Pharos21 wrote:

Kenon-Chan~ Sorry lama... (sibuk making SB) iya nggak papa kok :3

MOD from my queue here ^.^ ehehe

[general]

SAFE ~ (>.<~) okay ~(>w<~)

[The MOD]

Column

1-2-3-4

Novice

00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - Ngga terlalu kejem neh? NOV loh... jadi LN aja please emang kejem ya ;w; , tapi nggak aku ganti soal nya udah fix begini soal nya nanti juga kata nya KK mau buat diff satu lagi

00:06:837 (6837|2) - Move to 4, terus atasnya move ke 3 ok

00:10:094 (10094|3,10266|2,10437|3,10609|2) - Stream kanan only kayanya terlalu kejem... jadiin 4-3-2-3 aja ok

00:12:323 (12323|1) - Keras kah Beat nya di sini? reduce aja mendingan ok

00:28:609 (28609|2) - kejem banget lu non.. jadiin Note aja aku nggak kejem loh :'3

00:31:523 (31523|3,31866|3,32209|1) - ^ yang ini nggak soal nya kan nggak ada singel not nya cman LN aja

00:38:209 (38209|3,38209|0,38552|2,38552|1,38894|0,38894|3,39237|1,39237|2,39580|0,39580|3) - ^ Have mercy lah kyak nya udah gampang loh aku buat nya :'3 , ini aku reject

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^ ini juga

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^ jadiin LN ini maksud nya gmna :'3

01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|1,66837|3) - kayanya kalo di zigzag lebih baik deh (untuk yang kaya gini.. di zigzag aja) ini aku reject soal nya udah pas kyak gtu

01:12:152 (72152|2) - Add note ato kurangin note di 2 Dual di atas (sama sama keras beatnya) add note aja deh

01:16:437 (76437|2,76609|3,76952|1) - ^ (sama bawahnya) ok

01:17:294 (77294|2) - ini kau skip stream nya. tapi kenapa 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - kagak?
manding 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - pake Dual nya aja (2 note sebelumnya buang) ok

Rest FINE

ADV

00:12:323 (12323|3,12323|1,12494|0,12494|2,12666|3,12666|1,12837|0,12837|2,13009|3,13009|1,13180|2,13352|3,13352|1,13523|0) - Dibuat pattern Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single ok deh aku dengerin juga memang nggak ada beat drum nya dsna

00:15:409 (15409|1,15409|0,15580|1,15580|3,15752|0,15752|2,15923|1,16094|2,16094|3,16266|1,16437|3) - ^
ps.. kalo ada pattern yang kaya di atas.. di bikin Dual-Single aj, menurutku lebih playable itu

ok

MOD END~

GL ^.^

And

Harbyter wrote:

don't worry,

2 Diff by you
1 diff by me
1 diff by kuo
1diff by raccon

still rankable Really?? but it'll make 2 Diff By owner and 3 GD and it's unrankable, except

2 Diff by Owner
2 GD
and 1 Collab Diff With Owner




i think

okay thanks pharos~san
okay i just contact KK and he said its fine :3

Brian_Ex wrote:

Yo kenon
FROM PM REQUEST
SORRY FOR THE DELAY T.T[/color]

4K = |1|2|3|4|

Red - Pregnant Serious Mistake
Green - Suggest/Reason
Blue - Positive comment ^^

NOVICE

00:17:637 (17637|3) - delete not loud beat ok
00:25:352 - add note ok
00:31:694 (31694|3,31866|2,32037|1,32209|0) - ? i heard nothing in here ok and i added LN there i think it fit in there
01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3kIa/eed1495043.jpg udah pas ini jad aku keep soal nya udah pas playable juga
01:06:666 (66666|3) - move to 3 udah pas gini aja
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1 same
01:28:609 (88609|3) - move to 3 same
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1 same
01:39:494 (99494|2) - delete nah ini klo aku coba lebih playable nggak diapus jadi aku keep

ADVANCED

00:26:980 (26980|2,26980|1,27237|1,27237|2,27580|1,27580|0,27580|3,27923|3,27923|0,27923|2,28266|1,28266|3,28266|0) - move to white hmmm sbener nya ini bngung mau ngikutin drum beat nya apa scream nya , tapi kyak nya lebih enak ngatur hitsound nya klo ngikutin drum beat nya jadi aku ganti
00:42:323 (42323|0) - delete udah pas
00:43:009 (43009|2,43009|3) - move to 1,2 ok
01:04:780 (64780|0,64780|2,64952|2,64952|0) - move to 2,4 ok
01:05:123 (65123|1,65209|2,65294|3,65380|2,65466|1,65552|0,65637|1,65723|2,65809|3) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3mgq/f3fde5339d.jpg nah ini aku keep juga soal nya udah pas gtu
01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1) - move to 1,3 nah ini juga udah pas
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1 same
01:08:552 (68552|0) - delete because on 01:09:923 (69923|1) - you didn't make doubles hmm ok
01:21:580 (81580|2,81580|0,81752|1,81923|2,81923|0,82094|1) - change to LN? hhmm mungkin nggk deh soal nya itu udah di dalem LN
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1 ok

EXHAUST

Dat SV XD
NICE HARBY >W<

Mod Done
Good Luck

okay thanks brian >w<
btw changes novice diff to Lv.8
okay updated

Hai Kenon-San

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hai Kenon-San hai juga verniy~chan ^w^

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|

Novice Lv.8

01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) stair in here (sakitnya tuh disini) maybe no compatible for NM or Novice diff, if you want change into LN from 01:05:123 and end here 01:05:809 hmm oke deh aku ganti soal nya bnyak yang bilang juga klo NOV nggak cocok dikasi bgtuan
01:06:494 add note, sound similiar in 01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|3,66837|1) ini nggak deh susah kalo mau ditambah lagi T_T
01:07:180 add note to 2 for consistency from part 00:01:352 - 00:03:752
01:07:352 (67352|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:07:523 (67523|3) move to 2 ^ ok
01:07:694 (67694|2) move to 1 ^ ok
01:07:866 (67866|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:08:037 (68037|0) move to 2 ^ ok
01:08:209 (68209|1) move to 4 ^ ok
01:08:552 (68552|1) move to 1 ^ ok
01:08:894 (68894|3) move to 2 ^ ok
01:09:237 (69237|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:09:409 (69409|2) move to 2 ^ ok
01:26:637 (86637|1) move to 4 for balance hand ok
01:39:066 add note ok
01:39:409 (99409|3,99494|2,99580|1,99666|0) try to change into LN for this diff ok deh
01:48:323 add slider and end here 01:49:352 because i hear stream sound here ok
Nice~

Advanced Lv.12

00:32:723 add slider, similiar sound in 00:31:523 (31523|2,31866|3,32209|2) nah ini aku reject soal nya udah pas ( sbener nya males ngermap juga sih :p
00:43:180 (43180|2) move to 4 for balance hand ok
01:22:437 (82437|3) move to 3 ^ ok
01:22:780 (82780|2) move to 2 ok
01:22:952 add note to 4 nah ini aku reject juga soal nya aku nggak denger ada suara disitu
01:23:123 (83123|1) move to 3 ok
01:23:294 add note to 2 ini juga nggak ada suara
Cool

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank

okay thanks verniy~senpai >w<
sbener nya sih sengaja novice nya star nya lebih soal nya kata nya si KK mau buat diff basic nya
tapi bnyak yang bilang novice nya kejem jadi aku buat lebih gampang aja deh
okay updated

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hai Kenon-San

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST lv. 16]01:01:352 add note to 2 no add here
01:03:837 add note okyfinally someone noticed this xd
Awesome~

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank

ty for the mod

woah map nya onii :O
gud luck ya onii :*
klo udah ranked jangan lupa eskrim nya :3

luckyplayer wrote:

woah map nya onii :O
gud luck ya onii :*
klo udah ranked jangan lupa eskrim nya :3

eh kampret klo manggil yang lengkap knape -_-"
jangan onii doang itu arti nya setan -___-
iya nanti gua bliin tapi lu yang bayar ya :3

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Good luck!

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

NOVICE Lv.8

00:27:923 (27923|3) - move to 1 ok
01:40:094 (100094|1) - move to 1 ok

ADVANCED Lv.12

00:11:466 (11466|0) - move to 4 ok
00:16:094 (16094|2) - move to 1, 00:16:266 (16266|1) - move to 3 ok
00:43:266 (43266|1,43352|2,43437|3) - ctrl+ h, 00:43:523 (43523|0) - move to 4 ok
00:50:552 (50552|2) - move to 4 ok
01:17:980 (77980|2) - delete ok
01:50:380 (110380|1) - move to 1 ok

Good luck!

okay thanks

col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7



it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore

Frim4503 wrote:

col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7

Lv.8

00:10:094 (10094|0) - remove LN no cuz that LN for stream voice
00:34:266 - add note, make it double like 00:33:066 (33066|2,33066|0) - hmmm ok
01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|3,62552|0,62894|2,63237|1) - maybe it will good if change like this ok

01:17:980 (77980|3,78152|3) - remove . change with LN nope itu udah pas

it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore

okay thanks
your turn harby

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Harby's EXHAUST Lv.16

00:01:266 (1266|0) - move to 3, 00:01:352 (1352|2) - move to 1 ok
00:35:294 (35294|1) - move to 4ok
00:44:552 (44552|3) - move to 2 keep
01:41:980 (101980|1) - move to 3ok

Good luck!

Frim4503 wrote:

col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7

Lv.16

00:55:866 - untill 01:02:380 - . i'm not sure about the SVs change. reduce it or just remove it it will be good IMO
01:36:923 - till 01:43:523 - same reason sorry keep xD

it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore

ty for the mod

Just little suggestion, why Lv.16? Lv.15 still suitable here

Ichigaki wrote:

Just little suggestion, why Lv.16? Lv.15 still suitable here

Opinion

As a player, that pattern is already good and SV is so catchy and so challenging. But, as mapper, that SV overused.

yea about the lv is better 15, but for the sv i think there aren't so many problem, all easy to read and suits good with the music , at least this is a MX not an easy song lol

uhmmm okay changed diff level to Lv.15 >w<

well when time come with the ranking i will see what QAT says,if they told me to remove some sv then i'll remove lol

Yo, here's my mod!

Column = \1\2\3\4\




Welp, that's it for my mod; quite a short mod but that's mostly because this beatmap is already very good imo. Anyway, hope this helps you!

Hawxx wrote:

Yo, here's my mod!

Column = \1\2\3\4\

NOVICE Lv.8

00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - this pattern is the exact same in your ADV diff, for variety across diffs; I'd suggest you should do this. maybe i will reject this cuz i try to make this diff is more easier to play and enjoyable


00:18:152 (18152|3) - move to 2 okay no changes here cuz i try to avoid jack for this diff
00:18:837 (18837|0) - move to 3 same here
These changes are for a bit of variety compared to ADV diff (since this pattern is there too), though this is optional imo.

and that's pretty much it for this difficulty; very fun to play and has nice and bouncy patterns, can't say much else about this diff.

ADVANCED Lv.12

00:27:066 (27066|1) - move to 1
00:27:409 (27409|2) - move to 2
This is for a bit of hand balance ( no notes in column 1 for a bit ) and I find this pattern a bit more fun. hmmm youre right about this i changes but in different note , thanks for remindering me

01:06:666 (66666|1,66837|1) - move these 2 notes to 1 ( to fill in a couple notes in column 1 ) Optional. i dunno but i like that jack and that quite fit there

Quite a short mod again, well to be honest these maps are very good with hand balance and variety altogether. So once again very well done on this difficulty!

Welp, that's it for my mod; quite a short mod but that's mostly because this beatmap is already very good imo. Anyway, hope this helps you!

okay thanks for mod

wow i'm finally here to mod cause my mod reqs is piling up ( again )

[General]

no hard feelings
I guess you can leave Lunatic Racoon in the tags but idk, BN/QAT might ask you to remove it since he doesn't have a diff in the main mapset itself

Column 1234

[Harby's]

If i'm gonna be a bitch about pitch relevancy:
00:01:352 (1352|3,1523|3,1694|2,1866|2,2037|0,2209|3,2380|0,2552|1) - Move to 42321213 OR Move to 42331213 if you are emphasizing the claps here with a hammer
00:02:723 (2723|3,2894|3,3066|2,3237|2,3409|0,3580|3,3752|0,3923|1) - This applies to ^
and all the similar parts

00:05:466 (5466|3,5637|1,5809|2,5980|0,6152|3,6323|2,6494|1) - Move to 4234132

00:14:552 (14552|1,14637|2) - With consideration on how you used minijacks in this difficulty ( eg. using a minijack in the middle of a dense 1/4 pattern ), you can minijack like this, yes I ctrl+h the second part due to pitch relevancy of the synths there with respect to the LNs

00:15:923 (15923|2,15923|1,16094|3,16094|2,16266|1,16266|2) - Pitch relevancy : Ctrl+H and move this whole pattern to the right by 1
01:03:752 (63752|0,63752|3,63837|2,63923|0,63923|1,64009|2,64094|3) - I feel that a 1/4 alternating hand will suit this scratch sound better since it's sound is repeated in like a "trill" fashion

01:07:180 - Same as the first mods | Might want to keep how the claps are mapped the same also, it really brings out the clap hitsound, basically mapping all the claps the same like you did here on these 8 notes 01:07:523 (67523|2,67523|1,67694|2,67694|1,68894|1,68894|2,69066|1,69066|2) -

01:20:552 (80552|1,80723|2) - Might want to change this into a single note or a 1/4 LN so as to bring out the staccato feeling exhibited by this synth

01:21:580 (81580|1) - Move to 4 for pitch relevancy

01:25:009 (85009|3,85009|0,85266|2,85266|1,85523|0,85523|3) - This is feeling i get when i play this is kinda weird since there is not any actual shield compared to 01:23:637 (83637|1,83637|0,83894|2,83894|1,84152|2,84152|3) - , try to shield 3 of them
01:28:780 (88780|3,88952|1) - These LNs kinda dampen the effect of these finishes here 01:28:780 (88780|2,88780|0) - , imma suggest to remove the LNs entirely so as to have a break after the finisher so as to bring out the impact of the 3 note chord here more

01:48:752 (108752|3) - This single note in the middle of a 2-note chord spam here kinda breaks the flow when playing it, it kinda irks me when playing

Additional note :

01:01:694 - Kinda expected a slowdown of like 0.95 or 0.9 here considering how heavily this is SV-ed

[ADVANCED Lv.12]

Comparing claps, 00:01:694 (1694|2,1694|0,1866|3,1866|1) - which are both mapped to 2 notes, to 00:01:352 (1352|0,1352|2) - a hard kick + a finish which has 2 notes, it feels kinda imbalanced, I suggest to add another note here 00:01:352 (1352|2,1352|0) -
00:01:694 (1694|2,1866|3) - I suggest to pattern the claps differently here, by hammering both of these notes on column 4, it can bring out the claps in the music more
00:03:066 (3066|3,3237|2) - Same here
00:04:437 (4437|2,4609|3) - ^
00:05:809 (5809|1,5980|0) - ^
and so on

00:03:752 (3752|2,3923|3,4094|2) - I suggest to move this to 344 respectively since the kick is the one that's being repeated here
00:06:494 (6494|1,6666|0,6837|1) - ^ move to 211 instead

According to these LNs mapped to the synth ( probably ), you missed out on alot of 1/1 LNs around here that is mapped to the synth that i just mentioned

something like this | You can probably omit mapping the 2nd LN in the middle there since it's kinda confusing if you add too much LNs


00:22:952 (22952|0,22952|2) - I suggest to use single notes for these so that you can emphasize these notes more with a 3 note chord, a break here also makes the emphasis better

00:27:409 (27409|2,27752|0,28094|2,28437|1) - Kinda feels empty that you didn't map the 1/2s in the middle here, the notes just feel to spaced out you can probably utilize 1/2 LNs like you did here for that 00:28:609 (28609|2) -

00:37:694 (37694|2,37952|0,38209|3,38209|1) - It's kinda weird that you mapped this 1/4 here and you didn't over here 00:26:723 (26723|0,26723|3,27066|1,27066|2,27409|2) - , it just feels inconsistent on the tap rhythm

00:45:237 (45237|3,45409|1,45923|1,46094|0) - LNs make stuff kinda hard to get 300g on, which is why i suggest to not use them too much unless it's part of your motive/pattern here | tbh i don't really see a huge need to put LNs here, putting single notes instead of LNs will suffice with these patterns
00:46:609 (46609|3,46780|1) - ^
and so on for similar notes
00:52:094 (52094|1,52266|2,52437|0,52437|1,52780|1,52952|2,53123|1,53123|0) - I suggest to not repeat patterns like this unless it can't be avoided or something in the music repeats or is your intention of mapping like that | There's no repeated sound here so i suggest to just scramble this a bit
01:01:009 - Seems like you missed a note here when i refer to these other surrounding notes 01:00:666 (60666|3,60666|2,61352|0,61352|3) -

01:06:837 - You might wanna add a note or shift the note positioning here since the sound effects of this is not 100% similar to these notes prior to it 01:06:494 (66494|1,66494|3,66666|1,66666|3) -

01:07:180 - Might want to use a 3 note chord here since it's way louder than these claps 01:07:523 (67523|3,67523|0,68209|1,68209|3) - that are mapped to 2 note chords

01:11:637 (71637|1,71809|0) - Might want to hammer these like you did here 01:10:266 (70266|0,70437|0) -

01:16:780 (76780|1,76952|1) - Might wanna avoid this hammer here since it doesn't really represent anything, I suggest to move 01:16:609 (76609|3,76780|1) - to 34 respectively

01:32:552 (92552|2,92552|0,92894|1,92894|3,93237|2) - Same comment as previously ( if you can remember )
01:33:237 (93237|2,93580|3,93923|1,94266|3) - Same comment as prev.

01:38:037 (98037|0,98037|2,98209|1) - Due to pitch relevancy, I suggest to move this LN to 2 and move the bottom single note to 4 and the top single note to 3, just so that it's more comfortable to play and read at the same time

01:38:552 (98552|1,98552|3,98894|0,98894|2,98894|3,99237|0,99237|3) - these chords are kinda inconsistent, but i guess you can leave it as it is since you might have left the 2 chords there 2 notes due to note density

01:39:837 (99837|2) - You might wanna move this to column 1 of 01:39:752 - since the 1/4 ends here according to the vocal in the music


wow i'm lazy, not gonna mod the last one D: ( cause i lost the mood to mod )

ty for the modderino zenx \:3/

Z3nx wrote:

wow i'm finally here to mod cause my mod reqs is piling up ( again )

[General]

no hard feelings
I guess you can leave Lunatic Racoon in the tags but idk, BN/QAT might ask you to remove it since he doesn't have a diff in the main mapset itself uhmm ok

Column 1234

ADVANCED Lv.12

Comparing claps, 00:01:694 (1694|2,1694|0,1866|3,1866|1) - which are both mapped to 2 notes, to 00:01:352 (1352|0,1352|2) - a hard kick + a finish which has 2 notes, it feels kinda imbalanced, I suggest to add another note here 00:01:352 (1352|2,1352|0) - uhmmm i try to avoid make a lot of hammer btw :p so i just changes the W with the F
00:01:694 (1694|2,1866|3) - I suggest to pattern the claps differently here, by hammering both of these notes on column 4, it can bring out the claps in the music more ok
00:03:066 (3066|3,3237|2) - Same here ok
00:04:437 (4437|2,4609|3) - ^ ok
00:05:809 (5809|1,5980|0) - ^ ok
and so on

00:03:752 (3752|2,3923|3,4094|2) - I suggest to move this to 344 respectively since the kick is the one that's being repeated here ok
00:06:494 (6494|1,6666|0,6837|1) - ^ move to 211 instead ok

According to these LNs mapped to the synth ( probably ), you missed out on alot of 1/1 LNs around here that is mapped to the synth that i just mentioned
uhmmm maybe i will not added LN there since i wont to make that too hard
something like this | You can probably omit mapping the 2nd LN in the middle there since it's kinda confusing if you add too much LNs


00:22:952 (22952|0,22952|2) - I suggest to use single notes for these so that you can emphasize these notes more with a 3 note chord, a break here also makes the emphasis better uhmm i dunno but its seems quite fit there xD

00:27:409 (27409|2,27752|0,28094|2,28437|1) - Kinda feels empty that you didn't map the 1/2s in the middle here, the notes just feel to spaced out you can probably utilize 1/2 LNs like you did here for that 00:28:609 (28609|2) - i agree! i feel so empty there :/

00:37:694 (37694|2,37952|0,38209|3,38209|1) - It's kinda weird that you mapped this 1/4 here and you didn't over here 00:26:723 oh i didnt hear that >w< thanks for remindering me(26723|0,26723|3,27066|1,27066|2,27409|2) - , it just feels inconsistent on the tap rhythm

00:45:237 (45237|3,45409|1,45923|1,46094|0) - LNs make stuff kinda hard to get 300g on, which is why i suggest to not use them too much unless it's part of your motive/pattern here | tbh i don't really see a huge need to put LNs here, putting single notes instead of LNs will suffice with these patterns uhmm i dunno but stairs+LN will be hard to play D:
00:46:609 (46609|3,46780|1) - ^ same
and so on for similar notes
00:52:094 (52094|1,52266|2,52437|0,52437|1,52780|1,52952|2,53123|1,53123|0) - I suggest to not repeat patterns like this unless it can't be avoided or something in the music repeats or is your intention of mapping like that | There's no repeated sound here so i suggest to just scramble this a bit ok
01:01:009 - Seems like you missed a note here when i refer to these other surrounding notes 01:00:666 (60666|3,60666|2,61352|0,61352|3) - ok

01:06:837 - You might wanna add a note or shift the note positioning here since the sound effects of this is not 100% similar to these notes prior to it 01:06:494 (66494|1,66494|3,66666|1,66666|3) - ok

01:07:180 - Might want to use a 3 note chord here since it's way louder than these claps 01:07:523 (67523|3,67523|0,68209|1,68209|3) - that are mapped to 2 note chords ok

01:11:637 (71637|1,71809|0) - Might want to hammer these like you did here 01:10:266 (70266|0,70437|0) - ok

01:16:780 (76780|1,76952|1) - Might wanna avoid this hammer here since it doesn't really represent anything, I suggest to move 01:16:609 (76609|3,76780|1) - to 34 respectively ok

01:32:552 (92552|2,92552|0,92894|1,92894|3,93237|2) - Same comment as previously ( if you can remember ) yep i still remember it
01:33:237 (93237|2,93580|3,93923|1,94266|3) - Same comment as prev. ok

01:38:037 (98037|0,98037|2,98209|1) - Due to pitch relevancy, I suggest to move this LN to 2 and move the bottom single note to 4 and the top single note to 3, just so that it's more comfortable to play and read at the same time ok

01:38:552 (98552|1,98552|3,98894|0,98894|2,98894|3,99237|0,99237|3) - these chords are kinda inconsistent, but i guess you can leave it as it is since you might have left the 2 chords there 2 notes due to note density ok deleted 1 note

01:39:837 (99837|2) - You might wanna move this to column 1 of 01:39:752 - since the 1/4 ends here according to the vocal in the music ok

wow i'm lazy, not gonna mod the last one D: ( cause i lost the mood to mod )

okay thanks lazyzenx xD/
okay updated >w<)b

http://puu.sh/ghJF4/e9efeae489.rar
here the update

Hey there :3

Mod from my queue!

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |



Overall a really good mapset, couldn't find that many flaws at all.
I hope it was still helpful.
Good luck for your map!
Apple

Harbyter wrote:

http://puu.sh/ghJF4/e9efeae489.rar
here the update

okay updated

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Hey there :3

Mod from my queue!

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

- NOV -

00:22:780 (22780|3,22780|1) - move to 1 and 3 (ctrl+h) no i keep this
00:50:723 - you could add a note on 1 or 4 here ok
01:28:609 - move to 1/3! same with first
01:51:409 - you could add one note here aswell! ok

- ADV -

00:17:209 - no kick drum sound right here, remove nah i confused here some people say to remove but some people says to add >~<
00:22:780 (22780|0,22780|2) - i would move these to 2 and 4 (ctrl+h) keep
00:24:666 - kick drum here, maybe add a note or two? (maybe on 3) ok
00:25:352 - add on 4 ok
00:27:409 - should be 2 notes (since its the bass drum kicking in), so add one ok
00:30:152 - would add a note here on 1 aswell! ok
00:30:837 - and one on 1 here ok
00:35:637 - add on 4 ok
00:36:323 - add on 3 or 1 ok
01:29:123 - move 3 to 4 keepkeepkeep

Overall a really good mapset, couldn't find that many flaws at all.
I hope it was still helpful.
Good luck for your map!
Apple

okay updated =w=)b

°w°/

woaah thanks harby >w<
okay me too >w</

woah harby youre a nominator now :O
congrats <3

[ kenon ] wrote:

woah harby youre a nominator now :O
congrats <3

y u post here xD

why removed Raku's diff

okay aim back >w<
errr sorry KK but actually her diffs is not complete and it seems he very busy so... yep
but maybe if he back online i will ask to finished the GD cuz now i have much time >w<

Poof!
Here come a super late mod. Sorry :/
columns 1-4
I guess that's it
sorry for late mod ;;

Lenfried- wrote:

Poof!
Here come a super late mod. Sorry :/ uhmmm >~< np
columns 1-4

advanced

00:04:094 (4094|3) - move to 3 err rejected that is for kick voice
00:08:209 (8209|0) - move to 3 or 4 okay move to 3
01:15:409 (75409|2) - move to 4 mmm nope i keep this , i think it has same sound D:
01:17:980 (77980|1) - move to 1 mm ok
01:20:380 (80380|3,80380|1,81580|0,81580|2) - convert to single mmm ok

novice

00:10:094 (10094|0) - what is this? that is a LN xD (lol) that is for stream voice D: i guess

I guess that's it
sorry for late mod ;;

okay thanks o/

Lenfried- wrote:

Poof!
Here come a super late mod. Sorry :/
columns 1-4

exhaust

00:47:294 column 2 waaaaa ;_; might want to disperse the 1/2 repeats
00:59:980 ^ for column 4 intended xD
01:18:152 - section under mapped. ignore if you're going for difficulty curving / rest period yea calm part
gr8 stuff m8 thank you

kenon poke me if someone mod T.T


i was just passing by and noticed lol

Harbyter wrote:

kenon poke me if someone mod T.T
i was just passing by and noticed lol

eh i forget to poke u XD
sorry harby :'3

Starry- wrote:

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing: ☑
Audio: ☒

1. mp3 quality isn't the best, but it can do I suppose.
2. soft-hitfinish.wav has more than 5ms impact delay, which is unrankable. Best to cut the delay off using an audio editing program like Audacity.

errr okay i will try to fix that D:
BG: ☒

1. Weird resolution. Needs to be an aspect ratio of 4:3 or 16:9, preferably 1366x768 or 1024x768 (max resolutions)

done changed to 1024x768
Metadata: ☒

1. From a few sources, it seems as if the title should be 'candy*glass' without capitals.

okay fixed
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

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| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |		(4K)

[NOV]

00:02:723 (2723|0) - Why is this on col 0 when it's high pitched? err i dunno D: i think because it seem fit there D: /me slapped
A pattern like this for the first part will actually be a lot better imo.

Ex.1

00:05:466 (5466|0) - Same as above, maybe could rearrange to have this note on 3. mm okay done

00:08:209 (8209|0) - ^ same here

00:09:580 (9580|0) - ^ aa same here

00:11:980 (11980|3) - Remove, you barely ever use 3 note chord in this diff, and this note is kinda awkward anyways. mmm okay D:

00:25:694 (25694|3,26037|2) - Make these both LN, since you map to the melody in other places with LN too. done

00:46:266 (46266|0,46609|1,46952|0,47294|1,47637|0,47980|1,48323|0) - Rearrange to prevent this:

See the repetition on first 2 cols?

Best to make it more spread out. okay
00:51:066 (51066|0) - Etc. same here. okay

01:08:552 (68552|0) - Why always on 0 :< D:

Best to rearrange these melodies to be more pitch relevant (lower notes on left side, higher pitch notes on right side.) :'3 done rearrange for better pitch i hope

01:16:094 (76094|2) - Move to 0, for balance. done

01:21:237 (81237|1) - Move to 3 for pitch. done

01:32:894 (92894|2,93237|3) - CTRL+G, for balance, to prevent repeating notes. done

01:41:123 (101123|2) - Move to 1 for balance. done

[ADV]

00:01:352 (1352|2,1523|1) - CTRL+H feels a lot better. done

00:02:894 (2894|1,3066|0,3237|1,3409|0,3580|1,3752|0,3923|1,4094|0,4266|1,4437|0) - Best to rearrange, its just 10101010 done D:

00:10:094 (10094|1,10094|2,10180|0,10180|3,10266|2,10266|1,10352|0,10352|3,10437|1,10437|2,10523|3,10523|0,10609|2,10609|1) - Quite hard to hit for ADV diff. For this, I recommend maybe making it [01][23] patterns, or reducing some notes. errr actually i confuse how to map this stream so maybe can u give me some suggestion ? :>

00:17:123 (17123|2,17123|1,17209|3,17209|0,17294|2,17294|1,17380|0,17380|3,17466|1,17466|2) - Same here, just seems like unnecessary difficulty spike same here :>

00:25:694 (25694|1) - Move to 0 done

01:04:094 (64094|2) - Suggest to turn into a 1/2 LN done

01:31:523 (91523|3) - Move to 0 feels a lot better. done

[]

Sorry quite a short mod, a lot of it is general issues. Some patterns can be improved better for pitch relevancy.
Goodluck!

okay thanks starry
will fix all major issue asap

bakabakemono wrote:

Hi Kenon >w<)/ Called from Moddar Huehue Team Mania! (click banner if you want to know further about us!).
And sorry for delay ;w;

These mods are only suggestion, so feel free to reject them!

Column: 1 2 3 4

[General]

1. Seems fine

[ADVANCED Lv.12]

1. 00:10:609 - you missed the kick sound... add two notes here errr i dunno but some people syas it too hard for adv D:
2. 00:14:209 - why double notes here? you did different pattern on previous part 00:12:837 - suggest to rearrange one of them to make same pattern ohh i see
3. 00:17:123 - suggestion -> http://puu.sh/hf4Dx/3d4b558613.jpg ohh thanks >w<
4. 00:26:723 - make same pattern with around this part? 00:37:694 - for consistency of course errr i dunno, i wont to make that diff s too much LN D:
5. 00:32:380 (32380|3) - remove? okay
6. 00:38:723 - add note at 2 okay
7. 00:42:152 - add note at 4? nope
8. 01:03:237 (63237|3,63580|1) - remove, not too strong sound okay
9. 01:03:752 (63752|0,63923|3) - change to normal note? nope
10. 01:24:323 (84323|3) - remove, no kick here oh i missed this , thanks
11. 01:27:752 (87752|0,87752|1) - should end here 01:28:437 - err i dunno if 4 notes in same line still okay in adv ? D:
12. 01:43:352 - add note, I heard melody there uhmm okay

[NOVICE Lv.8]
niceee difff <3 can't find major problems

1. 00:03:752 (3752|3,3923|0,4094|3) - ctrl + h for comfortabilty err that for better pitch D:
2. 00:12:323 - add one note, strong enough sound okay added on 3
3. 00:21:237 - add LN here? end here 00:21:923 - err nope
4. 00:23:294 - add one note, strong enough sound err itu udah ada di 1 D:
5. 01:07:180 - ^ hmmm well i forget this one , added on 4
6. 01:15:066 (75066|2,75237|1,75409|2) - ctrl + h for comfortability? hmm okay aku rearrange dikit
7. 01:16:437 - add note, strong sound rejected soal nya hindarin untuk buat jack di diff nov D:
8. 01:28:609 (88609|3,88609|1,88780|3,88780|1) - move to left by one column to avoid this 01:28:437 (88437|1,88609|1,88780|1) - hmmm okay cuman pindahin double yang terakhir satu kolom ke kiri
9. 01:29:123 - add note, strong sound hmmm okay
10. 01:45:580 - add note at 2, strong sound err nope , soal suara nya sama kayak yang di dpan nya
11. 01:49:523 - 01:49:866 - add note for make the ending little bit hard :^) hmm okay , itu juga suara nya lumayan keras

Thanks for asking us to mod your map~ Nice map Kenon >w<)/ Good luck~~~

thanks bbm >w<)/
and sorry kalo balesan nya pake indo lagi males soal nya :p