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t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (P*Light Remix) [OsuM

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Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

Hi mod as requested via pm~

[General]


wut?/ itu yg di BG kaneki-kun dayone? x_x

Novice Lv.6 nya terlalu mudah icon nya juga masih easy usahain sampe blue icon Normal icon


[Advance Lv.12]


00:19:060 (19060|3,19317|2) - delete

00:19:403 add
[Another Lv.14]


wew ini 2 note 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - padahal sounds nya sama kaya ini - > 00:11:946 & 00:12:289 etc.
00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - kurangin 1 note atau tambah 1 note di setiap garis putih.

00:16:531 (16531|3) - delete, lalu move 00:16:489 (16489|2) - ke 00:16:660 col 4

00:17:860 (17860|1) - delete, no sound here

00:18:031 (18031|0,18117|1) - ctrl + J

00:19:831 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3021596 better

00:21:546 add 2 note

00:21:717 add

00:21:889 add 2 note

00:22:060 add

sisanya tolong di re-pettern lg ya kurangin jack2 nya :v

okay sorry cuma bisa mod segitu :D :D
oiya, butuh 4k Extra? mungkin gw bisa bantu buatin GD :)
Good luck~
okee
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
i am so sorry.. :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: . oke i call you if i need help on SB :o
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,978 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Rivals_7 wrote:

Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
i am so sorry :cry: :cry: :cry:
Rido
812 posts
Joined April 2014
Rido
Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bakabakemono wrote:

Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
Ga bermaksud maling kak :cry: :cry:
SPAS-ID
126 posts
Joined June 2014
SPAS-ID
MOD

NOVICE
- NO MOD -

ADVANCED

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460

EXHAUST
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )

Storyboard
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!

EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

SPAS-ID wrote:

MOD

NOVICE
- NO MOD -

ADVANCED

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460

EXHAUST
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )

Storyboard
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!

EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy

Thanks :)
Kagu-chan
476 posts
Joined October 2012
Kagu-chan
Hi, sorry for delay, was way busy xD

Please refer this tool result (ignore SB isuue here since this map has a SB inside)
AI
Comparing:
	t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [NOVICE Lv.6].osu
	t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [ADVANCED Lv.12].osu
	t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [EXHAUST Lv.14].osu

Check some necessary data...
No issues found

General check for NOVICE Lv.6
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for ADVANCED Lv.12
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for EXHAUST Lv.14
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

Metadata check...
No issues found

Analyze MP3 File - this may take a while...

FileName => Kick-ass Kungfu (PLight Remix).mp3
FileSize => 3.0 MB
AudioBitrate => 192 kbps
Duration => 0:02:09
Duration in MS => 129000

Check for issues in MP3...
No issues found

Check Timings...
You used 1 timing section(s) and 9 inherited section(s)
KIAI-Time in NOVICE Lv.6 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in ADVANCED Lv.12 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in EXHAUST Lv.14 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%

Checking Hitobjects...
NOVICE Lv.6 [4K]
	This Diff contains 377 Hitobjects (Short Note: 359, Long Note: 18)
		 77 on Row 1 (20.42%)
		113 on Row 2 (29.97%)
		116 on Row 3 (30.77%)
		 71 on Row 4 (18.83%)

ADVANCED Lv.12 [4K]
	This Diff contains 603 Hitobjects (Short Note: 571, Long Note: 32)
		134 on Row 1 (22.22%)
		146 on Row 2 (24.21%)
		165 on Row 3 (27.36%)
		158 on Row 4 (26.20%)

EXHAUST Lv.14 [4K]
	This Diff contains 920 Hitobjects (Short Note: 901, Long Note: 19)
		166 on Row 1 (18.04%)
		313 on Row 2 (34.02%)
		248 on Row 3 (26.96%)
		193 on Row 4 (20.98%)

You should try to fix the balancing - ive checked since ive seen that it could be a bit... off xD
On ADV-Diff its OK i guess ;)
Also i want to point out that Jacks are only allowed for Diffs lower than 150 BPM OR higher diffs - So please consider changing and removing Jacks in NOV diff since there not fitting too.

If you fixed this issues please PM me again for normal mod, thanks ;)
bilqiscutee
766 posts
Joined January 2014
bilqiscutee
[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)
SPAS-ID
126 posts
Joined June 2014
SPAS-ID
Little Mod

Its Gotta Be A Mod What Do U Expect ?
1. 01:16:060 - 01:17:089 Please Make It 0.5 , 1.25 I Looks Really Wierd If U're Using 0.45 , 1 -_- Applies For Other SV ( EXH )
2.Why Theres No Stairs ? Cmon
3. Make The Note On EXH Looks Like This 01:21:203 (81203|0,81203|2,81203|1,81546|1,81546|0,81546|2,81889|3,81889|1,81889|2,82231|2,82231|3,82231|1) - Not This 01:26:689 (86689|3,86689|1,86860|0,87031|3,87031|1,87203|0,87374|3,87374|1,87546|0,87717|3,87717|1) -
4. I Can Make A Storyboard For This Map Tho
5. Change BG name into BG.png FFS !
Last edited by SPAS-ID , edited 1 time in total.
Rifkymarcelio
26 posts
Joined September 2014
Rifkymarcelio
GD In progress bro.. semua 7k
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)

Okey :)
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ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Rifkymarcelio wrote:

GD In progress bro.. semua 7k

sip gans
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
i'm sorry for the troubble
but i have to stop my GD cuz i don't have time to manage it anymore :o

sorry bro harus drop nih GD
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Frim4503 wrote:

i'm sorry for the troubble
but i have to stop my GD cuz i don't have time to manage it anymore :o

sorry bro harus drop nih GD
yaah :o :o yaudah deh gpp :o :o :?
SPAS-ID
126 posts
Joined June 2014
SPAS-ID
SBnya dah ampe 1:30 kok tenang aja
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

SPAS-ID wrote:

SBnya dah ampe 1:30 kok tenang aja
slow :v
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
hi :3
untuk penamaan diff coba lihat thread ini => t/178700
karena ini penamaan diffnya berdasarkan SDVX, jadi urutannya harusnya BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, INFINITE
jadi kalo dari BASIC langsung lompat ke ADVANCED kan aneh.
tapi kayaknya sih kau lagi nunggu GD NOVICE... :v
gud luck deh. Cuma mau bilang itu aja...
btw mod later. biar sekalian sama NOVICE nya ;)
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Fantastica wrote:

hi :3
untuk penamaan diff coba lihat thread ini => t/178700
karena ini penamaan diffnya berdasarkan SDVX, jadi urutannya harusnya BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, INFINITE
jadi kalo dari BASIC langsung lompat ke ADVANCED kan aneh.
tapi kayaknya sih kau lagi nunggu GD NOVICE... :v
gud luck deh. Cuma mau bilang itu aja...
btw mod later. biar sekalian sama NOVICE nya ;)

ooh iya kak . lagi nunggu GD dari kamu.. :3 NOVICE hehe :v
Raediaufar
879 posts
Joined November 2014
Raediaufar
From this very awesome queue and also crying pming me want me and Gomuryuu to mod this map

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

[General]
BG size diubah jadi 1366 x 768
Gap dari ADV Lv. 12 ke Kuki ADV Lv.12 lebih gede dari gap Kuki ADV Lv.12 ke EXH Lv.14 heleh.. ADV Lv. 12 nya ubah jadi diff. NOVICE Lv.8, 9 atau 10
Tambah Kuki sama yang bikin SB ke tag kamu (dan kalo ada GD lain juga)
Kek nya ini udah.. Urutan diff kamu harusnya Basic - Novice - Advanced - Exhaust - dan kalo ada yang lebih sulit pake nama Infinite
sungkem minta maaf ke KK

[Basic]
00:01:660 (1660|3) – move 2 for balance
00:05:774 (5774|1,6117|2,6460|0,6803|3,7146|1,7489|2) – considering to change this part into this http://puu.sh/hlPnn/50ccf1ce30.jpg for hand balance and also pattern consistency

00:08:860 (8860|1) – jacks are not good, move this to 3
00:09:546 (9546|2) – this to 4
00:09:889 (9889|2) – and this to 1
00:15:974 (15974|3) – this note, move it to - 00:16:060
00:18:460 (18460|2) – move this to 2
00:20:517 (20517|2) – move this to 1
00:22:231 (22231|1) – move this LN to 1
00:33:203 (33203|1) – move to 4 for balance and also pitch
00:35:946 (35946|0) – move it to 3
00:40:746 (40746|1) - ^
00:41:089 (41089|0) – move it to 2
00:43:831 (43831|2) - ^
00:44:003 (44003|3) – move it to 3
00:45:203 (45203|0,45374|1) – ctrl + H
00:47:603 (47603|1) – move to 4
00:47:946 (47946|3) – move to 2
00:48:117 (48117|2) – move to 1
00:49:317 (49317|3,49317|2) – move to 2 and 3
00:53:431 (53431|0) – move to 4
01:01:660 (61660|2) – move to 1
01:04:746 (64746|1) – move to 4
01:05:431 (65431|1) – move to 4
01:05:774 (65774|1) – move to 1
01:06:460 (66460|2) – move to 4
01:06:803 (66803|2) – move to 1
01:07:831 (67831|2) – move to 4
01:08:174 (68174|2) – move to 1
01:09:203 (69203|1) – move to 4
01:09:546 (69546|2) – move to 1 and 2
01:09:889 (69889|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|3) – move to 1
01:22:917 (82917|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|2) - ^ (but this is just suggestion)
01:25:660 (85660|1) - ^
01:26:346 (86346|2) – move to 1
01:28:660 (88660|1) – move this to - 01:28:746
01:30:803 (90803|0) – move this to 4

As you see in basic chart from - 01:28:403 – to - 01:31:831 – you have lack of note in column 4 and has abundant of it in colum 2 and 3. You should fix this

01:32:517 (92517|2) – move to 1
01:35:603 (95603|2) – move to 4
01:35:946 (95946|1) – move to 1
01:39:031 (99031|2) – move to 1
01:39:374 (99374|0) – so move this to 2
01:42:803 (102803|1) – move to 3
01:44:174 (104174|1) – move to 4
01:48:289 (108289|1) – move to 1
02:00:289 (120289|3) - ^
02:06:460 – add note to 4


[Exhaust]
From - 00:00:289 - to - 00:11:271 – the pattern are way too monotonous, you can use variety of triple notes and double notes. Monotonous pattern is not fun, not challenging and not creative. This must be fixed!!

From - 00:12:803 – to - 00:13:684 – why you not using that 1-2 notes patter pattern like you do before? It sounds the same. This part- 00:14:174 - to - 00:15:889 – is also have same problem

These notes - 00:16:917 (16917|1,17089|3,17260|1,17431|2,17603|0,17774|3) – should be double notes. I mean, this is exhaust man

These notes - 00:18:289 (18289|2,18460|1,18631|0,18974|2) – too, make it double

The stair part in - 00:19:231 – here, I think you should change it to something like http://puu.sh/hlPqk/ec6bad17ae.jpg this

00:34:574 – add note to 2
00:35:774 (35774|1) – move this to 4
00:35:946 (35946|3) – so move this to 3
00:38:689 – add another 1 note
00:40:060 - ^ and put it at 1
00:43:831 (43831|0) – this LN starts here - 00:44:174 –
00:46:746 (46746|1) – move to 1
00:47:946 (47946|3) – no jack please, move it to 3
00:48:289 (48289|0) – and move this to 4

There’s a lot of jacks from - 00:49:660 – to - 01:08:517 - sorry, but I don’t have time to fix all of that

This stair part from - 01:08:860 – to - 01:10:231 – is non sense. I think of this http://puu.sh/hlPHI/0aee5404d9.jpg

From this - 01:11:603 – to - 01:33:203 –has same jack problem like above, but this is just really bad so I will try to help you to do this part
01:11:946 (71946|1) – move to 1
01:12:631 (72631|3) - ^
01:13:317 (73317|1) - ^
01:14:174 (74174|2) - ^
01:14:346 (74346|2,74346|0) – move to 3 and 4
01:14:517 (74517|1) – move to 1
01:15:031 (75031|2) – move to 4
01:15:203 (75203|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|1,75374|3) – so move this to 1 and 2
01:17:431 (77431|2) – move this to 2
01:17:603 (77603|1) – this to 3
01:17:946 (77946|2) – move to 1
01:18:117 (78117|2,78117|0) – move 1 row each notes
01:18:289 (78289|1) – so this move to 2
01:18:460 (78460|1) – move to 4
01:19:317 (79317|2) – move to 1
01:19:660 (79660|0) – move to 4
01:19:831 (79831|0,79831|2) – make it 1 and 2
01:20:003 (80003|1) – move to 3
01:20:346 (80346|2) – move to 1
01:20:689 (80689|2) – move to 1
01:20:860 (80860|3,80860|1) – make it 2 and 3
01:21:031 (81031|2) – move to 4
01:21:374 – add note at 4
01:21:717 – add note at 1
01:22:060 - ^
01:23:089 (83089|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|3,83603|1) – make it 3 and 4
01:23:774 (83774|2) – move to 1
01:24:631 (84631|2,84631|0) – make it 3 and 4
01:25:489 (85489|2) – move to 2
01:26:003 (86003|3,86003|1) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:26:689 - to - 01:27:767 – make it triple notes and don’t make them jacks!
01:27:889 (87889|2) – move to 1
01:28:403 (88403|0,88403|2) – make it at 1 and 4
01:28:574 (88574|1) – move to 3
01:30:289 (90289|1) – move to 4
01:30:374 (90374|3) – move this to = 01:30:460 – and put it at 1
01:30:631 (90631|2) – move to 4
01:31:146 (91146|3,91146|1) – make it 1 and 4
01:31:489 (91489|3,91489|1) - ^
01:31:660 (91660|2) – move to 2 (just suggestion)
01:31:831 (91831|1,91831|0) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:32:003 – to - 01:33:203 – make it like this http://puu.sh/hlPKa/19adb3ffc2.jpg

From - 01:33:546 – to - 02:06:289 – just same jack problem like above. You can learn from my previous mod above and fix it by yourself.



And one thing, in mania note placement is very strict and you can't just put notes in your own will. This is to make sure that your chart is fun and reasonable to play.

Btw SB nya keren soggg...
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
We don't mod osu mania btw >.>
ToifAmri
251 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Raediaufar wrote:

From this very awesome queue and also crying pming me want me and Gomuryuu to mod this map

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

[General]
BG size diubah jadi 1366 x 768
Gap dari ADV Lv. 12 ke Kuki ADV Lv.12 lebih gede dari gap Kuki ADV Lv.12 ke EXH Lv.14 heleh.. ADV Lv. 12 nya ubah jadi diff. NOVICE Lv.8, 9 atau 10
Tambah Kuki sama yang bikin SB ke tag kamu (dan kalo ada GD lain juga)
Kek nya ini udah.. Urutan diff kamu harusnya Basic - Novice - Advanced - Exhaust - dan kalo ada yang lebih sulit pake nama Infinite
sungkem minta maaf ke KK

[Basic]
00:01:660 (1660|3) – move 2 for balance
00:05:774 (5774|1,6117|2,6460|0,6803|3,7146|1,7489|2) – considering to change this part into this http://puu.sh/hlPnn/50ccf1ce30.jpg for hand balance and also pattern consistency

00:08:860 (8860|1) – jacks are not good, move this to 3
00:09:546 (9546|2) – this to 4
00:09:889 (9889|2) – and this to 1
00:15:974 (15974|3) – this note, move it to - 00:16:060
00:18:460 (18460|2) – move this to 2
00:20:517 (20517|2) – move this to 1
00:22:231 (22231|1) – move this LN to 1
00:33:203 (33203|1) – move to 4 for balance and also pitch
00:35:946 (35946|0) – move it to 3
00:40:746 (40746|1) - ^
00:41:089 (41089|0) – move it to 2
00:43:831 (43831|2) - ^
00:44:003 (44003|3) – move it to 3
00:45:203 (45203|0,45374|1) – ctrl + H
00:47:603 (47603|1) – move to 4
00:47:946 (47946|3) – move to 2
00:48:117 (48117|2) – move to 1
00:49:317 (49317|3,49317|2) – move to 2 and 3
00:53:431 (53431|0) – move to 4
01:01:660 (61660|2) – move to 1
01:04:746 (64746|1) – move to 4
01:05:431 (65431|1) – move to 4
01:05:774 (65774|1) – move to 1
01:06:460 (66460|2) – move to 4
01:06:803 (66803|2) – move to 1
01:07:831 (67831|2) – move to 4
01:08:174 (68174|2) – move to 1
01:09:203 (69203|1) – move to 4
01:09:546 (69546|2) – move to 1 and 2
01:09:889 (69889|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|3) – move to 1
01:22:917 (82917|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|2) - ^ (but this is just suggestion)
01:25:660 (85660|1) - ^
01:26:346 (86346|2) – move to 1
01:28:660 (88660|1) – move this to - 01:28:746
01:30:803 (90803|0) – move this to 4

As you see in basic chart from - 01:28:403 – to - 01:31:831 – you have lack of note in column 4 and has abundant of it in colum 2 and 3. You should fix this

01:32:517 (92517|2) – move to 1
01:35:603 (95603|2) – move to 4
01:35:946 (95946|1) – move to 1
01:39:031 (99031|2) – move to 1
01:39:374 (99374|0) – so move this to 2
01:42:803 (102803|1) – move to 3
01:44:174 (104174|1) – move to 4
01:48:289 (108289|1) – move to 1
02:00:289 (120289|3) - ^
02:06:460 – add note to 4


[Exhaust]
From - 00:00:289 - to - 00:11:271 – the pattern are way too monotonous, you can use variety of triple notes and double notes. Monotonous pattern is not fun, not challenging and not creative. This must be fixed!!

From - 00:12:803 – to - 00:13:684 – why you not using that 1-2 notes patter pattern like you do before? It sounds the same. This part- 00:14:174 - to - 00:15:889 – is also have same problem

These notes - 00:16:917 (16917|1,17089|3,17260|1,17431|2,17603|0,17774|3) – should be double notes. I mean, this is exhaust man

These notes - 00:18:289 (18289|2,18460|1,18631|0,18974|2) – too, make it double

The stair part in - 00:19:231 – here, I think you should change it to something like http://puu.sh/hlPqk/ec6bad17ae.jpg this

00:34:574 – add note to 2
00:35:774 (35774|1) – move this to 4
00:35:946 (35946|3) – so move this to 3
00:38:689 – add another 1 note
00:40:060 - ^ and put it at 1
00:43:831 (43831|0) – this LN starts here - 00:44:174 –
00:46:746 (46746|1) – move to 1
00:47:946 (47946|3) – no jack please, move it to 3
00:48:289 (48289|0) – and move this to 4

There’s a lot of jacks from - 00:49:660 – to - 01:08:517 - sorry, but I don’t have time to fix all of that

This stair part from - 01:08:860 – to - 01:10:231 – is non sense. I think of this http://puu.sh/hlPHI/0aee5404d9.jpg

From this - 01:11:603 – to - 01:33:203 –has same jack problem like above, but this is just really bad so I will try to help you to do this part
01:11:946 (71946|1) – move to 1
01:12:631 (72631|3) - ^
01:13:317 (73317|1) - ^
01:14:174 (74174|2) - ^
01:14:346 (74346|2,74346|0) – move to 3 and 4
01:14:517 (74517|1) – move to 1
01:15:031 (75031|2) – move to 4
01:15:203 (75203|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|1,75374|3) – so move this to 1 and 2
01:17:431 (77431|2) – move this to 2
01:17:603 (77603|1) – this to 3
01:17:946 (77946|2) – move to 1
01:18:117 (78117|2,78117|0) – move 1 row each notes
01:18:289 (78289|1) – so this move to 2
01:18:460 (78460|1) – move to 4
01:19:317 (79317|2) – move to 1
01:19:660 (79660|0) – move to 4
01:19:831 (79831|0,79831|2) – make it 1 and 2
01:20:003 (80003|1) – move to 3
01:20:346 (80346|2) – move to 1
01:20:689 (80689|2) – move to 1
01:20:860 (80860|3,80860|1) – make it 2 and 3
01:21:031 (81031|2) – move to 4
01:21:374 – add note at 4
01:21:717 – add note at 1
01:22:060 - ^
01:23:089 (83089|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|3,83603|1) – make it 3 and 4
01:23:774 (83774|2) – move to 1
01:24:631 (84631|2,84631|0) – make it 3 and 4
01:25:489 (85489|2) – move to 2
01:26:003 (86003|3,86003|1) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:26:689 - to - 01:27:767 – make it triple notes and don’t make them jacks!
01:27:889 (87889|2) – move to 1
01:28:403 (88403|0,88403|2) – make it at 1 and 4
01:28:574 (88574|1) – move to 3
01:30:289 (90289|1) – move to 4
01:30:374 (90374|3) – move this to = 01:30:460 – and put it at 1
01:30:631 (90631|2) – move to 4
01:31:146 (91146|3,91146|1) – make it 1 and 4
01:31:489 (91489|3,91489|1) - ^
01:31:660 (91660|2) – move to 2 (just suggestion)
01:31:831 (91831|1,91831|0) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:32:003 – to - 01:33:203 – make it like this http://puu.sh/hlPKa/19adb3ffc2.jpg

From - 01:33:546 – to - 02:06:289 – just same jack problem like above. You can learn from my previous mod above and fix it by yourself.



And one thing, in mania note placement is very strict and you can't just put notes in your own will. This is to make sure that your chart is fun and reasonable to play.

Btw SB nya keren soggg...
Thanks :)
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

DahplA wrote:

We don't mod osu mania btw >.>

sorry :o
Zan-
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Zan-
lol creator wordsnya

same with
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

Zan - wrote:

lol creator wordsnya

same with
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
loh ? emang sama ? :o
Lirai
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Lirai
lmao

that warning
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

DE-CADE wrote:

lmao

that warning
Sorry.. :o :o :o :( :( :cry: :cry:
Lirai
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Lirai
dont worry yo

keep mapping ;)

if you need any help for this map, just ask me
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

DE-CADE wrote:

dont worry yo

keep mapping ;)

if you need any help for this map, just ask me
Thanks :) :)
Rido
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Rido
Maling :V
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

bakabakemono wrote:

Maling :V
kamprett.. :v hus.. hus.. hus.. :v
FJKT48_ID
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SPOILER
EXHAUST Lv.14


Sedikit masukan aja . .

02:00:289 (120289|3) - tambah 1 note

02:01:660 (121660|3) - tambah 1 note

02:06:460 (126460|0) - tambah 1 note


moga ranked ya :)
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

FJKT48_ID wrote:

SPOILER
EXHAUST Lv.14


Sedikit masukan aja . .

02:00:289 (120289|3) - tambah 1 note

02:01:660 (121660|3) - tambah 1 note

02:06:460 (126460|0) - tambah 1 note


moga ranked ya :)
Sip :D :D
Frim4503
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Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

spesial request langsung dikerjain

General
jgn lupa buat dikasih hs

BASIC Lv.6
00:01:660 (1660|3) - remove (karna pattern kmu yg selanjutnya ga pake dobel)
00:03:031 (3031|2) - ^
00:11:260 (11260|1) - bagusan dibikin dobel
00:12:631 (12631|0) - ^
00:14:003 (14003|0) - ^
00:15:374 (15374|0) - ^
00:16:746 (16746|1) - ^
00:18:117 (18117|3) - ^
00:19:489 (19489|0) - ^
00:20:174 (20174|2) - ^
00:20:860 (20860|2) - ^
00:21:546 (21546|2) - ^
00:30:460 (30460|0) - move to 4
00:31:146 (31146|1,31317|2) - geser 1 kol. kekiri
00:34:746 (34746|3) - move to 3
00:45:717 (45717|0) - ^ 2
00:47:603 (47603|2) - ^ 4
00:53:774 (53774|0) - LN end here 00:54:803 - (apply smua pada patter dan ritme yg sma)
00:54:974 - add note
00:59:260 (59260|1) - ^ 01:00:289 -
01:00:460 - add note
01:03:031 (63031|2) - move to 4
01:07:489 (67489|1) - ^ 1
01:08:517 (68517|1) - ^ 4
01:11:260 - add note
mending SV changenya di hapus aja
that's all

ADVANCED Lv.12
00:00:289 - 00:10:574 - re-arange( same pattern=bikin bosen :cry: )
contoh http://puu.sh/hsrJn/d264b61e73.png
00:11:260 - http://puu.sh/hsrLK/05e758063c.png
00:12:460 - add note
00:13:831 - ^
00:14:003 (14003|1) - move to 2
00:16:060 - http://puu.sh/hsrPa/49ffeb1550.png
00:17:774 - http://puu.sh/hsrQp/63624fd08f.png
00:18:803 (18803|0) - move to 1
00:19:831 (19831|1,20517|1) - move to 3. to avoid jack
00:21:546 - http://puu.sh/hsrTp/ba934285d9.png
00:49:660 - coba model pattern kaya gini http://puu.sh/hsrZb/4e75a9747c.png
00:52:060 - http://puu.sh/hss3v/28091333ae.png
00:54:374 - http://puu.sh/hss2J/543d12c096.png
01:02:689 (62689|3) - move to 2
01:06:117 - 01:11:946 - ganti pattern lainnya
sebenernya masih banyak yg perlu diperbaiki
coba pake contoh yg aku kasih buat preference :D
ToifAmri
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Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

spesial request langsung dikerjain

General
jgn lupa buat dikasih hs

BASIC Lv.6
00:01:660 (1660|3) - remove (karna pattern kmu yg selanjutnya ga pake dobel)
00:03:031 (3031|2) - ^
00:11:260 (11260|1) - bagusan dibikin dobel
00:12:631 (12631|0) - ^
00:14:003 (14003|0) - ^
00:15:374 (15374|0) - ^
00:16:746 (16746|1) - ^
00:18:117 (18117|3) - ^
00:19:489 (19489|0) - ^
00:20:174 (20174|2) - ^
00:20:860 (20860|2) - ^
00:21:546 (21546|2) - ^
00:30:460 (30460|0) - move to 4
00:31:146 (31146|1,31317|2) - geser 1 kol. kekiri
00:34:746 (34746|3) - move to 3
00:45:717 (45717|0) - ^ 2
00:47:603 (47603|2) - ^ 4
00:53:774 (53774|0) - LN end here 00:54:803 - (apply smua pada patter dan ritme yg sma)
00:54:974 - add note
00:59:260 (59260|1) - ^ 01:00:289 -
01:00:460 - add note
01:03:031 (63031|2) - move to 4
01:07:489 (67489|1) - ^ 1
01:08:517 (68517|1) - ^ 4
01:11:260 - add note
mending SV changenya di hapus aja
that's all

ADVANCED Lv.12
00:00:289 - 00:10:574 - re-arange( same pattern=bikin bosen :cry: )
contoh http://puu.sh/hsrJn/d264b61e73.png
00:11:260 - http://puu.sh/hsrLK/05e758063c.png
00:12:460 - add note
00:13:831 - ^
00:14:003 (14003|1) - move to 2
00:16:060 - http://puu.sh/hsrPa/49ffeb1550.png
00:17:774 - http://puu.sh/hsrQp/63624fd08f.png
00:18:803 (18803|0) - move to 1
00:19:831 (19831|1,20517|1) - move to 3. to avoid jack
00:21:546 - http://puu.sh/hsrTp/ba934285d9.png
00:49:660 - coba model pattern kaya gini http://puu.sh/hsrZb/4e75a9747c.png
00:52:060 - http://puu.sh/hss3v/28091333ae.png
00:54:374 - http://puu.sh/hss2J/543d12c096.png
01:02:689 (62689|3) - move to 2
01:06:117 - 01:11:946 - ganti pattern lainnya
sebenernya masih banyak yg perlu diperbaiki
coba pake contoh yg aku kasih buat preference :D
blom sempet . mungkin nanti siang / sore.
Rivals_7
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Rivals_7
Lu pernah gak sih kepikiran ngikutin post format sama ikutin rules?
Kayaknya tiap kali gue liat lu request di forum, kayak ngasal nge-post aja :v
ToifAmri
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ToifAmri

Rivals_7 wrote:

Lu pernah gak sih kepikiran ngikutin post format sama ikutin rules?
Kayaknya tiap kali gue liat lu request di forum, kayak ngasal nge-post aja :v
kaga tau gw >.< masih newbie soal beginian . ajarin dong :v
Sc4v4ng3r
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Sc4v4ng3r
Modding due to your request through PM~ First time modding mania here~

Column: 0,1,2,3

BASIC Lv.6
00:00:289 - add a circle @3 or @0 and continue to add extra circles at every big white tick, so that flow feels right.
If I would list down all of them...
00:04:403 - at @3
00:05:774 - at @3
00:07:146 - at @0
00:08:517 - at @1
00:09:889 - at @2
00:11:260 - at @0 or/and @3 (adding another circle at @4 makes it harder, but matches the sound in the background)
00:12:631 - at @2 or/and @3 (same thing here)
00:14:003 - at @1 or/and @2
00:27:374 - You may add a circle at either @0 or @1, just to match the sound at the background.
00:46:060 (46060|0) - move this to column @2, to match but having a reversed pattern from the same repeating part of the song.
00:49:660 - Add circles on @1 or @2, but this time adding 2 circles no matter what, since its reaching the climax of the song.
00:51:031 - From this point onwards until 01:00:631, add a circle at the big white tick, at the appropriate column.
I suggest using this...
00:51:031 - Add at column @1
00:52:403 - Add at column @0
00:53:774 - Add at column @2
00:55:146 - Add at column @1
00:56:517 - Add at column @2
00:57:889 - Add at column @2
00:59:260 - Add at column @3
01:00:631 - Add at column @3
01:11:603 - Well again, repeat the same thing, add a circle at the big white tick, until 02:05:089. You get what I mean.
01:29:431 - There could be a hold until 01:30:803. Preferably at @3 and move the circle at 01:30:803 (90803|3) - to column @1

ADVANCED Lv.12
01:06:117 - 01:10:231 - Too much repetitiveness, change the pattern up into something else.
I don't see any other problems :D

Kuki's ADVANCED Lv.12
00:21:631 (21631|3) - I would not want to put that circle on that column. Maybe move it to @2?
00:31:660 - There should be a circle at one of the empty column.
00:34:746 (34746|3) - Move this to 00:34:917, column @3. Sounds more natural that way.
00:46:403 - A circle would make it sound better.
00:49:489 (49489|1),00:49:489 (49489|2) - I wouldn't put these notes this close to a SV change. Maybe remove these notes and the SV point, and move the 1.0x SV change to 00:49:660.
00:55:660 (55660|2) - Move this circle to 00:55:831.
01:10:146 (70146|1), 01:10:231 (70231|0) - Move these 2 notes 1/4 space behind, same column. Then add a circle at 01:10:231, preferably at column @1
01:16:317 (76317|3) - Why is this Slider starting at blue tick xD
01:32:003 (92003|2) - Start this slider at 01:32:174.
01:54:117 - 01:55:489 - I would not put stream with harsh SV changes, even though this is advanced difficulty. Remove all the SV changes, or change the pattern. Something like this : http://puu.sh/htqqi/b23683f2d9.jpg
From 01:55:660 to 01:59:431 this red tick, remove all the notes in the red tick. Matches the flow later on.
02:00:546 (120546|1), 02:01:231 (121231|1), 02:01:574 (121574|2) - Why is these on blue tick?
02:03:546 (123546|3) - Remove this.

EXHAUST Lv.14
Notes from 00:20:860 - 00:21:546 - In my opinion this pattern with 1/8 stream is hard... maybe change the pattern like this? (and 00:21:546 (21546|0) is also affected. Moved to column @0 in the pic.) http://puu.sh/htqW4/48d1e52ea2.png
00:43:831 (43831|0) - This slider should start at 00:44:174.
00:48:289 (48289|0) - This circle seems unnecessary.
01:15:889 (75889|2), 01:16:231 (76231|2), 01:16:574 (76574|2), 01:16:917 (76917|2) - This 4 circles shouldn't be here, even though this is the hardest difficulty of the map.
01:26:860 (86860|0,87203|0,87546|0,87889|2) - Same goes here ^^
01:32:346 (92346|1,92689|1,93031|1) - Again the same, but also change the pattern a bit.
01:37:831 (97831|1,98174|1,98517|1,98860|1) - Same thing ^^
01:43:317 (103317|3,103660|3,104003|0,104346|0) - Same thing. All the notes at red ticks while on SV change is pretty... weird. Wouldn't mind if you changed the SV again into something else. If you changed it, then above and the notes onwards won't need a change.
01:48:803 (108803|2,109146|2,109489|2,109831|2) - Same thing ^^
01:54:289 (114289|2,114631|2,114974|2) - These 3 is the same thing. But I would prefer 01:55:317 (115317|2) to be deleted.
02:00:289 (120289|0) - Remove this and move 02:00:460 (120460|0) starting point to 02:00:289, same column.

I'll have to take a break first. Stayed online on computer for too long until my eyes are blur ;-;
So, that is my first mania mod. Hope you like it!
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