handsome wrote:

hi

• [K]

1. ar9 feels fine to me :I
2. i don't know how correct is [K] as the source. best to doublecheck. Changed to K according to the official site: http://k-project.jpn.com/top.html
3. 00:19:788 (7) - feels better for 1/2 slider, as 00:19:958 (8) - 's sound is not very loud. although you have to sacrifice square https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3000804
4. 00:25:242 (7) - same as previous, for consistency. the second triple is not very loud too.
5. 00:54:390 (2,3) - between these, there is 1/6 sounds, it is better to map them. 1/6 is too hard and sudden to catch, so I just leave my current one there to keep a 1/4 rhythm consistency.
6. 01:04:532 (2) - its quite noticeable that this sound is much softer, so its nice to split up the stream into 2 triplets by deleting this note.
7. 01:16:805 (2) - there's no sound here too.
8. 01:37:089 (3) - sorry but the stream isn't perfect 1/4 ;-; snapping should be similar to this: http://i.imgur.com/S9C94i3.png Since I also don want to add rhyhtms which are not 1/4, I split this stream into triplets, I hope that it matches with the music better now.
9. 02:19:106 (1) - 1/6 note right before this. Also for above reasons.
10. 02:24:133 (8) - there's a few overmaps like this here and there :/
11. 02:29:503 (1,2) - uhm, follow 01:04:957 (6,1,2) - ?
12. 02:36:236 (6,8) - you have to remove this, its very obvious overmap
13. 02:40:497 - and you can map this~ Hmm five 5 note stream is designed for emphasizing the long vocal. And the 1/2 single note matches with the vocals on them. Also I think a seven note stream is not good as five notes to players, so I'd just keep it there.
14. 02:50:128 (1,2,3) - i would prefer doing jumps, it adds more emphasis than the current 'flow' pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3001174 Yes, but I create the jump in another way.
15. 02:50:810 (7,1) - shouldn't you swap NC?
16. 03:32:869 - 1/8 mappable XD Please...1/8 is really to hard...and it adds to the mess of the rhythm.
17. 03:35:214 (2) - remove this, maybe 1/4 slider on previous sound if u want.
18. 04:21:917 (2) - 04:22:428 (3) - no sounds
19. 04:33:082 (3,1) - don't really like this cuz same shape = implying same amount of repeat, although you have NC its best to change 1.
    
    fucking amazing, great job on this! ♥ poke me ingame after you applied changes.

handsome wrote:

fixed small stuff, nothing too big.

bubble #1, will be great to see this ranked. it deserves every bit!

tutuhaha wrote:

Bubble#2
fighting (๑ŐдŐ)b！

sukiNathan wrote:

Whoa :O

[Teichan] wrote:

转眼一看都bub#2了，加油啊

HabiHolic wrote:

>W<

HabiHolic wrote:

>W<

Euny wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

>W<

lets go habi >w<

Frim4503 wrote:

this is from anime K ?
why don't add K anime Missing King in the tags ?

just curious

Frim4503 wrote:

oh,,, kay
thank you for telling me
i hope it get rank soon

OPYoshi wrote:

Phew, nice map. Maybe you should add a small break somewhere. It's not an easy map and long.

And some other suggestions:

00:35:981 (9) - Maybe just end the slider here and add a normal note Nope, I'd like to keep my current rhythm :3

01:08:878 (3) - It would feel a bit better, if you will add here the same notes like at 01:07:770 (4) it's more or less the same like in the song itself I removed the note at 01:07:770 (4). It is overmapped. Also for the next several mods

01:16:719 (1) - I would shift this note a bit to left or right. OK

02:33:296 - Maybe add a note here.

03:13:310 (1) - Turning the slider upside down would be more fluently. It doenst affcet much since it is a kick slider.

04:03:670 - Maybe the note again?

05:06:838 - I'm not sure but maybe the spinner can start here already?


I hope this suggestions are helpful. Should get ranked.

lkx_Shore wrote:

选这么高SV平时用0.8x是为什么... 什么。。。？都是1.0x啊，只有两小段用了0.75x
有得刷活跃度居然不喊我好伤心啊
[K]
03:36:151 - 多余绿线。

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Ranked in this!, cute boy!~ :3

lkx_Shore wrote:

Edit:Wait me one day.

lkx_Shore wrote:

#3

Crystal wrote:

pro

neonat wrote:

废话