it seems to have intention,sorry
my summaryZ3nx wrote:
shione strikes again,shionelove wrote:
RIPIt's kinda following the 1/8 piano grace pattern here, so it might be an error on the mapper's part
I said might since there is a chance that he omitted the 1/8 grace since the notes snapped to 1/8 is kinda faint, thus mapping to the 1/2 piano instead, whilst using a 1/4 to map to the background instruments ( but tbh it's kinda unlikely that this is the intention )
just my two cents
boop
kinda feel like 1/4 now so idk what's my stand on this, imma just leave that there
meanwhile in another topic,
- Offset -
the offset feels kinda early for the music 03:15:574 - ( cymbal is heard after the timing tick )
aaand another example would be piano chords after heard after the timing tick again 02:47:259 -
more examples 00:57:036 -
basically the whole thing feels slightly early
Edit : After checking for a bit, +5 offset to all timing points should be ok to fix this
- Background -
The girl/woman in the background seems squished, i assume it's because you scaled it instead of cropping it, which makes the woman look disproportionate
I couldn't really crop much due to the head and text so i had to put black boxes, well if you wanna change it, here it is
OniJAM wrote:
Don't be so scared at timing, it didn't hurt
And next time, maybe cut off the useless blanks in hitsounds, it could save a lot of time for downloading and disk space
29ms/1534ms
no the sound is not sameShinzo- wrote:
SORRY just want to tell u :
04:08:495 (248495|6,248495|0,248495|3,248495|5,248495|1) - the sound is same with 04:09:844 (249844|5,249844|6,249844|0) - then why 04:08:495 - 5 note and 04:09:844 - just 3 note ?
hm... only that... i hope it helps... :3RuberusuScarlet wrote:
05:21:641 (321641|3) - end to 05:24:337 -
I think violin sound and piano sound ends here…
I dont agree with word "next time"...OniJAM wrote:
Don't be so scared at timing, it didn't hurt
And next time, maybe cut off the useless blanks in hitsounds, it could save a lot of time for downloading and disk space
29ms/1534ms
the sound pitch of 05:24:337 - is highest but after part still remained violin sound too.RuberusuScarlet wrote:
05:21:641 (321641|3) - end to 05:24:337 -
I think violin sound and piano sound ends here…
Takane6 wrote:
Wow :3
Suwako's first qualifying o/
Thanks xD
but here is a problem...
01:31:081 - add note because it just 3 notes...because the others have 4 notes 01:29:732 - 01:32:429 -
Do you know that's not even DQ problem owo ( i'm sorry if you intended normal mod )
01:40:350 - 01:41:699 - just have 2 note for mayor piano sound which is not consistent with 01:37:654 - 01:39:002 - 01:43:047 - that using 3 note for mayor piano sound...
^
02:05:687 (125687|5,125687|1) - the sound is increasing... it means should be no jack pattern
^. you can think it's stylish pattern rather than jack.
02:07:710 (127710|3) - why only 1 note?
^. the pattern flows quite well if column is 4 and 1 note
04:34:113 - has a loud finish sound... and only use 1 note?
^
04:35:125 and 04:35:462 - why just note if 04:34:787 - and 04:34:450 - have 2 note?
^
why not add note at note at 04:20:799 and 04:21:136 - just like you did in 04:19:450 - 04:19:787 - 04:15:405 - 04:15:742 - and so on...)
04:32:091 (272091|4,272091|2) - one of those note must change into LN... just like 04:30:742 (270742|1) - and 04:29:394 (269394|5) - and so on...
^hear carefully in 1/6 beatsnap. at least 1/6 beatsnap is more confuse than current to hear.
- 01:12:542 (72542|0,72542|6,72879|1,72879|5,73216|4,73216|2) - i've try to heard this with 25% playback rate
and i found that the sound is not actually on the red line... listen more carefully with the hitsound... its not sound at the same time with the music
it will be neat when you move it forward by 1/6...
and this too... :hm... only that... i hope it helps... :3RuberusuScarlet wrote:
05:21:641 (321641|3) - end to 05:24:337 -
I think violin sound and piano sound ends here…
:3I dont agree with word "next time"...OniJAM wrote:
Don't be so scared at timing, it didn't hurt
And next time, maybe cut off the useless blanks in hitsounds, it could save a lot of time for downloading and disk space
29ms/1534ms
many maps get DQ because this simple things such as 5ms delaying HS which is very hurt... this problem is not simple too...
i dont think this map should go on...
I think you misunderstand a lot. he pointed out 1534ms is unnessary to use.
but you can read ranking criteria says hitsound should be longer than 100ms and at least it follows well even long.
Takane6 wrote:
Wow :3
Suwako's first qualifying o/
but here is a problem...
01:31:081 - add note because it just 3 notes...because the others have 4 notes 01:29:732 - 01:32:429 -
01:31:081 - this sound is not same with 01:29:732 - 01:32:429 -
there is only drum sound. the others is drum + piano.. plz one more listen to this part
01:40:350 - 01:41:699 - just have 2 note for mayor piano sound which is not consistent with 01:37:654 - 01:39:002 - 01:43:047 - that using 3 note for mayor piano sound...
hey i know that. but it is my intention. if added note at 01:40:350 - 01:41:699 -, then this part is very uncomfortable. so i used just 2 note. plz remember. we make map for more fun, not for art
02:05:687 (125687|5,125687|1) - the sound is increasing... it means should be no jack pattern
?? they are same sounds..
02:07:710 (127710|3) - why only 1 note?
for comfortable playing. plz Do not care about the number of notes.
04:34:113 - has a loud finish sound... and only use 1 note?
for pattern balance. i think it's enough.
04:35:125 and 04:35:462 - why just note if 04:34:787 - and 04:34:450 - have 2 note?
why not add note at note at 04:20:799 and 04:21:136 - just like you did in 04:19:450 - 04:19:787 - 04:15:405 - 04:15:742 - and so on...)
it's my style. this problem is really heavy? it's unrankable issue? i don't know why u pointed it out.
04:32:091 (272091|4,272091|2) - one of those note must change into LN... just like 04:30:742 (270742|1) - and 04:29:394 (269394|5) - and so on...
no. why MUST ??? plz don't ask about pattern. consistency of pattern is important. yes i know. but it's not absolute RULE. when u played in this part, it's really weird? awkward? uncomfortable? plz respect mapper's pattern.i think that currently located is good...
- 01:12:542 (72542|0,72542|6,72879|1,72879|5,73216|4,73216|2) - i've try to heard this with 25% playback rate
and i found that the sound is not actually on the red line... listen more carefully with the hitsound... its not sound at the same time with the music
it will be neat when you move it forward by 1/6...
if i injure ur mind, really sorry..
but currently this map's located is Qualified. so i think... u should mention only unrankable issues....
plz tell me about only unrankable issues..
if this map is sent to DQ, then u can mod about pattern.
and..the number of notes is not important.
eh..yes important..i mean, it's not unrankable issues.. it's mapper's style.
that's all.
ohhh oops x_x my bad xD it just feel akward for me ...pporse wrote:
no the sound is not sameShinzo- wrote:
SORRY just want to tell u :
04:08:495 (248495|6,248495|0,248495|3,248495|5,248495|1) - the sound is same with 04:09:844 (249844|5,249844|6,249844|0) - then why 04:08:495 - 5 note and 04:09:844 - just 3 note ?
04:08:495 (248495|6,248495|0,248495|3,248495|5,248495|1) - piano+drum
04:09:844 (249844|5,249844|0,249844|6) - drum
pporse wrote:
everyone, thank you