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DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit)

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Frey

Streliteela wrote:

Hi~~:3~~Mod as IRC request~~
好下面开始中文(

[Insane]
00:18:881 (3,4) - ctrl+g? 正好能给00:19:224 (1) - 拖出去的空间
本来就没打算让4到1的衔接顺手,觉得原来那样更好看一点。

00:19:224 (1) - x294|y77,让1->2的距离=1->3,好看一些
Fixed

00:20:938 (2,3,4,5,6) - 个人不太喜欢这里,可以看出你这里想放一个单点梗,但实际上打起来有些不爽,ds忽大忽小的觉得没什么道理而且个人觉得也并不太顺手,考虑试试这样?另外我觉得把note6叠在00:21:966 (1) - 的头上,这样停顿一下可以更突出后面部分的一种张力(个人感觉,仅供参考)
看了一下,我还是觉得,对称好一点,做这个图的时候我出发点就是对称多放点。

00:26:938 (4,6) - 纯粹是edit美观性考虑(强迫症max),两个一起向上挪一挪让6和00:25:909 (6) - 的残影stack一下
打图的时候发觉不到的.w.

00:27:452 (1) - nazi,x180|y285
不是很有必要,因为00:26:938 (4,5,6,1) - 有隐藏的等腰梯形

00:28:481 (3,4) - ctrl+g? 我觉得一些地方你flow处理的过于顺了,移动上重音该拉该跳的还是要大胆做出来些(个人感觉,仅供参考)
这里不加难度了,我怕有人说Insane和Hard难度差距大,又要叫我补难度。我现在最头疼这个。

00:29:852 (3,4) - ctrl+g? 理由和性质同上
一样,不想加难度。

00:49:224 (7) - x426|y340
这里感觉很奇怪

01:00:024 (6,7,1) - 6:x158|y345; 7:x50|y284; 1:x125|y197
好主意,但是原来的摆放我觉得也可以,暂定。

01:06:366 (2) - x440|y305,我觉得打着看着都更舒服一些?
Fixed

01:07:909 (3,4,5,6) - 前面也有类似的地方,这里我不太确定能不能这么用;因为似乎之前在我的图里有QAT说过节奏密度一致的地方ds如果变化不规则可能会被指出来而且似乎确实已经有图因为这原因被dq了。可能我太渣没看出来这地方为什么ds要先大后小……我觉得00:24:024 (3,4,5,6) - 这里你处理的就可以
最高难度应该没什么问题,而且我就是喜欢放这种围绕中垂线的东西...以前是先小DS再大DS,但是我发觉那样根本不好打。

01:11:338 (1) - x225|y267
好主意,但是不是很有必要。

01:13:224 (2,3) - 挪一挪,01:12:366 (3,2,3) - 这三个物件摆个正三角
Edit 里面合理,但是游戏里面是感觉不到的。我说真的。

01:38:081 (1,2,3) - 如图?
感觉你的主意更好,但是这里我暂定,我觉得应该还有更好的改法。

01:38:766 (1) - 和01:38:252 (2) - 包一下?
打图的时候不明显

02:48:366 (4,3,4,5,6) - 类似如图?
Fixed,感谢提醒

后面的部分就挺不错的了,挺喜欢
很高兴你喜欢...

[Hard]
00:35:681 (1,4,1) - 这里也摆个三角pattern厚不厚啊(类似00:32:938 (1,2,3) - 这里的样子)
;w;等到那个时候,1都消失了,哪里看得到三角形呢。

01:06:881 (4) - nazi,y+1 stack Fixed

01:20:938 (1,2) - 这个考不考虑包呢……思考
包吧,影响不大

一直很喜欢你做的hard所以……诶啊还真挑不出什么毛病sad :o
;w; 基本上是死跟DS的产物..

[Normal]

00:51:452 (3,4,5) - nazi,你看把4转一点点厚不厚啊
厚啊,fixed

01:19:566 (1,2,3,4) - nazi,3移下来一点点厚不厚啊
这个就不了,原来的对称挺好看的

01:29:852 (4,1) - 包一下?可能不包也问题不大
Blanket可要但不必要

02:39:795 (3,4) - nazi,没包好感觉,总觉得中间缝隙比两边略大……再调调的说
我觉得差不多,要是都这么做blanket,以后的图不是都像一样来发展了吗?

其它地方nice~

没做过easy所以不会摸实在抱歉了;w;

整体还是相当nice~大力支持DnB,star!

感谢你的mod还有星星,每日愉快! :)
Asphyxia
I wanted to map this song aswell, not too long ago. What a great song and map!
Topic Starter
Frey

Asphyxia wrote:

I wanted to map this song aswell, not too long ago. What a great song and map!
Thanks ! :)
HootOwlStar

Milan- wrote:

[hos eazy]
  1. 01:00:709 (2,4) - on purpuse? yep
  2. 02:49:395 (1) - try to map the cymbal at 02:50:081 - pls. Otherwise it's a weird and unfitting pattern QAQ okay
  3. 03:31:224 - add a circle here? and move the spinner 1/4 after heh wtf you sure you want me to do this
byebye
Thanks for modding

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Accel World
Hi~

[HOS' Easy]
  1. 00:19:224 (3) - not nessesary, but it would be better DS if you move the dot at x327 y331 to x240 y328
  2. 02:50:081 - add whistle and finish, you missed them
  3. 02:50:766 - add clap
  4. 02:51:281 - add whistle and finish, missed again
  5. 02:54:881 - add clap

[Normal]
  1. 00:46:995 (5,6) - Blanket没包好
  2. 01:29:852 (4,1) - 这里可以做一个Blanket
  3. 其他没有了

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:566 (1) - 叠在00:30:195 (1) - 上?
  2. 00:44:424 (2) - 感觉可以ctrl+g
  3. 01:06:366 (2) - x292 y264会更好
  4. 01:10:995 (3,2) - stack
  5. 01:47:509 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g,记得改音效
  6. 02:29:338 (5) - 在x160 y132更好
  7. 02:57:624 (6) - 不考虑像Insane那样减速吗?
  8. 03:14:081 (3,1) - stack
  9. 03:26:252 (2) - x204 y108更好


[Insane]
  1. Fine


Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Frey
Updated!

Accel World wrote:

Hi~

[Normal]
00:46:995 (5,6) - Blanket没包好
Fixed

01:29:852 (4,1) - 这里可以做一个Blanket
感觉不是很有必要,这个4是从01:29:166 (3) - 变过来的。

[Hard]
00:31:566 (1) - 叠在00:30:195 (1) - 上?
先保留,clap听起来感觉可以跳

00:44:424 (2) - 感觉可以ctrl+g
等待更多意见。这里我觉得不是很有必要。

01:06:366 (2) - x292 y264会更好
Fixed,不过选择了近似的x296 y272

01:10:995 (3,2) - stack
Fixed

01:47:509 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g,记得改音效
Fixed,好主意

02:29:338 (5) - 在x160 y132更好
132? 应该是312吧,不过312的确不错。 Fixed

02:57:624 (6) - 不考虑像Insane那样减速吗?
;w; 控制不好,减速估计要算蓝线。

03:14:081 (3,1) - stack
Fixed

Good Luck :)
Thanks for your mod! :)
HootOwlStar

Accel World wrote:

Hi~

[HOS' Easy]
  1. 00:19:224 (3) - not nessesary, but it would be better DS if you move the dot at x327 y331 to x240 y328 Is it x:237 y:331? If yes, fixed
  2. 02:50:081 - add whistle and finish, you missed them
  3. 02:50:766 - add clap
  4. 02:51:281 - add whistle and finish, missed again
  5. 02:54:881 - add clap
    Hitsounds all fixed thanks

Good Luck :)
Thank you for mod :3

Update
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Ciyus Miapah
Hi From Underworld

General:
- Just uncheck Letterbox during breaks in each diffs
- delete .osb file in your map folder

Insane:
lot of copy pasta i think, but nice looks :3

00:40:309 (2,3) - make this blanket?
00:29:338 (2,4) - improve blanket i guess
00:35:166 (4) - overlapping thing in here looks didnt really good (stack with 00:33:966 (4) - its okay since its better look tho)
00:47:338 (3,4,1) - distance difference is like same i think, consider make 00:47:852 (4,1) - more far (it looks like 00:50:252 (4,5,1) - ) . some example -> 00:58:824 (5,1) - .
01:08:424 (6,1) - make jump on this?
02:32:252 (17) - NC?
02:37:052 (3,4,1) - i guess this pattern too sudden to read, and the distance is very awkward
03:17:252 - add notes?
03:30:881 - you should add notes in here (for better spin i think)

Hard:
yeah hard

00:31:566 (1) - no need clap on this
00:32:938 (1) - finish
00:54:538 (7) - move to x421y164
01:02:766 - add circle (its up to you since this one same like insane diff)
01:06:366 (2,2,2,2) - im not sure about this random jumping pattern in hard (yeah since your jump idk)
01:26:252 (4,5,6) - try this cool overlap pattern http://puu.sh/gUZ3R/c43a0f7812.jpg
03:14:081 (3,1) - imperfect stack

Normal:
00:42:538 (4) - you should NC this (up to you)
00:43:909 - to 01:03:109 - consider add NCs every 2 downbeat on this part (makes this map more consistant at combo)
01:38:766 - to 02:00:709 - ^ same thing
02:33:624 - to 02:55:566 - ^ same (it just my suggestion too keep your combos consistant)
02:19:909 (3) - NC
03:07:566 (4,1) - imperfect stack
03:14:766 (1,2,3,4) - fix spacing in here atleast to 1.00x (very minor) and this 03:15:452 (3) - looks like overlap a bit
00:44:595 (2) - no need whistle in slider end 01:40:481 - (but you doing the same at other parts same like this so up to you)

HOS' Easy:
00:24:709 (3) - why slider end didnt land on 00:25:224 - (this map is like for newbie who like some repetitive patterns), so you can move 00:26:424 (4) - to 00:26:081 - and extend this slider to 00:27:109 - .
00:30:195 (3,1) - try to avoid this stack, maybe it can confuse players a bit
00:51:452 (4) - change to 1 circle?
00:52:138 (5) - slider end in 00:52:824 - (that clearly have strong upbeat)
01:05:852 (1,2) - make slider 1 flow more linear
01:20:938 (4,1) - not sure for this pattern but idk, you need add something in 01:22:309 - and add NC on it
03:01:052 (1) - this NC too random, consider delete NC
03:17:509 (1,2,3,4) - this density to high, maybe you can add some 2/1 slider in here (up to you)
03:27:109 (4,5) - make this end slider didnt hit slider head, and try to avoid stacking i guess

Hope this help
Topic Starter
Frey

Fort wrote:

Hi From Underworld

General:
- Just uncheck Letterbox during breaks in each diffs
Fixed

- delete .osb file in your map folder
Weird, I don't see that

Insane:
lot of copy pasta i think, but nice looks :3
I’m lazy but I love it.

00:40:309 (2,3) - make this blanket?
I didn't mean to make one.

00:29:338 (2,4) - improve blanket i guess
Fixed

00:35:166 (4) - overlapping thing in here looks didnt really good (stack with 00:33:966 (4) - its okay since its better look tho)
No, it's not obvious. I bet nobody can notice this in game.

00:47:338 (3,4,1) - distance difference is like same i think, consider make 00:47:852 (4,1) - more far (it looks like 00:50:252 (4,5,1) - ) . some example -> 00:58:824 (5,1) - .
It would confuse players for sure, however, it's the highest diff, players should confront some difficult things.

01:08:424 (6,1) - make jump on this?
On purpose.

02:32:252 (17) - NC?
Err, not so necessary. If players see a stream from 1 to 17, they would know which finger to start(end) with

02:37:052 (3,4,1) - i guess this pattern too sudden to read, and the distance is very awkward
Fixed

03:17:252 - add notes?
cant hear a clear beat.

03:30:881 - you should add notes in here (for better spin i think)
no vocal no instrument, I don't think its a good idea

Hard:
yeah hard

00:31:566 (1) - no need clap on this
All diffs' hitsound should be the same right?

00:32:938 (1) - finish


00:54:538 (7) - move to x421y164
fixed

01:02:766 - add circle (its up to you since this one same like insane diff)
same as the Insane

01:06:366 (2,2,2,2) - im not sure about this random jumping pattern in hard (yeah since your jump idk)
no problem, maybe

01:26:252 (4,5,6) - try this cool overlap pattern
sory, I don't like the flow

03:14:081 (3,1) - imperfect stack
Fixed

Normal:
00:42:538 (4) - you should NC this (up to you)
Not very sure...

00:43:909 - to 01:03:109 - consider add NCs every 2 downbeat on this part (makes this map more consistant at combo)
01:38:766 - to 02:00:709 - ^ same thing
02:33:624 - to 02:55:566 - ^ same (it just my suggestion too keep your combos consistant)

Fixed

02:19:909 (3) - NC
not so necessary imo

03:07:566 (4,1) - imperfect stack
it can be ignored

03:14:766 (1,2,3,4) - fix spacing in here atleast to 1.00x (very minor) and this 03:15:452 (3) - looks like overlap a bit
Fixed

00:44:595 (2) - no need whistle in slider end 01:40:481 - (but you doing the same at other parts same like this so up to you)
Stay

Hope this help
Thanks for you modding and stars! :)
Lanturn
So uhhhhhh

http://www.ministryofsound.com/music/ar ... zmTviLx.97

This is the official EP. The problem is track 1. Which should be the radio edit, doesn't have the proper credits filled in. Without anymore official places to look at, I really can't give you a proper title, except for just calling it Flashlight. The buy links from Google/iTunes have different credits so (Radio Edit) and [Radio Edit] aren't going to help

Remove the Radio edit I guess? I mean, if that's how they labeled the song then there really isn't anything we can do about it :S

That's all I could find...

Note.. One thing you could do is go and ask a QAT if it's acceptable to use related content that is labeled the same way as the title

http://www.ministryofsound.com/music/ar ... k4Utq3P.97
http://www.ministryofsound.com/music/ar ... z6suQsS.97 (Asphyxia did this map)

for example has the proper listing and it uses (Radio Edit). I can't say you can use this though, so you'll need QAT permission :P



And one more thing. Nice Easy ;)
Topic Starter
Frey

Lanturn wrote:

This is the official EP. The problem is track 1. Which should be the radio edit, doesn't have the proper credits filled in. Without anymore official places to look at, I really can't give you a proper title, except for just calling it Flashlight. The buy links from Google/iTunes have different credits so (Radio Edit) and [Radio Edit] aren't going to help

Remove the Radio edit I guess? I mean, if that's how they labeled the song then there really isn't anything we can do about it :S
We can know the details of the five songs from wikipedia ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flashlight_(DJ_Fresh_song) ), so (Radio Edit) is a still a choice. And then, there is an another version called 'Flashlight' in Ellie Goulding's album (Yes, it's different with the song I mapped), so if we remove the 'Radio Edit', it would definitely get people confused.

Lanturn wrote:

Note.. One thing you could do is go and ask a QAT if it's acceptable to use related content that is labeled the same way as the title

http://www.ministryofsound.com/music/ar ... k4Utq3P.97
http://www.ministryofsound.com/music/ar ... z6suQsS.97 (Asphyxia did this map)

for example has the proper listing and it uses (Radio Edit). I can't say you can use this though, so you'll need QAT permission :P
That's why I imitated the title of Asphyxia's map.

Lanturn wrote:

And one more thing. Nice Easy
Agreed, HOS' map is really awesome!
hehe
hi

  • General
  1. confusing metadata

    Insane
  2. there are many, many overmapped triples, i'm not very sure about that?
  3. 03:16:652 (3,4,5) - maybe do reverse slider, since the sound on 03:16:995 (6,7,8) - is much stronger but use same pattern.

    Hard
  4. 02:30:881 (1,2,3,4) -try to do regular stream pattern, this is confusing, especially 1 perfect overlap with 4. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2954225

    Normal
  5. for spread sake, it is suggest to throw in a little more 1/2 notes.

8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
HootOwlStar

Fort wrote:

Hi From Underworld

HOS' Easy:
00:24:709 (3) - why slider end didnt land on 00:25:224 - (this map is like for newbie who like some repetitive patterns), so you can move 00:26:424 (4) - to 00:26:081 - and extend this slider to 00:27:109 - . actually they need to learn their lesson lol no fix because I followed vocal so yeah
00:30:195 (3,1) - try to avoid this stack, maybe it can confuse players a bit but it helps express the #feels and I don't think it will be a big problem anyway
00:51:452 (4) - change to 1 circle? nope
00:52:138 (5) - slider end in 00:52:824 - (that clearly have strong upbeat) okay
01:05:852 (1,2) - make slider 1 flow more linear tried my best to do so
01:20:938 (4,1) - not sure for this pattern but idk, you need add something in 01:22:309 - and add NC on it lol okay it is strange so fixed
03:01:052 (1) - this NC too random, consider delete NC strange to delete NC here
03:17:509 (1,2,3,4) - this density to high, maybe you can add some 2/1 slider in here (up to you) fixed
03:27:109 (4,5) - make this end slider didnt hit slider head, and try to avoid stacking i guess just change end slider thing only

Hope this help it did and helped me a lot
Thanks for mod and stars to mapset #yay

Frey wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

And one more thing. Nice Easy
Agreed, HOS' map is really awesome!
lol thank you guys :3

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Flashlight (Radio Edit)-DJ Fresh.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65514
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11000,120714,131686
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Flashlight (Radio Edit)
TitleUnicode:Flashlight (Radio Edit)
Artist:DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding)
ArtistUnicode:DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding)
Creator:Frey
Version:HOS' Easy
Source:
Tags:HootOwlStar Halcyon Days dnb drum'n'bass drum and bass dubstep synthpop
BeatmapID:663567
BeatmapSetID:274035

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,63309,64412
2,87795,91841
2,120909,130241
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Frey
UPDATED

handsome wrote:

hi

[General]
confusing metadata
Asking QAT for help

Insane

there are many, many overmapped triples, i'm not very sure about that?
Oh, should be fine, they're not 1/6 or 1/8 after all.

03:16:652 (3,4,5) - maybe do reverse slider, since the sound on 03:16:995 (6,7,8) - is much stronger but use same pattern.
I still think triples better

Hard
02:30:881 (1,2,3,4) -try to do regular stream pattern, this is confusing, especially 1 perfect overlap with 4. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2954225
Fixed, er, I think this one easier to understand

Normal
for spread sake, it is suggest to throw in a little more 1/2 notes
;w; spread i..isn't very obvious right? give me some time to think of it.

8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
:) Thanks for your mod!
hehe
so the metadata is confirmed? yollo
Topic Starter
Frey

handsome wrote:

so the metadata is confirmed? yollo
have asked QAT, should be fine using related content

Thank you! :)
DahplA
Yay OD 8 woot >.<
Topic Starter
Frey

DahplA wrote:

Yay OD 8 woot >.<
I always wonder, why od8 :\
Avena
irc mod
12:23 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/622287 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Insane]]
12:23 Priti: 00:48:024 - This beatskip is horrifying pls don't do that
12:24 Priti: this also applies to all similar stuff
12:24 Frey: ;w;
12:24 Frey: OK
12:25 Priti: 01:03:109 (1) - Beginning needs a circle
12:25 Priti: end needs to be soft
12:25 Priti: and end 1/2 earlier since it's on a drum
12:25 Priti: 01:11:852 (2,3) - whistles
12:25 Priti: 01:13:224 (2,3) -
12:25 Priti: 01:14:595 (2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:16:995 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:21:109 (3,6) -
12:26 Priti: 00:27:966 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:32:938 (1) - normal on head
12:26 Frey: um..I think what I did to that spinner is right
12:26 Priti: 00:35:509 (6,1) - normal
12:26 Priti: 00:38:424 (1) - normal
12:26 Frey: whistles seems good
12:26 Priti: that spinner feels wrong to me
12:27 Priti: the lack of impact is a bit annoying
12:27 Priti: if anything it should start on the red tick since that's where the vocal is
12:27 Priti: 01:22:824 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - whistles
12:27 Priti: 01:27:109 (7) - finish
12:28 Priti: 01:27:795 (1) - 01:30:366 (7,1) - 01:33:281 (1) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:37:909 (3) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:42:881 - just reminding you, pls no skips
12:29 Priti: 02:00:709 (1) - normal hit with drum finish pls
12:29 Priti: 02:22:652 (1,1,1) - normal
12:29 Frey: OK, I will fix those skips firstly
12:30 Priti: gud
12:30 Priti: 02:56:766 (4) - awkward beat skip
12:30 Priti: 02:57:624 (1) - normal sliderwhistle pls
12:30 Priti: 03:00:195 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:04:824 (7) - whistle on both head and tail
12:31 Priti: 03:08:595 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:11:251 (3,7) -
12:31 Priti: 03:11:166 (3,7) - *
12:32 Priti: 03:31:224 (1) - no impact again
12:32 Priti: tell me when you're done
12:32 Frey: whistles in Kiai are really loud, I don't think it's a good idea
12:33 Priti: anywhos
12:33 Frey: gimme some time to check your mod ;w;
12:33 Priti: hitsounding suggestions also apply to the other diffs
12:33 Frey: ofc I won't forger that
12:35 Priti: Literally all issues in the set
12:35 Priti: are reoccuring
12:35 Priti: so no need to mod other diffs
12:35 Priti: just fix spinner things and hitsounds
12:35 Priti: oh btw I won't be able to qualify this
12:35 Priti: Normal -> Hard gap is massive

Popping the bubble because the gap between Normal and Hard is really big, you'll need to add a new diff.
Topic Starter
Frey

Priti wrote:

irc mod
12:23 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/622287 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Insane]]
12:23 Priti: 00:48:024 - This beatskip is horrifying pls don't do that
12:24 Priti: this also applies to all similar stuff
12:24 Frey: ;w;
12:24 Frey: OK
12:25 Priti: 01:03:109 (1) - Beginning needs a circle
12:25 Priti: end needs to be soft
12:25 Priti: and end 1/2 earlier since it's on a drum
12:25 Priti: 01:11:852 (2,3) - whistles
12:25 Priti: 01:13:224 (2,3) -
12:25 Priti: 01:14:595 (2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:16:995 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:21:109 (3,6) -
12:26 Priti: 00:27:966 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:32:938 (1) - normal on head
12:26 Frey: um..I think what I did to that spinner is right
12:26 Priti: 00:35:509 (6,1) - normal
12:26 Priti: 00:38:424 (1) - normal
12:26 Frey: whistles seems good
12:26 Priti: that spinner feels wrong to me
12:27 Priti: the lack of impact is a bit annoying
12:27 Priti: if anything it should start on the red tick since that's where the vocal is
12:27 Priti: 01:22:824 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - whistles
12:27 Priti: 01:27:109 (7) - finish
12:28 Priti: 01:27:795 (1) - 01:30:366 (7,1) - 01:33:281 (1) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:37:909 (3) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:42:881 - just reminding you, pls no skips
12:29 Priti: 02:00:709 (1) - normal hit with drum finish pls
12:29 Priti: 02:22:652 (1,1,1) - normal
12:29 Frey: OK, I will fix those skips firstly
12:30 Priti: gud
12:30 Priti: 02:56:766 (4) - awkward beat skip
12:30 Priti: 02:57:624 (1) - normal sliderwhistle pls
12:30 Priti: 03:00:195 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:04:824 (7) - whistle on both head and tail
12:31 Priti: 03:08:595 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:11:251 (3,7) -
12:31 Priti: 03:11:166 (3,7) - *
12:32 Priti: 03:31:224 (1) - no impact again
12:32 Priti: tell me when you're done
12:32 Frey: whistles in Kiai are really loud, I don't think it's a good idea
12:33 Priti: anywhos
12:33 Frey: gimme some time to check your mod ;w;
12:33 Priti: hitsounding suggestions also apply to the other diffs
12:33 Frey: ofc I won't forger that
12:35 Priti: Literally all issues in the set
12:35 Priti: are reoccuring
12:35 Priti: so no need to mod other diffs
12:35 Priti: just fix spinner things and hitsounds
12:35 Priti: oh btw I won't be able to qualify this
12:35 Priti: Normal -> Hard gap is massive

Popping the bubble because the gap between Normal and Hard is really big, you'll need to add a new diff.
OK, fixed the spinners、finishes and all skips.... and ready to make a .... Advanced maybe? ;w;

About hitsounds, like normal and whistles. Well, really loud for me, so I don't want to change them.

Thanks for modding :)
Ciyus Miapah
im forget to tell that thing

my bad :(
Topic Starter
Frey

Fort wrote:

im forget to tell that thing

my bad :(
Never mind, I can make an Advanced in 3 days.

Then it would be quick and safe :)
Secretpipe
Priti is the evilest thing on Earth
Narcissu
01:05:338 - 建議的音樂預覽點,保證試聽時能聽清楚第一個人聲

Advanced

02:00:709 - 02:11:681 - 去掉兩個藍線減少文件體積 【 這條摸伴我水過大江南北

02:41:852 (1) - DS 可以修一下……

02:48:538 (4) - ^

唉,你要別人水摸麼就自己偷偷去掉幾個clap 啊

Secretpipe wrote:

Priti is the evilest thing on Earth
DeletedUser_1574070
For Advanced. #ingame pm

  • Advanced
  1. 03:08:252 (4,5,6) - why don't u make perfect triangle?
  2. 03:08:252 (4,2) - stacking can make this neat

gud luck
Cherry Blossom
Hello LBHSE.
As requested.

Advanced

  1. 00:32:938 (1,2,3) - I think that you can improve the flow here, the sliders are straight and there is a little circular movement, it plays well but i think that a linear flow is more suitable here instead of this circular motion. So try something like this instead
  2. 00:44:424 (2) - I know that you want to follow vocals first, but it sounds weird when you skip a a tick where you can put a clap on it. I mean this tick 00:44:595 - which is clearly audible, so try to arrange patterns to follow both vocal and instrumental. I think of something like this
  3. 00:55:395 (2) - same as ^ and 01:50:252 (2) - and 02:34:138 (2) -
  4. 00:53:338 (3,4) - Just minnor, but for the sake of visual, you should make these blankets better, they are clearly not well done.
  5. 01:02:595 (6,1) - I don't really find that it is a good idea to stack these circles, because of the polarity issue which makes this pattern difficult to get. It should be better if you unstack these circles. same for 03:30:709 (6,1) -
  6. 03:02:424 (4,5,6) - The transition between these objects could be improved, For a smoother motion, it should be better if the shape looks like a "S", just see :
  7. 03:07:566 - Here you skip the most important note, on this tick, there should be an object with a clap. When you're mapping it is recommended to follow claps to give a tempo. So, try to follow this tick with a clap.
  8. 03:14:252 (6) - same as ^

Great diff.
Good luck, and star.
Topic Starter
Frey

Narcissu wrote:

[Advanced]

· 01:05:338 - 建議的音樂預覽點,保證試聽時能聽清楚第一個人聲 我感觉不是很有必要,真的。

· 02:00:709 - 02:11:681 - 去掉兩個藍線減少文件體積 【 這條摸伴我水過大江南北 fixed

· 02:41:852 (1) - DS 可以修一下…… Fixed

· 02:48:538 (4) - ^ Fixed

唉,你要別人水摸麼就自己偷偷去掉幾個clap 啊 0 0糟,忘记了。

Kloyd wrote:

For Advanced. #ingame pm

[Advanced]

03:08:252 (4,5,6) - why don't u make perfect triangle? Fixed

03:08:252 (4,2) - stacking can make this neat you can't notice the stack in game, I'm sure


gud luck

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello LBHSE.
As requested. Hi LBHSE

[Advanced]

00:32:938 (1,2,3) - I think that you can improve the flow here, the sliders are straight and there is a little circular movement, it plays well but i think that a linear flow is more suitable here instead of this circular motion. So try something like this instead
Fixed

00:44:424 (2) - I know that you want to follow vocals first, but it sounds weird when you skip a a tick where you can put a clap on it. I mean this tick 00:44:595 - which is clearly audible, so try to arrange patterns to follow both vocal and instrumental. I think of something like this
00:55:395 (2) - same as ^ and 01:50:252 (2) - and 02:34:138 (2) -

Good, fixed all parts above

00:53:338 (3,4) - Just minnor, but for the sake of visual, you should make these blankets better, they are clearly not well done.
Fixed

01:02:595 (6,1) - I don't really find that it is a good idea to stack these circles, because of the polarity issue which makes this pattern difficult to get. It should be better if you unstack these circles. same for 03:30:709 (6,1) -
Fixed, but I use 0.7ds. (1.4 seems impossible)

03:02:424 (4,5,6) - The transition between these objects could be improved, For a smoother motion, it should be better if the shape looks like a "S", just see :
Fixed

03:07:566 - Here you skip the most important note, on this tick, there should be an object with a clap. When you're mapping it is recommended to follow claps to give a tempo. So, try to follow this tick with a clap.
03:14:252 (6) - same as ^

Fixed all similar parts in KIAI

Great diff.
Good luck, and star. Thanks for your star!
Thanks for your mod! :)
hehe
zddzg 6uwidtyj

SPOILER
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: 00:49:052 (7,1) - square
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: xd
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: np
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672345 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Advanced]]
2015-04-08 23:32 Frey: that's... picky a bit
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: ya hahaha
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: 00:51:452 - have this sound on click i s better
2015-04-08 23:34 Frey: but then the flow may not be very nice
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2989177
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: i think this is fine
2015-04-08 23:35 Frey: using slider is easier for players to play with DT
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: its not 'smooth' now
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: not very comfortable
2015-04-08 23:37 Frey: I get it, fixed
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: same for the next part
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: 03:03:281 (6) - this is fine because there's good beat in music
2015-04-08 23:38 handsome: 01:30:366 (6,1,2,3) - i think there's too much notes here
2015-04-08 23:38 Frey: need a beat on 03:03:452?
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: too active beat
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: 03:03:281 is fine
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: no need change
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: how about
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: change 01:30:538 (1) into a slider
2015-04-08 23:42 Frey: and 01:30:881 put a slider too?
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: acutally
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: its just the
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 01:30:709 (2) - repeat here,
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: i don't really like it
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 1/1 slider is enough
2015-04-08 23:43 Frey: but the vocal is too obvious ;w;
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: vocal is not perfect on white tick t_t
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: very weird
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: :(
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: alright
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: so 01:30:538 (1) - is a 1/1 slider right?
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: 01:30:709 - nono, here
2015-04-08 23:46 handsome: repeat turn into slider
2015-04-08 23:47 Frey: ;w; weird for me now
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: i like that was xd
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: way*
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: anyway
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: '/np
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: 02:30:881 (1,2,3,4,1) -
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: since you have advanced you can make more 1/4
2015-04-08 23:50 Frey: kay :3
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: did u change anything from last time
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: xD
2015-04-08 23:52 Frey: 0. 0, such like?
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: like
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: since the last bubble did you change anything?
2015-04-08 23:54 Frey: yeah, changed something priti mentioned
2015-04-08 23:54 handsome: mostly hitsounds
2015-04-08 23:55 handsome: seems like its ok
2015-04-08 23:57 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/661235 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Normal]]
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 01:03:109 (4) - nc
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: lol
2015-04-08 23:58 Frey: fixed
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 02:13:052 (4,5) - 2 1/1 sliders?
2015-04-08 23:59 Frey: reverse is fine
2015-04-09 00:00 handsome: 02:26:766 (4,5,6) - why did u change
2015-04-09 00:00 Frey: err, I didn't change that place
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: i mean
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: why change from slider -circle-clircle
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: to circle circle slider
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: lol
2015-04-09 00:01 Frey: ;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: finxe
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: fixed;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: 03:31:224 (5) - nc
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: haaah
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: orz fixed
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: well
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: thats all of it
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: u wanan take a second look through?
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: before i bubble?
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: yeah, about Hard
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: 02:30:881 (1) -
2015-04-09 00:04 Frey: hard to make a perfect stream
2015-04-09 00:06 handsome: well you can do this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/pvMXGfQ.png
2015-04-09 00:08 Frey: ok, done
Topic Starter
Frey

handsome wrote:

zddzg 6uwidtyj

SPOILER
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: 00:49:052 (7,1) - square
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: xd
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: np
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672345 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Advanced]]
2015-04-08 23:32 Frey: that's... picky a bit
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: ya hahaha
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: 00:51:452 - have this sound on click i s better
2015-04-08 23:34 Frey: but then the flow may not be very nice
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2989177
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: i think this is fine
2015-04-08 23:35 Frey: using slider is easier for players to play with DT
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: its not 'smooth' now
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: not very comfortable
2015-04-08 23:37 Frey: I get it, fixed
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: same for the next part
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: 03:03:281 (6) - this is fine because there's good beat in music
2015-04-08 23:38 handsome: 01:30:366 (6,1,2,3) - i think there's too much notes here
2015-04-08 23:38 Frey: need a beat on 03:03:452?
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: too active beat
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: 03:03:281 is fine
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: no need change
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: how about
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: change 01:30:538 (1) into a slider
2015-04-08 23:42 Frey: and 01:30:881 put a slider too?
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: acutally
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: its just the
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 01:30:709 (2) - repeat here,
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: i don't really like it
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 1/1 slider is enough
2015-04-08 23:43 Frey: but the vocal is too obvious ;w;
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: vocal is not perfect on white tick t_t
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: very weird
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: :(
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: alright
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: so 01:30:538 (1) - is a 1/1 slider right?
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: 01:30:709 - nono, here
2015-04-08 23:46 handsome: repeat turn into slider
2015-04-08 23:47 Frey: ;w; weird for me now
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: i like that was xd
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: way*
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: anyway
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: '/np
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: 02:30:881 (1,2,3,4,1) -
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: since you have advanced you can make more 1/4
2015-04-08 23:50 Frey: kay :3
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: did u change anything from last time
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: xD
2015-04-08 23:52 Frey: 0. 0, such like?
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: like
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: since the last bubble did you change anything?
2015-04-08 23:54 Frey: yeah, changed something priti mentioned
2015-04-08 23:54 handsome: mostly hitsounds
2015-04-08 23:55 handsome: seems like its ok
2015-04-08 23:57 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/661235 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Normal]]
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 01:03:109 (4) - nc
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: lol
2015-04-08 23:58 Frey: fixed
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 02:13:052 (4,5) - 2 1/1 sliders?
2015-04-08 23:59 Frey: reverse is fine
2015-04-09 00:00 handsome: 02:26:766 (4,5,6) - why did u change
2015-04-09 00:00 Frey: err, I didn't change that place
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: i mean
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: why change from slider -circle-clircle
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: to circle circle slider
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: lol
2015-04-09 00:01 Frey: ;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: finxe
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: fixed;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: 03:31:224 (5) - nc
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: haaah
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: orz fixed
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: well
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: thats all of it
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: u wanan take a second look through?
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: before i bubble?
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: yeah, about Hard
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: 02:30:881 (1) -
2015-04-09 00:04 Frey: hard to make a perfect stream
2015-04-09 00:06 handsome: well you can do this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/pvMXGfQ.png
2015-04-09 00:08 Frey: ok, done
Thanks :)
Avena
qualified woo
Topic Starter
Frey

Priti wrote:

qualified woo
8-)
Kyouren
Gratzz, DJ Frey (feat. HootOwlStar)~ :3
Nyukai
wow already qualified, gratz~
Secretpipe
:3
TicClick
I personally have only two things to object: first is 80% volume sections, which are a bit loud, and second is too dark combo colour #3. Tell me if you want to fix these mistakes.

Other than that, you have my respect for mapping it this way.
Takeshi Kida
congrats :3
DahplA
Congratz~
Topic Starter
Frey

TicClick wrote:

I personally have only two things to object: first is 80% volume sections, which are a bit loud, and second is too dark combo colour #3. Tell me if you want to fix these mistakes.

Other than that, you have my respect for mapping it this way.
Hi Tic :3

Firstly the volume, before 00:31:566 (1), it does sound a bit loud. but the part afterwards sounds fine. And then, the volume of the song self is loud enough, I think it's reasonable to use loud hitsound, or players can't get proper feedback from the clicks

Then, about the color, I still think it's not so dark, and more importantly, it's still under control and suitable for the background.

In conclusion, sorry I still want to insist it. Thank you!

By the way, thanks everyone!
wantuol
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