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Retroflex Encoded - ULETAJ

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Gordon123
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Gordon123
(안녕!)Оу тут что-то назревается как я вижу..привет Сиег,Бкари,Эго,Алекса и тебе о неизвестный создатель карты(до этого времени)
[General]

  • ну я в общем пройдусь(по мапе в целом),что найду того не миновать
[Normal]

  • честно мне твои 2 слайдера очень понравились( 00:00:032 (1) - 00:08:920 (5) - )
    (вообще я нe очень люблю ломать(в прямом смысле) слайдеры
    так что 00:24:476 (3) - ААА..ну он то в ритм но как то его можно покрасивее?? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801826 <ну хотя бы так ㅇㅅㅇ...?
    00:15:217 (7) - в конце этого слайдера(на конец) шмякни драм-вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801839
    00:16:698 (1) - ну а тут во второй части просто сделай вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801841
    00:20:402 (4) - драм-вхистл
    00:48:180 (3) - просто вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801857
[Хурд или не хурд вот в чем вопрос? Hard]

  • 00:15:217 (3) - в конец слайдера запихни(а если не запихивается-то вбей) драм-вхистл
    00:34:291 (6) - предлагаю этот стакнуть со слайдером след стоящим
    00:44:106 (2) - ㅁ_ㅁ ну хотя бы так,а? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801877
    00:48:180 (5) - тут тоже вхистл
[Бакарюююю'с Инсейнь]

  • 00:11:513 (3) - ты специально сделал так? ели нет-то стакни мб?
    00:29:661 (1) - предлагаю чуть-чуть ниже опустить(думаю не все смогут сразу преодолеть этот джамп(мини джамп))
    ну-знаешь,ненавижу бесспинеровые мапы(когда прохожу в ктб),мб сделаешь-в место конца того??
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

ну типо удачи в ранке)
Good Luck ;)
Marmowka
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Topic Starter
Marmowka
Я тебя запехунькал в теги не ссы :D

-Bakari- wrote:

Как только я буду в состоянии воспринимать текст, я изменю это сообщение на адекватный ответ с описанием того, что было сделано.

Сверху к вышесказанным тегам, Улетай Uletay На крыльях ветра Князь игорь опера А еще, кажется -Bakari- что-то там замапал. Его тоже в теги. По фану можешь догнать теги словами cut short version
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
ээх не жид я что бы не жидить! Раскашелюсь я
riffy
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riffy

Gordon123 wrote:

[Бакарюююю'с Инсейнь]

  • 00:11:513 (3) - ты специально сделал так? ели нет-то стакни мб? не-не, это ручной стак, тут все как надо
    00:29:661 (1) - предлагаю чуть-чуть ниже опустить(думаю не все смогут сразу преодолеть этот джамп(мини джамп)) чуть-чуть. Но вообще должно играться
    ну-знаешь,ненавижу бесспинеровые мапы(когда прохожу в ктб),мб сделаешь-в место конца того?? не знаю, особо и некуда. надо подумать
ну типо удачи в ранке)
Good Luck ;)
Все применил @Sieg

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Tags:russian glitch acontrariproject retroflex encoded natalia morozova fly away on the wings of the wind prince igor alexander borodin -bakari-
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Marmowka
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Marmowka
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Sieg wrote:

привет

[General]
  1. Я бы посоветовал выкинуть последнюю часть 00:50:402 (1,2,3) - ✔
  2. drum-hitclap.wav с делеем, вот подправленный - http://puu.sh/g54KR/b64fc7c5a9.wav ✔
  3. оффсет -8, в моде все на старом тайминге Ох долго я карячился... ✔
  4. софт слайд слишком шумный, http://puu.sh/g55sT/392b408db8.wav и не благодарите :3 ✔
  5. так же мне не понятно нафига вы засайленсили normal-sliderslide2 Секретный план захвата мира.
  6. тэги бы не помешали ✔
  7. в целом по хсам я бы посоветовал, какие-то сделать вставки из дрэм сета типо клапов или финишей, или что-то кастомное в этом плане, чтоб разнообразить нормал-хитнормал ✔
  8. 00:23:735 (1) - отсюда не помешал бы киаи на всех дифках ✔
[Bakari's Insane]
  1. 00:28:920 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - мне было достаточно сложно войти в этот паттерн, а все из-за того, что вот эта штука 00:28:550 (5,6) его немного ломает, я бы предложил тут 00:28:550 (5) - укоротить до 1\2, получается намного легче. Это должно порушить консистенси не много, но будет играться намного приятнее.
  2. 00:29:661 (1,2) - алсо, этот джамп бы чуть-чуть сократить ну до ~2 примерно
  3. 00:46:328 (3,4) - ноуп, http://puu.sh/g56us/7ad7613722.jpg а вот у тебя как раз таки пропущен тот 1\6 бит
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:180 (2) - софт клап так и задуман? ✔
  2. 00:15:217 (3) - я бы первый изгиб чуть-чуть бы выровнял http://puu.sh/g56Qs/fbca585f10.jpg ✔
  3. 00:20:772 (1,2,3,4) - ноуп, буду честен, эти слайдеры ужасны Нормас они! Ну я подумаю)
  4. 00:34:106 (5) - а это надо убрать, в конце там явно не 1\4
И в правду сделал даже лучше.✔

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:032 (1) - как-нибудь его раздвинуть плавнее, http://puu.sh/g57bF/b4324bff3c.jpg ✔
  2. 00:31:883 (6,2) - отодвинуть их ✔
  3. 00:42:624 (5) - имо если подвинуть хвост будет красивее http://puu.sh/g57je/c0a6138ad5.jpg ✔
  4. 00:43:365 (6,8) - сделать их копи-пастой [/quote] ✔

Gordon123 wrote:

(안녕!)Оу тут что-то назревается как я вижу..привет Сиег,Бкари,Эго,Алекса и тебе о неизвестный создатель карты(до этого времени)
[General]

  • ну я в общем пройдусь(по мапе в целом),что найду того не миновать
[Normal]

  • честно мне твои 2 слайдера очень понравились( 00:00:032 (1) - 00:08:920 (5) - )
    (вообще я нe очень люблю ломать(в прямом смысле) слайдеры
    так что 00:24:476 (3) - ААА..ну он то в ритм но как то его можно покрасивее?? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801826 <ну хотя бы так ㅇㅅㅇ...?
    00:15:217 (7) - в конце этого слайдера(на конец) шмякни драм-вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801839 ✔
    00:16:698 (1) - ну а тут во второй части просто сделай вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801841✔
    00:20:402 (4) - драм-вхистл ✔
    00:48:180 (3) - просто вхистл https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801857✔
[Хурд или не хурд вот в чем вопрос? Hard]

  • 00:15:217 (3) - в конец слайдера запихни(а если не запихивается-то вбей) драм-вхистл ✔
    00:34:291 (6) - предлагаю этот стакнуть со слайдером след стоящим. Ниа
    00:44:106 (2) - ㅁ_ㅁ ну хотя бы так,а? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2801877 ✔
    00:48:180 (5) - тут тоже вхистл ✔
[Бакарюююю'с Инсейнь]

  • 00:11:513 (3) - ты специально сделал так? ели нет-то стакни мб?
    00:29:661 (1) - предлагаю чуть-чуть ниже опустить(думаю не все смогут сразу преодолеть этот джамп(мини джамп))
    ну-знаешь,ненавижу бесспинеровые мапы(когда прохожу в ктб),мб сделаешь-в место конца того??
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

ну типо удачи в ранке)
Good Luck ;)
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123

-Bakari- wrote:

Gordon123 wrote:

[Бакарюююю'с Инсейнь]

  • ну-знаешь,ненавижу бесспинеровые мапы(когда прохожу в ктб),мб сделаешь-в место конца того?? не знаю, особо и некуда. надо подумать
там где у Marmowka (в нормале и в харде) :D
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Quick check, as requested by fergas~

[General]

  1. There is no Preview Point in Hard, apparently.
  2. Kiai doesn't really fit how you put it. It's filling up so much of the map and also the whole section has a lot of sudden breaks etc in the music so constant kiai should be avoided imo. You could just have kiai fountains at 00:23:727 and 00:35:579 and have the rest of the map without kiai.
[Normal]

  1. 00:08:912 (5,1) - What the jump o:
  2. 00:16:320 - I don't understand why there is Drum Sampleset and a Whistle here. There is nothing in the music that this hitsound could follow imo.
  3. 00:35:579 (1,2) - Currently the flow is a bit weird here.. If you really want to keep the waveslider (although I think it doesn't fit in here flow-wise) something like this would work better: http://puu.sh/g6XLi/3241859f09.jpg Or alternatively: http://puu.sh/g6XO1/2f422d725e.jpg
  4. 00:40:394 (1) - The Soft Sampleset seems random here o:
  5. 00:44:468 (8) - You can improve the flow significantly by rotating this slider counter-clockwise, so it is like this: http://puu.sh/g6XUB/c90b47b3ca.jpg
  6. Your NCing needs work. I think you tried to place them fitting to certain patterns, but they seem random and inconsistent for the most part. The best would probably be to have one NC every second big white tick and nowhere else, to have a clean and logical comboing pattern.
[Hard]

  1. 00:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - Nice idea, but could be a lot more clean if it was a perfeclty rotated pattern, looking like this when selected: http://puu.sh/g6Ytz/ecd0d705be.jpg Try this code and hopefully you can see the difference:
    Code
    176,136,20764,6,0,B|208:112|208:112|232:136|232:136|264:120,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    301,218,21505,2,0,B|277:186|277:186|301:162|301:162|285:130,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    384,94,22246,2,0,B|352:118|352:118|328:94|328:94|296:110,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    257,12,22986,2,0,B|281:44|281:44|257:68|257:68|273:100,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:36:320 (3,4,5,6) - Combining a 1/2-stack and 1/4-stacks is not a good idea for a Hard difficulty - It looks messy when playing and can be confusing to read for Hard diff players. Consider to use regular spacing between 00:36:320 (3,4)
  3. 00:38:542 (3,4) - I don't really see the reason for the low spacing here - What about http://puu.sh/g6YJD/3b37b6151a.jpg ?
  4. Same thing about NCs as in Normal.
Bakari's Insane seemed fine on my quick look. Hard and Normal need to be tidied up more before it can go to qualified imo.
Good luck!
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Hello, thank you very much . All that is said above I corrected. :oops:

Nya!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Quick check, as requested by fergas~

[General]

  1. There is no Preview Point in Hard, apparently. ✔
  2. Kiai doesn't really fit how you put it. It's filling up so much of the map and also the whole section has a lot of sudden breaks etc in the music so constant kiai should be avoided imo. You could just have kiai fountains at 00:23:727 and 00:35:579 and have the rest of the map without kiai. ✔
[Normal]

  1. 00:08:912 (5,1) - What the jump o: Fixed ✔
  2. 00:16:320 - I don't understand why there is Drum Sampleset and a Whistle here. There is nothing in the music that this hitsound could follow imo. ✔
  3. 00:35:579 (1,2) - Currently the flow is a bit weird here.. If you really want to keep the waveslider (although I think it doesn't fit in here flow-wise) something like this would work better: http://puu.sh/g6XLi/3241859f09.jpg Or alternatively: http://puu.sh/g6XO1/2f422d725e.jpg ✔
  4. 00:40:394 (1) - The Soft Sampleset seems random here o: leave
  5. 00:44:468 (8) - You can improve the flow significantly by rotating this slider counter-clockwise, so it is like this: http://puu.sh/g6XUB/c90b47b3ca.jpg ✔
  6. Your NCing needs work. I think you tried to place them fitting to certain patterns, but they seem random and inconsistent for the most part. The best would probably be to have one NC every second big white tick and nowhere else, to have a clean and logical comboing pattern.Fixed ✔
[Hard]

  1. 00:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - Nice idea, but could be a lot more clean if it was a perfeclty rotated pattern, looking like this when selected: http://puu.sh/g6Ytz/ecd0d705be.jpg Try this code and hopefully you can see the difference:
    [box=Code]
    176,136,20764,6,0,B|208:112|208:112|232:136|232:136|264:120,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    301,218,21505,2,0,B|277:186|277:186|301:162|301:162|285:130,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    384,94,22246,2,0,B|352:118|352:118|328:94|328:94|296:110,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    257,12,22986,2,0,B|281:44|281:44|257:68|257:68|273:100,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    ✔
  2. 00:36:320 (3,4,5,6) - Combining a 1/2-stack and 1/4-stacks is not a good idea for a Hard difficulty - It looks messy when playing and can be confusing to read for Hard diff players. Consider to use regular spacing between 00:36:320 (3,4) ✔
  3. 00:38:542 (3,4) - I don't really see the reason for the low spacing here - What about http://puu.sh/g6YJD/3b37b6151a.jpg ? ✔
  4. Same thing about NCs as in Normal. ✔
Bakari's Insane seemed fine on my quick look. Hard and Normal need to be tidied up more before it can go to qualified imo.
Good luck!
George
George
I don't know anything in russian but this song sounds like it isnt that bad not like that matters or anything
I might also be able to get the video for you if you want :)

---Normal---
00:18:172 (3) - I think the map could play better if this slider has a more rounded shape
00:20:023 (4,5) - I don't think newer players would understand stacks that well, you can either move the second circle or make it another slider
00:23:727 (1,2) - ^
00:24:468 (3) - This slider might be alright if the bottom part doesnt make that zig-zag formation
00:26:690 (5) - Might want to make this a bit more symmetrical to (4)

---Hard---
00:33:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - This feels a bit weird to do (I don't really know what to recommend except for either turn (2,3,4) into a tiny slider or move it to make a pattern
00:36:135 (2) - This doesnt need changed but it might play better if the circle is moved to a different location
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
George, thank you for mod ;)
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
From


Here's my mod ( only hitsounds )
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

Normal
  1. 00:02:986(4)- Remove whistle from slider's head and add on slider's tail
  2. 00:08:172(4)- ^
  3. 00:10:764(1)- ^ and from slider's reverse arrow
  4. 00:11:875(2)- Remove whistle
  5. 00:13:727(5)- Add whistle on slider's reverse arrow
  6. 00:14:838(6)- Remove whistle
  7. 00:16:690(1)- Remove whistle from slider's head and tail and add whistle on slider's reverse arrow
  8. 00:20:023(4)- Add whistle
  9. 00:20:764(1)- Add whistle or finish I'm not sure ~~
  10. 00:23:727(1)- Remove finish
  11. 00:24:468(3)- Add drum whistle on slider's head
  12. 00:25:579(4)- Remove soft sampleset from slider's head and add drum whistle on slider's reverse arrow
  13. 00:26:690(5)- Remove whistle from slider's tail and add clap instead
  14. 00:27:801(7)- Remove soft sampleset from slider's head and remove drum finish frome slider's tail
  15. 00:28:912(2)- Add drum whistle on slider's head
  16. 00:31:875(6)- Add whistle on slider's head
  17. 00:33:529(2)- Remove whistle from slider's head and add it on reverse arrow with drum addition
  18. 00:34:468(4)- ^
  19. 00:37:431(2)- Add drum whistle on slider's reverse arrow
  20. 00:40:764(3)- Add drum whistle on slider's head
  21. 00:42:709(6)- Remove finish from slider's head and keep whistle
  22. 00:48:172(3)- Add drum finish
    Note: Pls remove N:C2 green lines . They're not neccessary

Hard

  • Same as normal

Good luck ! :3
Last edited by meii18 , edited 2 times in total.
Nuolong
1,032 posts
Joined August 2014
Nuolong
N
00:36:875 (1) - Although good distance snapping I recommend flipping it for better reading
00:39:838 (1) - ^ This one is more fine though, but you can still flip it or rotate or something
00:47:431 (1,2,3) - Hawt ending :3 But what about after? There's a same beat at the end that isn't mapped. (You probably know this but, why?)

H
00:13:727 (1) - I feel like this vocal part could be mapped in a swifter fashion (more notes)
00:18:172 (1,2) - Meh, I think this should be more spaced even though distance snapping says it's fine. It doesn't really look nice D: Maybe stack 00:17:801 (3) and 00:18:172 (1) ?
00:34:283 (6) - Maybe it would be better if this was stacked on top of next slider instead
00:47:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay hawt ending again, but same empty end beat. I guess you did it on purpose.

B'S I
00:08:172 (1,2) - I feel a beat in between these should be placed.
00:21:505 (4,1) - Maybe here put weird sliders? Because it goes with the amazing song :3
I like 9 AR better. :3

GOOD LUCK!!!! GREAT MAP :333
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
NolanM , some is fixed, ty for the mod.
LifeJumb
11 posts
Joined October 2014
LifeJumb
Являюсь начинающим маппером, прислушивайся на свое усмотрение.

Инс:
00:14:838 (2) - конец слайдера можно сдвинуть назад на 00:16:042. (на три секции 1/4 по временной шкале) На харде тоже
00:22:246 (1) - тут можно сделать зацикленный слайдер в половину длинны текущего
00:27:431 (2) - можно заглушить конец слайда

В остальном вроде все чисто
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
Insane


-Check Audio Preview Time-
- change to 23727

00:42:616 (5,6) - can u make this sliders same? or its ur deliberate one?

Normal

move your greenline 00:17:834 - to 00:18:172 -


i think it needs more mod and time for avoiding speedrank (i don't like it)
ask other bngs for it is okay to be (it deserves) speedranked
call me back when u are ready.
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Thanks for mod. Ask for another 2-3 mod.Will write you when it will be ready.

Kloyd wrote:

Insane


-Check Audio Preview Time-
- change to 23727 Fixed!

00:42:616 (5,6) - can u make this sliders same? or its ur deliberate one?

Normal

move your greenline 00:17:834 - to 00:18:172 - Fixed!


i think it needs more mod and time for avoiding speedrank (i don't like it)
ask other bngs for it is okay to be (it deserves) speedranked
call me back when u are ready 2-3 mod .
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Улетай на крыльях ветра :3
hi.

Normal
00:08:172 (4) - Fix blanket
00:13:727 (5) - Maybe remove the red point from the middle of slider?
00:04:838 (1) - ^

Hard
00:04:838 (1,2,3) - What about moving it little bit to the left? It won't overlap with previous slider.

Insane seems fine.

Удачи!
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Thanks C:
Ою.... ою.... ою.... ою....

Pjecoo wrote:

Улетай на крыльях ветра :3
hi. o/

Normal
00:08:172 (4) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:13:727 (5) - Maybe remove the red point from the middle of slider? Fixed
00:04:838 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard
00:04:838 (1,2,3) - What about moving it little bit to the left? It won't overlap with previous slider. Fixed

Insane seems fine. Baka Pro :\

Удачи!
Jewelery
Jewelery
Привет, как ты просил:

Normal:
  1. 00:18:172 (3) - я бы предложил это: http://puu.sh/gjI71/c7f6a74ae3.jpg
  2. 00:31:875 (6) - предлагаю в другую сторону выгнуть
  3. 00:38:912 (4) - как то он тут ни к селу ни к городу, предлагаю закруглить его
Hard:
  1. 00:09:283 (4) - Я бы предложил в другую сторону выгнуть
  2. 00:32:616 (5) - предлагаю выключить сетку и передвинуть якорь(ну та красная хрень, если я неверно выразился) на 197 297
  3. 00:39:838 (4) - какой то грустноватый стак, на мой взгляд, я бы немножко расстояние увиличил
Bakari's Insane:
  1. 00:45:209 (3) - ctrl+g? Больше ничего предложить не могу.
Стоит заметить, что мой говноМод стоит расценивать исключительно с субъективной точки зрения. Не стоит воспринимать его всерьез.

Удачи!
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Спасибо большое в очередной раз за небольшую, но помощь.
Финишная прямая...

Jewelery wrote:

Привет, как ты просил:

Normal:
  1. 00:18:172 (3) - я бы предложил это: http://puu.sh/gjI71/c7f6a74ae3.jpg. Та... что так , что так годно , оставлю
  2. 00:31:875 (6) - предлагаю в другую сторону выгнуть. Я просто взял и 3 секунды карты поменял :D (вроде все норм стало)
  3. 00:38:912 (4) - как то он тут ни к селу ни к городу, предлагаю закруглить его. ИЗИ ВООПЩИ
Hard:
  1. 00:09:283 (4) - Я бы предложил в другую сторону выгнуть. Чувства , тембр , элемент БОГ!
  2. 00:32:616 (5) - предлагаю выключить сетку и передвинуть якорь(ну та красная хрень, если я неверно выразился) на 197 297. Якорь - он и в Африке якорь Пусть и лежит на дне
  3. 00:39:838 (4) - какой то грустноватый стак, на мой взгляд, я бы немножко расстояние увиличил. Пусть хоть где то люди чуствуют боль...
Bakari's Insane:
  1. 00:45:209 (3) - ctrl+g? Больше ничего предложить не могу.
Стоит заметить, что мой говноМод стоит расценивать исключительно с субъективной точки зрения. Не стоит воспринимать его всерьез.

Удачи!
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
fergas' request suggestion.

[Normal]
00:04:838 (1) - Adjust the blanket please.
00:08:172 (4) - This could also blanket (3)'s head.
00:08:912 (5) - And after you edit the one above, remember to adjust this to match (4)'s end.
00:13:727 (5) - Tone down the curve a bit to match the pattern with (7) better. It will look prettier that way.
00:24:468 (2) - I'd like it more if it was a zigzag slider instead of a polygonal curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852425
00:31:505 (5) - New combo.
00:32:616 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:579 (5) - New combo.
00:36:875 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:838 (1,2) - Swap new combo. (Please follow these combo suggestions to match same new combos as in Hard, which will make much more sense than the current pattern)
00:41:875 (5) - Tone down the curve again to blanket (3)'s end better.

[Hard]
00:02:986 (5) - Should blanket (6)'s end.
00:09:283 (4) - Would flow better reversed.
00:17:801 (3,1) - Swap the new combo.
00:24:468 (3) - Turn into 1/2 slider and add a circle in the current end. That way the whole stutter part will be a stream, and it won't be missing the first click.
00:30:023 (5) - Edit the blanket to (4) a little bit.
00:31:875 (3) - Move to 376|152 and then adjust the previous circles a little bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852469 (remember to move the objects after this a little bit, too)
00:34:098 (5,6) - Don't stack these. The previous stack was with 1/4, so having a 1/2 stack right after might be confusing.
00:42:246 (4) - Turn into 1/2 slider again. Same thing as 00:24:468.

[Insane]
00:14:838 (2) - Fix blanket.
00:17:801 (1,2) - Rhythm suggestion. http://puu.sh/gnD4v/c146a69c95.png
00:46:690 (4,5) - I don't know about this. Sure it kinda matches the music, but it's complicated and sounds dumb with hitsounds. Maybe just use a 3/4 repeat slider.

Best song I've heard in a while, mapset will hopefully be great after some tidying and design improvement in the Normal and Hard.
Also reminds me of Mado Kara Mieru too much.

Good luck.
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
SNB Thanks for star and mod! :oops:
Flying ^^

Static Noise Bird wrote:

fergas' request suggestion.


[Normal]
00:04:838 (1) - Adjust the blanket please. Fixed
00:08:172 (4) - This could also blanket (3)'s head. Fixed
00:08:912 (5) - And after you edit the one above, remember to adjust this to match (4)'s end. Fixed
00:13:727 (5) - Tone down the curve a bit to match the pattern with (7) better. It will look prettier that way. Fixed (down)
00:24:468 (2) - I'd like it more if it was a zigzag slider instead of a polygonal curve. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852425 Fixed (nice idea)
00:31:505 (5) - New combo. Fixed
00:32:616 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
00:35:579 (5) - New combo. Fixed
00:36:875 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
00:39:838 (1,2) - Swap new combo. (Please follow these combo suggestions to match same new combos as in Hard, which will make much more sense than the current pattern) Fixed
00:41:875 (5) - Tone down the curve again to blanket (3)'s end better. Fixed (new element)

[Hard]
00:02:986 (5) - Should blanket (6)'s end. Fixed
00:09:283 (4) - Would flow better reversed. Fixed
00:17:801 (3,1) - Swap the new combo. Fixed
00:24:468 (3) - Turn into 1/2 slider and add a circle in the current end. That way the whole stutter part will be a stream, and it won't be missing the first click. No. I'll leave.
00:30:023 (5) - Edit the blanket to (4) a little bit. Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - Move to 376|152 and then adjust the previous circles a little bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2852469 (remember to move the objects after this a little bit, too) Fixed
00:34:098 (5,6) - Don't stack these. The previous stack was with 1/4, so having a 1/2 stack right after might be confusing. Fixed
00:42:246 (4) - Turn into 1/2 slider again. Same thing as 00:24:468. No. I'll leave.

[Insane]
00:14:838 (2) - Fix blanket.
00:17:801 (1,2) - Rhythm suggestion. http://puu.sh/gnD4v/c146a69c95.png
00:46:690 (4,5) - I don't know about this. Sure it kinda matches the music, but it's complicated and sounds dumb with hitsounds. Maybe just use a 3/4 repeat slider.

Best song I've heard in a while, mapset will hopefully be great after some tidying and design improvement in the Normal and Hard.
Also reminds me of Mado Kara Mieru too much.

Good luck.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
I'd rather keep the slider as it is because it feels more suitable for me. The rest is applied. Thank you!

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Audiofile.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 23727
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17809,23735
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.799999

[Metadata]
Title:ULETAJ
TitleUnicode:ULETAJ
Artist:Retroflex Encoded
ArtistUnicode:Retroflex Encoded
Creator:Marmowka
Version:Bakari's Insane
Source:
Tags:russian glitch acontrariproject retroflex encoded natalia morozova fly away on the wings of the wind prince igor alexander borodin -bakari-
BeatmapID:640037
BeatmapSetID:282749

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sfsfsfs_000001.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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43727,-100,4,1,2,100,0,0
44098,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
48357,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 225,238,111
Combo2 : 255,154,53
Combo3 : 102,221,242
Combo4 : 237,115,247

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Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
хэй,где ранк я не понял?? хах, а ну го го!! здёздыыы~~ в придачу
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka

Gordon123 wrote:

хэй,где ранк я не понял?? хах, а ну го го!! здёздыыы~~ в придачу
:D Сам жду с нетерпением *o*

З.Ы Cпасибо за звездочки ;)
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
Yeah, cool, it's actually pretty good now. Just last little fixes before I'm going to bubble this. These two are for Normal:
00:35:949 (2) - I don't know if you edited it or if I just missed it last time, but this blanket really should be improved.
00:43:357 (1) - 352|240 please, it's too high now and it ruins the flow. Here's also a placement suggestion for the last two objects. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2856795

Remove the timingpoints at 17:801 and 48:172. (Normal)
Remove the timingpoint at 48:172. (Hard)
These points have identical timingpoints just before them, and therefore are completely unnecessary.

Also there's this error:


Don't rename it, just replace the current BG with this one and it will be fine: http://puu.sh/gp84f/0984a09599.jpg
(I don't know why didn't I check the technical stuff properly last time orz)

Poke me again when updates are completed and uploaded.

(no kudosu for this)
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Fixed all
!

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Yeah, cool, it's actually pretty good now. Just last little fixes before I'm going to bubble this. These two are for Normal:
00:35:949 (2) - I don't know if you edited it or if I just missed it last time, but this blanket really should be improved.
00:43:357 (1) - 352|240 please, it's too high now and it ruins the flow. Here's also a placement suggestion for the last two objects. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2856795

Remove the timingpoints at 17:801 and 48:172. (Normal)
Remove the timingpoint at 48:172. (Hard)
These points have identical timingpoints just before them, and therefore are completely unnecessary.

Also there's this error:


Don't rename it, just replace the current BG with this one and it will be fine: http://puu.sh/gp84f/0984a09599.jpg
(I don't know why didn't I check the technical stuff properly last time orz)

Poke me again when updates are completed and uploaded.

(no kudosu for this)
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
Yessss, great.

Улетай, прелестный пузырек~
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Hey again ~

After I listened the song , I think at the end of the song is a duplication D:

Maybe form this vid :


That duplication is not a part of the original song . You should remove the duplication or find a better mp3

No Kudosu ~

Good Luck ~
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
ByBy_ChAn

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hey again ~

After I listened the song , I think at the end of the song is a duplication D:

Maybe form this vid :


That duplication is not a part of the original song . You should remove the duplication or find a better mp3

No Kudosu ~

Good Luck ~

No, it's a good ending to the track. :|

!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
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завтра займусь
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka

Sieg wrote:

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завтра займусь
Нет.Слов.Одни.Эмоции.

riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

That duplication is not a part of the original song . You should remove the duplication or find a better mp3
It is a part of this video and it is sounds like the artist intended to have it here. As for the quality of mp3, I've checked it and it seems quite acceptable for me. Though I wouldn't mind another check. If you're still unsure, the genre is glitch, and it is its nature to have this kind of noises. More info.

Thank you for taking some time to take alook at the song, though.
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
The original song is just as bad quality (which is a shame because it's really good), so there's not much to do regarding that issue.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
привет!
очевидно, что я, что-то упустил в первый раз

[General]
  1. нормал-хитнормал слишком громкий, сделай версию тише из стандартного, что-то около -3db должно быть лучше
  2. ^ не забудь сделать версию normal-hitnormal2.wav из него
  3. вы же собирались обрезать мп3? http://puu.sh/gq7TQ/222de259cc.mp3 оффсет менять не надо
  4. нормал надо сделать сложнее (плотнее в плане ритма) или замапать еще одну сложность(что лучше), сейчас твой сет
    [I---H------N] Хард достаточно много использует 1\2 ритмы + триплеты + есть даже не большой стрим, когда твой нормал это в основном 2\1 и 1\1 с одним-двумя 1\2
[Bakari's Insane]
  1. 00:32:061 (4,5) - добавьте им каких-нибудь хитсаундов, вистлы к примеру, их сейчас не слышно совсем
    00:43:357 (2) - из-этого можно сделать авто-драм + финиш, просто хитнормал звучит лишним из-за хсов на этом слайдере 00:43:542 (3)
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - паттерн выглядит ужасно, я вроде уже писал про это, почему-бы не сделать что-нибудь такое http://puu.sh/gq8dK/098ef9c5da.jpg
остальное все отлично, позовете потом
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Я обновил. воть
!!!

Sieg wrote:

привет!
очевидно, что я, что-то упустил в первый раз

[General]
  1. нормал-хитнормал слишком громкий, сделай версию тише из стандартного, что-то около -3db должно быть лучше
  2. ^ не забудь сделать версию normal-hitnormal2.wav из него
  3. вы же собирались обрезать мп3? http://puu.sh/gq7TQ/222de259cc.mp3 оффсет менять не надо
  4. нормал надо сделать сложнее (плотнее в плане ритма) или замапать еще одну сложность(что лучше), сейчас твой сет
    [I---H------N] Хард достаточно много использует 1\2 ритмы + триплеты + есть даже не большой стрим, когда твой нормал это в основном 2\1 и 1\1 с одним-двумя 1\2
[Bakari's Insane]
  1. 00:32:061 (4,5) - добавьте им каких-нибудь хитсаундов, вистлы к примеру, их сейчас не слышно совсем
    00:43:357 (2) - из-этого можно сделать авто-драм + финиш, просто хитнормал звучит лишним из-за хсов на этом слайдере 00:43:542 (3)
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - паттерн выглядит ужасно, я вроде уже писал про это, почему-бы не сделать что-нибудь такое http://puu.sh/gq8dK/098ef9c5da.jpg
остальное все отлично, позовете потом
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
alright, so here's you bubble back
to next BN - pay a bit of attention to spread, should be fine now but another check will not hurt
moreover you may want to recheck timing because we changed mp3, should also be fine tho

metadata confirmation from artist:
http://puu.sh/gqdQA/e2963f20e2.png
Marmowka
511 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Спасибо что перепроверил и уделил время :?

Sieg wrote:

alright, so here's you bubble back
to next BN - pay a bit of attention to spread, should be fine now but another check will not hurt
moreover you may want to recheck timing because we changed mp3, should also be fine tho

metadata confirmation from artist:
http://puu.sh/gqdQA/e2963f20e2.png
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
@Sieg: The timing is good (I checked) and the difficulty spread/note density between each difficulty has just about the equal amount if difficulty increase for each section of the map without overdoing it (I double-checked this one. If any QAT disagree, then I can at least learn from it. No worries). Anyways, we only fixed some minor stuff in Insane and set the AR to 5 on Normal difficulty. No changes from Hard difficulty (check IRC mod below).

Map nominated for qualification!

IRC Mod
09:44 Marmowka: Hello, watch my map t/299531 (to qual)
09:45 BeatofIke: ah bubbled
09:47 BeatofIke: I'll probably check it later o.o
09:49 Marmowka: Thank you
09:49 Marmowka: :)
12:15 BeatofIke: I.....probably would use AR5 for Normal o.o
12:16 Marmowka: 1 sec
12:17 Marmowka: hmm no problem
12:19 BeatofIke: Also, the spread is okay imo
12:19 BeatofIke: and I'm an old BAT lol
12:23 Marmowka: I change the Normal AR for 5?
12:23 BeatofIke: yes
12:25 BeatofIke: 00:45:209 (3,4) - For bakari's Insane, I think replacing these notes with a 3/4 reverse slider to follow the synths better :)
12:26 BeatofIke: 00:47:246 (5) - also, this note doesn't follow anything. I would remove it lol
12:28 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/grRpl.jpg yea?
12:28 BeatofIke: yes :)
12:29 Marmowka: C:
12:32 Marmowka: 00:45:209 (3,4) - I think it's better not to change :| It's all good
12:33 BeatofIke: okay then :)
12:35 BeatofIke: Add some lead-in seconds
12:35 BeatofIke: the map starts suddenly lol
12:35 BeatofIke: I recommend 2000
12:42 Marmowka: Don't. osu! automatically sets it confirmed with TicClick C:
12:42 BeatofIke: it should :/
12:43 BeatofIke: It probably does on gameplay or something o.o
12:43 BeatofIke: okay, it does lol
12:44 BeatofIke: you don't have to change then :P
12:44 Marmowka: :D
12:44 BeatofIke: Your map passed the background check :)
12:45 Marmowka: @_@
12:45 Marmowka: :O
12:45 Marmowka: What's next?
12:48 BeatofIke: nothing :)
12:48 BeatofIke: I think your map is ready :)
12:48 Marmowka: I update it?
12:49 BeatofIke: yes :)
12:50 Marmowka: ready
12:51 BeatofIke: 00:47:246 (5) - this slider should be 1/3
12:51 BeatofIke: 00:46:690 (4) -
12:51 BeatofIke: this one sorry
12:53 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/grT6a.jpg
12:53 Marmowka: ?
12:53 BeatofIke: yes
12:54 Marmowka: ready
12:55 BeatofIke: 00:43:542 (3) - Just one more thing, this slider is overmapped. Should only be a circle here :)
12:55 BeatofIke: I will rank afterwards
12:56 BeatofIke: don't forget to add the whistle back too
12:57 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/grToj.jpg
12:57 BeatofIke: yes
12:58 Marmowka: update
12:58 BeatofIke: 00:45:209 (3,4) - I.....still think you should replace these notes with a 3/4 reverse slider to follow the synths better XD
12:58 BeatofIke: but whatever, it's not overmapped, so I'm not complaining XD
12:58 BeatofIke: let's do this ^_^
12:59 Marmowka: Take a screenshot
12:59 BeatofIke: 00:43:542 (3) - this should be normal-whistle lol
12:59 Marmowka: as better
13:00 Marmowka: http://puu.sh/grTFi.jpg
13:00 Marmowka: sample normal yes?
13:01 BeatofIke: yes
13:01 BeatofIke: or auto, doesn't matter
13:07 Marmowka: my internet crash
13:08 Marmowka: sry
13:08 Marmowka: 00:45:209 (3,4) - Leave ? :D
13:10 BeatofIke: sure :)
13:10 BeatofIke: I can still hear the 1/2 in the music so it doesn't really matter ^_^
13:11 BeatofIke: Think that's about it finally.
13:11 BeatofIke: If you are ready for rank, I can do it right now :)
13:12 Marmowka: 1 sec
13:12 BeatofIke: double-check everything to make sure (I wil double-check as well)
13:12 Marmowka: I AM READY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
13:13 Marmowka: :dddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
13:13 BeatofIke: okay XD
13:15 Marmowka: I'm worried ><
13:15 Marmowka: :DDDD
13:15 BeatofIke: Why worried? o.o
13:16 Marmowka: I do not know ,: D
13:16 Marmowka: :DDDD
13:21 BeatofIke: oh btw, did you ask Baraki before making those changes :)
13:22 Marmowka: yes , skype
13:22 BeatofIke: ah okay :)
13:22 BeatofIke: that way no guest mapper would spam my PM XD
13:23 BeatofIke: give me a sec, I'm still making a rank post owo
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