Hello, thank you very much . All that is said above I corrected.
Nya!
Desperate-kun wrote:
Quick check, as requested by fergas~
[General][Normal]
- There is no Preview Point in Hard, apparently. ✔
- Kiai doesn't really fit how you put it. It's filling up so much of the map and also the whole section has a lot of sudden breaks etc in the music so constant kiai should be avoided imo. You could just have kiai fountains at 00:23:727 and 00:35:579 and have the rest of the map without kiai. ✔
[Hard]
- 00:08:912 (5,1) - What the jump o: Fixed ✔
- 00:16:320 - I don't understand why there is Drum Sampleset and a Whistle here. There is nothing in the music that this hitsound could follow imo. ✔
- 00:35:579 (1,2) - Currently the flow is a bit weird here.. If you really want to keep the waveslider (although I think it doesn't fit in here flow-wise) something like this would work better: http://puu.sh/g6XLi/3241859f09.jpg Or alternatively: http://puu.sh/g6XO1/2f422d725e.jpg ✔
- 00:40:394 (1) - The Soft Sampleset seems random here o: leave
- 00:44:468 (8) - You can improve the flow significantly by rotating this slider counter-clockwise, so it is like this: http://puu.sh/g6XUB/c90b47b3ca.jpg ✔
- Your NCing needs work. I think you tried to place them fitting to certain patterns, but they seem random and inconsistent for the most part. The best would probably be to have one NC every second big white tick and nowhere else, to have a clean and logical comboing pattern.Fixed ✔
Bakari's Insane seemed fine on my quick look. Hard and Normal need to be tidied up more before it can go to qualified imo.
- 00:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - Nice idea, but could be a lot more clean if it was a perfeclty rotated pattern, looking like this when selected: http://puu.sh/g6Ytz/ecd0d705be.jpg Try this code and hopefully you can see the difference:
[box=Code]176,136,20764,6,0,B|208:112|208:112|232:136|232:136|264:120,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:✔
301,218,21505,2,0,B|277:186|277:186|301:162|301:162|285:130,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,94,22246,2,0,B|352:118|352:118|328:94|328:94|296:110,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,12,22986,2,0,B|281:44|281:44|257:68|257:68|273:100,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:36:320 (3,4,5,6) - Combining a 1/2-stack and 1/4-stacks is not a good idea for a Hard difficulty - It looks messy when playing and can be confusing to read for Hard diff players. Consider to use regular spacing between 00:36:320 (3,4) ✔
- 00:38:542 (3,4) - I don't really see the reason for the low spacing here - What about http://puu.sh/g6YJD/3b37b6151a.jpg ? ✔
- Same thing about NCs as in Normal. ✔
Good luck!