1. you can add a fountain on your kiai. from 01:01:548 - to 01:01:935 - (same with the rest) and some others on the 3er kiai maybe
2. maybe sort your settings out 2 by 2? hard hp od 6 and insane hp od 7, cuz it's very hard to die since it isn't that hard xd

1. aimod: 01:11:606 - kiai isn't snapped or smth
3. 00:24:387 (4) - this can be just 2 circles as u did 00:18:193 (4,5) - . also would make the finish more empathized
4. i was trying to find a pattern or something for those 1/2 reversed on that section, but they seem just random to me >< some places where you could add one, you didn't and others places where you did, they could just been ignored..dunno
5. 00:48:386 - add whistle? cuz the lack of hitsounds
6. 00:57:483 (4) - maybe rotate it like 35° or smth. so 00:55:935 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't look that ugly
7. 00:58:838 - add circle to cover the clap as you've been doing(? or make 00:58:451 (5) - 1/1 slider maybe
8. 01:10:451 (4,5) - try extending the slider? so 01:11:612 (1) - have more impact as the last note >http://puu.sh/cILiq/af3efa16c3.jpg
9. 01:37:548 (3,5) - you can still see the overlap (the score thing) try to avoid overlap to make it more clean?
10. 01:44:128 (3) - rotate like 90°? 01:44:128 (3,4,1) - this flow is badimo
11. 02:10:645 (1,1) - i don't remember the recovery time thing right now, but on lower diffs you need like 1 measure recovery time after a spinner, dunno if that apply to a spinner - spinner lol
12. 02:50:322 - add note, same as b4 (otherwise check DS.. also the flow isn't too nice)
13. 02:52:645 (4,5) - (4) can be reversed, more impact and stuff
14. 03:05:999 (1,2,3) - this looks tricky and hard to read, move 2 more up or something like that dnno
15. this diff could've some 2/1 spaces, and the aesthetics can be improved on some parts.. maybe it's just me

1. plain ar7 is better for some patterns, like 00:04:451 (4,5,6,7,8) - where requieres to be fast
2. your nc'ng has severals inconsistencies. but don't want to full this of nc stuffs and maybe it's just me dunno. Check them anyways
3. as you didn't map 00:03:290 - (which is fine to me) you shouldn't map similars parts like 00:06:386 -
4. 00:46:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sounds kinda overmapped (it isn't, but sounds like that for a hard) try something like this maybe?>http://puu.sh/cIOnC/cef8ad4ff1.jpg
5. 00:49:548 (5,1) - DS?
6. 01:11:612 - would be much better if this note is clickable
7. 01:33:870 - this space is so weird.. you mapped almost every 1/2, why is it on blank? (although i like it, cuz despite it's a hard, it should have some spaces like this. you should try to find some others similars places imo..)
8. 02:53:419 (8,9,1) - you can try some zig zag pattern here, cuz the autostack make it looks weird- smth like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2218712

1. 00:01:354 (4,5) - make them closer? its weird to play since 00:00:967 (3,4,5) - these use the same line
2. 01:11:612 - make it clickable? also it's the same as hard, so at least a change here would be nice
3. 03:10:451 (7,1) - this destroy all the beauty your map has ;(
4. jumps seem just random to me most of the time, same with your whistles.. but im not good with that, so ye.. it's fun tho <3

1. parts like 01:54:774 (1,2,3,4,1) in the chorus are less mapped than the non chorus parts which is a bit odd, for the example i mentioned a note at 01:56:128 right before the slider would make the rhythm more complex + match with the drums in the bg
2. 00:37:548 - the new verse begins at the end of your slider and i don't think that's the best way to emphasize it
3. 00:55:935 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved, the slider is a little too curved
4. 01:27:096 (1) - here i think the blanket can be improved by curving the slider a tiny bit more
5. 01:35:612 (4) - same thing about the vocal starting at the slider end

1. 01:30:193 (1) - blanket this better with 01:29:999 (10)
2. 02:32:903 (3,4) - blanket can be improved here, kind of like this
3. 02:47:032 (7) - a tad too close to the slider, this is just an appearance thing though
4. 02:51:483 (3,4,5) - make the spacing between these sliders more even

1. 00:49:396 - i think your buildup to the chorus could be better, every time i hear that type of drumming i think about 1/4 sliders so you can try those. i don't really know how to explain it but the first chorus pretty much plays like the non chorus parts and i think you could make it stronger somehow
2. 01:01:935 (8) - is this supposed to be out of line with the rest of the stream?
3. 01:30:193 (1,3) - make these more curved, right now they're almost straight and a more curved shape would emphasize vocals better
4. 01:52:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel like this should look more evenly spaced since you're going for a star pattern
5. 02:00:774 (8) - is this supposed to be out of line too?
6. 02:05:806 (1) - this is a pretty strong part in the vocal imo, you could use sliders here instead of just a repeat slider
7. 02:51:483 (4,5) - these don't have the same spacing as things like 02:50:903 (2,3) right before it

1. Personally I would end the kiai at 01:10:838 - and 02:09:677 -. Then I would add a burst kiai at 02:10:451 (1) - to show emphasis for the switch in instrumental.
2. 02:41:225 - Add a burst kiai here?
3. You may also want a burst kiai on 03:24:580 - as there is a 2nd emphasis here (compared to the other Chorus).

1. 00:55:935 (1,2) - Not very fond of the blanket here. Try a different pattern instead. An example is below.
   
   
   ~
2. 01:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - This is really cool! (:
3. 01:48:387 (4) -, 01:51:483 (5) -, 01:54:580 (4) - Sometimes I do not hear the beat in these circles. Maybe use a custom hitsound and/or increase the volume to express it? Otherwise it feels like overmapping.

1. 01:06:193 (3) - Consider curving this slider as the previous 01:05:806 (2) - is a straight slider.
2. 02:04:064 (1,4) - The Circle 4 shouldn't cover one of the heads of Slider 1, unless it is being stacked. Please alternate the pattern so that Circle 4 is in the center of Slider 1.
3. 02:32:903 (3,4,5) - If possible, improve the blanket here.
4. 02:37:548 (5,1) - It would be nice if you could blanket here as well.

1. 01:05:225 (1,3) - Stack the slider ends properly to avoid a bug on larger displays.

1. Inconsistency in kiai times. Guideline:
   

   Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.

   From http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
2. Combo color1 too pale and hard to see on background.
   

1. Guide 1 - Making common sliders neat - t/208596
2. Guide 2 - Making delicious sliders - t/37194
3. Guide 3 - Analyzing flow in beatmaps - t/86329&start=0

1. Since this is easiest difficulty in mapset I recommend to set HP AR OD 3/4/3
2. 00:01:935 (3,1) - This sliders interact really bad with each other. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) them or making good flow (guide_3) between them.
3. ^ Similar problems list:
   00:04:257 (2,3,4,5) // 00:09:677 (1,2,3,4) // 00:30:580 (4,1) // 00:33:677 (4,1) Example (flow): http://puu.sh/cUn2g/e8e2b3d871.jpg // 00:45:290 (3,4) // 00:48:387 (3,4) // 01:02:128 (1,2) // 01:09:290 (2,3,4) // 02:24:387 (3,4)
4. From 00:03:483 (1) - to 00:15:096 (4) - flow (guide_3) in this part follows only 1 direction - anticlockwise, way too monotonous and boring to play. It would be good to alternate this in some parts.
5. From 00:00:387 (1) - to 00:12:386 (5) - Inconsistent hitsounds while music is not changing.
6. 00:21:290 (4,1,2) - This pattern transfer is poorly done. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) or making good transfer flow (guide_3) or making symmetrical transfer. Example: http://puu.sh/cUmTY/d5a2eee3a3.jpg
7. ^ Similar problems list:
   02:02:709 (3,4) Example (flow): http://puu.sh/cUnz8/6e81561d90.jpg
8. 00:57:290 (3,4) - This can use more smoothly movement.
9. 00:59:032 (1) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use guide_1 or guide_2 if you want vary slider shapes but not sure about quality of outcome.
10. ^ Similar problems list:
    01:34:838 (3) // 01:35:612 (4) // 02:32:128 (1) // 03:24:580 (1)
11. 01:02:128 (1,3) - Overlaps. You should avoid using such overlaps for easy or normal. This is confusing and unclear for newbie players, especially because this is lowest difficulty in mapset.
12. 01:17:806 (1) - NC not necessary here
13. Since this normal is lowest difficulty in mapset it would be good to make Distance Snap a bit more to allow player clearly see objects.
    

    Adjust the distance snap multiplier so that hit circles only one beat apart don't overlap each other. New players often find hit circles that overlap each other like that hard to read. Most of the time, just having them next to each other without overlapping is good enough.

    From http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
    

1. 00:03:483 (1,2,3) - This pattern interact really bad. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) or making good flow (guide_3). Example: http://puu.sh/cUoa0/41d6e43e65.jpg
2. ^ Similar problems list:
   00:08:516 (2,3,4) // 00:09:677 (1,2,3) Example (parallel): http://puu.sh/cUoeX/a50f54366f.jpg // 00:14:709 (6,7) // 03:11:999 (8,1) // 03:19:354 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:13:548 (3) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use guide_1 or guide_2 if you want vary slider shapes but not sure about quality of outcome.
4. ^ Similar problems list:
   00:15:870 (1) // 00:25:161 (1) // 02:00:967 (1) // 02:02:709 (6) // 02:09:677 (9) // 03:15:290 (1) // 03:27:096 (8) -
5. 00:20:516 (5,6,7) - This sliders interact really bad with each other. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) them or making good flow (guide_3) between them.
6. ^ Similar problems list:
   00:47:612 (3,4) // 01:09:870 (5,8) Example: http://puu.sh/cUoz8/8bd5f788d8.jpg // 02:47:999 (2,3,4) // 02:51:483 (3,4,5) Example: http://puu.sh/cUoNg/cb444fc291.jpg
7. From 00:12:774 (1) - to 00:36:774 (3) - flow (guide_3) in this part a bit monotonous following only clockwise or anticlockwise, way too boring to play. It would be good to alternate this in some parts.
8. 01:24:580 (2,3,4) - This pattern transfer is poorly done. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) or making good transfer flow (guide_3) or making symmetrical transfer. Example: http://puu.sh/cUoFt/9aa3bd4f68.jpg
9. Watch out your general flow, sometimes it's way to repeating.

1. 00:16:451 (2,3,4) - This pattern interact really bad. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) or making good flow (guide_3). Example1: http://puu.sh/cUp4h/68847a0a5d.jpg Example2: http://puu.sh/cUp5X/f058157cb6.jpg
2. 00:36:774 (1) - This slider is extended for no reason.
   01:05:225 (1,2) - This sliders interact really bad with each other. This can be fixed by blanketing (guide_1) them or making good flow (guide_3) between them. Example: http://puu.sh/cUpeK/b216df32f4.jpg
3. ^ Similar problems list:
   01:57:870 (1,2) // 02:22:451 (2,1) Example: http://puu.sh/cUpm2/12836a6d4d.jpg // 03:21:483 (1,2) -
4. 01:10:838 (4) - Slider shape have questionable quality. You can use guide_1 or guide_2 if you want vary slider shapes but not sure about quality of outcome.
5. ^ Similar problems list:
   02:09:677 (4) // 02:38:322 (1) // 03:15:290 (1) // 03:27:096 (8) -
6. Good (:

1. All clean.

1. 01:03:483 (3,4) - Switch these/ ctrl+g to follow the vocal better.
2. 01:52:645 (2,3) - Needs to be more parallel.
3. 02:31:354 (5) - Clap
4. 02:36:774 (3) - Clap on reverse arrow
5. 02:37:548 (4,1) - Could need better blanket if ever intended: http://puu.sh/dqO2R/295e50601e.jpg
6. 02:39:870 (3) - The gap to the next object feels a bit weird,
7. Side note: I'll point out some sections where i think it's good to switch up slider with circles, because you could need better emphasis on the strong beats here:
   00:07:354 (2,3,4) - the 3rd one 00:22:064 (1) - 01:43:354 (2) -
8. Fine, though I somehow have a problem with that uneven circle slider ratio. Too many sliders make a map considerably weak... well, maybe it's just me who thinks so.

1. 00:01:935 (1,2,3) - and 00:08:128 (1,2,3,4) - It feels really strange to have a sudden increase in note density at the latter section, since both these rhythms sound actually the same. Mind lowering the density here? http://puu.sh/dqRFj/ecc70ff7d6.jpg
2. 00:35:032 (2) - Urgh, this sounds pretty unnatural to me. Switch this off with circle+slider?
3. 02:35:999 (3,4,5) - Uhm, the spacing here is really weird. Please fix.
4. 02:52:645 (5,6,7) - Having a sudden triple in this diff feels strange, as there hasn't been any other one in this map.
   There isn't (or at least shouldn't) be any problem with the transition to the Insane, as it doesn't heavily rely on 1/4 beats either (and you have some 1/4 through your backsliders already).
5. Fine, it's a bit plain in terms of flow as there's pretty much no usage of jumps and DS seems to be on at all times. I'd advise you to put some jumps in here, but it would pretty much mess up the current spread I guess.
   Otherwise still entertaining.

1. 00:09:483 - to 00:11:225 - , I don't really understand the logic behind your NCing here. ><
2. 00:23:612 (3) - Set NC here to come back to your usual 'NC per stanza' rule?
3. 00:34:838 (2,3) - Preference: I would ctrl+g each slider seperate, is more natural to play.
4. Delete the following NC as they are just not needed: 00:37:935 (1) - | 00:45:677 (1) - | 01:36:774 (1) - | 01:38:322 (1) - | 02:23:612 (1) -, 02:25:935 (1) - and 02:27:677 (1) - , set one on 02:25:161 (7) - and 02:26:709 (4) - instead. |
5. 00:39:483 (3,1) - Not sure if you're trying to overlay 1 on 3 here, but the current form looks a bit weird.
6. 00:41:612 (2,3,4) - flows a bit bad because of the break, mind fixing it up a bit? http://puu.sh/drtOI/aeb94fb9d4.jpg
7. 01:03:483 (4,5,1) - 1.0x feels pretty small at this place and slowed movement too much for me here, 1.1x feels better.
8. 01:06:774 (5,1,2,3) - How about the following arrangement for better aesthetics and flow: http://puu.sh/drtXY/533d97e378.jpg
9. 01:41:806 (3) - Ctrl+g?
10. 01:45:096 (2,3,4,1) - Could be an actual diamond if you put slider 1 a bit more to the left.
11. 01:52:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This star looks pretty broken right now, you could use the 'Create polygon circles...' function or fix it manually.
12. 01:54:386 (2,3) - Ctrl+g these? This makes for a much more natural, the angular jumps feel unnecessary here.
13. 02:36:580 (5,1) - NC on 5 already.
14. 03:13:741 (5) - NC
15. This diff is pretty neat in terms of gameplay. Not sure how much of my mod you apply, most of it is just beautification since it looks pretty much ready to go for me already.

appleeaterx wrote:

TAKE ME TO A NICO EVENT PLS

1. 00:18:580 (5) - I think you can replace this circle with a slider that extended to 00:18:774 -, since that drum on 00:18:774 - is quite loud to be ignored imo. And also making the rhythm doesn't stick with 1/1 beat is also nice for this part :3
2. 00:20:516 (3,4,1) - Consider to make the sliders a bit more curvy so that it could blanket 00:22:064 (1) - better? The current one looked really off imo, it's like you only blanketed it halfway :< So yeah, only a BIT of arranging should do, here try doing this
   SPOILER

   

   220,68,20516,2,0,P|164:68|116:104,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   196,168,21290,2,0,P|152:188|116:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   216,272,22064,5,2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:30:580 (4,1) - As in 00:18:580 (5) -, but you've got to either change (4) to circle, or just add another circle on 00:31:161 - either way should works :3
4. 01:17:806 (1,2,3) - Consider arranging these notes to be like this?
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/dzI4f/3f112346d0.jpg[/img
   ] The current straight flow from (2) until (4) isn't really good imo, and also it should've looked prettier this way :b

1. 00:05:032 (7,8) - eh I feel that there's a bit too much circle here. Considering this is still the beginning part of the song, I think making it calmer would make it plays nicer imo, so yeah, consider changing these 2 circles to a single slider instead
2. 01:10:451 (6,7,8) - Didn't really fond of the sharp flow here. It kinda kills the nice flow in the kiai :< You can make it easier to reach (8) if it were bend straight horizontally instead of the current shifted position, though if you want to keep it vertical, this pattern is nice too(also I'm not really fond of (8)'s shape, it looked a bit not neat lol, try to remove the white pointand keep the red dot) owo
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:17:612 (2) - I don't really like how the triplet drum here is ignored, seeing as how you did good on 01:01:741 (8) -, I don't see why this note should be different ;< So yeah, since there aren't any triplet on the rest of the map, just use a kick slider here
4. 01:23:612 (6) - Consider changing this slider to 2 circles instead? It should be able to emphasize the loud drum on the background better :3
5. 02:32:903 (3) - I honestly didn't really see where this slider would end, partly due to how it shaped and also how the rhythm on 02:29:806 (3) - played. So yeah, try to either change the rhythm a bit or just the shape, it'll help the readability by much really
6. 02:53:128 (6,7) - Isn't really big, but due to how there aren't any triplet that's stacked on the tail like this, it may kinda surprise the players who doesn't expect it and will click them too early. So yeah, unstacking them should work too owo
7. 03:26:128 (5,8) - As in I've mentioned on the insane, this part isn't really well suited if you map the vocal, though the decision's yours :3

1. 00:08:322 (1,3) - Considering how you always used a jump for the higher pitch tone on this part (like 00:01:935 (1) - and 00:02:516 (1) - for instance), I find it a bit weird for these two sliders to have a normal DS, where they should also have a jump, especially since they did come later than the examples I have mentioned, they kinda kills the flow :< So yeah, I think it'd be best if you do put a bit more distances between the notes here; either arranging for a new pattern, or you can just try to ctrl g the sliders, so that the next circle will face the head instead of the tail, do it for the both of the sliders. The flow should've be better this way imo :3
2. 00:11:806 (3) - Consider to also ctrl g this one? Same reason as above, about the jump :3
   00:37:161 - The way how 00:36:774 (1) - covers the loud drum here isn't really good imo. Beside, since you've mostly followed the vocal or drum up until the previous note on 00:36:386 (3) -, I really expected this note to only extend until 00:37:161 -, to follow the drum :< So yeah, consider to shorten this slider up to until this point and add another circle on 00:37:354 -, the rhythm should looked like this then
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:42:580 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the rhythm for this part imo, it doesn't feel to follow anything except the main beat while there are loud unique instrument in the background :< Try using this rhythm
   SPOILER

   
   This way, the rhythm will stick closer to the vocal, where you followed on the previous sliders, it will also emphasize the calm part here, which fits nicely imo
4. 00:45:677 (3,4,5,6) - eh the sharp flow here isn't really good when played imo, especially from (3) to (4), and also fro (6) to 00:46:838 (1) - . Try ctrl g on a few of them so that the flow become like this
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:46:838 (1) - A jump really should be in place here imo, with how loud the cymbal is, it also helped to read the SV change better :3 Try using this pattern too, as I find the shape is also isn't too shabby lol
   SPOILER

   
   . If you're following the above, here's a code to help you figure things better :3
   

   352,288,45677,2,0,P|276:284|208:288,1,142.500005435944,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   52,288,46257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   136,232,46451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   136,344,46645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   80,160,46838,6,0,P|72:124|84:88,1,71.2500027179719,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   164,48,47225,1,0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:51:290 (6) - The flow here isn't really good, the distance between these 4 notes is a bit too close, making the cursor movement a bit restricted :< I don't really want to make you change the whole pattern, so moving (6) to somwehere else should be ideal since it holds the biggest flaws atm. try moving it to somewhere around x272/y196 to make a similar flow as in 00:50:709 (3,4) -, moving the cursor to the left is also better then moving it right like the current one imo, as the flow won't become as restrictive :3
7. 00:53:806 (3,4,5,6,1) - uh I kinda see what you're trying to do here, but the flow is not that good really x.x You should've be able to come up with something better by now, I'll see what I can come up with if you want tho :3
8. 01:04:838 (2) - This note is a bit too far away imo, considering how it doesn't really emphasize any powerful beat on the music, also the way it's positioned is a bit too parallel with the previous slider, which make the jump all the more uncomfortable to reach :< So ywah, consider moving this a bit closer and a preferably bit down, x320/y292 should do :3
9. 01:23:806 (8) - Moving it up instead of down should make the flow better imo, it'll also help emphasize the stretching vocal on the next slider better since the pitch is somewhat lower, try somewhere around x56/y72
10. 01:40:451 (5,6) - ctrl g here, the jump to 01:40:838 (1) - should be played better this way, also the lack of jump here feels a bit empty compared to other parts, like in the previous sliders for instance
11. 01:47:032 (5) - This slider covers a loud drum (and a stanza on top of that) on 01:47:225 -, which plays awkward when ignored like this. So yeah, consider changing this to a circle + 1/2 slider instead, it should be fine that way
12. 01:54:774 (1) - The flow here isn't really good imo, since (1) is only a bit lower than 01:54:386 (2) -, either make em stacked perfectly, or move (1) further down, I prefer the later though since the pattern won't be nice if you stack them :3 Try x340/y344 or somewhere around that, don't forget to arrange 01:55:548 (3,4,5) - too :3
13. 01:55:935 (6,7) - Consider ctrl g here? It will create the same effect as in 01:57:483 (6,7) - where the next slider will produce a jump, which I think fits nicely imo owo
14. 03:13:548 (4) - The jump should be to 03:13:741 (1) - instead of this one imo. Consider moving this one closer to 03:13:161 (3) -, so that (1) will have a greater effect with the jump
15. 03:19:935 (6) - eh This note looked a bit off imo, try to move it so that it's placed exactly between (4) and (5), x300/y204 should work
16. 03:27:096 (4) - I know you're following vocal for this one, but the drum on 03:27:290 - is a bit too loud to be ignored imo :< Consider mapping that beat as well, since it's Insane

1. my eyes hurt cause of the red - neon pink contrast. x__x consider exchanging the pink colour, please.
   (or all of them, as they don't really fit the background, imo..) some suggestions -
   colours from the background

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 124,35,51
   Combo2 : 171,231,190
   Combo3 : 220,82,96
   Combo4 : 253,218,170

   green palette

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 112,134,60
   Combo2 : 228,252,180
   Combo3 : 150,199,120
   Combo4 : 247,221,121

   red palette

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 244,94,94
   Combo2 : 245,163,160
   Combo3 : 197,54,90
   Combo4 : 242,216,125

1. when you decide to change some pattern, keep in mind you can use the whole playfield! take a look here - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503319 - no objects in the corners for example >: if you let players move all over the playfield the diffs are more fun to play so try to make use of that ~ it also helps a lot with flow if you have more possibilities to place objects :3
2. 00:01:935 (3) - sliderend feels empty without hitsound, add a whistle here, too?
3. 00:08:903 (5,1,2) - aah, might be a little confusing for beginner players.. have some consideration for them cause there's no E diff and unstack 5 + 2, please ;w;
4. 00:13:548 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable flow, you could move 3 a little and curve 4 differently to improve that, screen - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503377
5. 00:30:967 (5) - replace this with a short slider? there's this loud beat on the red tick, should be mapped, imo ~
6. 00:33:677 (4) - and this with circle + short slider? matches way better with the vocals and is okay for Normal diff, I think
   
7. 00:41:806 (2) - feels a little off, I'd suggest to follow the beats on the red ticks before, then you can emphasize the downbeat better, too :3
   
8. 00:48:386 (3,4,5) - if you have to change the slidertick to make this fit the music you might as well map it differently to match. confusing players with hitsounds on the ticks isn't that nice anyway (imo), I'd go with this rhythm -
   
9. 01:03:483 (3,4) - looks a little crowded and movement is meh ;-; try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503465
   also, consider replacing 01:04:645 (5) - with a short slider that starts directly after 4 (on the red tick), cause of the loud beat there
10. 01:23:806 - missing an object here, the beat is so strong, you should emphasize it. you could eg replace 01:23:225 (4) - with circle + short slider on the second white tick
11. 01:41:806 (4) - move this to 170|333 and 01:42:580 (1) - to 126|242 + rotate it to match DS, flow's a little better that way
12. 01:53:419 (4) - roatte this by -45° (selection) for the same reason as ^
13. 02:02:709 (3) - I'm pretty sure a curved slider would look better with 02:01:935 (2) - and 02:04:064 (1) - yes I'm nitpicking.. >:
14. 02:35:999 (2,3) - could you move the tail of 3 further from 2? cause considering this is the easiest diff this might be too tricky ~ :c (confusing number and reverse arrow.. hitting the wrong end, you can avoid it so easily, so >-< ..)
15. 03:04:645 (3) - rotate by -40° (selection)? cause flow
16. 03:05:999 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack 1+3, for the same reasons as 00:08:903 (5,1,2) -. they even have the same combo colour, so it's even more confusing >-<

1. 00:01:935 (1,2,3) - I wonder why this is the only part where you ignore some beats.. except for 00:11:225 (1,2,3) - .. to make this a little more consistent I'd prefer if you do that at some other part, too, cause atm this feels a little out of place.. or at least add a circle at 00:03:290 - to fill the gap
2. 00:14:322 (5,6,7) - flow could be better, consider rotating 5 and making 6 parallel to that, then blanket it with 7 ~ I can't really explain this, here's a screen >: http://puu.sh/enq3v.jpg
3. 00:26:709 (5,6,7) - similar here, reverse 6 then reverse 7 -> better flow :3
4. 00:51:870 (7) - reverse this too? maybe you wanna move 00:51:483 (6,7,8) - a liiiittle closer if you do that, but just a little. plays fine owo
   same for 01:25:548 (5,6,7) -
5. 00:56:516 (2,4) - I don't really agree with the reverses, cause you're ignoring some clearly audiable blue ticks with them, try another rhythm? example:
   
6. 01:06:967 (5) - here too. ;-; more ignored beats, I think you should emphasize them more often!
7. 01:10:838 (8) - how about using three anti-jump circles here instead of a long slider? you use them pretty often so it might be more fun to play if you alternate this a little. and anti-jump cause the music gets a lot quiter, that'd match quite nicely, I think, screen: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2503735
8. 01:47:999 (8) - consider ending this on the prev blue tick and adding another short slider before the nect object. cause the sound on 01:48:386 - has an echo, matches better with this rhythm:
   
9. 01:52:645 (3) - reverse?
10. 01:54:580 (8,1) - why don't you stack 8 above 1? improves flow a bit

1. 01:10:838 (4) - same suggestions as in Hard '__'
2. 01:33:677 (2) - reverse for better flow?
3. 02:53:612 (6,1) - I don't really agree with the jump here. the music gets quiter so it doesn't match the song, imo.. how about an an anti-jump instead?
4. 03:09:096 (1) - reverse for better flow

1. offset +6
2. combo color inconsistency

1. 00:00:387 (1) - whistle should be removed. i'm assuming you want to put whistles on each high pitch thing. right now some are on unnecessary ticks. if you were intending something else with whistles then none of these matter i suppose
2. 00:00:774 (2) - whistle
3. 00:00:967 (3) - remove whistle
4. 00:01:354 (4) - whistle
5. 00:01:741 (6,2,3) - would be better if not so close :/
6. 00:03:483 (1) - whistle on tail (well, should be adjusted with next suggestion anyway, so just be sure to put it in the right place when that's done)
7. 00:03:483 (1,2) - 00:04:064 (3,4) - ctrl+g on these would probably work better. you emphasize the high pitch sound which is on the tails of 1 and 3 at 00:05:419 (1) - 00:05:999 (1) - 00:10:064 (3) - 00:10:645 (3) - 00:11:225 (1) - 00:11:806 (3) - etc but not here. ctrl+ging these would make the sliders start on the high pitch
8. 00:12:386 (5) - could use a whistle, althouhg not as necessary as the others
9. 00:36:774 (1) - slowdown here seems pretty unnecessary. music doesn't really have any clear reason to do that (compared to your slowodwn at 00:46:838 (1) - at least) and you didn't slow down at 01:35:612 (3) - either, which is the same thing.
10. 00:37:548 (1,2) - would maek sense to lower spacing between these to indicate the start of a slower section. ideally 00:37:354 (2,1) - would also have higher spacing than those so it's clear that it's less intense. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2854090
11. 00:45:677 (1) - pretty sure the new combo here is unnecessary.
12. 00:48:967 (2) - head and reverse should not have claps
13. 00:49:354 (2) - remove clap
14. 00:59:612 (3) - remove clap on tail
15. 01:03:483 (4) - clap
16. 01:06:774 (5) - should not have a clap
17. 01:18:967 (5) - whistle
18. 01:19:161 (6) - remove whistle
19. 01:19:354 (1) - whistle
20. 01:22:645 (2) - whistle is necessary here tho
21. 01:33:677 (2) - remove clap on tail
22. 01:34:451 (4) - clap
23. 01:43:741 (4) - clap on head
24. 01:47:225 (6) - remove clap
25. 00:48:193 (5) - would be way nicer if you could click the place where this slider currently ends. snare hit so strong i am punching my keyboard but there's nothing to punch becuase you have no circle there.
26. 01:46:451 (3,4) - would really consider ctrl+g cuz pretty much same reason as ^
27. 02:22:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - not understanding your comboing method here. 02:22:838 (1) - is on the start of a measure, 02:25:161 (1) - is on the vocal, 02:26:709 (1) - vocal, 02:29:032 (1) - downbeat (and htis combo is 2 measures long, while everything else is 1). just comboing on every downbeat would be fine. if you want to get fancy with vocals, do it more accurately
28. 02:24:386 (5) - clap on tail
29. 02:27:677 (2) - clap
30. 02:39:870 (4) - missing a new combo
31. 02:40:645 (1) - new combo not really necessary. sv change is readable enough without it since it's not an extreme change
32. 02:41:225 (1) - should not have a finish
33. 02:42:967 (1) - tail clap
34. 02:48:967 (1) - tail clap
35. 02:53:419 (5,6) - would sound way better as
36. 03:02:516 (4) - remove clap
37. 03:09:870 (3,4,5) - claps
38. 03:11:419 (3,4,5) - claps
39. 03:21:096 (2) - remove clap
40. 03:23:032 (5) - missing a new combo

1. sections at 00:00:387 (1) - and 01:17:806 (1) - are essentially the same thing. should have same comboing pattern (1 measure or 2 measures)
2. 00:03:483 (1,2,3) - 00:08:128 (1) - 00:09:290 (4) - pretty much same as insane. would be nice to have the whistle accents (which are placed wrongly right now lol) to be on clickable objects, not slidertails. 00:09:677 (1,2) - could be acceptable to keep if you wanted tho for reasons. changing them would definitely not be bad tho
3. 01:20:903 (1,2,3) - would really be nice to have a rhythm that covers the unique sounds that are only in this measure :/ current rhythm pretty much treats them like they're nonexistent
4. 01:47:999 (8) - multirepeats kind of lame unless they're connected to the next object via 1/4 (this sort of thing). in this case, using this rhythm would be more comfortable. same sort of thing as 03:02:903 (6,7) - although completely different parts in the music. still tho yea
5. 02:41:225 (1) - seems really out of place when you've got all of these 02:44:516 (1) - 02:47:612 (1) - 02:50:709 (1) - emphasizing the finish thing. doing that here as well would be good... or emphasizing the vocal for all of them would work as you did in insane. if you go with the first option, be sure to add finishes after hitsound copying cuz insane rhythm breaks that
6. 02:52:645 (5,6,7,8) - stack stuff looks like balls ingame. placing 02:53:419 (8,9,1) - more to the right would be fine

1. 01:20:903 (1,2) - for reasons you can figure out, a rhythm like this would be nice
2. 02:41:225 (1) - same as hard for rhythm and same as insane for hitsounds
3. 02:44:128 (5,1) - spacing
4. 02:46:064 (3) - this kind of slidershape may work for larger sliders, but at this size it just looks like handicapped curve. straight or regular curve >
5. 02:48:774 - 02:50:322 (5) - these two places are pretty much the same thing musically, so filling the gap on the first one or creating a gap on the second one would be good. needs to be consistent. preferrably you'd add a circle in the first one
6. for the sake of spread, gonna say to convert all of these 1/1 sliders to this rhythm. right now rhythms in normal are super basic compared to those in hard, so anything to buff it up would be nice:
   00:37:548 (1) - 00:39:096 (4) - 00:43:741 (1) - 00:45:290 (3) - 01:36:386 (1) - 01:37:935 (4) - 01:42:580 (1) - 01:44:128 (3) -
7. same reason; converting these 2/1 sliders to 1/1 + circle:
   00:25:161 (1) - 00:34:451 (1) - 02:27:483 (3) -
8. 00:01:935 (3) - and last spread thing: would be better with more 1/2 like this. 00:11:225 (3,4,5) - is same thing

1. 00:00:393 (1,2,3,4) - whistles 1 and 3 should be removed and 2 and 4 should have whistles. other diffs have them in the right places
2. 00:36:780 (1) - nc not necessary anymore
3. 00:58:844 (7) - clap. applies to all diffs

1. 01:37:554 (4,1,2) - placement of stuff here could be pretty confusing. pointing 1 to the left would be a lot less weird

appleeaterx wrote:

i am also a bit confused, but he launched his website kashitaro.com where you can see his logo + the copyright text at the bottom of the website, though you are right since quite a few sources use 'Ito Kashitaro' as well, asked someone to check it though just to be sure

1. I don't like your color scheme, some colors look super similar. I would advise you use only three combo colors : pink, green and , yellow. They fit with the background more.

1. 00:39:102 (5,6) - Maybe just extend 5 it? I find this rhythm unnecessary imo.
2. 01:37:941 (1,2) - ^ and remove nc here, or add to above , they're inconsistent.

1. 03:17:425 (2) - I would move this somewhere else more visible, its kinda hard to see because notes don't fade away fast enough.