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general
・adddamnae ayu to tags? mbc8 too? as last renatus and evanescent had mbc in tags lol
・02:08:141 - i would also suggest ending the diffs here, as having the last circle on thse spot where that calm part start would provide something like.. fullness, more logical completion, like the last main note in the musical compositions, etc o͡͡͡͡͡͡╮(｡>_<｡)╭o͡͡͡͡͡͡ ᵑ৹
normal
・00:25:807 - i would recommend adding a note here. nowhere else you have ignored that Boom in the diff and overall, cause of that, the whole short part 00:23:474 (5,1,2,3,4) - feels like it has too many 1/2 breaks. would be more natural to have a click on a timestamp i mentioned, so the part gets better rhythmically ;; maybe a kind of pattern like you have later here 00:48:807 (3,4,5,6) - would fit:
hard
・hp5? its same as in- aaaactually desperate stole my catch, so yeah, i would recommend lowering the hp and ar, as mentioned in the previous modpost. it would provide a smaller gap between this and normal difficulty, smoother transition to the next diff
・02:07:807 (3,4) - the (4) circle is completely out of place and there is no sound, nothing what would fit for an object. ninjaed by desp as well
・everything else i wanted to mention has already been said
insane
・01:46:474 (10,1) - more spacing before (1) to emphasize the downbeat and the main part of the song would be cool. you could move the whole 01:44:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - structure a bit the right to make it happen easier
・the diff is great as the Great Damnae greatly is but the only thing which kept bothering me was those 3 sections of overlaps. maybe its going to something personal from here, but 00:48:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 01:05:474 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 01:48:141 (5,7) - part are catching the eye with the first play, in first 2 cases you are continuously moving around the same corner and and third is just completely personal, as (7) could be moved to the left to form a blanket and therefore make the part neater. i would suggest to stack some of those objects instead
unless you are completely OK with the your stuff, for sure.
01:57:141 - bananana
general
・add
・02:08:141 - i would also suggest ending the diffs here, as having the last circle on thse spot where that calm part start would provide something like.. fullness, more logical completion, like the last main note in the musical compositions, etc o͡͡͡͡͡͡╮(｡>_<｡)╭o͡͡͡͡͡͡ ᵑ৹
normal
・00:25:807 - i would recommend adding a note here. nowhere else you have ignored that Boom in the diff and overall, cause of that, the whole short part 00:23:474 (5,1,2,3,4) - feels like it has too many 1/2 breaks. would be more natural to have a click on a timestamp i mentioned, so the part gets better rhythmically ;; maybe a kind of pattern like you have later here 00:48:807 (3,4,5,6) - would fit:
hard
・hp5? its same as in- aaaactually desperate stole my catch, so yeah, i would recommend lowering the hp and ar, as mentioned in the previous modpost. it would provide a smaller gap between this and normal difficulty, smoother transition to the next diff
・02:07:807 (3,4) - the (4) circle is completely out of place and there is no sound, nothing what would fit for an object. ninjaed by desp as well
・everything else i wanted to mention has already been said
insane
・01:46:474 (10,1) - more spacing before (1) to emphasize the downbeat and the main part of the song would be cool. you could move the whole 01:44:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - structure a bit the right to make it happen easier
・the diff is great as the Great Damnae greatly is but the only thing which kept bothering me was those 3 sections of overlaps. maybe its going to something personal from here, but 00:48:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 01:05:474 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 01:48:141 (5,7) - part are catching the eye with the first play, in first 2 cases you are continuously moving around the same corner and and third is just completely personal, as (7) could be moved to the left to form a blanket and therefore make the part neater. i would suggest to stack some of those objects instead
unless you are completely OK with the your stuff, for sure.
01:57:141 - bananana
