[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal

Inside :3

00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord

That's all here ^w^

Hard

Inside :3

00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Hutu's Hard+

Inside :3

00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here

01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part

01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note

That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Normal

00:02:740 (2740|0) - ignore this secondary piano sound will better w/
00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2) - same reason, its hard in normal diff i think,just secondary piano sound is enough
00:05:256 (5256|3,5449|1) - ~
00:05:836 (5836|3) - make it another col plz
00:06:611 (6611|0,6804|1) - ignore
00:08:159 (8159|0,8353|1,8546|2) - same
00:08:740 (8740|4,8933|4) - okay,same sound,same col
00:10:095 (10095|2,10288|3) - make them all at col 3
00:18:306 (18306|4,18489|3,18764|2) - no sound,or not clearly sound,i recommand to remove
00:19:130 (19130|3) - soft drum hit,better to ignore this
00:24:160 (24160|2) - remove ,no sound bell sound :3
00:28:733 (28733|2) - try to make this LN,end at 00:29:282 - [color=#00BF00]re-arranged :3[/color]
00:34:861 (34861|2,34953|3) - ignore these sound
00:43:184 (43184|2) - ignore this soft hit
00:54:892 (54892|4,55075|4,55258|4) - try stream here,left→right good idea owo
00:56:355 (56355|2) - remove
01:08:794 (68794|2) - remove
01:09:892 (69892|3) - try change to LN and end at 01:10:258 -
01:17:026 (77026|2) - remove
01:19:221 (79221|2) - remove if you didnt follow the vocal following vocal
01:21:050 (81050|4) - remove,you didnt follow this sound at all
01:22:880 - if vocal? add added :3
01:39:160 - add at LN at col4,end at 01:40:989 - ,same as 01:38:063 (98063|0) - nice owo


end

thanks star nerf down! _(:3_/

Hard

00:08:159 (8159|4) - this LN end at 00:10:482 - and dont forget to fix 00:09:707 (9707|0) -
00:34:221 (34221|0) - move it to col2
00:34:587 (34587|0) - same
00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|1,34953|0) - uncomfortable,try another pattern or remove these soft hit re-arranged a bit .-.
00:48:306 (48306|0) - actually i think this LN is end at 00:48:855 - fixed
00:59:831 (59831|1,61294|3) - umm you followed main+secondary piano sound here,but i think its not friendly to use short LN hmm i make pattern like that anyway...
01:09:617 (69617|3) - col3 plz it's not fit i think and looks hard
01:09:709 (69709|0) - col2 ^
01:39:160 - LN www ok

end

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><
ok will change later~
*too lazy _(:3_/



Good Luck XD

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Hutu's Hard+

00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><


Good Luck XD

shionelove wrote:

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Hutu's Hard+

00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><


Good Luck XD

thanks for mad

http://puu.sh/esd6r/fb94f140b7.zip

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

HI Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+

General

1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here osu!mania needs more 5K maps~!
2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3 <333
3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
4. Add "shionelove" to tags ok

Hard

1. 00:12:611 - Add a note for the end of piano slide, maybe? umm no sorry, feels weird ;w;
2. 00:12:030 - You can add a LN here to represent for the piano slide nice~
3. 00:34:953 (34953|1) - Move this to column 3 or 4 then make it a 1/2 beat length LN no ;w;
4. 00:57:819 - An additional LN for the piano slide is possible here it's quite hard
5. 01:03:672 (63672|4) - Turn this into a 1 beat length LN it's not need to make in LN btw
6. 01:14:648 (74648|3) - ^ ^
7. 01:15:380 (75380|4,75745|1) - ^ (This is optional tho) good suggestion owo
8. 01:16:843 - Kind of blank. Mind adding a LN/replacing a note with a LN? no :U
9. 01:38:063 (98063|1) - Move this to 4th col. It will be easier for players to press it more accurately ok
10. 01:40:258 - You can add another LN here no thx~

Good luck!

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

just random 'general' modding since this is my favorite song =w= ( favorite illustrator too =w= ) i am totally lolicon
lolicon o.o
i suddenly wanted to know about this song further myself hhehe

* Metadata : OK!
* BG Size : plz change BG Size to 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 according to ranking rule will change later~
* MP3 : very moe and fine =w=
( but i might suggest to change 'Hwakaka' mp3 file name to just normally Graceful Anomaly or something related to song ) ok
* TAG / Source : about まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！...
if read it as roma alphabet.. it becomes to 'majikaru cha~mingu!'
maybe u can think such 'what is that??' ..but this is 'Magical Charming!' in japanese.. so, i don't think it's offical name..
( at least japanese are using katagana to represent other language into their language. but it's hiragana tho )
also, you can check this offical site http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/
( d..don't travel this site much!! h..hent /me hides ) can't open lol. It's blocked in Indonesia? :U
so, about source, i suggest to change to ' Ｍａｇｉｃａｌ　Ｃｈａｒｍｉｎｇ！ ' ( wow such pont.. rip copy from offical site )
and you can add 'shionelove' since hutunohito changed name to shionelove ok
* Timing : http://puu.sh/eWL7z/f3939f8f6c.png fine~ ( but.. i didn't check bpm 155.. )
* Offset : OK!
* AiMod : OK!
* Difficulty Spread : seems fine.

you can ask pattern modding if you want~ but remember that i have less experience on 5k modding T.T

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

1. 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
   These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
   I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.

Good Luck

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. Timing Check : ☑

2. Metadata Check : ☑

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

3. BG's data Check : *☑

4. HP/OD FIX Check : ☑

5. Audio FIX Check : ☑

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

[Normal]
00:05:062 (5062|0) - Here's the start point which have a piano accompaniment for the next part.
I think you wouldn't need to add a note to the above point, if thinking so like the point of 00:06:611 - lol okay~

00:10:869 (10869|2,11062|3) - Ctrl+J, there is a sound which take a lower pitch. applied owo

00:25:624 (25624|2,25806|3,25989|4,26172|0) - Ctrl+J ･･･(*1)

• 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
  These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
  I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.

^ applied and re-arranged :3
00:54:892 (54892|1,55075|2,55258|3,55441|4) - Ctrl+J for taking a relevance to the next. ok!

00:59:831 - & 01:01:294 - add a note to 3. To emphasize this upbeat will be a comfortable. added~

01:13:002 - add a note to 4 to emphasize the upbeat. added~

[Hard]
00:53:947 (53947|3) - a little obscure but if you intend to follow the vocal, I think 00:53:977 - is appropriate to put it. okay~ following bell + vocal

01:09:526 (69526|0,69709|0,69892|0) - move them to 2 for taking a balance against the former placement. fixed

(01:11:172 - add a note to 4) already

Good Luck

*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview

Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.

Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★★★★★2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
★★★★☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
★★★★★4. what do you have a concern about your chart now?
I must focus on hitsounding now...5. do you have a point which need the check further?
Maybe about note placement and pitch・Information
I will change these questions depending on the situation, and surely feedback them for you guys.~ Since 2014,12,14 ~

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+

General

1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here
2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3
3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
4. Add "shionelove" to tags

hutu's Hard

1. Looks like it hasn't been hitsounded yet done
2. Almost perfect, just need to point out some stuffs
3. 00:43:367 - More like double clap, how about doubling this? next two notes are snare and clap
4. 00:49:221 - ^ same
5. 00:46:111 and 00:46:294 - It feels like these should be doubled as well sorry i don't like double notes in one sound
6. 01:16:843 and 01:18:306 should be triple, while 01:17:392 should be double
   that triple notes=that double note's sounds+bass
7. 01:19:404 and 01:20:136 - Leave them double, as 01:20:319 is like a blast so it should has more notes than others
   first triple=bass+snare+instrument same pitch and rhythm as vocal,second triple=bass+inst+cymbal

Good luck!

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. Timing Check : ☑

2. Metadata Check : ☑

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

3. BG's data Check : *☑

4. HP/OD FIX Check : ☑

5. Audio FIX Check : ☑

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

[hutu's Hard+]
00:05:062 (5062|1,5256|2,5449|3) - & 00:06:030 (6030|2,6224|3,6417|4) -
伴奏とメインメロディの階段、これはそのまま位置を入れ替えてはどうですか？
00:05:643 (5643|0,5836|0) - との接続がしっくり来るような感じがします。 ---> (e.g.1)
1に置いてあった8分の縦を2にずらす形に

00:06:804 (6804|1,6998|2) - Ctrl+J ダブルノートの強調部分、幅があと少し欲しいかもしれないです。
これは強調しているのではなく、低音ピアノ3連に高音ピアノが混ざって2ノーツになってる、いわゆる混フレってやつです
前のパターンで低音は3連隣接階段で置いていて、パターンを変化させたくないのでno changeで

00:11:062 - ~ 00:11:304 - 閾値を意識したのか或いは、単に打ちやすさを考えたのか微妙なところですが..
00:11:111 - は微かに鳴ってる感じがしますね。3にノートを入れても問題ないように感じます。
ここになっていると言うより、低音が4連で00:11:062から始まっているのに気がついたので、2連にして5鍵全てを生かすパターンに変更

00:56:264 (56264|1,56355|2,56447|3) - Ctrl+J ヴォーカルのエンドアクセントと、ベルのような音は切り離したほうがマッチしそうです。
ここはボーカルを取っていないというより、ボーカルと同じリズムでベルが鳴っていてそっちにあわせてるので問題なし

01:09:526 (69526|4,69617|3,69709|4,69800|3,69892|4) - そのまま移動させて34のトリルにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
01:08:794 - & 01:09:160 - の24配列（前者は若干違いますが..）に対して勢いが付けれると思います。
4始動の24トリルにすることで偏りを防ぐことにしました



Good Luck

REDYUMiKA wrote:

[Zan's Anomaly]
00:02:933 (2933|3) - move to 2, pitch is kinda weak around here. ok

00:28:672 - ~ 00:28:916 - There are misplacement of notes by different divisor. ---> (e.g.2) fixed!

00:29:282 - ~ 00:29:648 - I think here's overchorded tho... that's anomaly. changed to singles

00:59:099 - add a note to 3 for making it have a consistence of voice accent. nope~

Good Luck

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

WIP WIP WI PWIP WIP WIP IPWIP IWPI PIWPI PIWPI PIWPI PWIP W.... blah blah blah ... WIPWIPWIPWIPWIWPIWPIPW IPWI PI PWI PWI PIW IPW IP ... PI PI PIPIPIPIP ... ERRORRRRR ... HACCCCKKIINGFG PEEPEPPPPPYIPIPPPI!!!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Kyousuke-

[Generals]
- BPM: okay
- Offset: The first offset timing for the bpm (155.000) should have the offset is 1979, its snapper than the old one ok changed!
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: does the .ogg is unrankable for now? suggest to ask bat for this and replace ogg to wav

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[Normal]

SPOILER

• 
  00:05:062 (5062|0) - remove this, I think its not necessary if you following mania's sound here, if have the sound in here, its only hithat or a very small piano's sound, sound weird when add a note in here (or not suggest for hearing on normal <(") yourchoice)
  00:16:660 - add a note in here for the bass, for like as 00:15:928 - if you following two notes like it
  00:17:575 - add a note for the bass
  00:22:514 - in here is also
  00:28:550 (28550|4) - remove this, seems hard for players and move 00:28:367 (28367|3) - to 5
  ^ ok, all applied
  00:32:941 (32941|1) - move this note to 00:33:124 - , the sound is weird when have this note in this place it's for snare in col 2
  00:33:672 (33672|4) - also remove this for ^ for snare in col 5
  00:34:770 (34770|1) - almsot doesnt have sound in here, only the small "ting" sound but not fit with the sound like of 00:34:587 - for drum continuation
  00:42:087 - suggest to remove, not add more (if you following to add a note when have the same sound with 00:45:014 - ) it's without bell and more louder, so keep <(")
  00:53:672 (53672|4) - this note support to be on: 00:53:703 - (1/4) i'm folowing drum there, if at 1/4 it's bell sound
  00:53:977 - add a note in here if you like, have a bass in here only bell :U
  00:54:160 - add a note in here for the cymbol *cymbal :v okok
  00:57:087 - remove the note, seems in here only have one drum, only the long note is enough ok
  01:21:782 (81782|3) - suggest to move to 4, fit more with the patterns already in 4, moved to 3 <(")
  01:24:434 (84434|3,84526|2,84617|1) - move those up to 1 line: like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608769, on 01:24:434 - is the bass, not the piano's sound, it will fit with the next note ok. added note on the bass
  01:27:819 - add a note in 4 for the bass added at 5
  01:29:099 - add a note in 5 for the strong beat of the voice ok
  01:29:374 (89374|0) - remove this one, no sound in here, and move 01:29:465 (89465|2) - to 4 for the patterns ok. re-arranged
  01:29:465 (89465|2) - add a note for the cymbal no cymbal there :U
  01:39:160 (99160|2) - move this to 01:39:709 - (another long sound is in here, not in 01:39:160 - ) but also move the hold to 3 too for patterns i'm following when the sound start. moved to 3
  This diff not yet rankable because not added hitsound, add hitsound for it

[Hard]

SPOILER

• 
  00:01:965 (1965|1) - remove this one, two note is enough for the single piano's sound here ok
  00:14:191 - how about change the pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608803 re-arranged. more comfortable now :3
  00:34:861 (34861|0,34953|1) - remove this, have hithat sound but, sound weird when add note in here, the hithat seems is too little for hear feels empty when remove it :/
  00:38:611 (38611|2) - remove this note and move the hitsound to longnote: you can see on here doesnt have the cymbol like of 00:38:063 - but on 00:38:063 - you added three notes so 00:38:611 - should be 2 ok
  00:39:343 - but .. on here is have it <(") loll i don't get it <(")
  00:46:477 - improve the patterns for easier: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608845 okay~ re-arranged
  00:49:770 (49770|4) - move this to 3 for pattern ok
  00:53:002 (53002|3) - support to be on: 00:52:971 - (1/4) ok
  00:53:306 (53306|3) - the bass to small, suggest to remove, hard to hear and pressing it on hard diff keep <(")
  00:58:916 (58916|0,59282|2,59648|4) - remove this, if you see, the next part, you doesnt added two notes when get bass like on this ok ;w;
  01:02:209 (62209|0) - remove? maybe, beat no so strong for two notes fixed
  01:02:209 (62209|0) - remove 1 of 2 notes, there next part have the same strong with this but only added two notes on it ^ same with before? O_o
  01:09:526 - change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608965 / you can hear that in 01:09:892 - only have single ring bell, so only a long note is enough wow okay~
  01:13:002 - add a note in 1, the preview part: 01:11:538 - you added two notes when have same sound like this ok. re-arranged
  01:15:745 - remove a note, two notes is eough for this strong beat
  01:16:660 - remove a note, I only hear the bass
  01:29:374 (89374|0) - these is no sound in here
  01:29:008 (89008|4) - these is no ^
  01:39:160 (99160|3) - same as normal's diff, but the first parts you added hitsound, but the last part you not yet add hitsound or no add anymore? if not add anymore, add some for fit the full of htisound! hitsound added :v
  ok, alll apllied and re-arranged.
  Nice

so... the mod still ... WIPW IPWIP IPWIP IPWIP IPIW IPWIP IP ... blah blah blah ... like the wrote of Kyousuke- :3 back soon then
the normal and hard diffs mods still wip?
[Comment]

alacat wrote:

As request about metadata

Source must be "Magical Charming!" , Hiragana ver is way of reading. So Please move Hiragana ver to tags.



Official Website : http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/index.php

alacat wrote:

I'm Sorry, forgot to check the artist Please look at this ! : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3823527/

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Kyousuke-

[Generals]
- BPM: okay
- Offset: The first offset timing for the bpm (155.000) should have the offset is 1979, its snapper than the old one
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: does the .ogg is unrankable for now? suggest to ask bat for this and replace ogg to wav

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~



[hutu's Hard+]

SPOILER

• 
  00:01:965 - add a note in 1 for the strong piano's sound
  repattern
  00:04:675 - add a note in 3 if you add a pitch like as this after this part: 00:06:998 - different sound,i don't put some notes on single sound even strong
  00:11:304 (11304|4) - support to be on 00:11:320 - (1/6) i heard here
  00:12:030 - to 00:12:611 - this part not suggest for hard's diff, remove it
  no thanks i think i need this sounds really and it's not hard.it's hard+
  00:19:587 - this part have the strong beat like as 00:16:660 - , suggest to remove one note for like as that pitch
  no thanks,difference of having piano sounds
  00:15:928 - this, you have to add one more note if you add 4 notes in: 00:21:782 - (have same strong beat), or remove a note in 00:21:782 -
  choose remove
  00:25:258 - the beat not so strong for 4 notes, remove one 15=piano,24=cymbal+drum,enough
  00:26:172 - add a note for the cymbol already has
  00:42:087 - add a note for the bass no bass here
  00:42:819 - here is too, stronger beat than 00:43:002 - only one sound
  00:45:380 - add a note in 1 for the bass 5=bass already
  00:47:941 - add one in here too
  00:48:672 - add also in here
  same
  00:53:306 (53306|0,53672|1,53916|0) - this you think those are unnecessary, or hard for plays? because players maybe get 1/2 if doesnt get the pitch yet, like 1/3 or 1/4, suggest to remove 1/3 and only adding 1/4
  i don't want change.i follow vocal with perc and drums,actually,vocal with perc on 1/4,drums are 1/3
  if move i make rhythm,making rhythm is hated by many BNs,you know.
  so i put these notes as comfortable as possible
  00:57:087 - add a note in 5, for the bass no bass here
  01:13:002 - add a note in here for the cymbol other has cymbal,add there
  01:14:282 - on here is bass, doesnt have cymbol like of 01:14:648 - , so suggest to remove a note, beat not strong enough for 3 on 01:14:282 -
  bass+snare+perc with vocal
  01:15:380 - and 01:15:745 - remove a note, if you following to add three notes when have the beat like 01:15:014 -
  keep 1st remove 2nd
  01:21:782 - add a note, strong beat (have a cymbol in here) repattern
  01:22:697 - for here is also re
  01:26:172 - add a note for the crash like you added on 01:01:294 - or 01:26:904 -
  different from these sounds about bass
  01:27:453 - in here is only bass, remove a note when in here doesnt have the cymbol for the strong beat
  base but i notice to miss one base add
  01:29:648 - for here is the same no thanks snare instead cymbal
  01:35:684 - remove a note, in here doesnt have strong beat, also hear like only have hithat sound so only one note is okay delete 4
  01:36:416 - add a note for the cymbol (not for the hitsound) no thanks
  01:37:148 - add a note in 5 for the drum sound re

so... the mod still ... WIPW IPWIP IPWIP IPWIP IPIW IPWIP IP ... blah blah blah ... like the wrote of Kyousuke- :3 back soon then
[Comment]

alacat wrote:

@Momochikun :3

appleeaterx wrote:

I think you should remove the space in between feat. and 佐倉紗織/Sakura Saori. Check ave;new's website for details.

Don't forget to do this before getting rebubble !



Game Website : http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/download/index.php



Artist Website : http://www.avenew.jp/sp/enlever/top.html

Good luck with re-qualify :>

1. metadata fixed
2. offset fixed

2015-02-06 21:43 Kyousuke-: hi kk
2015-02-06 21:43 Kyousuke-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/565012 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly [Hard]]
2015-02-06 21:43 Kuo Kyoka: what is it
2015-02-06 21:43 Kyousuke-: hmm are you sure 1979 offset is the most snapper one?
2015-02-06 21:44 Kuo Kyoka: wait a bit
2015-02-06 21:45 Kyousuke-: because shionlove said 1972 is better...
2015-02-06 21:45 Kyousuke-: and now i'm confused o.o
2015-02-06 21:46 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-02-06 21:47 Kyousuke-: OH WAIT GRATS YOU BN NOW LOL
2015-02-06 21:47 Kuo Kyoka: 1975
2015-02-06 21:47 Kuo Kyoka: LOL
2015-02-06 21:47 Kuo Kyoka: thanks <4
2015-02-06 21:47 Kuo Kyoka: <3*
2015-02-06 21:47 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2015-02-06 21:47 Kyousuke-: loll
2015-02-06 21:47 Kyousuke-: okay 1975
2015-02-06 21:47 Kyousuke-: thx~
2015-02-06 21:48 Kuo Kyoka: okay ~

5K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

Blocko wrote:

so moe

[General]
Timing and Offset: All diffs should have the same offset, but Zan's Anomaly is the only diff that has a different offset apart from the other three diffs. Might wanna fix that.

Be sure to apply the mods before changing the timing and/or offset!

5K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

[Normal]

Mod inside

- If part of the song contains piano in it, try to arrange the patterns based on the piano's pitch so that when players play this diff, they'll feel like they're playing on an actual piano.

00:01:975 (1975|0,2362|2,2555|3,2942|4,3329|1) - Arrange to 5,4,3,2,1 for piano's pitch relevancy

00:04:297 (4297|4) - Move to 3 or 2, the note shouldn't really go that far based on pitch

00:04:684 (4684|1,4878|3) - Ctrl + H for piano pitch
Optional: move the notes 1 column to the right for maximum pitch relevance

00:05:652 (5652|3,5845|2,6039|0) - Arrange to 1,2,3 for piano pitch
Optional: For the first two notes, arrange them to 1/2 jack since they're on the same pitch.

00:07:200 (7200|0) - Move to 4, note shouldn't go that far based on pitch

00:07:974 (7974|3) - Move to 1 for pitch relevancy


00:08:749 (8749|4,8942|4,9233|3,9523|2,9716|0) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
^ all applied~! applied the optional one too <3

00:17:026 (17026|4) - Move to 3 for hand balance

00:18:489 - Add a note for the kick here
^ all applied!
00:24:709 (24709|3) - Move to 3, then 00:25:258 (25258|1,25258|3) - Move 1 column to the right for pitch relevancy really cool~

00:33:672 to 00:34:770 - Pattern suggestion: Rearrange the current note pattern to this so it better expresses the most prominent instrument in this part. applied~ great suggestion~

00:42:087 (42087|3) - Move to 3 for better synergy

00:46:843 - Add a note for crash impact

00:48:672 (48672|4) - Move to 4 to avoid 1/2 jack?
^all applied~
00:50:867 (50867|3) - If you're following the vocal, it would be suitable to move this LN to 1 for the vocal pitch. applied. it's more suitable lol

00:51:233 - Add a note for the crash ok

00:52:331 (52331|4) - If following vocal, move to 2 applied

00:53:672 (53672|4) - Snap to the blue line with 1/4 beat snap divisor okkie

00:53:977 - Missing note here for the drum added and re-arranged.

01:16:111 - Add a note here for the crash

01:19:038 - Add a note for crash
^ ok
01:19:038 to 01:20:319 - Assuming that you're following the vocal, it would be more appropriate to arrange the notes here based on vocal pitch (something like this).

01:20:684 (80684|0,80684|3,80867|3,80867|0) - Move 1 column to the right. These notes are on the same pitch as 01:20:319 (80319|4,80319|1) - .

01:21:599 (81599|4) - Move to 2 for vocal pitch
If you applied the suggestion above, move 01:21:782 (81782|2) - to 5 for increased impact

01:27:270 (87270|0) - Move to 3 for hand balance

01:29:008 (89008|1) - Ghost note, remove

01:30:745 - Add a note here for increased impact

01:35:867 (95867|0,96050|1,96233|2,96416|3) - If you're following the vocal, I would suggest using this pattern to maximize the pitch relevancy here.

01:38:063 - Add note here for increased impact with the ending
^ applied all with the vocal pattern _( :3_//_ it's better

[Hard]

Mod inside

00:02:362 (2362|2,2555|3) - Switch these notes around by column for the piano's pitch relevancy

00:03:716 (3716|3,3910|2) - Same suggestion as above

00:04:297 (4297|4,4684|0) - Rearrange to 3, 5 for piano pitch

00:05:071 (5071|4,5265|3,5458|1,5652|3,5845|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy

00:07:200 (7200|0,7974|2,8168|0) - Switch these around by column for pitch relevancy

00:09:233 (9233|3,9716|0) - Same suggestion as above

00:10:104 (10104|2,10297|3) - They're both on the same pitch, so move either notes to the same column as the other, just like what you did on 00:08:749 (8749|1,8942|1) -
^really cool! all applied~ thx blocko for pointing pitch relevancy~~

00:20:044 (20044|0,20136|1,20227|2,20319|3,20410|4) - These hitsounds give out a sound after 00:20:502 - , which doesn't really fit this part if it's heard. (Start around 00:19:770 - and play it with 100% playback, and that sound occurs after 00:20:502 - )
Maybe change to a different hitsound that doesn't emit that sound? re-hitsound with smaller volume :'v

00:34:953 (34953|1) - Move to 4 to avoid 1/2 shielding okkie

00:46:843 (46843|4) - Move to 2 for a better pattern flow fixed owo

00:56:172 (56172|4,56264|3,56355|2,56447|1,56538|4,56538|0,56538|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy moved this 00:55:989 - to col 2, instead ctrl +h coz will break the pattern

01:09:526 (69526|1,69617|3,69709|1,69800|3,69892|1) - Same suggestion as above fixed. and re-arranged a little

01:23:245 - Add a note here for increased impact added

01:30:288 (90288|4,90380|3,90471|2,90563|1,90654|0) - Same suggestion about the hitsounds fixed

We need more 5K maps up in this game.
Good luck on rank, you guys!

Blocko wrote:

so moe

[General]
Timing and Offset: All diffs should have the same offset, but Zan's Anomaly is the only diff that has a different offset apart from the other three diffs. Might wanna fix that.

Be sure to apply the mods before changing the timing and/or offset!

5K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

[hutu's Hard+]

Mod inside

00:03:329 (3329|1,3329|3) - These notes should be graced since the piano was graced in this part
thanks i missed

00:12:571 - Add a note here for the somewhat audible sound? It might put off your intended pattern, so you're free to deny this.
i missed but keep(if 6K or more i add)

00:29:831 - Add a note for the piano heard here missed again,add 2 i'm noob

00:33:855 (33855|0,34038|1,34221|2) - Rearrange to 4,3,2 for pitch relevancy repattern for 54321 stair for pitch

00:51:965 - Add a note for the kick noob again lol add 1


Actually had fun with this diff since it flows quite well. Very nice!

We need more 5K maps up in this game.
Good luck on rank, you guys!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Sorry for delay D: Im done modding!

But for recoup, so I will have a bubble check on this map w/

Thanks and Sorry ;A;


And the artist:

ave;new feat. Sakura Saori


Link curently-ranked's map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/97359

Sorry, I cant find the web talk about the artist then ._.

Suggest for BG: http://puu.sh/fUaMz/36d877b45f.jpg

Good luck w/ call me when you're done

alacat wrote:

@Momochikun :3

appleeaterx wrote:

I think you should remove the space in between feat. and 佐倉紗織/Sakura Saori. Check ave;new's website for details.

Don't forget to do this before getting rebubble !



Game Website : http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/download/index.php



Artist Website : http://www.avenew.jp/sp/enlever/top.html

Good luck with re-qualify :>

Zan - wrote:

thanks for mods~

update: http://puu.sh/fUkGd/7fa9aff947.osu (no HS)
KS it first then i will continue to HS

Kyousuke- wrote:

still waiting for Zan's Anomaly hitsound diff~nvm zan was too lazy to hs, so i'll hitsound it... still hitsounding =w=

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

still waiting for Zan's Anomaly hitsound diff~nvm zan was too lazy to hs, so i'll hitsound it... still hitsounding =w=

lol zan

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

sorry for the 2-month delay Kyousuke-

metadata, bg and other stuffs seemed to be approved by some bns and qats.

about the sound files though, there are some which has a 5ms+ delay.
i edited some of them to remove the said delay. just copy-paste these files to your map directory and you should be fine. okay thx owo/

other than that, the following mods would be mostly tips & suggestions
ill check the hitsounding later~

Col: 1|2|3|4|5

[Normal]
00:10:878 (10878|2,11071|3) - since you're mapping the piano at this part, swapping their columns not only follows pitch relevancy, but also is more comfortable to play. oh yup fixed
00:18:124 (18124|0) - better if you move this to 4 to accent the vocals OR you could do a mirror of this (in this case, move 00:17:941 (17941|1,18124|0) - to 4 and 2, respectively) moved to 4~
00:23:428 (23428|4,23794|4,24160|4,24526|4) - if my hearing is right, 4 consecutive notes on the same col for this part seems a bit awkward (maybe its due to the sudden bass on 00:23:977 (23977|0) - ). i suggest to move 00:24:160 (24160|4) - to 4, makes more sense imo oh according to my pattern and the sound is not fit lol. re-arranged on that part, more flowy maybe :U
00:25:806 (25806|4,25989|3) - (optional) you can also swap these 2's cols i'm following vocal there, so nope
00:25:624 - how about this? http://puu.sh/grqXB/5d69a5e0ae.jpg nah this better :U ^ but why you suggesting that?
00:32:575 - i highly recommend to emphasize the strong beats at this part considering this is a nm diff. like this~ http://puu.sh/grrvA/317dce811d.jpg ok~!
00:39:892 - this part feels empty when there should be a drum roll. add a note here and on 00:40:258 - added
00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to 2 ok
00:44:831 (44831|3) - sound is too minute. remove. if you're trying to represent the vocals, then a ln should be placed on the start of it till here and not a normal note. removed owo
00:44:648 (44648|4) - move to 4. this is to complement your previous existing pattern on 00:41:721 (41721|3,42087|4,42453|4) - okkie fixed
00:45:197 - i know there's a sound at this part, but i highly suggest to remove the note here. it makes the players grasp this part more (emphazises the little "break") and also complements with 00:42:087 - yup i've testplay it and it's more comfortable, but is it fine to skip the sound?
00:45:745 (45745|3,45928|1) - swap col ok~!
00:47:575 (47575|3,47758|1) - move to 5 and 4, respectively, to accent the increased pitch. if applied, move 00:48:124 (48124|3) - to 5. it feels better since the previous drumclap is on col 1 ok, re-arranged a bit
00:53:977 (53977|3,54160|1) - swap col, to follow the pitch ok
00:53:977 (53977|3,54160|1) - move to 2 and 5. it is much better if the cymbals were represented by the 2 most furthest col on each side ^ i applied the mod before, if this 00:54:160 - at 5, it'll hard to press imo
01:00:014 - imo, its better if you mirror your previous pattern from 00:58:550 - (with a little variety of course), for consitency. something like this http://puu.sh/grw22/2f908b0176.jpg and then 01:02:026 (62026|2,62209|3) - swap col, cool! owo
01:04:404 - http://puu.sh/grxWs/6aa25cd56d.jpg okay <3 nice pattern
01:06:050 - http://puu.sh/gry5Y/dd1895f380.jpg re-arranged this ascending to the left side, coz it'll heavy on the right side
01:07:697 (67697|1,67880|0,68063|2,68245|3) - move to 1, 4, 2 and 3 applied~!
01:10:806 (70806|3) - move to 3 ok
01:11:904 - why break the flow here? add a note at 3 ok
01:12:270 (72270|0,72453|1) - move to 5 and 1 ok, re-arranged
01:13:184 - add notes on 3 and 5 okkie
01:14:099 (74099|4) - move to 4 okay =w=b
01:14:648 (74648|2) - best if you end it on 01:15:380 - , then move 01:15:745 (75745|0) - to 4 and make it and 01:15:380 (75380|1) - to 1/2 notes http://puu.sh/grzba/6fb16956ce.jpg amazing :U
01:16:477 (76477|1) - move to 3 ok~
01:17:758 (77758|1) - move to 4 why? it's same with this 01:18:124 (78124|1) -
01:23:245 (83245|4) - best if you move this to 2 moved~
01:24:434 (84434|0,84526|3,84709|1) - move to 4, 2 and 4 to emphasize the piano's pitch applied
01:24:434 - http://puu.sh/grzAC/e907207c17.jpg to accent both the piano and the drums okay, re-arranged ^also considering the mod before
01:30:380 - add a note here ok
01:33:672 (93672|0) - move to 3 hmm i'll not consistent and comfortable i think...

if i can't finish the rest of the diffs tonight, ill try to continue tomorrow.

1. "a.k.a.dRESS" tags added for the composer
2. Normal diff checked
3. waiting for further ayano check~

Zan - wrote:

OK GO 5K!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh hi imma lazy

edit: @kyou about SV. pls add SV to my diff too. bcs it's awkward if highest diff doesnt have SV but lower diff has.

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

no kudos

(the diff on the right is the original one, for comparison)

[Hard]
I will skip most of the explanation stuffs so that i can cover more diffs with my allotted time. Do note that all of these aims in improving the flow and quality of your map and with reason.

00:05:265 - consider rearranging the following pattern, for better flow, since you're following the piano at this point (some of my friends also pointed out that some of the patterns were uncomfortable/unnatural for a particular point. this is one of them). like this~ http://puu.sh/gARwH/03783100b9.jpg ok <3
00:17:209 - note at 5 note added
00:18:672 - (take note of the note addition and the removed ones~) http://puu.sh/gASBx/7049866e4b.jpg more better~! applied
00:25:806 (25806|3,25989|4) - move to 2 and 4 for pitch ok!
00:28:367 - a very awkward pattern. use this~ http://puu.sh/gATgg/8a8f22d673.jpg yeah, i'm finding that my pattern hard to play lol :v applied~ nah this better lol
00:29:465 - add a note at 4 to continue the flow okkie
00:32:941 (32941|1) - move this to 00:33:124 - at col 5. its better if you focus on the vocals at this part, since it's the prominent one. and then, remove 00:33:672 (33672|4) - to make the flow more solid. yup, applied~
00:34:587 - http://puu.sh/gATv5/c387bde3ff.jpg lol sasuga, i've tried to make the best pattern for this. and you make it lol :U applied xDD
00:39:709 - how about trills? http://puu.sh/gATIk/dd3c2d0b0c.jpg okay, it's more fun to play :v
00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to 3 ok
00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to 5 ok
00:43:367 - note at 4, move 00:43:550 (43550|2) - to 1, and a note at 00:43:550 - on col 4. lastly, move 00:43:733 (43733|4,43916|0) - to 3 and 5, respectively wow good, applied~
00:45:563 - the flow of the piano was cut here, thus making an awkward transition together with the ln at the left. consider this pattern change~ http://puu.sh/gAVKy/0e3667beeb.jpg applied~
00:49:404 - add a note at 5 ok owo
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|4,53306|3,53428|0) - move to 1, 4, 2 and 5, to emphasize the drums. (also a good way to utilize the ln at the middle) nice xDD applied
00:56:264 (56264|3,56355|2,56447|1) - if we listen closely, moving these notes to 1, 2 and 3 respectively makes more sense. lol okay~
00:57:453 - http://puu.sh/gAXjm/1b06494d47.jpg woah thx >w< applied
00:58:916 - note at 2 wat, added at 4 for avoiding pattern conflict
00:59:648 - ^ at 5 okkie
00:59:099 - http://puu.sh/gAXyf/2ce7f2b0e5.jpg okkie. ^ with some mods of that
01:01:843 - http://puu.sh/gAXGA/8bfb891ca9.jpg okay~ owo
01:03:306 (63306|1,63398|0) - you have two choices here. 1. you can swap this notes' col and make a stair OR 2. utilize a trill and move 01:03:306 (63306|1) - to 3 for variation okkie i choose 2. make a trill =w=
01:07:697 (67697|1) - move to 4 hmm i applied the below one
01:07:697 (67697|1,67880|0) - move to 1 and 5 for a differentiate the drums and the piano on a much more clearer way. applied! ^ reject the above one, coz the same point :U
01:08:794 - suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gAY8N/e4d64ea9df.jpg shifting the density more on the vocals than the drums. woah thx~~ xDD applied
01:10:989 (70989|1) - remove. 1 note is enough, (like what you did on 01:12:453 - ) okkie
after that, 01:10:624 - this~ http://puu.sh/gAYoi/3333211e2e.jpg nicee <3 applied~
01:12:453 (72453|1) - move to 5 ok
01:13:184 - add a note (either at 2 or 4) okkie
01:12:819 - http://puu.sh/gAYwu/3508edb7c5.jpg applied~~
01:16:477 (76477|3,76660|1) - swap col ok!
01:30:471 (90471|2,90654|0,90745|2) - move to 1, 3 and 1 respectively applied~
01:35:227 (95227|1) - stairs is kinda awkward for this drumroll. move to 5 ok. hehe
01:36:874 (96874|1) - i suggest you do not map this note. if you still want to, it must be at 01:36:904 - (1/6 snap) and preferably at col 4 ah okay, deleted =w=

i'll do the other diffs when i have some free time~

Zan - wrote:

waiting my diff get mod...

1. Normal and Hard diff checked
2. waiting for further ayano check~

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

@kyou~ you can start rechecking the hitsounds, so that raika would have less checking to do

Zan - wrote:

where's mod on my diff.

why am i so impatient wwwwwwww

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

no kudos

col: 1|2|3|4|5

hi shione~! these are mostly suggestions, which may or may not reflect on your mapping style. (sorry about that ^^)
[hutu's Hard+]
00:01:926 (1926|3) - better if you just map the piano's prominent sound instead of piano w/ reverb+chyme here. remove. (you may need to rearrange the pattern)
piano also here
00:03:378 (3378|3) - move to 5 no thanks
00:22:880 (22880|3,23063|1) - swap col no thanks,same sounds as previous
00:29:191 (29191|2,29282|0) - repattern. suggests to 2 and 4, respectively no thanks,best pattern for not only drums but next pattern
00:38:063 (38063|2) - move to 4 change 1345 instead
00:40:715 (40715|2,40898|1) - remove, for correct snap of the percussion. then rearrange. suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gI6ct/08d8a5810e.jpg
delete and another pattern
00:49:587 (49587|0) - move to 5, for hand balance no thanks
00:53:703 (53703|3) - 1/6. you can ask raika about this one, just to be sure. just vocal
00:59:648 (59648|2) - (optional) move to 4 no thanks
01:03:398 (63398|1) - if you're mapping the drums here, this one can be moved to 01:03:581 - add instead,because there's sound too
01:08:840 (68840|3) - im not really sure, but this one seems to be in 1/6 snap. (again, ask raika to be sure) 1/8 i'm sure
01:18:672 (78672|2,78855|3) - move 1 space to the right no thanks
01:26:264 (86264|2) - move to 5, then move 01:26:538 (86538|4) - to 4 no thanks
01:27:270 (87270|1,87361|3) - swap col no thanks
01:30:654 - add a note at 2 to continue the flow (and the piano)no thanks,drums, and then move 01:30:928 (90928|0) - to 2 ok
01:33:124 - kinda awkward, imo. suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gI7gR/40bb3efe13.jpg no thanks
01:37:331 (97331|2,97422|0) - move to 2 and 3, respectively no thanks

@kyou~ you can start rechecking the hitsounds, so that raika would have less checking to do

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

in my opinion, it would be better if all of the diffs use the same set of hitsounds from the same source.

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

lastly, no kudos~

col: 1|2|3|4|5

[Zan's Anomaly]
HP: just a flat 8.

00:04:878 (4878|2) - remove | ok
00:10:104 (10104|3,10297|3) - move 1 space to the left | ok
00:11:071 - http://puu.sh/gJ1hN/e3959d78af.jpg | nope
00:13:977 - http://puu.sh/gJ1QB/23ed63c3fc.jpg | i use some of it
00:17:209 - http://puu.sh/gJ2jX/b86924a13d.jpg | nope
00:19:678 (19678|1,19861|3,20044|1) - remove. unnecessary density, if you're layering the piano with the drums. you might wanna rearrange the said pattern to fit to your mapping style | yup
00:20:684 (20684|3,20776|2,20867|1) - move to 3, 2 and 3, respectively | nope
00:21:416 (21416|2,21599|3) - swap col, to complement the succeeding symmetric pattern | good!
00:34:678 - awkward flow. add a note at 4 nope, its fine imo
00:39:709 - trills maybe? http://puu.sh/gJ3fs/baeb9b6df2.jpg | i use some of it
00:46:111 (46111|3,46294|4) - swap col | nice~
00:47:636 (47636|3,47819|1,47880|2) - remove. ghost notes. then rearrange. suggests this~ http://puu.sh/gJ3zR/8b5f45f616.jpg | changed to follow rhythm (1/2)
00:52:148 (52148|4) - remove, since 00:51:965 - has a stronger kick than this one, in terms of bass. and to allow proper distinction between them. | yup
01:03:124 (63124|2) - move to 1 | nope
01:02:941 - http://puu.sh/gJa31/8211b70b2e.jpg | good
01:08:063 - highly recommend this~ http://puu.sh/gJapj/dcf3c94a35.jpg | current is easier to read.
01:11:172 (71172|3,71355|2) - move to 3 and 5 | ok
01:11:904 (71904|1) - move to 3 | nope
01:12:270 (72270|2,72636|2) - move to 2 | nope, fit enough to be in same col.
01:26:264 (86264|3,86355|4) - swap col, then remove 01:26:538 (86538|3) - | ok
01:29:282 (89282|1) - move to 5 | ok
01:31:843 (91843|2) - ^ | nope
01:33:215 (93215|3,93306|2) - swap col, for better flow, then move 01:33:489 (93489|4,93672|3) - to 4 and 2, respectively | nice
01:35:684 - note at 4 | ok
01:35:867 - ^ at 3 | ok
01:35:776 (95776|0) - remove (ghost note) then this~ http://puu.sh/gJb65/b4faf7c938.jpg | apply but not hte LN

LordRaika wrote:

Okay, so here's some check.... :

Final Mod from me before ayano's bubble

BG : ✔
Snap : ? ( check the piano stream again ) hmm okay, waiting them~
Audio : X ( Kyouuuuu, the fiano is still OGG (◣_◢) ) ok, fixed lol. i dunno why still D:
Timing : ✔
Spread : ✔
Pattern : ✔
Metadata : ✔

some mod

00:19:130 (19130|1) - why suddenly a default drum whistle here? ( all dif beside shione's) hue hs changed

Major issue : ( why its still here? )
Shione's and Zan's is different on snap.... damnit
00:12:039 - this part...
both of you using different snap.... if you want my snap.. or my opinion, i choose shionelove's snap...
BUT, 00:12:523 (12523|3) - on shionelove dif, i agree , this is 1/6 like Zan's dif....
^ waiting them
little mod:

Zan's Anomaly

1. 01:22:697 - end LN(1,5) here
2. 01:31:294 (91294|1,91660|0,92026|2,92392|3,92758|4) - i rarely see this short LN on your dif unless its for smthg like this >> 00:20:502 (20502|4,21050|4) -
   maybe change into smthg else?
3. aaa guys, i think u should check again note like this 00:50:319 (50319|1,50319|0) - this suppose to be here 00:50:136 - to have 2 note...
   its like wrong hitsound or total note. 00:50:319 - should be kick and 1 note hs changed to kick
4. 00:51:782 (51782|0,51782|4) - same to this , supposed to be kick, let Kyou know this, other dif has same problem... ok hs changed to kick
5. 01:12:270 (72270|2,72453|2,72636|2) - move to 2, more Hand Balance

hutu's Hard+

1. 00:47:209 (47209|2,47941|2) - missing clap?
   i think i dont miss any... and the pattern is ok since i know what you map unless player really dislike vocal.

Kyou, if u help zan fix the hitsound part? its best to apply the same on your normal and hard as well...
as usual, use 20% music and 100% effect will help u, to know where did u miss the drum snare, or kick.

Let me knw IRC if you have trouble on it

GL

Zan - wrote:

i also cant find perfect snap for piano. maybe this will take while.
orz.

LordRaika wrote:

Okay, so here's some check.... :

Final Mod from me before ayano's bubble

BG : ✔
Snap : ? ( check the piano stream again )
Audio : X ( Kyouuuuu, the fiano is still OGG (◣_◢) )
Timing : ✔
Spread : ✔
Pattern : ✔
Metadata : ✔

some mod

00:19:130 (19130|1) - why suddenly a default drum whistle here? ( all dif beside shione's)

Major issue : ( why its still here? )
Shione's and Zan's is different on snap.... damnit
00:12:039 - this part...
both of you using different snap.... if you want my snap.. or my opinion, i choose shionelove's snap...
BUT, 00:12:523 (12523|3) - on shionelove dif, i agree , this is 1/6 like Zan's dif.... ok fixed

little mod:

Zan's Anomaly

1. 01:22:697 - end LN(1,5) here
2. 01:31:294 (91294|1,91660|0,92026|2,92392|3,92758|4) - i rarely see this short LN on your dif unless its for smthg like this >> 00:20:502 (20502|4,21050|4) -
   maybe change into smthg else?
3. aaa guys, i think u should check again note like this 00:50:319 (50319|1,50319|0) - this suppose to be here 00:50:136 - to have 2 note...
   its like wrong hitsound or total note. 00:50:319 - should be kick and 1 note
4. 00:51:782 (51782|0,51782|4) - same to this , supposed to be kick, let Kyou know this, other dif has same problem...
5. 01:12:270 (72270|2,72453|2,72636|2) - move to 2, more Hand Balance

hutu's Hard+

1. 00:47:209 (47209|2,47941|2) - missing clap? yes thanks
   i think i dont miss any... and the pattern is ok since i know what you map unless player really dislike vocal.

Kyou, if u help zan fix the hitsound part? its best to apply the same on your normal and hard as well...
as usual, use 20% music and 100% effect will help u, to know where did u miss the drum snare, or kick.

Let me knw IRC if you have trouble on it

GL

LordRaika wrote:

little mod:

Zan's Anomaly

1. 01:22:697 - end LN(1,5) here || ok
2. 01:31:294 (91294|1,91660|0,92026|2,92392|3,92758|4) - i rarely see this short LN on your dif unless its for smthg like this >> 00:20:502 (20502|4,21050|4) -
   maybe change into smthg else? || keep fit vor vocal
3. aaa guys, i think u should check again note like this 00:50:319 (50319|1,50319|0) - this suppose to be here 00:50:136 - to have 2 note...
   its like wrong hitsound or total note. 00:50:319 - should be kick and 1 note || i think no problem to double, it has similar strength
4. 00:51:782 (51782|0,51782|4) - same to this , supposed to be kick, let Kyou know this, other dif has same problem... || ^
5. 01:12:270 (72270|2,72453|2,72636|2) - move to 2, more Hand Balance || ok

Zan - wrote:

some irc with ayano: http://puu.sh/gNqVg/dbf67abdca.txt

update: http://puu.sh/gNqTJ/1afea672a1.rar

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

Since the patterns and overall quality of the diffs were dramatically improved, I'll give my approval for this map~

Before rank/qualifying though, finalize the confirmation about the possible said issues stated by Kyou above (personally i have no qualms against it, but let's try to make sure, just in case)
You can call me for a rebubble if this one is popped due to the said reasons

Zan - wrote:

5K Hype plz

LordRaika wrote:

kyou i guess u need to ask people in charge for the snap , just to confirm things

bakabakemono wrote:

Kyousuke-'s maps will attack the qualified maps section :^)

Zan - wrote:

bakabakehomo

Starry- wrote:

The snap does really need some attention here - I'm pretty sure in both difficulties is wrong.
00:12:039 - Should actually start 1/16 behind everything (since it's a tiny bit earlier than the rest of the notes as you can hear).
It really is quite a weird snap but this is what I got - although I suggest you double check with someone more qualified to checking these snaps since I'm probably not the best ;p.

In 1/16 snap divisor

In 1/12 snap divisor

This is only for the last snap part - I understand there's even more snapping issues slightly earlier but I'm quite short on time and I'm pretty sure mine are wrong anyways.

Any other ideas for the snapping will be appreciated and I can check over them again if necessary!

ExPew wrote:

light mod to check beatsnap notes

lel bubble already?

11:50 Kyousuke-: hi pew
11:50 Kyousuke-: wat lol
11:50 *Kyousuke- ucp.php?i=pm&mode=view&f=-1&p=1012916
11:50 Kyousuke-: reminder
11:53 ExPew: oh that PM?
11:53 ExPew: sorry
11:54 ExPew: oh is this map someone explain to me
11:54 Kyousuke-: yeaa
11:54 Kyousuke-: just check snap thingy :U
11:54 ExPew: hutu wants use default hs?
11:54 Kyousuke-: yes ._.
11:55 Kyousuke-: hmm i bet zan told you before about this lol
12:05 ExPew: i guess so
12:05 ExPew: which diff you want me to check it>??
12:05 Kyousuke-: hutu's Hard+ and Zan's Anomlay snap on the opening piano
12:06 Kyousuke-: 00:01:733 - 00:13:185 -
12:07 Kyousuke-: oops just from this 00:10:878 - until 00:13:185 -
12:07 Kyousuke-: thx before xD
12:07 ExPew: 00:01:878 (1878|2,1926|3) - wrong snap
12:07 Kyousuke-: owh you an post it later~
12:07 Kyousuke-: t/267633/start=90 there's have starry's snap
12:08 ExPew: feels like 1/12
12:08 Kyousuke-: lol wrong snap at the start :/
12:08 ExPew: 00:03:362 (3362|3) - here too
12:09 ExPew: 00:11:216 (11216|1) - 1/12
12:09 ExPew: on this timeline 00:11:233 -
12:10 Kyousuke-: oh i see
12:10 ExPew: such piano
12:10 ExPew: u hurt my ear
12:10 Kyousuke-: rip
12:11 Kyousuke-: lol
12:11 ExPew: 00:11:313 (11313|0) - 1/12
12:11 ExPew: on 00:11:313 (11313|0) -
12:12 Kyousuke-: 00:03:394 - hmm 1/12 here too?
12:12 ExPew: lmao
12:12 ExPew: 00:12:297 (12297|4) -
12:12 ExPew: eh
12:13 ExPew: yes
12:13 ExPew: 1/12
12:13 Kyousuke-: okkie
12:13 ExPew: 00:12:071 - lmao need to fix
12:14 Kyousuke-: lol 00:12:039 (12039|1) - starry says this note start at00:12:015 -
12:15 ExPew: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945222
12:15 ExPew: something like this
12:16 ExPew: tell starry to recheck it again
12:16 Kyousuke-: starry just off lol
12:16 ExPew: 00:11:845 - not recommend to add this light sound
12:18 Kyousuke-: hmm there's no note at there
12:18 ExPew: it is
12:18 ExPew: but sounds tooo deep
12:20 Kyousuke-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945236
12:20 Kyousuke-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945222 why yours have a note at there lol
12:20 ExPew: remove lol
12:21 ExPew: start piano sound on 00:12:071 -
12:21 Kyousuke-: oh okay :U
12:22 Kyousuke-: uhh so complicated 1/12 lol
12:23 Kyousuke-: i think you must post it later at forum for them, since this is not my diffs :U
12:23 ExPew: nah
12:23 ExPew: free mod
12:23 Kyousuke-: =w=
12:23 ExPew: make sure you fix these snap on other diffs too
12:23 Kyousuke-: i must giving kudos for this lol
12:24 ExPew: and ask shione for permission to fix
12:24 ExPew: okay2
12:24 ExPew: ill post
12:24 Kyousuke-: hmm btw, about the hs? .-.
12:24 Kyousuke-: okat thx lol~
12:24 ExPew: i mean snapping things
12:25 Kyousuke-: yup just hutu's and zan's follows piano snap
12:26 ExPew: timing fit on your timeline
12:26 ExPew: no need to change
12:27 Kyousuke-: ow okkie my diffs snap is fine?
12:27 ExPew: is there got anything weird snap?
12:27 ExPew: such as 1/6 1/8
12:27 Kyousuke-: nope, but start at here 00:11:265 -
12:28 Kyousuke-: all using 1/4 on my diffs
12:28 ExPew: 00:11:233 -
12:28 ExPew: correct snap
12:28 ExPew: 1/12
12:28 Kyousuke-: 00:11:233 - start here?
12:28 Kyousuke-: oh okay
12:29 Kyousuke-: rip 1/12 lol
12:29 ExPew: thats why you hurt my ears
12:30 Kyousuke-: hue i didin't thoght this will more complicated lol
12:30 Kyousuke-: sorry for that? xD
12:31 ExPew: got anything weird ?
12:31 ExPew: 01:02:941 - feels overmap here
12:31 ExPew: OH thi zan diff
12:32 Kyousuke-: wut lol
12:32 Kyousuke-: i think no more problem
12:32 Kyousuke-: where's overmapped? D:
12:32 ExPew: 01:02:941 -
12:32 ExPew: no BGM sound
12:32 ExPew: streams
12:33 ExPew: 01:03:032 (63032|2) - such like
12:33 ExPew: ghost
12:33 ExPew: 01:03:398 (63398|1,63489|2,63581|1) -
12:33 ExPew: 01:03:764 (63764|4,63764|1) -
12:33 Kyousuke-: oh ya...
12:33 Kyousuke-: lol rip anomaly's diff
12:34 Kyousuke-: you can add it to your post lol
12:34 ExPew: tell him about this
12:34 Kyousuke-: oh okay
12:35 Kyousuke-: oh well he's just off :/
12:35 ExPew: lel kk
12:35 ExPew: im done check
12:36 Kyousuke-: btw, 00:11:233 - start at here on normal diff?
12:37 ExPew: start 00:11:329 -
12:37 Kyousuke-: same as hard too? start on there?
12:37 ExPew: everything must be same
12:38 Kyousuke-: okay
12:39 Kyousuke-: one thing again about hs at hutu's diff
12:39 Kyousuke-: is it fine?
12:40 ExPew: i cant say that

ill leave to BN to recheck it again

bakabakemono wrote:

just simple snapping check

yEEE

[Anomaly]
- 00:01:926 (1926|3) - should be here 00:01:910 -
- 00:03:716 (3716|1) - should be here 00:03:741 -
- 00:03:378 (3378|3) - should be here 00:03:362 -
- 00:03:523 (3523|0) - should be here 00:03:499 -
- 00:04:684 (4684|4) - should be here 00:04:708 -
- 00:04:878 (4878|3) - should be here 00:04:926 -
- 00:05:071 (5071|1,5071|4) - should be here 00:05:120 -
- 00:05:265 (5265|2) - should be here 00:05:313 -
- 00:05:458 (5458|3) - should be here 00:05:483 -
- 00:05:652 (5652|2) - should be here 00:05:676 -
- 00:05:652 (5652|0) - should be here 00:05:700 -
- 00:05:845 (5845|0,5845|2) - should be here 00:05:870 -
- 00:06:039 (6039|3) - should be here 00:06:063 -
- 00:06:233 (6233|2) - should be here 00:06:257 -
- 00:09:523 (9523|2) - should be here 00:09:499 -
- 00:10:104 (10104|4,10104|2) - should be here 00:10:079 -
- 00:11:168 (11168|2) - should be here 00:11:144 -
- 00:11:313 (11313|0) - should end here 00:12:015 - and then 00:12:039 (12039|1) - move here 00:12:015 - too
- 00:12:184 (12184|4) - should be here 00:12:208 -
- 00:12:555 (12555|3) - should be here 00:12:571 -

[Hard+]
- 00:01:926 (1926|3) - should be here 00:01:910 -
- 00:03:378 (3378|3) - should be here 00:03:362 -
- 00:03:523 (3523|0) - should be here 00:03:499 -
- 00:03:716 (3716|1) - should be here 00:03:741 -
- 00:04:684 (4684|4) - should be here 00:04:708 -
- 00:04:878 (4878|0) - should be here 00:04:926 -
- 00:05:071 (5071|1) - should be here 00:05:120 -
- 00:05:265 (5265|2) - should be here 00:05:313 -
- 00:05:458 (5458|3) - should be here 00:05:483 -
- 00:05:652 (5652|1) - should be here 00:05:676 -
- 00:05:845 (5845|1) - should be here 00:05:870 -
- 00:06:039 (6039|2) - should be here 00:06:063 -
- 00:07:974 (7974|1) - should be here 00:07:950 -
- 00:09:523 (9523|1,9523|3) - should be here 00:09:474 -
- 00:10:104 (10104|1) - should be here 00:10:079 -
- 00:11:071 (11071|2,11071|0) - should be here 00:11:047 -
- 00:11:168 (11168|1) - should be here 00:11:120 -
- 00:11:216 (11216|3) - should be here 00:11:241 -
- 00:12:039 (12039|0) - should be here 00:12:015 -
- 00:12:555 (12555|3) - should be here 00:12:571 -

so, I should be here to help you guys *slapped* jk jk

bakabakemono wrote:

I'm pro you know *cough and then slapped again
Edit: Hi new page

OniJAM wrote:

ok I'm here

Timing

1979,387.096774193548,4,2,45,30,1,0
3527,444.444444444444,4,2,45,30,1,0
3749,363.636363636364,4,2,45,30,1,0
3930,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
4117,387.096774193548,4,2,45,30,1,0
4310,400,4,2,45,30,1,0
4710,461.538461538462,4,2,45,30,1,0
4940,406.779661016949,4,2,45,30,1,0
5143,363.636363636364,4,2,45,30,1,0
5506,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
6443,428.571428571429,4,2,45,30,1,0
6657,369.230769230769,4,2,45,30,1,0
7026,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
7963,428.571428571429,4,2,45,30,1,0
8177,421.052631578947,4,2,45,30,1,0
8387,387.096774193548,4,2,45,30,1,0
8580,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
8767,413.793103448276,4,2,45,30,1,0
8973,387.096774193548,4,2,45,30,1,0
9231,400,4,2,45,30,1,0
9497,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
9747,369.230769230769,4,2,45,30,1,0
10116,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
10491,406.779661016949,4,2,45,30,1,0
10897,428.571428571429,4,2,45,30,1,0
11325,470.588235294118,4,2,45,30,1,0
12030,428.571428571429,4,2,45,30,1,0
12101,380.952380952381,4,2,45,30,1,0
12164,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
12351,387.096774193548,4,2,45,30,1,0
12415,470.588235294118,4,2,45,30,1,0
12493,533.333333333333,4,2,45,30,1,0
12581,375,4,2,45,30,1,0
12643,358.208955223881,4,2,45,30,1,0
13180,365.853658536585,4,2,45,30,1,0

I know little about 5k so I don't pop the bubble, you can find Ayano to rebubble after fixing timing
and if you are still not sure about the snapping, feel free to call me for a recheck

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Yay bubble again. \=D/
Omedeto Kyou-Senpai =w=)b

Kyousuke- wrote:

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Yay bubble again. \=D/
Omedeto Kyou-Senpai =w=)b

hue itu blom di pop lol :^)

-Troke- wrote:

Hello Kyousuke-
just quick mod

Normal

Hard

hutu's Hard+

Zan's Anomaly

-Troke- wrote:

Hello Kyousuke-
just quick mod

Normal

Hard

hutu's Hard+

Zan's Anomaly

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I'd like to know where the rebubble post is

Genocide wrote:

creatornya geblek

Rifkymarcelio wrote:

versi 7k ny dh graveyard. bikin 7k di beatmap ini