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Evening
kudosu denied as requested ~
Aste-

Z3nx wrote:

kudosu denied as requested ~
thanks Z3nx samaaaaa~ orz
Ciyus Miapah
ane gk bisa ngemod mania thanks
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Fort wrote:

ane gk bisa ngemod mania thanks
sama - sama :3
bilqiscutee
Hi mod as requested via pm~

[General]


wut?/ itu yg di BG kaneki-kun dayone? x_x

Novice Lv.6 nya terlalu mudah icon nya juga masih easy usahain sampe blue icon Normal icon


[Advance Lv.12]


00:19:060 (19060|3,19317|2) - delete

00:19:403 add
[Another Lv.14]


wew ini 2 note 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - padahal sounds nya sama kaya ini - > 00:11:946 & 00:12:289 etc.
00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - kurangin 1 note atau tambah 1 note di setiap garis putih.

00:16:531 (16531|3) - delete, lalu move 00:16:489 (16489|2) - ke 00:16:660 col 4

00:17:860 (17860|1) - delete, no sound here

00:18:031 (18031|0,18117|1) - ctrl + J

00:19:831 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3021596 better

00:21:546 add 2 note

00:21:717 add

00:21:889 add 2 note

00:22:060 add

sisanya tolong di re-pettern lg ya kurangin jack2 nya :v

okay sorry cuma bisa mod segitu :D :D
oiya, butuh 4k Extra? mungkin gw bisa bantu buatin GD :)
Good luck~
Akasha-
Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

Hi mod as requested via pm~

[General]


wut?/ itu yg di BG kaneki-kun dayone? x_x

Novice Lv.6 nya terlalu mudah icon nya juga masih easy usahain sampe blue icon Normal icon


[Advance Lv.12]


00:19:060 (19060|3,19317|2) - delete

00:19:403 add
[Another Lv.14]


wew ini 2 note 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - 00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - padahal sounds nya sama kaya ini - > 00:11:946 & 00:12:289 etc.
00:11:603 (11603|1,11603|3) - kurangin 1 note atau tambah 1 note di setiap garis putih.

00:16:531 (16531|3) - delete, lalu move 00:16:489 (16489|2) - ke 00:16:660 col 4

00:17:860 (17860|1) - delete, no sound here

00:18:031 (18031|0,18117|1) - ctrl + J

00:19:831 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3021596 better

00:21:546 add 2 note

00:21:717 add

00:21:889 add 2 note

00:22:060 add

sisanya tolong di re-pettern lg ya kurangin jack2 nya :v

okay sorry cuma bisa mod segitu :D :D
oiya, butuh 4k Extra? mungkin gw bisa bantu buatin GD :)
Good luck~
okee
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Next time please ask me before you take my mp3: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/226153
Why does i know its:
My mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuc.png
Your mp3: http://puu.sh/hhXuA.PNG
Its same, right?
Also your map have same BPM. offset with me so its easily for me to detected :P

Why I warn you should call me to take my mp3?
Because this is full song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWbw1rKOFAI
its take 4 minutes and 15 seconds

On this edition only take 2 minutes 6 seconds: Because im the one who cut the mp3 and fixed the qualify of it, so its the mp3 of mine :P

Okay now, im just warning, next time please ask me first, okay?

Thanks and also good luck with your map ~

P/s: The SB seems quite ... idk how to says but its ... i dont want to says it :'( better to fix it, and suggest on kiai time, why not use only one img/code for it insteal of copy and paste? it will make the sb extend the size, i think ~

Anyway, if you need help on SB, call me or Roxas for more information, thanks and good luck <3
i am so sorry.. :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: . oke i call you if i need help on SB :o
Rivals_7
Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Rivals_7 wrote:

Get busted by Kuo Kyoka eh? Seems Legit :3
Better watch out. Don't make a same mistake again. Those BNG people is not only check the beatmap but they also check the folder.
i am so sorry :cry: :cry: :cry:
Rido
Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bakabakemono wrote:

Wah wah maling >_>

Btw just suggesestion:
Novice - Advanced - Another? Harusnya NOVICE - ADVANCED - EXHAUST (kapital semua) yg ini ngikut diff namenya SDVX. Kalo tetep pake Another, harusnya Normal - Hyper - Another, yg ini ngikut BMS
Ga bermaksud maling kak :cry: :cry:
SPAS-ID
MOD

NOVICE
- NO MOD -

ADVANCED

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460

EXHAUST
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )

Storyboard
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!

EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

SPAS-ID wrote:

MOD

NOVICE
- NO MOD -

ADVANCED

1. To Many Repeated Note 01:00:974 - 01:10:231
2. The LN Should Be From 02:05:089 - 02:06:460

EXHAUST
1. 3 Note In Every Double White Line 00:00:289 - 00:11:260 ( To Give It More Star Diff )
2. Why Dont U Make 1/3 Or 1/4 Stair Over Here 01:08:860 - 01:10:231 ( This Is EXHAUST Right ? )
3. 3 Note In 01:16:060 And 01:16:403 Because It Has Higher Beat
4. 01:21:889 And 01:22:231 ^
5. I See No 3 Notes Here ( Except This 02:00:631 )

Storyboard
1. Is That Even A Proper Background ?
2. 00:49:660 - 01:00:631 I Prefer Not To Make It Goes In Wierd Way
3. 01:10:231 - 01:11:260 Make It Stay And Just With C-White
4. 01:54:117 - 02:06:460 R U Run Out Of Idea ?!

EDIT : Add 1 Star Diff On All Maps Please ( 0.5 Star Diff On EXHAUST Its To Easy

Thanks :)
Kagu-chan
Hi, sorry for delay, was way busy xD

Please refer this tool result (ignore SB isuue here since this map has a SB inside)
AI
Comparing:
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [NOVICE Lv.6].osu
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [ADVANCED Lv.12].osu
t+pazolite - Kick-ass Kung-fu Carnival (PLight Remix) (ToifAmri) [EXHAUST Lv.14].osu

Check some necessary data...
No issues found

General check for NOVICE Lv.6
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for ADVANCED Lv.12
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

General check for EXHAUST Lv.14
WidescreenStoryboard should be '0'

Metadata check...
No issues found

Analyze MP3 File - this may take a while...

FileName => Kick-ass Kungfu (PLight Remix).mp3
FileSize => 3.0 MB
AudioBitrate => 192 kbps
Duration => 0:02:09
Duration in MS => 129000

Check for issues in MP3...
No issues found

Check Timings...
You used 1 timing section(s) and 9 inherited section(s)
KIAI-Time in NOVICE Lv.6 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in ADVANCED Lv.12 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%
KIAI-Time in EXHAUST Lv.14 is 34.02% of songs duration, it should be at max 25%

Checking Hitobjects...
NOVICE Lv.6 [4K]
This Diff contains 377 Hitobjects (Short Note: 359, Long Note: 18)
77 on Row 1 (20.42%)
113 on Row 2 (29.97%)
116 on Row 3 (30.77%)
71 on Row 4 (18.83%)

ADVANCED Lv.12 [4K]
This Diff contains 603 Hitobjects (Short Note: 571, Long Note: 32)
134 on Row 1 (22.22%)
146 on Row 2 (24.21%)
165 on Row 3 (27.36%)
158 on Row 4 (26.20%)

EXHAUST Lv.14 [4K]
This Diff contains 920 Hitobjects (Short Note: 901, Long Note: 19)
166 on Row 1 (18.04%)
313 on Row 2 (34.02%)
248 on Row 3 (26.96%)
193 on Row 4 (20.98%)

You should try to fix the balancing - ive checked since ive seen that it could be a bit... off xD
On ADV-Diff its OK i guess ;)
Also i want to point out that Jacks are only allowed for Diffs lower than 150 BPM OR higher diffs - So please consider changing and removing Jacks in NOV diff since there not fitting too.

If you fixed this issues please PM me again for normal mod, thanks ;)
bilqiscutee
[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)
SPAS-ID
Little Mod

Its Gotta Be A Mod What Do U Expect ?
1. 01:16:060 - 01:17:089 Please Make It 0.5 , 1.25 I Looks Really Wierd If U're Using 0.45 , 1 -_- Applies For Other SV ( EXH )
2.Why Theres No Stairs ? Cmon
3. Make The Note On EXH Looks Like This 01:21:203 (81203|0,81203|2,81203|1,81546|1,81546|0,81546|2,81889|3,81889|1,81889|2,82231|2,82231|3,82231|1) - Not This 01:26:689 (86689|3,86689|1,86860|0,87031|3,87031|1,87203|0,87374|3,87374|1,87546|0,87717|3,87717|1) -
4. I Can Make A Storyboard For This Map Tho
5. Change BG name into BG.png FFS !
Rifkymarcelio
GD In progress bro.. semua 7k
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bilqiscutee wrote:

[ADVANCED Lv.12]
[BASIC Lv.6]
[EXHAUST Lv.14]
if you change the diff name like this, i think i will change my EXTRA Lv.?? to INFINITE Lv.?? ;)

Okey :)
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Rifkymarcelio wrote:

GD In progress bro.. semua 7k

sip gans
Frim4503
i'm sorry for the troubble
but i have to stop my GD cuz i don't have time to manage it anymore :o

sorry bro harus drop nih GD
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Frim4503 wrote:

i'm sorry for the troubble
but i have to stop my GD cuz i don't have time to manage it anymore :o

sorry bro harus drop nih GD
yaah :o :o yaudah deh gpp :o :o :?
SPAS-ID
SBnya dah ampe 1:30 kok tenang aja
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

SPAS-ID wrote:

SBnya dah ampe 1:30 kok tenang aja
slow :v
Blizs
hi :3
untuk penamaan diff coba lihat thread ini => t/178700
karena ini penamaan diffnya berdasarkan SDVX, jadi urutannya harusnya BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, INFINITE
jadi kalo dari BASIC langsung lompat ke ADVANCED kan aneh.
tapi kayaknya sih kau lagi nunggu GD NOVICE... :v
gud luck deh. Cuma mau bilang itu aja...
btw mod later. biar sekalian sama NOVICE nya ;)
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Fantastica wrote:

hi :3
untuk penamaan diff coba lihat thread ini => t/178700
karena ini penamaan diffnya berdasarkan SDVX, jadi urutannya harusnya BASIC, NOVICE, ADVANCED, EXHAUST, INFINITE
jadi kalo dari BASIC langsung lompat ke ADVANCED kan aneh.
tapi kayaknya sih kau lagi nunggu GD NOVICE... :v
gud luck deh. Cuma mau bilang itu aja...
btw mod later. biar sekalian sama NOVICE nya ;)

ooh iya kak . lagi nunggu GD dari kamu.. :3 NOVICE hehe :v
Raediaufar
From this very awesome queue and also crying pming me want me and Gomuryuu to mod this map

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

[General]
BG size diubah jadi 1366 x 768
Gap dari ADV Lv. 12 ke Kuki ADV Lv.12 lebih gede dari gap Kuki ADV Lv.12 ke EXH Lv.14 heleh.. ADV Lv. 12 nya ubah jadi diff. NOVICE Lv.8, 9 atau 10
Tambah Kuki sama yang bikin SB ke tag kamu (dan kalo ada GD lain juga)
Kek nya ini udah.. Urutan diff kamu harusnya Basic - Novice - Advanced - Exhaust - dan kalo ada yang lebih sulit pake nama Infinite
sungkem minta maaf ke KK

[Basic]
00:01:660 (1660|3) – move 2 for balance
00:05:774 (5774|1,6117|2,6460|0,6803|3,7146|1,7489|2) – considering to change this part into this http://puu.sh/hlPnn/50ccf1ce30.jpg for hand balance and also pattern consistency

00:08:860 (8860|1) – jacks are not good, move this to 3
00:09:546 (9546|2) – this to 4
00:09:889 (9889|2) – and this to 1
00:15:974 (15974|3) – this note, move it to - 00:16:060
00:18:460 (18460|2) – move this to 2
00:20:517 (20517|2) – move this to 1
00:22:231 (22231|1) – move this LN to 1
00:33:203 (33203|1) – move to 4 for balance and also pitch
00:35:946 (35946|0) – move it to 3
00:40:746 (40746|1) - ^
00:41:089 (41089|0) – move it to 2
00:43:831 (43831|2) - ^
00:44:003 (44003|3) – move it to 3
00:45:203 (45203|0,45374|1) – ctrl + H
00:47:603 (47603|1) – move to 4
00:47:946 (47946|3) – move to 2
00:48:117 (48117|2) – move to 1
00:49:317 (49317|3,49317|2) – move to 2 and 3
00:53:431 (53431|0) – move to 4
01:01:660 (61660|2) – move to 1
01:04:746 (64746|1) – move to 4
01:05:431 (65431|1) – move to 4
01:05:774 (65774|1) – move to 1
01:06:460 (66460|2) – move to 4
01:06:803 (66803|2) – move to 1
01:07:831 (67831|2) – move to 4
01:08:174 (68174|2) – move to 1
01:09:203 (69203|1) – move to 4
01:09:546 (69546|2) – move to 1 and 2
01:09:889 (69889|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|3) – move to 1
01:22:917 (82917|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|2) - ^ (but this is just suggestion)
01:25:660 (85660|1) - ^
01:26:346 (86346|2) – move to 1
01:28:660 (88660|1) – move this to - 01:28:746
01:30:803 (90803|0) – move this to 4

As you see in basic chart from - 01:28:403 – to - 01:31:831 – you have lack of note in column 4 and has abundant of it in colum 2 and 3. You should fix this

01:32:517 (92517|2) – move to 1
01:35:603 (95603|2) – move to 4
01:35:946 (95946|1) – move to 1
01:39:031 (99031|2) – move to 1
01:39:374 (99374|0) – so move this to 2
01:42:803 (102803|1) – move to 3
01:44:174 (104174|1) – move to 4
01:48:289 (108289|1) – move to 1
02:00:289 (120289|3) - ^
02:06:460 – add note to 4


[Exhaust]
From - 00:00:289 - to - 00:11:271 – the pattern are way too monotonous, you can use variety of triple notes and double notes. Monotonous pattern is not fun, not challenging and not creative. This must be fixed!!

From - 00:12:803 – to - 00:13:684 – why you not using that 1-2 notes patter pattern like you do before? It sounds the same. This part- 00:14:174 - to - 00:15:889 – is also have same problem

These notes - 00:16:917 (16917|1,17089|3,17260|1,17431|2,17603|0,17774|3) – should be double notes. I mean, this is exhaust man

These notes - 00:18:289 (18289|2,18460|1,18631|0,18974|2) – too, make it double

The stair part in - 00:19:231 – here, I think you should change it to something like http://puu.sh/hlPqk/ec6bad17ae.jpg this

00:34:574 – add note to 2
00:35:774 (35774|1) – move this to 4
00:35:946 (35946|3) – so move this to 3
00:38:689 – add another 1 note
00:40:060 - ^ and put it at 1
00:43:831 (43831|0) – this LN starts here - 00:44:174 –
00:46:746 (46746|1) – move to 1
00:47:946 (47946|3) – no jack please, move it to 3
00:48:289 (48289|0) – and move this to 4

There’s a lot of jacks from - 00:49:660 – to - 01:08:517 - sorry, but I don’t have time to fix all of that

This stair part from - 01:08:860 – to - 01:10:231 – is non sense. I think of this http://puu.sh/hlPHI/0aee5404d9.jpg

From this - 01:11:603 – to - 01:33:203 –has same jack problem like above, but this is just really bad so I will try to help you to do this part
01:11:946 (71946|1) – move to 1
01:12:631 (72631|3) - ^
01:13:317 (73317|1) - ^
01:14:174 (74174|2) - ^
01:14:346 (74346|2,74346|0) – move to 3 and 4
01:14:517 (74517|1) – move to 1
01:15:031 (75031|2) – move to 4
01:15:203 (75203|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|1,75374|3) – so move this to 1 and 2
01:17:431 (77431|2) – move this to 2
01:17:603 (77603|1) – this to 3
01:17:946 (77946|2) – move to 1
01:18:117 (78117|2,78117|0) – move 1 row each notes
01:18:289 (78289|1) – so this move to 2
01:18:460 (78460|1) – move to 4
01:19:317 (79317|2) – move to 1
01:19:660 (79660|0) – move to 4
01:19:831 (79831|0,79831|2) – make it 1 and 2
01:20:003 (80003|1) – move to 3
01:20:346 (80346|2) – move to 1
01:20:689 (80689|2) – move to 1
01:20:860 (80860|3,80860|1) – make it 2 and 3
01:21:031 (81031|2) – move to 4
01:21:374 – add note at 4
01:21:717 – add note at 1
01:22:060 - ^
01:23:089 (83089|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|3,83603|1) – make it 3 and 4
01:23:774 (83774|2) – move to 1
01:24:631 (84631|2,84631|0) – make it 3 and 4
01:25:489 (85489|2) – move to 2
01:26:003 (86003|3,86003|1) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:26:689 - to - 01:27:767 – make it triple notes and don’t make them jacks!
01:27:889 (87889|2) – move to 1
01:28:403 (88403|0,88403|2) – make it at 1 and 4
01:28:574 (88574|1) – move to 3
01:30:289 (90289|1) – move to 4
01:30:374 (90374|3) – move this to = 01:30:460 – and put it at 1
01:30:631 (90631|2) – move to 4
01:31:146 (91146|3,91146|1) – make it 1 and 4
01:31:489 (91489|3,91489|1) - ^
01:31:660 (91660|2) – move to 2 (just suggestion)
01:31:831 (91831|1,91831|0) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:32:003 – to - 01:33:203 – make it like this http://puu.sh/hlPKa/19adb3ffc2.jpg

From - 01:33:546 – to - 02:06:289 – just same jack problem like above. You can learn from my previous mod above and fix it by yourself.



And one thing, in mania note placement is very strict and you can't just put notes in your own will. This is to make sure that your chart is fun and reasonable to play.

Btw SB nya keren soggg...
DahplA
We don't mod osu mania btw >.>
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Raediaufar wrote:

From this very awesome queue and also crying pming me want me and Gomuryuu to mod this map

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

[General]
BG size diubah jadi 1366 x 768
Gap dari ADV Lv. 12 ke Kuki ADV Lv.12 lebih gede dari gap Kuki ADV Lv.12 ke EXH Lv.14 heleh.. ADV Lv. 12 nya ubah jadi diff. NOVICE Lv.8, 9 atau 10
Tambah Kuki sama yang bikin SB ke tag kamu (dan kalo ada GD lain juga)
Kek nya ini udah.. Urutan diff kamu harusnya Basic - Novice - Advanced - Exhaust - dan kalo ada yang lebih sulit pake nama Infinite
sungkem minta maaf ke KK

[Basic]
00:01:660 (1660|3) – move 2 for balance
00:05:774 (5774|1,6117|2,6460|0,6803|3,7146|1,7489|2) – considering to change this part into this http://puu.sh/hlPnn/50ccf1ce30.jpg for hand balance and also pattern consistency

00:08:860 (8860|1) – jacks are not good, move this to 3
00:09:546 (9546|2) – this to 4
00:09:889 (9889|2) – and this to 1
00:15:974 (15974|3) – this note, move it to - 00:16:060
00:18:460 (18460|2) – move this to 2
00:20:517 (20517|2) – move this to 1
00:22:231 (22231|1) – move this LN to 1
00:33:203 (33203|1) – move to 4 for balance and also pitch
00:35:946 (35946|0) – move it to 3
00:40:746 (40746|1) - ^
00:41:089 (41089|0) – move it to 2
00:43:831 (43831|2) - ^
00:44:003 (44003|3) – move it to 3
00:45:203 (45203|0,45374|1) – ctrl + H
00:47:603 (47603|1) – move to 4
00:47:946 (47946|3) – move to 2
00:48:117 (48117|2) – move to 1
00:49:317 (49317|3,49317|2) – move to 2 and 3
00:53:431 (53431|0) – move to 4
01:01:660 (61660|2) – move to 1
01:04:746 (64746|1) – move to 4
01:05:431 (65431|1) – move to 4
01:05:774 (65774|1) – move to 1
01:06:460 (66460|2) – move to 4
01:06:803 (66803|2) – move to 1
01:07:831 (67831|2) – move to 4
01:08:174 (68174|2) – move to 1
01:09:203 (69203|1) – move to 4
01:09:546 (69546|2) – move to 1 and 2
01:09:889 (69889|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|3) – move to 1
01:22:917 (82917|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|2) - ^ (but this is just suggestion)
01:25:660 (85660|1) - ^
01:26:346 (86346|2) – move to 1
01:28:660 (88660|1) – move this to - 01:28:746
01:30:803 (90803|0) – move this to 4

As you see in basic chart from - 01:28:403 – to - 01:31:831 – you have lack of note in column 4 and has abundant of it in colum 2 and 3. You should fix this

01:32:517 (92517|2) – move to 1
01:35:603 (95603|2) – move to 4
01:35:946 (95946|1) – move to 1
01:39:031 (99031|2) – move to 1
01:39:374 (99374|0) – so move this to 2
01:42:803 (102803|1) – move to 3
01:44:174 (104174|1) – move to 4
01:48:289 (108289|1) – move to 1
02:00:289 (120289|3) - ^
02:06:460 – add note to 4


[Exhaust]
From - 00:00:289 - to - 00:11:271 – the pattern are way too monotonous, you can use variety of triple notes and double notes. Monotonous pattern is not fun, not challenging and not creative. This must be fixed!!

From - 00:12:803 – to - 00:13:684 – why you not using that 1-2 notes patter pattern like you do before? It sounds the same. This part- 00:14:174 - to - 00:15:889 – is also have same problem

These notes - 00:16:917 (16917|1,17089|3,17260|1,17431|2,17603|0,17774|3) – should be double notes. I mean, this is exhaust man

These notes - 00:18:289 (18289|2,18460|1,18631|0,18974|2) – too, make it double

The stair part in - 00:19:231 – here, I think you should change it to something like http://puu.sh/hlPqk/ec6bad17ae.jpg this

00:34:574 – add note to 2
00:35:774 (35774|1) – move this to 4
00:35:946 (35946|3) – so move this to 3
00:38:689 – add another 1 note
00:40:060 - ^ and put it at 1
00:43:831 (43831|0) – this LN starts here - 00:44:174 –
00:46:746 (46746|1) – move to 1
00:47:946 (47946|3) – no jack please, move it to 3
00:48:289 (48289|0) – and move this to 4

There’s a lot of jacks from - 00:49:660 – to - 01:08:517 - sorry, but I don’t have time to fix all of that

This stair part from - 01:08:860 – to - 01:10:231 – is non sense. I think of this http://puu.sh/hlPHI/0aee5404d9.jpg

From this - 01:11:603 – to - 01:33:203 –has same jack problem like above, but this is just really bad so I will try to help you to do this part
01:11:946 (71946|1) – move to 1
01:12:631 (72631|3) - ^
01:13:317 (73317|1) - ^
01:14:174 (74174|2) - ^
01:14:346 (74346|2,74346|0) – move to 3 and 4
01:14:517 (74517|1) – move to 1
01:15:031 (75031|2) – move to 4
01:15:203 (75203|1) – move to 3
01:15:374 (75374|1,75374|3) – so move this to 1 and 2
01:17:431 (77431|2) – move this to 2
01:17:603 (77603|1) – this to 3
01:17:946 (77946|2) – move to 1
01:18:117 (78117|2,78117|0) – move 1 row each notes
01:18:289 (78289|1) – so this move to 2
01:18:460 (78460|1) – move to 4
01:19:317 (79317|2) – move to 1
01:19:660 (79660|0) – move to 4
01:19:831 (79831|0,79831|2) – make it 1 and 2
01:20:003 (80003|1) – move to 3
01:20:346 (80346|2) – move to 1
01:20:689 (80689|2) – move to 1
01:20:860 (80860|3,80860|1) – make it 2 and 3
01:21:031 (81031|2) – move to 4
01:21:374 – add note at 4
01:21:717 – add note at 1
01:22:060 - ^
01:23:089 (83089|1) – move to 4
01:23:603 (83603|3,83603|1) – make it 3 and 4
01:23:774 (83774|2) – move to 1
01:24:631 (84631|2,84631|0) – make it 3 and 4
01:25:489 (85489|2) – move to 2
01:26:003 (86003|3,86003|1) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:26:689 - to - 01:27:767 – make it triple notes and don’t make them jacks!
01:27:889 (87889|2) – move to 1
01:28:403 (88403|0,88403|2) – make it at 1 and 4
01:28:574 (88574|1) – move to 3
01:30:289 (90289|1) – move to 4
01:30:374 (90374|3) – move this to = 01:30:460 – and put it at 1
01:30:631 (90631|2) – move to 4
01:31:146 (91146|3,91146|1) – make it 1 and 4
01:31:489 (91489|3,91489|1) - ^
01:31:660 (91660|2) – move to 2 (just suggestion)
01:31:831 (91831|1,91831|0) – make it 1 and 4
From this - 01:32:003 – to - 01:33:203 – make it like this http://puu.sh/hlPKa/19adb3ffc2.jpg

From - 01:33:546 – to - 02:06:289 – just same jack problem like above. You can learn from my previous mod above and fix it by yourself.



And one thing, in mania note placement is very strict and you can't just put notes in your own will. This is to make sure that your chart is fun and reasonable to play.

Btw SB nya keren soggg...
Thanks :)
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

DahplA wrote:

We don't mod osu mania btw >.>

sorry :o
Zan-
lol creator wordsnya

same with
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

Zan - wrote:

lol creator wordsnya

same with
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
loh ? emang sama ? :o
Lirai
lmao

that warning
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

DE-CADE wrote:

lmao

that warning
Sorry.. :o :o :o :( :( :cry: :cry:
Lirai
dont worry yo

keep mapping ;)

if you need any help for this map, just ask me
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

DE-CADE wrote:

dont worry yo

keep mapping ;)

if you need any help for this map, just ask me
Thanks :) :)
Rido
Maling :V
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

bakabakemono wrote:

Maling :V
kamprett.. :v hus.. hus.. hus.. :v
FJKT48_ID
SPOILER
EXHAUST Lv.14


Sedikit masukan aja . .

02:00:289 (120289|3) - tambah 1 note

02:01:660 (121660|3) - tambah 1 note

02:06:460 (126460|0) - tambah 1 note


moga ranked ya :)
Topic Starter
ToifAmri

FJKT48_ID wrote:

SPOILER
EXHAUST Lv.14


Sedikit masukan aja . .

02:00:289 (120289|3) - tambah 1 note

02:01:660 (121660|3) - tambah 1 note

02:06:460 (126460|0) - tambah 1 note


moga ranked ya :)
Sip :D :D
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