

结束一个电子琴音也压一下会不错然后用随便什么把末尾空白加长5秒左右

[Normal]:

00:57:092 (1) - 和00:52:729 (1,2)一样做成note+slider?
01:39:638 (1,2,3,4) - 这串whistle和鼓点反掉了
没有KIAI么?

[Hard]:

STR感觉2就足够了
00:53:001 (T) - 建议这里开始KIAI

Hoshi~

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-05T04:16:25+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:
结束一个电子琴音也压一下会不错然后用随便什么把末尾空白加长5秒左右
本来是懒得弄的...嘛>_>压就压吧

[Normal]:
00:57:092 (1) - 和00:52:729 (1,2)一样做成note+slider?
01:39:638 (1,2,3,4) - 这串whistle和鼓点反掉了
没有KIAI么?讨厌KIAI>_>
[Hard]:
STR感觉2就足够了
00:53:001 (T) - 建议这里开始KIAI
Hoshi~

thanks

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-08-05T04:23:18+00:00

讨厌KIAI居然在Hard里就有 lol

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-05T04:38:15+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
讨厌KIAI居然在Hard里就有 lol

>_>忘了删

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-08-06T14:11:12+00:00

[General]
BPM 110.004, offset 2888

[Normal]
00:50:886 (1) - 结束早一拍.(如果觉得太短那把开始时间也提早点)
00:54:977 (5) - 我觉得是头whistle尾normal好于现在...
00:59:340 (5) - ^
01:01:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - oxoxx
01:23:066 (2) - 尾音whitle消掉.
01:53:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - oxoxx
02:12:428 (5) - 首音whistle

[Hard]
对于tick rate 4疑问比较大..(虽然听觉效果不错)
01:22:794 (6,7,8) - 右一/右一/右二
01:27:430 (1,2,3,5) - 不知道接受程度如何...
01:47:066 - SB sound..?改时间.其他地方的也相同
综合的话可说的不多了...慢到找hitsounds感觉很无聊...我稍微懒点吧...

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-06T14:38:18+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
BPM 110.004, offset 2888 哦耶.....

[Normal]
00:50:886 (1) - 结束早一拍.(如果觉得太短那把开始时间也提早点)
00:54:977 (5) - 我觉得是头whistle尾normal好于现在...
00:59:340 (5) - ^
01:01:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - oxoxx
01:23:066 (2) - 尾音whitle消掉.
01:53:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - oxoxx
02:12:428 (5) - 首音whistle

fixed

[Hard]
对于tick rate 4疑问比较大..(虽然听觉效果不错)事实上是你偶像推荐我4的:D
01:22:794 (6,7,8) - 右一/右一/右二
01:27:430 (1,2,3,5) - 不知道接受程度如何...
01:47:066 - SB sound..?改时间.其他地方的也相同
综合的话可说的不多了...慢到找hitsounds感觉很无聊...我稍微懒点吧...你可以再懒一点

thanks~

sveta-insane

114 posts

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sveta-insane 2010-08-06T15:02:11+00:00

STAR!

vivicat

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vivicat 2010-08-06T15:25:46+00:00

[Aramary]

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[Aramary] 2010-08-06T19:21:44+00:00

bpm offset
110 2850
110 18120

折中取了> <

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-06T19:40:20+00:00

[Aramary] wrote:
bpm offset
110 2850
110 18120

折中取了> <

> < thanks

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-08-07T22:28:48+00:00

Normal

- 整體不錯O.O 而且星數也沒超...音效也放的很好;_;
- 提高slidertick?

00:50:574 (1) - 有點微妙...
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡也是微妙...原本應該要跟1/4拍的吧;_; 這樣子變相搶拍了, 而且後面也有幾處地方有同樣狀況...
01:07:483 (5) - 早1/2拍結束?
01:23:029 (2) - 折返取消whistle?
01:29:574 (3) - 結尾被(2)蓋住一半...不太美觀
01:36:392 (1) - 這裡我覺得修改成這樣的節奏比較容易一點 ;_;

01:55:483 (1,2,3) - 先不管1/4拍, 這樣的排列配低OA不太好讀
02:11:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - 稍微錯開? 一直線的不好點O.O

Hard

- note稍亂了些, 跟這麼柔的音樂不太搭._.
- 所有SB音效整體下降10?

00:41:574 (7) - new combo? > 00:41:847 (1) - 取消new combo
01:06:938 (5,1) - 這兩個連接有點勉強, 試試去掉其中一個再修整
01:27:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - Q_Q 啊啊啊啊
01:38:029 (6) - 位置有點尷尬
02:10:210 (x) - 加circle?
02:19:210, 02:19:483, 02:19:756 - 都補個note做收尾, 另外音量跟著淡出O.O?

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-08T06:31:13+00:00

Pokie wrote:
Normal
- 整體不錯O.O 而且星數也沒超...音效也放的很好;_;
- 提高slidertick?
00:50:574 (1) - 有點微妙...
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡也是微妙...原本應該要跟1/4拍的吧;_; 這樣子變相搶拍了, 而且後面也有幾處地方有同樣狀況...
01:07:483 (5) - 早1/2拍結束?
01:23:029 (2) - 折返取消whistle?
01:29:574 (3) - 結尾被(2)蓋住一半...不太美觀>_>故意的
01:36:392 (1) - 這裡我覺得修改成這樣的節奏比較容易一點 ;_; [attachment=0:58c88]007.jpg[/attachment:58c88]
01:55:483 (1,2,3) - 先不管1/4拍, 這樣的排列配低OA不太好讀
02:11:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - 稍微錯開? 一直線的不好點O.O

fixed~

Hard
- note稍亂了些, 跟這麼柔的音樂不太搭._.
- 所有SB音效整體下降10?
fixed
00:41:574 (7) - new combo? > 00:41:847 (1) - 取消new combofixed
01:06:938 (5,1) - 這兩個連接有點勉強, 試試去掉其中一個再修整fixed
01:27:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - Q_Q 啊啊啊啊这个再看看其他反应好了>_>
01:38:029 (6) - 位置有點尷尬
02:10:210 (x) - 加circle?
02:19:210, 02:19:483, 02:19:756 - 都補個note做收尾, 另外音量跟著淡出O.O?0.0那边不想加note呢...

thanks for pokie's mod~

subarasikibuta

559 posts

Joined May 2009

subarasikibuta 2010-08-08T06:45:33+00:00

好好听

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-08-08T08:28:55+00:00

[NM]
00:31:892 - 好空……要不加个Break time?
01:21:392 (1) - 好微妙……延长1/4拍?

[HD]
slider tick=4……怎么那么高觉得好奇怪
00:43:210 (6) - 稍微拉左边一点与4 5 对齐
01:23:029 (7) - 拉左1格
01:33:392 (4) - New combo
01:50:574 (3) - 直接复制2?
01:56:301 (2) - 直接复制1

Star

roflninja

348 posts

Joined October 2009

roflninja 2010-08-08T09:27:57+00:00

Hi,

how about adding a spinner on both difs from 02:18:938 to 02:20:301 that fades out with the music?

[normal]
00:36:938 (6) - end 1 tick earlier (00:37:210) or remove (7) and extend to were (7) ends?
01:21:392 (1) - sounds better imo if you end it at 01:22:483
01:30:938 (1) - sounds better imo if you end at 01:31:210

[hard]
00:53:574 (2) - not a big deal, but isnt this a bit to far from (1)'s end?
02:08:301 (3) - not to fond of the overlap, but its fine

awsome map

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-08T11:31:03+00:00

3kinnagi wrote:
好好听

谢谢星星XD

yangzd88 wrote:
[NM]
00:31:892 - 好空……要不加个Break time?
01:21:392 (1) - 好微妙……延长1/4拍?哈哈哈...（汗之前pokie叫我改slider tick的时候忘了检查>_>

[HD]
slider tick=4……怎么那么高觉得好奇怪额...别人推荐的
00:43:210 (6) - 稍微拉左边一点与4 5 对齐
01:23:029 (7) - 拉左1格
01:33:392 (4) - New combo
01:50:574 (3) - 直接复制2?
01:56:301 (2) - 直接复制1

Star

fixed

roflninja wrote:
Hi,

how about adding a spinner on both difs from 02:18:938 to 02:20:301 that fades out with the music? thanks

[normal]
00:36:938 (6) - end 1 tick earlier (00:37:210) or remove (7) and extend to were (7) ends?
01:21:392 (1) - sounds better imo if you end it at 01:22:483
01:30:938 (1) - sounds better imo if you end at 01:31:210 my mistake

[hard]
00:53:574 (2) - not a big deal, but isnt this a bit to far from (1)'s end?
02:08:301 (3) - not to fond of the overlap, but its fine

awsome map

fixed,thanks

Neethime

168 posts

Joined May 2010

Neethime 2010-08-08T17:32:06+00:00

moe moe E姐

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]

虽然你说从音效包里取的,但是这个soft-hitwhistle.wav和默认的whistle音效事实上是完全相同的,请看Audition波形比对.
所以,干掉它吧

[Normal]

为何不用Hard那样的自定义clap?还是统一一下比较好吧?
00:50:847 (1) - 这个spinner快了点,也许在前面加一拍长度
00:59:301 (5) - 1 grid up.

[Hard]

作为Hard来说DS设的有些过大，不过可以是可以啦
00:41:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有没有觉得这样更好看?
00:55:756 (1) - 去除new combo
00:57:120 (3) - new combo
01:42:665 (6) - ^

果断给星

jameskong1

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jameskong1 2010-08-08T17:34:00+00:00

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-08T18:05:06+00:00

Neethime wrote:
;)moe moe E姐

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]

虽然你说从音效包里取的,但是这个soft-hitwhistle.wav和默认的whistle音效事实上是完全相同的,请看Audition波形比对.
所以,干掉它吧干就干>_>

[Normal]

为何不用Hard那样的自定义clap?还是统一一下比较好吧?想了下还是没统一...
00:50:847 (1) - 这个spinner快了点,也许在前面加一拍长度
00:59:301 (5) - 1 grid up.

[Hard]

作为Hard来说DS设的有些过大，不过可以是可以啦
00:41:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有没有觉得这样更好看? 我等人发现这个问题等了很久lol
00:55:756 (1) - 去除new combo
00:57:120 (3) - new combo
01:42:665 (6) - ^
fixed
果断给星

果断thanks

James2250

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James2250 2010-08-09T17:14:50+00:00

Good enough to be ranked in my opinion
but have a star

soulfear

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soulfear 2010-08-09T21:20:55+00:00

GOOD!但是这歌我比较喜欢MIKU的原音...

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-09T22:27:24+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Good enough to be ranked in my opinion
but have a star

thanks for your star

soulfear wrote:
GOOD!但是这歌我比较喜欢MIKU的原音...

额...这歌miku的原音有点...杯具

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2010-08-10T10:54:14+00:00

As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Can you find a better background?

[Easy]
01:03:529 (2) - I suggest you to make 1, 2, and 3 become a slider with 1 repeat on the blue tick. A single blue tick note is too hard for the easiest diff in this map.
01:21:392 (1) - Its shape is not perfect ;__;
02:18:938 (1) - Could you silence this using custom hitsound?
01:55:892 (2) - I suggest you to make 1, 2, and 3 become a slider with 1 repeat on the blue tick. A single blue tick note is too hard for the easiest diff in this map.

[Hard]
-- Did you map the song with distance snap button enabled? I found you use the 0.7x distance snap while the whole map using 1.5x. Even there are some 0.7x distances.
-- The only problem is the spacing. It's way too wide compared with the queit and relaxing song.

Star.

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-10T11:34:27+00:00

VanMoNky wrote:
As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Can you find a better background? i'm so sorry that i can't becuz this is the original one of the song;_;

[Easy]
01:03:529 (2) - I suggest you to make 1, 2, and 3 become a slider with 1 repeat on the blue tick. A single blue tick note is too hard for the easiest diff in this map.fixed
01:21:392 (1) - Its shape is not perfect ;__;fixed
02:18:938 (1) - Could you silence this using custom hitsound?ok.
01:55:892 (2) - I suggest you to make 1, 2, and 3 become a slider with 1 repeat on the blue tick. A single blue tick note is too hard for the easiest diff in this map.fixed

[Hard]
-- Did you map the song with distance snap button enabled? I found you use the 0.7x distance snap while the whole map using 1.5x. Even there are some 0.7x distances.hmmm...not 0.7x distance but 0.5 BPM;_;
-- The only problem is the spacing. It's way too wide compared with the queit and relaxing song.hmmm...
Star.

thanks for you mod~

soulfear

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Joined January 2010

soulfear 2010-08-10T19:40:34+00:00

就是喜欢MIKU声音的那种忧伤感...

Takuma

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Takuma 2010-08-14T02:22:37+00:00

Cute map. XD

Offset: 18,138 ms seems more suitable to me.

For Hard, the slidertick rate may be too much. Maybe change to 2?

Here's a star.

eveless

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Topic Starter

eveless 2010-08-14T08:58:01+00:00

Takuma wrote:
Cute map. XD

Offset: 18,138 ms seems more suitable to me.

For Hard, the slidertick rate may be too much. Maybe change to 2?

Here's a star.

Fixed Thank you XD