Thanks for the mod~!Lazer wrote:
Taken care of.
[Insane]
00:04:132 (7,1) - Spacing is off between those two did that on purpose to make a small jump
Good luck with your map ^^ <3
Thanks for the mod~!Lazer wrote:
Taken care of.
[Insane]
00:04:132 (7,1) - Spacing is off between those two did that on purpose to make a small jump
Good luck with your map ^^ <3
416,72,31662,6,0,L|416:152,1,8000:37:838 (1) - i feel the flow is not good in here, suggest to change the place to 144,88
144,88,37838,5,8,0:0:0:0:00:48:073 (1) - make the slider shorter to 00:48:162 ,00:48:250 add a note
Anyways... I added some hitsounds in this update. Thanks for the mod!koyomiya wrote:
[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit
sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound. What do you mean?
here:DavidEd wrote:
Anyways... I added some hitsounds in this update. Thanks for the mod!koyomiya wrote:
[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit
sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound. What do you mean?
Heres the update!Updateosu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: attakaindakaraa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61708
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.199999
[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara~
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Anba
ArtistUnicode:アンバ
Creator:[ Way ]
Version:DavidEd's Hard
Source:
Tags:honeyworks kumamushi hatsune miku vocaloid Because It's Warm~ Lolparty DavidEd
BeatmapID:644573
BeatmapSetID:276201
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Thanks for the mod!koyomiya wrote:
from koyomiya queue. thanks for waiting my mod.koyomiya mod[general]
timing
i know the first beat is changing, but timing cant resnap, 00:49:485 - may be insert 5/4 I'm a little confused, but this part is definitely in 4/4 time.
00:50:015 ~ 00:56:896, the timing are abit no match, suggest recheck the timing.you will hear the problem when play at 50% I'll try to find someone who can time this part better than me ;~;
inherited point
place it nicely as you can.....it hard to determined wat using for, place it to the white point that i draw Fixed easy and normal, i'll get to insane when i get back from class
[easy]
00:11:544 00:11:897 00:55:131 01:01:307 - inherited point doesnt use, might delete it. removed all
[normal]
00:04:485 00:35:897 01:01:308 - inherited point doesnt use, might delete it. removed all
00:01:132 (2) - change to slider to fit his voice. fixed
01:10:484 (5) - may be reverse slider will better? added
[DavidEd's Hard]
the hit sound custom 2 didnt apply in the song folder, althought is set to S:C2, but it take default hit sound. add custom 2 hit sound or change the hit sound Changed this for him
[Insane]
00:37:309 - is not necessary to change the velocity to 0.8. suggest put back to 1.0. you can put same distance by using pressing alt to adjust the spacing to 0.8 SV doesn't really matter here anymore, but i'm keeping the inherited point because volume change
00:38:191 00:38:897 - this 2 inherited point is same, which are you using it? the one which is not using delete it. removed one
01:13:839 - inherited point is a bit over, move to 01:13:837 the point was snapped on 01:13:838 already ;-;
00:37:044 (7) - i think is no need to add. a little bit strange when pressing..might delete it, I'd rather the player only singletap the slow part, unchanged for now
Thanks for the mod! ;3qxqd_1993 wrote:
DavidEd's Hard:
01:06:779(1) Beautiful sliders, but it does not make sence, i mean, i guess stream can make better effect here since in kiai.
01:08:721(4) I do believe it will be better to New a combo here. And a jump can be stirring i think. Made a new combo at 01:08:191(1) instead because thats where the sv change starts.
01:10:132(1,2,3,4) I love this combo but... Circle 3 seems making no effect?
Thank you for the mod ;3Chaoslitz wrote:
[Hard]
- 00:48:779 (4,5,6) - increase the spacing here fixed
Thanks for the mod!Chaoslitz wrote:
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:54:073 (4,5) - try to move slider's tail for a better flow fixed
[Insane]
- 00:07:838 (3,5) - Not stacked completely they were stacked fine already
- 00:21:250 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - may be too hard for a normal diff, try using some sliders? changed one into a slider
- 00:31:132 (3,4) - flow looks bad here, try to fix this fixed
- 00:03:250 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Increase the ds for 00:03:779 (5,6,7), this is too close for jump I think it's fine
- 00:07:132 (1) - NC here instead There already was one though?
- 00:28:838 (8) - 1/2 slider instead fixed
sorry for late mod ;w;
First star, thanks!qxqd_1993 wrote:
But posted one star=w=
Fixed everything else you told me to, thanks for the mod!Gamu wrote:
Hello~!
I found this map in #modreqs. yay #modreqs actually did something!
Sorry, i'll check only the General, Easy and Normal.[General][Easy]
- I think timing is fine o3o welp, if a BN says so, then...
- Correct Romanised Title: Attakain Dakara Fixed
Tags: warm~ ⇒ warm
"~" is unnecessary.- Kiai time hasn't been unified, so i would recommend that you fix it. Fixed
- Preview Time is unsnapped. Set to 61705. Fixed
- AudioLeadIn : Set to 1000. Open the osu.file, then please enter the 1000. Fixed
- Disable the "Letterbox during breaks" and "Widescreen Support". Fixed
- Your insane diff: 01:15:338 (1) - new combo is required! Fixed
[Normal]
- 00:01:485 (1) - Add a finish at the start point!
- 00:26:897 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
- 00:27:956 (2) - Spacing error. It must be fixed to about 1.0x.
- 00:29:721 (4,1) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:32:544 (5) - Add a new combo.
- 00:37:838 (2) - Remove a circle. It would be better.
- 00:38:191 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
- 00:42:779 - Please use the soft-slidertick3 here.
- 00:43:838 (4,1) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:46:662 (5) - Add a new combo.
- 00:54:073 (4,1) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:56:897 (4) - Add a new combo.
- 00:58:308 (3) - Add a finish at the start point.
- 00:59:720 (1) - ^
- 01:05:367 (5,1) - Swap these new combos.
- 01:08:191 (4) - Add a new combo and finish.
- 00:01:485 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
- 00:12:073 (1) - Remove a new combo.
- 00:13:485 (6) - Add a new combo.
- 00:15:603 (1,3) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:18:426 (1) - Remove a new combo.
- 00:19:838 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
- 00:26:897 (1) - ^
- 00:32:544 (1) - ^
- 00:38:191 (1) - ^
- 00:42:956 (1,3) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:45:250 (1) - Remove a new combo.
- 00:56:897 (1) - Add a finish.
- 00:58:308 (4) - ^ at the start point.
- 00:59:191 (1,2) - Swap these new combos.
- 00:59:720 (1) - Add a finish.
- 01:08:191 (1) - ^ at the start point.
New combos are inappropriate, and some finishs are missing. Mainly i checked it.
Since this map is still a issues with the quality, please try to get many mods.
Good luck
Thanks for the mod!Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
Hi, From my QueuegeneralMaybe you can change your preview time to 01:01:661 - or 01:02:544 - you're right, sounds better at 01:01:661 -InsaneI hope you can put more notes in the four corners of the grid. yeah, apparently i really like mapping in the center
00:03:779 (5,6,7) - Maybe more closer to the next slider. I suggest x=313 y=111. i like the little jump it makes, fits the vocals. unchanged
00:05:721 (5) - NC? fixed
00:05:985 (6) - Delete this? There's no clear beat. sounds and feels better with a triple imo
00:08:544 (7) - NC fixed
00:09:073 (1) - continue combo got it
00:39:426 - Add something here? there's nothing to tap to there though .-.
00:46:662 (7) - NC? fixed
00:47:191 (8,9,10,11) - More closer to the next slider. I suggest x=68 y=209 again, the little jump matches the sudden pitch change in the vocals
00:48:779 (4,5,6) - Separate them, just like what you did in 01:13:132 (1,2,3) - made them a bit spaced
00:54:426 (2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, Ctrl+G, then make them closer to the next slider, just like what you did on 00:53:014 (2,3,4) - the small jump fits the song better imo
I expected a triple from 01:05:544 - to 01:05:720 - you're right, continuity. fixed
Maybe you can decrease the volume of hitsounds from 00:51:250 - to 00:56:897 - ? lowered volume even more
I'm sorry because I can't give any suggestion to Lolparty's Insane
Because I've never seen the mapping style he used. lol, don't worry about it
Anyway, This is a really nice song.
Hope it can be ranked.
Thanks for the mod!Jewelery wrote:
DavidEd's Hard:
- 00:08:544 (1) - i think the better placement of this slider is here: http://puu.sh/ggbch/6fab526768.jpg fix
- 00:30:250 (4,5) - i think stacking doesnt looks good here, it a bit confusing after 00:29:544 (1,2,3) - fix
- 00:40:132 (5) - this looks better in my point of view
- 00:41:721 (5,6) - this doesnt looks neat in this moment imo, i think better way is just make them like this fix
- 00:47:721 (5) - i'd like to move this slider to 472 120 fix
- 00:51:250 - btw you can map this part fI actually mapped this part before you modded xD
- 01:11:015 (1) - missing note here, guess this should be repeating slider but it isnt good solution as for me fix
Thanks for the mod~!Jewelery wrote:
Hi, mod from t/306264
General:Easy:
- Clear
Normal:
- 00:21:250 (3) - not sure but i think this slider should looks like this i like the ice cream shape it makes though
- 00:23:368 (2) - guess you can move this slider to 288 136 because your variation isnt looks neat fixed
Lolparty's Insane:
- 00:31:662 (4) - this slider doesnt looks like nice in my opinion, but i cant propose nice solution, just keep it in mind i know what you mean
- 00:35:368 (1) - you can ctrl+G this i think it's fine
- 00:36:603 (3) - huh i think better way to place this slider with with 1,25 sv but somebody could shout about sv changes i'm not going to mess around with SV changes outside of kiai in a Normal
- 00:46:132 (5,6,7,8) - imo this looks better fixed
- 00:47:015 (1) - i think better way is ctrl+c this 00:47:897 (3) - and ctrl+shift+r it good idea, fixed
- 00:52:309 (3,4) - i think this is better placement of sliders fixed
- 00:54:073 (1) - i'd like to use here 1.25 sv but dont think this is good idea same as last SV change suggestion
- 01:01:485 (2,3,4) - this could be 1-2 repeating sliders fixed
Insane:
- 00:06:426 (3) - i think this note could be moved to 328 192
- 00:06:603 (4) - annd that note to 168 72
- 00:12:250 (5) - doesnt looks neat, you can try to place it to 239 287
- 00:31:662 (1) - this slider looks random, i'd like to place it like this: http://puu.sh/ggbKg/1546b79af2.jpg but it doesnt good solution as for me
- 00:45:779 (7,8) - i'd like to place (7) to 200 256 and (8) to 392 256
- 00:48:779 (8,9,10) - this looks really weird. 1/12 with this spacing will be hard
- 01:02:367 (9) - guess it should be on 312 80
- 01:13:132 (8,9,10) - weird place
he fixed everything here
wow i like this, dont see problems! :]
Huh, nice work.
Feel free to ignore most of parts of my mod, remember - this is subjective opinion
sry for bad English >_</ don't worry, i understood you perfectly
Good luck! Thanks!
Thanks alot for the mod!Tarrasky wrote:
DavidEd's Hard
00:26:809 - until 00:32:544 - add Clap Hitsound like the rest of the map Fixed and added more hitsounds
00:42:073 (6) - add clap Fix
00:43:838 (7) - add finish ^
01:14:544 (5) - add NC ^
nice map, i like ^^
@-Tochi: everything fixed, thanks for the mod and the star~!Tarrasky wrote:
NM from my queue
Easy
00:19:838 (1) - add Finish fixed
00:25:485 (1) - maybe add NC fixed
00:27:956 (2) - remove Finish fixed
add Finish in 00:32:544 (1) - fixed
00:32:544 (1) - The prev. and next. is 1,06x, you can stretch this slider a little to make exactly 1,00x in next. and prev.fixed
00:51:250 (1) - i dont like this slider :/, the distance is 1,16x and it dont have a good flow, try make like here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2855587, for me is perfect ^^ made it pretty similar to yours
00:55:132 (5) - MY JESUS, only I jump scared here? was so sudden, great hitsound ^^8]
00:57:602 (3) - add NC fixed
Normal
00:12:073 (5,1) - Im not sure if the rank criteria will accept this (distance 0,60x) :c I think it's fine, I'll keep it unless a BN tells me to fix it
00:35:368 (1) - Ctrl + G maybe ehh, fixed
01:14:544 (1) - simmetric like the Easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2855625 i think i did it similiar to how you wanted?
Insane
00:26:721 (6) - move from x:128 y:120 I want the player to jump to match the vocals. no change
01:07:838 (5,6) - High distance, try to make a stream of 0,80x distance plays fine and reads fine, no change
Only this, nice map
Congrats and good luck >w< Thanks for the mod!
Thanks for the mod~!NewIpas wrote:
Hello!~
From my Queue's xDModEasy:
- 00:25:485 (5,1) - I don't like this flow @_@ Made this smoother
Nice!Normal:
- 00:09:956 (1) - Fix blanket blanket_fixed
Nice!Insane:
- 01:03:955 (1) - Curve this in direction to slider (4) I think it's fine
Nice!
I think this is ready for ranked? :D
Good Luck!~
Really helpful mod, thanks!-Nya- wrote:
DavidEd’s Hard:
- 00:55:132 (1) -Why did you place this spinner directly on top of the tail of 00:54:779 (3) - ? This is unrankable. Please start the spinner here: 00:55:485 – No clue how it ended up like that ;l
- 00:06:956 (4) –Hm, since this is a difficult triple, this jump is a bit too harsh in my eyes. Why not rather stack this triple on the tail of 00:06:250 (2) -? Plays much better now
- 00:09:779 (4) –Space this triple normally please. Don’t place a jump here. Fix
- 00:11:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –I’m never a fan of randomly placed circles. Try to make a circle pattern out of these circles. Like this: Was trying to make it look like a heart but it more looks like end of a spear xD fixd
The (8) is stacked on top of (7).- 00:28:309 (2) –Hm, rather space this out normally. I know you tried to make a stack there but players might think they have to click it earlier than they have to. Fix
- 00:38:191 –Since this is a very strong beat. I rather suggest you end the spinner earlier and place a slider here: 00:38:191 –
- 01:09:956 (2,3,4) –Keep this spacing consistent to 01:08:721 (2,3,4,5,6) –please. But imo you should rather space 01:08:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - out normally (don’t let them touch).
- 01:10:661 (5,6,1) –Rather space these out normally as well, so they don’t touch. If you don’t keep the spacing here consistent, it’s quite confusing. Remapped the last part
Thanks for the mod!-Nya- wrote:
General:
- Check all the diffs again, including Hard, and make sure all of them has an audio lead-in of 2000ms. Just go to the .osu file and type in “2000” next to “Audio lead-in”. Gamu said 1000, but more doesn't hurt, I guess. changed
- Add these two soundfiles into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide sound: added
http://puu.sh/gq5BN/a69f19986e.wav
http://puu.sh/gq5Ek/b32f5a0f37.wav- 00:38:191 – to 00:49:485 – Why don’t you place kiai time here as well? It sounds like the chorus to me. I'd rather just have the end be kiai as a sort of "big finish," like everything else in the song was leading up to it
- Did you use a grid size of “tiny”? If you didn’t, I really advise you do, since you will be able to place notes more accurately and make better blankets. well it was more like 30% small grid, 70% grid off :/
Easy:
- 00:07:132 (1,3,4) –Please avoid this overlap. It looks untidy and it’s possible to avoid it. fixed
- 00:11:721 -I can’t hear this beat/hitsound. Either make the volume higher there or make a different plan. Just make sure that the beat there is audible. Like 00:12:073 (4) – Try using this hitsound, then it should be fine. i think it was fine, but fixed anyway
- 00:14:191 (1,2,5,6) –Eh, I really don’t like overlaps like these in an Easy diff. Try your best to prevent those notes from touching. It looks untidy if you leave it like that. fixed
- 00:16:309 (5,2) –Not a good overlap at all. Prevent it please. You can try to prevent it by making a blanket with 00:17:015 (1) – fixed the overlap, didn't blanket though
- 00:27:956 (2,1) –Looks messy. Either try to stack it properly or make a different plan. You can try placing it here: X:276 Y:164. fixed
- 00:42:073 (2,1) –Avoid overlap by making the blanket with (2) better. fixed
- 00:45:956 (2,2) –Even an overlap like this looks bad. Avoid it by moving 00:47:721 (2) –a bit downwards. fixed
- 00:55:132 (5,2) –Stack properly by placing 00:56:897 (2) –here: X:156 Y:108. fixed
- 01:01:838 (4,5,1) –Hm, rather place these notes like this for better flow: fixed
- 01:06:779 (1) –For consistency, either remove the new combo here or add new combo here: 00:42:426 (3) – added on the 3
- 01:06:779 (1,2) –Eh, try to improve this overlap. Like this: fixed
- 01:10:308 (4) –Rather place the (4) here: fixed
Not a bad diff at all, but try to improve the placement of the notes though. There are a lot of places with ugly overlaps that seriously has to be fixed to improve the “look” of the diff.Normal:
- 00:08:544 (4) –Try placing this slider somewhere here to make a nice triangle shape with 00:07:485 (2,3) – fixed
- 00:12:073 (5) –Rather place this slider here please: not too crazy about this, but fixed anyway
- 00:16:662 (5) –Stack this circle on the head of 00:14:897 (3) – fixed
- 00:21:250 (3,4,5) –Eh, I really don’t suggest this pattern/rhythm in a Normal diff. Rather turn these three circles into a slider. fixed
- 00:25:132 (5) –Rather place this slider here: fixed
- 00:31:662 (4) –I don’t like this pattern. Try this instead: I think the back and forth motion is fine
- 00:42:426 (3,4,5) –Rather not use a triple like this. Change the three circles into a slider instead. fixed
- 00:46:132 (5,6,7,8) –Definitely not. Do this: fixed
Insane:
- 00:00:956 (2,3,4) –Hm, rather space these out normally please. It will make it easier to read. I think the readability is fine. gave it a little more spacing though.
- 00:03:779 (5) –Rather place the (5) here? i don't think i'm going to sacrifice a lot of flow for slightly better aesthetics, sorry
- 00:07:838 (5) –Why not space this out like you spaced out these notes: 00:07:132 (1,2,3,4) – made the 5, 6, and 1 @2x DS
- 00:37:309 (1,2,3,4,5) –Hm, maybe space these notes out normally as well, so they’re not touching. Players might think they have to click on the notes earlier than they are supposed to. i think the slower music justifies the spacing. no change
- 01:08:102 (6) –Don’t make a jump here. Space normally please. fixed
Overall, not bad at all. But it still requires more mods though till it will be ready for rank.
Good Luck~!
Thanks for the mod~!-July- wrote:
Hi! Random mod from #modreqs #modreqs worked for the second time
I'm best with Easies and Normals so I'll be modding those. :3Easy
- 00:12:073 (4) - Usually, I don't see people use extended reverse sliders in Easy, maybe change it to a normal slider that ends on the same note that it had ended? I think the reverse arrows matching the drums sounds nice, the normal slider won't have that same effect
- 00:53:720 (3) - I can't hear any anything in the music here. >w< it matches the little piano the background ;~;
- 01:03:602 (2) - It's touching the HP bar, on some skins, it might even be obscured by it, I'd recommend it to be placed lower down within the mapping area just to be safe. fixed to be safe
- Starting from when you have Kiai Time, maybe you can turn the volume up slightly. (Maybe 10% to 20% higher) +15% all diffs
- 01:14:544 (1,1) - Reverse the slider and start the spinner at 01:15:426 instead. fixed
Normal
I hoped this helped! >w<
- I've notice you used a lot of very short 4/4 sliders. I'd recommend to lessen the amount of those since Normal is still mostly for newer players. I feel like the difficulty would be too close to Easy if I removed a few of the 1/2 sliders
- 00:31:132 (3,4,5) - This part looks really cramped together which gives a slightly messy appearance. Maybe you could rearrange it slightly to make it a bit better looking? made some room, fixed
- 01:14:544 (1,1) - Just the same as mentioned in Easy. fixed
Ty for the mod!Smug- wrote:
[Hard]
Same hitsounding suggestion as Easy Fix
00:07:132 (6) - Add NC here instead of 00:07:485 (1) - Fix
00:09:956 (6) - ^ Fix
00:17:015 (3) - NC goes here Fix
00:21:250 (3) - ^ Fix
00:29:721 (3) - ^ etc etc, I won't keep pointing these out but if you decide to change these, look out for them yourself Fix
00:48:779 (4) - SV shouldn't speed up here, just keep it at the samespeed
00:55:485 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here
01:13:132 (3) - Same SV suggestion
Smug- wrote:
From #modreqs!
Hallo :3
This song is indeed adorable it's too cute ;~;
You should let me do a light insane diff to even out the spread (please) :D
Offset -5 is much better after testplaying changed on all diffs to match yours
[Easy]
In the beginning you're hitsounding claps even though there's only kicks present, I think you should change this fixed here and on normal
00:19:838 (1) - This can blanket 00:18:779 (4) - better wow wtf how did that happen? fixed
00:25:485 (1) - Personally I think this does better as just a circle; I think it's more effective than a slider here fixed
00:28:309 (3) - Don't forget to hitsound with slidertick here fixed
00:39:250 (2) - I feel like this can be positioned better, at the moment it looks a little meh i'll keep it, symmetrical with the 4
00:52:661 (2) - You should add another point after the red in this slider, like this: http://puu.sh/gAPJF/e7c7e01468.jpg added
00:54:073 (4) - I think you should add NC here, remove it from here 00:55:485 (1) -, add NC 00:56:897 (2) -, and remove from here 00:57:602 (2) - fixed
00:57:602 (2,3,4) - I think this can look a bit better, doesn't really fit with the rest of the map's style imo i kind of like it the way it is
01:06:779 (1) - Slidertick! fixed
[Normal]
Same hitsounding suggestion as Easy
00:13:485 (1) - Why is this normal sampleset? lol, copied hitsounds from a while ago. never changed normal while i changed it in easy and insane. changed now
00:20:544 (2) - This could blanket 00:19:838 (1) - if you wanted i like it better as a straight slider
00:46:485 (6) - This ends on the downbeat and is kinda iffy, I'd switch up this rhythm. Perhaps make this 00:46:132 (5) - reverse once and convert 6 into a circle differing from the BN 8) i agree though, that's a prominent downbeat that deserves a hit
00:46:132 (5) - You miss the snare here, perhaps change this up i can't think of a good way to follow vocals and hit that snare, and i think the vocals are a lot more prominent. maybe i'll fix it if someone gives me a better pattern
01:01:485 (2) - I really think this should just keep bouncing until 01:02:367 -. You'd have to move 01:02:544 (1) - closer fixed
01:06:779 (4) - Slidertick fixed
[Insane]
00:01:485 (5) - Add NC here
00:32:544 (7) - Add NC here added both^
00:37:309 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe something like this, although I'm suggesting the stack part the most (or something considerably more thought out) http://puu.sh/gAQqk/ac734e768e.jpg I think it's fine the way it is right now, stacking like that might get me yelled at by someone like -Nya- again :[
00:44:368 (4) - I think you could afford to make the angle a bit more acute here, because jumps feel better to play the more sharp they are redid a solid 2 second chunk in that area
00:44:544 (5,6,7,8) - You should unstack these and make them into jumps changed with the previous^
00:49:485 (6) - Add NC added
00:56:544 (3) - This ends on downbeat, I'd turn it into slider + circle changed
That's it from me. Good luck!
thanks for moddu~Venzire wrote:
I love the song, it's soothing.
Nice set so far, hope I have all my screenshots ordered correctly.
[Smug's Insane]SPOILERI don't know about hitsound's between a beat, it doesn't feel right at all and personally throws me off. I don't think they're intrusive to gameplay, and i feel like the hitsounding would be incomplete if I didn't cover every kick/whistle. Besides, they are able to be turned off if they become an issue.
I do feel as if these changes are reasonable.
00:25:831 (3,4,5) - These feel bland, and it leads up to a strong vocal. Something like this, the incoming slider catches onto the next beat. http://puu.sh/gCr3B/a2c7414632.jpg I want to keep the sliders similar to try and emulate the similar note progression of the strings, so changing their directions drastically like that doesn't fit what I'm trying to do
01:07:125 (2,3) - This doesn't flow well, perhaps aim the sliders beginning downwards http://puu.sh/gCrem/8cb6679dac.jpg it plays like any generic anti-jump. Bad "flow" isn't incorrect to use; this map uses a ton of it
01:07:831 (4) - Move this forwards a little more to correct previous change. http://puu.sh/gCrfW/96c523086f.jpg
01:09:066 (4) - CTRL + G, this flows better than having the player jump back to the other note. It feels natural. again, generic anti-jump. Same reasoning for deny as other suggestion
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: attakaindakaraa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 61661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7
[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Anba
ArtistUnicode:アンバ
Creator:[ Way ]
Version:Smug's Insane
Source:
Tags:honeyworks kumamushi hatsune miku vocaloid Because It's Warm DavidEd Smug-
BeatmapID:661216
BeatmapSetID:276201
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Thanks for the mod~Venzire wrote:
I love the song, it's soothing.
Nice set so far, hope I have all my screenshots ordered correctly.
[Insane]SPOILER00:09:596 (8,9,1) - Repositon this group to ease into the slider or change the arch (changing the arch may make it worse). http://puu.sh/gCrxb/7e20d32b69.jpg i think it flows fine, the little jump matches the vocals, too
00:09:949 (1) - Straighten or the slider to accommodate for the incoming note instead of it arcing outwards - previous image.
00:10:655 (4) - Arch slider slightly to act as a catch from the previous note and to jump towards the incoming note. http://puu.sh/gCrxV/d7eafdd22d.jpg ^i think both sliders are fine as is
00:19:125 (5) - Curve the slider, that will make a fluid motion between the end of the slider and the next slider. http://puu.sh/gCrTi/45258cd34c.jpg
00:19:478 (6) - Curve this upward towards the next slider, once again fluid motion. http://puu.sh/gCrV7/beba1fe645.jpg ^a straight slide pair here feels better to me
00:20:890 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole group doesn't flow well, I suggest CTRL + G on the first slider. http://puu.sh/gCs08/311be363b3.jpg - Then flip the stream to face the incoming jump. http://puu.sh/gCs2x/eb7f1fecef.jpg
00:28:831 (8) - Flip the arc so it's fluid movement into the next slider. 7>8>9 flows fine if you don't follow the slider track perfectly
00:29:184 (9) - Flip this arc. no need
00:29:537 (10) - Move this down a little more to compensate for the previous arc flip.
00:33:243 (3) - If you create a broken movement like this, it doesn't feel right when playing. Straighten the slider. you're not supposed to follow the slider's curve perfectly, it flows perfectly fine. look at this puush to see what i mean: http://puu.sh/gDsB2.png
00:33:596 (4) - Flip the arc and aim the start of the slider downwards more. Fluid movement is your best friend. above^
00:34:831 (6,7) - This triangle leading into the slider isn't good and doesn't add to the flow of the song. Arch the start downwards aiming at the slider and arch it to the incoming slider. http://puu.sh/gCsda/6ff6860b08.jpg the sharp angle is fine, i wouldn't want a perfectly circular slider flow either
00:38:890 (3) - This feels nice and all but I really reckon the arc should be flipped the opposite way, once again promoting flow. if i flip it, the flow from 2->3 gets murdered horribly. i was going for a swinging motion here anyway
00:42:066 (6) - Arc the slider and have the end aiming at the incoming slider on the new combo. http://puu.sh/gCsgm/e22597092a.jpg your suggestion was too linear for me, arced it the other way instead
00:42:419 (1,2,3) - This feels a little too sharp for the rest of the song however it does fit the vocals, possibly find a remedy for this so it flows better but also suits the vocal point. i honestly don't see what you're talking about .-.
00:51:243 (1) - I feel like this should be on the blue tick, it's a down-beat and the slider doesn't need to accommodate for the shift. i'm following the background vibraphone/glockenspiel(?) on this part since the vocals are just doing
01:03:242 (5,6) - Blanket? not what i intended those sliders to be
01:11:360 (2) - Flip the arc, better flow. i would have to respectfully disagree with you :[
16:57 sukiNathan: hi
16:57 sukiNathan: can I irc mod now owo
16:57 [ Way ]: yeah, go for it
16:57 *sukiNathan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/626245 Anba - Attakain Dakara [Insane]]
16:58 sukiNathan: 00:03:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this feels pretty awkward with such a change in spacing
16:58 sukiNathan: 00:03:772 (5,6,7) - should be increased in spacing a little
16:59 [ Way ]: i can increase that part a little, i like the feel of slowing down though
16:59 sukiNathan: it feels pretty weird transitiong into 00:04:302 (1) - also
17:00 [ Way ]: i think increasing the spacing will fix that problem
17:00 sukiNathan: yeah
17:00 [ Way ]: ehh, not too much, i'll fix that
17:00 sukiNathan: yeah just a bit is fine
17:01 sukiNathan: 00:05:978 (6,7) - for this
17:01 sukiNathan: you can reposition them a bit
17:01 sukiNathan: to change flow
17:01 sukiNathan: which will accent the vocals on 00:06:243 (8) - better
17:01 sukiNathan: http://puu.sh/gG6dO/569e723c37.jpg
17:01 [ Way ]: hmm, let me try this out
17:02 sukiNathan: having some flow changes is good
17:02 sukiNathan: if it's always smooth then something feel unemphasized
17:02 sukiNathan: some things*
17:03 [ Way ]: yeah, that makes sense
17:03 [ Way ]: alright, i got that part down
17:05 sukiNathan: 00:26:890 (1) -
17:05 sukiNathan: you could flip the curve on this
17:05 sukiNathan: for another flow change to emphasive vocals
17:05 sukiNathan: it should also accent 00:27:419 (2,3) -
17:07 [ Way ]: 2 and 3 are softer, i don't really feel like they deserve emphasis tbh
17:07 sukiNathan: hm ok
17:09 sukiNathan: 00:27:596 (3,4) - I think you should space this out a bit more actually
17:09 sukiNathan: usually sliders like that have high leniency
17:09 [ Way ]: oh to accent the "HOI!" part?
17:09 sukiNathan: yeah
17:14 sukiNathan: hm what do you think
17:14 [ Way ]: i'm trying to get it to feel like a jump while still maintaining the flow
17:15 [ Way ]: but it just doesn't feel like how i want it to feel :[
17:15 [ Way ]: i'll bookmark it then
17:15 sukiNathan: okok
17:15 sukiNathan: 00:32:361 (6,1) - space these out more?
17:16 sukiNathan: for the finish on (1)
17:16 [ Way ]: alright, i got some space in there
17:17 [ Way ]: was waiting for at least one person to say something about lol
17:18 sukiNathan: 00:40:655 (8) - maybe point the tail upwards instead
17:18 sukiNathan: for emphasis on the next slider
17:19 sukiNathan: it'll create a circular flow too
17:19 [ Way ]: oooh that's a good idea, i like that
17:20 sukiNathan: 00:45:772 (4,5,6) - try creating
17:20 sukiNathan: a triangle with the tail
17:20 sukiNathan: er wait
17:21 sukiNathan: something like this
17:21 sukiNathan: http://puu.sh/gG7ww/564bf5fbd6.jpg
17:21 sukiNathan: to change up flow for vocals again
17:23 [ Way ]: lemme try this out
17:23 sukiNathan: kk
17:23 sukiNathan: also NC on 00:48:772 (4) - for the 1/3
17:24 [ Way ]: i don't know how necessary a NC is there, but i'll put it in anyway
17:24 sukiNathan: well it's a rhythm change
17:24 sukiNathan: it's not exactly necessary
17:24 sukiNathan: but it just makes sense I suppose
17:26 [ Way ]: about 00:45:772 (4,5,6) -
17:27 [ Way ]: i think i'd rather have the circular motion for that part instead
17:27 sukiNathan: ok
17:27 [ Way ]: since everything else in that section is like that
17:27 [ Way ]: or at least after it, til the slowdown
17:28 sukiNathan: 00:52:478 (7,1,6,1) - add some small jumps here
17:28 sukiNathan: not just for vocals
17:28 sukiNathan: it would make 00:54:948 (5,6) - less sudden
17:29 [ Way ]: alright, i'll make the jumps to the sliders, instead of from them
17:32 sukiNathan: ok ill take a quick look at normal and easy
17:32 sukiNathan: maybe ill find 1 or 2 things
17:33 [ Way ]: sounds good brother
17:34 sukiNathan: 00:48:419 (1) - are you sure about a 1/2 gap before a spinner
17:34 sukiNathan: seems pretty small
17:35 [ Way ]: yeah, pretty sure that's allowed
17:35 [ Way ]: like 80% sure
17:35 sukiNathan: hm kk
17:35 sukiNathan: 00:47:890 (3) - also a 1/2 slider and a circle
17:36 sukiNathan: or vice versa
17:36 sukiNathan: would allow the player to hit the downbeat
17:36 sukiNathan: shouldn't ignore the downbeat
17:36 sukiNathan: with a 1/1
17:37 sukiNathan: a circle and 1/2 slider should be better actually
17:37 sukiNathan: so the downbeat is clickable
17:38 sukiNathan: wait now that I listen to it
17:38 sukiNathan: it sounds kinda weird
17:38 [ Way ]: yeah lol
17:38 [ Way ]: i think i'll make the 2 into a 1/1 slider
17:39 [ Way ]: so the downbeat is still hit
17:39 sukiNathan: ok
17:41 sukiNathan: this diff spread is a bit iffy though
17:41 sukiNathan: for normal easy and hard
17:41 sukiNathan: the density
17:41 sukiNathan: easy has 93 objects
17:41 sukiNathan: normal 122
17:41 sukiNathan: then hard is 225
17:42 sukiNathan: you'd probably have to buff the normal
17:42 [ Way ]: hmm, i'll try to
17:43 sukiNathan: the easy is basically
17:43 sukiNathan: almost rhythm of a normal difficulty
17:43 sukiNathan: with sv and spacing of an easy
17:45 sukiNathan: I guess normal needs more 1/2 rhythm
17:45 sukiNathan: other than that though the map is good
17:45 [ Way ]: lol someone said the normal had too much 1/2
17:45 sukiNathan: savelog
17:45 sukiNathan: whoops
17:46 sukiNathan: really?
17:46 sukiNathan: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3766879
17:46 sukiNathan: I think you basically
17:46 sukiNathan: have that situation
17:46 sukiNathan: in the difficulty spread section
17:47 [ Way ]: oh shit you're right
17:47 [ Way ]: not listening to that man then
17:47 [ Way ]: more 1/2 pls
17:47 sukiNathan: lol
17:47 sukiNathan: well I got nothing else
17:47 sukiNathan: nice map :D
Thanks for the mod![ Scarlet Red ] wrote:
M4M Request, am able to do it now!
[General][Insane]
- - Interesting choice of music. Personally I don't find it very amazing, but that's my taste. However, I would maybe reduce the AR of insane by one since it's not exactly fitting of an AR9...also makes DT a bit more manageable. ^^ This isn't mandatory, but a suggestion.
That's it for now on insane. Couldn't see too many issues with it. See if this helps you or not ^^.
- -Like I said, try AR8. i don't really like the idea, but i'll talk to a few people about this. i think 8.8 is the lowest i'd be willing to go though
- 00:04:125 (7,1) - Try to keep distance spacing the same between these two notes. the small jump is intended, fits the vocals
- 00:31:655 (4,5,6,1) - Maybe spread these out more, seems a little too easy like that. fixed a little bit from in nathan's mod
- 00:37:302 (1,2,3) - Maybe move these away from the previous note and spread them out among each other as well? right now is exactly how i wanted this part to play
- 00:37:831 (4,5,1) - And I'm not sure if this is really that good. Maybe try to find another way of changing the tone in the singer's voice. not sure what you mean here .-.
- 00:46:655 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The sliders are at a weird spacing away from the single circles, maybe bring these evenly together? the sliders' spacing is to match vocals. evening them out would fit better for more flat vocals
- 01:00:419 (3) - Doesn't look right to be this close to the previous note, but idk, could just be me. but...1.5 DS before and after the 2 .-.
[Normal]Not many errors I could find within this difficulty.
- - 00:11:361 (4,5) - I personally don't like these in Normals... don't know what to change it to, while keeping the same sound
- 00:25:478 (1,1) - You can add a spinner between these two notes. wouldn't have enough time for a good spinner length + legal recovery :[
- 00:25:478 (1) - Also change this combo to the previous. i don't think NC is appropriate there
- 00:57:243 - Add note here. putting in this one note alone added 0.04 stars 0_o
[Easy]
I do not know if there are any errors within this diffi, so forgive me if there are ^^ :]
Anyway here is your mod! Good luck on the rank. Thanks!
thank you for mod~[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:
M4M Request, am able to do it now!
[Smug's Insane]Solid difficulty. Just make a few changes and it's good to go!thanks!
- - First thing's first. FC First try :D:D yayyy
- 00:16:478 (4,1) - This is weird to play. Keep it just a reverse slider, or lessen the reverse slider and add more circles. will give this some thought
- 00:25:831 (3,4,5) - I don't really like these notes. Too small of sliders. wanna keep the contrast to the previous part of the song
- 00:36:066 (3) - Move closer to previous note. why?
- 00:36:596 (1) - This is also really strange. Keep notes at reasonable distances away. I think this is too far. it's a bit weird that you find this too far when the jump section immediately after is pretty similar spacing
- 00:56:537 (3,1) - I can see why this was done but idk...not much flow. explain to me what you mean by "flow" and get back to me
- 01:03:066 (2,3,4,1) - A bit of weird spacing among these? Try fixing it a bit. I don't know why you think this spacing is weird, otherwise I'd feel more inclined to change it.
Thing is, I'd have an easier time giving consideration to your suggestions if you said why you wanted me to change them; at the moment you're just asking me to do them or leaving notes at a "reasonable" distance away, in which case this diff wouldn't really be an insane anymore
Anyway here is your mod! Good luck on the rank.