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Mwallx

Harbyter wrote:

Mwalls Ho wrote:

btw for the /list comand you just need to write one time (list) (/list) then putting inside all those (*)
Oh,I'm so noob xD. Thanks for reminding~
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Ayy lmao kenon, i've nearly finished the GD until now
Here's its status:
+Diff name: Raccoon's INFINITE Lv.18
+Star Difficulty: 4.80
+Mapped: 1:29/1:53
+Kiai included
+SV not included
+HS not included

I'll try my best to fully finish my diff asap
okay im waiting :)
schwarzvgrune
from grun's mania modding queue!


harby's EXH

SPOILER
OMG VERY NICE MAP, PLEASE TAKE IT EASY IF MY MOD IS USELESS FOR YOU QwQb

00:17:209 - add a note?
00:23:123 - add a note to express the melody? LN at 3 perhaps until that next 3 note?

01:17:809 - change 1 to LN?
01:17:980 - to LN?
just to follow the melody
01:18:152 - 01:23:294 - consider ad ding SN staccati for every 2/4 beat to express the background faint high pitched melody?

i know all of those are not important really.. your map is too good already QAQ

and i looooooove your mapping style, it's sooo like meeeee (except that i'm a noob in placement and hand balancing >.<

Advanced
SPOILER
01:00:323 (60323|0) - consider following earlier pattern of LN SN?

01:23:894 (83894|2,83894|1) - drag to the left 1x to express the pitch as well while retaining the beat pattern?
01:38:037 (98037|3) - move to 3? the pitch descend on this place.

01:42:409 (102409|3,102409|0) - no no for advanced... consider placing differently or deleting it?
you can follow the 3 x 1/4 scratch sound instead? here 01:42:323 - to 01:42:494 -

good luck.. love the map <3
schwarzvgrune

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Hi from my queue~
As you asked I prefer EXHAUST.Btw priority is a noun not a verb xD
oh my god i love how non-native speakers try to correct someone else's english <3
BTW prioritize / prioritise is the basic verb form of priority (prioritised / prioritising for example)
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Hi from my queue~
As you asked I prefer EXHAUST.Btw priority is a noun not a verb xD
oh my god i love how non-native speakers try to correct someone else's english <3
BTW prioritize / prioritise is the basic verb form of priority (prioritised / prioritising for example)
oh damn my english must be better next time :'3
okay thanks <3
sorry for bad english :'(
schwarzvgrune
oh damn my english is never be good enough :'3
okay thanks <3

umm, it's supposed to be sarcasm... oh well.
Akasha-
the NOVICE's diff touched the 2 stars difficult, it might be a unrankable issues, i suggest to add a EZ diff
I will do that for GD if you dont mind, thanks
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

the NOVICE's diff touched the 2 stars difficult, it might be a unrankable issues, i suggest to add a EZ diff
I will do that for GD if you dont mind, thanks
hmm but have more GD than creators diff its still rankable ?
if its fine i will take that GD :)
Harbyter

[ kenon ] wrote:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

the NOVICE's diff touched the 2 stars difficult, it might be a unrankable issues, i suggest to add a EZ diff
I will do that for GD if you dont mind, thanks
hmm but have more GD than creators diff its still rankable ?
if its fine i will take that GD :)

don't worry,

2 Diff by you
1 diff by me
1 diff by kuo
1diff by raccon

still rankable


2diff by you
3diff by me
unrankable


2 diff by you
2diff by me
1 diff by raccon

rankable



i think :roll:
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

schwarzvgrune wrote:

from grun's mania modding queue!

Advanced
SPOILER
01:00:323 (60323|0) - consider following earlier pattern of LN SN? hmm yeah ok

01:23:894 (83894|2,83894|1) - drag to the left 1x to express the pitch as well while retaining the beat pattern? hmm ok
01:38:037 (98037|3) - move to 3? the pitch descend on this place.ok

01:42:409 (102409|3,102409|0) - no no for advanced... consider placing differently or deleting it?actually i very confused with this cuz that sound make me confused i cant hear that is only 2 sounds or three
you can follow the 3 x 1/4 scratch sound instead? here 01:42:323 - to 01:42:494 - hmmm thats mean there are three voice okay lets try
good luck.. love the map <3
okay waiting for harby to update :)
Harbyter

schwarzvgrune wrote:

from grun's mania modding queue!


harby's EXH

SPOILER
OMG VERY NICE MAP, PLEASE TAKE IT EASY IF MY MOD IS USELESS FOR YOU QwQb np xD

00:17:209 - add a note? sorry no add here,no drum
00:23:123 - add a note to express the melody? LN at 3 perhaps until that next 3 note? can't add ,due to the sv lol

01:17:809 - change 1 to LN? ok
01:17:980 - to LN? ok
just to follow the melody
01:18:152 - 01:23:294 - consider ad ding SN staccati for every 2/4 beat to express the background faint high pitched melody? mmm,sorry no add here too ,those LN are enought xD

i know all of those are not important really.. your map is too good already QAQ well,it was good, while recheking found missing hitsound and changed other little things too xD

and i looooooove your mapping style, it's sooo like meeeee (except that i'm a noob in placement and hand balancing >.<


good luck.. love the map <3

ty for mod :)

http://puu.sh/g0ITM/1314d03b00.rar



PS: better if you change the title of the BG in the song's foulder :P
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Harbyter wrote:

ty for mod :)
http://puu.sh/g0ITM/1314d03b00.rar

PS: better if you change the title of the BG in the song's foulder :P hmmm okay BG name changed :D
okay updated
Aii-
yo mod req ^^

[NOVICE Lv.6]

00:07:694 (7694|2) - move to col 1 and

00:44:723 (44723|1,44894|0) - cntrol + G

00:45:066 (45066|1) - move to col 3

00:45:237 (45237|2) - move to col 4

01:05:552 (65552|2,65637|3) - umm cntrol + G and 01:05:723 (65723|2) - move to col 2

01:13:866 - add note col 4

01:15:237 - ^

01:17:809 - add note col 1

01:17:980 (77980|0) - move to col 4

01:48:323 (108323|1) - move to col 3

[ADVANCED Lv.12]

01:13:866 - add note

01:37:694 (97694|3) - move to col 3 ? same sound like this part 01:37:352 (97352|2) -

01:49:009 (109009|1) - delete

01:49:866 (109866|1) - move to col 3

01:49:866 (109866|2,110209|2) - move

Nice chart btw .. ^_^ Good luck
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Aii- wrote:

yo mod req ^^

[NOVICE Lv.6]

00:07:694 (7694|2) - move to col 1 and since KK want to make easy diff so i will take most of mod on novice :)

00:44:723 (44723|1,44894|0) - cntrol + G ok

00:45:066 (45066|1) - move to col 3 ok

00:45:237 (45237|2) - move to col 4 ok

01:05:552 (65552|2,65637|3) - umm cntrol + G and 01:05:723 (65723|2) - move to col 2 maybe i will rejected this cuz i will use old pattern since KK want to make easiest diff

01:13:866 - add note col 4 ok

01:15:237 - ^ ok

01:17:809 - add note col 1 ok

01:17:980 (77980|0) - move to col 4 ok

01:48:323 (108323|1) - move to col 3 ok

[ADVANCED Lv.12]

01:13:866 - add note ok

01:37:694 (97694|3) - move to col 3 ? same sound like this part 01:37:352 (97352|2) - oh you're right thanks :)

01:49:009 (109009|1) - delete ok

01:49:866 (109866|1) - move to col 3 ok

01:49:866 (109866|2,110209|2) - move ok i move it one in col 4 one in col 1 hopely its fine :)

Nice chart btw .. ^_^ Good luck
okay thanks Aii-chan :)
Aste-
Kenon-Chan~ Sorry lama... (sibuk making SB)

MOD from my queue here ^.^ ehehe

[general]

SAFE ~ (>.<~)

[The MOD]

Column

1-2-3-4

Novice
00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - Ngga terlalu kejem neh? NOV loh... jadi LN aja please

00:06:837 (6837|2) - Move to 4, terus atasnya move ke 3

00:10:094 (10094|3,10266|2,10437|3,10609|2) - Stream kanan only kayanya terlalu kejem... jadiin 4-3-2-3 aja

00:12:323 (12323|1) - Keras kah Beat nya di sini? reduce aja mendingan

00:28:609 (28609|2) - kejem banget lu non.. jadiin Note aja

00:31:523 (31523|3,31866|3,32209|1) - ^

00:38:209 (38209|3,38209|0,38552|2,38552|1,38894|0,38894|3,39237|1,39237|2,39580|0,39580|3) - ^ Have mercy lah

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^ jadiin LN

01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|1,66837|3) - kayanya kalo di zigzag lebih baik deh (untuk yang kaya gini.. di zigzag aja)

01:12:152 (72152|2) - Add note ato kurangin note di 2 Dual di atas (sama sama keras beatnya)

01:16:437 (76437|2,76609|3,76952|1) - ^ (sama bawahnya)

01:17:294 (77294|2) - ini kau skip stream nya. tapi kenapa 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - kagak?
manding 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - pake Dual nya aja (2 note sebelumnya buang)

Rest FINE

ADV
00:12:323 (12323|3,12323|1,12494|0,12494|2,12666|3,12666|1,12837|0,12837|2,13009|3,13009|1,13180|2,13352|3,13352|1,13523|0) - Dibuat pattern Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single

00:15:409 (15409|1,15409|0,15580|1,15580|3,15752|0,15752|2,15923|1,16094|2,16094|3,16266|1,16437|3) - ^
ps.. kalo ada pattern yang kaya di atas.. di bikin Dual-Single aj, menurutku lebih playable itu

MOD END~

GL ^.^

And

Harbyter wrote:

don't worry,

2 Diff by you
1 diff by me
1 diff by kuo
1diff by raccon

still rankable Really?? but it'll make 2 Diff By owner and 3 GD and it's unrankable, except

2 Diff by Owner
2 GD
and 1 Collab Diff With Owner




i think :roll:
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Pharos21 wrote:

Kenon-Chan~ Sorry lama... (sibuk making SB) iya nggak papa kok :3

MOD from my queue here ^.^ ehehe

[general]

SAFE ~ (>.<~) okay ~(>w<~)

[The MOD]

Column

1-2-3-4

Novice
00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - Ngga terlalu kejem neh? NOV loh... jadi LN aja please emang kejem ya ;w; , tapi nggak aku ganti soal nya udah fix begini soal nya nanti juga kata nya KK mau buat diff satu lagi

00:06:837 (6837|2) - Move to 4, terus atasnya move ke 3 ok

00:10:094 (10094|3,10266|2,10437|3,10609|2) - Stream kanan only kayanya terlalu kejem... jadiin 4-3-2-3 aja ok

00:12:323 (12323|1) - Keras kah Beat nya di sini? reduce aja mendingan ok

00:28:609 (28609|2) - kejem banget lu non.. jadiin Note aja aku nggak kejem loh :'3

00:31:523 (31523|3,31866|3,32209|1) - ^ yang ini nggak soal nya kan nggak ada singel not nya cman LN aja

00:38:209 (38209|3,38209|0,38552|2,38552|1,38894|0,38894|3,39237|1,39237|2,39580|0,39580|3) - ^ Have mercy lah kyak nya udah gampang loh aku buat nya :'3 , ini aku reject

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^ ini juga

01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|1,62552|2,62894|2,63237|3,63580|3) - ^ jadiin LN ini maksud nya gmna :'3

01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|1,66837|3) - kayanya kalo di zigzag lebih baik deh (untuk yang kaya gini.. di zigzag aja) ini aku reject soal nya udah pas kyak gtu

01:12:152 (72152|2) - Add note ato kurangin note di 2 Dual di atas (sama sama keras beatnya) add note aja deh

01:16:437 (76437|2,76609|3,76952|1) - ^ (sama bawahnya) ok

01:17:294 (77294|2) - ini kau skip stream nya. tapi kenapa 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - kagak?
manding 01:17:637 (77637|3,77723|2,77809|1,77809|0) - pake Dual nya aja (2 note sebelumnya buang) ok

Rest FINE

ADV
00:12:323 (12323|3,12323|1,12494|0,12494|2,12666|3,12666|1,12837|0,12837|2,13009|3,13009|1,13180|2,13352|3,13352|1,13523|0) - Dibuat pattern Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single-Dual-Single ok deh aku dengerin juga memang nggak ada beat drum nya dsna

00:15:409 (15409|1,15409|0,15580|1,15580|3,15752|0,15752|2,15923|1,16094|2,16094|3,16266|1,16437|3) - ^
ps.. kalo ada pattern yang kaya di atas.. di bikin Dual-Single aj, menurutku lebih playable itu
ok

MOD END~

GL ^.^

And

Harbyter wrote:

don't worry,

2 Diff by you
1 diff by me
1 diff by kuo
1diff by raccon

still rankable Really?? but it'll make 2 Diff By owner and 3 GD and it's unrankable, except

2 Diff by Owner
2 GD
and 1 Collab Diff With Owner




i think :roll:
okay thanks pharos~san
okay i just contact KK and he said its fine :3
Bray-
Yo kenon
FROM PM REQUEST
SORRY FOR THE DELAY T.T


4K = |1|2|3|4|

Red - Pregnant Serious Mistake
Green - Suggest/Reason
Blue - Positive comment ^^


NOVICE
00:17:637 (17637|3) - delete not loud beat
00:25:352 - add note
00:31:694 (31694|3,31866|2,32037|1,32209|0) - ? i heard nothing in here
01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3kIa/eed1495043.jpg
01:06:666 (66666|3) - move to 3
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1
01:28:609 (88609|3) - move to 3
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1
01:39:494 (99494|2) - delete
ADVANCED
00:26:980 (26980|2,26980|1,27237|1,27237|2,27580|1,27580|0,27580|3,27923|3,27923|0,27923|2,28266|1,28266|3,28266|0) - move to white
00:42:323 (42323|0) - delete
00:43:009 (43009|2,43009|3) - move to 1,2
01:04:780 (64780|0,64780|2,64952|2,64952|0) - move to 2,4
01:05:123 (65123|1,65209|2,65294|3,65380|2,65466|1,65552|0,65637|1,65723|2,65809|3) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3mgq/f3fde5339d.jpg
01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1) - move to 1,3
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1
01:08:552 (68552|0) - delete because on 01:09:923 (69923|1) - you didn't make doubles
01:21:580 (81580|2,81580|0,81752|1,81923|2,81923|0,82094|1) - change to LN?
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1
EXHAUST
Dat SV XD
NICE HARBY >W<

Mod Done
Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Brian_Ex wrote:

Yo kenon
FROM PM REQUEST
SORRY FOR THE DELAY T.T[/color]


4K = |1|2|3|4|

Red - Pregnant Serious Mistake
Green - Suggest/Reason
Blue - Positive comment ^^


NOVICE
00:17:637 (17637|3) - delete not loud beat ok
00:25:352 - add note ok
00:31:694 (31694|3,31866|2,32037|1,32209|0) - ? i heard nothing in here ok and i added LN there i think it fit in there
01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3kIa/eed1495043.jpg udah pas ini jad aku keep soal nya udah pas playable juga
01:06:666 (66666|3) - move to 3 udah pas gini aja
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1 same
01:28:609 (88609|3) - move to 3 same
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1 same
01:39:494 (99494|2) - delete nah ini klo aku coba lebih playable nggak diapus jadi aku keep

ADVANCED
00:26:980 (26980|2,26980|1,27237|1,27237|2,27580|1,27580|0,27580|3,27923|3,27923|0,27923|2,28266|1,28266|3,28266|0) - move to white hmmm sbener nya ini bngung mau ngikutin drum beat nya apa scream nya , tapi kyak nya lebih enak ngatur hitsound nya klo ngikutin drum beat nya jadi aku ganti
00:42:323 (42323|0) - delete udah pas
00:43:009 (43009|2,43009|3) - move to 1,2 ok
01:04:780 (64780|0,64780|2,64952|2,64952|0) - move to 2,4 ok
01:05:123 (65123|1,65209|2,65294|3,65380|2,65466|1,65552|0,65637|1,65723|2,65809|3) - make it like this http://puu.sh/g3mgq/f3fde5339d.jpg nah ini aku keep juga soal nya udah pas gtu
01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1) - move to 1,3 nah ini juga udah pas
01:06:837 (66837|1) - move to 1 same
01:08:552 (68552|0) - delete because on 01:09:923 (69923|1) - you didn't make doubles hmm ok
01:21:580 (81580|2,81580|0,81752|1,81923|2,81923|0,82094|1) - change to LN? hhmm mungkin nggk deh soal nya itu udah di dalem LN
01:28:780 (88780|1) - move to 1 ok
EXHAUST
Dat SV XD
NICE HARBY >W<

Mod Done
Good Luck :) :)
okay thanks brian >w<
btw changes novice diff to Lv.8
okay updated
Verniy_Chan
Hai Kenon-San

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|



Novice Lv.8
01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) stair in here (sakitnya tuh disini) maybe no compatible for NM or Novice diff, if you want change into LN from 01:05:123 and end here 01:05:809
01:06:494 add note, sound similiar in 01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|3,66837|1)
01:07:180 add note to 2 for consistency from part 00:01:352 - 00:03:752
01:07:352 (67352|1) move to 3 ^
01:07:523 (67523|3) move to 2 ^
01:07:694 (67694|2) move to 1 ^
01:07:866 (67866|1) move to 3 ^
01:08:037 (68037|0) move to 2 ^
01:08:209 (68209|1) move to 4 ^
01:08:552 (68552|1) move to 1 ^
01:08:894 (68894|3) move to 2 ^
01:09:237 (69237|1) move to 3 ^
01:09:409 (69409|2) move to 2 ^
01:26:637 (86637|1) move to 4 for balance hand
01:39:066 add note
01:39:409 (99409|3,99494|2,99580|1,99666|0) try to change into LN for this diff
01:48:323 add slider and end here 01:49:352 because i hear stream sound here
Nice~

Advanced Lv.12
00:32:723 add slider, similiar sound in 00:31:523 (31523|2,31866|3,32209|2)
00:43:180 (43180|2) move to 4 for balance hand
01:22:437 (82437|3) move to 3 ^
01:22:780 (82780|2) move to 2
01:22:952 add note to 4
01:23:123 (83123|1) move to 3
01:23:294 add note to 2
Cool

EXHAUST lv. 16
01:01:352 add note to 2
01:03:837 add note
Awesome~

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.
itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hai Kenon-San hai juga verniy~chan ^w^

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|



Novice Lv.8
01:05:123 (65123|3,65209|2,65294|1,65380|0,65466|1,65552|2,65637|3,65723|2) stair in here (sakitnya tuh disini) maybe no compatible for NM or Novice diff, if you want change into LN from 01:05:123 and end here 01:05:809 hmm oke deh aku ganti soal nya bnyak yang bilang juga klo NOV nggak cocok dikasi bgtuan
01:06:494 add note, sound similiar in 01:06:666 (66666|3,66666|1,66837|3,66837|1) ini nggak deh susah kalo mau ditambah lagi T_T
01:07:180 add note to 2 for consistency from part 00:01:352 - 00:03:752
01:07:352 (67352|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:07:523 (67523|3) move to 2 ^ ok
01:07:694 (67694|2) move to 1 ^ ok
01:07:866 (67866|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:08:037 (68037|0) move to 2 ^ ok
01:08:209 (68209|1) move to 4 ^ ok
01:08:552 (68552|1) move to 1 ^ ok
01:08:894 (68894|3) move to 2 ^ ok
01:09:237 (69237|1) move to 3 ^ ok
01:09:409 (69409|2) move to 2 ^ ok
01:26:637 (86637|1) move to 4 for balance hand ok
01:39:066 add note ok
01:39:409 (99409|3,99494|2,99580|1,99666|0) try to change into LN for this diff ok deh
01:48:323 add slider and end here 01:49:352 because i hear stream sound here ok
Nice~

Advanced Lv.12
00:32:723 add slider, similiar sound in 00:31:523 (31523|2,31866|3,32209|2) nah ini aku reject soal nya udah pas ( sbener nya males ngermap juga sih :p
00:43:180 (43180|2) move to 4 for balance hand ok
01:22:437 (82437|3) move to 3 ^ ok
01:22:780 (82780|2) move to 2 ok
01:22:952 add note to 4 nah ini aku reject juga soal nya aku nggak denger ada suara disitu
01:23:123 (83123|1) move to 3 ok
01:23:294 add note to 2 ini juga nggak ada suara
Cool

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.
itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank
okay thanks verniy~senpai >w<
sbener nya sih sengaja novice nya star nya lebih soal nya kata nya si KK mau buat diff basic nya :P
tapi bnyak yang bilang novice nya kejem jadi aku buat lebih gampang aja deh :cry:
okay updated
Harbyter

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hai Kenon-San

Sorry Late~

4K |1|2|3|4|



EXHAUST lv. 16]01:01:352 add note to 2 no add here
01:03:837 add note okyfinally someone noticed this xd
Awesome~

PS: sebenarnya harus butuh diff BASIC, karena

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.
itu tdk akan terjadi jika NOVICE kurang dr 2 star dan modku mungkin membantu~
i like this song, Good Luck for rank


ty for the mod :)
luckyplayer_old
woah map nya onii :O
gud luck ya onii :*
klo udah ranked jangan lupa eskrim nya :3
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

luckyplayer wrote:

woah map nya onii :O
gud luck ya onii :*
klo udah ranked jangan lupa eskrim nya :3
eh kampret klo manggil yang lengkap knape -_-"
jangan onii doang itu arti nya setan -___-
iya nanti gua bliin tapi lu yang bayar ya :3
DarkSider2442
Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
NOVICE Lv.8
00:27:923 (27923|3) - move to 1
01:40:094 (100094|1) - move to 1
ADVANCED Lv.12
00:11:466 (11466|0) - move to 4
00:16:094 (16094|2) - move to 1, 00:16:266 (16266|1) - move to 3
00:43:266 (43266|1,43352|2,43437|3) - ctrl+h, 00:43:523 (43523|0) - move to 4
00:50:552 (50552|2) - move to 4
01:17:980 (77980|2) - delete
01:50:380 (110380|1) - move to 1
Harby's EXHAUST Lv.16
00:01:266 (1266|0) - move to 3, 00:01:352 (1352|2) - move to 1
00:35:294 (35294|1) - move to 4
00:44:552 (44552|3) - move to 2
01:41:980 (101980|1) - move to 3

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
NOVICE Lv.8
00:27:923 (27923|3) - move to 1 ok
01:40:094 (100094|1) - move to 1 ok
ADVANCED Lv.12
00:11:466 (11466|0) - move to 4 ok
00:16:094 (16094|2) - move to 1, 00:16:266 (16266|1) - move to 3 ok
00:43:266 (43266|1,43352|2,43437|3) - ctrl+ h, 00:43:523 (43523|0) - move to 4 ok
00:50:552 (50552|2) - move to 4 ok
01:17:980 (77980|2) - delete ok
01:50:380 (110380|1) - move to 1 ok


Good luck! :)
okay thanks :)
Frim4503

col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7

Lv.8
00:10:094 (10094|0) - remove LN
00:34:266 - add note, make it double like 00:33:066 (33066|2,33066|0) -
01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|3,62552|0,62894|2,63237|1) - maybe it will good if change like this

01:17:980 (77980|3,78152|3) - remove . change with LN

Lv.16
00:55:866 - untill 01:02:380 - . i'm not sure about the SVs change. reduce it or just remove it it will be good IMO
01:36:923 - till 01:43:523 - same reason

it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore :D
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Frim4503 wrote:


col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7

Lv.8
00:10:094 (10094|0) - remove LN no cuz that LN for stream voice
00:34:266 - add note, make it double like 00:33:066 (33066|2,33066|0) - hmmm ok
01:01:866 (61866|1,62209|3,62552|0,62894|2,63237|1) - maybe it will good if change like this ok

01:17:980 (77980|3,78152|3) - remove . change with LN nope itu udah pas :P


it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore :D
okay thanks :)
your turn harby :D
Harbyter

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Harby's EXHAUST Lv.16
00:01:266 (1266|0) - move to 3, 00:01:352 (1352|2) - move to 1 ok
00:35:294 (35294|1) - move to 4ok
00:44:552 (44552|3) - move to 2 keep
01:41:980 (101980|1) - move to 3ok

Good luck! :)

Frim4503 wrote:


col :1,2,3,4,5,6,7

Lv.16
00:55:866 - untill 01:02:380 - . i'm not sure about the SVs change. reduce it or just remove it it will be good IMO
01:36:923 - till 01:43:523 - same reason sorry keep xD

it's just suggestion if you don't like it just ignore :D

ty for the mod :)
Ichigaki
Just little suggestion, why Lv.16? Lv.15 still suitable here

Opinion
As a player, that pattern is already good and SV is so catchy and so challenging. But, as mapper, that SV overused.
Harbyter

Ichigaki wrote:

Just little suggestion, why Lv.16? Lv.15 still suitable here

Opinion
As a player, that pattern is already good and SV is so catchy and so challenging. But, as mapper, that SV overused.

yea about the lv is better 15, but for the sv i think there aren't so many problem, all easy to read and suits good with the music , at least this is a MX not an easy song lol
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]
uhmmm okay changed diff level to Lv.15 >w<
Harbyter
well when time come with the ranking i will see what QAT says,if they told me to remove some sv then i'll remove lol :o
TTGL
Yo, here's my mod!

Column = \1\2\3\4\

NOVICE Lv.8
00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - this pattern is the exact same in your ADV diff, for variety across diffs; I'd suggest you should do this.


00:18:152 (18152|3) - move to 2
00:18:837 (18837|0) - move to 3
These changes are for a bit of variety compared to ADV diff (since this pattern is there too), though this is optional imo.

and that's pretty much it for this difficulty; very fun to play and has nice and bouncy patterns, can't say much else about this diff.

ADVANCED Lv.12
00:27:066 (27066|1) - move to 1
00:27:409 (27409|2) - move to 2
This is for a bit of hand balance ( no notes in column 1 for a bit ) and I find this pattern a bit more fun.

01:06:666 (66666|1,66837|1) - move these 2 notes to 1 ( to fill in a couple notes in column 1 ) Optional.

Quite a short mod again, well to be honest these maps are very good with hand balance and variety altogether. So once again very well done on this difficulty!

Harby's EXHAUST Lv.15
Okay, let's see what I can do for this difficulty ( probably not much :o )
00:47:466 (47466|1) - move to 3
00:47:723 (47723|3) - ^
This is mostly optional but it makes the pattern a bit more varied imo.

00:59:294 (59294|0) - move to 2
01:00:323 (60323|0) - move to 3
Once again this change is optional if you wanna keep that pattern; I decided these for a bit of hand balance since the middle 2 column were empty.

Yep, like I said; not much at all. Once again a great difficulty, nicely hitsounded and the patterns very varied!

Welp, that's it for my mod; quite a short mod but that's mostly because this beatmap is already very good imo. Anyway, hope this helps you!
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Hawxx wrote:

Yo, here's my mod!

Column = \1\2\3\4\

NOVICE Lv.8
00:00:666 (666|0,751|1,837|2,923|3,1009|0,1094|1,1180|2,1266|3) - this pattern is the exact same in your ADV diff, for variety across diffs; I'd suggest you should do this. maybe i will reject this cuz i try to make this diff is more easier to play and enjoyable


00:18:152 (18152|3) - move to 2 okay no changes here cuz i try to avoid jack for this diff :P
00:18:837 (18837|0) - move to 3 same here
These changes are for a bit of variety compared to ADV diff (since this pattern is there too), though this is optional imo.

and that's pretty much it for this difficulty; very fun to play and has nice and bouncy patterns, can't say much else about this diff.

ADVANCED Lv.12
00:27:066 (27066|1) - move to 1
00:27:409 (27409|2) - move to 2
This is for a bit of hand balance ( no notes in column 1 for a bit ) and I find this pattern a bit more fun. hmmm youre right about this i changes but in different note , thanks for remindering me :)

01:06:666 (66666|1,66837|1) - move these 2 notes to 1 ( to fill in a couple notes in column 1 ) Optional. i dunno but i like that jack and that quite fit there :P

Quite a short mod again, well to be honest these maps are very good with hand balance and variety altogether. So once again very well done on this difficulty!


Welp, that's it for my mod; quite a short mod but that's mostly because this beatmap is already very good imo. Anyway, hope this helps you!
okay thanks for mod :)
Evening
wow i'm finally here to mod cause my mod reqs is piling up ( again )

[General]

no hard feelings
I guess you can leave Lunatic Racoon in the tags but idk, BN/QAT might ask you to remove it since he doesn't have a diff in the main mapset itself

Column 1234

[Harby's]

If i'm gonna be a bitch about pitch relevancy:
00:01:352 (1352|3,1523|3,1694|2,1866|2,2037|0,2209|3,2380|0,2552|1) - Move to 42321213 OR Move to 42331213 if you are emphasizing the claps here with a hammer
00:02:723 (2723|3,2894|3,3066|2,3237|2,3409|0,3580|3,3752|0,3923|1) - This applies to ^
and all the similar parts

00:05:466 (5466|3,5637|1,5809|2,5980|0,6152|3,6323|2,6494|1) - Move to 4234132

00:14:552 (14552|1,14637|2) - With consideration on how you used minijacks in this difficulty ( eg. using a minijack in the middle of a dense 1/4 pattern ), you can minijack like this, yes I ctrl+h the second part due to pitch relevancy of the synths there with respect to the LNs

00:15:923 (15923|2,15923|1,16094|3,16094|2,16266|1,16266|2) - Pitch relevancy : Ctrl+H and move this whole pattern to the right by 1
01:03:752 (63752|0,63752|3,63837|2,63923|0,63923|1,64009|2,64094|3) - I feel that a 1/4 alternating hand will suit this scratch sound better since it's sound is repeated in like a "trill" fashion

01:07:180 - Same as the first mods | Might want to keep how the claps are mapped the same also, it really brings out the clap hitsound, basically mapping all the claps the same like you did here on these 8 notes 01:07:523 (67523|2,67523|1,67694|2,67694|1,68894|1,68894|2,69066|1,69066|2) -

01:20:552 (80552|1,80723|2) - Might want to change this into a single note or a 1/4 LN so as to bring out the staccato feeling exhibited by this synth

01:21:580 (81580|1) - Move to 4 for pitch relevancy

01:25:009 (85009|3,85009|0,85266|2,85266|1,85523|0,85523|3) - This is feeling i get when i play this is kinda weird since there is not any actual shield compared to 01:23:637 (83637|1,83637|0,83894|2,83894|1,84152|2,84152|3) - , try to shield 3 of them
01:28:780 (88780|3,88952|1) - These LNs kinda dampen the effect of these finishes here 01:28:780 (88780|2,88780|0) - , imma suggest to remove the LNs entirely so as to have a break after the finisher so as to bring out the impact of the 3 note chord here more

01:48:752 (108752|3) - This single note in the middle of a 2-note chord spam here kinda breaks the flow when playing it, it kinda irks me when playing

Additional note :

01:01:694 - Kinda expected a slowdown of like 0.95 or 0.9 here considering how heavily this is SV-ed

[ADVANCED Lv.12]

Comparing claps, 00:01:694 (1694|2,1694|0,1866|3,1866|1) - which are both mapped to 2 notes, to 00:01:352 (1352|0,1352|2) - a hard kick + a finish which has 2 notes, it feels kinda imbalanced, I suggest to add another note here 00:01:352 (1352|2,1352|0) -
00:01:694 (1694|2,1866|3) - I suggest to pattern the claps differently here, by hammering both of these notes on column 4, it can bring out the claps in the music more
00:03:066 (3066|3,3237|2) - Same here
00:04:437 (4437|2,4609|3) - ^
00:05:809 (5809|1,5980|0) - ^
and so on

00:03:752 (3752|2,3923|3,4094|2) - I suggest to move this to 344 respectively since the kick is the one that's being repeated here
00:06:494 (6494|1,6666|0,6837|1) - ^ move to 211 instead

According to these LNs mapped to the synth ( probably ), you missed out on alot of 1/1 LNs around here that is mapped to the synth that i just mentioned

something like this | You can probably omit mapping the 2nd LN in the middle there since it's kinda confusing if you add too much LNs


00:22:952 (22952|0,22952|2) - I suggest to use single notes for these so that you can emphasize these notes more with a 3 note chord, a break here also makes the emphasis better

00:27:409 (27409|2,27752|0,28094|2,28437|1) - Kinda feels empty that you didn't map the 1/2s in the middle here, the notes just feel to spaced out you can probably utilize 1/2 LNs like you did here for that 00:28:609 (28609|2) -

00:37:694 (37694|2,37952|0,38209|3,38209|1) - It's kinda weird that you mapped this 1/4 here and you didn't over here 00:26:723 (26723|0,26723|3,27066|1,27066|2,27409|2) - , it just feels inconsistent on the tap rhythm

00:45:237 (45237|3,45409|1,45923|1,46094|0) - LNs make stuff kinda hard to get 300g on, which is why i suggest to not use them too much unless it's part of your motive/pattern here | tbh i don't really see a huge need to put LNs here, putting single notes instead of LNs will suffice with these patterns
00:46:609 (46609|3,46780|1) - ^
and so on for similar notes
00:52:094 (52094|1,52266|2,52437|0,52437|1,52780|1,52952|2,53123|1,53123|0) - I suggest to not repeat patterns like this unless it can't be avoided or something in the music repeats or is your intention of mapping like that | There's no repeated sound here so i suggest to just scramble this a bit
01:01:009 - Seems like you missed a note here when i refer to these other surrounding notes 01:00:666 (60666|3,60666|2,61352|0,61352|3) -

01:06:837 - You might wanna add a note or shift the note positioning here since the sound effects of this is not 100% similar to these notes prior to it 01:06:494 (66494|1,66494|3,66666|1,66666|3) -

01:07:180 - Might want to use a 3 note chord here since it's way louder than these claps 01:07:523 (67523|3,67523|0,68209|1,68209|3) - that are mapped to 2 note chords

01:11:637 (71637|1,71809|0) - Might want to hammer these like you did here 01:10:266 (70266|0,70437|0) -

01:16:780 (76780|1,76952|1) - Might wanna avoid this hammer here since it doesn't really represent anything, I suggest to move 01:16:609 (76609|3,76780|1) - to 34 respectively

01:32:552 (92552|2,92552|0,92894|1,92894|3,93237|2) - Same comment as previously ( if you can remember )
01:33:237 (93237|2,93580|3,93923|1,94266|3) - Same comment as prev.

01:38:037 (98037|0,98037|2,98209|1) - Due to pitch relevancy, I suggest to move this LN to 2 and move the bottom single note to 4 and the top single note to 3, just so that it's more comfortable to play and read at the same time

01:38:552 (98552|1,98552|3,98894|0,98894|2,98894|3,99237|0,99237|3) - these chords are kinda inconsistent, but i guess you can leave it as it is since you might have left the 2 chords there 2 notes due to note density

01:39:837 (99837|2) - You might wanna move this to column 1 of 01:39:752 - since the 1/4 ends here according to the vocal in the music


wow i'm lazy, not gonna mod the last one D: ( cause i lost the mood to mod )
Harbyter
ty for the modderino zenx \:3/
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Z3nx wrote:

wow i'm finally here to mod cause my mod reqs is piling up ( again )

[General]

no hard feelings
I guess you can leave Lunatic Racoon in the tags but idk, BN/QAT might ask you to remove it since he doesn't have a diff in the main mapset itself uhmm ok

Column 1234

ADVANCED Lv.12
Comparing claps, 00:01:694 (1694|2,1694|0,1866|3,1866|1) - which are both mapped to 2 notes, to 00:01:352 (1352|0,1352|2) - a hard kick + a finish which has 2 notes, it feels kinda imbalanced, I suggest to add another note here 00:01:352 (1352|2,1352|0) - uhmmm i try to avoid make a lot of hammer btw :p so i just changes the W with the F
00:01:694 (1694|2,1866|3) - I suggest to pattern the claps differently here, by hammering both of these notes on column 4, it can bring out the claps in the music more ok
00:03:066 (3066|3,3237|2) - Same here ok
00:04:437 (4437|2,4609|3) - ^ ok
00:05:809 (5809|1,5980|0) - ^ ok
and so on

00:03:752 (3752|2,3923|3,4094|2) - I suggest to move this to 344 respectively since the kick is the one that's being repeated here ok
00:06:494 (6494|1,6666|0,6837|1) - ^ move to 211 instead ok

According to these LNs mapped to the synth ( probably ), you missed out on alot of 1/1 LNs around here that is mapped to the synth that i just mentioned
uhmmm maybe i will not added LN there since i wont to make that too hard
something like this | You can probably omit mapping the 2nd LN in the middle there since it's kinda confusing if you add too much LNs


00:22:952 (22952|0,22952|2) - I suggest to use single notes for these so that you can emphasize these notes more with a 3 note chord, a break here also makes the emphasis better uhmm i dunno but its seems quite fit there xD

00:27:409 (27409|2,27752|0,28094|2,28437|1) - Kinda feels empty that you didn't map the 1/2s in the middle here, the notes just feel to spaced out you can probably utilize 1/2 LNs like you did here for that 00:28:609 (28609|2) - i agree! i feel so empty there :/

00:37:694 (37694|2,37952|0,38209|3,38209|1) - It's kinda weird that you mapped this 1/4 here and you didn't over here 00:26:723 oh i didnt hear that >w< thanks for remindering me(26723|0,26723|3,27066|1,27066|2,27409|2) - , it just feels inconsistent on the tap rhythm :?:

00:45:237 (45237|3,45409|1,45923|1,46094|0) - LNs make stuff kinda hard to get 300g on, which is why i suggest to not use them too much unless it's part of your motive/pattern here | tbh i don't really see a huge need to put LNs here, putting single notes instead of LNs will suffice with these patterns uhmm i dunno but stairs+LN will be hard to play D:
00:46:609 (46609|3,46780|1) - ^ same
and so on for similar notes
00:52:094 (52094|1,52266|2,52437|0,52437|1,52780|1,52952|2,53123|1,53123|0) - I suggest to not repeat patterns like this unless it can't be avoided or something in the music repeats or is your intention of mapping like that | There's no repeated sound here so i suggest to just scramble this a bit ok
01:01:009 - Seems like you missed a note here when i refer to these other surrounding notes 01:00:666 (60666|3,60666|2,61352|0,61352|3) - ok

01:06:837 - You might wanna add a note or shift the note positioning here since the sound effects of this is not 100% similar to these notes prior to it 01:06:494 (66494|1,66494|3,66666|1,66666|3) - ok

01:07:180 - Might want to use a 3 note chord here since it's way louder than these claps 01:07:523 (67523|3,67523|0,68209|1,68209|3) - that are mapped to 2 note chords ok

01:11:637 (71637|1,71809|0) - Might want to hammer these like you did here 01:10:266 (70266|0,70437|0) - ok

01:16:780 (76780|1,76952|1) - Might wanna avoid this hammer here since it doesn't really represent anything, I suggest to move 01:16:609 (76609|3,76780|1) - to 34 respectively ok

01:32:552 (92552|2,92552|0,92894|1,92894|3,93237|2) - Same comment as previously ( if you can remember ) yep i still remember it
01:33:237 (93237|2,93580|3,93923|1,94266|3) - Same comment as prev. ok

01:38:037 (98037|0,98037|2,98209|1) - Due to pitch relevancy, I suggest to move this LN to 2 and move the bottom single note to 4 and the top single note to 3, just so that it's more comfortable to play and read at the same time ok

01:38:552 (98552|1,98552|3,98894|0,98894|2,98894|3,99237|0,99237|3) - these chords are kinda inconsistent, but i guess you can leave it as it is since you might have left the 2 chords there 2 notes due to note density ok deleted 1 note

01:39:837 (99837|2) - You might wanna move this to column 1 of 01:39:752 - since the 1/4 ends here according to the vocal in the music ok
wow i'm lazy, not gonna mod the last one D: ( cause i lost the mood to mod )
okay thanks lazyzenx xD/
okay updated >w<)b
Harbyter
Bad Apple
Hey there :3

Mod from my queue!

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

- NOV -
00:22:780 (22780|3,22780|1) - move to 1 and 3 (ctrl+h)
00:50:723 - you could add a note on 1 or 4 here
01:28:609 - move to 1/3!
01:51:409 - you could add one note here aswell!

- ADV -
00:17:209 - no kick drum sound right here, remove
00:22:780 (22780|0,22780|2) - i would move these to 2 and 4 (ctrl+h)
00:24:666 - kick drum here, maybe add a note or two? (maybe on 3)
00:25:352 - add on 4 :)
00:27:409 - should be 2 notes (since its the bass drum kicking in), so add one
00:30:152 - would add a note here on 1 aswell!
00:30:837 - and one on 1 here
00:35:637 - add on 4
00:36:323 - add on 3 or 1
01:29:123 - move 3 to 4

Overall a really good mapset, couldn't find that many flaws at all.
I hope it was still helpful.
Good luck for your map! :)
Apple
Topic Starter
[ kenon ]

Harbyter wrote:

http://puu.sh/ghJF4/e9efeae489.rar
here the update
okay updated
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