hi---------------

FUN

Mazzerin wrote:

FUN

YES

omg

Fookiezi wrote:

omg

So hard right?

y u always kill me with god damn singletap ;w;

needs rank right now

Arcubin wrote:

y u always kill me with god damn singletap ;w;

because i will improve your skill, im just give skill to you :3

Silverboxer wrote:

needs rank right now

haahhaaha
i still didnt hitsounded this mapset. maybe after hitsounded i can rank this map properly

Cool mapset... you will need a LOT of testplays... i really want you rank it!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Cool mapset... thanks

you will need a LOT of testplays... this is quite very hard to testplay especially for terror diffs which i cant singletapping to much, if im forcing myself my hands will be dead, i really need some pro testplayers for this one

i really want you rank it! i hope so, i hope this map ranked :3

i will do the best

hey♥ fort. lets m4m yay \:) /




i cant stream THAT last diff AGAIN LOL
really cool map i love you





r flow. take my star

Euny wrote:

hey♥ fort. lets m4m yay \:) /

• General

1. i fixed bg pixels.(1365 >> 1366 ..just 1 pixel lol > <) click, if you want it. ok thanks
2. do you want to letterbox during breaks?? if or not, check out all diffs fixed
   
3. and i think its fit for 100% vol too. (cause music is really strong and loud) but i recommend 7~80% for unkiai time lmao im too lazy to set volume but okay fixed all
   

• Easy

1. 00:35:553 (4) - i heard tempo to 00:36:033 this timing. and feel 'little' weird. when i play this part. i think should be add note or make a slider for this note.
   (pattern is your choice ) i give some rest time here, lol rest time in this hardcore song
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:913 (1) - add clap at this slider's tail for better tempo? change in different way
3. 01:31:233 (2,3) - if you move these on (2) - x200y191, (3) - x355y117, makes better ditance wow very detailed o.o
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:04:833 (5) - NC? im NC this slider before, but i guess only 1 combo makes this slider like forever alone :v
5. 03:13:953 (1) - i think finish should be more fitting this front
6. 04:29:793 (1) - i recommend add vol50% +s:c1 timing point for this spinner's end(as same as other diffs) ok sure

• Normal

1. 01:14:433 (4) - place it on x166y353 for better distance?
2. 01:26:433 (1) - add clap at this tail?(not for reverse) im sure clap sound creepy in here but i will find more custom hitsound for this song
3. 02:35:073 (2,3) - objects are little close i think. (if its ok, ignore it > <)
4. 02:48:993 (4) - NC and finish should be more fitting~ only add finish
5. 04:28:833 (6) - NC!? honestly true NC is in 04:27:873 (5) - but i didnt do it for some reason :<

• Hard

1. 00:36:513 (6) - i think 00:36:513~00:39:393 this part seems to need to swap NC. so, put NC here oops misspatterning
2. 00:37:473 (1) - and, remove NC this.
3. 00:39:393 (4) - and put NC here.
4. 01:12:993 (1) - remove whistle ans clap at this front im do this on purpose
5. 01:58:833 (7) - move this x145y161 for better blanket
6. 02:35:553 (8) - finish is more fitting here.

• Insane

1. 00:30:513 (10) - crrl G? (or this is your symmetric pattern, just ignore it) okay then
2. 00:40:833 (3) - move it on x181y194 for better blanket.
3. 00:47:073 (4) - NC > <? its okay if i didnt NC this
4. 03:37:233 (2,3,4,5) - how about changing more simple tempo? like this... follow vocal, just make this insane more interesting
   

• Another

1. 00:47:073 (4) - NC? (as same as insane)
2. 01:11:793 (4,5) - fix blanket.

• Extra

1. 00:41:793 (4) - move it on x346y234 for better blanket with 00:41:553 this.
2. 00:47:073 (5) - NC here?
3. 01:46:593 (1) - place this slider to x202y235 for makes like these(01:46:473 (8,2)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:55:953 (5,5) - fix some shape like 01:56:553 (4,6) this.~♥ im just baka mapper who cant blanket sliders ;_;
   
   SPOILER

   

i cant stream THAT last diff AGAIN LOL
really cool map i love you





r flow. take my star

fixed all except red one, thanks for mods :3

haha this guy xDDDDDDDDD

and i love ar10 osu needs more ar10

BEFORE: pls, watch the replays!: http://puu.sh/gJ7lJ/253d7c7be3.zip


[General]
The gray combo color are very close in both. Pls, add more contrast!


[Terror]

1. 01:04:593 (7) - this break the flow... consider unstack.
2. 02:19:953 (5) - NC pls!! >_<
3. 02:23:313 (2,4,6) - mm... idk, try ask for this to top players... imo, is bad idea xD.
4. 02:50:673 (1) - imo, this stack is bad idea, is a bit confusing bc you ignore the note in 02:50:913 (1) - , so, my brain is like "wtf, are this following the music?" or something xD

[Extra]

1. 00:48:033 (1) - soft sample xD, be care about hitsounds :3
2. 01:33:873 (1) - same about stack... pls, consider dont stack.
3. 02:50:673 (1) - ^
4. 02:19:953 (7) - ^^^

[Another]

1. 00:20:673 (5) - Unrankable slider. you need see the arrow!.
2. 01:25:593 (2) - pls dont stack, use a place like 01:25:953 (4,6) -
3. 02:12:873 (2) - fix spacing pls ~_~
4. 02:19:953 (4) - ^^^
5. 03:59:793 (6,7,1) - this flow is... wrong :/, try it:
   

[insane]
imo, this diff need more work and test plays.

1. 00:36:993 (3,4,5) - this patter is bad idea, i really think a slider or something is better. pls, pls! ;_;
2. 02:24:693 (4) - ^
3. 02:19:593 (6) - i feel is better:
   
4. 03:37:713 (5) - pls, consider unstack.
5. 03:39:153 (2) - random normal whistle?

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I will continue another day.

Normal diff need more work also.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

BEFORE: pls, watch the replays!: http://puu.sh/gJ7lJ/253d7c7be3.zip


[General]
The gray combo color are very close in both. Pls, add more contrast!


[Terror]

1. 01:04:593 (7) - this break the flow... consider unstack.
2. 02:19:953 (5) - NC pls!! >_<
3. 02:23:313 (2,4,6) - mm... idk, try ask for this to top players... imo, is bad idea xD.
4. 02:50:673 (1) - imo, this stack is bad idea, is a bit confusing bc you ignore the note in 02:50:913 (1) - , so, my brain is like "wtf, are this following the music?" or something xD

[Extra]

1. 00:48:033 (1) - soft sample xD, be care about hitsounds :3
2. 01:33:873 (1) - same about stack... pls, consider dont stack.
3. 02:50:673 (1) - ^
4. 02:19:953 (7) - ^^^ i keep it because this pattern has slider on it

[Another]

1. 00:20:673 (5) - Unrankable slider. you need see the arrow!.
2. 01:25:593 (2) - pls dont stack, use a place like 01:25:953 (4,6) -
3. 02:12:873 (2) - fix spacing pls ~_~
4. 02:19:953 (4) - ^^^
5. 03:59:793 (6,7,1) - this flow is... wrong :/, try it:
   

[insane]
imo, this diff need more work and test plays.

1. 00:36:993 (3,4,5) - this patter is bad idea, i really think a slider or something is better. pls, pls! ;_;
2. 02:24:693 (4) - ^
3. 02:19:593 (6) - i feel is better:
   
4. 03:37:713 (5) - pls, consider unstack.
5. 03:39:153 (2) - random normal whistle?

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I will continue another day.

Normal diff need more work also.

okay fix all except red one
thanks for mod, sorry for my late answer

this is awesome

Oracle wrote:

this is awesome

this is gud =w=)b

A short post here for a quick access. I will mod it. Be patient~
You don't have to be patient anymore, my mod is postponed till better times comeforever. My apologies.

Sgord1 wrote:

A short post here for a quick access. I will mod it. Be patient~

oh yeah sure :3

As requested, here's my really extremely short shitmod here
and I can't really mod sooo....

General :

The HP Drain is too low on Another, Extra and Terror difficulty
For reference here's my half-assed shitplay on Another diff using a mouse (I'm a tablet player)
Consider to use at least HP 6

Terror :

Easy diff
OD 9 or more maybe?
01:18:513 (9) - Add 1 moar note would be nice, and maybe apply to other diff http://puu.sh/gRBQI/49b5466eb7.jpg
01:31:953 (13) - Ctrl + J? http://puu.sh/gRCtS/acf1e85829.jpg
02:00:513 (3) - A little too close imo, but it's Up2U http://puu.sh/gRBIZ/ad1ba2c150.jpg
02:04:713 (9) - Again, 1 more note here? ^ http://puu.sh/gRBA9/3f25cf6de1.jpg
02:36:513 - Very minor and not important, but it'll be cool. Apply to all diff would be nice too http://puu.sh/gRCcM/b3d37bd245.jpg
02:48:753 (14) - Same as above, more note??? ^

Extra :

01:31:713 (8) - This fit the song better imo http://puu.sh/gRESN/04750b89c3.jpg
02:33:633 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but these two doesn't feel right to me, maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/gRFfM/4a6930d04b.jpg

Another :

01:28:053 (9,10) - Better not stack them, probably http://puu.sh/gREkr/68d09498c3.jpg
01:29:973 (9,10) - ^
02:19:953 (4) - 1/2 slider at 1.5 SV and "Yoooww" http://puu.sh/gREBg/c6c182beaf.png

Insane :

02:53:793 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make perfect pentagon?

I don't want to make this mod full of spoilerbox, so... Yeah...

yaldo_27 wrote:

As requested, here's my really extremely short shitmod here
and I can't really mod sooo....

General :

The HP Drain is too low on Another, Extra and Terror difficulty atleast you can pass it with Low HP right?
For reference here's my half-assed shitplay on Another diff using a mouse (I'm a tablet player) ggwp
Consider to use at least HP 6 i will keep this HP setting

Terror :

Easy diff
OD 9 or more maybe? considering this
01:18:513 (9) - Add 1 moar note would be nice, and maybe apply to other diff http://puu.sh/gRBQI/49b5466eb7.jpg it's better if i didnt add note there, Kind of overmapping
01:31:953 (13) - Ctrl + J? http://puu.sh/gRCtS/acf1e85829.jpg that slider directly go to spinner center
02:00:513 (3) - A little too close imo, but it's Up2U http://puu.sh/gRBIZ/ad1ba2c150.jpg slider overlap makes this notes is hard to move, but i will change and considering this one, looks good
02:04:713 (9) - Again, 1 more note here? ^ http://puu.sh/gRBA9/3f25cf6de1.jpg i didnt see triplet notes here (250 BPM triplets is like hell you know)
02:36:513 - Very minor and not important, but it'll be cool. Apply to all diff would be nice too http://puu.sh/gRCcM/b3d37bd245.jpg wow cool
02:48:753 (14) - Same as above, more note??? ^ oh god, i will keep this

Extra :

01:31:713 (8) - This fit the song better imo http://puu.sh/gRESN/04750b89c3.jpg lol the slider 9 is clearly a triplet
02:33:633 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but these two doesn't feel right to me, maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/gRFfM/4a6930d04b.jpg wow, you use doublet. its very hard thing. but i will change this pattern soon

Another :

01:28:053 (9,10) - Better not stack them, probably http://puu.sh/gREkr/68d09498c3.jpg
01:29:973 (9,10) - ^
02:19:953 (4) - 1/2 slider at 1.5 SV and "Yoooww" http://puu.sh/gREBg/c6c182beaf.png

Insane :

02:53:793 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make perfect pentagon?

I don't want to make this mod full of spoilerbox, so... Yeah...

DON'T OPEN

ty for star :3
okay i fix all except red one. thanks for mod bro!

What the fuck
Have 3 stars, so it reaches 12 SP for rank
GO GO GO GO!

Frey wrote:

WAIT A MINUTE YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

ahh, full of memories

[General]

1. 04:29:793 (1) - lower the volume or use soft hitsound

[Easy]

1. 01:10:113 - should be clap, then remove the clap at 01:10:593
2. 01:11:073 - Finish? (you can lower the volume
3. 01:27:393 - add whitle or at it 01:27:873
4. 01:56:673 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved
5. 02:02:433 (2,3) - same as above
6. 02:18:753 (4) - NC? because a NC can notice players: there is a different space after 02:17:793 (3) for consistency i will not NC this one
7. 02:19:713 (6) - Anything but finish
8. 02:33:633 (1) - wrongly snapped object... don't use reverse slider
9. 03:12:033 (3) - the end should be at 03:12:873 (Like what you do before) i prefer 1/1 in here i guess
10. 03:19:713 (3) - end at 03:20:553 on here i follow downbeat, so its okay i think
11. 03:47:073 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
12. 04:03:393 (3) - better flow if x20 y168
13. 04:08:673 (1,1) - cancel NC, because this is an EZ

[Normal]

1. 00:30:753 - Lower the volume or use soft-hitsound
2. 01:07:953 - sounds weird, you should remove the whistle thats sound better i think
3. 01:15:393 (2) - add finish?
4. 01:28:833 - remove this clap or add it at 01:26:433、01:27:873 (3) 、01:29:793 、01:30:753 and 01:31:713
5. 02:35:073 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved
6. 03:21:633 (7) - the break time should begin at 03:22:593
7. 03:51:393 (4) - rotate 85· in clockwise then put it at the position before (This would look better)

[Hard]

1. 01:18:753 (1) - Wrongly snapped end, should end at white line (Remember to add hitsound)
2. 01:31:713 (4) - stack? no i think
3. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish
4. 04:00:753 (8) - weird ds, move it to x292 y140
   srsly, I don't count on this diff

[Insane]

1. 00:16:833 (4) - overmap for sure cuz it's an Insane
2. 00:20:673 (4) - as above
3. 00:24:513 (4) - ↑
4. 00:28:353 (4) - ↑
5. 00:47:073 (4,5) - ↑ will keep this, this one will be interesting i guess
6. 01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - ah..instead of whistle, finish is better
7. 01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - I just think whistle is better (Addtion=Soft), well, if you adopt this one, do remember to fix the same part in other diffs i will considering this one
8. 02:29:313 (3) - overmap?
9. 04:00:993 (1) - add finish

[Another]

1. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish

[Extra]

1. 03:21:633 (1) - add finish

[Terror]

1. 03:53:313 (1) - add finish

Good luck

okay i fixed all except red one!
Thanks for mods frey :3

bounce. come on! bounce. shake it!

Euny wrote:

bounce. come on! bounce. shake it!

oh god thanks for stars rain :3

Hello!
Came from my queue.

Just modding diff that I can mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:22:113 (3) - maybe move to x12 y124 to keep line with 00:21:153 (2) -
2. 00:36:033 - it feel odd when here is none notes. I suggest to make 00:35:553 (4) - this circle to slider and end slider at 00:36:033 - so it fill the hole
3. 01:57:153 (1) - make this slider look more smoothly by moving fourth curving point right. http://puu.sh/gWyDB/29874318bd.jpg
4. 02:27:393 - same thing as in 00:36:033 -

[Normal]

1. 01:14:433 (4) - too close to 01:13:953 (3) -
2. 01:14:913 (1) - too close to 01:14:433 (4) -
3. 01:48:033 (4) - delete useless curving point
4. 02:35:073 (2,3) - blanket would be improved

[Hard]

1. 01:03:393 (1) - NC? why? remove it
2. 01:18:753 - IMO it would be nice to that there could be a note. It feels little like there is missing a note and also it is the pace's first stroke. just a suggest
3. 02:35:193 (5,6,7,8) - distant are changing much here. Try to keep 1,18x - 1,22x

[Insane]

1. 01:15:393 (2,3) - just a minor thing, distant between these two slider is bigger when compering to others.
2. 01:41:793 (1) - move to x128 y316 for minor better blanket
3. 02:04:833 - add here circle, it feels better. In music there is still note, that would be clickable.
4. 03:21:633 - ^, maybe here but slider that end at 03:22:593 -

I hope this mod was helpful! Good luck! Wait a minute, yaaaaah!~

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

Just modding diff that I can mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:22:113 (3) - maybe move to x12 y124 to keep line with 00:21:153 (2) -
2. 00:36:033 - it feel odd when here is none notes. I suggest to make 00:35:553 (4) - this circle to slider and end slider at 00:36:033 - so it fill the hole
3. 01:57:153 (1) - make this slider look more smoothly by moving fourth curving point right. http://puu.sh/gWyDB/29874318bd.jpg
4. 02:27:393 - same thing as in 00:36:033 - its okay i think, just give some rest time for player

[Normal]

1. 01:14:433 (4) - too close to 01:13:953 (3) -
2. 01:14:913 (1) - too close to 01:14:433 (4) -
3. 01:48:033 (4) - delete useless curving point
4. 02:35:073 (2,3) - blanket would be improved ok reshape slider

[Hard]

1. 01:03:393 (1) - NC? why? remove it why? this one is cool like another diff like insane, another, extra and terror
2. 01:18:753 - IMO it would be nice to that there could be a note. It feels little like there is missing a note and also it is the pace's first stroke. just a suggest will considering this
3. 02:35:193 (5,6,7,8) - distant are changing much here. Try to keep 1,18x - 1,22x

[Insane]

1. 01:15:393 (2,3) - just a minor thing, distant between these two slider is bigger when compering to others.
2. 01:41:793 (1) - move to x128 y316 for minor better blanket
3. 02:04:833 - add here circle, it feels better. In music there is still note, that would be clickable. will considering this, i prefer too keep it
4. 03:21:633 - ^, maybe here but slider that end at 03:22:593 - same like above, im just like spinner like this in here

I hope this mod was helpful! oh thanks, this one helped me Good luck! Wait a minute, yaaaaah!~

okay i apply all suggestion except red one, thanks for mod :3

From my Queue~

I can't mod too fast song, Easy to Insane I can help you

[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
Good luck for you

m1223961117 wrote:

From my Queue~

I can't mod too fast song, Easy to Insane I can help you

[General]

1. Fine.

[Easy]

1. CS-0.5??
   02:51:873 (2) - make bending like this?? http://puu.sh/gYtK8/4abec49236.jpg
   
2. No problem

[Normal]

• 
  01:05:313 (1,2) - DS fix, too close
  01:09:633 (2,3) - ^
  01:37:953 (1,2) - ^
  01:52:113 (5,6) - ^
  01:53:313 (1,2) - ^
  02:00:033 (6,1) - ^
  02:29:793 (1,2) - ^
  02:54:753 (1,2) - ^
  03:00:273 (4,5) - ^
  03:01:233 (6,7) - ^
  03:04:833 (7,8) - ^
  03:45:393 (7,1) - ^

[Hard]

1. Fine

[Insane]

• 
  00:42:273 (1) - I can't read this its okay because this sliderhead is clearly visible
  01:28:233 (10) - ^ since this is insane diff its okay right to do this?
  01:34:353 (2) - Ctrl+G
  01:34:833 (4) - ^
  01:39:153 (2) - ^ mybe no for this
  01:58:113 (1,2) - too close
  03:15:153 (2) - Ctrl+G yeah you make random jump there lol
  03:45:153 (5) - ^ there will be hard with that

Good luck for you thanks for mods

apply all except red one :3

from modding queue
fking perfect diff ! pls dont change anything its too nice excepts some nc wwwww

will drop a mod soon ~ here you go ~

[Easy]
00:38:913 (4,5) - blanket here ?
nothing much , pretty clean
[Normal]
00:25:713 - i think it is still apropriate to catch this sound
00:43:713 (5,1) - blanket ?
02:46:833 (8) - i think its better remove this one to give a little break for beginners to refresh their concerntration
03:36:033 (3) - nc here would be a good idea , since its a 1 measure gap a new combo should be easier to read imo
04:06:273 (3,4,5) - couldve use a constant ds ww

[Hard]
01:56:073 (3) - i think overlapping it like this would be nicer
03:42:993 (6) - expecting a 1/2 slider like previous ones lol
03:43:233 (7) - should be 03:43:353 - here feel more suitable
04:26:913 (6) - nc here to keep consistent with previous ncs


[Insane]
01:09:393 (2) - i feel like ctrl+g this would fit the music more , also gives a little movement variation for this part
if you agree with ^ , might as well do it on 01:09:873 (4,5,7) - individually
01:41:553 (4) - i guess ctrl+g this unless its an intentional antiflow lol

[Another]
02:18:993 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this works better imo
nice

[Extra]
00:29:073 (7) - might want to nc this , just the same as i suggested in extra
01:11:553 (3) - ctrl+g this , works nice with your flow as well
01:23:793 (9) - nc
01:27:633 (8) - ^
01:29:553 (6) - ^
01:50:673 (9) - ^
01:54:513 (9) - ^
02:02:193 (10) - ^
02:35:073 (1) - ^
03:12:873 (6) - ^
03:15:153 (10) - ^
03:20:553 (6) - ^
03:36:753 (4) - move this one a bit to the left so it looks nicer with the previous flow , sth like
04:07:953 (2) - might want to ctrl+g for smooth flow
04:08:433 (4) - this one as well

[Terror]
od is a bit kinda nazi for bpm250 rip lol , might want to nerf this to 8.5 , and extra to 8.3
00:29:073 (7) - nc here to keep consistent with the combo in previous
00:39:633 (2) - move it a little bit to the right so the overlap looks the same ds as 00:39:873 (3,4,5) - would be nice
00:47:553 (9) - nc here would be nicer imo to split the streams . too much numbers lol
01:23:433 (1) - nc here as well would split the part well imo
01:25:593 (8) - ^
01:30:033 (14) - the overlap looks kinda weird imo
01:50:313 (7) - nc here too ~
01:54:153 (7) - ^
02:35:313 (10) - prefer nc here nvm ugly combo color lol
02:46:233 (8) - nc ~
02:58:293 (5) - this overlap also looks kinda weird
03:37:713 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this according to 03:36:993 (1,2) - these ww
04:13:233 (5) - move this a bit far away to make jump would be nice , just a small ones would be good , something like
or the one you prefered , wont touch this diff too much cuz its really awesome , great job !

call me back !
fav mapper inc.

Rumia- wrote:

from modding queue

SPOILER

fking perfect diff ! pls dont change anything its too nice excepts some nc wwwww

will drop a mod soon ~ here you go ~

[Easy]
00:38:913 (4,5) - blanket here ?
nothing much , pretty clean :D
[Normal]
00:25:713 - i think it is still apropriate to catch this sound
00:43:713 (5,1) - blanket ? 2hard
02:46:833 (8) - i think its better remove this one to give a little break for beginners to refresh their concerntration
03:36:033 (3) - nc here would be a good idea , since its a 1 measure gap a new combo should be easier to read imo
04:06:273 (3,4,5) - couldve use a constant ds ww

[Hard]
01:56:073 (3) - i think overlapping it like this would be nicer but i use DS here D:

SPOILER

03:42:993 (6) - expecting a 1/2 slider like previous ones lol
03:43:233 (7) - should be 03:43:353 - here feel more suitable
04:26:913 (6) - nc here to keep consistent with previous ncs that one is consistant lmao (every 2 downbeat)


[Insane]
01:09:393 (2) - i feel like ctrl+g this would fit the music more , also gives a little movement variation for this part this like bigblack
if you agree with ^ , might as well do it on 01:09:873 (4,5,7) - individually lol keep it
01:41:553 (4) - i guess ctrl+g this unless its an intentional antiflow lol lol this slider

[Another]
02:18:993 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this works better imo i think this slider is easier without ctrl+g
nice

[Extra]
00:29:073 (7) - might want to nc this , just the same as i suggested in extra
01:11:553 (3) - ctrl+g this , works nice with your flow as well wow the distance between 01:11:433 (2,3) - is much higher than i expect, so keep it i guess
01:23:793 (9) - nc
01:27:633 (8) - ^
01:29:553 (6) - ^
01:50:673 (9) - ^
01:54:513 (9) - ^
02:02:193 (10) - ^
02:35:073 (1) - ^
03:12:873 (6) - ^
03:15:153 (10) - ^
03:20:553 (6) - ^ i will considering this NCs, im just only follow every downbeat on this map
03:36:753 (4) - move this one a bit to the left so it looks nicer with the previous flow , sth like yeah something change haha

SPOILER

04:07:953 (2) - might want to ctrl+g for smooth flow this is cool style bro lmao
04:08:433 (4) - this one as well that slider directly point to next slider pattern

[Terror]
od is a bit kinda nazi for bpm250 rip lol , might want to nerf this to 8.5 , and extra to 8.3 considering this
00:29:073 (7) - nc here to keep consistent with the combo in previous
00:39:633 (2) - move it a little bit to the right so the overlap looks the same ds as 00:39:873 (3,4,5) - would be nice
00:47:553 (9) - nc here would be nicer imo to split the streams . too much numbers lol
01:23:433 (1) - nc here as well would split the part well imo
01:25:593 (8) - ^
01:30:033 (14) - the overlap looks kinda weird imo ok fix
01:50:313 (7) - nc here too ~
01:54:153 (7) - ^
02:35:313 (10) - prefer nc here nvm ugly combo color lol
02:46:233 (8) - nc ~
02:58:293 (5) - this overlap also looks kinda weird
03:37:713 (4) - might want to ctrl+g this according to 03:36:993 (1,2) - these ww ok b0s
04:13:233 (5) - move this a bit far away to make jump would be nice , just a small ones would be good , something like ok ok ok

SPOILER

or the one you prefered , wont touch this diff too much cuz its really awesome , great job ! wow thanks :3

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I can't mod extra. Sorry....
Okay then, that's all!!! Sorry if my mod doesn't help you at all since this is a good map already
Good Luck on rank~! \(^ w ^)/

Easy
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
01:06:273 (5) - Remove clap sound and add two inheriting sections for this slider - in first set 60% volume
01:10:113 (4) - The same
01:10:113 (4,1) - Make this more perpendicularly
Normal
00:48:033 (1) - Do the same as Easy
Hard
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
02:35:553 (1) - Set NC
Insane
00:48:033 (1) - Longer to 00:51:873
01:13:953 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Make them like these images (Don't touch 01:13:953 (5) )
http://puu.sh/gZNOM/5ab7e1ed03.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNS1/010d0a5de4.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNSe/6a8f9a9a99.jpg
Another
01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - More distance for them sliders or replace four circles (the second is more useful for me, but it's your chioce)
01:44:673 (1,2,3,4) - The same ^^
01:46:593 (1,2,3,4) - Make these "Anotheeeeerrr", ex. two sliders, because it's "WALKING DEATH" for everyone
02:00:753 (4) - Delete this, copy 02:00:513 (3) , paste, use Ctrl+H J and put in similar distance like 02:00:273 (2)
02:55:233 (3,4,5,6) - You want to kill us?! Replace them something "Anotheeeeerrr" (ex. copy two previos slider and move about 70y above)
03:02:913 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The next "WALKING DEATH"
03:12:993 (1,2,3,4) - AGAAAAAIN
03:48:153 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:51:993 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:59:553 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:03:513 (3,4,5) - ^^
04:06:393 (4,5,6) - ^^
04:17:553 (4,5) - ^^
04:22:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:24:153 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:26:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
Two last diffs are too difficult for me but I hope that someone else will do it
Good Luck for make this approval !!!

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General

Whoa 250 BPM?! (O A o) the song like that so ok lol

Easy

00:34:113 (2,3) This sliders almost looks like twins. How about make it into the perfect twins? Just copy and paste 00:34:113 (2) then rotate it 90 degrees anticlock wise once, then place it to x:80 y:128. It won't cause any DS problem too much copy pasta lol, but will consider this
00:36:033 (4,1) Please fix the blanket here. This slider -> 00:36:513 (1) needs to be a bit more bended
01:12:513 (3) Please add whistle at the head of this slider. The music strongly suggests it :3
01:12:753 (3) This reverse part too~ ^
01:12:993 (3) The tail of this slider as well~ ^
The rest looks fine for me ^^

Normal

04:07:713 (1,2,3,4) In my opinion, these 4 notes is a bit hard rhytm. Since there might be some beginner players playing this diff. so it would be nice if you change that notes into a slider with two notes instead :3
04:09:633 (1,2,3,4) ^ ini normal 250 bpm wajar lah ada pattern kaya gini
No thing more found~!

Hard

Whoa. Just one DS problem in Hard diff? Awesome <3 ok check it
I
found
nothing
wrong
sorry.....

Insane

00:20:673 (4,5) These note and sliders have the same rhytm with another notes and sliders with 1/4 rhytm. Example : 00:18:753 (4,5,1). So, it would be nice if you separate these note and sliders a bit further away each other since the player might click 00:21:153 (5) too early due to the spacing. But, if you didn't want to separate them, then just make them into stack :3 very awkward if you cant read this on AR9
00:24:993 (4,5) It happens again ^ . Please give some more spacing between these notes or make them into a stack
01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) ^ look http://puu.sh/gZYnv/6ab9e3b083.jpg
01:34:953 (4,1) Please fix this blanket. This slider -> 01:35:073 (1) needs to be more bended. Just move the centre point of this slider one grid to left
02:54:033 (2) Move this note to x:288 y:176 for the better placement of this star-shaped flow consider make this pattern a natural looks haha
02:54:753 (1) This indirect blanket seems a bit off. Please make this slider a bit more bended by moving the centre point of this slider one grid to right if i make this more curved this one will be no good i think
02:56:493 Add a note please~! The music suggests it :3 (Listen it with 25% Playback Rate) a 5s in insane? i die
02:56:613 ^
03:04:293 ^
03:58:833 (4,1) The blanket seems off. Please move the tail of this slider -> 03:59:193 (1) one grid to left
04:01:833 (6,1) This blanket is off again. Please fix it with the same step :3 ^

I can't mod extra. Sorry.... ok no problemo bro
Okay then, that's all!!! Sorry if my mod doesn't help you at all since this is a good map already ya it help me
Good Luck on rank~! \(^ w ^)/ ok bro

ReFaller wrote:

Easy
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873 didnt change duration but im change something there
01:06:273 (5) - Remove clap sound and add two inheriting sections for this slider - in first set 60% volume fix in other way
01:10:113 (4) - The same ^
01:10:113 (4,1) - Make this more perpendicularly
Normal
00:48:033 (1) - Do the same as Easy
Hard
00:48:033 (1) - Longer this to 00:51:873
02:35:553 (1) - Set NC no need
Insane
00:48:033 (1) - Longer to 00:51:873
01:13:953 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Make them like these images (Don't touch 01:13:953 (5) ) fix in other way
http://puu.sh/gZNOM/5ab7e1ed03.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNS1/010d0a5de4.jpg
http://puu.sh/gZNSe/6a8f9a9a99.jpg
Another
01:36:993 (1,2,3,4) - More distance for them sliders or replace four circles (the second is more useful for me, but it's your chioce) didnt want to make some flow breaker here
01:44:673 (1,2,3,4) - The same ^^
01:46:593 (1,2,3,4) - Make these "Anotheeeeerrr", ex. two sliders, because it's "WALKING DEATH" for everyone
02:00:753 (4) - Delete this, copy 02:00:513 (3) , paste, use Ctrl+H J and put in similar distance like 02:00:273 (2)
02:55:233 (3,4,5,6) - You want to kill us?! no, i want to teach you about how to singletap Replace them something "Anotheeeeerrr" (ex. copy two previos slider and move about 70y above)
03:02:913 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The next "WALKING DEATH"
03:12:993 (1,2,3,4) - AGAAAAAIN
03:48:153 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:51:993 (4,5,6) - ^^
03:59:553 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
04:03:513 (3,4,5) - ^^
04:06:393 (4,5,6) - ^^
04:17:553 (4,5) - ^^
04:22:353 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:24:153 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
04:26:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^^ this overlaps kinda easy to read in AR9.3
Two last diffs are too difficult for me but I hope that someone else will do it
Good Luck for make this approval !!!

thanks for mods guys! i apply all suggestion except red one :3

looks real nice to me , go ~!

Rumia- wrote:

looks real nice to me , go ~!

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