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(the diff on the right is the original one, for comparison)
[Hard]
I will skip most of the explanation stuffs so that i can cover more diffs with my allotted time. Do note that all of these aims in improving the flow and quality of your map and with reason.
00:05:265 - consider rearranging the following pattern, for better flow, since you're following the piano at this point (some of my friends also pointed out that some of the patterns were uncomfortable/unnatural for a particular point. this is one of them). like this~ http://puu.sh/gARwH/03783100b9.jpg
00:17:209 - note at 5
00:18:672 - (take note of the note addition and the removed ones~) http://puu.sh/gASBx/7049866e4b.jpg
00:25:806 (25806|3,25989|4) - move to 2 and 4 for pitch
00:28:367 - a very awkward pattern. use this~ http://puu.sh/gATgg/8a8f22d673.jpg
00:29:465 - add a note at 4 to continue the flow
00:32:941 (32941|1) - move this to 00:33:124 - at col 5. its better if you focus on the vocals at this part, since it's the prominent one. and then, remove 00:33:672 (33672|4) - to make the flow more solid.
00:34:587 - http://puu.sh/gATv5/c387bde3ff.jpg
00:39:709 - how about trills? http://puu.sh/gATIk/dd3c2d0b0c.jpg
00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to 3
00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to 5
00:43:367 - note at 4, move 00:43:550 (43550|2) - to 1, and a note at 00:43:550 - on col 4. lastly, move 00:43:733 (43733|4,43916|0) - to 3 and 5, respectively
00:45:563 - the flow of the piano was cut here, thus making an awkward transition together with the ln at the left. consider this pattern change~ http://puu.sh/gAVKy/0e3667beeb.jpg
00:49:404 - add a note at 5
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|4,53306|3,53428|0) - move to 1, 4, 2 and 5, to emphasize the drums. (also a good way to utilize the ln at the middle)
00:56:264 (56264|3,56355|2,56447|1) - if we listen closely, moving these notes to 1, 2 and 3 respectively makes more sense.
00:57:453 - http://puu.sh/gAXjm/1b06494d47.jpg
00:58:916 - note at 2
00:59:648 - ^ at 5
00:59:099 - http://puu.sh/gAXyf/2ce7f2b0e5.jpg
01:01:843 - http://puu.sh/gAXGA/8bfb891ca9.jpg
01:03:306 (63306|1,63398|0) - you have two choices here. 1. you can swap this notes' col and make a stair OR 2. utilize a trill and move 01:03:306 (63306|1) - to 3 for variation
01:07:697 (67697|1) - move to 4
01:07:697 (67697|1,67880|0) - move to 1 and 5 for a differentiate the drums and the piano on a much more clearer way.
01:08:794 - suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gAY8N/e4d64ea9df.jpg shifting the density more on the vocals than the drums.
01:10:989 (70989|1) - remove. 1 note is enough, (like what you did on 01:12:453 - )
after that, 01:10:624 - this~ http://puu.sh/gAYoi/3333211e2e.jpg
01:12:453 (72453|1) - move to 5
01:13:184 - add a note (either at 2 or 4)
01:12:819 - http://puu.sh/gAYwu/3508edb7c5.jpg
01:16:477 (76477|3,76660|1) - swap col
01:30:471 (90471|2,90654|0,90745|2) - move to 1, 3 and 1 respectively
01:35:227 (95227|1) - stairs is kinda awkward for this drumroll. move to 5
01:36:874 (96874|1) - i suggest you do not map this note. if you still want to, it must be at 01:36:904 - (1/6 snap) and preferably at col 4
i'll do the other diffs when i have some free time~
(the diff on the right is the original one, for comparison)
[Hard]
I will skip most of the explanation stuffs so that i can cover more diffs with my allotted time. Do note that all of these aims in improving the flow and quality of your map and with reason.
00:05:265 - consider rearranging the following pattern, for better flow, since you're following the piano at this point (some of my friends also pointed out that some of the patterns were uncomfortable/unnatural for a particular point. this is one of them). like this~ http://puu.sh/gARwH/03783100b9.jpg
00:17:209 - note at 5
00:18:672 - (take note of the note addition and the removed ones~) http://puu.sh/gASBx/7049866e4b.jpg
00:25:806 (25806|3,25989|4) - move to 2 and 4 for pitch
00:28:367 - a very awkward pattern. use this~ http://puu.sh/gATgg/8a8f22d673.jpg
00:29:465 - add a note at 4 to continue the flow
00:32:941 (32941|1) - move this to 00:33:124 - at col 5. its better if you focus on the vocals at this part, since it's the prominent one. and then, remove 00:33:672 (33672|4) - to make the flow more solid.
00:34:587 - http://puu.sh/gATv5/c387bde3ff.jpg
00:39:709 - how about trills? http://puu.sh/gATIk/dd3c2d0b0c.jpg
00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to 3
00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to 5
00:43:367 - note at 4, move 00:43:550 (43550|2) - to 1, and a note at 00:43:550 - on col 4. lastly, move 00:43:733 (43733|4,43916|0) - to 3 and 5, respectively
00:45:563 - the flow of the piano was cut here, thus making an awkward transition together with the ln at the left. consider this pattern change~ http://puu.sh/gAVKy/0e3667beeb.jpg
00:49:404 - add a note at 5
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|4,53306|3,53428|0) - move to 1, 4, 2 and 5, to emphasize the drums. (also a good way to utilize the ln at the middle)
00:56:264 (56264|3,56355|2,56447|1) - if we listen closely, moving these notes to 1, 2 and 3 respectively makes more sense.
00:57:453 - http://puu.sh/gAXjm/1b06494d47.jpg
00:58:916 - note at 2
00:59:648 - ^ at 5
00:59:099 - http://puu.sh/gAXyf/2ce7f2b0e5.jpg
01:01:843 - http://puu.sh/gAXGA/8bfb891ca9.jpg
01:03:306 (63306|1,63398|0) - you have two choices here. 1. you can swap this notes' col and make a stair OR 2. utilize a trill and move 01:03:306 (63306|1) - to 3 for variation
01:07:697 (67697|1) - move to 4
01:07:697 (67697|1,67880|0) - move to 1 and 5 for a differentiate the drums and the piano on a much more clearer way.
01:08:794 - suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gAY8N/e4d64ea9df.jpg shifting the density more on the vocals than the drums.
01:10:989 (70989|1) - remove. 1 note is enough, (like what you did on 01:12:453 - )
after that, 01:10:624 - this~ http://puu.sh/gAYoi/3333211e2e.jpg
01:12:453 (72453|1) - move to 5
01:13:184 - add a note (either at 2 or 4)
01:12:819 - http://puu.sh/gAYwu/3508edb7c5.jpg
01:16:477 (76477|3,76660|1) - swap col
01:30:471 (90471|2,90654|0,90745|2) - move to 1, 3 and 1 respectively
01:35:227 (95227|1) - stairs is kinda awkward for this drumroll. move to 5
01:36:874 (96874|1) - i suggest you do not map this note. if you still want to, it must be at 01:36:904 - (1/6 snap) and preferably at col 4
i'll do the other diffs when i have some free time~