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DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit)

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Frey

DahplA wrote:

Yay OD 8 woot >.<
I always wonder, why od8 :\
Avena
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12:23 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/622287 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Insane]]
12:23 Priti: 00:48:024 - This beatskip is horrifying pls don't do that
12:24 Priti: this also applies to all similar stuff
12:24 Frey: ;w;
12:24 Frey: OK
12:25 Priti: 01:03:109 (1) - Beginning needs a circle
12:25 Priti: end needs to be soft
12:25 Priti: and end 1/2 earlier since it's on a drum
12:25 Priti: 01:11:852 (2,3) - whistles
12:25 Priti: 01:13:224 (2,3) -
12:25 Priti: 01:14:595 (2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:16:995 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:21:109 (3,6) -
12:26 Priti: 00:27:966 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:32:938 (1) - normal on head
12:26 Frey: um..I think what I did to that spinner is right
12:26 Priti: 00:35:509 (6,1) - normal
12:26 Priti: 00:38:424 (1) - normal
12:26 Frey: whistles seems good
12:26 Priti: that spinner feels wrong to me
12:27 Priti: the lack of impact is a bit annoying
12:27 Priti: if anything it should start on the red tick since that's where the vocal is
12:27 Priti: 01:22:824 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - whistles
12:27 Priti: 01:27:109 (7) - finish
12:28 Priti: 01:27:795 (1) - 01:30:366 (7,1) - 01:33:281 (1) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:37:909 (3) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:42:881 - just reminding you, pls no skips
12:29 Priti: 02:00:709 (1) - normal hit with drum finish pls
12:29 Priti: 02:22:652 (1,1,1) - normal
12:29 Frey: OK, I will fix those skips firstly
12:30 Priti: gud
12:30 Priti: 02:56:766 (4) - awkward beat skip
12:30 Priti: 02:57:624 (1) - normal sliderwhistle pls
12:30 Priti: 03:00:195 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:04:824 (7) - whistle on both head and tail
12:31 Priti: 03:08:595 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:11:251 (3,7) -
12:31 Priti: 03:11:166 (3,7) - *
12:32 Priti: 03:31:224 (1) - no impact again
12:32 Priti: tell me when you're done
12:32 Frey: whistles in Kiai are really loud, I don't think it's a good idea
12:33 Priti: anywhos
12:33 Frey: gimme some time to check your mod ;w;
12:33 Priti: hitsounding suggestions also apply to the other diffs
12:33 Frey: ofc I won't forger that
12:35 Priti: Literally all issues in the set
12:35 Priti: are reoccuring
12:35 Priti: so no need to mod other diffs
12:35 Priti: just fix spinner things and hitsounds
12:35 Priti: oh btw I won't be able to qualify this
12:35 Priti: Normal -> Hard gap is massive

Popping the bubble because the gap between Normal and Hard is really big, you'll need to add a new diff.
Topic Starter
Frey

Priti wrote:

irc mod
12:23 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/622287 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Insane]]
12:23 Priti: 00:48:024 - This beatskip is horrifying pls don't do that
12:24 Priti: this also applies to all similar stuff
12:24 Frey: ;w;
12:24 Frey: OK
12:25 Priti: 01:03:109 (1) - Beginning needs a circle
12:25 Priti: end needs to be soft
12:25 Priti: and end 1/2 earlier since it's on a drum
12:25 Priti: 01:11:852 (2,3) - whistles
12:25 Priti: 01:13:224 (2,3) -
12:25 Priti: 01:14:595 (2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:16:995 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:21:109 (3,6) -
12:26 Priti: 00:27:966 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -
12:26 Priti: 00:32:938 (1) - normal on head
12:26 Frey: um..I think what I did to that spinner is right
12:26 Priti: 00:35:509 (6,1) - normal
12:26 Priti: 00:38:424 (1) - normal
12:26 Frey: whistles seems good
12:26 Priti: that spinner feels wrong to me
12:27 Priti: the lack of impact is a bit annoying
12:27 Priti: if anything it should start on the red tick since that's where the vocal is
12:27 Priti: 01:22:824 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - whistles
12:27 Priti: 01:27:109 (7) - finish
12:28 Priti: 01:27:795 (1) - 01:30:366 (7,1) - 01:33:281 (1) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:37:909 (3) - normal
12:28 Priti: 01:42:881 - just reminding you, pls no skips
12:29 Priti: 02:00:709 (1) - normal hit with drum finish pls
12:29 Priti: 02:22:652 (1,1,1) - normal
12:29 Frey: OK, I will fix those skips firstly
12:30 Priti: gud
12:30 Priti: 02:56:766 (4) - awkward beat skip
12:30 Priti: 02:57:624 (1) - normal sliderwhistle pls
12:30 Priti: 03:00:195 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:04:824 (7) - whistle on both head and tail
12:31 Priti: 03:08:595 (4,6) - whistles
12:31 Priti: 03:11:251 (3,7) -
12:31 Priti: 03:11:166 (3,7) - *
12:32 Priti: 03:31:224 (1) - no impact again
12:32 Priti: tell me when you're done
12:32 Frey: whistles in Kiai are really loud, I don't think it's a good idea
12:33 Priti: anywhos
12:33 Frey: gimme some time to check your mod ;w;
12:33 Priti: hitsounding suggestions also apply to the other diffs
12:33 Frey: ofc I won't forger that
12:35 Priti: Literally all issues in the set
12:35 Priti: are reoccuring
12:35 Priti: so no need to mod other diffs
12:35 Priti: just fix spinner things and hitsounds
12:35 Priti: oh btw I won't be able to qualify this
12:35 Priti: Normal -> Hard gap is massive

Popping the bubble because the gap between Normal and Hard is really big, you'll need to add a new diff.
OK, fixed the spinners、finishes and all skips.... and ready to make a .... Advanced maybe? ;w;

About hitsounds, like normal and whistles. Well, really loud for me, so I don't want to change them.

Thanks for modding :)
Ciyus Miapah
im forget to tell that thing

my bad :(
Topic Starter
Frey

Fort wrote:

im forget to tell that thing

my bad :(
Never mind, I can make an Advanced in 3 days.

Then it would be quick and safe :)
Secretpipe
Priti is the evilest thing on Earth
Narcissu
01:05:338 - 建議的音樂預覽點,保證試聽時能聽清楚第一個人聲

Advanced

02:00:709 - 02:11:681 - 去掉兩個藍線減少文件體積 【 這條摸伴我水過大江南北

02:41:852 (1) - DS 可以修一下……

02:48:538 (4) - ^

唉,你要別人水摸麼就自己偷偷去掉幾個clap 啊

Secretpipe wrote:

Priti is the evilest thing on Earth
DeletedUser_1574070
For Advanced. #ingame pm

  • Advanced
  1. 03:08:252 (4,5,6) - why don't u make perfect triangle?
  2. 03:08:252 (4,2) - stacking can make this neat

gud luck
Cherry Blossom
Hello LBHSE.
As requested.

Advanced

  1. 00:32:938 (1,2,3) - I think that you can improve the flow here, the sliders are straight and there is a little circular movement, it plays well but i think that a linear flow is more suitable here instead of this circular motion. So try something like this instead
  2. 00:44:424 (2) - I know that you want to follow vocals first, but it sounds weird when you skip a a tick where you can put a clap on it. I mean this tick 00:44:595 - which is clearly audible, so try to arrange patterns to follow both vocal and instrumental. I think of something like this
  3. 00:55:395 (2) - same as ^ and 01:50:252 (2) - and 02:34:138 (2) -
  4. 00:53:338 (3,4) - Just minnor, but for the sake of visual, you should make these blankets better, they are clearly not well done.
  5. 01:02:595 (6,1) - I don't really find that it is a good idea to stack these circles, because of the polarity issue which makes this pattern difficult to get. It should be better if you unstack these circles. same for 03:30:709 (6,1) -
  6. 03:02:424 (4,5,6) - The transition between these objects could be improved, For a smoother motion, it should be better if the shape looks like a "S", just see :
  7. 03:07:566 - Here you skip the most important note, on this tick, there should be an object with a clap. When you're mapping it is recommended to follow claps to give a tempo. So, try to follow this tick with a clap.
  8. 03:14:252 (6) - same as ^

Great diff.
Good luck, and star.
Topic Starter
Frey

Narcissu wrote:

[Advanced]

· 01:05:338 - 建議的音樂預覽點,保證試聽時能聽清楚第一個人聲 我感觉不是很有必要,真的。

· 02:00:709 - 02:11:681 - 去掉兩個藍線減少文件體積 【 這條摸伴我水過大江南北 fixed

· 02:41:852 (1) - DS 可以修一下…… Fixed

· 02:48:538 (4) - ^ Fixed

唉,你要別人水摸麼就自己偷偷去掉幾個clap 啊 0 0糟,忘记了。

Kloyd wrote:

For Advanced. #ingame pm

[Advanced]

03:08:252 (4,5,6) - why don't u make perfect triangle? Fixed

03:08:252 (4,2) - stacking can make this neat you can't notice the stack in game, I'm sure


gud luck

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello LBHSE.
As requested. Hi LBHSE

[Advanced]

00:32:938 (1,2,3) - I think that you can improve the flow here, the sliders are straight and there is a little circular movement, it plays well but i think that a linear flow is more suitable here instead of this circular motion. So try something like this instead
Fixed

00:44:424 (2) - I know that you want to follow vocals first, but it sounds weird when you skip a a tick where you can put a clap on it. I mean this tick 00:44:595 - which is clearly audible, so try to arrange patterns to follow both vocal and instrumental. I think of something like this
00:55:395 (2) - same as ^ and 01:50:252 (2) - and 02:34:138 (2) -

Good, fixed all parts above

00:53:338 (3,4) - Just minnor, but for the sake of visual, you should make these blankets better, they are clearly not well done.
Fixed

01:02:595 (6,1) - I don't really find that it is a good idea to stack these circles, because of the polarity issue which makes this pattern difficult to get. It should be better if you unstack these circles. same for 03:30:709 (6,1) -
Fixed, but I use 0.7ds. (1.4 seems impossible)

03:02:424 (4,5,6) - The transition between these objects could be improved, For a smoother motion, it should be better if the shape looks like a "S", just see :
Fixed

03:07:566 - Here you skip the most important note, on this tick, there should be an object with a clap. When you're mapping it is recommended to follow claps to give a tempo. So, try to follow this tick with a clap.
03:14:252 (6) - same as ^

Fixed all similar parts in KIAI

Great diff.
Good luck, and star. Thanks for your star!
Thanks for your mod! :)
hehe
zddzg 6uwidtyj

SPOILER
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: 00:49:052 (7,1) - square
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: xd
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: np
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672345 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Advanced]]
2015-04-08 23:32 Frey: that's... picky a bit
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: ya hahaha
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: 00:51:452 - have this sound on click i s better
2015-04-08 23:34 Frey: but then the flow may not be very nice
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2989177
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: i think this is fine
2015-04-08 23:35 Frey: using slider is easier for players to play with DT
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: its not 'smooth' now
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: not very comfortable
2015-04-08 23:37 Frey: I get it, fixed
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: same for the next part
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: 03:03:281 (6) - this is fine because there's good beat in music
2015-04-08 23:38 handsome: 01:30:366 (6,1,2,3) - i think there's too much notes here
2015-04-08 23:38 Frey: need a beat on 03:03:452?
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: too active beat
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: 03:03:281 is fine
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: no need change
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: how about
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: change 01:30:538 (1) into a slider
2015-04-08 23:42 Frey: and 01:30:881 put a slider too?
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: acutally
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: its just the
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 01:30:709 (2) - repeat here,
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: i don't really like it
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 1/1 slider is enough
2015-04-08 23:43 Frey: but the vocal is too obvious ;w;
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: vocal is not perfect on white tick t_t
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: very weird
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: :(
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: alright
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: so 01:30:538 (1) - is a 1/1 slider right?
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: 01:30:709 - nono, here
2015-04-08 23:46 handsome: repeat turn into slider
2015-04-08 23:47 Frey: ;w; weird for me now
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: i like that was xd
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: way*
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: anyway
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: '/np
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: 02:30:881 (1,2,3,4,1) -
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: since you have advanced you can make more 1/4
2015-04-08 23:50 Frey: kay :3
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: did u change anything from last time
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: xD
2015-04-08 23:52 Frey: 0. 0, such like?
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: like
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: since the last bubble did you change anything?
2015-04-08 23:54 Frey: yeah, changed something priti mentioned
2015-04-08 23:54 handsome: mostly hitsounds
2015-04-08 23:55 handsome: seems like its ok
2015-04-08 23:57 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/661235 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Normal]]
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 01:03:109 (4) - nc
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: lol
2015-04-08 23:58 Frey: fixed
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 02:13:052 (4,5) - 2 1/1 sliders?
2015-04-08 23:59 Frey: reverse is fine
2015-04-09 00:00 handsome: 02:26:766 (4,5,6) - why did u change
2015-04-09 00:00 Frey: err, I didn't change that place
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: i mean
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: why change from slider -circle-clircle
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: to circle circle slider
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: lol
2015-04-09 00:01 Frey: ;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: finxe
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: fixed;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: 03:31:224 (5) - nc
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: haaah
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: orz fixed
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: well
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: thats all of it
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: u wanan take a second look through?
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: before i bubble?
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: yeah, about Hard
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: 02:30:881 (1) -
2015-04-09 00:04 Frey: hard to make a perfect stream
2015-04-09 00:06 handsome: well you can do this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/pvMXGfQ.png
2015-04-09 00:08 Frey: ok, done
Topic Starter
Frey

handsome wrote:

zddzg 6uwidtyj

SPOILER
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: 00:49:052 (7,1) - square
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: xd
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: np
2015-04-08 23:31 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672345 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Advanced]]
2015-04-08 23:32 Frey: that's... picky a bit
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: ya hahaha
2015-04-08 23:32 handsome: 00:51:452 - have this sound on click i s better
2015-04-08 23:34 Frey: but then the flow may not be very nice
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2989177
2015-04-08 23:35 handsome: i think this is fine
2015-04-08 23:35 Frey: using slider is easier for players to play with DT
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: its not 'smooth' now
2015-04-08 23:36 handsome: not very comfortable
2015-04-08 23:37 Frey: I get it, fixed
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: same for the next part
2015-04-08 23:37 handsome: 03:03:281 (6) - this is fine because there's good beat in music
2015-04-08 23:38 handsome: 01:30:366 (6,1,2,3) - i think there's too much notes here
2015-04-08 23:38 Frey: need a beat on 03:03:452?
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: too active beat
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: 03:03:281 is fine
2015-04-08 23:39 handsome: no need change
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: how about
2015-04-08 23:41 Frey: change 01:30:538 (1) into a slider
2015-04-08 23:42 Frey: and 01:30:881 put a slider too?
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: acutally
2015-04-08 23:42 handsome: its just the
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 01:30:709 (2) - repeat here,
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: i don't really like it
2015-04-08 23:43 handsome: 1/1 slider is enough
2015-04-08 23:43 Frey: but the vocal is too obvious ;w;
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: vocal is not perfect on white tick t_t
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: very weird
2015-04-08 23:44 handsome: :(
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: alright
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:45 Frey: so 01:30:538 (1) - is a 1/1 slider right?
2015-04-08 23:45 handsome: 01:30:709 - nono, here
2015-04-08 23:46 handsome: repeat turn into slider
2015-04-08 23:47 Frey: ;w; weird for me now
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: i like that was xd
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: way*
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: anyway
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: '/np
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637473 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Hard]]
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: 02:30:881 (1,2,3,4,1) -
2015-04-08 23:47 handsome: since you have advanced you can make more 1/4
2015-04-08 23:50 Frey: kay :3
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: did u change anything from last time
2015-04-08 23:51 handsome: xD
2015-04-08 23:52 Frey: 0. 0, such like?
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: like
2015-04-08 23:52 handsome: since the last bubble did you change anything?
2015-04-08 23:54 Frey: yeah, changed something priti mentioned
2015-04-08 23:54 handsome: mostly hitsounds
2015-04-08 23:55 handsome: seems like its ok
2015-04-08 23:57 handsome: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/661235 DJ Fresh (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Flashlight (Radio Edit) [Normal]]
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 01:03:109 (4) - nc
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: lol
2015-04-08 23:58 Frey: fixed
2015-04-08 23:58 handsome: 02:13:052 (4,5) - 2 1/1 sliders?
2015-04-08 23:59 Frey: reverse is fine
2015-04-09 00:00 handsome: 02:26:766 (4,5,6) - why did u change
2015-04-09 00:00 Frey: err, I didn't change that place
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: i mean
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: why change from slider -circle-clircle
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: to circle circle slider
2015-04-09 00:01 handsome: lol
2015-04-09 00:01 Frey: ;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: finxe
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: fixed;w;
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: 03:31:224 (5) - nc
2015-04-09 00:02 handsome: haaah
2015-04-09 00:02 Frey: orz fixed
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: well
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: thats all of it
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: u wanan take a second look through?
2015-04-09 00:03 handsome: before i bubble?
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: yeah, about Hard
2015-04-09 00:03 Frey: 02:30:881 (1) -
2015-04-09 00:04 Frey: hard to make a perfect stream
2015-04-09 00:06 handsome: well you can do this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/pvMXGfQ.png
2015-04-09 00:08 Frey: ok, done
Thanks :)
Avena
qualified woo
Topic Starter
Frey

Priti wrote:

qualified woo
8-)
Kyouren
Gratzz, DJ Frey (feat. HootOwlStar)~ :3
Nyukai
wow already qualified, gratz~
Secretpipe
:3
TicClick
I personally have only two things to object: first is 80% volume sections, which are a bit loud, and second is too dark combo colour #3. Tell me if you want to fix these mistakes.

Other than that, you have my respect for mapping it this way.
Takeshi Kida
congrats :3
DahplA
Congratz~
Topic Starter
Frey

TicClick wrote:

I personally have only two things to object: first is 80% volume sections, which are a bit loud, and second is too dark combo colour #3. Tell me if you want to fix these mistakes.

Other than that, you have my respect for mapping it this way.
Hi Tic :3

Firstly the volume, before 00:31:566 (1), it does sound a bit loud. but the part afterwards sounds fine. And then, the volume of the song self is loud enough, I think it's reasonable to use loud hitsound, or players can't get proper feedback from the clicks

Then, about the color, I still think it's not so dark, and more importantly, it's still under control and suitable for the background.

In conclusion, sorry I still want to insist it. Thank you!

By the way, thanks everyone!
wantuol
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