Zero__wind wrote:

哭了感觉好久没用中文写mod我好感动


Insane
00:00:714 (1) - 1ms unsnapped fixed
00:11:963 (2) - 莫名用的是drum whistle 大概误操作 /.\手滑丽
00:23:713 (4,5,6,7) - 全都clap好听得多
00:34:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 打起来挺不舒服的 不如一整串都用0.7x的间距 现在这样我也没觉得哪里合曲 01:27:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串也一样 都改成0.8的了
00:38:046 (4) - 感觉flow有点别扭= = CTRL+G调一下试试 好

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00:45:380 (1) - 折返点的clap非常突兀 不合曲 最好删掉
00:48:046 (1) - ^ 都改了
00:55:379 - 建议从这里把spinner静音 比较合曲 好
01:12:047 (1) - 头上finish呢= = /.\好
01:16:047 (1) - ^ 01:15:379 (3) - 也可以加不过不是那么重要的感觉 我看看
01:35:712 (7,1) - 这突然这么小的间距真的非常奇怪……难受死了 麻烦一定行行好把间距弄大点儿吧 或者把7换成slider也没人会说你的 唔，换了个梗

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01:38:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 怎么说呢= = 前面顺时针一圈跳过了到这里突然让我反过来画S我真的超级难受 如果你这么想叠在之前的印子上的话 可以尝试顺着flow重新摆一下 我只是示意一下 没摆很好 改了

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yf's Hard
00:02:712 (1) - 何必为难自己为难大家一开始就钻角落呢x.x
00:47:379 (2) - 这间距感觉有点夸张 又不是什么重音 考虑叠在00:48:546 (2) - 头上 应爱抚需求改了
01:17:546 (1) - finish一个 应爱抚需求改了
01:22:712 (1,2,1,2,3) - 不如写个COMA【咦】

Easy
HP2即可 Easy用3太高了 ok
00:00:713 (1,1) - 把重音空着实在是让人不太舒服……考虑改成这样 改了的话记得补音效 ok
00:09:379 (3) - 头上可以finish一下
00:30:712 (3) - 00:44:046 (3) - ^ ok
00:37:379 (1) - 倒是这个finish不怎么必要 当然留着也没什么 ok
00:46:712 (2) - 头上的clap不合曲 考虑去掉 ok
00:46:712 (2) - 折返点漏了clap 唔……好像不是这个note？
01:17:379 (1) - 可以加个finish 好
01:28:046 (1) - 这个spinner放得感觉不是很合适 建议换成滑条正常地把这一小段都map了 改了
01:33:379 (1,1) - 这两个头上最好也finish 这段是最暴力的一段0.0 多加没坏处 好好好
01:43:040 - 和Normal里说的一样 5%音量太低不合曲 奇怪 你Insane也不是这么设的啊……我都怀疑是不是一个人做的= = /.\

就这些吧 好懒
继续努力 ;w;能不能求bubble request呐
顺便你忘了给他kd 补了

Zero__wind wrote:

哭了感觉好久没用中文写mod我好感动

Atm's Insane
00:16:212 (2,3,4) - 感觉间距莫名小 把3多往上放点儿 OK
00:23:712 (3,4,5,6) - 全都clapl plz好吗OAO OK
00:28:712 (1,2,3,4) - 真是一个奇怪的节奏梗 曲子里明明只是两个三连而已 咦 我真的只听到了两个鼓音orz
00:45:046 (1) - 我总觉得这个滑条应该加速 从00:45:379 (2) - 再开始减速 尤其是在你用的tick2的情况下我感觉从00:44:879 (5) - 跳到00:45:046 (1) - 然后让我必须停在它的tick的位置超级不舒服快要憋死了 我觉得这个擦音就是该减速啊...嘛 sv设成0.75，换了个摆法，感觉应该好点

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00:55:046 - 建议从这里把spinner静音 合曲OK
00:57:212 (6,1) - 整个kiai里只有这个地方节奏不太一致 别的相似的地方都是从红线00:57:212 - 这里起slider的 感觉那样更舒服 我这一小节统一用的1slider+2note的组合节奏啊...换掉反而乱了点
01:06:046 (4,6) - CTRL+G 简直爽 OK
01:12:046 (1,2) - 这节奏又有点奇怪 感觉这样合理得多 OK
01:14:546 (4) - 往上挪一点？感觉451笔直往左好难打 或许往下一点也可以 OK 改了后面滑条位置
01:28:129 (1) - clap怎么美丽 加上了
01:33:212 (8,1) - 感觉间距小 不过这梗我也不会梗 只好随便这么一说 放远了点，弄了个跳

Hollow Wings wrote:

from baidu

NO KD

Atm's Insane

1. fine.

Insane

1. 00:38:046 (4) - missed clap hs at the end.
2. personally i don't recommend patterns like this: 01:30:380 (7,8,9,1) -

yf's Hard

1. good.

Soda's Normal

1. 00:36:046 (3,5) - avoid the stack for noobs in low diff.
2. not sure sv shifting like this's acceptable or not, fine to me thou.

Easy

1. 00:44:046 (3) - curve?
2. 01:30:046 (6,1) - avoid this stack.

thou immature, good enough to me now.

poke me later when you are ready.

sodarose wrote:

Soda's Normal

1. 00:36:046 (3,5) - avoid the stack for noobs in low diff.√ don't do overlap here as well. spread all of objs here.
2. not sure sv shifting like this's acceptable or not, fine to me thou.I think this is appropriate.

thx for mod

http://puu.sh/gyjxg/db602acfc8.osu

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Good to see this mapped in standard
One question tho, a previously ranked osu!mania set (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/147152) had feat. GUMI in artist. Are both GUMI and Megpoid GUMI okay? Or is one of them wrong?

alacat wrote:

Hi, there

Disqualify due to the wrong artist name.

You should check the official website : http://ensou.bandcamp.com/track/coma



So the artist must be "ensou ft. GUMI" according the CD information. you should consider moving "Megpoid" to Tags.

Good luck with re-qualify.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

ft. GUMI
not feat. GUMI

just mentioning

1. Delete the .osb file in your folder.

1. 01:10:379 (2) - missing clap

1. 00:20:379 (4,1) - just mentioning, not making overlaps like this way, really not good...
2. 00:25:046 (2,4) - too close, causing overlap

1. 00:45:046 (1,2) - swap nc?
2. 00:54:546 (1) - 个人觉得这个spin并不太合适，要结束也应该结束在00:55:046 - ，但这样又太短，索性删了插个break怎么样啊？

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[notice]

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  Atm's Insane
  

1. 00:45:046 (1,2) - swap nc? OK
2. 00:54:546 (1) - 个人觉得这个spin并不太合适，要结束也应该结束在00:55:046 - ，但这样又太短，索性删了插个break怎么样啊？

我也觉的转盘不好。改动：换成了一个减速滑条+单点，顺便加了两个whistle音
not much issues, call me back after done

Minakami Yuki wrote:

[notice]

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  Soda's Normal
  

1. 00:20:379 (4,1) - just mentioning, not making overlaps like this way, really not good... DS
2. 00:25:046 (2,4) - too close, causing overlap √

not much issues, call me back after done

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. Delete the .osb file in your folder.

Easy

1. 01:10:379 (2) - missing clap

not much issues, call me back after done

yf_bmp wrote:

requalified.
(If i was bn

yf_bmp wrote:

requalified.















(If i was bn