SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

1. Streams shape, some are just looking too random
2. Sliders shape, some don't flow good at all or/and look ugly.
3. Rhythm placing, most of the time (NOT ALL THE TIME) you'd want to make the beat pressables, unless the music changed somehow, or if you follow the vocals precisely.
4. Placement, don't make stuff placed randomly, try to think of making blankets, cool shapes, flows, stacks, but try to keep good distance to not make stuff awkward.

Avishay wrote:

Recheck as promised.

[Insane]
00:12:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty awkward to play and can be improved through tons of ways. It feels awkward because: 1. They're both static circles on sliders; 2.They sliders don't relate in anyway 3.The players doesn't get to actually press on the strong beats (00:13:186 and 00:13:984). My suggestions here would be to change the pattern to something that fits more, like this:

SPOILER

Also, make something much more interesting, so the player could actualy enjoy moving and playing the song and the map, here's a pattern I did for example, Part 1:

SPOILER

Part 2:

SPOILER

Notice how I let the players press on the strong beats and I created something interesting, with flow and good move! 6 creates a triangle with 2 and the end of 5, 7 does the same with 3 and 4, I made the jump on 7 becaues of the irregular sound. I could also make a jump at 3 and 6 because of the strong beats there, be creative, try make interesting and fun stuff.fixed into something-nice suggestion
00:14:383 - If you follow the vocals, don't map this timing, it feels awkward..did slider now much better
00:14:583 (1,2) - Awkward as well because of the slider ends on strong beats, change it to something like this

SPOILER

[/color]
00:16:179 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - If you wanted the streams to blanket 1, try again, I suggest you create a good slider shape and press CTRL+SHIFT+F, it will be easier, since atm it doesn't look that well, and it is a bit awkward too..fixed
00:17:775 (1,2,3) - As before, start in the mid of the beat, you try to follow the vocals but they are not snapped on the right places.-ok
00:18:175 (2,3) - Cmon, they're not even the same shape, use CTRL+C, CTRL+V, you can use, CTRL+G, CTRL+H,CTRL+J, CTRL+SHIFT+R to achieve what you need.fixed
00:19:372 (1,2,3) - Static, not fun to play.ok
00:20:170 (1) - Why isn't this a triplet like before?fixed
00:22:365 (4) - I suggest deleting this or making a 1/1 slider at 00:22:166 (3) - no sorry
00:22:565 (1) - If you did as I suggested before, place this in a bigger distance, so it won't be confused as 1/2. ok fixed
00:23:862 - I'd change pattern and map this too. hmmmm mb
00:24:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - What's up with the spacing changes here?.. Suddenly a static and small DS, make something else..ok fixed
00:26:356 (1,2,3) - It flows bad, cmon, don't be so random. ok fixed
00:26:755 (3) - Think for a moment, should you really put a reverse here? It is a new stanza and it is just like 00:25:358 (6,1) - , remove the reverse and I suggest repositioning and reshaping the slider, also at the new circle place NC and remove the one from 00:26:356 (1) - fixed

This is enough from me for now, try to learn from what I wrote. The main points you should try to improve imo:

1. Streams shape, some are just looking too random
2. Sliders shape, some don't flow good at all or/and look ugly.
3. Rhythm placing, most of the time (NOT ALL THE TIME) you'd want to make the beat pressables, unless the music changed somehow, or if you follow the vocals precisely.
4. Placement, don't make stuff placed randomly, try to think of making blankets, cool shapes, flows, stacks, but try to keep good distance to not make stuff awkward.

I hope it will help you to learn and improve everything else too, sorry if it was a bit too short.

Peachtrees wrote:

o/~

Hard

00:13:784 (4) - this cries for a proper blanket. Also de-curve this a bit, really curved sliders like this really only work in rare cases ><

00:24:760 (1,2,3,4) - I know that a constant DS is obviously not required for a Hard Diff, but this just feels messy and I think having all of them with 1.3 would make this look a lot cleaner

00:26:356 (4,5) - the flow between these two feels kinda awkward. fixed with ctrl g

00:29:150 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I dont think these work as well as you think they do...they feel uncomfortable to play >< I'm not sure, keep them if you like them

00:49:504 (4,5) - there's a rather noticeable build-up in the song that is not well represented by these two imo

00:35:735 (2,3) - these feel to close to each other. the whole pattern looks kinda crowded to me

The NC pattern looks kind of random at times (only realising this just now haha)

01:01:676 (2,3,1) - try having the same distance between these. feels awkward when there's more distance between 2 and 3 than between 3 and 1. Also it might just be me but I feel like it's kinda weird not to have those sliders start on the 'AUUU' i want to make some rest for the players

01:14:148 (5) - add a note-?? there is a slider there
01:27:618 (2,1) - put more distance between those. feels weird to have them this close as if they're only 1/2 apart

01:34:004 (6,1) - I dont see why you didnt just extend the slider to the red tick instead- cause it sounds good

Consider mapping the 'I wanna run to you' right before the second kiai? I mean you mapped it for the first one too-fixed for deleting both

01:46:775 (6,1) - waaay to close to each other-rest

01:47:972 (1,2) - really uncomfortable to play

01:52:362 (4) - the hitsounds on this just feel awefully loud ><

01:57:351 (1,2) - why are these so close to each other? idk I think that whole 'AU' pattern woulld work better with the spacing being sorta consistent as no sound in particular really stands out during the pattern

02:08:526 (3,4) - this jump feels unfitting

02:16:707 (4,5) - ugh >< its ok

02:41:851 (8,9,10) - there is nothing in the music to back up this triplet

02:45:043 (7,8,9) - ^

02:52:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - holy whistles...waayyy to loud-its finishes,and i like them

Not pointing out every single triplet btw, I'm hoping you'll get rid of those by yourself

03:02:005 (3) - it really feels like this downbeat should be clickable since it also matches the vocals-its cool

Good Luck!

1. 01:17:841 (3) - http://puu.sh/gUY6K/601c69cdf1.jpg
2. 03:02:804 (1,2) - Consider something like this: http://puu.sh/gUYd6/59ce1a6da1.jpg to finish stronger

1. 01:52:961 (4) - Change this to a repeat slider: http://puu.sh/gUYi2/18d47b0f83.jpg
2. 02:01:342 (1) - Try starting with something like http://puu.sh/gUYlE/461ea1d296.jpg to begin the dubstep section of the song.
3. 03:03:202 (2,3,4) - Try something like http://puu.sh/gUYns/d7be3314e2.jpg to finish stronger.

1. Change to AR8.
2. 01:43:582 (5,6,7) - Change to this: http://puu.sh/gUYsi/abcdb45421.jpg it fits the song better. You have mapped a slow beat while there is a fast one happening here and it doesn't fit well.
3. 01:57:950 (2) - Change this to a triple, the slider doesn't work because the section of the song you are mapping finishes halfway through, and the slider ends on no beat whatsoever. http://puu.sh/gUYuX/116e22a72b.jpg
4. 02:44:844 - You have missed an entire beat here, this makes no sense. Add a hitcircle here or change the triple to accommodate a slider.

1. 00:13:385 - If you're going to put in a double at 00:12:886 then I would put a triple here.
2. 01:03:672 - I suggest putting a triple here too.
3. 01:44:580 - I think you should put a note here to end the slider stream and put a break in the sliders at 01:44:380 and 01:44:779.
4. 02:36:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - You need a nc here somewhere I think.
5. 02:38:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - An extremely high amount of ncs here. I think this is not needed.

Kuki wrote:

From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞

Easy

1. 01:17:841 (3) - http://puu.sh/gUY6K/601c69cdf1.jpg-ok nice
2. 03:02:804 (1,2) - Consider something like this: http://puu.sh/gUYd6/59ce1a6da1.jpg to finish stronger

ok

Normal

1. 01:52:961 (4) - Change this to a repeat slider: http://puu.sh/gUYi2/18d47b0f83.jpg-no sorry
2. 02:01:342 (1) - Try starting with something like http://puu.sh/gUYlE/461ea1d296.jpg to begin the dubstep section of the song.no sorry
3. 03:03:202 (2,3,4) - Try something like http://puu.sh/gUYns/d7be3314e2.jpg to finish stronger.

i think triples in normal are not good(they are hard)

Hard

1. Change to AR8. fixed
2. 01:43:582 (5,6,7) - Change to this: http://puu.sh/gUYsi/abcdb45421.jpg it fits the song better. You have mapped a slow beat while there is a fast one happening here and it doesn't fit well.nice suggestion-fixed
3. 01:57:950 (2) - Change this to a triple, the slider doesn't work because the section of the song you are mapping finishes halfway through, and the slider ends on no beat whatsoever. http://puu.sh/gUYuX/116e22a72b.jpg-sorry i like it that way
4. 02:44:844 - You have missed an entire beat here, this makes no sense. Add a hitcircle here or change the triple to accommodate a slider-i want to give the players a rest and there is no beat here i think.

Insane

1. 00:13:385 - If you're going to put in a double at 00:12:886 then I would put a triple here.-sorry it doesn't fit
2. 01:03:672 - I suggest putting a triple here too. sorry ill save it to the end
3. 01:44:580 - I think you should put a note here to end the slider stream and put a break in the sliders at 01:44:380 and 01:44:779. if you listen carefully, the beats actually do end there
4. 02:36:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - You need a nc here somewhere I think. hmmm i dont think so there is no beats changing
5. 02:38:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - An extremely high amount of ncs here. I think this is not needed-ill fix if anybody else will tell me.

thx a lot for this helpful mod!! <3

yugijedi wrote:

General

Difficulty Spread is very bad, the easy is ok but the normal has to be around 2,1 stars and also the other diffs have soo much distance to one another. Why does everyone make the same mistake? Normal is not an easy I could contain much 1/2!!! Please make the normal harder.

Easy

01:23:428 (6,1) - ugly distance!-its is good see under the xy coordinations

cannot find more, sorry maw

Normal

00:23:562 (2,4) - change shape of 2 into the same as 4

01:07:463 (2,4) - stack-fixed

01:15:845 (4) - delete it and start with a circle at 01:16:643, try out will feel perfect because there just the voice this little stop will be perfect

01:18:638 (1) - no fcking reason for NC here-ok ok relax my mistake

01:36:199 (1,3) - ugly touch-they are not touching actually

02:01:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - so boring, this lovely dubstep part is just mapped as normal. As I said in general here you have a Part where you can map in a different style (dubstep is so great for normal diffs)-then suggest something i dont know how to map different styles

02:26:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - also what you've mapped here can just fit into every 1/1 beatmap with 150 bpm!! please be a bit creative man don't think Easy and normal is just 1/1 random circle slider placing! It should also be cool for those players!! ill try

02:58:812 (2,4) - ugly touch fixed

Hard

00:37:531 (3) - replace by a repeating one, feels much better becuase of the strong voice-no there are beats after

01:10:656 (2,3) - make a triple, will sound better-sorry no its not fit

01:34:004 (6,1) - why in hard an extended slider omg- why not?

01:46:775 (6,1) - make them same shape?

02:05:133 (4,1) - lol what is this its ok

02:26:086 (4) - 1/4 repeating slider? kickslider which repeats 3 times- to boring

Insane

00:12:787 - Are serious? are yes

00:42:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this ? please? 1/2 jumps don't fit at all-why not

00:50:302 - you cannot tell me that there shouldn't be a circle-listen carefully

replace the first circle by 02:01:541 (2) - becuase there is nothing which emphasizes a distinction in this dubstep tone

02:38:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why the NC spam..listen to the background beats they are grating

that was it.. hope it had helped.
Doesn't matter what you say about this but u won't get it ranked with a way too easy normal and and insane like that.. distance too big.

CrystilonZ wrote:

From your queue

[Easy]
00:22:765 (1) - make this blanketing instead-it is already blanket
00:51:101 (1,2,3,1,2) - strange overlapping-unseenable
01:01:478 (1) - move this a bit up for better flow
01:03:472 (3) - put this under 2 instead for better flow
01:36:997 (2,4) - stack these-stacking in easy is not good
02:20:500 (1) - blanket 2
02:29:678 (2,5) - strange, I suggest stacking them
This diff is a little bit too hard for easy wot

[Normal]
00:32:343 (1,3) - Fix the stack
00:34:737 (4) - move a bit up-right
00:55:091 (3,1) - stack them -it will ruin the blanket
01:07:463 (2,4) Fix the stack
01:55:854 (1) - Blanket more properly it is

[Hard]
nc in this diff is REALLY weird, I can't mod cuz I don't understand your pattern here
00:25:558 (1) - DS fixed
00:43:517 (3) - change this to blanket 2's tail
01:34:004 (6) - end at big white
02:05:333 (1) - I don't recommend doing this in hard
02:10:920 (1) - ^
02:15:211 (4) - move it out, it's too hard for hard
02:44:245 (6,7) - DS i want to give the players a rest
02:52:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - don't spam too much finishes here-but i like them

[Insane]
I can't mod much on this, I'm not good at modding high diffs sry
01:19:237 (4,5,1) - too misleading
01:42:983 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - many people will miss this-so? this is not even a suggestion! did some1 said that on his mod to the big black fox?
02:06:929 (4) - nc here why
02:07:927 (1) - remove nc wtf...
02:35:465 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - weird overlapping i dont get it... there is no overlap

That's all
GL

-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

General

1. Bad difficultie spread.
   - Easy -> Normal almost nothing. (+0,26 stars)
   - Normal -> Hard way too huge. (+1,63 stars)
   - Hard -> Insane also way too huge. (+1,81 stars)

Easy

1. 00:17:178 (1) - You can improve the flow from that slider if you move it to x:224 ; y:184. You can easily fix the blanket to 00:17:976 (2) after changing it.
2. 00:19:571 (1) - Add claps since you added them everywhere else at the beginning part too.
3. 00:27:155 (3) - Move the red sqaure to x:212 ; y:320 for better "blanket" to 00:28:353 (4).
4. 00:30:348 (3) - Move to x:192 ; y:112 for better flow.
5. 00:32:343 - 00:38:329 - Suggestion: remove all claps and add clap 00:32:343, 00:33:141, 00:33:939, ...
6. 00:38:329 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about adding claps? You can hear them in the song. Same with all other parts in all difficutlies. -its a quiet part i dont want it to be loud as f
7. 00:42:320 (3,4) - Weird flow. 00:42:320 (3) is shaped like the next note is somewhere left instead of below. ok
8. 00:58:684 (3,4) - Make it more like this
   
   Picture

   
9. 01:17:042 (1) - Add clap.
10. 01:24:227 (1) - The shape doesn't fit imo. Change it to a curve shape.
11. 01:32:608 (3) - Move that circle somewhere like x:285 ; y:240 for better flow.
12. 01:40:590 (2) - Same as above. For a better flow move that circle to x:168 ; y:280.
13. 01:54:956 (1,2,3,4) - Mark all of them and move to x: 128 ; y136.
14. 02:21:298 (2) - Move that slider more for better flow.

fixed all the last 6 suggestions

Normal

1. 00:33:939 (3) - What about shape this like 00:32:343 (1)?
2. 00:37:132 (3) - Move to x:168 ; y:184 to for better flow. Remove NC.
3. 00:43:917 (8) - Should that blank to 00:43:118 (7)? If so improve it. It looks strange anyway.
4. 00:49:504 (5) - Slider does NOT end 00:50:103. It should end 00:50:302. Make the end silence. (Volume 5%)
5. 01:01:477 (1,2,3) - Add clap.
6. 01:03:872 (4) - add finish
7. 01:19:836 (1) - Move circle to x:40 ; y:176 for better flow.
8. 01:38:593 (4,5) - Add clap.
9. 01:44:181 (3) - Ctrl + h and move it to x:312 ; y:232. Flows better. Then move 01:45:378 (1) to x:176 ; y:224 to fix spacing.
10. 01:52:163 (2) - Move to x:144 ; y:200 to keep flow.
11. 01:57:351 (3) - Move to x:336 ; y:24 to keep flow.
12. 02:08:127 (1) - Move that circle more up, also for better flow.
13. 02:47:238 (4,5,6) - Add clap.
14. 02:51:229 (2,1) - ^
15. 03:00:010 (4) - ^

fixed all claps

Hard

1. 00:13:186 (2,3) - A bit hard to read imo.
2. 00:15:980 (4) - Add clap.
3. 00:16:778 - ^
4. 00:17:576 - ^ I don't know why you didn't keep the claps, but this doesn't sound good.fixed all claps
5. 01:03:872 (6) - Replace clap to finish.
6. 01:34:004 (6) - This 1/3 slider is not necessary .i like it
7. 02:47:638 (3,4) - Weird overlap.

Insane

1. 01:14:049 (5,7) - Move to x:345 ; y:303 to keep flow.
2. 02:01:541 (2,3) - Repeat them 2 more times.

That's it. Good luck!

Doyak wrote:

Hi! finally doing this reverse m4m... (still haven't fixed mine yet D:)

[General]

Put at least 1 spinner somewhere on every diff, if possible. It's recommended on ranking ciretia. ill find somewhere to do it-but next time try to tell the person where should he put a spinner and not let him guess,but thx.
I don't know what to say about those hitsounds, because you're simply making your own rhythm and it's very out of the music. If it is consistent then it could be fine, but I really feel it's very, very random and very unexpected.

[Easy]

I feel some hitsounds are randomly appearing and I don't even know what the rule of those. Mostly I don't hear anything special from them.

You can consider using custom hitsounds on slider ticks if you want to make clap sounds on every 1/1s.

Notes are gathered on upper side, so many try to spread them downward a bit.

* 00:27:155 (3,1,3) - don't think those finish sounds fit. There's no special sound on the music.
* 00:33:142 (2,2) - same
* 00:38:330 (1,4) - This is even inconsistent, I have no idea.
* from 01:19:837 (1) - Still seems like inconsistent hitsounds and feels weird, is it just me who don't understand the rule of this?
* 01:23:428 (6) - NC here and delete next one. If you want to keep it because of the same-shaped sliders then do as you want, but I more like to focus on the rhythm on NC.
* 01:32:607 (3) - same
* I'd rather finish/clap 01:54:957 (1) - here and delete finish/clap from 01:57:351 (3) - for consistency.
* 02:31:675 (5) - This goes a bit too much up and I recommend to draw it down a bit. Could be unrankable issue.
* 02:42:849 (1,3) - The time between this stack is too close and might confuse players. Same for 02:53:226 (3,5) -
fixed all
Nice flow, and nice blankets ty!

[Normal]

Again you tend to put notes on the upper side. Press Ctrl+A and see where the notes generally are.

You can use custom hitsounds to make clap on the slider tick like I said on Easy.

You would need to make this a little harder because Easy and Normal are too close and Hard is too far. Not only the star difficulty, but the rhythm is still too simple except few parts, so you can make them generally harder using the music's special rhythms.

* 00:27:154 (1) - delete NC for NC consistency.
* 00:53:894 (1) - delete NC here and NC the next one for the rhythm. Also I wanted to suggest same things before this but I guess you want to focus on the same shape. But this one coulld be changed at least.
* 01:25:822 (5) - Finish/Clap at the end?
* 01:30:212 (2) - also don't understand hitsounds here and I'd rather put them on the end of 01:29:015 (2) -
* 02:50:032 (1) - The slider end goes out of field. put it in.
fixed all
[Hard]

I like higher OD, I would make this OD6 or higher .if another modder says it ill change

* 00:43:118 (2) - Don't see a good reason to stop clapping here. Because of no vocal? The clap isn't vocal-related though.
* 01:00:479 (2) - Maybe you pressed Ctrl+G before? This clap sounds really weird.
* 01:52:362 (4) - Delete hitsounds from first two and leave only the last one.
* 01:53:959 (4) - Don't think hitsounds on the start is good.
* 01:58:149 - Insert break time here. It's too long. (Well only this diff doesn't have break time here anyway) oops im dumb
* 02:39:656 - I don't know what to say about hitsounds during this kiai, hmm.... maybe it's creative but I don't like this inconsistency which isn't even on the music.
fixed all
[Insane]

I'd like to make this OD8 or higher.

* 00:51:100 - Still don't know about the hitsounds, especially why you stopped putting clap sounds sometimes.
* 01:22:629 (3,4) - I can't point out everything since they're many, this is just one example: Why not reverse hitsounds on this two?
* and 01:23:028 (1,5,9) - why stopped clapping here? and 01:24:525 (1) - this finishe sound that blue line, feels awkward.
* and 01:31:809 (4,5) - again clap is suddenly gone on the start of 4 and the end of 5.
* and 01:42:983 (3) - here as well.
* The hitsound pattern wasn't like this before 02:47:638 (4) - this and it suddenly appeared again. I think you would better to put this pattern on before as well. fixed until here all
* 02:52:227 (2) - finish sound on this doesn't look so good, and 02:52:427 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - this is too noisy, and why not keep 4 the same as others? i like them

-Nya- wrote:

Coming from my M4M queue~

General:

1. There’s an inconsistency in your combo colours. Make sure the combo colours in all the diffs are the same. You can do that by just copy and pasting the combo colours in the .osu file in notepad.
   
   Picture

   
   Just copy those colours and paste them into the other diffs’ .osu file. FIXED
2. Add the word “Mix” after “Nightcore” in the title. You’ll notice that all the nightcore maps have this title. FIXED
3. I don’t really like the BG that you used. The quality looks bad and I think a different image would work better. rangatang in his queue(BG queue) told me to put that so i think it is ok.
4. Your hitsounds can do with improvement. You used claps a lot and maybe also too much imo. Ask an expert hitsounder like LordRaika to help you with this. You can also try throwing some custom hitsounds in there that fits nicely with the music.
5. The gap between the Hard and the Insane is too big. I testplayed your Insane and it’s pretty hard with many difficult streams and many big jumps. I suggest you add another diff between the Hard and the Insane. You can call it “Light Insane”. But if you really don’t want to add another diff, then you can always make your Insane easier with less big jumps and less very long streams.

i think ill just make the insane easier because i am new at mapping and another diff will take another 20 pages of moddings

Easy:

1. 00:38:330 (1) –For better flow, rather place this slider here:
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
   You placed that slider behind this slider: 00:37:532 (4) – and that messes up the flow a bit.
2. 00:43:119 (4) –This flow can also do with improvement.
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
3. 00:51:101 (1,2,3) –Rather make a double blanket here. I think it will look much better.
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
   Just copy and paste 00:51:101 (1) – and then rotate it till it looks like the pic above.
4. 01:01:478 (1,2) –Make these two sliders look similar. Use the copy and paste option.
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
5. 01:13:451 (1) –I don’t really like this kind of flow. Try this placement instead:
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
6. 01:13:451 (1,4) –This weird stack looks messy. Either try to stack them properly or avoid them touching each other alltogether.
7. 01:21:832 (4,1,2) –Try to avoid this overlaps. Maybe you can do this:
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
   Also, this blanket: 01:23:428 (1,2) - looks really bad and if you didn’t want a blanket there, it still looks bad. Try to prevent patterns like this in the future maps as well.FIXED
8. 01:36:998 (2,4) –Avoid this ugly overlap please. Rather place this slider lower near the tail of this slider: 01:37:397 (3) –
9. 01:40:989 (3) –Move this slider a bit lower please to make the pattern look better. Like this:
   
   Picture

   
10. 01:44:182 (4) –Ctrl+G this slider for better flow with 01:45:378 (1) –
11. 01:47:373 (3,2) –Try to avoid this overlap please. Imo, overlaps like this may be fine in a Hard and Insane, but not in an Easy or Normal. Maybe try this:
    
    Picture

    
    Just avoid the overlap.
12. 02:32:871 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 02:33:271 (2) – FIXED
13. 02:44:844 (4,1) –Improve this blanket please and also avoid this overlap: 02:44:446 (3,1) – FIXED
14. 02:46:042 (1) –The combo starting here feels long. Maybe add a new combo here: 02:48:836 (5) –not exactly there but ok
15. 02:54:821 (5,3) –Avoid overlap again. FIXED
16. 02:58:015 (4,2) -^

FIXED
i want to say something about the overlaps-maybe in the editor it is an overlap but in play mod you cant see the overlaps becuase the notes dissapear after a while and then even if there is a note after you cant see the last note that you think its overlapped-hoped you understood me
This diff is pretty good, but I still see room for improvement. Mainly the flow and those unnecessary overlaps. thx

Normal:

1. 00:23:562 (2,3,4) –This double blanket looks really bad. Mainly because of these sliders: 00:23:562 (2,4) – that’s not really curved that well. FIXED
2. 00:27:953 (4,1) –Nazi. Even though these two circles aren’t touching each other, they still caught my attention. Rather just move 00:29:150 (1) – a bit further away from (4). FIXED
3. 00:31:544 (5) –Don’t curve sliders too much otherwise they tend to look quite ugly. Lessen that curve a bit. FIXED
4. 00:38:329 (5,6,1) –Make the placement of these notes more curved. Like this: FIXED
   
   Picture

   
5. 00:38:329 (5,3) –Just like the Easy, try to avoid overlaps like this. FIXED
6. 00:40:325 (4,5,6,7) –The placement of these notes looks very crammed which messes up the “look” of the diff and make gameplay annoying. Try to space the notes out more. Like this: FIXED
   
   Picture

   
   Don’t limit your space. Use the entire grid as your workplace.
7. 00:49:504 (5,1,2) –I don’t really like this pattern and placement. It messes with the flow and just looks like it can be better.
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
8. 00:59:481 (3,1) –Avoid overlap.FIXED
9. 01:07:463 (2,3) –Try a different rhythm here. Like this one:
   
   Picture

   
   FIXED
10. 01:10:257 (4) –New combo here?FIXED
11. 01:25:423 (4,2) –Avoid overlap.FIXED
12. 01:27:418 (3,2) –Try to avoid this overlap as well.FIXED
13. 01:37:396 (3) –This rhythm doesn’t really fit and is very inconsistent imo. Rather this:
    
    Picture

    
    FIXED
14. 01:43:981 (3,4,5) –I don’t suggest a triple stack. Not even in a Normal diff. Rather place a repetitive slider here. Or this:
    
    Picture

    
    FIXED
15. 02:32:871 (6) –Make this slider longer to the white tick. FIXED
    
    Picture

    
    This rhythm just fits better with the music imo.
16. The last kiai time doesn’t look as good as the previous two kiai times. Recheck it again please. Those multiple repeat sliders I don’t really like and this triple: 03:02:803 (1,2,3) – I also really don’t recommend this.

FIXED

Hard:

I can’t really say much about this diff cuz it’s actually your mapping style, but the overall playability of the diff is a bit disappointing. I can’t really pinpoint the exact issue, but I think it’s mostly the placement of the notes and the flow of the notes. And of course, this is your mapping style. I just suggest you try and find more mods to help you improve this issue. But as you keep on mapping you’ll soon improve your mapping skills as well. Btw, did you use a grid size “tiny”? If you didn’t, I really suggest you do, since that grid size will help you to place notes more accurately and also make better blankets. You can set the grid to “tiny” by just clicking “G” on the keyboard.

Insane:

Same stuff as in Hard. My main issue here are the overuse of streams and big circle jumps. I realized that a big part of your kiai times only consisted out of a lot of circles and only a few sliders. Imo, even though it’s Insane, I still think you should try to use more of a variaty of sliders and circles and make nice patterns/rhythms with them. This diff requires the most improvement imo.

I’m really impressed with how fast your mapping skills improved. Of course this mapset still requires a lot of improvement but it also has a lot of potential. thx!

Here’s a star to motivate you along the way. <3
Good Luck~!

1. 00:21:766 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer more symmetrical triangle.
2. 00:23:463 (4,5) - distant is here longer than for example 00:23:363 (3,4) -
3. 00:35:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you are missing claps here?
4. 00:44:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I prefer more symmetrical triangle form.
5. 00:50:202 (8) - move to x424 y104 for better flow
6. 01:09:060 (3) - this slider overrides singer. I recommend to change it...
7. 01:12:253 - missing clap
8. 01:12:652 (4) - missing clap
9. 01:28:815 (6,7,8) - more symmetrical
10. 02:36:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - make it more symmetrical, so player doesn't confuse the overlaps
11. 02:38:259 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Prefer to use 1,2 only 1 all time. There is no followpath so it's realllly hard to know where to tap next
12. 02:46:241 (3) - replace circle: x232 y136
13. 02:52:427 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - don't spam hitsounds, too messy

1. 00:16:379 (3) - blanket would be improved
2. 00:29:748 (4) - improve blanket
3. 00:43:118 (2,3) - point 00:43:517 (3) - this slider to other way for better flow http://puu.sh/h08VZ/b021a608ee.jpg
4. 00:52:298 (5,6,7,8) - make symmetrical square
5. 01:17:241 (2) - blanket would be improved
6. 01:34:004 (6) - make this slider full 1/1 length slider
7. 02:44:245 (6) - make this blanket with 02:43:846 (5) -
8. 02:45:043 (7,8) - too close to 02:44:245 (6) -
9. 02:52:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't spam hitsounds

1. 00:52:697 (3,1) - improve blanket
2. 00:53:694 (1,2,3) - make this in same line: http://puu.sh/h09mW/f2c992173c.jpg
3. 01:52:961 (4) - 2x reverse sliders aren't really recommended to use in normal, I suggest to change the note to some other
4. 02:42:848 (2) - ^
5. 02:52:028 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:52:427 (2) - add NC

• Good Map!

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

[Insane]

1. 00:21:766 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer more symmetrical triangle. its jumps...
2. 00:23:463 (4,5) - distant is here longer than for example 00:23:363 (3,4) - ok fixed
3. 00:35:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you are missing claps here? im dumb
4. 00:44:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I prefer more symmetrical triangle form. its jumps...
5. 00:50:202 (8) - move to x424 y104 for better flow fixed
6. 01:09:060 (3) - this slider overrides singer. I recommend to change it... fixed
7. 01:12:253 - missing clap
8. 01:12:652 (4) - missing clap fixed both
9. 01:28:815 (6,7,8) - more symmetrical
10. 02:36:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - make it more symmetrical, so player doesn't confuse the overlaps- its good
11. 02:38:259 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Prefer to use 1,2 only 1 all time. There is no followpath so it's realllly hard to know where to tap next nah
12. 02:46:241 (3) - replace circle: x232 y136
13. 02:52:427 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - don't spam hitsounds, too messy i like it

[Hard]

1. 00:16:379 (3) - blanket would be improved
2. 00:29:748 (4) - improve blanket
3. 00:43:118 (2,3) - point 00:43:517 (3) - this slider to other way for better flow http://puu.sh/h08VZ/b021a608ee.jpg fixed
4. 00:52:298 (5,6,7,8) - make symmetrical square
5. 01:17:241 (2) - blanket would be improved
6. 01:34:004 (6) - make this slider full 1/1 length slider
7. 02:44:245 (6) - make this blanket with 02:43:846 (5) -
8. 02:45:043 (7,8) - too close to 02:44:245 (6) -
9. 02:52:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't spam hitsounds i like it

[Normal]

1. 00:52:697 (3,1) - improve blanket
2. 00:53:694 (1,2,3) - make this in same line: http://puu.sh/h09mW/f2c992173c.jpg fixed
3. 01:52:961 (4) - 2x reverse sliders aren't really recommended to use in normal, I suggest to change the note to some other
4. 02:42:848 (2) - ^ they are good
5. 02:52:028 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:52:427 (2) - add NC no m8 you are wrong

[Easy]

• Good Map! ty!

Good Luck! Nightcore music <3 yep!

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

placeholder :3

Lally wrote:

Please do not give kudosu to people wich didn't help you and in second place a modder should become once a KD for modding a map doesent mean 10 monds in the same map from the same modder = 10 KD is just 1,please remember for the future o3o

ohad1881 wrote:

Lally wrote:

Please do not give kudosu to people wich didn't help you and in second place a modder should become once a KD for modding a map doesent mean 10 monds in the same map from the same modder = 10 KD is just 1,please remember for the future o3o

I always give to moders on their effort (even if it didnt help me)

Fort wrote:

hello from Bahrain

Insane:
00:12:886 (1) - intro at blue tick? just ah.... vocals (lemme explain you didnt completely map vocal sounds, so you should map first note at 00:12:787 - ) i asked in modhelp and they told me its ok
00:33:141 (2) - change to 1 circle pls
00:38:329 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - unnecessary patterning, i think map some NC at downbeat can help (you need remap pattern placement in here)-i like it
00:42:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why pattern jump? ok fixed
00:47:708 (6,1) - you should map triplet in here if you follow instrumental sound- there is no triple there
00:57:486 (4,5) - remove claps on slider 4 sliderend fixed
01:07:064 (1) - you need to map this slider with 1/2 beat fixed
01:34:602 (2,3,4) - make this pattern same like your previous pattern
01:35:800 (5) - you need NC here
01:37:196 (1) - probably the NC should be 01:37:396 - (and why random NCs at that part? its kinda unnecessary thing)
02:01:541 (2) - atleast you need to end your reverse on 02:01:941 -
02:02:140 (3) - same problem, just add 2 reverse there fixed both^^
02:11:120 - i hear something here, so add notes here pls ok
02:11:619 - dont skip strong triplet pattern pls, while you overmap some notes with unnecesaary triplets kinda make this map didnt approved for rank there is no triplet there

the rest part kinda like overmap boom

02:52:427 - to 02:54:223 - oh god why you overuse finish hitsounding, this kind of kill my ear (you should remove this finishes and use it at downbeat pls)
fixed
since you're newbie mapper i know your map will be like this, but dont you think you can rank this map (so much problem in here, im not sure BNs or QAT will be like this). yep i wont but ill try

but i will tell something about this map

- at overall you're kinda overuse some hitsound at some part, but at some part you didnt use hitsounding
- some NCs is like random at music (transition for intrumental and vocal is really unreadable for some players), try to make your combo consistant and stable at downbeat (not in red or blue or maybe green timeline)
- i hope you can map symetrical for better aestestics
- some overlaps and imperfect blankets is kinda minor things but if this happen too much that kinda destroy your map
- why you spam stars? in here map quality is highest priority not star priority (star priority is optional things)

okay good luck with your map! and hope you can improve as well. later~ thx u 2!

Milan- wrote:

ai

irc

2015-04-04 21:15 ohad1881: sooooo
2015-04-04 21:15 ohad1881: can i ask u for mod?
2015-04-04 21:15 ohad1881: :3
2015-04-04 21:18 Milan-: yes
2015-04-04 21:18 Milan-: u can
2015-04-04 21:19 ohad1881: but...
2015-04-04 21:19 ohad1881: no but?
2015-04-04 21:19 Milan-: no
2015-04-04 21:19 Milan-: just link me ur map
2015-04-04 21:19 ohad1881: t/300513
2015-04-04 21:19 ohad1881: :3
2015-04-04 21:21 Milan-: ohh this map
2015-04-04 21:22 ohad1881: is suck
2015-04-04 21:22 ohad1881: its is kinda low quality tbh
2015-04-04 21:22 ohad1881: for me
2015-04-04 21:22 ohad1881: so you might look at it b4 modding
2015-04-04 21:24 Milan-: what happened to the hitsounds ;w;;
2015-04-04 21:24 ohad1881: what
2015-04-04 21:24 ohad1881: they are ok i think?
2015-04-04 21:25 Milan-: claps are randomly placed tho
2015-04-04 21:25 ohad1881: evey white tick?
2015-04-04 21:25 ohad1881: every
2015-04-04 21:26 Milan-: there are some section missing them tho
2015-04-04 21:26 ohad1881: oh
2015-04-04 21:27 Milan-: are u free now? lazy to write on foroum zzz
2015-04-04 21:27 ohad1881: fiiiiiiiiretruck
2015-04-04 21:27 ohad1881: to tired
2015-04-04 21:27 ohad1881: but ok
2015-04-04 21:28 ohad1881: ill go open directx secong
2015-04-04 21:29 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:29 Milan-: at thebeggining you could this http://puu.sh/h1L4Q/f4ad465ee1.jpg
2015-04-04 21:29 Milan-: so it doesnt start so abrutly
2015-04-04 21:30 ohad1881: insane?
2015-04-04 21:30 Milan-: yes
2015-04-04 21:30 Milan-: 00:13:186 (3) - clap some with 00:13:984 (7) - head
2015-04-04 21:31 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:31 Milan-: tbh claps every white doesnt fit. just use them on the 2nd and 4th
2015-04-04 21:31 Milan-: cuz you hear the snares on 2/4 but on 1/3 are just kicks
2015-04-04 21:31 ohad1881: no no no no no im not gonna remap all this pls tell me its ok
2015-04-04 21:32 Milan-: wut it's just claps
2015-04-04 21:32 Milan-: it takes you like 3 min
2015-04-04 21:32 ohad1881: ALL THE MAP
2015-04-04 21:32 ohad1881: R U KIDDING ME
2015-04-04 21:32 Milan-: except one section
2015-04-04 21:32 ohad1881: what section
2015-04-04 21:33 Milan-: from 00:38:329 -
2015-04-04 21:33 Milan-: to 1. Offset: 16ms BPM: 150.338
2015-04-04 21:33 ohad1881: shouldnt i put claps here?
2015-04-04 21:33 Milan-: ops
2015-04-04 21:33 Milan-: 00:51:100 -
2015-04-04 21:33 Milan-: on that section claps every white tick sounds ok
2015-04-04 21:34 ohad1881: ha ok
2015-04-04 21:34 Milan-: but the rest it's better to use them on the 2nd and 4th tick
2015-04-04 21:34 ohad1881: hmm :9
2015-04-04 21:34 ohad1881: ids
2015-04-04 21:34 ohad1881: is it reallllyyyy nessecary?
2015-04-04 21:35 Milan-: if you wanna learn how to hitsound and make ur map better
2015-04-04 21:35 Milan-: yes
2015-04-04 21:35 ohad1881: fuiretruck me
2015-04-04 21:35 ohad1881: why nb told me that b4
2015-04-04 21:35 ohad1881: ill do it tommorow
2015-04-04 21:35 Milan-: cuz noone mods hitsounds
2015-04-04 21:36 ohad1881: yea..
2015-04-04 21:36 Milan-: 02:01:342 - this section is also different than the rest
2015-04-04 21:37 ohad1881: what should i do there
2015-04-04 21:37 Milan-: add claps just on the 3th tick
2015-04-04 21:37 ohad1881: waaaaa
2015-04-04 21:37 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:37 Milan-: you can hear like the bum on there right?
2015-04-04 21:37 ohad1881: yep
2015-04-04 21:38 Milan-: until here 02:25:288 -
2015-04-04 21:38 ohad1881: k
2015-04-04 21:38 Milan-: and cancel this one 02:25:687 (3) - there's no instrument
2015-04-04 21:39 ohad1881: rrcancer the clap?
2015-04-04 21:39 ohad1881: cancel
2015-04-04 21:39 Milan-: yes
2015-04-04 21:39 Milan-: ur thirth kiai is missing claps too so yea
2015-04-04 21:39 Milan-: 00:14:383 (8,1) - swap NCs
2015-04-04 21:39 ohad1881: k
2015-04-04 21:40 Milan-: altho the whole NCing is really messy ><
2015-04-04 21:40 Milan-: you can try just adding nc on every big white tick
2015-04-04 21:41 ohad1881: but its every start no?
2015-04-04 21:41 ohad1881: like every new sentence
2015-04-04 21:41 ohad1881: or something
2015-04-04 21:42 Milan-: do you mean like fitting vocals or something?
2015-04-04 21:42 Milan-: if that's the case, it's still messy
2015-04-04 21:42 ohad1881: ok ill try my best
2015-04-04 21:43 Milan-: just doing it on every stanza is the easier way haha
2015-04-04 21:43 ohad1881: oki doki
2015-04-04 21:44 Milan-: 00:44:615 (7) -
2015-04-04 21:44 Milan-: delete this note
2015-04-04 21:44 Milan-: there's nothing here ;w,
2015-04-04 21:45 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:45 Milan-: 00:47:708 (6,1) - here's a triple
2015-04-04 21:45 Milan-: if you wanna map it..
2015-04-04 21:46 ohad1881: ill leave it like that actualy
2015-04-04 21:46 Milan-: 01:01:078 (6) - cancel finish pls
2015-04-04 21:46 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:47 Milan-: 01:03:273 (8,9) - triple and here too 01:03:672 (1,2) -
2015-04-04 21:47 Milan-: would be cool to map these
2015-04-04 21:48 Milan-: 01:13:250 (7) - 1/4 repeat instead?
2015-04-04 21:48 Milan-: like you've done beforer
2015-04-04 21:48 ohad1881: nah
2015-04-04 21:48 Milan-: 01:18:838 (2) - this feels better just as a circle
2015-04-04 21:49 ohad1881: nah
2015-04-04 21:49 ohad1881: there is a beat there
2015-04-04 21:49 Milan-: there isnt actually w/e
2015-04-04 21:49 Milan-: 01:19:636 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is quite disorienting
2015-04-04 21:50 Milan-: cuz you stream the vocals
2015-04-04 21:50 Milan-: but you ignore the intruments
2015-04-04 21:50 Milan-: which are the most noticiable here
2015-04-04 21:51 ohad1881: so what should i do
2015-04-04 21:52 Milan-: this sounds ok to me http://puu.sh/h1MgJ/151ad66b98.jpg
2015-04-04 21:52 Milan-: doesnt ignore vocals at all
2015-04-04 21:53 Milan-: you map around vocals, what is the point on ignoring these 01:29:813 - 01:30:611 -
2015-04-04 21:54 Milan-: 01:43:382 (1,2) - stream doesnt starts here, starts from 01:43:782 -
2015-04-04 21:55 ohad1881: no i dont think so
2015-04-04 21:55 Milan-: 02:27:882 (4,5) - give these more space lol, it looks like a 1/4 rhythm
2015-04-04 21:56 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 21:56 Milan-: 02:36:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - there's no such a stream on the music and it's just overmapped
2015-04-04 21:56 Milan-: some notes
2015-04-04 21:57 Milan-: well these 02:36:562 (2,6,8,10,12,14,16) -
2015-04-04 21:57 Milan-: but from here 02:38:059 - starts a real stream
2015-04-04 21:58 Milan-: 02:50:830 - this is also overmapped
2015-04-04 21:59 ohad1881: i think ill kip those
2015-04-04 22:00 Milan-: kkk on hard 02:05:133 (4,1) -
2015-04-04 22:00 Milan-: give these more space pls
2015-04-04 22:00 Milan-: same with 02:10:721 (7,1) -
2015-04-04 22:00 ohad1881: but the sc changed
2015-04-04 22:00 ohad1881: sv
2015-04-04 22:01 ohad1881: its the same DS
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: and what?
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: no
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: they arent
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: when you play, do you there's a slow down there?
2015-04-04 22:01 ohad1881: look
2015-04-04 22:01 ohad1881: nop
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: do you know*
2015-04-04 22:01 Milan-: so.......
2015-04-04 22:02 Milan-: 02:10:521 (6,7,1) - make these visually the same
2015-04-04 22:02 Milan-: ex http://puu.sh/h1MNB/6ec55c4432.jpg
2015-04-04 22:02 ohad1881: ok
2015-04-04 22:03 Milan-: also 0.5x is quite annoying to play on hard, i'd suggest using 0.75x instead
2015-04-04 22:03 ohad1881: mb..
2015-04-04 22:03 Milan-: cool bg btw
2015-04-04 22:03 Milan-: lol
2015-04-04 22:03 ohad1881: lel thx
2015-04-04 22:04 Milan-: i need to go to dinner heh, lets leave till here

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

[Hard]
00:38:130 (4) - overlap with the tail of 00:36:932 (1) - ？ unseen able
01:01:277 (1,2) - too close,separate them a little?
01:11:255 (4,5) - change the angle a little plz?
01:13:649 (1,2) - to emphasize the instrument,I think the triplets should be placed at 01:13:250 (6,7)
01:29:414 (1) - the overlap is...lololololol unseen able
01:47:573 (1,1) - the rhythm here is different from the one you used in the first kiai,try to make consistency? its ok
02:05:333 (1) & 02:10:920 (1) - imo,the slow sv sliders here are weird,just my opinion
02:14:911 (3,4) - maybe you ought to have uses more rhythms like this ??????
02:38:458 (1,2,3) - the DS here...I can't understand not all the hard diff needs to be DS

Good luck

1. iirc pure white combo colour is unrankable i think? mainly because it becomes im possible to see with the kiai flashes.
2. not sure about the spread, hard diff has way too high spacing, and insane is like an extra... maybe nerf the hard and add another insane to it.
3. the background is rather poor quality lol. anime-pictures.net <-- try finding something better there

1. 00:25:458 - could add note for drum
   01:42:085 - ^
2. 00:28:950 (2,3) - i think if u copy pasted one of them
3. 00:59:996 - feels empty here, add note pls
4. 01:03:872 (2) - would be more accurate to the music if u moved this 1/4 back to the blue tick
5. 01:21:232 (1,1) - remove one of these NC not necessary imo
6. 02:11:120 (2) - add repeat, vocal is on white tick i think.
7. 02:38:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - u don't need this many NCs, it just makes it hard to read.

1. 00:35:136 - u really shouldn't skip the downbeats, map them pls
2. 01:25:622 (6) - why beizer slider lol
3. 01:46:775 (6,1,2) - space this out more, its misleading
4. 01:50:766 (1,1) - again with the nc

1. 02:42:848 (2) - don't use these double repeats, they are misleading, especially this one because it's on a fairly short slider

1. wow BG is sexy.

1. 01:10:657 (1) - kinda nazi but move right a bit to leave away from 01:08:662 (3) - a bit? It might looks better with the flow.
2. 01:17:841 (2) - I would suggest a shape like below. It might be more powerful than the current shape and have more shapes in your map : )
   
3. 01:54:957 (1) - I would suggest a fin on this note consider you have fins on both 01:51:764 and 01:53:361, it makes the hitsound continuous.
4. 02:15:711 (3) - move right to form a straight line with previous note?
5. 02:32:872 (6) - try to stack on the head of 02:30:078 (3) - ?

1. 00:42:719 (8) - same reason as in Easy, move away from 00:41:522 (6) - a bit? Might be good if you move 7 and 8 a little bit downward together.
2. 00:46:710 (6) - ^, move right and up a bit?
3. 01:09:658 (3) - move right to make a straight line with previous slider?
4. 01:31:409 (3) - try to stack on the head of 01:29:015 (2) -
5. 02:12:118 (2) - curve more to encircle 02:11:719 (1) -

1. 00:19:172 (x) - missing a circle here? I could feel the gap which makes me unhappy :<
2. 02:02:539 (4) - move right a bit?
3. 02:05:333 (1) - ^
4. 02:07:528 (5,6,7) - stack on 02:06:131 (2) -
5. 02:45:043 (7,8) - The spacing is a bit awkward to me. Since you had the same spacing but different rhythm, it might become a spacing error?

1. Basically the shape of the stream is a bit awkward to me. hmmmm

1. Consider changing combo colour 2, not sure if pure white is a good idea

1. 00:57:088 (1) - I think this could be a single instead and start a slider 00:57:486 - ending that slider on a strong beat (large white tick) sounds a bit off. You seem to do this a lot throughout the diff mostly for the vocals, it may just be my preference so its up to you. 02:02:539 (3) - another example, might be better to swap (3) and (4)
2. 02:53:625 (4) - Again to do with rhythm, wouldn't it make more sense to move this down by 1/1. This slider cuts through the strong beat (vocals) at 02:54:023 - applies to all the 2/1 sliders after it as well

1. Okay so the rhythm thing pops up again, 00:22:764 (1,2) - these two, when compared to 00:24:760 (4,1) - these two. The later two makes more sense as you're emphasizing the stronger beats by making the player click on them instead of dragging to them. This applies to the r est of the diff as well. This could easily be solved if you put singles in even numbers instead of odd. If you are trying to map the vocals (which is what I'm assuming) this isn't really doing it as they start on the red ticks.
2. 00:55:889 (5,6,1) - move down by 1/1
3. 01:07:463 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this might be a bit hard to read for a normal, 01:08:062 (3) - should remove and add a single to 01:08:262 -
4. 01:20:235 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same with this, try avoid giant chains like this
5. 01:52:961 (4) - -1 repeat

1. 00:19:172 - this beat shouldn't be skipped
2. 00:52:896 (8) - this should be here? 00:52:497 -
3. 00:59:681 (4) - 1/1 slider would sound nice here to break up the constant 1/2 patterns, try find other places to use them as well to make the rhythm a bit more varied.
4. Generally its what I'm seeing from Easy and Normal, work on rhythm a bit. It plays fine but for rank I think you need to improve a bit more there.

1. Generally this just seems a bit overdone. A lot of the jumps just seem randomly spaced to me and isn't justified by the music such as 00:57:885 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -. Again its the case of this map plays fine, but a lot more work is needed to get it rank ready :< Try seeking out mods from QATs as they can help out a lot with situations like this. I went through this not long ago myself haha

Kibbleru wrote:

:| [general]

1. iirc pure white combo colour is unrankable i think? mainly because it becomes im possible to see with the kiai flashes. FIXED
2. not sure about the spread, hard diff has way too high spacing, and insane is like an extra... maybe nerf the hard and add another insane to it. ill try
3. the background is rather poor quality lol. anime-pictures.net <-- try finding something better there-its the best quality that ringateng could give me

[insane]

1. 00:25:458 - could add note for drum
   01:42:085 - ^ nah i don't think i will
2. 00:28:950 (2,3) - i think if u copy pasted one of them FIXED
3. 00:59:996 - feels empty here, add note pls FIXED
4. 01:03:872 (2) - would be more accurate to the music if u moved this 1/4 back to the blue tick no its good
5. 01:21:232 (1,1) - remove one of these NC not necessary imo FIXED
6. 02:11:120 (2) - add repeat, vocal is on white tick i think. FIXED
7. 02:38:059 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - u don't need this many NCs, it just makes it hard to read. FIXED

[hard]

1. 00:35:136 - u really shouldn't skip the downbeats, map them pls FIXED
2. 01:25:622 (6) - why beizer slider lol what is it?
3. 01:46:775 (6,1,2) - space this out more, its misleading FIXED
4. 01:50:766 (1,1) - again with the nc FIXED

[normal]

1. 02:42:848 (2) - don't use these double repeats, they are misleading, especially this one because it's on a fairly short slider FIXED

easy seemed ok thx!

moph wrote:

From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞

[General]

1. Consider changing combo colour 2, not sure if pure white is a good idea FIXED

[Easy]

1. 00:57:088 (1) - I think this could be a single instead and start a slider 00:57:486 - ending that slider on a strong beat (large white tick) sounds a bit off. You seem to do this a lot throughout the diff mostly for the vocals, it may just be my preference so its up to you. 02:02:539 (3) - another example, might be better to swap (3) and (4)
2. 02:53:625 (4) - Again to do with rhythm, wouldn't it make more sense to move this down by 1/1. This slider cuts through the strong beat (vocals) at 02:54:023 - applies to all the 2/1 sliders after it as well

well it is an easy diff and i dont to change to some 1/2 slider but ill try fix some of the strong beats-and some of them that you noticed are ok to easy
[Normal]

1. Okay so the rhythm thing pops up again, 00:22:764 (1,2) - these two, when compared to 00:24:760 (4,1) - these two. The later two makes more sense as you're emphasizing the stronger beats by making the player click on them instead of dragging to them. This applies to the r est of the diff as well. This could easily be solved if you put singles in even numbers instead of odd. If you are trying to map the vocals (which is what I'm assuming) this isn't really doing it as they start on the red ticks.
2. 00:55:889 (5,6,1) - move down by 1/1
3. 01:07:463 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this might be a bit hard to read for a normal, 01:08:062 (3) - should remove and add a single to 01:08:262 -
4. 01:20:235 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same with this, try avoid giant chains like this
5. 01:52:961 (4) - -1 repeat

Okay you seem to have a lot of the same problems i used to have as well when it comes to rhythm. You really ought to figure out which beats you need to emphasize and errors are mostly centered around sliders. Ending sliders on strong beats sounds and plays awkward as the next note will start on a weaker beat, so its as if you've missed a strong note. Even if you use hitsounds to cover it up it still plays badly. It might be harder to figure this out on easier diffs as you're quite limited as to what you can do. Try stick to simple beats.
again what i said
[Hard]

1. 00:19:172 - this beat shouldn't be skipped FIXED
2. 00:52:896 (8) - this should be here? 00:52:497 - color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
3. 00:59:681 (4) - 1/1 slider would sound nice here to break up the constant 1/2 patterns, try find other places to use them as well to make the rhythm a bit more varied. no its good for me
4. Generally its what I'm seeing from Easy and Normal, work on rhythm a bit. It plays fine but for rank I think you need to improve a bit more there.

Okay i think the diff gap between N/H/I is wayyy too big. The spacing in hard should be reduced. If you want this ranked you need another diff between Hard and Insane. ill add mb

[Insane]

1. Generally this just seems a bit overdone. A lot of the jumps just seem randomly spaced to me and isn't justified by the music such as 00:57:885 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) -. Again its the case of this map plays fine, but a lot more work is needed to get it rank ready :< Try seeking out mods from QATs as they can help out a lot with situations like this. I went through this not long ago myself haha

those are ok srsly

Didn't talk about aesthetics as I think you needed a bit more help with rhythm. Sorry this wasn't really in depth, so busy. Good luck! Hopefully this has been helpful ^^

Megurine Luka wrote:

As requested

[General]

1. wow BG is sexy. yep

[Easy]

1. 01:10:657 (1) - kinda nazi but move right a bit to leave away from 01:08:662 (3) - a bit? It might looks better with the flow. color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
2. 01:17:841 (2) - I would suggest a shape like below. It might be more powerful than the current shape and have more shapes in your map : )
   i think ill keep it my way tbh
3. 01:54:957 (1) - I would suggest a fin on this note consider you have fins on both 01:51:764 and 01:53:361, it makes the hitsound continuous. i am remaking the HS so you will see...
4. 02:15:711 (3) - move right to form a straight line with previous note? nahhh
5. 02:32:872 (6) - try to stack on the head of 02:30:078 (3) - nop?

[Normal]

1. 00:42:719 (8) - same reason as in Easy, move away from 00:41:522 (6) - a bit? Might be good if you move 7 and 8 a little bit downward together. color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
2. 00:46:710 (6) - ^, move right and up a bit? color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
3. 01:09:658 (3) - move right to make a straight line with previous slider? no then its overlap
4. 01:31:409 (3) - try to stack on the head of 01:29:015 (2) - nah
5. 02:12:118 (2) - curve more to encircle 02:11:719 (1) color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]-

[Hard]

1. 00:19:172 (x) - missing a circle here? I could feel the gap which makes me unhappy :< color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
2. 02:02:539 (4) - move right a bit? color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
3. 02:05:333 (1) - ^ color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]
4. 02:07:528 (5,6,7) - stack on 02:06:131 (2) - nah
5. 02:45:043 (7,8) - The spacing is a bit awkward to me. Since you had the same spacing but different rhythm, it might become a spacing error? color=#40BF00]FIXED[/color]

[Insane]

1. Basically the shape of the stream is a bit awkward to me. hmmmm ill fix some

That's all I think. Good Luck.

• 01:39:392 (1,3) - Duplicate and flip #1 along the y-axis to be more symmetrical. also nudge 01:40:590 (2) over to x:256 y:328

• 00:28:352 (5,1,2) - How come the beat of the claps changes from this point on? If it's intentional then its not really a big deal but it sounds really odd to the ear and I can't figure out if its on purpose.
  00:52:697 (3,1) - This can be made into a nice blanket
  01:55:355 (2,1) - ^

• 02:05:333 (1) - The slider slows down when the crowd says "Hell yeah" but at 02:10:920 the slow down occurs when the vocalist says it instead. I think it would work better if the slow down occurs on the same spot, but changing that may be problematic.

• 00:23:962 (6,1,2,3) - considering the design of the triplet, the jump from #6 to #1 could be a lot more enjoyable if you avoided that straight line
  
  Could be like this

  
  02:03:537 (2,1) - Move slider away for neatness
  02:49:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - #6,7, and 8 really make this look pretty bad, changing the positioning a little could really make this a lot more attractive (maybe you just prefer it to be more harder but idk)
  
  Example

  
  02:20:598 (2) - Nothing in the music really justifies this 1/4th slider. Instead I'd expect a 1/4th slider on 02:20:698 (2) and a single circle on 02:20:898

Gleipnir wrote:

Took longer then expected ><

Easy
-------------------------

• 01:39:392 (1,3) - Duplicate and flip #1 along the y-axis to be more symmetrical. also nudge 01:40:590 (2) over to x:256 y:328 fixed

Normal
-----------------------------

• 00:28:352 (5,1,2) - How come the beat of the claps changes from this point on? If it's intentional then its not really a big deal but it sounds really odd to the ear and I can't figure out if its on purpose. fixed
  00:52:697 (3,1) - This can be made into a nice blanket fixed
  01:55:355 (2,1) - ^ its on purpose

Hard
-----------------------------

• 02:05:333 (1) - The slider slows down when the crowd says "Hell yeah" but at 02:10:920 the slow down occurs when the vocalist says it instead. I think it would work better if the slow down occurs on the same spot, but changing that may be problematic. i think its good

Insane
-----------------------------

• 00:23:962 (6,1,2,3) - considering the design of the triplet, the jump from #6 to #1 could be a lot more enjoyable if you avoided that straight line
  
  Could be like this

  
  fixed
  02:03:537 (2,1) - Move slider away for neatness fixed
  02:49:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - #6,7, and 8 really make this look pretty bad, changing the positioning a little could really make this a lot more attractive (maybe you just prefer it to be more harder but idk) fixed
  
  Example

  
  02:20:598 (2) - Nothing in the music really justifies this 1/4th slider. Instead I'd expect a 1/4th slider on 02:20:698 (2) and a single circle on 02:20:898

its good..
Really nice song! Sorry the mod took longer then expected to deliver and I hope it caught something relevant
Good luck.

1. maybe use different sv for hard and insane using same sv is like something , it can't show much different imo

1. 00:12:787 (1,2) - triplet work better imo
2. 00:16:778 (1) - not really need to nc imo
3. 00:24:560 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm so the flow here will be better 00:24:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
4. 00:32:941 (1,2) - triplet work better imo
5. 00:54:493 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow
6. 01:18:838 (2,3) - triplet work better imo
7. 02:12:517 - this play better
   SPOILER

   
   
   somehow this diff feel a bit overdone or something lol would be better if you try nerf some jumps a bit or just create another diff between hard and insane currently looks like those crazy jumps is a bit make spread from hard to insane not right imo

1. 00:28:950 (1,2) - this jumps is a bit too hard for hard diff imo
2. 00:56:887 (1) - not really need to nc imo
3. 01:50:566 - would sound better if you map this beat
4. 02:20:100 (9) - move to 02:20:000 - ? play better imo
5. 02:38:857 (2,3) - this jumps is a bit too hard for hard diff imo
6. 02:43:846 (5,6) - unstack them ? it pretty a bit hard to read for hard diff
7. 03:04:001 (5,1) - stack work better imo
   
   aesthetic,flow,some jumps can be improved a bit here

CelsiusLK wrote:

you said mod only 1 diff but I'm gonna mod 2 diffs B )
[general]

1. maybe use different sv for hard and insane using same sv is like something , it can't show much different imo FIXED

[insane]

1. 00:12:787 (1,2) - triplet work better imo- sry no
2. 00:16:778 (1) - not really need to nc imo ^^
3. 00:24:560 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm so the flow here will be better 00:24:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - FIXED
4. 00:32:941 (1,2) - triplet work better imo no sry
5. 00:54:493 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow FIXED
6. 01:18:838 (2,3) - triplet work better imo - sry no
7. 02:12:517 - this play better
   SPOILER

   
   sry no ill keep it
   
   somehow this diff feel a bit overdone or something lol would be better if you try nerf some jumps a bit or just create another diff between hard and insane currently looks like those crazy jumps is a bit make spread from hard to insane not right imo
   im asking for a gd but no1 want to do light insane for me

[hard]

1. 00:28:950 (1,2) - this jumps is a bit too hard for hard diff imo- FIXED
2. 00:56:887 (1) - not really need to nc imo -no sry
3. 01:50:566 - would sound better if you map this beat FIXED
4. 02:20:100 (9) - move to 02:20:000 - ? play better imo FIXED
5. 02:38:857 (2,3) - this jumps is a bit too hard for hard diff imo FIXED
6. 02:43:846 (5,6) - unstack them ? it pretty a bit hard to read for hard diff FIXED
7. 03:04:001 (5,1) - stack work better imo- no sry
   
   aesthetic,flow,some jumps can be improved a bit here

good luck