Sieg wrote:

[General]

1. Background quality rather bad, consider to find one with better quality or replace with another.
2. mp3 is also not the best as it can be, try to find 192kbps version.
3. Irreparable sounds strange as difficulty name.
4. 2nd red line is useless
5. Sliderslide sound way too noise, you can try to use standard with reduced volume level instead.

[Irreparable]

1. All suggestions applies to whole diff\similar spots. Also I'll leave you more general ideas than exact spots becuse I belive mapset and you as mapper can benefit better from this.
2. 00:07:423 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this should be done in more accurate way, http://puu.sh/goXeI/25df33ba47.jpg or something like that, try resize (Ctrl+Shift+R) tool
3. 00:14:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Good idea, but 00:14:280 (1,2) - way too close.
4. 00:21:137 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this triples can be also use bigger DS between to match music better.
5. 00:27:993 (1,2,1,2) - same goes for this pattern, there is really no background in music to change from regular spacing to compressed.
6. 00:35:278 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - too linear, some kinds of jumps like e.g. 00:36:993 (1,2,3,4) , will improve this pattern greatly.
7. 00:38:492 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same, also this stack is inconsistent, not representing anything in music and plays bad.
8. 01:10:847 (3,4,5,6) - Again, what about this compressed spacing, if you started to map wider, do not reduce spacing in intense parts.
9. 01:29:275 (1,1) - Better to unstack them in any way, players will be confused here.
10. 03:54:764 (1,2,3) - It's like 90% of you 1\4 slider jumps are side jumps, consider to vary this pattern on some of them.
11. 04:14:263 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This jump pattern is very big difficulty spike compared to whole difficulty, also flows really bad, you must nerf this.
12. Overall: rhythms are good, spacing needs to be more reasonable and structured. Focus on improving this and mapset will be prefect.

Kagamine Ren wrote:

你看看你，图都没了

ZZHBOY wrote:

irc

2015-03-08 02:29 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/656534 Nightwish - I Want My Tears Back [Wonder]]
2015-03-08 02:29 ZZHBOY: 00:00:075 (1) - 为啥有红描点啊
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 我那时候作图用的还是红点滑条啊
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 04:00:485 - 这有几个没用绿线
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 后面还有 都删了
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 啥叫还是红点滑条
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 我觉得你可以考虑把红点去了免得到时候出麻烦
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 好
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 全都删了吗
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 啥?
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 红点啊
2015-03-08 02:31 ZZHBOY: 删了最好
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 好
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 我先看看哪里绿线多余的
2015-03-08 02:32 ZZHBOY: 04:07:128 - 五条
2015-03-08 02:32 ZZHBOY: 04:00:485 - 这里后面几个也是
2015-03-08 02:33 ZZHBOY: 04:19:770 - 
2015-03-08 02:33 tm1209: 好了
2015-03-08 02:33 tm1209: 没什么overmap的地方把？
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 还没开始看呢.-.
2015-03-08 02:34 tm1209: 你先摸  我先删红点
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 这个叫准备工作
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 宽屏支持我觉得你可以去掉
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 因为你没sb
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 00:35:215 (1,2,3) - 这三个不应该是drum sample么
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 算了红点先放那 应该没大碍 看看优先度高的吧
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 00:41:215 (1) - 去掉nc
2015-03-08 02:37 ZZHBOY: 00:43:143 (1,2) - 这两个为啥不换nc 我觉得应该在2nc啊
2015-03-08 02:37 ZZHBOY: ...你先看这些 把没改的和我说
2015-03-08 02:44 ZZHBOY: 则呢美丽
2015-03-08 02:45 ZZHBOY: 回了我再继续说..
2015-03-08 02:49 ZZHBOY: 00:50:535 (3) - 音乐没音
2015-03-08 02:50 ZZHBOY: 00:59:963 (6) - 这个音乐也没音 但貌似可以留着
2015-03-08 02:51 ZZHBOY: 01:07:677 - 貌似乐器音从这里开始的你漏了
2015-03-08 02:51 ZZHBOY: 01:08:320 - 没音
2015-03-08 02:52 ZZHBOY: 01:21:819 - 漏了声鼓
2015-03-08 02:53 ZZHBOY: 01:27:176 (6,7,8,1) - 没音
2015-03-08 02:53 ZZHBOY: 01:28:247 (4,5,6,7) - ^
2015-03-08 02:55 ZZHBOY: 02:35:742 (6,7,8,1) - meiyin
2015-03-08 02:55 ZZHBOY: ^
2015-03-08 02:56 ZZHBOY: 03:25:453 (2,3,4) - 
2015-03-08 02:56 ZZHBOY: 02:36:813 (4,5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 02:57 ZZHBOY: 03:04:883 (5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 02:59 tm1209: 111
2015-03-08 03:00 tm1209: 我终于把红点都弄掉；
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: orz
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: 我把我觉得节奏有问题的都发你了
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: 你不一定全要改 但没改的地方要告诉我
2015-03-08 03:01 tm1209: 厚
2015-03-08 03:01 ZZHBOY: 03:52:344 - 这里节奏错了
2015-03-08 03:01 ZZHBOY: 03:52:344 (6) - 这个应换成1/4滑条或者之类的节奏
2015-03-08 03:03 ZZHBOY: 话说sieg有表示要给icon么
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: icon是什么
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 04:28:877 (6,7,8,1) - 没音
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 就是给泡
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: 他叫我找一两个摸然后找他recheck
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 04:29:948 (4,5,6,7) - ^
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: 应该是这个意思了
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 04:42:590 (6,7,8,1) - 
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 主要你好多滑条后面加4个1/4太几把
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 一听就知道音乐没有
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 04:43:662 (4,5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 03:06 ZZHBOY: 05:05:196 (1) - 然后就是最后这个滑条为啥要加速 不是应该减速么
2015-03-08 03:06 ZZHBOY: 好了就这些 我去post 你到时候reply一下说明一下哪些没改以及原因就可以了 我要睡觉觉了

call me after reply

tm1209 wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

irc

2015-03-08 02:29 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/656534 Nightwish - I Want My Tears Back [Wonder]]
2015-03-08 02:29 ZZHBOY: 00:00:075 (1) - 为啥有红描点啊
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 我那时候作图用的还是红点滑条啊
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 04:00:485 - 这有几个没用绿线
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 后面还有 都删了
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 啥叫还是红点滑条
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 我觉得你可以考虑把红点去了免得到时候出麻烦
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 好
2015-03-08 02:30 tm1209: 全都删了吗
2015-03-08 02:30 ZZHBOY: 啥?
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 红点啊
2015-03-08 02:31 ZZHBOY: 删了最好
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 好
2015-03-08 02:31 tm1209: 我先看看哪里绿线多余的
2015-03-08 02:32 ZZHBOY: 04:07:128 - 五条
2015-03-08 02:32 ZZHBOY: 04:00:485 - 这里后面几个也是
2015-03-08 02:33 ZZHBOY: 04:19:770 - 
2015-03-08 02:33 tm1209: 好了
2015-03-08 02:33 tm1209: 没什么overmap的地方把？
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 还没开始看呢.-.
2015-03-08 02:34 tm1209: 你先摸  我先删红点
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 这个叫准备工作
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 宽屏支持我觉得你可以去掉
2015-03-08 02:34 ZZHBOY: 因为你没sb
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 00:35:215 (1,2,3) - 这三个不应该是drum sample么
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 算了红点先放那 应该没大碍 看看优先度高的吧
2015-03-08 02:36 ZZHBOY: 00:41:215 (1) - 去掉nc
2015-03-08 02:37 ZZHBOY: 00:43:143 (1,2) - 这两个为啥不换nc 我觉得应该在2nc啊
2015-03-08 02:37 ZZHBOY: ...你先看这些 把没改的和我说
2015-03-08 02:44 ZZHBOY: 则呢美丽
2015-03-08 02:45 ZZHBOY: 回了我再继续说..
2015-03-08 02:49 ZZHBOY: 00:50:535 (3) - 音乐没音
2015-03-08 02:50 ZZHBOY: 00:59:963 (6) - 这个音乐也没音 但貌似可以留着
2015-03-08 02:51 ZZHBOY: 01:07:677 - 貌似乐器音从这里开始的你漏了
2015-03-08 02:51 ZZHBOY: 01:08:320 - 没音
2015-03-08 02:52 ZZHBOY: 01:21:819 - 漏了声鼓
2015-03-08 02:53 ZZHBOY: 01:27:176 (6,7,8,1) - 没音
2015-03-08 02:53 ZZHBOY: 01:28:247 (4,5,6,7) - ^
2015-03-08 02:55 ZZHBOY: 02:35:742 (6,7,8,1) - meiyin
2015-03-08 02:55 ZZHBOY: ^
2015-03-08 02:56 ZZHBOY: 03:25:453 (2,3,4) - 
2015-03-08 02:56 ZZHBOY: 02:36:813 (4,5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 02:57 ZZHBOY: 03:04:883 (5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 02:59 tm1209: 111
2015-03-08 03:00 tm1209: 我终于把红点都弄掉；
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: orz
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: 我把我觉得节奏有问题的都发你了
2015-03-08 03:00 ZZHBOY: 你不一定全要改 但没改的地方要告诉我
2015-03-08 03:01 tm1209: 厚
2015-03-08 03:01 ZZHBOY: 03:52:344 - 这里节奏错了
2015-03-08 03:01 ZZHBOY: 03:52:344 (6) - 这个应换成1/4滑条或者之类的节奏
2015-03-08 03:03 ZZHBOY: 话说sieg有表示要给icon么
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: icon是什么
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 04:28:877 (6,7,8,1) - 没音
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 就是给泡
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: 他叫我找一两个摸然后找他recheck
2015-03-08 03:04 ZZHBOY: 04:29:948 (4,5,6,7) - ^
2015-03-08 03:04 tm1209: 应该是这个意思了
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 04:42:590 (6,7,8,1) - 
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 主要你好多滑条后面加4个1/4太几把
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 一听就知道音乐没有
2015-03-08 03:05 ZZHBOY: 04:43:662 (4,5,6,7) - 
2015-03-08 03:06 ZZHBOY: 05:05:196 (1) - 然后就是最后这个滑条为啥要加速 不是应该减速么
2015-03-08 03:06 ZZHBOY: 好了就这些 我去post 你到时候reply一下说明一下哪些没改以及原因就可以了 我要睡觉觉了

call me after reply

01:27:176 (6,7,8,1) - 01:28:247 (4,5,6,7) - 03:25:453 (2,3,4) - 04:28:877 (6,7,8,1) - 04:29:948 (4,5,6,7) - 04:42:590 (6,7,8,1) - 04:43:662 (4,5,6,7) - 没改，主要还是不知道应该改成什么样子，不知道改成两个1/2会怎么样
03:04:883 (5,6,7) - 25%的话应该还是能听出来的
03:52:344 (6) - 这地方我没打算跟鼓，跟的是土耳其唢呐，所以直接这么放了

1. normal-slidertick.wav
2. drum-slidertick.wav

ZZHBOY wrote:

The following hitsounds are unused:

1. normal-slidertick.wav
2. drum-slidertick.wav

remove them plz
call me back

Kagamine Ren wrote:

gogo

edit: new page!! cool!

tm1209 wrote:

Kagamine Ren wrote:

gogo

edit: new page!! cool!

Why old are you ?

Kagamine Ren wrote:

it's love，goubi

1. What's up with those light colours? They appear pretty random and don't make much sense with this kind of music.
   
   Give a try to these

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 137,131,175
   Combo2 : 166,176,162
   Combo3 : 173,199,209

1. I would think about OD 6 as the diff is really long and may driain players stamina.
2. 00:00:075 - the guitar here here is quite agressive, I think we should use Normal sampleset for the into. Give i a try and see if it works for you.
3. 00:14:216 (1,2) - is this slowdown really necessary? Players might be confused and i does not match with the music, I believe. Start those SV changes with x1.00 multiplier, please.
   Note: same applies for all similar patterns.
4. 00:23:216 (3,2) - please unstack them, so hitburst from the triplet will not overlap with the reverse-arrow. Keep reverse-arrows readable, please.
5. 00:27:930 (1,2,1,2) - players may misunderstand you and think that SV changes here (due to the way you use NCs here). please, remove new combos from 00:27:930 (1,2,1,2) - to keep things more logicals.
   Note: each NC gives a boost to pplayers' HP, too many NCs would ruin the funand make players feel bored. So, remember to use NCs wisely.
6. 00:35:644 (4,5,1,2) - spacing drops down to x1.2 and it breaks your flow a little. Try to keep Ds a little more consistent, maybe?
7. 00:54:928 - let's replace the reverse part of the slider with a single circle at 00:54:928. The downbeat feels strong and the music changes here deserve a circle. Example
8. 00:59:963 (6) - isn't this one overmapped. I'd suggest to avoid overmapped triplets as they might feel really unpleasant or random.
   Note: 01:05:963 (3) - and so on, and so far. Just pay a little more attention to triplets if you agree.
9. 01:58:995 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the x4.0 jump in the end is an overlkill. I have nothing against jumps, but I suggest reducing DS to x3.0 or so, in order to make it more playable.
10. 03:12:275 (2,3) - 03:15:704 (2,3) - for the sake of emphasis the beat at 03:12:275 - I would either remmove (3) or replace (2,3) with a slider. Just give it a try and you'll notice that (2) feels better when its stressed.
11. 03:24:489 (4,1) - might be just me, but I think this stack did not work well here. It hurts th movement you have, and it feels really confusing after the previous jump you had at 03:23:632 (4,1). tl;dr: just unstack the circles and we'll be cool.
    Note: 03:58:772 (4,1,2,3) - well, the same happens here.
12. 03:29:845 (1,2) - this gap can be easily misread as an 1/2 one. Mind changing spacing to something lower here? Example
    Note: afterwards, you can either do the same with 03:30:702 (1,2). // And it also should be fixed with the copypasted pattern at 04:03:486 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3)
13. 04:13:771 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - wow ♥ I'm impressed, this is something very interesting and creative. I like it a lot!
    
    I like this stuff a lot. Think about avoiding overmapped triplets and check the spacing one more time. Once you do it - call me back.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, random mod.

[General]

1. What's up with those light colours? They appear pretty random and don't make much sense with this kind of music.
   
   Give a try to these

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 137,131,175
   Combo2 : 166,176,162
   Combo3 : 173,199,209

fixed

[Wonder]

1. I would think about OD 6 as the diff is really long and may driain players stamina. OD6 is too low , it means no much PP in this map , what about OD6.5 or OD6.7 ?
2. 00:00:075 - the guitar here here is quite agressive, I think we should use Normal sampleset for the into. Give i a try and see if it works for you. I think Normal sampleset is better , fixed XD
3. 00:14:216 (1,2) - is this slowdown really necessary? Players might be confused and i does not match with the music, I believe. Start those SV changes with x1.00 multiplier, please. fixed but I feel not good TAT
   Note: same applies for all similar patterns.
4. 00:23:216 (3,2) - please unstack them, so hitburst from the triplet will not overlap with the reverse-arrow. Keep reverse-arrows readable, please. fixed
5. 00:27:930 (1,2,1,2) - players may misunderstand you and think that SV changes here (due to the way you use NCs here). please, remove new combos from 00:27:930 (1,2,1,2) - to keep things more logicals. fixed , but I think my original NC is reasonable , too
   Note: each NC gives a boost to pplayers' HP, too many NCs would ruin the funand make players feel bored. So, remember to use NCs wisely.
6. 00:35:644 (4,5,1,2) - spacing drops down to x1.2 and it breaks your flow a little. Try to keep Ds a little more consistent, maybe? you are right , I fixed it to 1.25x , it's nearly to 1.2x but looking good
7. 00:54:928 - let's replace the reverse part of the slider with a single circle at 00:54:928. The downbeat feels strong and the music changes here deserve a circle. Example fixed , feel better after do this
8. 00:59:963 (6) - isn't this one overmapped. I'd suggest to avoid overmapped triplets as they might feel really unpleasant or random. fixed , it's on me
   Note: 01:05:963 (3) - and so on, and so far. Just pay a little more attention to triplets if you agree. fixed , but I think my original is not very bad XD
9. 01:58:995 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the x4.0 jump in the end is an overlkill. I have nothing against jumps, but I suggest reducing DS to x3.0 or so, in order to make it more playable. 4.0x jump is also playable ! I ask some people who rank about #25000 to test play , they never have a combobreak here ! But i fixed it to 2.5x , i think i'm too kindhearted LOL
10. 03:12:275 (2,3) - 03:15:704 (2,3) - for the sake of emphasis the beat at 03:12:275 - I would either remmove (3) or replace (2,3) with a slider I adopted this. Just give it a try and you'll notice that (2) feels better when its stressed.
11. 03:24:489 (4,1) - might be just me, but I think this stack did not work well here. It hurts th movement you have, and it feels really confusing after the previous jump you had at 03:23:632 (4,1). tl;dr: just unstack the circles and we'll be cool.
    Note: 03:58:772 (4,1,2,3) - well, the same happens here. fixed these two
12. 03:29:845 (1,2) - this gap can be easily misread as an 1/2 one. Mind changing spacing to something lower here? Example a little mind , because I asked over 15 people to testplay , but nobody do anything wrong in this area , and I think this pattren is not bad , may not very necessary to fix it to you said , i decrease the DS to 1.5x , and I think it's not very hard to play
    Note: afterwards, you can either do the same with 03:30:702 (1,2). // And it also should be fixed with the copypasted pattern at 04:03:486 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3)
13. 04:13:771 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - wow ♥ I'm impressed, this is something very interesting and creative. I like it a lot! thx a lot
    
    I like this stuff a lot. Think about avoiding overmapped triplets and check the spacing one more time. Once you do it - call me back.

For anyone wondering if metadata is correct, it is. Confirmation can be found here. thx a lot , but I think metadata don't have many problems , the thing I wrote in tags is all correct

neonat wrote:

Wonder

很乱 @@

00:09:931 - 线应该是S:C1? 然后00:09:931 (10) - Normal Sampleset
00:10:788 - 这条线和 00:09:931 -没有什么分别，用N:C1在这里就对了
00:10:788 (1) - 滑條头用auto sampleset/addition, 尾用drum sampleset
00:13:788 (6) - 换成auto sampleset/hitsounds, 00:13:788 - 线用N:C1
00:15:073 (3) - 滑條尾用soft sampleset
00:15:931 (5) - ^
00:16:788 (7) - ^
00:21:287 (2) - auto sampleset
00:22:144 (5) - ^
00:23:002 (8) - ^ 可是我不知道需要换这些。但因为每一个对象你放sampleset, 那些线的sampleset没有用了
00:27:501 (2) - 用finish,也换成soft addition
00:33:715 和 00:33:929 - 线用N:C1,圈是用Normal
00:50:214 (2) - 滑條头用Auto Sampleset
01:07:784 (5) - 不要用finish
01:09:498 (4) - 滑條头删除finish
01:18:926 (3) - 滑條头加finish
01:21:497 (3) - ^
01:30:068 (1) - 滑條头删除finish
01:32:211 (1) - 不要用finish
01:39:068 (4) - 滑條头soft addition 和 whistle
01:41:639 (2) - 滑條头Normal Sampleset, 滑條尾Auto Sampleset
01:42:496 (4) - finish
01:45:924 (4) - 滑條头soft addition 和 whistle
01:56:638 (2) - soft addition 和 finish
01:58:780 (1,5) - Normal sampleset
01:59:209 (3) - Drum sampleset
02:00:066 (1) - 滑條中间用Soft addition finish
02:00:923 (3) - 滑條头soft addition 和 finish
02:03:494 (5) - finish
02:10:351 (5) - soft addition 和 finish
02:18:065 (4) - 滑條头删除finish
02:30:064 (3) - 滑條头加finish
02:38:635 (1) - 滑條头删除finish
02:42:920 (1) - Normal addition 和 finish
02:51:491 (1) - 滑條头加finish
02:52:348 (1) - 滑條头删除finish
03:01:347 (6) - 滑條头加finish
03:04:347 (3) - 滑條头soft addition 和 finish
03:08:204 (6) - 滑條头auto addition 和 finish
03:10:775 (2) - 滑條头加finish
03:26:417 - delete这条线，03:26:203 - 换成S：C1, 03:26:203 (3) - 已经用Normal Sampleset. Vol 都一样
03:33:274 - ^
03:36:702 - ^
03:42:916 (1) - 滑條头加finish
03:46:344 (1) - ^
03:48:701 (3) - Normal sampleset
03:49:773 (1) - 滑條头加finish
03:57:272 - delete这个线，03:26:203 - 换成S：C1, 03:57:058 (3) - 已经用Normal Sampleset. Vol 都一样
04:10:342 - 这条线没有跟 04:06:914 - 有分别
04:31:770 (1) - 滑條头删除finish
04:36:055 (1) - Normal addition 和 finish
04:45:483 (1) - 滑條头删除finish
04:49:768 (1) - Normal addition 和 finish
04:54:482 (4) - 滑條头soft addition 和 finish
05:01:339 (4) - ^
05:03:482 (1) - ^

线1ms unsnapped:

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01:50:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 你逐渐地把他们放靠一点，我觉得把他们放远比较好，现在太近
02:34:778 (3) - x:450 y:280


我知道你做图还是不太熟，以后请你不要每一次要换sampleset，不要换每一条线和对象的sampleset，你会有多余的线。

neonat wrote:

Removed duplicate line and edited some hitsounds and unnecessary green line. Should be fine now, but I do hope to see a less confusing one in the future >.<

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23:53 tm1209: zzhboy给我看了一小段聊天记录 似乎是碰上了需要问QAT的问题？
00:07 neonat: 00:45:071 (2) - NC
00:07 neonat: remove NC at 00:44:857 (1) -
00:07 neonat: 00:46:357 (2) - NC
00:07 neonat: remove 00:46:143 (1) - NC
00:08 tm1209: NC大部分应该放白线上吧？
00:08 neonat: 因为你NC00:41:643 (1,1) -
00:08 tm1209: 00:50:000 (1) - 那这里也是了？
00:08 neonat: 就跟那个一样
2015-03-13 00:09 neonat: 00:50:214 (2) - NC
00:09 tm1209: 嗯
00:09 neonat: 00:58:785 (2) - NC
00:09 neonat: 01:02:213 (2) - ^
00:10 tm1209: fixed
00:10 neonat: 01:31:782 (5) - NC
00:10 neonat: not 01:32:211 (1) -
00:11 neonat: 01:32:639 (3) - NC
00:13 neonat: 02:00:923 (3) - 滑條头soft addition 和 finish
00:13 neonat: 02:00:066 (1) - 滑條中间用Soft addition finish
00:14 neonat: 我有写着些在莫里面
00:14 tm1209: mod里面的都改完了
00:15 neonat: 01:41:639 (2) - 滑條头Normal Sampleset, 滑條尾Auto Sampleset
00:15 neonat: 这个也是^ lol
00:15 tm1209: 是不是其他地方这样子的也要改？
00:15 neonat: 01:45:924 (4) - 滑條头soft addition 和 whistle
00:16 neonat: 这些是因为跟别的地方不一样
00:17 tm1209: 嗯 不过最后的那段是不是也要改成这样 因为听上去差不多的
00:17 neonat: 去最后一次看一下我的莫
00:17 neonat: 那些hitsounds
00:17 neonat: 如果改了就好
00:18 tm1209: 我可以确定都改掉的 一个都没漏
00:19 neonat: 为什么我还可以找到呢？奇怪
00:20 tm1209: 好吧 那我再核对一遍
00:20 neonat: 可是“01:42:496 (4) - finish”不要改，这个我写错
00:21 tm1209: 那我就该回来
00:21 tm1209: 改*
00:23 tm1209: 这回我觉得真没有还没改过的地方了。。
00:23 neonat: 都盖好了？
00:23 tm1209: 是啊
00:23 neonat: 改*
00:24 tm1209: 而且我有个问题一直觉得很奇怪 为什么sieg -bakari-他们都没有提出这样子的绿线的问题
00:25 neonat: 不懂
00:25 tm1209: o(︶︿︶)o
00:25 neonat: 他们而已看到对象
00:26 neonat: 我在猜而已
00:26 tm1209: 我想是他们没有打开F6看过 听到音效差不多了就直接好了
00:27 neonat: 01:41:639 (2) - you use drum sampleset at the start, 换normal
00:27 neonat: 他们用aibat lol
00:27 tm1209: 我换好了
00:27 neonat: aibat 没有发现东西，就不管了
00:28 tm1209: 我也经常用这个 没发现东西我也直接不管了
00:28 neonat: 02:00:923 (3) - 这个有soft finish吗？
00:28 tm1209: 有啊
00:28 tm1209: 只不过现在还没update而已
00:28 neonat: 哦
00:28 neonat: lol
00:28 neonat: orz
00:29 tm1209: 自从你发了mod之后我发现这个图前所未有的烂Orz
00:30 neonat: 我也觉得很乱@@
00:31 neonat: 很难好好找
00:31 neonat: 太多hitsound换
00:31 tm1209: 我是之前从没想到过绿线这种东西还能有这么多讲究
00:31 neonat: 最后我要问
00:31 tm1209: 之前觉得排列什么的没问题 音效听着对就可以了
00:32 tm1209: 现在发现我是想多了
00:32 neonat: 你有soft-slidertick
00:32 tm1209: 嗯
00:32 neonat: 可是我能找一个滑条有tick
00:32 neonat: 05:05:196 (1) -
00:32 neonat: 你也把声音放很低
00:33 neonat: 好像没有用呃
00:33 tm1209: 嗯。。我当时发现有滑条有tick 就找了个这样的音效放进去了
00:34 tm1209: 倒也没在乎这样的tick有多少 在哪里
00:34 neonat: 20%.....不能听到
00:34 neonat: 你还要soft-slidertick？
00:34 tm1209: 我能在edit里听到 我试试能不能在玩的时候听到 如果也能听到的话我觉得还是不要删的好
00:35 tm1209: 。。我发现玩的时候是听不到的
00:37 tm1209: 我已经删拉o(∩_∩)o
00:40 tm1209: 上传好了
00:46 neonat: 03:36:702 - 你有两条线
00:47 tm1209: TAT原来根本没有的啊
00:47 neonat: ACTION slap tm1209
00:47 neonat: lol
00:47 tm1209: 这种东西一下就能看出来我不可能不去改的。。
00:56 neonat: 不要紧，我们在看因为要找错东西吗
00:58 tm1209: 嗯
01:00 neonat: 01:30:068 (1) - remove finish
01:00 tm1209: fixed
01:01 neonat: 01:21:497 (3) - normal finish，not soft
01:01 tm1209: normal additions吗
01:02 neonat: normal sampleset
01:02 tm1209: 好的
01:02 neonat: ok that's all
01:04 tm1209: thx a lot !!