ExUsagi wrote:

trust me, this map will never die.. will never go rest in peace...

thanks for the supports guys! i love you!

Genocide wrote:

^ cincong :v

ExUsagi wrote:

xD lol you guys so lewd..
thanks anyway.. =~=)b

oh, new page.. .-.

btw, while waiting this map, still enjoying watching this one

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVDjCFR3xgk
http://07kiwa.deviantart.com/

xP

shionelove wrote:

pattern check
column 1234 1234567

[4K Basic]
00:33:494 (33494|2,34208|1) - delete // keep, it's for transition (as it's layer the bass guitar)
00:45:369 - add for bass // ==a considerable
00:46:083 - ^ // I was thinking about 3/4 beat aren't basic enough, so I leave it empty.. keep both
00:52:244 (52244|1) - until 00:53:315
02:44:565 (164565|3,164923|1) - delete? // removed ALL 1/2 beat (as it's not basic.. thanks for noticing)
[4K Normal]
00:04:030 - add // ok
00:18:137 - add // ok
00:45:458 (45458|3,46173|0) - conflict 00:42:512 (42512|0,43226|1) - // ooo 3/4 beat.. fixed.. thanks!
01:34:030 (94030|0,94744|3) - add // ok
01:57:958 (117958|0) - until 01:59:387,because https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2867726(Normal,intermediate) // ok, will check another diffs as well.. thanks!
[4K intermediate]
00:50:101 (50101|1) - change LN? // == catchy.. ok
02:16:708 - add

[4K Hard]
00:04:030 - add 1/2 LN,same sound as 00:03:315 (3315|3,3494|1,3673|3,3851|0) - // ==a keep, i don't hear any 'notice-able' sound
00:11:530 (11530|3) - until 00:11:708 (11708|2) - // feeling empty, well ok
00:17:780 (17780|1) - change LN // ok
00:58:673 (58673|3) - add 1 // ok
[4K insanity]
00:45:280 (45280|0,45280|2,45994|0,45994|1) - delete one each // ==a erm... i think this one is fine.. keep
00:46:708 - add // x3 keep
00:52:601 (52601|1,52601|3,52601|2,52958|2,52958|3,52958|0,53315|0,53315|3,53315|1) - delete one each is better IMO // ok
01:31:530 (91530|3,91530|2,91619|1,91619|2,91708|1,91708|0) - why not trill? // ahahahah.. ok
02:00:458 (120458|3) - start at 02:00:101 plz,only this diff starts 02:00:458 // ok, thanks for noticing
02:45:280 - add
02:45:458 - ^ // ok both
[4K Burst!]
00:46:708 - add 23 // same as 7K Burst!, i prefer to keep this one empty
00:57:065 (57065|1,57601|1) - move to 4? // ok
01:37:065 (97065|1,97244|1,97601|1) - move plz,my idea is move 3 1 4 // keep
02:28:673 (148673|2,148673|3,148673|0,148673|1) - delete 2 or 3 // keep, last part for finalizer

[General](i missed,noob)
HP&OD
4K Burst HP 9 because 7K is 9 // erm, you mean OD? lel ok thanks for noticing
source and tag:delete Green in tag
BG:ok
uncheck Widescreen Support in all diffs because this map doesn't have SB
unsnap:ok

[7K Basic]
00:30:101 (30101|4,30458|2) - move to 7 1? // ok
00:52:244 (52244|3) - until 00:53:315 // ok
01:23:494 (83494|5,83673|1) - ctrl+h,for next pattern // ok
02:39:387 (159387|3) - change LN // ok
[7K Normal]
00:04:030 - add 6 // keep
00:18:137 - add // ok
00:45:458 (45458|6,46173|0) - wrong rhythm,you know // ok, i was about to make it 3/4.. x__x thanks for noticing
01:29:387 (89387|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2874758(suggestion) // rearranged.. owo)b
01:36:530 - add // i think it's ok to make this one empty on easier diff.. keep
[7K Intermediate]
01:57:958 (117958|5) - until 01:59:387
02:33:673 (153673|4,153851|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2874802(suggestion)
at least move LN to 7 is better i think // rearranged... owo)b

[7K Hard]
00:04:030 - add LN // keep o_o no exact synth there.. (i like the spacing too..)
01:09:298 (69298|2) - delete,no sound // ok
01:24:476 (84476|2,84565|0,84744|2) - move to 4 3 4,for your pattern
01:28:137 (88137|4,88315|4,88494|4) - move to 4
01:29:565 (89565|5,89744|5,89923|5) - move to 5
01:36:530 (96530|6,96530|0,96530|2,96530|4) - one note is enough // removed 2
02:03:048 (123048|4) - move to 4 // ok
[7K Insanity]
01:24:476 (84476|2,84565|0,84744|2) - move to 434 // rearranged
01:28:137 (88137|4,88315|4,88494|4) - move to 4 // ok
01:29:565 (89565|5,89744|5,89923|5) - move to 5 // ok
01:49:387 (109387|1,109387|0,109387|5,109387|6) - delete two notes,five is too much // considering le ghosting keyboard, removed
02:00:101 - add Ln same as Hard // ooo ok
02:03:137 (123137|5) - delete or change short // short-d
02:06:173 (126173|6) - change LN // keep.. ==a need more free space
02:08:315 (128315|6,128315|5,128315|3) - change one LN // ok
02:34:030 (154030|2,154030|1,154030|0,154119|5,154119|6,154119|4,154208|1,154208|0,154208|2,154298|6,154298|5,154298|4) - delete one each
3chord is...ded lol // keep for final part, you know.. =~=)"

[7K Burst]
00:20:637 (20637|4,20637|1,20994|2,20994|4,21351|1,21351|4) - add one each
00:35:994 - add // keep, the rhythm is catchy and i want to make it different
01:28:137 (88137|5,88137|4,88315|5,88315|4,88494|4,88494|5) - move to 45 // oo i got what you mean, rearranged.. x3
01:37:065 (97065|1,97244|1,97601|1) - move some // ==a keep, moved the triple notes after this one instead

that's all
i'm going to afk 3/13,3/14
hitsound check later
if you fix hitsound issues before i'm back,you can get rank faster // i already fixed the hitsound like.. 5 or 6 times before bubble, but you right, i will re-check them all

Lanturn wrote:

Two things.

Amazing song <3

That BG is really trippy when moving the mouse on the song select.

Good luck on this!

shionelove wrote:

usagi you req takane?
if so i have to wait

Takane6 wrote:

Hi usagi-sama o/
Still waiting for this get rank but... maybe should take a look at this...

7K Insanity

00:21:887 - add note (have to be 3 note right? like here 00:16:173 -) // oo thanks for noticing, rearranged & added
00:30:815 - add note (have to be 3 note right?) // done
00:53:851 - not sure if have to be 2 LN here or one of it should be at 00:53:673 - ?? // orz silly me, i think it's dragged somehow.. fixed
02:05:458 - add note (have to be 4 note) // done
02:07:244 - add note (have to be 3 note) // done
02:20:458 - 4 note maybe too much?
*only optional: 02:34:030 (154030|2,154119|4,154208|2,154298|4) - ctrl + h ? i think it will be better :V // lol no

7K Burst

00:43:851 - em... delete 1 note ? (have to be 2 note)
00:44:208 - ^
00:45:994 - delete 1 note (have to be 1 note)
02:07:065 - add note (have to be 3 note? like here 02:08:494 -)
02:19:208 - add note (have to be 3 note? like here 02:13:494 -)
02:28:851 - delete 1 note (have to be 2 note? like here 02:17:423 -)

// all done

4K Burst

01:35:101 (95101|0,95101|1,95190|3,95190|2,95280|1,95280|0,95369|3,95369|2,95458|0,95458|1,95548|3,95548|2,95637|1,95637|0,95726|3,95726|2,95815|1,95815|0,95905|2,95905|3,95994|0,95994|1,96083|2,96083|3,96173|0,96173|1,96262|2,96262|3,96351|1,96351|0,96440|2,96440|3) - you make the pattern 2222.. but the sound is looks like more better if the pattern is 3131...

// keep

Seems fine ( udah pasti lah... mapnya kan mau ranked :v )

shionelove wrote:

usagi you req takane?
if so i have to wait

shionelove wrote:

hitsound mod
but i'm 8th time...so quick mod is enough
N=Normal,W=Whistle,F=Finish,C=Clap
hitsound delay:ok

oops
02:11:530 - add timing point plz plz plz plz plz // metronome reset! added

[4K]
Normal:01:21:887 (81887|0) - W
Hard:00:36:887 (36887|1) - delete W
00:37:601 (37601|3,38315|3,39030|0,39744|1,40458|0) - ^
00:42:601 (42601|2,43315|3,45458|0,46173|0,46887|1) - ^
Insanity,Burst:same thing as Hard(above three bass thing) // i think it's on my purpose, so i keep it like CW.. keep

[7K]
Normal:02:09:565 (129565|2,130280|5) - add W // added

shionelove wrote:

[7K]
Normal:02:09:565 (129565|2,130280|5) - add W
Intermediate:02:42:065 - missing LN(don't forget to add hitsound) // ==a omg this one got dragged somehow.. done
Hard:00:19:119 (19119|3,19208|4,19298|5) - add C // done
00:36:887 (36887|1,37601|5,38315|5,39030|2,39744|1,40458|1) - delete W
00:42:601 (42601|3,43315|6,45458|3,46173|0,46887|2) - ^
Insanity,Burst:same thing as above two // as 4K do, it's on purpose.. so keep.. :3
Burst:01:36:530 - add with whistle? // added, but the other diffs doesn't have whistle..

end

shionelove wrote:

checked things i pointed out,checked Aimod and no unsnap issue after adding new timing point

qualified.
edit:today limit,rip

shionelove wrote:

checked things i pointed out,checked Aimod and no unsnap issue after adding new timing point

qualified.
edit:today limit,rip
edit 2:new day,qualified

Lanturn wrote:

Almost. Pre-Grats ExUsagi. It's nice to see some tmnt on osu

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Congratz on your 3rd ranked map usagi

Harbyter wrote:

finally usagi /o/

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

gratz usagi-san ~ >w<)b

shionelove wrote:

shionelove wrote:

checked things i pointed out,checked Aimod and no unsnap issue after adding new timing point

qualified.
edit:today limit,rip
edit 2:new day,qualified

Kouya- wrote:

Keep up the great work, I'd love to play more of your maps once I learn to Osu!Mania xD

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

huray >3< finally >3< grats my rabbit, i means Usagi, lol

LuVo wrote:

The first half of the 7k Intermediate, in comparison to the next level of 7k, is kinda plain. Crochets and quavers. Meanwhile, your 7k Hard is really quite fun throughout.

You might want to consider revising the first verses of the 7k Intermediate.

P.S. I really mean I love the 7k Hard and the second half of the 7k Intermediate. I'll be playing it a lot.

Kyousuke- wrote:

Yeayy another Insanity <333
Grats rebbit! =w= love this turtle mapset \:D/

bakabakemono wrote:

Gratzzz Usagi <3 etia when ;w;

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

just checked 7k burst

00:25:369 - ghost? // its on purpose to keep the next beat, to follow the bass line..

00:27:512 (27512|2) - i once thought it as ghost note too.. but seems it still has sound pitch changing even sightly // yes yes, same reason above ^

but well.. is it audible?

00:28:940 (28940|2) - ^ // bass line, following previous beat..

02:17:690 - ^

02:33:405 - ^ // these two too, it's on purpose to make the beat built more better... but you right, if that really forced to keep using the guidelines of mapping for quality sake, it's better to remove each..

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz my rabbit~ :3
My lovely older brother~ :3