hi---------------

FUN

Mazzerin wrote:

FUN

YES

omg

Fookiezi wrote:

omg

So hard right?

y u always kill me with god damn singletap ;w;

needs rank right now

Arcubin wrote:

y u always kill me with god damn singletap ;w;

because i will improve your skill, im just give skill to you :3

Silverboxer wrote:

needs rank right now

haahhaaha
i still didnt hitsounded this mapset. maybe after hitsounded i can rank this map properly

Cool mapset... you will need a LOT of testplays... i really want you rank it!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Cool mapset... thanks

you will need a LOT of testplays... this is quite very hard to testplay especially for terror diffs which i cant singletapping to much, if im forcing myself my hands will be dead, i really need some pro testplayers for this one

i really want you rank it! i hope so, i hope this map ranked :3

i will do the best

hey♥ fort. lets m4m yay \:) /




i cant stream THAT last diff AGAIN LOL
really cool map i love you





r flow. take my star

Euny wrote:

hey♥ fort. lets m4m yay \:) /

• General

1. i fixed bg pixels.(1365 >> 1366 ..just 1 pixel lol > <) click, if you want it. ok thanks
2. do you want to letterbox during breaks?? if or not, check out all diffs fixed
   
3. and i think its fit for 100% vol too. (cause music is really strong and loud) but i recommend 7~80% for unkiai time lmao im too lazy to set volume but okay fixed all
   

• Easy

1. 00:35:553 (4) - i heard tempo to 00:36:033 this timing. and feel 'little' weird. when i play this part. i think should be add note or make a slider for this note.
   (pattern is your choice ) i give some rest time here, lol rest time in this hardcore song
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:913 (1) - add clap at this slider's tail for better tempo? change in different way
3. 01:31:233 (2,3) - if you move these on (2) - x200y191, (3) - x355y117, makes better ditance wow very detailed o.o
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:04:833 (5) - NC? im NC this slider before, but i guess only 1 combo makes this slider like forever alone :v
5. 03:13:953 (1) - i think finish should be more fitting this front
6. 04:29:793 (1) - i recommend add vol50% +s:c1 timing point for this spinner's end(as same as other diffs) ok sure

• Normal

1. 01:14:433 (4) - place it on x166y353 for better distance?
2. 01:26:433 (1) - add clap at this tail?(not for reverse) im sure clap sound creepy in here but i will find more custom hitsound for this song
3. 02:35:073 (2,3) - objects are little close i think. (if its ok, ignore it > <)
4. 02:48:993 (4) - NC and finish should be more fitting~ only add finish
5. 04:28:833 (6) - NC!? honestly true NC is in 04:27:873 (5) - but i didnt do it for some reason :<

• Hard

1. 00:36:513 (6) - i think 00:36:513~00:39:393 this part seems to need to swap NC. so, put NC here oops misspatterning
2. 00:37:473 (1) - and, remove NC this.
3. 00:39:393 (4) - and put NC here.
4. 01:12:993 (1) - remove whistle ans clap at this front im do this on purpose
5. 01:58:833 (7) - move this x145y161 for better blanket
6. 02:35:553 (8) - finish is more fitting here.

• Insane

1. 00:30:513 (10) - crrl G? (or this is your symmetric pattern, just ignore it) okay then
2. 00:40:833 (3) - move it on x181y194 for better blanket.
3. 00:47:073 (4) - NC > <? its okay if i didnt NC this
4. 03:37:233 (2,3,4,5) - how about changing more simple tempo? like this... follow vocal, just make this insane more interesting
   

• Another

1. 00:47:073 (4) - NC? (as same as insane)
2. 01:11:793 (4,5) - fix blanket.

• Extra

1. 00:41:793 (4) - move it on x346y234 for better blanket with 00:41:553 this.
2. 00:47:073 (5) - NC here?
3. 01:46:593 (1) - place this slider to x202y235 for makes like these(01:46:473 (8,2)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:55:953 (5,5) - fix some shape like 01:56:553 (4,6) this.~♥ im just baka mapper who cant blanket sliders ;_;
   
   SPOILER

   

i cant stream THAT last diff AGAIN LOL
really cool map i love you





r flow. take my star

fixed all except red one, thanks for mods :3

haha this guy xDDDDDDDDD

and i love ar10 osu needs more ar10

BEFORE: pls, watch the replays!: http://puu.sh/gJ7lJ/253d7c7be3.zip


[General]
The gray combo color are very close in both. Pls, add more contrast!


[Terror]

1. 01:04:593 (7) - this break the flow... consider unstack.
2. 02:19:953 (5) - NC pls!! >_<
3. 02:23:313 (2,4,6) - mm... idk, try ask for this to top players... imo, is bad idea xD.
4. 02:50:673 (1) - imo, this stack is bad idea, is a bit confusing bc you ignore the note in 02:50:913 (1) - , so, my brain is like "wtf, are this following the music?" or something xD

[Extra]

1. 00:48:033 (1) - soft sample xD, be care about hitsounds :3
2. 01:33:873 (1) - same about stack... pls, consider dont stack.
3. 02:50:673 (1) - ^
4. 02:19:953 (7) - ^^^

[Another]

1. 00:20:673 (5) - Unrankable slider. you need see the arrow!.
2. 01:25:593 (2) - pls dont stack, use a place like 01:25:953 (4,6) -
3. 02:12:873 (2) - fix spacing pls ~_~
4. 02:19:953 (4) - ^^^
5. 03:59:793 (6,7,1) - this flow is... wrong :/, try it:
   

[insane]
imo, this diff need more work and test plays.

1. 00:36:993 (3,4,5) - this patter is bad idea, i really think a slider or something is better. pls, pls! ;_;
2. 02:24:693 (4) - ^
3. 02:19:593 (6) - i feel is better:
   
4. 03:37:713 (5) - pls, consider unstack.
5. 03:39:153 (2) - random normal whistle?

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I will continue another day.

Normal diff need more work also.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

BEFORE: pls, watch the replays!: http://puu.sh/gJ7lJ/253d7c7be3.zip


[General]
The gray combo color are very close in both. Pls, add more contrast!


[Terror]

1. 01:04:593 (7) - this break the flow... consider unstack.
2. 02:19:953 (5) - NC pls!! >_<
3. 02:23:313 (2,4,6) - mm... idk, try ask for this to top players... imo, is bad idea xD.
4. 02:50:673 (1) - imo, this stack is bad idea, is a bit confusing bc you ignore the note in 02:50:913 (1) - , so, my brain is like "wtf, are this following the music?" or something xD

[Extra]

1. 00:48:033 (1) - soft sample xD, be care about hitsounds :3
2. 01:33:873 (1) - same about stack... pls, consider dont stack.
3. 02:50:673 (1) - ^
4. 02:19:953 (7) - ^^^ i keep it because this pattern has slider on it

[Another]

1. 00:20:673 (5) - Unrankable slider. you need see the arrow!.
2. 01:25:593 (2) - pls dont stack, use a place like 01:25:953 (4,6) -
3. 02:12:873 (2) - fix spacing pls ~_~
4. 02:19:953 (4) - ^^^
5. 03:59:793 (6,7,1) - this flow is... wrong :/, try it:
   

[insane]
imo, this diff need more work and test plays.

1. 00:36:993 (3,4,5) - this patter is bad idea, i really think a slider or something is better. pls, pls! ;_;
2. 02:24:693 (4) - ^
3. 02:19:593 (6) - i feel is better:
   
4. 03:37:713 (5) - pls, consider unstack.
5. 03:39:153 (2) - random normal whistle?

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I will continue another day.

Normal diff need more work also.

okay fix all except red one
thanks for mod, sorry for my late answer

this is awesome

Oracle wrote:

this is awesome

this is gud =w=)b

A short post here for a quick access. I will mod it. Be patient~
You don't have to be patient anymore, my mod is postponed till better times comeforever. My apologies.

Sgord1 wrote:

A short post here for a quick access. I will mod it. Be patient~

oh yeah sure :3

As requested, here's my really extremely short shitmod here
and I can't really mod sooo....

General :

The HP Drain is too low on Another, Extra and Terror difficulty
For reference here's my half-assed shitplay on Another diff using a mouse (I'm a tablet player)
Consider to use at least HP 6

Terror :

Easy diff
OD 9 or more maybe?
01:18:513 (9) - Add 1 moar note would be nice, and maybe apply to other diff http://puu.sh/gRBQI/49b5466eb7.jpg
01:31:953 (13) - Ctrl + J? http://puu.sh/gRCtS/acf1e85829.jpg
02:00:513 (3) - A little too close imo, but it's Up2U http://puu.sh/gRBIZ/ad1ba2c150.jpg
02:04:713 (9) - Again, 1 more note here? ^ http://puu.sh/gRBA9/3f25cf6de1.jpg
02:36:513 - Very minor and not important, but it'll be cool. Apply to all diff would be nice too http://puu.sh/gRCcM/b3d37bd245.jpg
02:48:753 (14) - Same as above, more note??? ^

Extra :

01:31:713 (8) - This fit the song better imo http://puu.sh/gRESN/04750b89c3.jpg
02:33:633 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but these two doesn't feel right to me, maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/gRFfM/4a6930d04b.jpg

Another :

01:28:053 (9,10) - Better not stack them, probably http://puu.sh/gREkr/68d09498c3.jpg
01:29:973 (9,10) - ^
02:19:953 (4) - 1/2 slider at 1.5 SV and "Yoooww" http://puu.sh/gREBg/c6c182beaf.png

Insane :

02:53:793 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make perfect pentagon?

I don't want to make this mod full of spoilerbox, so... Yeah...

yaldo_27 wrote:

As requested, here's my really extremely short shitmod here
and I can't really mod sooo....

General :

The HP Drain is too low on Another, Extra and Terror difficulty atleast you can pass it with Low HP right?
For reference here's my half-assed shitplay on Another diff using a mouse (I'm a tablet player) ggwp
Consider to use at least HP 6 i will keep this HP setting

Terror :

Easy diff
OD 9 or more maybe? considering this
01:18:513 (9) - Add 1 moar note would be nice, and maybe apply to other diff http://puu.sh/gRBQI/49b5466eb7.jpg it's better if i didnt add note there, Kind of overmapping
01:31:953 (13) - Ctrl + J? http://puu.sh/gRCtS/acf1e85829.jpg that slider directly go to spinner center
02:00:513 (3) - A little too close imo, but it's Up2U http://puu.sh/gRBIZ/ad1ba2c150.jpg slider overlap makes this notes is hard to move, but i will change and considering this one, looks good
02:04:713 (9) - Again, 1 more note here? ^ http://puu.sh/gRBA9/3f25cf6de1.jpg i didnt see triplet notes here (250 BPM triplets is like hell you know)
02:36:513 - Very minor and not important, but it'll be cool. Apply to all diff would be nice too http://puu.sh/gRCcM/b3d37bd245.jpg wow cool
02:48:753 (14) - Same as above, more note??? ^ oh god, i will keep this

Extra :

01:31:713 (8) - This fit the song better imo http://puu.sh/gRESN/04750b89c3.jpg lol the slider 9 is clearly a triplet
02:33:633 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but these two doesn't feel right to me, maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/gRFfM/4a6930d04b.jpg wow, you use doublet. its very hard thing. but i will change this pattern soon

Another :

01:28:053 (9,10) - Better not stack them, probably http://puu.sh/gREkr/68d09498c3.jpg
01:29:973 (9,10) - ^
02:19:953 (4) - 1/2 slider at 1.5 SV and "Yoooww" http://puu.sh/gREBg/c6c182beaf.png

Insane :

02:53:793 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make perfect pentagon?

I don't want to make this mod full of spoilerbox, so... Yeah...

DON'T OPEN

ty for star :3
okay i fix all except red one. thanks for mod bro!

What the fuck
Have 3 stars, so it reaches 12 SP for rank
GO GO GO GO!

Frey wrote:

WAIT A MINUTE YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

ahh, full of memories

[General]

1. 04:29:793 (1) - lower the volume or use soft hitsound

[Easy]

1. 01:10:113 - should be clap, then remove the clap at 01:10:593
2. 01:11:073 - Finish? (you can lower the volume
3. 01:27:393 - add whitle or at it 01:27:873
4. 01:56:673 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved
5. 02:02:433 (2,3) - same as above
6. 02:18:753 (4) - NC? because a NC can notice players: there is a different space after 02:17:793 (3) for consistency i will not NC this one
7. 02:19:713 (6) - Anything but finish
8. 02:33:633 (1) - wrongly snapped object... don't use reverse slider
9. 03:12:033 (3) - the end should be at 03:12:873 (Like what you do before) i prefer 1/1 in here i guess
10. 03:19:713 (3) - end at 03:20:553 on here i follow downbeat, so its okay i think
11. 03:47:073 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
12. 04:03:393 (3) - better flow if x20 y168
13. 04:08:673 (1,1) - cancel NC, because this is an EZ

[Normal]

1. 00:30:753 - Lower the volume or use soft-hitsound
2. 01:07:953 - sounds weird, you should remove the whistle thats sound better i think
3. 01:15:393 (2) - add finish?
4. 01:28:833 - remove this clap or add it at 01:26:433、01:27:873 (3) 、01:29:793 、01:30:753 and 01:31:713
5. 02:35:073 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
6. 03:21:633 (7) - the break time should begin at 03:22:593
7. 03:51:393 (4) - rotate 85· in clockwise then put it at the position before (This would look better)

[Hard]

1. 01:18:753 (1) - Wrongly snapped end, should end at white line (Remember to add hitsound)
2. 01:31:713 (4) - stack? no i think
3. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish
4. 04:00:753 (8) - weird ds, move it to x292 y140
   srsly, I don't count on this diff

[Insane]

1. 00:16:833 (4) - overmap for sure cuz it's an Insane
2. 00:20:673 (4) - as above
3. 00:24:513 (4) - ↑
4. 00:28:353 (4) - ↑
5. 00:47:073 (4,5) - ↑ will keep this, this one will be interesting i guess
6. 01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - ah..instead of whistle, finish is better
7. 01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - I just think whistle is better (Addtion=Soft), well, if you adopt this one, do remember to fix the same part in other diffs i will considering this one
8. 02:29:313 (3) - overmap?
9. 04:00:993 (1) - add finish

[Another]

1. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish

[Extra]

1. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish

[Terror]

1. 03:53:313 (1) - add finish

Good luck

okay i fixed all except red one!
Thanks for mods frey :3

bounce. come on! bounce. shake it!

Euny wrote:

bounce. come on! bounce. shake it!

oh god thanks for stars rain :3

Hello!
Came from my queue.

Just modding diff that I can mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:22:113 (3) - maybe move to x12 y124 to keep line with 00:21:153 (2) -
2. 00:36:033 - it feel odd when here is none notes. I suggest to make 00:35:553 (4) - this circle to slider and end slider at 00:36:033 - so it fill the hole
3. 01:57:153 (1) - make this slider look more smoothly by moving fourth curving point right. http://puu.sh/gWyDB/29874318bd.jpg
4. 02:27:393 - same thing as in 00:36:033 -

[Normal]

1. 01:14:433 (4) - too close to 01:13:953 (3) -
2. 01:14:913 (1) - too close to 01:14:433 (4) -
3. 01:48:033 (4) - delete useless curving point
4. 02:35:073 (2,3) - blanket would be improved

[Hard]

1. 01:03:393 (1) - NC? why? remove it
2. 01:18:753 - IMO it would be nice to that there could be a note. It feels little like there is missing a note and also it is the pace's first stroke. just a suggest
3. 02:35:193 (5,6,7,8) - distant are changing much here. Try to keep 1,18x - 1,22x

[Insane]

1. 01:15:393 (2,3) - just a minor thing, distant between these two slider is bigger when compering to others.
2. 01:41:793 (1) - move to x128 y316 for minor better blanket
3. 02:04:833 - add here circle, it feels better. In music there is still note, that would be clickable.
4. 03:21:633 - ^, maybe here but slider that end at 03:22:593 -

I hope this mod was helpful! Good luck! Wait a minute, yaaaaah!~

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

Just modding diff that I can mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:22:113 (3) - maybe move to x12 y124 to keep line with 00:21:153 (2) -
2. 00:36:033 - it feel odd when here is none notes. I suggest to make 00:35:553 (4) - this circle to slider and end slider at 00:36:033 - so it fill the hole
3. 01:57:153 (1) - make this slider look more smoothly by moving fourth curving point right. http://puu.sh/gWyDB/29874318bd.jpg
4. 02:27:393 - same thing as in 00:36:033 - its okay i think, just give some rest time for player

[Normal]

1. 01:14:433 (4) - too close to 01:13:953 (3) -
2. 01:14:913 (1) - too close to 01:14:433 (4) -
3. 01:48:033 (4) - delete useless curving point
4. 02:35:073 (2,3) - blanket would be improved ok reshape slider

[Hard]

1. 01:03:393 (1) - NC? why? remove it why? this one is cool like another diff like insane, another, extra and terror
2. 01:18:753 - IMO it would be nice to that there could be a note. It feels little like there is missing a note and also it is the pace's first stroke. just a suggest will considering this
3. 02:35:193 (5,6,7,8) - distant are changing much here. Try to keep 1,18x - 1,22x

[Insane]

1. 01:15:393 (2,3) - just a minor thing, distant between these two slider is bigger when compering to others.
2. 01:41:793 (1) - move to x128 y316 for minor better blanket
3. 02:04:833 - add here circle, it feels better. In music there is still note, that would be clickable. will considering this, i prefer too keep it
4. 03:21:633 - ^, maybe here but slider that end at 03:22:593 - same like above, im just like spinner like this in here

I hope this mod was helpful! oh thanks, this one helped me Good luck! Wait a minute, yaaaaah!~

okay i apply all suggestion except red one, thanks for mod :3

From my Queue~

I can't mod too fast song, Easy to Insane I can help you

[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
Good luck for you

m1223961117 wrote:

From my Queue~

I can't mod too fast song, Easy to Insane I can help you

[General]

1. Fine.

[Easy]

1. CS-0.5??
   02:51:873 (2) - make bending like this?? http://puu.sh/gYtK8/4abec49236.jpg
   
2. No problem

[Normal]

• 
  01:05:313 (1,2) - DS fix, too close
  01:09:633 (2,3) - ^
  01:37:953 (1,2) - ^
  01:52:113 (5,6) - ^
  01:53:313 (1,2) - ^
  02:00:033 (6,1) - ^
  02:29:793 (1,2) - ^
  02:54:753 (1,2) - ^
  03:00:273 (4,5) - ^
  03:01:233 (6,7) - ^
  03:04:833 (7,8) - ^
  03:45:393 (7,1) - ^

[Hard]

1. Fine

[Insane]

• 
  00:42:273 (1) - I can't read this its okay because this sliderhead is clearly visible
  01:28:233 (10) - ^ since this is insane diff its okay right to do this?
  01:34:353 (2) - Ctrl+G
  01:34:833 (4) - ^
  01:39:153 (2) - ^ mybe no for this
  01:58:113 (1,2) - too close
  03:15:153 (2) - Ctrl+G yeah you make random jump there lol
  03:45:153 (5) - ^ there will be hard with that

Good luck for you thanks for mods

apply all except red one :3

from modding queue
fking perfect diff ! pls dont change anything its too nice excepts some nc wwwww

will drop a mod soon ~ here you go ~

[Easy]
00:38:913 (4,5) - blanket here ?
nothing much , pretty clean
[Normal]
00:25:713 - i think it is still apropriate to catch this sound
00:43:713 (5,1) - blanket ?
02:46:833 (8) - i think its better remove this one to give a little break for beginners to refresh their concerntration
03:36:033 (3) - nc here would be a good idea , since its a 1 measure gap a new combo should be easier to read imo
04:06:273 (3,4,5) - couldve use a constant ds ww

[Hard]
01:56:073 (3) - i think overlapping it like this would be nicer
03:42:993 (6) - expecting a 1/2 slider like previous ones lol
03:43:233 (7) - should be 03:43:353 - here feel more suitable
04:26:913 (6) - nc here to keep consistent with previous ncs


[Insane]
01:09:393 (2) - i feel like ctrl+g this would fit the music more , also gives a little movement variation for this part
if you agree with ^ , might as well do it on 01:09:873 (4,5,7) - individually
01:41:553 (4) - i guess ctrl+g this unless its an intentional antiflow lol

[Another]
02:18:993 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this works better imo
nice

[Extra]
00:29:073 (7) - might want to nc this , just the same as i suggested in extra
01:11:553 (3) - ctrl+g this , works nice with your flow as well
01:23:793 (9) - nc
01:27:633 (8) - ^
01:29:553 (6) - ^
01:50:673 (9) - ^
01:54:513 (9) - ^
02:02:193 (10) - ^
02:35:073 (1) - ^
03:12:873 (6) - ^
03:15:153 (10) - ^
03:20:553 (6) - ^
03:36:753 (4) - move this one a bit to the left so it looks nicer with the previous flow , sth like
04:07:953 (2) - might want to ctrl+g for smooth flow
04:08:433 (4) - this one as well

[Terror]
od is a bit kinda nazi for bpm250 rip lol , might want to nerf this to 8.5 , and extra to 8.3
00:29:073 (7) - nc here to keep consistent with the combo in previous
00:39:633 (2) - move it a little bit to the right so the overlap looks the same ds as 00:39:873 (3,4,5) - would be nice
00:47:553 (9) - nc here would be nicer imo to split the streams . too much numbers lol
01:23:433 (1) - nc here as well would split the part well imo
01:25:593 (8) - ^
01:30:033 (14) - the overlap looks kinda weird imo
01:50:313 (7) - nc here too ~
01:54:153 (7) - ^
02:35:313 (10) - prefer nc here nvm ugly combo color lol
02:46:233 (8) - nc ~
02:58:293 (5) - this overlap also looks kinda weird
03:37:713 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this according to 03:36:993 (1,2) - these ww
04:13:233 (5) - move this a bit far away to make jump would be nice , just a small ones would be good , something like
or the one you prefered , wont touch this diff too much cuz its really awesome , great job !

call me back !
fav mapper inc.

Rumia- wrote:

from modding queue

SPOILER

fking perfect diff ! pls dont change anything its too nice excepts some nc wwwww

will drop a mod soon ~ here you go ~

[Easy]
00:38:913 (4,5) - blanket here ?
nothing much , pretty clean :D
[Normal]
00:25:713 - i think it is still apropriate to catch this sound
00:43:713 (5,1) - blanket ? 2hard
02:46:833 (8) - i think its better remove this one to give a little break for beginners to refresh their concerntration
03:36:033 (3) - nc here would be a good idea , since its a 1 measure gap a new combo should be easier to read imo
04:06:273 (3,4,5) - couldve use a constant ds ww

[Hard]
01:56:073 (3) - i think overlapping it like this would be nicer but i use DS here D:

SPOILER

03:42:993 (6) - expecting a 1/2 slider like previous ones lol
03:43:233 (7) - should be 03:43:353 - here feel more suitable
04:26:913 (6) - nc here to keep consistent with previous ncs that one is consistant lmao (every 2 downbeat)


[Insane]
01:09:393 (2) - i feel like ctrl+g this would fit the music more , also gives a little movement variation for this part this like bigblack
if you agree with ^ , might as well do it on 01:09:873 (4,5,7) - individually lol keep it
01:41:553 (4) - i guess ctrl+g this unless its an intentional antiflow lol lol this slider

[Another]
02:18:993 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this works better imo i think this slider is easier without ctrl+g
nice

[Extra]
00:29:073 (7) - might want to nc this , just the same as i suggested in extra
01:11:553 (3) - ctrl+g this , works nice with your flow as well wow the distance between 01:11:433 (2,3) - is much higher than i expect, so keep it i guess
01:23:793 (9) - nc
01:27:633 (8) - ^
01:29:553 (6) - ^
01:50:673 (9) - ^
01:54:513 (9) - ^
02:02:193 (10) - ^
02:35:073 (1) - ^
03:12:873 (6) - ^
03:15:153 (10) - ^
03:20:553 (6) - ^ i will considering this NCs, im just only follow every downbeat on this map
03:36:753 (4) - move this one a bit to the left so it looks nicer with the previous flow , sth like yeah something change haha

SPOILER

04:07:953 (2) - might want to ctrl+g for smooth flow this is cool style bro lmao
04:08:433 (4) - this one as well that slider directly point to next slider pattern

[Terror]
od is a bit kinda nazi for bpm250 rip lol , might want to nerf this to 8.5 , and extra to 8.3 considering this
00:29:073 (7) - nc here to keep consistent with the combo in previous
00:39:633 (2) - move it a little bit to the right so the overlap looks the same ds as 00:39:873 (3,4,5) - would be nice
00:47:553 (9) - nc here would be nicer imo to split the streams . too much numbers lol
01:23:433 (1) - nc here as well would split the part well imo
01:25:593 (8) - ^
01:30:033 (14) - the overlap looks kinda weird imo ok fix
01:50:313 (7) - nc here too ~
01:54:153 (7) - ^
02:35:313 (10) - prefer nc here nvm ugly combo color lol
02:46:233 (8) - nc ~
02:58:293 (5) - this overlap also looks kinda weird
03:37:713 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this according to 03:36:993 (1,2) - these ww ok b0s
04:13:233 (5) - move this a bit far away to make jump would be nice , just a small ones would be good , something like ok ok ok

SPOILER

or the one you prefered , wont touch this diff too much cuz its really awesome , great job ! wow thanks :3

call me back ! call me it. lol
fav mapper inc.

thanks for mods rumia, i apply all suggestion except red one :3
ok update!

Hi~! Mod through In game chat request~! :3





I can't mod extra. Sorry....
Okay then, that's all!!! Sorry if my mod doesn't help you at all since this is a good map already
Good Luck on rank~! \(^ w ^)/

Easy
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
01:06:273 (5) - Remove clap sound and add two inheriting sections for this slider - in first set 60% volume
01:10:113 (4) - The same
01:10:113 (4,1) - Make this more perpendicularly
Normal
00:48:033 (1) - Do the same as Easy
Hard
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
02:35:553 (1) - Set NC
Insane
00:48:033 (1) - Longer to 00:51:873
01:13:953 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Make them like these images (Don't touch 01:13:953 (5) )
http://puu.sh/gZNOM/5ab7e1ed03.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNS1/010d0a5de4.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNSe/6a8f9a9a99.jpg
Another
01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - More distance for them sliders or replace four circles (the second is more useful for me, but it's your chioce)
01:44:673 (1,2,3,4) - The same ^^
01:46:593 (1,2,3,4) - Make these "Anotheeeeerrr", ex. two sliders, because it's "WALKING DEATH" for everyone
02:00:753 (4) - Delete this, copy 02:00:513 (3) , paste, use Ctrl+H J and put in similar distance like 02:00:273 (2)
02:55:233 (3,4,5,6) - You want to kill us?! Replace them something "Anotheeeeerrr" (ex. copy two previos slider and move about 70y above)
03:02:913 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The next "WALKING DEATH"
03:12:993 (1,2,3,4) - AGAAAAAIN
03:48:153 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:51:993 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:59:553 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:03:513 (3,4,5) - ^^
04:06:393 (4,5,6) - ^^
04:17:553 (4,5) - ^^
04:22:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:24:153 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:26:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
Two last diffs are too difficult for me but I hope that someone else will do it
Good Luck for make this approval !!!

Modem wrote:

Hi~! Mod through In game chat request~! :3

General

Whoa 250 BPM?! (O A o) the song like that so ok lol

Easy

00:34:113 (2,3) This sliders almost looks like twins. How about make it into the perfect twins? Just copy and paste 00:34:113 (2) then rotate it 90 degrees anticlock wise once, then place it to x:80 y:128. It won't cause any DS problem too much copy pasta lol, but will consider this
00:36:033 (4,1) Please fix the blanket here. This slider -> 00:36:513 (1) needs to be a bit more bended
01:12:513 (3) Please add whistle at the head of this slider. The music strongly suggests it :3
01:12:753 (3) This reverse part too~ ^
01:12:993 (3) The tail of this slider as well~ ^
The rest looks fine for me ^^

Normal

04:07:713 (1,2,3,4) In my opinion, these 4 notes is a bit hard rhytm. Since there might be some beginner players playing this diff. so it would be nice if you change that notes into a slider with two notes instead :3
04:09:633 (1,2,3,4) ^ ini normal 250 bpm wajar lah ada pattern kaya gini
No thing more found~!

Hard

Whoa. Just one DS problem in Hard diff? Awesome <3 ok check it
I
found
nothing
wrong
sorry.....

Insane

00:20:673 (4,5) These note and sliders have the same rhytm with another notes and sliders with 1/4 rhytm. Example : 00:18:753 (4,5,1). So, it would be nice if you separate these note and sliders a bit further away each other since the player might click 00:21:153 (5) too early due to the spacing. But, if you didn't want to separate them, then just make them into stack :3 very awkward if you cant read this on AR9
00:24:993 (4,5) It happens again ^ . Please give some more spacing between these notes or make them into a stack
01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) ^ look http://puu.sh/gZYnv/6ab9e3b083.jpg
01:34:953 (4,1) Please fix this blanket. This slider -> 01:35:073 (1) needs to be more bended. Just move the centre point of this slider one grid to left
02:54:033 (2) Move this note to x:288 y:176 for the better placement of this star-shaped flow consider make this pattern a natural looks haha
02:54:753 (1) This indirect blanket seems a bit off. Please make this slider a bit more bended by moving the centre point of this slider one grid to right if i make this more curved this one will be no good i think
02:56:493 Add a note please~! The music suggests it :3 (Listen it with 25% Playback Rate) a 5s in insane? i die
02:56:613 ^
03:04:293 ^
03:58:833 (4,1) The blanket seems off. Please move the tail of this slider -> 03:59:193 (1) one grid to left
04:01:833 (6,1) This blanket is off again. Please fix it with the same step :3 ^

I can't mod extra. Sorry.... ok no problemo bro
Okay then, that's all!!! Sorry if my mod doesn't help you at all since this is a good map already ya it help me
Good Luck on rank~! \(^ w ^)/ ok bro

ReFaller wrote:

Easy
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873 didnt change duration but im change something there
01:06:273 (5) - Remove clap sound and add two inheriting sections for this slider - in first set 60% volume fix in other way
01:10:113 (4) - The same ^
01:10:113 (4,1) - Make this more perpendicularly
Normal
00:48:033 (1) - Do the same as Easy
Hard
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
02:35:553 (1) - Set NC no need
Insane
00:48:033 (1) - Longer to 00:51:873
01:13:953 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Make them like these images (Don't touch 01:13:953 (5) ) fix in other way
http://puu.sh/gZNOM/5ab7e1ed03.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNS1/010d0a5de4.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNSe/6a8f9a9a99.jpg
Another
01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - More distance for them sliders or replace four circles (the second is more useful for me, but it's your chioce) didnt want to make some flow breaker here
01:44:673 (1,2,3,4) - The same ^^
01:46:593 (1,2,3,4) - Make these "Anotheeeeerrr", ex. two sliders, because it's "WALKING DEATH" for everyone
02:00:753 (4) - Delete this, copy 02:00:513 (3) , paste, use Ctrl+H J and put in similar distance like 02:00:273 (2)
02:55:233 (3,4,5,6) - You want to kill us?! no, i want to teach you about how to singletap Replace them something "Anotheeeeerrr" (ex. copy two previos slider and move about 70y above)
03:02:913 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The next "WALKING DEATH"
03:12:993 (1,2,3,4) - AGAAAAAIN
03:48:153 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:51:993 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:59:553 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:03:513 (3,4,5) - ^^
04:06:393 (4,5,6) - ^^
04:17:553 (4,5) - ^^
04:22:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:24:153 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:26:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^^ this overlaps kinda easy to read in AR9.3
Two last diffs are too difficult for me but I hope that someone else will do it
Good Luck for make this approval !!!

thanks for mods guys! i apply all suggestion except red one :3

looks real nice to me , go ~!

Rumia- wrote:

looks real nice to me , go ~!

wowowowow asdfasdfasdf

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my turn.

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[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
[Another]
[Extra]

wendao wrote:

a

[General]

1. tolong dicek kembali Combo Colour yang digunakan, sepertinya banyak kesalahan (setelah fix fix mod, apalagi di diff teratas Terror)

[Easy]

1. about SliderMultiplier... nvm.
2. 00:25:953 (4) - dibikin slider 2/1? (end at 00:26:433) gk ah soalnya ane mau bikin diff ini gampang bgt
3. 00:30:753 - kalo dikasih Normal 5% rasanya aneh (masih ada 'tuk' nya gitu.. entah kenapa), ganti jadi Soft aja mendingan
4. 01:03:393 (1) - use Normal Sampleset and Soft Additions (on head)
5. 01:03:633 - not used inherited points itu efek slider slider nya bagus, tapi entah lah (itu mah cuma tanda doang)
6. 01:11:073 (1) - same as above kagok ini mah finish dh keras
7. 01:12:513 (3) - same (on tail); tapi tambahin Normal Sampleset di head sama repeat juga bagus
8. 01:14:433 (6) - Normal Sampleset
9. 01:14:913 (1,2) - Normal Sampleset on tail
10. 01:16:833 (1) - Normal Sampleset + Soft Additions why normal sampleset?
    --- main main sama sampleset + additions nya aja ---
11. 01:40:593 - slidertick here quite annoying, kurangin volumenya terus ganti jadi soft ini kan buat mempermudah player nentuin beat
12. 01:48:273 - ^
13. 02:23:553 - blank banget rasanya, apalagi dilihat dari kiai sebelumnya
14. 02:27:393 - ^ ini pattern" keren loh
15. 02:33:633 - not used inherited points
16. 02:36:513 - use Soft Samplesets here
17. 03:30:513 - not used inherited points
18. 04:00:993 - not used inherited points
19. 04:04:833 - NC
20. 04:07:713 - remove
21. 04:08:673 - NC

[Normal]

• 
  --- check for unused inherited points as well ---

1. CS 3.5? ketika Hard - Terror CS 4? no. CS 3 pls wai?? ini kalau digedein circle nya nanti banyak overlap, ini juga circle kecil dh banyak yg overlap
2. 01:05:793 (1) - a
3. 01:34:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - the pattern way too complex for Normal; Holding your finger on keyboard is hard you know
4. 01:52:113 (5) - delete this circle yeh itu jelas bgt ada sesuatu
5. 02:24:993 (3,4,5,6,7) - same.
   --- disarankan jangan pake pattern (Slider - Circle - Slider - Circle - Slider) --- oke oke, considering this
6. 02:36:513 - soft samplesets here too
7. 02:58:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - worst case
8. 03:21:633 (7) - mending dibikin slider terus end di 03:22:593 - buat konsistensi semua diff
9. 03:57:153 (1) - err... salah pake combo colour atau gimana ya gk kok itu sengaja
10. 04:04:833 (1) - ^ sama
11. 04:11:553 - strong beatnya disini, jadi lebih baik slidernya mulai darisini 3/2 slider + 3/2 pattern = gud lol
12. 04:14:433 - 04:29:673 - kalo gw BN mungkin gw ga bakal rank ini, well, just tbh da ini mah apa atuh~, ini lagu 250 BPM jadi player itu merasakan sensasi kegilaan normal wkwkwkwk

[Hard]

1. lebih pantas CS 3.5 oke deh
2. patternnya kompleks banget, beda jauh dari Normal, no wonder why the gap is big (1.3 loh) sebab itulah ane bikin normal ane kaya gitu
3. 00:23:793 - a
4. 01:05:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - banyak inconsistent jump nya, too lazy to replicate, lalala
5. 01:13:953 (5,6,7,8) - not sure 'bout this one, ask BN
6. 02:16:113 (5,1) - misread as 1/2 (ini beda keliatannya dari 01:49:233 (6,1) - atau 02:19:953 (3,1) - ) mana mungkin missread lah disini klo pattern sebelumnya itu 1/2
7. 02:29:313 (5) - 1/1
8. 02:35:193 (5,6,7,8) - err... no? strim lah kali" lmao
9. 02:36:513 - and another "soft samplesets here too"
10. 02:48:513 (4) - dibikin slider 1/1 ? circlew aja deh
11. 03:08:673 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - for me it's all messed up (03:09:033 (3,1,3,1) - looks stupid) biar greget ini
12. 04:12:033 (5,6,7,8,9) - it was four, and now it's five
13. 04:13:473 - highly recommended to put circle / slider here (break between kiai just very bad)

[Insane]

1. 00:21:153 - NC
2. 00:24:993 - NC
3. 00:28:833 - NC
   --- or simply remove NC from 00:17:313 (1) ---
4. udah berani nyicip 1/4 disini ya, padahal Hard saja baru nyoba-nyoba 1/2 `-` biarin ini buat nyeimbangin Hard sama Another yg edan edanan lah diif nya
5. 01:20:673 - normal sampleset dh soft sampleset
6. 01:22:593 (1,2,3) - misread as 1/2
7. 01:23:433 (5,6,7) - ^ (dibikin jauh lebih deket aja; kayak 01:25:953 (6,7,8))
8. 01:24:153 (8,9,10) - well... I guess this one is okay
9. 01:44:673 (1,2,3,4) - arah jumpnya itu masih spacing kakak
10. 02:05:793 - another another another soft sampleset gk ah itu suaranya jelas bgt normal sampleset
11. 02:33:633 (1,2) - supposed to be 3/4 sliders :/
12. 02:36:513 - soft sampleset
13. 04:07:953 (2) - 44,180 much better

[Another]

1. Another? Another what
2. 01:14:913 - 01:18:033 - seharusnya bisa disubstitute pake Normal Sampleset aja, ga mesti banyak-banyak inherited points ini kerek keles *runs
3. 01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - cool concept flower
4. 02:24:693 (4) - out-of-beat circle, remove
5. 02:47:073 (1,2) - cool
6. 02:47:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://puu.sh/h29QX.jpg sepertinya patternnya kurang greget

[Extra]

1. buat Extra dan Terror sih sebenarnya ga bakal banyak masalah soalnya cuma nambah 1/4 doang dari diff Insane dan Another~
2. well, cuma excuse buat "males ngemod Extra + Terror" sih... :/
3. 00:32:193 (1) - kurangin volumenya
   --- applies to all 1/8 ---
4. 01:03:393 (1) - a itu sih sengaja

oke sip, thanks wen, apply all except red one

will update later

terror
00:19:233 (1,2,3) - allign so its straight https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976676
00:28:713 (5) - add 1/2 reverse slider until 00:29:313 (circle here) for the vocals, can also add another slider at 00:29:073 cuz sound strong (try this http://puu.sh/h2iHj/272d85fca5.jpg)
00:47:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this curve doesnt look nice try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976712
01:47:193 (6) - this could be at x30 y84 i think
01:49:953 (5) - ctrl+g?
01:54:153 (7) - ^
01:56:073 (1) - ^
02:01:473 (5) - ^
02:52:113 (2,3) - holy shit thats a big jump, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976747
03:30:273 (1) - raise volume on this pls
03:47:553 (1,3) - ctrl g (separately)
extra
00:29:073 (2) - change to 1/2 reverse slider
01:38:673 (7) - move this to something like x389 y197
02:23:313 (2,3) - awkward i think, move to x248 y167
02:24:993 (1) - ctrl g?
02:55:233 (5,6) - ctrl g (separately)
02:56:193 (5) - ctrl g
03:03:153 (6,7) - ctrl g?
03:30:273 (1) - make volume higher
poor mod, clean map:( good job

So here it is, Fort.




That's it. Can't mod diffs. above Insane, because I can't understand your mapping style in those diffs. Good luck with this mapset. I hope it gets ranked soon.

Mazzerin wrote:

terror
00:19:233 (1,2,3) - allign so its straight https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976676
00:28:713 (5) - add 1/2 reverse slider until 00:29:313 (circle here) for the vocals, can also add another slider at 00:29:073 cuz sound strong (try this http://puu.sh/h2iHj/272d85fca5.jpg) but i want this intro keep calm
00:47:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this curve doesnt look nice try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976712 change a bit
01:47:193 (6) - this could be at x30 y84 i think too far
01:49:953 (5) - ctrl+g? kinda break previous flow
01:54:153 (7) - ^ its okay for this since this one easier without ctrl+g
01:56:073 (1) - ^ distance between 01:56:073 (1,2) - is very good with jump
02:01:473 (5) - ^ let me change direction of jump since it easier to read
02:52:113 (2,3) - holy shit thats a big jump, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2976747
03:30:273 (1) - raise volume on this pls
03:47:553 (1,3) - ctrl g (separately) will considering this
extra
00:29:073 (2) - change to 1/2 reverse slider why? D:
01:38:673 (7) - move this to something like x389 y197
02:23:313 (2,3) - awkward i think, move to x248 y167 overlaps is real lmao
02:24:993 (1) - ctrl g? ummm maybe no i think
02:55:233 (5,6) - ctrl g (separately) this pattern confusing me, i will considering fix this pattern
02:56:193 (5) - ctrl g dat spacing, hard to reach >.<
03:03:153 (6,7) - ctrl g? ummm, keep it i think
03:30:273 (1) - make volume higher
poor mod, clean map:( good job

okay fix all except red one, thanks for suggestion mazzerin <3

will reply lgv mods later

edit:

LGV894 wrote:

So here it is, Fort.

Normal

- This is only for aesthetics but, I think it would be better if you used 1.3x DS on 1/1s because some circles/sliders are colliding with each other. (e.g. 00:33:633 (2,3,4) -) keep distance consistant

Hard

- 00:40:353 (1,2,3,4) - Random 1/2 pattern-chan appears. I don't think it fits well especially because you only did it one time. something change there

- 02:54:753 (1) - 02:58:593 (1) - 03:02:433 (1) - It would be fun if these things were 1.4/1.6 jumps, but if you want to keep it mono-DS, then it's ok.

- 03:06:273 - It would also be fun if the blue (1)s were jumps. keep distance consistant >.<

- I really think that a few jumps would be nice to see in this diff, but 1 DS is also fine if you really want it.

Insane

- I think 00:32:673 (1,3) - these two sliders are better off this way, because I love circular flow. but i like anticircular


- 00:36:513 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this 1/2 spam thing you did.

- 00:44:193 (1,2) - Why don't you make this a jump too? Because 00:40:353 (1,2) - 00:42:273 (1,2) - are jumps too, just to make it consistent. Ctrl+G 00:44:433 (2) - and rotate it a bit, maybe? no i guess too hard to read that stack pattern

- 01:34:113 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern inconsistency. And why is the first pattern (01:34:113 (1,2,3,4) - ) more difficult than the next ones (01:37:953 (1,2,3,4) -, 01:41:793 (1,2,3,4) -) ? Maybe Ctrl+G 01:34:353 (2) - and 01:34:833 (4) -. roll back ctrl+g pattern

- 04:14:913 (4,5) - Random jump-chan appears. Why? Either make it consistent or remove that jump. pls, its not random

That's it. Can't mod diffs. above Insane, because I can't understand your mapping style in those diffs. Good luck with this mapset. I hope it gets ranked soon.

okay guys thanks for mods, i apply all suggestion except red one. ok looks this map ready

rebubbled

I love this map so much
This map needs to be ranked
Thanks Fort !

LeeoS wrote:

I love this map so much
This map needs to be ranked
Thanks Fort !

no problem :3

i want to more shoot

Euny wrote:

i want to more shoot

no pls >_<

Rumia- wrote:

fav mapper inc.

fav mapper added
gogo Fort!!!

omg, this was bubble... i will continue my mod, no kudo pls.

[easy]

1. I did not like a bit that rhythm you did in kiai 01:34:113 - and 02:50:913 - , bc the "durududin-durududin" is a melody more intuitive. but well...
   Many of my suggestion are for avoid the polarity issues.
2. 01:41:313 (5) - i really think is bad idea this note for a easy... pls, consider delete, or maybe make some like this:
   
3. 02:00:993 (1) - pls, improve this blanket http://puu.sh/h52yN/15459ab17f.jpg
4. 02:17:793 (3,4) - mmm... some like this will works better for the "blablabla":
   
5. 02:26:913 (5,1) - this spacing looks "misleading", pls, move (5), and fix the spacing:
   
6. 02:48:993 (3,4) -
   
8. You know where are the polarity issues, pls, think about this :3

[Normal]

1. 00:43:713 (5,1) - no blanket? T___T
2. 00:47:073 (4) - feels better:
   
3. 01:16:833 (4) - pls, add a 1/1 slider in 01:16:353 - , and add a repeat to long slider (and move a bit the spinner). Like this is now... is bored >_>
   
4. 01:43:473 (3) - this feel bad D:, but idk what suggestion do ;w;
5. 02:04:833 (7) - man, what is it... pls... i know you will make it better >;3
6. 02:18:753 (4,5) - pls, dont lost the big tick here :/
   
7. 02:35:553 (3) - why the curve?? this is following nothing in music
8. 02:48:993 (4) - plsssss!! >_< is many time! this is better:
   
9. 03:09:153 (7) -
   
   better shape

   
10. 03:21:393 - add a note here pls... and improve the flow in this pattern
11. 03:44:673 (6) -
    
12. 03:54:993 - add a note here? pls >_<
13. 04:01:953 (2,3) - pls... is boreeeed xD
    
14. 04:06:033 - you are losting the melody ;_; pls, try it:
    
15. 04:12:513 (3) - notice the additional node, and the snap here is the ball in this moment:
    
    
16. 04:28:833 (6) - this feels without soul (?), move the last node:
    

[hard]

1. 01:27:273 (4) - here feels wrong. Yeah, you are following the melody, but the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong. Pls, fix it!
2. 03:44:913 (5) - http://puu.sh/h58B0/5e407510ac.jpg pls~ ._.

Summary

1. Spread between normal and hard will be problematic, imo. Normal wil have more note density.
2. Easy dont looks bad, but... Could be better u.u
3. I notice you are not clever with low diffs xD, but dont worry

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

omg, this was bubble... i will continue my mod, no kudo pls. sorry it was accident i kd ur mod

[easy]

1. I did not like a bit that rhythm you did in kiai 01:34:113 - and 02:50:913 - , bc the "durududin-durududin" is a melody more intuitive. but well...
   Many of my suggestion are for avoid the polarity issues. mapping easy diff in 250bpm song is like... well..
2. 01:41:313 (5) - i really think is bad idea this note for a easy... pls, consider delete, or maybe make some like this:
   
3. 02:00:993 (1) - pls, improve this blanket http://puu.sh/h52yN/15459ab17f.jpg
4. 02:17:793 (3,4) - mmm... some like this will works better for the "blablabla":
   
5. 02:26:913 (5,1) - this spacing looks "misleading", pls, move (5), and fix the spacing:
   
6. 02:48:993 (3,4) -
   
8. You know where are the polarity issues, pls, think about this :3

[Normal]

1. 00:43:713 (5,1) - no blanket? T___T yes
2. 00:47:073 (4) - feels better: no change for this
   
3. 01:16:833 (4) - pls, add a 1/1 slider in 01:16:353 - , and add a repeat to long slider (and move a bit the spinner). Like this is now... is bored >_> idk with this
   
4. 01:43:473 (3) - this feel bad D:, but idk what suggestion do ;w; that slider can cover stream sound
5. 02:04:833 (7) - man, what is it... pls... i know you will make it better >;3
6. 02:18:753 (4,5) - pls, dont lost the big tick here :/
   
7. 02:35:553 (3) - why the curve?? this is following nothing in music i hear something there
8. 02:48:993 (4) - plsssss!! >_< is many time! this is better:
   
9. 03:09:153 (7) -
   
   better shape

   
10. 03:21:393 - add a note here pls... and improve the flow in this pattern
11. 03:44:673 (6) -
    
12. 03:54:993 - add a note here? pls >_<
13. 04:01:953 (2,3) - pls... is boreeeed xD
    
14. 04:06:033 - you are losting the melody ;_; pls, try it:
    
15. 04:12:513 (3) - notice the additional node, and the snap here is the ball in this moment:
    
    
16. 04:28:833 (6) - this feels without soul (?), move the last node:
    

[hard]

1. 01:27:273 (4) - here feels wrong. Yeah, you are following the melody, but the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong. Pls, fix it! whats wrong with this?
2. 03:44:913 (5) - http://puu.sh/h58B0/5e407510ac.jpg pls~ ._. want to keep this straight slider

Summary

1. Spread between normal and hard will be problematic, imo. Normal wil have more note density.
2. Easy dont looks bad, but... Could be better u.u
3. I notice you are not clever with low diffs xD, but dont worry so sad yeah

thanks for mods, eru. probably all fixed but some pattern i change in other way.
and im didnt update it yet
*fort still improve lower diffs here

edited*

Fuck that Terror diff. One hell single tapping jumps wih AR10 ;w;

I should probably warm my fingers up if this map is ranked

STAR

Fort wrote:

[hard]

1. 01:27:273 (4) - here feels wrong. Yeah, you are following the melody, but the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong. Pls, fix it! whats wrong with this?

My suggestion is for make this more intuitive. Because the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong but is on half slider way, the brain is like "oh, what happen here, i listen something, but i does not press it...", and, player will be confuced for this.

Err hi random mod comes along let's start anyway
Call me shit.


Good luck in ranking this

HootOwlStar wrote:

Err hi random mod comes along let's start anyway
Call me shit.

Easy

• I forgot the distance spacing you provide me because my osu!suddenly crashes due to computer probs
  I assume it is 1.0x because if it is 0.9x then it is too horrible
  If no description then it means distance

1. 00:22:113 (3,1) -
2. 00:35:553 (4,1) -
3. 00:37:473 (2) - **Not on grid, these notes 00:38:913 (4,5) also not on grid
4. 00:39:393 (5,1) -
5. 01:13:953 (5,1) -
6. 01:29:313 (4,1) -
7. 01:32:193 (3) - Nt on grid
8. 01:32:193 (3,1) -
9. 01:36:033 (3,4) -
10. 01:39:873 (3,4) -
11. 01:40:353 (4,1) -
12. 02:26:913 (4,1) -
13. 02:33:633 (1) - Just suggest you move it to lower as it seems crashing w/ 02:31:713 (2)
14. 02:51:873 (2,3) -
15. 02:53:793 (3,1) -
16. 03:10:113 (1,2) -
17. 04:20:193 (3,1) -

Normal

• I assume it is 1.2x
  Same, if no description then it means distance
  "^" is also a description don't mistaken

1. 00:24:033 (2,3,4) - Make it to equilateral better
2. 00:45:153 (2,3,4) - Move to right of 00:44:193 (1) for better flow
3. 01:16:353 - Should add a note here i think i will keep this one, this thing will make this map interesting
4. 01:35:073 (3,4) -
5. 01:38:673 (2,3) - Not on grid
6. 01:52:113 (5) - ^
7. 02:19:233 (5) - ^
8. 02:27:633 (7,1) -
9. 02:51:873 (2) - Nt on grid
10. 02:55:233 (2) - ^
11. 03:00:273 (5,6,7) - ^
12. 03:05:793 (8) - ^
13. 03:09:153 (6) - ^
14. 03:45:633 (1) - ^
15. 04:06:273 (3,4) - ^
16. 04:08:673 (1) - A little bit too out of grid

Good luck in ranking this

fix all except red one, thanks for spacing check HOS :3

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Fort wrote:

[hard]

1. 01:27:273 (4) - here feels wrong. Yeah, you are following the melody, but the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong. Pls, fix it! whats wrong with this?

My suggestion is for make this more intuitive. Because the bass in 01:27:393 - is very strong but is on half slider way, the brain is like "oh, what happen here, i listen something, but i does not press it...", and, player will be confuced for this. this is nice idea, i will consider this one because i think its okay if i follow smelody in here, and the hitsounds looks nice too

last rebub ww good lck

hmmm....
Rank This!

more crazy map plz!

Sky Trias wrote:

hmmm....
Rank This!

more crazy map plz!

oke crazy

aaaaaaaa

did an irc mod mostly on lower diffs, call me when you're ready

ok

GOOD

grats \o\

Mfw this actually got qualified haha
I still remember when it just looked like spam everywhere, grats!

This is horrible in every aspect I could imagine

are you ready for screamminggg sooonnn?!!??!?!
lets count down, 3 2 1 , wooooghhhhhhhhh:^)
grazt!

OMG!!!
You actually did it!!

confrats fort ^^

7.05 lol
grazt! Fort

Lol, y still in pending beatmaps thread? wtf

Gz Fort, nice 7 star diff waow

I'm really not sure if this is relevant at all, but how is BPM handled for speedcore maps? The bass during the kiais would make it (if they're counted as seperate beats) 500bpm during those parts (like in the title of the song). Of course the map plays like a 250bpm map but I'd like some clarification anyway.

Timorisu wrote:

This is horrible in every aspect I could imagine

Good, constructive criticism.

Nice.

terror diff is messy as hell duh

Moved to the appropriate subforum. Good luck on passing the QAT's tests

Single tap like hell .. gratz :3

(｀・ω・´)

Aka wrote:

terror diff is messy as hell duh

who cares when u got flow :^)

welcome to fort's hell


gratz i just saw xD.

00:16:113 (2) - Unstack for better movement

00:16:833 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:20:673 (5) - Soft sampleset

00:22:833 (6) - CTRL+G for better spacing and lead-in to 00:23:073 (1) -

00:23:793 (2) - Unstack for better movement

00:24:513 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:28:353 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:28:713 (5,1,2) - Since these follow the lyrics there's -

00:29:433 - A missing circle here

00:32:223 (1) - Why the hell is this such a strong sound. A quiet soft sampleset (with removed whistles) would sound way better, since there's no actual 1/8
sound

00:32:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This would work WAY better as 2 sliders followed by 4 circles, just CTRL+G 00:32:913 (2,3,4) - to see how much better this sounds and would play

00:33:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These center points, 00:33:633 (1,3,5,7) - , are way too clustered. Additionally this pattern has horrible flow.

00:33:693 - Also missed a beat here

00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, this would work WAY better as 2 sliders followed by 4 circles

00:35:613 - Also missed one more beat here

00:35:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These center points, 00:35:553 (1,3,5,7) - , are way too clustered. Additionally this pattern has horrible flow.

00:36:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You know it, 2 sliders followed by 4 circles

00:37:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These center points, 00:37:473 (1,3,5) - , are way too clustered. Stacking 00:38:073 (6,7) - under 00:37:833 (4,5) - is completely redundant looking at the other patterns like this, since they're all based on "circular "flow"". Mapping a sharp repeat like this after the previous patterns is off-putting.

00:37:533 - Again, a missed beat

00:38:433 (1,2,3,4) - You know what I'm going to say

00:40:113 (5) - CTRL+Shift+F? You missed a rather promiment sound at 00:40:173 -

00:40:353 (1,2,3) - This back and forth thing doesn't play well at all, move 00:40:353 (1) - to the right to create a more circular motion

00:40:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unlike the first part I'd make this 4 circles followed by 2 sliders, for consistency's sake

00:41:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play well at all, especially the sharp back and forth thing again. Try a star pattern of some sort http://i.imgur.com/ZqtGUUO.png

00:42:753 (5,6,7) - Again, for consistency's sake I'd place 4 circles followed by 2 sliders here

00:42:993 (6,7,2) - This is a complete bitch to read, since 00:43:473 (2) - is still hidden under the expanding 00:42:993 (6,7) - at the time of having to be hit

00:43:593 (3,4,5,6) - Again, these close back and forth things make no sense, a more spaced out square or something would work better

00:44:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The 4 circles followed by 2 sliders thing again

00:44:193 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap on 00:44:193 (1,3) - is bugging me, you could use a zigzag square to clean this up a little http://i.imgur.com/xerZv09.png

00:45:393 (2,3,4) - Again, these close back and forth things make no sense and are horrible to play

00:46:293 - Missed out on a beat here

00:47:493 (8) - There's no sound here - remove this

00:48:033 (1) - Id' rather have this spinner end on 00:51:393 - with two circles after it placed at 00:51:633 - and 00:51:873 -

The best thing about this map is that it'd play just fine with AR9 if your patterns weren't so clustered and ugly (and no, that is NOT a valid excuse to use AR10)

Please don't reply with things like "but this is my mapping style, deal with it 8)" but instead reason your mapping. Afterall, you're thinking about the song and the best possible map you can give it by placing circles and sliders which compliment the song. Therefore all/most of your objects should have a reason to be where they are. If they do you shouldn't have a problem reasoning your mapping.


And I'm not even a minute in, how did this get qualified?
Honestly at this point it looks like a random circle dump with the wrong intentions and flawed execution, probably because that's what it is.





Edit because why not

01:05:793 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern does not play well at all, you're forcing sharp and quick angles on the player on a calm part. Especially the direction change 01:05:913 (4,5,6,7) - has is horrible

01:05:793 (3,5) - This stack is concerning. Again, the second circle is still covered by the first circle's expanding effect after being hit, even with transparent 300s

01:06:273 (7,8,9,10) - This spacing doesn't make any sense. Work on an even arc at least

01:09:033 (11) - Move this upwards to avoid those stacks I've mentioned like 20 times already. You should know why they're problematic by now. This also brings more of a circular motion into the pattern and eases the movement, making the created pattern (01:08:793 (9,10,11,1) - ) more comfortable to play

01:09:993 (6) - Place this somewhere around 240|112 to ease reading. This still keeps a similiar movement from 01:09:993 (6) - to 01:10:113 (7) - like 01:09:753 (4) - to 01:09:873 (5) - has

01:10:593 (9,10,11,12,1) - While I agree that there should be a more spaced part here it shouldn't be nearly as jump as this, concidering the general tone of the part this is set in. This could easily be fixed by moving 01:10:953 (12) - upwards a little

01:12:153 (7,8,9) - The change from small spacing to rather big spacing is kind of off-putting, especially with the slider on a red tick. Consider moving 01:12:153 (7) - outwards a little

01:14:433 (9) - Move this to where 01:12:993 (1) - was, then CTRL+G for a pattern that doesn't cause the player to do these awkward back-and-forth-stopping motions on the sliders

01:18:753 (1) - This spinner doesn't make any sense at all. Doesn't add to the map or the song and feels plain wrong.

01:20:673 - And what is this break doing here? You're basically covering up the interesting speeding up part with these

01:24:393 (15) - There's no sound here - remove this

01:25:653 (9) - There's no sound here - remove this. Then adjust either 01:25:593 (8) - or 01:25:713 (9) - to remove the 1/2 stack

01:28:033 - and 01:28:073 - You missed out on two important 1/6 beats here

01:28:353 (1,5) - You know why I dislike these stacks by now. Hidden objects and bad playability.

01:28:473 (2,3,4,6) - Yeah

01:31:113 (6) - Remove the repeat and add a circle at 01:31:353 - to keep consistency with the previous patterns

01:32:073 (12) - There's no sound here - remove this

01:34:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's no reason for variable spacing, especially accelerating one. This is mindless 1/2 spam from the music with no change in tone or pitch whatsoever, so it should be mapped accordingly, not like something that gets more intense by the second

01:34:953 (8,2) - Stacks and stuff

01:35:433 (4,6) - The darn problematic stacks

01:35:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern especially is shit to play. 01:35:073 (1,2) - Is forcing the player to speed up and move horizontally, 01:35:193 (2,3) - promptly speeds down again and is placed to play in an awkward going-up-but-not-really place. 01:35:313 (3,4,5) - This completely random spacing isn't only bad to look at but bad to play also, plus 01:35:433 (4,5,6) - being basically a repeat could really screw the player over.

01:35:553 (5,6,7) - This change of spacing is random and illogical

01:36:273 (2) - CTRL+G

01:36:513 (3,4) - CTRL+G

01:36:513 (3,5) - CTRl+G

In that order, so a circular motion will be created. The dropdown from 01:36:753 (5) - to 01:36:873 (6) - will also make the transition into the slider better

01:36:813 - Missed out on part of the stream here

01:38:193 (3,5) - I'd write a comment for each stack I find but then this post would be 300% longer

01:38:313 (4,5,6,7) - Again, this spacing change is sudden and irrational, the sharp angle from 01:38:313 (4) - to 01:38:433 (5) - is a bitch to read and play, which sucks because 01:38:433 (5,6,7) - is kinda nice

01:38:553 (6,7,8,1) - But then again, this spacing is really weird

01:38:313 (4,8) - Oh look, another stack that hides the second circle

01:39:393 (5,6,7) - These spacing changes are... you know. This could easily be solved by moving 01:39:513 (6) - somewhere around 268|352

01:40:113 (2) - CTRL+G

01:40:353 (3,4,5,6) - Switch these placements

01:40:653 - Missed a part of the stream here

01:42:633 (8,3) - The first circle hides half of the second circle. Clean yo stacks

01:42:273 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - The reducing spacing is weird since you previously based this kiai on accelerating spacing, rather then reducing it

01:43:113 (4,5,6,7) - You even have accelerating spacing right in this pattern, starting at a completely random point

01:45:633 (1,2,3,4) - From 1.2 to 3.3 to 1.4? Nonononono

01:45:753 (2,3) - Plus this is a complete bitch to play especially with follow points since you're forcing the player to go through the end of 01:45:393 (4) - and 01:45:633 (1) - again

01:45:873 (3,7) - First circle hides more than half of the second circle on this stack

01:46:113 (5,8) - The first circle nearly hides the complete second circle

01:47:193 (6) - Uneven spacing. Move this further to the top left

01:48:333 - Missed out on part of the stream again

01:49:653 - Missed a triple here

01:49:833 (4,5,6) - This is not nice to play at all, especially with 01:49:953 (5) - being a slider, making the player drag away from 01:50:193 (6) - even more

01:51:073 - and 01:51:113 - You missed out on two important 1/6 beats here

01:51:573 (3) - Missed a triple here

01:51:633 (3,4,5) - Random, uneven spacing

01:53:493 - Missed a triple here

01:54:033 (6) - Move 1 grid up

01:54:633 (11,12) - CTRL+G and move 01:54:633 (11) - out a little. Pay attention to even spacing

01:54:913 - and 01:54:953 - You missed out on two important 1/6 beats here

01:55:413 - Missed a triple here

01:55:713 (5,1) - This overlap is unnecessary and easily avoidable

01:56:793 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - Very uneven spacing

01:57:333 - Missed a triple here

01:57:633 (5,6,7) - Even though this isn't the worst spacing this map has to show, it certainly isn't the best either. Try moving and rotating 01:57:993 (7) - around to create an even spacing from 01:57:873 (6) - to 01:57:993 (7) - to 01:58:233 (8) -

01:58:293 - Missed a triple here

01:58:753 - and 01:58:793 - You missed out on two important 1/6 beats here

01:59:253 - Missed a triple here

01:59:193 (2,3,4,5) - This is the most uneven spacing I have seen

02:00:273 (2,3) - These being so close together doesn't make much sense, looking at 02:00:033 (1,2) - and 02:00:513 (3,4) - , both of which transitions are highly spaced

02:00:753 (4,1) - Same thing here, these being so close together after the really jumpy and highly spaced part doesn't make much sense

02:01:173 - Missed a triple here

02:01:113 (2,3,4,5) - Honestly what the fuck is this spacing? From 1.1 to 2.5 to 3.1?

02:01:953 (8,12) - The first circle covers most of the second circle

02:02:593 - and 02:02:633 - You missed out on two important 1/6 beats here

02:03:093 - Missed a triple here

02:03:993 (2,4) - Ugh

02:03:993 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The sudden change from high to low spacing is kind of weird but whatevs

After looking at 50% of this... thing I've come to the conclusion that you should work on easier maps at first. Learn to be way more consistent with both, timeline and grid placement. Your current map looks like you played the song at 100% speed and placed the circles where you thought they belong, which is not what you should do on 250/500 BPM maps. After working on making easier, more consistent maps, try getting those ranked to get a grasp of what a good mod is and how to properly reply to a mod. When you've got the basics nailed down (which you should have done by now) try to slowly transition into making harder maps. Trying to map stuff like this out of the blue, overnight, will end up as the mess that you currently offer as a map.

My two cents. I'm not going to look at the rest of the map since I can't imagine anything good coming out of this.

Sorry if I sound a little harsh.

Timorisu wrote:

00:16:113 (2) - Unstack for better movement

00:16:833 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:20:673 (5) - Soft sampleset

00:22:833 (6) - CTRL+G for better spacing and lead-in to 00:23:073 (1) -

00:23:793 (2) - Unstack for better movement

00:24:513 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:28:353 (4) - Soft sampleset

00:28:713 (5,1,2) - Since these follow the lyrics there's -

00:29:433 - A missing circle here

00:32:223 (1) - Why the hell is this such a strong sound. A quiet soft sampleset (with removed whistles) would sound way better, since there's no actual 1/8
sound

00:32:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This would work WAY better as 2 sliders followed by 4 circles, just CTRL+G 00:32:913 (2,3,4) - to see how much better this sounds and would play

00:33:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These center points, 00:33:633 (1,3,5,7) - , are way too clustered. Additionally this pattern has horrible flow.

00:33:693 - Also missed a beat here

00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, this would work WAY better as 2 sliders followed by 4 circles

00:35:613 - Also missed one more beat here

00:35:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These center points, 00:35:553 (1,3,5,7) - , are way too clustered. Additionally this pattern has horrible flow.

00:36:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You know it, 2 sliders followed by 4 circles

00:37:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These center points, 00:37:473 (1,3,5) - , are way too clustered. Stacking 00:38:073 (6,7) - under 00:37:833 (4,5) - is completely redundant looking at the other patterns like this, since they're all based on "circular "flow"". Mapping a sharp repeat like this after the previous patterns is off-putting.

00:37:533 - Again, a missed beat

00:38:433 (1,2,3,4) - You know what I'm going to say

00:40:113 (5) - CTRL+Shift+F? You missed a rather promiment sound at 00:40:173 -

00:40:353 (1,2,3) - This back and forth thing doesn't play well at all, move 00:40:353 (1) - to the right to create a more circular motion

00:40:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unlike the first part I'd make this 4 circles followed by 2 sliders, for consistency's sake

00:41:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play well at all, especially the sharp back and forth thing again. Try a star pattern of some sort http://i.imgur.com/ZqtGUUO.png

00:42:753 (5,6,7) - Again, for consistency's sake I'd place 4 circles followed by 2 sliders here

00:42:993 (6,7,2) - This is a complete bitch to read, since 00:43:473 (2) - is still hidden under the expanding 00:42:993 (6,7) - at the time of having to be hit

00:43:593 (3,4,5,6) - Again, these close back and forth things make no sense, a more spaced out square or something would work better

00:44:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The 4 circles followed by 2 sliders thing again

00:44:193 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap on 00:44:193 (1,3) - is bugging me, you could use a zigzag square to clean this up a little http://i.imgur.com/xerZv09.png

00:45:393 (2,3,4) - Again, these close back and forth things make no sense and are horrible to play

00:46:293 - Missed out on a beat here

00:47:493 (8) - There's no sound here - remove this

00:48:033 (1) - Id' rather have this spinner end on 00:51:393 - with two circles after it placed at 00:51:633 - and 00:51:873 -

The best thing about this map is that it'd play just fine with AR9 if your patterns weren't so clustered and ugly (and no, that is NOT a valid excuse to use AR10)

Please don't reply with things like "but this is my mapping style, deal with it 8)" but instead reason your mapping. Afterall, you're thinking about the song and the best possible map you can give it by placing circles and sliders which compliment the song. Therefore all/most of your objects should have a reason to be where they are. If they do you shouldn't have a problem reasoning your mapping.





And I'm not even a minute in, how did this get qualified?
Honestly at this point it looks like a random circle dump with the wrong intentions and flawed execution, probably because that's what it is.

:^)


sorry i just had to

Bass wrote:

:^)

(^:

unrank when

hahahahaha i FC this map :>

if this map dq'ed, i feel so sorry for players who play this map and get good score in here. just want to be honest i map for players who want to improve them skill as well yeah

edit:
atleast i can map this 7.05 stars map, if this going DQ i will make another new map, it'll be nightmare for pro player hahahahahaha >:D