1. my eyes hurt cause of the red - neon pink contrast. x__x consider exchanging the pink colour, please.
   (or all of them, as they don't really fit the background, imo..) some suggestions -
   colours from the background

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 124,35,51
   Combo2 : 171,231,190
   Combo3 : 220,82,96
   Combo4 : 253,218,170

   green palette

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 112,134,60
   Combo2 : 228,252,180
   Combo3 : 150,199,120
   Combo4 : 247,221,121

   red palette

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 244,94,94
   Combo2 : 245,163,160
   Combo3 : 197,54,90
   Combo4 : 242,216,125

1. when you decide to change some pattern, keep in mind you can use the whole playfield! take a look here - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503319 - no objects in the corners for example >: if you let players move all over the playfield the diffs are more fun to play so try to make use of that ~ it also helps a lot with flow if you have more possibilities to place objects :3
2. 00:01:935 (3) - sliderend feels empty without hitsound, add a whistle here, too?
3. 00:08:903 (5,1,2) - aah, might be a little confusing for beginner players.. have some consideration for them cause there's no E diff and unstack 5 + 2, please ;w;
4. 00:13:548 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable flow, you could move 3 a little and curve 4 differently to improve that, screen - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503377
5. 00:30:967 (5) - replace this with a short slider? there's this loud beat on the red tick, should be mapped, imo ~
6. 00:33:677 (4) - and this with circle + short slider? matches way better with the vocals and is okay for Normal diff, I think
   
7. 00:41:806 (2) - feels a little off, I'd suggest to follow the beats on the red ticks before, then you can emphasize the downbeat better, too :3
   
8. 00:48:386 (3,4,5) - if you have to change the slidertick to make this fit the music you might as well map it differently to match. confusing players with hitsounds on the ticks isn't that nice anyway (imo), I'd go with this rhythm -
   
9. 01:03:483 (3,4) - looks a little crowded and movement is meh ;-; try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503465
   also, consider replacing 01:04:645 (5) - with a short slider that starts directly after 4 (on the red tick), cause of the loud beat there
10. 01:23:806 - missing an object here, the beat is so strong, you should emphasize it. you could eg replace 01:23:225 (4) - with circle + short slider on the second white tick
11. 01:41:806 (4) - move this to 170|333 and 01:42:580 (1) - to 126|242 + rotate it to match DS, flow's a little better that way
12. 01:53:419 (4) - roatte this by -45° (selection) for the same reason as ^
13. 02:02:709 (3) - I'm pretty sure a curved slider would look better with 02:01:935 (2) - and 02:04:064 (1) - yes I'm nitpicking.. >:
14. 02:35:999 (2,3) - could you move the tail of 3 further from 2? cause considering this is the easiest diff this might be too tricky ~ :c (confusing number and reverse arrow.. hitting the wrong end, you can avoid it so easily, so >-< ..)
15. 03:04:645 (3) - rotate by -40° (selection)? cause flow
16. 03:05:999 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack 1+3, for the same reasons as 00:08:903 (5,1,2) -. they even have the same combo colour, so it's even more confusing >-<

1. 00:01:935 (1,2,3) - I wonder why this is the only part where you ignore some beats.. except for 00:11:225 (1,2,3) - .. to make this a little more consistent I'd prefer if you do that at some other part, too, cause atm this feels a little out of place.. or at least add a circle at 00:03:290 - to fill the gap
2. 00:14:322 (5,6,7) - flow could be better, consider rotating 5 and making 6 parallel to that, then blanket it with 7 ~ I can't really explain this, here's a screen >: http://puu.sh/enq3v.jpg
3. 00:26:709 (5,6,7) - similar here, reverse 6 then reverse 7 -> better flow :3
4. 00:51:870 (7) - reverse this too? maybe you wanna move 00:51:483 (6,7,8) - a liiiittle closer if you do that, but just a little. plays fine owo
   same for 01:25:548 (5,6,7) -
5. 00:56:516 (2,4) - I don't really agree with the reverses, cause you're ignoring some clearly audiable blue ticks with them, try another rhythm? example:
   
6. 01:06:967 (5) - here too. ;-; more ignored beats, I think you should emphasize them more often!
7. 01:10:838 (8) - how about using three anti-jump circles here instead of a long slider? you use them pretty often so it might be more fun to play if you alternate this a little. and anti-jump cause the music gets a lot quiter, that'd match quite nicely, I think, screen: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503735
8. 01:47:999 (8) - consider ending this on the prev blue tick and adding another short slider before the nect object. cause the sound on 01:48:386 - has an echo, matches better with this rhythm:
   
9. 01:52:645 (3) - reverse?
10. 01:54:580 (8,1) - why don't you stack 8 above 1? improves flow a bit

1. 01:10:838 (4) - same suggestions as in Hard '__'
2. 01:33:677 (2) - reverse for better flow?
3. 02:53:612 (6,1) - I don't really agree with the jump here. the music gets quiter so it doesn't match the song, imo.. how about an an anti-jump instead?
4. 03:09:096 (1) - reverse for better flow

1. offset +6
2. combo color inconsistency

1. 00:00:387 (1) - whistle should be removed. i'm assuming you want to put whistles on each high pitch thing. right now some are on unnecessary ticks. if you were intending something else with whistles then none of these matter i suppose
2. 00:00:774 (2) - whistle
3. 00:00:967 (3) - remove whistle
4. 00:01:354 (4) - whistle
5. 00:01:741 (6,2,3) - would be better if not so close :/
6. 00:03:483 (1) - whistle on tail (well, should be adjusted with next suggestion anyway, so just be sure to put it in the right place when that's done)
7. 00:03:483 (1,2) - 00:04:064 (3,4) - ctrl+g on these would probably work better. you emphasize the high pitch sound which is on the tails of 1 and 3 at 00:05:419 (1) - 00:05:999 (1) - 00:10:064 (3) - 00:10:645 (3) - 00:11:225 (1) - 00:11:806 (3) - etc but not here. ctrl+ging these would make the sliders start on the high pitch
8. 00:12:386 (5) - could use a whistle, althouhg not as necessary as the others
9. 00:36:774 (1) - slowdown here seems pretty unnecessary. music doesn't really have any clear reason to do that (compared to your slowodwn at 00:46:838 (1) - at least) and you didn't slow down at 01:35:612 (3) - either, which is the same thing.
10. 00:37:548 (1,2) - would maek sense to lower spacing between these to indicate the start of a slower section. ideally 00:37:354 (2,1) - would also have higher spacing than those so it's clear that it's less intense. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2854090
11. 00:45:677 (1) - pretty sure the new combo here is unnecessary.
12. 00:48:967 (2) - head and reverse should not have claps
13. 00:49:354 (2) - remove clap
14. 00:59:612 (3) - remove clap on tail
15. 01:03:483 (4) - clap
16. 01:06:774 (5) - should not have a clap
17. 01:18:967 (5) - whistle
18. 01:19:161 (6) - remove whistle
19. 01:19:354 (1) - whistle
20. 01:22:645 (2) - whistle is necessary here tho
21. 01:33:677 (2) - remove clap on tail
22. 01:34:451 (4) - clap
23. 01:43:741 (4) - clap on head
24. 01:47:225 (6) - remove clap
25. 00:48:193 (5) - would be way nicer if you could click the place where this slider currently ends. snare hit so strong i am punching my keyboard but there's nothing to punch becuase you have no circle there.
26. 01:46:451 (3,4) - would really consider ctrl+g cuz pretty much same reason as ^
27. 02:22:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - not understanding your comboing method here. 02:22:838 (1) - is on the start of a measure, 02:25:161 (1) - is on the vocal, 02:26:709 (1) - vocal, 02:29:032 (1) - downbeat (and htis combo is 2 measures long, while everything else is 1). just comboing on every downbeat would be fine. if you want to get fancy with vocals, do it more accurately
28. 02:24:386 (5) - clap on tail
29. 02:27:677 (2) - clap
30. 02:39:870 (4) - missing a new combo
31. 02:40:645 (1) - new combo not really necessary. sv change is readable enough without it since it's not an extreme change
32. 02:41:225 (1) - should not have a finish
33. 02:42:967 (1) - tail clap
34. 02:48:967 (1) - tail clap
35. 02:53:419 (5,6) - would sound way better as
36. 03:02:516 (4) - remove clap
37. 03:09:870 (3,4,5) - claps
38. 03:11:419 (3,4,5) - claps
39. 03:21:096 (2) - remove clap
40. 03:23:032 (5) - missing a new combo

1. sections at 00:00:387 (1) - and 01:17:806 (1) - are essentially the same thing. should have same comboing pattern (1 measure or 2 measures)
2. 00:03:483 (1,2,3) - 00:08:128 (1) - 00:09:290 (4) - pretty much same as insane. would be nice to have the whistle accents (which are placed wrongly right now lol) to be on clickable objects, not slidertails. 00:09:677 (1,2) - could be acceptable to keep if you wanted tho for reasons. changing them would definitely not be bad tho
3. 01:20:903 (1,2,3) - would really be nice to have a rhythm that covers the unique sounds that are only in this measure :/ current rhythm pretty much treats them like they're nonexistent
4. 01:47:999 (8) - multirepeats kind of lame unless they're connected to the next object via 1/4 (this sort of thing). in this case, using this rhythm would be more comfortable. same sort of thing as 03:02:903 (6,7) - although completely different parts in the music. still tho yea
5. 02:41:225 (1) - seems really out of place when you've got all of these 02:44:516 (1) - 02:47:612 (1) - 02:50:709 (1) - emphasizing the finish thing. doing that here as well would be good... or emphasizing the vocal for all of them would work as you did in insane. if you go with the first option, be sure to add finishes after hitsound copying cuz insane rhythm breaks that
6. 02:52:645 (5,6,7,8) - stack stuff looks like balls ingame. placing 02:53:419 (8,9,1) - more to the right would be fine

1. 01:20:903 (1,2) - for reasons you can figure out, a rhythm like this would be nice
2. 02:41:225 (1) - same as hard for rhythm and same as insane for hitsounds
3. 02:44:128 (5,1) - spacing
4. 02:46:064 (3) - this kind of slidershape may work for larger sliders, but at this size it just looks like handicapped curve. straight or regular curve >
5. 02:48:774 - 02:50:322 (5) - these two places are pretty much the same thing musically, so filling the gap on the first one or creating a gap on the second one would be good. needs to be consistent. preferrably you'd add a circle in the first one
6. for the sake of spread, gonna say to convert all of these 1/1 sliders to this rhythm. right now rhythms in normal are super basic compared to those in hard, so anything to buff it up would be nice:
   00:37:548 (1) - 00:39:096 (4) - 00:43:741 (1) - 00:45:290 (3) - 01:36:386 (1) - 01:37:935 (4) - 01:42:580 (1) - 01:44:128 (3) -
7. same reason; converting these 2/1 sliders to 1/1 + circle:
   00:25:161 (1) - 00:34:451 (1) - 02:27:483 (3) -
8. 00:01:935 (3) - and last spread thing: would be better with more 1/2 like this. 00:11:225 (3,4,5) - is same thing

1. 00:00:393 (1,2,3,4) - whistles 1 and 3 should be removed and 2 and 4 should have whistles. other diffs have them in the right places
2. 00:36:780 (1) - nc not necessary anymore
3. 00:58:844 (7) - clap. applies to all diffs

1. 01:37:554 (4,1,2) - placement of stuff here could be pretty confusing. pointing 1 to the left would be a lot less weird

appleeaterx wrote:

i am also a bit confused, but he launched his website kashitaro.com where you can see his logo + the copyright text at the bottom of the website, though you are right since quite a few sources use 'Ito Kashitaro' as well, asked someone to check it though just to be sure

1. I don't like your color scheme, some colors look super similar. I would advise you use only three combo colors : pink, green and , yellow. They fit with the background more.

1. 00:39:102 (5,6) - Maybe just extend 5 it? I find this rhythm unnecessary imo.
2. 01:37:941 (1,2) - ^ and remove nc here, or add to above , they're inconsistent.

1. 03:17:425 (2) - I would move this somewhere else more visible, its kinda hard to see because notes don't fade away fast enough.