[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:
sorry for the 2-month delay Kyousuke-
metadata, bg and other stuffs seemed to be approved by some bns and qats.
about the sound files though, there are some which has a 5ms+ delay.
i edited some of them to remove the said delay. just copy-paste these files to your map directory and you should be fine. okay thx owo/
other than that, the following mods would be mostly tips & suggestions
ill check the hitsounding later~
Col: 1|2|3|4|5
[Normal]
00:10:878 (10878|2,11071|3) - since you're mapping the piano at this part, swapping their columns not only follows pitch relevancy, but also is more comfortable to play. oh yup fixed
00:18:124 (18124|0) - better if you move this to 4 to accent the vocals OR you could do a mirror of this (in this case, move 00:17:941 (17941|1,18124|0) - to 4 and 2, respectively) moved to 4~
00:23:428 (23428|4,23794|4,24160|4,24526|4) - if my hearing is right, 4 consecutive notes on the same col for this part seems a bit awkward (maybe its due to the sudden bass on 00:23:977 (23977|0) - ). i suggest to move 00:24:160 (24160|4) - to 4, makes more sense imo oh according to my pattern and the sound is not fit lol. re-arranged on that part, more flowy maybe :U
00:25:806 (25806|4,25989|3) - (optional) you can also swap these 2's cols i'm following vocal there, so nope
00:25:624 - how about this? http://puu.sh/grqXB/5d69a5e0ae.jpg nah this better :U ^ but why you suggesting that?
00:32:575 - i highly recommend to emphasize the strong beats at this part considering this is a nm diff. like this~ http://puu.sh/grrvA/317dce811d.jpg ok~!
00:39:892 - this part feels empty when there should be a drum roll. add a note here and on 00:40:258 - added
00:42:819 (42819|3) - move to 2 ok
00:44:831 (44831|3) - sound is too minute. remove. if you're trying to represent the vocals, then a ln should be placed on the start of it till here and not a normal note. removed owo
00:44:648 (44648|4) - move to 4. this is to complement your previous existing pattern on 00:41:721 (41721|3,42087|4,42453|4) - okkie fixed
00:45:197 - i know there's a sound at this part, but i highly suggest to remove the note here. it makes the players grasp this part more (emphazises the little "break") and also complements with 00:42:087 - yup i've testplay it and it's more comfortable, but is it fine to skip the sound?
00:45:745 (45745|3,45928|1) - swap col ok~!
00:47:575 (47575|3,47758|1) - move to 5 and 4, respectively, to accent the increased pitch. if applied, move 00:48:124 (48124|3) - to 5. it feels better since the previous drumclap is on col 1 ok, re-arranged a bit
00:53:977 (53977|3,54160|1) - swap col, to follow the pitch ok
00:53:977 (53977|3,54160|1) - move to 2 and 5. it is much better if the cymbals were represented by the 2 most furthest col on each side ^ i applied the mod before, if this 00:54:160 - at 5, it'll hard to press imo
01:00:014 - imo, its better if you mirror your previous pattern from 00:58:550 - (with a little variety of course), for consitency. something like this http://puu.sh/grw22/2f908b0176.jpg and then 01:02:026 (62026|2,62209|3) - swap col, cool! owo
01:04:404 - http://puu.sh/grxWs/6aa25cd56d.jpg okay <3 nice pattern
01:06:050 - http://puu.sh/gry5Y/dd1895f380.jpg re-arranged this ascending to the left side, coz it'll heavy on the right side
01:07:697 (67697|1,67880|0,68063|2,68245|3) - move to 1, 4, 2 and 3 applied~!
01:10:806 (70806|3) - move to 3 ok
01:11:904 - why break the flow here? add a note at 3 ok
01:12:270 (72270|0,72453|1) - move to 5 and 1 ok, re-arranged
01:13:184 - add notes on 3 and 5 okkie
01:14:099 (74099|4) - move to 4 okay =w=b
01:14:648 (74648|2) - best if you end it on 01:15:380 - , then move 01:15:745 (75745|0) - to 4 and make it and 01:15:380 (75380|1) - to 1/2 notes http://puu.sh/grzba/6fb16956ce.jpg amazing :U
01:16:477 (76477|1) - move to 3 ok~
01:17:758 (77758|1) - move to 4 why? it's same with this 01:18:124 (78124|1) -
01:23:245 (83245|4) - best if you move this to 2 moved~
01:24:434 (84434|0,84526|3,84709|1) - move to 4, 2 and 4 to emphasize the piano's pitch applied
01:24:434 - http://puu.sh/grzAC/e907207c17.jpg to accent both the piano and the drums okay, re-arranged ^also considering the mod before
01:30:380 - add a note here ok
01:33:672 (93672|0) - move to 3 hmm i'll not consistent and comfortable i think...
if i can't finish the rest of the diffs tonight, ill try to continue tomorrow.
thx~~
- "a.k.a.dRESS" tags added for the composer
- Normal diff checked
- waiting for further ayano check~