Thanks for the mod "de Geso~ ~=OwO=~"_Gezo_ wrote:
Live For The Night
I think 00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - would play better if they were on the same column (I'd recommend 2, that way it won't change any surrounding note.)
00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - Make them 4/8, 3/8 and 2/8 long respectively ? (Like 00:45:066 (45066|2,45378|2,45691|2) - )
00:46:733 (46733|0) - Have a 4/8 LN ?
00:47:010 (47010|2) - Move it to 00:47:045 - (and make it 3/8 long)
00:47:566 (47566|0) - LN 4/8 long, 00:47:878 (47878|1) - extend by 1/8
AAAA Damn lazy to reply, but i got your point, i make most of them consistent enough and no change for the rest
Explosions
00:56:733 (56733|0,56733|1,56733|2) - Would be better if you had a rhythm similar to 01:00:066 (60066|3,60066|1,60274|2,60483|0,60691|3) - . (And add a LN on the reference rhythm)
01:10:066 (70066|3,70066|2,70066|1) - Same goes here
Sure things
Scarred
03:27:566 (207566|3,207566|2) - Most LNs you have there end 1/4 before the next notes, so extend these to respect that ?
03:36:316 (216316|2,216420|1,216524|0,216733|1,216837|2,216941|3,217149|2) - I honestly think this rhythm is awkward, you should change it.
Yes ^ rearrange >w<
03:42:149 (222149|0,222566|0) - Maybe make a 5n stream here ? It would have consistency with 03:40:483 (220483|1,220587|2,220691|1,220795|2,220899|1) - .
nope, this section already have the pattern that i want >w<
The Line
04:13:191 (253191|1,253243|0,253295|1,253347|2,253399|1,253399|0) - Dunno if that's just me but I think this pattern is weird ;w;
Metronic
04:16:733 (256733|1,256733|2) - The SV changes are not percievable (Also; on other parts when you have this, you might delete them, as it's the same thing)
err i like it this way, the first one might looks a bit odd but its still consistent SV and playable... so no change yet....
04:18:816 (258816|2,259128|1,259128|0,259233|3,259233|2) - This part feels empty as you have changes on 1/4.
Right, this 1/4 fits better
Burn Up
lots of LN cuts
08:17:566 (497566|1,497566|3,497983|2,499233|2,499233|3,499233|1) - Don't cut the LNs, it's better if you have 1 LN that stays through the held synth note and the rest following the perc part.
08:19:233 (499233|3,499233|1,500066|0,500899|0,500899|1,500899|3) - ^
08:22:045 (502045|2,502462|2,502566|0,502566|1,502566|3) - Purposedly missed some notes here ?
08:23:816 (503816|2,503816|3,503816|1,504233|3,504233|1,504233|2,504649|1,504649|2,504649|0,505066|2) - Same as 2 above
08:25:691 (505691|2,505899|1,505899|0,505899|3,506316|2,506733|3,506733|1,506733|2) - ^
08:27:566 (507566|3,507566|2,507566|1) - ^
08:30:483 (510483|1,510483|3,510483|0,510899|3,510899|1,510899|0) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,512566|3) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,513399|2,514233|0,514233|1,514233|2) - ^
OH this.... NOTICE that the cut happens only when the sounds change, so it means 1 release... 1 add.... >w< no change for all
Appudetto~