FINALLY
am not pro 4K modder
[Marathon]
Cold Love
I feel like there's not much pattern research, most patterns are the same throughout the song (mirrored or not). When there's that one long hold; every second note is on column 3, which leads to a lot of repetition. I recommend you to change the position of the notes so it's a bit more vaired.
Live For The Night
I think 00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - would play better if they were on the same column (I'd recommend 2, that way it won't change any surrounding note.)
00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - Make them 4/8, 3/8 and 2/8 long respectively ? (Like 00:45:066 (45066|2,45378|2,45691|2) - )
00:46:733 (46733|0) - Have a 4/8 LN ?
00:47:010 (47010|2) - Move it to 00:47:045 - (and make it 3/8 long)
00:47:566 (47566|0) - LN 4/8 long, 00:47:878 (47878|1) - extend by 1/8
Explosions
00:56:733 (56733|0,56733|1,56733|2) - Would be better if you had a rhythm similar to 01:00:066 (60066|3,60066|1,60274|2,60483|0,60691|3) - . (And add a LN on the reference rhythm)
01:10:066 (70066|3,70066|2,70066|1) - Same goes here
Endorphins
01:29:337 (89337|3) - It sounds like it's actually 1/6 here.
01:39:371 (99371|0) - Here too
01:46:003 (106003|1) - Aaaaaaaand here too.
(The 3/4 LN are right positioned, but I don't know about the simple notes, since the background drumming is still 1/6 I think.)
TI
03:15:899 (195899|3,196003|1,196107|3,196211|1,196315|2,196419|0,196524|2,196628|0) - 1/3 pls D:
03:17:149 (197149|3,197358|1,197358|3,197566|0,197566|2) - Make them 1/4 as well ?
Scarred
03:27:566 (207566|3,207566|2) - Most LNs you have there end 1/4 before the next notes, so extend these to respect that ?
03:36:316 (216316|2,216420|1,216524|0,216733|1,216837|2,216941|3,217149|2) - I honestly think this rhythm is awkward, you should change it.
03:42:149 (222149|0,222566|0) - Maybe make a 5n stream here ? It would have consistency with 03:40:483 (220483|1,220587|2,220691|1,220795|2,220899|1) - .
The Line
04:13:191 (253191|1,253243|0,253295|1,253347|2,253399|1,253399|0) - Dunno if that's just me but I think this pattern is weird ;w;
Metronic
04:16:733 (256733|1,256733|2) - The SV changes are not percievable (Also; on other parts when you have this, you might delete them, as it's the same thing)
04:18:816 (258816|2,259128|1,259128|0,259233|3,259233|2) - This part feels empty as you have changes on 1/4.
Mind Control
04:55:066 (295066|3,295118|2,295170|1,295222|0,295274|3,295326|2,295378|1,295431|0,295483|3,295535|2,295587|1,295639|0,295691|3,295743|2,295795|1,295847|0,295899|2,295899|3) - I don't think the song supports 1/8
Binary
05:25:066 (325066|2) - LN ? Later in the song, the same melody has a LN on the very first note
05:31:733 (331733|0) - ^
Burn Up
lots of LN cuts
08:17:566 (497566|1,497566|3,497983|2,499233|2,499233|3,499233|1) - Don't cut the LNs, it's better if you have 1 LN that stays through the held synth note and the rest following the perc part.
08:19:233 (499233|3,499233|1,500066|0,500899|0,500899|1,500899|3) - ^
08:22:045 (502045|2,502462|2,502566|0,502566|1,502566|3) - Purposedly missed some notes here ?
08:23:816 (503816|2,503816|3,503816|1,504233|3,504233|1,504233|2,504649|1,504649|2,504649|0,505066|2) - Same as 2 above
08:25:691 (505691|2,505899|1,505899|0,505899|3,506316|2,506733|3,506733|1,506733|2) - ^
08:27:566 (507566|3,507566|2,507566|1) - ^
08:30:483 (510483|1,510483|3,510483|0,510899|3,510899|1,510899|0) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,512566|3) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,513399|2,514233|0,514233|1,514233|2) - ^
Move into Light
09:45:690 (585690|0,585795|2,585899|2,585899|1,585899|3) - Use the same structure as 09:56:108 (596108|1,596212|0,596316|2,596316|3) - ? The song is the same at both points. That would imply delete one of the notes at 09:45:899 (585899|1,585899|2) - .
More Than You
10:09:233 (609233|0,609649|1) - More than audible 1/3 notes here
Another thing to note is the fact your LNs always follow 1234321234321.... Change them ?
am not pro 4K modder
[Marathon]
Cold Love
I feel like there's not much pattern research, most patterns are the same throughout the song (mirrored or not). When there's that one long hold; every second note is on column 3, which leads to a lot of repetition. I recommend you to change the position of the notes so it's a bit more vaired.
Live For The Night
I think 00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - would play better if they were on the same column (I'd recommend 2, that way it won't change any surrounding note.)
00:43:399 (43399|0,43712|1,44024|2) - Make them 4/8, 3/8 and 2/8 long respectively ? (Like 00:45:066 (45066|2,45378|2,45691|2) - )
00:46:733 (46733|0) - Have a 4/8 LN ?
00:47:010 (47010|2) - Move it to 00:47:045 - (and make it 3/8 long)
00:47:566 (47566|0) - LN 4/8 long, 00:47:878 (47878|1) - extend by 1/8
Explosions
00:56:733 (56733|0,56733|1,56733|2) - Would be better if you had a rhythm similar to 01:00:066 (60066|3,60066|1,60274|2,60483|0,60691|3) - . (And add a LN on the reference rhythm)
01:10:066 (70066|3,70066|2,70066|1) - Same goes here
Endorphins
01:29:337 (89337|3) - It sounds like it's actually 1/6 here.
01:39:371 (99371|0) - Here too
01:46:003 (106003|1) - Aaaaaaaand here too.
(The 3/4 LN are right positioned, but I don't know about the simple notes, since the background drumming is still 1/6 I think.)
TI
03:15:899 (195899|3,196003|1,196107|3,196211|1,196315|2,196419|0,196524|2,196628|0) - 1/3 pls D:
03:17:149 (197149|3,197358|1,197358|3,197566|0,197566|2) - Make them 1/4 as well ?
Scarred
03:27:566 (207566|3,207566|2) - Most LNs you have there end 1/4 before the next notes, so extend these to respect that ?
03:36:316 (216316|2,216420|1,216524|0,216733|1,216837|2,216941|3,217149|2) - I honestly think this rhythm is awkward, you should change it.
03:42:149 (222149|0,222566|0) - Maybe make a 5n stream here ? It would have consistency with 03:40:483 (220483|1,220587|2,220691|1,220795|2,220899|1) - .
The Line
04:13:191 (253191|1,253243|0,253295|1,253347|2,253399|1,253399|0) - Dunno if that's just me but I think this pattern is weird ;w;
Metronic
04:16:733 (256733|1,256733|2) - The SV changes are not percievable (Also; on other parts when you have this, you might delete them, as it's the same thing)
04:18:816 (258816|2,259128|1,259128|0,259233|3,259233|2) - This part feels empty as you have changes on 1/4.
Mind Control
04:55:066 (295066|3,295118|2,295170|1,295222|0,295274|3,295326|2,295378|1,295431|0,295483|3,295535|2,295587|1,295639|0,295691|3,295743|2,295795|1,295847|0,295899|2,295899|3) - I don't think the song supports 1/8
Binary
05:25:066 (325066|2) - LN ? Later in the song, the same melody has a LN on the very first note
05:31:733 (331733|0) - ^
Burn Up
lots of LN cuts
08:17:566 (497566|1,497566|3,497983|2,499233|2,499233|3,499233|1) - Don't cut the LNs, it's better if you have 1 LN that stays through the held synth note and the rest following the perc part.
08:19:233 (499233|3,499233|1,500066|0,500899|0,500899|1,500899|3) - ^
08:22:045 (502045|2,502462|2,502566|0,502566|1,502566|3) - Purposedly missed some notes here ?
08:23:816 (503816|2,503816|3,503816|1,504233|3,504233|1,504233|2,504649|1,504649|2,504649|0,505066|2) - Same as 2 above
08:25:691 (505691|2,505899|1,505899|0,505899|3,506316|2,506733|3,506733|1,506733|2) - ^
08:27:566 (507566|3,507566|2,507566|1) - ^
08:30:483 (510483|1,510483|3,510483|0,510899|3,510899|1,510899|0) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,512566|3) - ^
08:32:566 (512566|0,512566|1,513399|2,514233|0,514233|1,514233|2) - ^
Move into Light
09:45:690 (585690|0,585795|2,585899|2,585899|1,585899|3) - Use the same structure as 09:56:108 (596108|1,596212|0,596316|2,596316|3) - ? The song is the same at both points. That would imply delete one of the notes at 09:45:899 (585899|1,585899|2) - .
More Than You
10:09:233 (609233|0,609649|1) - More than audible 1/3 notes here
Another thing to note is the fact your LNs always follow 1234321234321.... Change them ?