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Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare

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jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
wow srry ppl for leaving modding so long, ive had 0 time past few days to even get on my pc >_>

anyway i cant qoute everyones mod and say what ive fixed sue to beatmap maker had allready changed some stuff it seems >_>

anyway i'll qoute the latest

Lokamp wrote:

jericho2442's Fanfare
[General] some sections have still TOO much claps on a row... have you tried whistles? whistles sounded even worse :/
01:05:081 (1,2) - move them 2 squares up see no point in doing that
01:28:044 (1) - what a wonderful slider! Maybe for this hint you'll hate me, but please, try to end it on 01:30:016 (white slider tick) i did lol, once i updated though i found it ended on blue tick -_-, fixed it as soon as i knew
02:54:050 (1,2,3,1,2) - quite hard to understand the rhythm here... songs rythem changes here, expect from a break thats the est i could think to match it

(Poor Loogie's mode... >.<)
anyway everything i agree'd with has been fixed
Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu

thanks for the mods everyone
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
- General / All diff's
  1. You really need an Easy/Normal diff.
- Jericho2442's Fanfare
  1. 00:39:007 (2,1,2,3,4) - O god those claps, my ears hurt :o
  2. 00:44:056 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  3. 00:59:081 (5,6) - Off screen.
  4. 01:09:024 (5) - CLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPS
  5. 01:14:073 (11) - ^
  6. 02:38:021 (4,1) - Stack (1) with (4) properly please.
  7. 02:56:021 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer.
  8. 03:01:036 (x) - Extra note (?)

Sorry for posting clap spam like that, but I HATE CLAP SPAM rawr.


- Crimson's Fanfare
  1. (nazi) 00:55:087 (2) - Move one grid level up.
  2. 01:14:073 (1) - Eww.
I'll mod rest tomorrow, I'm somewhat sleeping now. Starred~

- Azure's Fanfare
  1. This difficulty litterly has 0 hitsounds. NONE o_o Please put some in.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
offset : 6.115

not sure bout the bpm i get > 153

slider speed 1.40

snapped on 1/6th

(tried on Azure's Fanfare,removed all timing sections except the one's after the first kiai one,then resnapped again on 1/6th)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
How to snap notes.

1. Select the note.
2. Press "J" and then "K"

Or just select timing -> "Resnap all notes", but sometimes they may go wrong.

Please PLEEEASE resnap your notes ! I see a lot of modders , include myself point those out already, yet it's still there... >_>
IppE
IppE
Giving a star because I actually passed it :D (Thus it's playable imo)

Gotta agree with Gladi though, easy/normal is needed.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLUVtTUxltc
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, I'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
I've already starred this map, so i can't do it again. >_<
Reduce a little hitsounds volume!

[Azure's Fanfare]
ok <3

[Crimson's Fanfare]
00:51:418 (1,2,3,4) 2/4 before.
00:52:790 (1) Move it to 00:52:618, then add a new beat in this tick (00:52:790).
00:56:561 (1) 2/4 after.
02:05:390 (1) 1/4 before.

[jericho2442's Fanfare]
02:54:332 (x) Add a Non-Inherit Time Section here with:
- BPM: 87.50;
- Offset: 174349. (Then resnap all notes and slider lenghts).
02:58:961 (x) Add a Non-Inherit Time Section here with:
- BPM: 175,00;
- Offset: 178961. (Then Resnap all notes and slider lenghts).

And that's all! Hope you will ask me again for other maps-modding <3
Hope too this mape can get ranked soon. x3
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Offset = -680
(Remove the 190BPM section in your difficulty)

The strobe in Azure's difficulty is obnoxious. Remove it.

Make an easy difficulty.

Will mod more extensively after Christmas.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

Gladi wrote:

-

- Jericho2442's Fanfare
  1. 00:39:007 (2,1,2,3,4) - O god those claps, my ears hurt :o fixed
  2. 00:44:056 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:59:081 (5,6) - Off screen. fixed
  4. 01:09:024 (5) - CLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPSCLAPS fixed
  5. 01:14:073 (11) - ^ fixed
  6. 02:38:021 (4,1) - Stack (1) with (4) properly please. fixed
  7. 02:56:021 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer. fixed
  8. 03:01:036 (x) - Extra note (?)
fixed
Sorry for posting clap spam like that, but I HATE CLAP SPAM rawr.
thanks much and yea......can tell this is a pretty old map from me XD

x3ns0r wrote:

offset : 6.115

not sure bout the bpm i get > 153

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:


[jericho2442's Fanfare]
02:54:332 (x) Add a Non-Inherit Time Section here with:
- BPM: 87.50;
- Offset: 174349. (Then resnap all notes and slider lenghts).
02:58:961 (x) Add a Non-Inherit Time Section here with:
- BPM: 175,00;
- Offset: 178961. (Then Resnap all notes and slider lenghts).
.........errmm so many offset and bpm posts >_>

i think for now i shall ignore these and apply Ephemeral's offset and then wait for him when he mods this again to find the correct timings and offsets ;)

Ephemeral wrote:

Offset = -680
thanks :)

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
jericho2442 in all the tags?

[Azure's Fanfare]
Well, the stacking is sometimes strange, where 1/4s and 1/2s are in the same stack, but it's not really a big deal in this map
00:31:891 (3,4,5) - Unstack from 2?
00:33:605 (1) - Down a grid
00:38:405 (10) - Unstack from 9?
00:40:462 (1,2,3) - Unstack?
00:55:205 (1) - Finish and/or closer to 10?
01:02:405 (1,2,3) - Unstack?
01:20:234 (3) - Weird
01:23:662 (3,4) - Unstack?

Gladi wrote:

  1. This difficulty litterly has 0 hitsounds. NONE o_o Please put some in.
Um, yeah. Fix that.

[Crimson's]
The placement of notes seems to be random, there aren't many patterns or reasons for notes to be where they are except for distance snapping

00:08:919 (1,2,3) and every single usage of 3+ whistles in a row - Remove hitsounds from (2)? or change to clap? and add finish to (3)?
00:16:291 (3) - Unsilence. And if you think it sounds weird unsilenced, then it probably doesn't belong there.
00:19:891 (1,2,3) and all following uses of 3 claps in a row - finish to 3?
00:21:777 (6) - No, don't finish spam.
00:23:320 (3) - Don't have two finishes 1/2 beat away from each other
00:24:520 (2,3,4,5) - Don't finish spam
00:32:405 (4,5) - Too much finish?
00:37:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't finish spam :(
01:04:291 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:08:920ish - Timing point after the end of the slider?
01:12:005 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make into a windmill shape?
01:38:062 (1,2,3) - Center the triangle?
02:37:034 (6) - Ow my ears
02:45:262 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:49:377 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:58:120 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
03:00:177 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OK, here there aren't enough hitsounds
03:16:634 (3) - Shorten by 1 repeat?

agh now I'm sick of this song
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
~Tags~
Add Konata to tags

~Storyboard~
Please make so it shows made by Azure_Kyte on Azure's Fanfare and made by jericho2442 on jericho2442's Fanfare

~MP3~
Pretty big part of the MP3 is unused, cut it or map it.

~Azure's Fanfare~
The beats are so clumped together so it's hard to see some of the beats :/
Lower the HP drain allot, please!

~Crimson's Fanfare~
Yet again LOWER THE HP DRAIN.....It's way to high
Also lower the overall difficulty.

~jericho2442's Fanfare~
...Need....lower... HP...drain....
Having the stack leniency that low isn't allowed :/
I whould prefer to have deathsteams instead of short repeating sliders but i guess that they are ok......

*star*
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Crimmi's Judgement <3

Just A Suggestion:

It's A Good Map But Can You Make An Easier Diff For The Guys Who'll Love The Song But Have Little Skill?

But It's A Good Song And Catchy Too!

*Star*
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

Xgor wrote:

~Tags~
Add Konata to tags


~jericho2442's Fanfare~
...Need....lower... HP...drain.... lol? its only one above middle >_>
Having the stack leniency that low isn't allowed :/ moved one up
I whould prefer to have deathsteams instead of short repeating sliders but i guess that they are ok......ive told many i aint changing it, death streams are worse

*star*
Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
azure's fanfare:
01:36:691 (5,6,7,8,1) - looks hideous in game. ~__~

offset feels a bit off imo. @A@~
starred.
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
Starred. But I feel that the offsets are a bit off in Taiko mode more than in osu, (??)
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
Sorry double posting:

Crimson's Fanfare: Reduce offset by 4. Just reducing the overall rate does reducing yr total score, maybe just mid-class and keep the HPDR(HP Drain Rate) as the same??
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
I made my own difficulty, is a Normal :3

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Apa Kabar!

[tmokb's Fanfare]
SPOILER
Increase the overall difficulty, circle size, and HP Drain. Is this a normal diff? This diff needs more hitsound..... You have to rename to tmokb93's Fanfare
00:08:920 (2) - Make parallel
00:17:148 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:19:891 (2) - ^
00:22:634 (1) - ^
00:25:377 (1) - ^
01:05:834 (1) - Move forward to white tick
01:12:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Why this object volume sound is low??
01:17:491 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:28:462 (1) - ^
[Azure's Fanfare]
SPOILER
This diff needs more hitsound too.....
00:17:148 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:19:891 (1) - ^
00:22:634 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:17:491 (1) - ^
01:28:462 (1) - ^
[Crimson's Fanfare]
SPOILER
00:14:232 (1) - Make parallel
00:21:775 (6) - Move 3 grid up
01:31:203 (3) - Move 1 grid down
01:36:689 (5) - Move 1 grid up
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok

Leorda wrote:

[tmokb's Fanfare]
...Circle size .You have to rename to tmokb93's Fanfare Why? tmokb or tmokb93 is the same.[/color]
00:17:148 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:19:891 (2) - ^ Clap suits better[/color]
01:05:834 (1) - Move forward to white tick [/color]
01:28:462 (1) - ^[/color]
I quoted the fix i choose to not follow.

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
This map has been sitting in my queue for a long time. Very sorry for the very late response.

tmokb's Fanfare:
This is still relatively hard for your easiest diff (blaming the random sized stacks and short spinners with notes directly after them)
and you need to update the storyboard to show who made the map

Normal mod:
I really don't like the amount of stacks you put in this diff
00:25:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - very hard to read

Combo mod:
00:08:405 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to follow the lyrics
00:29:320 (3) - add new combo to be consistent with 00:34:805 (1)
00:45:948 (4) - new combo?
01:25:034 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 01:19:548 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:17:491 - make a timing section that has the same hitsound settings but no kiai a quarter note earlier to make sure the first note has the right hitsound

Azure's Fanfare:
Normal mod:
T_T the stack leniency makes a lot of the stacks look bad. (just decided to point out the one that really annoyed me)
01:26:748 (9) - I usually find this note hard to read and end up pressing 10 instead
01:36:691 (5,6,7,8,1) - The stacking makes this look bad and hard to read. I advise remapping this part

Combo mod:
00:45:948 (4) - new combo to follow the lyrics

Timing section mod:
same as tmokb's Fanfare

Crimson's Fanfare:
Why is the offset -682 when everyone else has -680

Normal mod:
Maybe it is just me, but I felt a lot of random changes in spacing while playing, so I advise you check through the map for that. (Listed a few examples below)
00:27:432 (6) - spacing
00:58:289 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Combo mod:
00:07:375 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:10:117 (1)
00:37:889 (1,4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with the lyrics?
I have problems with a few more combos not following the lyrics, but I can go either way on some of those issues. As a result, I will leave it up to you to comb through the combos of your song.

jericho2442's Fanfare
Combo mod:
01:08:405 (4) - new combo?
01:30:520 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:25:034 (1)
01:32:920 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:27:091 (1)?
01:47:491 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:44:748 (1)

=============
Nice map. Might need a little fine-tuning in places, but that can be fixed. Star.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi~

[tmokb's Fanfare]

It's hard for being the easiest difficult >_<

00:08:405 (1) - Remove new combo
00:08:920 (2) - New combo
01:18:177 (3) - lol I think there mustn't be any change of the slider velocity in the easiest diff...


[Azure's Fanfare]

00:55:205 (1) - I think you should remove combo here and fix the spacing...
00:55:548 (2) - ... set new combo here and make the jump with this note :)
01:22:634 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:977 (2) - New combo


Star*
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Okay I fixed all of Your things guys :D

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Aghagah, the timimg.

Offset 6136. Resnap all notes.

Also, the offset is different in Crimson's fanfare compared to the others.

It also has over 1 min unmapped space, consider cutting mp3.

Fix the timing, but have a star anyways.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

"Made By Crimson_SoulZ" appears on every diff, even though you only actually made 1 diff.
You have 2 .osbs, delete the unnecessary one. (in fact, delete both, and put the little bit of storyboard into the .osu)
Background is too large, resize to 1024x768 or smaller.

Remove "Lucky Star" and "Aya Hirano" from tags, and add a few "nicknames" for the guest mappers? BTW, tags are totally inconsistent across the maps, please make them the same.

Oh lord, can we properly use keyframes in the SB please? A keyframe every 10 milliseconds, even when nothing actually happens there, is not the proper thing to do. If you're not sure how to do this, PM me, and I'll fix up the files for you.

Unused chunk of MP3, cut it out?

[tmokb's Fanfare]

Unused timing sections:
12. Offset: 77,480ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 77,491ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
14. Offset: 88,377ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

I'm concerned about having this map as the easiest map; the patterns are definitely not the easiest to read.

00:08:878 (1) - The upcoming sliders of this sort all have a note 1/4 before them; add one for this slider too?
01:04:078 (5) - Move it 1/4 later?
01:24:993 (1,2,3) - Spacing!
01:28:421 - Start kiai right on the beat, make sure the timing section is properly placed.
01:32:878 - Add a note here? (between 2 and 3)
01:35:621 - ^

[Azure's Fanfare]

01:11:964 - With already only 88 seconds of playtime, this break seems kinda unnecessary; map it?
01:36:650 (5,6,7,8,1) - Stacking really messes up this formation (more so than some previous ones, anyways). Not sure what you can do about it though, don't stack them, maybe?

[Crimson's Fanfare]

00:16:250 (3) - Doesn't really fit, imo.
00:27:393 (5,6) - Spacing inconsistency.
01:01:018 - Unused timing section. (in fact, you have 2 stacked here)
01:03:735 (2) - Snap this slider properly to 1/2?
01:52:078 - Break's too short.
02:07:850 (5) - Mis-snapped slider again.
02:31:555 - Unused timing section.
02:36:993 (6) - Doesn't sound too great.
03:16:164 (2) - Move it 1/4 later, and properly snap.

Timing feels a little funny near the end.

[jericho2442's Fanfare]

00:40:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to predict without knowing the song.
01:28:421 (1) - Ugly star. :(

Ehh, felt a bit too difficult for the sake of difficult instead of difficult for the sake of fun.

A whole bunch of issues, can't pubble this yet, sorry. :(
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
'kay fixed

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]


[jericho2442's Fanfare]

00:40:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hard to predict without knowing the song. its fine
01:28:421 (1) - Ugly star. :( not great at star sliders, but it does fine ;)

Ehh, felt a bit too difficult for the sake of difficult instead of difficult for the sake of fun. you kno i disagree with this :P
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
HERE some rules in my queues
SPOILER
I prepared two kind of mod services so as to you choose

1.Common modding

2.Strict modding
Everyone please choose one mod service type before post > <
or i will mod maps by Common modding’s fashion

so.. LK COMMON MODDING~

tmokb's Fanfare

[00:24:47]
[00:36:30] spacing not correct. i kown its your designed but imo use "reverse selection" to it will be better
[01;32:53] wrong spacing..how about change slider 3's shape and fix spacing?

Crimson's Fanfare

[01:00:65] move 1 grid up
[01:38:70] move 3 grids right
[02:39:05] new combo
[03:16:67] (3,4) bring forward to[03:16:59] and [03:16;96]

jericho2442's Fanfare

[01:02:87] no need Whistler
[01:27:56] you should cover it better
[02:00:30] ^
[02:01:33] (1~7) ^
[02:34:25] ^
[02:42:47]~[02:45:22] ^

ok ,no much porblems but i think this map could be advanced more better
+star~
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
tmokb's Fanfare
00:39:050 (8) - New Combo.
00:41:793 (4) - ^
00:44:536 (3) - ^
00:47:278 (7) - ^
01:03:736 (4) - ^
01:06:478 (3) - ^
01:09:221 (7) - ^
01:12:993 (5) - ^
01:14:021 (9) - ^ (maybe?)


00:40:421 (1) - No New Combo.
00:43:850 (1) - ^
01:05:793 (1) - ^

Crimson's Fanfare
03:16:593 (3,4) - Move back in timeline by 1/4

jericho2442's Fanfare
01:12:993 (5,9) - New Combo.
02:27:050 (3,5) - ^ (maybe?)
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442

LKs wrote:

jericho2442's Fanfare

[01:02:87] no need Whistler its fine
[01:27:56] you should cover it better fixed
[02:00:30] ^ fixed
[02:01:33] (1~7) ^ fixed
[02:34:25] ^ fixed
[02:42:47]~[02:45:22] ^ fixed

YGOkid8 wrote:

jericho2442's Fanfare
01:12:993 (5,9) - New Combo. no
02:27:050 (3,5) - ^ (maybe?)fixed
Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok

LKs wrote:

tmokb's Fanfare

[00:24:47] ATTACH[.JPG] Fixed.
[00:36:30] spacing not correct. i kown its your designed but imo use "reverse selection" to it will be better Spacing is correct, anyway i cahnged a bit that slider.
[01;32:53] wrong spacing..how about change slider 3's shape and fix spacing? No, spacing is correct, and i like that slider.
[b]
Anyway, i follow the ygo mods too, here the diff:

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[tmokb's Fanfare]
00:19:50(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about swap 'New combo'?

[Crimson's Fanfare]
00:09:56(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left and up?
00:26:87(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:27:73(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:28:07(1,2) - I think it's TOO far distance even Jump :3
01:14:02(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:22:59(3,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:49:50(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
02:26:53(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:30:65(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:50:36(5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
03:00:13(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
03:03:56(4) - ^
03:06:30(3) - [Suggestion How about move 2 grid up and 1 grid right?

[jericho2442's Fanfare]
00:32:36(4,5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:43:85(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:42:82(3,2,4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?



Good song.
And I like Lucky Star :3
Washimiya Jinjya XD<
Anyway, good luck + α???

Here's my star :3
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Delete "Azure Kyte" from tags.
Resize background! It's too large. The maximum allowed size is 1024x768

[tmokb93's Fanfare]
There are no hitsounds on this difficulty. Give it some rhythm.
00:19:507 (7,1) - Space it properly.

[Crimson's Fanfare]
HP Drain rate -1 tick?
[01:17:450] - Delete the kiai section from here and start it by the second refrain (02:31:507).
00:23:621 (4,1) - Whistle.
00:57:735 (5,1) - Spacing.
01:49:936 (1) - The start: 01:49:678; the end: 01:51:564 of the spinner.
02:16:936 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:36:993 (6) - The silence sounds odd in this case. Add at least soft hitsounds.

[jericho2442's Fanfare]
[01:17:450] - Delete the kiai section from here and start it by the second refrain (02:31:507).
01:51:564 (1) - Useless new combo. Delete.
[02:54:090] - [02:57:236] - Needs a multiple timing section. Why the heck anyone didn't notice that? It will be something like:
Offset: 174 090
BPM: 133,50
But - I prefer putting a break/spinner in this part or contact someone better in timing songs :)
02:58:936 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing in this section is kinda sudden. It gives nothing except an annoying miss in the end of the song.
You should space it in the previous Distance Spacing value.

+star.
jericho2442
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jericho2442
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi there~

[jericho2442's Fanfare]

00:30:821 (1) - Add a repeat here
00:59:278 (4) - Set this straight (?)

The rest looks very good ^^
Mok
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Joined August 2009
Mok
Modded, anyway i'm not good on hitsounds T_T

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[tmokb]
01:32:535 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack please? o_o;

[Crimson]
02:18:478 (5) - New combo or farther away?

[jericho]
those repeat sliders at the early parts seem like they have random numbers of repeats and seems strange
mks_old
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Joined August 2009
mks_old
Starred ^_^
orioncomet
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Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Just some point out and some suggestion, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me. :P

[General]
- Delete "Lucky Star" from you Tag because It's already on Source
- Delete "anime" from you Tag because It will be on Genre
- Delete "Aya Hirano" from Tag because It's an Artist
- Delete "Crimson_SoulZ" from you Tag.. you don't need to add your name in tag
- Add Tag "tmokb93 Jericho2442" to all your diff
and make sure that all of your diff have the same tag
- Hitsound abit too loud for me

[Normal]
00:40:120 - timing selection seem useless?
00:40:291 - ^
00:43:548 - ^
00:43:720 - ^
01:02:063 - ^
01:02:234 - ^
01:05:491 - ^
01:05:663 - ^
about map seem fine for me

[Crimson's Fanfare]
01:51:932 - timing selection seem useless? I just ask for maybe you for got to change about volume or something else.
about map seem fine for me

[jericho2442's Fanfare]
seem fine for me

+ starr
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Comboburst can only be 500 pixels wide at most, so please shrink your comboburst slightly to fit that specification.

tmokb's Fanfare:
Combo mod:
00:19:850 (8,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 8 to make this the combos consistent with 00:17:107 (1) and 00:22:593 (1)
00:34:764 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:29:278 (3)
01:14:021 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to fit the lyrics better

Timing Section mod:
Make sure the timing sections line up with the end of the sliders and spinners because currently there are timing sections a few ms after the end of a slider, so the timing sections would not affect the slider

Crimson's Fanfare:
Normal mod:
02:18:478 (5) - the shortened spacing here is sort of disorienting

Combo mod:
00:07:335 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:10:078 (1)
00:21:393 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:24:136 (1)
Some of the combos later in the song do not fit the lyrics that well, so I'll leave it up to you to decide if you want to change it or not.

Timing section mod: (same warning I gave on tmokb's Fanfare's timing sections applies here)
02:45:229 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section that has the same hitsound settings as this one but has kiai

jericho2442's Fanfare:
Personally I believe the jumps at the end of the song are very random but I guess they are okay.

Combo mod:
01:30:478 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:24:993 (1)
01:32:878 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:27:050 (1)

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I guess my biggest complaint is the comboburst. Fix that and look at the few nazi things (combos and timing sections) and I'll probably protobubble the map.
jericho2442
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jericho2442

sesito71 wrote:

Hi there~

[jericho2442's Fanfare]

00:30:821 (1) - Add a repeat here no
00:59:278 (4) - Set this straight (?) its fine

The rest looks very good ^^

blissfulyoshi wrote:

jericho2442's Fanfare:
Personally I believe the jumps at the end of the song are very random but I guess they are okay.oooold map >_>

Combo mod:
01:30:478 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:24:993 (1) fixed
01:32:878 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:27:050 (1) fixed

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Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [jericho2442's Fanfare].osu
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Aya ~
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
[Overall]
You'll need an easier difficulty. This should have an [E] or an [N] difficulty.
Bad audio quality is bad. Bit rate should be at least 128kbps. Better mp3 at bottom of post.
When you replace it, change offset to 6,088 and resnap making sure they are in their correct places.

[Crimson's] (After mp3 and offset change)
02:18:431 (5) - Make this a new combo or move it farther from 4.
02:31:460 (1) - Set Kiai on top of the start of this note and probably fix all the other Kiai times in the other difficulties.

Download: Dondake Fanfare.mp3
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Hitsounds are too loud, imo.
- Delete the .osb file and Full Submit next time.

~Easy Fanfare~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty a bit.

00:06:430 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
00:16:201 (1) - Too fast spinner for an Easy, imo.
01:39:345 (1) - Make it finish at 01:42:088.

~tmokb's Fanfare~
- Hmmm... I'm not sure about combocolours :/ They can be hard to see sometimes, but meh... xD

01:14:707 (1) - Enlarge this spinner 1/4 (blue tick).
01:33:564 (4) - I'd move apart this circle, it can be confusing >:

~Crimson's Fanfare~
00:27:345 (2) - Fix spacing, compare with the spacing of the previous combo :<
00:45:859 (4) - Fix spacing too.
00:53:059 (3) - Spacing here too, compare the spacing on (3,4).
02:00:087 (4) - Fix spacing.
02:05:745 (2) - ^
02:18:430 (5) - ^

~jericho2442's Fanfare~
00:39:050 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Sincerely... This sounds horrible ;___;
00:44:535 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:28:764 (1) - Make it finish at 02:30:650.

Cool map, Crimson's Fanfare has a funny spacing, but I don't think it's a big deal, don't give up!! It will get ranked!! ^^
*star*
Behon
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Here since the beginning
Behon
Overall:
-Change offset to 6,108.

Easy:
-Fine, but a little spinner-heavy for my tastes.

tmokb:
-Why no sound effects after the 16-second mark?
-00:21:050 (1): Get rid of new combo.
-00:21:393 (2): Add new combo.
-01:32:536 (1,2,3,4): Spread these circles out instead of overlapping them all, it's too confusing.

Crimson:
-00:39:002 (5): Slider looks wonky. Make it smoother.
-Between 00:55:459 and 01:06:430 there are no sound effects. Add some.
-02:28:716 (3): Change to slider or spinner?

jericho2442:
-00:32:878 (5): Add a finish?
-00:44:536 (3 and so on): It's almost impossible to click all of these right. Cut them in half or make a repeating slider.
-00:46:421 (6 and so on): ^^^
-01:57:907 (12): Add a finish?
-02:45:221 (3): Change to slider or spinner.
-02:47:964 (6): ^^^
-02:50:707 (6): ^^^
Mok
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Joined August 2009
Mok
fixed up

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Crimson_SoulZ) [tmokb's Fanfare].osu
jericho2442
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jericho2442
srry no to everything posted about mine.

dont really like this old map of mine anymore anyway, but im staying true to the effect i was going for when i mapped it (even though it aint great ;p)
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Offset is different in jericho's than the other two difficulties. Change it to 6,108 like the others. Resnap afterwards.

[tmokb]
00:21:022 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:079 (1) to the rest of the map - Add hit sounds.
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
[tmokb's Fanfare]:
01:31:136 (3) - Can you fix the anchor points here?

Can you also remove the .osb?

Let's get this overwith.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Bubbled!
Starrodkirby86
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pant pant wheeze
Fuuko
486 posts
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Fuuko
One year later...

Sheesh. Now I can't call you Dondake Fanfare anymore. :<

But gratz on the ranking. :3
Sakura
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Sakura
What the heck is with the OD on tmokb's Fanfare :o is too LOW and not even HR and DT make it better T_T

Edit: tmokb's Fanfare has LESS OD THAN EASY
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