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[LordRaika]
[ExUsagi]
We need more marathons up in this game.
Best of luck to you guys on approval!
[General]
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[puxtu]
Buck Stew (hey it rhymes)
[]Flux Pavilion – Gold Love (Ft. Rosie Oddie) (Digital Only)
00:35:899 to 00:41:733 - This is more of a variety suggestion, but I think you could 'mirror' the pattern here to be just like 00:23:399 to 00:30:066 - , but with the LN on the right-most column and streams on the left side of it.
Datsik – Hold It Down feat. Georgia Murray
02:33:399 (153399|0) - If I'm hearing it correctly, this LN should end at 02:33:712 - or at the blue line to be on time with the wubs. They seem to have a different time length compared to the earlier LN 02:32:983 (152983|3) - .
Same suggestion for 02:40:066 (160066|3) - , 02:46:733 (166733|3) - , and 02:53:399 (173399|3) - .
02:36:594 (156594|3) - Move to 3 to avoid 1/3 mini-jack
Zomboy – Mind Control
04:49:649 (289649|1,289649|2) - Move these notes one column to the left for hand balance
05:07:149 (307149|3,307983|3) - Move both notes to 3 for a better pattern flow
05:09:753 (309753|0) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jacking
05:20:483 (320483|3) - Move to 3 for pattern flow
AWE – Jurassic
06:18:816 (378816|2) - Move to 4 for pitch relevancy
06:19:233 (379233|1,379441|2) - Move these notes one column to the right, then 06:19:649 (379649|3) - Move this to 2 for maximum pitch relevancy with the prominent instrument here
06:20:483 (380483|1,380899|2,381316|0) - Rearrange the patterns to 1,2,3 for pitch relevancy
06:24:233 (384233|0,384649|1) - Switch these notes around by column for pitch
06:40:899 (400899|2) - Move to 1, then 06:41:316 (401316|0) - Move to 4 for the pitch
06:44:024 (404024|1) - Move to 3 for a better pattern flow
07:11:733 (431733|3,432358|0) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
07:15:691 (435691|0) - Move to 4, same reason as above
07:22:149 (442149|1,442358|2,442566|2) - Rearrange to 3,2,1 for pitch relevancy?
07:45:899 (465899|3) - Move to 1 for better synergy
Subscape – I Need You
09:04:441 (544441|3) - Move to 3 for a better flow in pattern
09:08:399 (548399|3,548608|1) - Switch these notes around by column for the same reason as above
Koven – More Than You
10:03:677 - Add a note for the somewhat audible sound heard here
10:04:076 (604076|2) - From what I'm hearing, this note appears to be just slightly early for the kick itself. If I'm hearing it right, this note should be snapped to the purple line using 1/6 Beat Snap to be on time with the kick.
Same suggestion for 10:07:410 (607410|2) - , 10:10:743 (610743|2) - , 10:12:410 (612410|0) - , 10:14:076 (614076|0) - , 10:17:410 (617410|2) - , 10:20:743 (620743|3) - , and pretty much notes that have the same situation as these ones.
10:22:983 to 10:30:066 - This is where the timing gets weird. It sounds a little early here but the notes are unsnapped with the music. Try and find a way to fix this problem so they're snapped with the sounds here.
Mojo – Blues
11:23:608 - Add a note here for consistency with the upcoming patterns.
Same suggestion for 11:24:441 - , 11:25:274 - , 11:26:108 - , 11:26:941 - , and 11:27:774 - .
11:36:733 - Add a note for the crash heard here
11:38:399 (698399|3) - Move to 2 for a better pattern flow
11:41:524 (701524|2) - Move to 4 then 11:41:733 (701733|3) - move to 2, same reason as above
Koan Sound & Asa – Tetsuo’s Redemption
12:33:191 (753191|0) - Turn this to a 1/2 LN to be as consistent with the sounds and with 12:31:524 (751524|3) - .
Same suggestion for 12:33:191 (753191|0) - , 12:34:858 (754858|0) - , 12:36:524 (756524|3) - , 12:38:191 (758191|3) - , 12:39:858 (759858|0) - , 12:41:524 (761524|0) - , and the notes after these that happen to be in the same situation as these ones.
00:35:899 to 00:41:733 - This is more of a variety suggestion, but I think you could 'mirror' the pattern here to be just like 00:23:399 to 00:30:066 - , but with the LN on the right-most column and streams on the left side of it.
Datsik – Hold It Down feat. Georgia Murray
02:33:399 (153399|0) - If I'm hearing it correctly, this LN should end at 02:33:712 - or at the blue line to be on time with the wubs. They seem to have a different time length compared to the earlier LN 02:32:983 (152983|3) - .
Same suggestion for 02:40:066 (160066|3) - , 02:46:733 (166733|3) - , and 02:53:399 (173399|3) - .
02:36:594 (156594|3) - Move to 3 to avoid 1/3 mini-jack
Zomboy – Mind Control
04:49:649 (289649|1,289649|2) - Move these notes one column to the left for hand balance
05:07:149 (307149|3,307983|3) - Move both notes to 3 for a better pattern flow
05:09:753 (309753|0) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jacking
05:20:483 (320483|3) - Move to 3 for pattern flow
AWE – Jurassic
06:18:816 (378816|2) - Move to 4 for pitch relevancy
06:19:233 (379233|1,379441|2) - Move these notes one column to the right, then 06:19:649 (379649|3) - Move this to 2 for maximum pitch relevancy with the prominent instrument here
06:20:483 (380483|1,380899|2,381316|0) - Rearrange the patterns to 1,2,3 for pitch relevancy
06:24:233 (384233|0,384649|1) - Switch these notes around by column for pitch
06:40:899 (400899|2) - Move to 1, then 06:41:316 (401316|0) - Move to 4 for the pitch
06:44:024 (404024|1) - Move to 3 for a better pattern flow
07:11:733 (431733|3,432358|0) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
07:15:691 (435691|0) - Move to 4, same reason as above
07:22:149 (442149|1,442358|2,442566|2) - Rearrange to 3,2,1 for pitch relevancy?
07:45:899 (465899|3) - Move to 1 for better synergy
Subscape – I Need You
09:04:441 (544441|3) - Move to 3 for a better flow in pattern
09:08:399 (548399|3,548608|1) - Switch these notes around by column for the same reason as above
Koven – More Than You
10:03:677 - Add a note for the somewhat audible sound heard here
10:04:076 (604076|2) - From what I'm hearing, this note appears to be just slightly early for the kick itself. If I'm hearing it right, this note should be snapped to the purple line using 1/6 Beat Snap to be on time with the kick.
Same suggestion for 10:07:410 (607410|2) - , 10:10:743 (610743|2) - , 10:12:410 (612410|0) - , 10:14:076 (614076|0) - , 10:17:410 (617410|2) - , 10:20:743 (620743|3) - , and pretty much notes that have the same situation as these ones.
10:22:983 to 10:30:066 - This is where the timing gets weird. It sounds a little early here but the notes are unsnapped with the music. Try and find a way to fix this problem so they're snapped with the sounds here.
Mojo – Blues
11:23:608 - Add a note here for consistency with the upcoming patterns.
Same suggestion for 11:24:441 - , 11:25:274 - , 11:26:108 - , 11:26:941 - , and 11:27:774 - .
11:36:733 - Add a note for the crash heard here
11:38:399 (698399|3) - Move to 2 for a better pattern flow
11:41:524 (701524|2) - Move to 4 then 11:41:733 (701733|3) - move to 2, same reason as above
Koan Sound & Asa – Tetsuo’s Redemption
12:33:191 (753191|0) - Turn this to a 1/2 LN to be as consistent with the sounds and with 12:31:524 (751524|3) - .
Same suggestion for 12:33:191 (753191|0) - , 12:34:858 (754858|0) - , 12:36:524 (756524|3) - , 12:38:191 (758191|3) - , 12:39:858 (759858|0) - , 12:41:524 (761524|0) - , and the notes after these that happen to be in the same situation as these ones.
[LordRaika]
Our Lord and Savior Raika
[]Krewella – Live For The Night (Pegboard Nerds Remix) (Digital Only)
No suggestions. Looks good!
Ellie Goulding – Explosions (Gemini Remix)
00:56:733 - Add a note here for stronger impact
01:02:566 (62566|1,62670|3) - Switch these notes around by column for better playability. This is so the right hand is consistent on hitting the 1/2 wubs and so it doesn't have a 1/4 triplet on there.
01:15:066 - Add a note here for the kick and consistency since you have that mapped on 01:11:733 - .
Feed Me & Tasha Baxter – Ebb & Flow
02:06:524 (126524|2) - Move to 4 to avoid mini-jack? You didn't have that arranged on 02:13:191 - .
02:18:608 - Add a 1/4 LN for the sound heard here, since you have that mapped on 02:25:274 - .
02:18:816 - Same suggestion as above, you have it mapped on 02:25:483 - as well.
Culprate – Scarred
03:46:733 (226733|1,226837|1,226941|2,227045|2,227149|0,227253|0,227358|3,227462|3) - These sound more like in 1/3 Beat instead of 1/4. I'm not exactly sure since they're pretty drowned out, but you might wanna double check to make sure.
Au5 – Metronic
04:37:566 to 04:38:191 - For the sounds here, I think you could rearrange them based on pitch relevancy for the best effect in this part.
501 – The Final Cut
06:11:733 (371733|0,371733|3,371733|2) - These LNs don't end at the same time as 05:58:399 (358399|1,358399|3) - , so either follow the snapping on the former or the latter for consistency.
Rollz – Burn Up (Dabin Remix)
08:21:733 - Add a note here for the kick?
Same suggestion for 08:22:045 - , 08:22:358 - , 08:28:399 - , 08:28:712 - , 08:29:024 - , 08:35:066 - , 08:35:378 - , and 08:35:691 - .
08:22:878 (502878|2,502983|1) - Ctrl + H these notes to act as a mirrored pattern to the earlier one. Also to avoid the mini-jack there
No suggestions. Looks good!
Ellie Goulding – Explosions (Gemini Remix)
00:56:733 - Add a note here for stronger impact
01:02:566 (62566|1,62670|3) - Switch these notes around by column for better playability. This is so the right hand is consistent on hitting the 1/2 wubs and so it doesn't have a 1/4 triplet on there.
01:15:066 - Add a note here for the kick and consistency since you have that mapped on 01:11:733 - .
Feed Me & Tasha Baxter – Ebb & Flow
02:06:524 (126524|2) - Move to 4 to avoid mini-jack? You didn't have that arranged on 02:13:191 - .
02:18:608 - Add a 1/4 LN for the sound heard here, since you have that mapped on 02:25:274 - .
02:18:816 - Same suggestion as above, you have it mapped on 02:25:483 - as well.
Culprate – Scarred
03:46:733 (226733|1,226837|1,226941|2,227045|2,227149|0,227253|0,227358|3,227462|3) - These sound more like in 1/3 Beat instead of 1/4. I'm not exactly sure since they're pretty drowned out, but you might wanna double check to make sure.
Au5 – Metronic
04:37:566 to 04:38:191 - For the sounds here, I think you could rearrange them based on pitch relevancy for the best effect in this part.
501 – The Final Cut
06:11:733 (371733|0,371733|3,371733|2) - These LNs don't end at the same time as 05:58:399 (358399|1,358399|3) - , so either follow the snapping on the former or the latter for consistency.
Rollz – Burn Up (Dabin Remix)
08:21:733 - Add a note here for the kick?
Same suggestion for 08:22:045 - , 08:22:358 - , 08:28:399 - , 08:28:712 - , 08:29:024 - , 08:35:066 - , 08:35:378 - , and 08:35:691 - .
08:22:878 (502878|2,502983|1) - Ctrl + H these notes to act as a mirrored pattern to the earlier one. Also to avoid the mini-jack there
[ExUsagi]
Why is Unagi so fun to say?
Sub Focus – Endorphins feat. Alex Clare
01:36:941 (96941|1) - Move to 1 for better pattern flow
01:45:691 (105691|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
01:53:295 (113295|3,113399|0) - Switch these notes around by column for easier playability. Depending on the column, I think the LN that has regular notes beside it should be separate from each hand.
Sort of like how one LN is on the left hand and a regular note is on the right. Keep them separate so the patterns are easier to read and play on.
01:54:441 (114441|0,114649|3) - Same suggestion as above
01:56:316 (116316|1) - Move to the right hand or 4 for comfortability.
01:56:628 (116628|3,116733|0) - Switch these notes around by column, same idea as above
01:57:462 (117462|3,117566|0) - Same suggestion as above
01:59:441 (119441|0) - Move to 4 for hand balance
Torqux – T1
03:17:253 - Add a note here for the little hi-hat
03:19:649 - Add a 1/2 LN here for the wub
Emalkay – The Line feat. Glen Boden
03:56:177 (236177|0) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jack
04:02:844 (242844|0) - Same suggestion as above
04:06:576 (246576|1,246628|0) - Switch these around by column to avoid the little 1/4 shield there
04:09:510 (249510|0,249649|1) - Move these notes one column to the right to avoid minijacking
04:13:191 (253191|1,253243|0,253295|1,253347|2,253399|1) - I'm not so sure if this pattern plays well since it has a triple jack on the second column. Maybe try to find a way for this pattern to have better playability because the jack there might prove uncomfortable (and might be also responsible for some combo breaks woops)
KATFYR – Binary
05:26:212 (326212|3,326524|3) - Move these notes to 3 for a better pattern synergy
05:38:399 (338399|2) - Remove this note? You didn't have that mapped in on 05:41:733 - .
05:40:795 (340795|3) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jack
Tristam – Truth (Candyland Remix)
No suggestions here. Looks nice!
Juventa – Move Into Light feat. Erica Curran (Koven Remix)
09:21:316 (561316|0,561524|0,561733|2) - Switch these notes around by column so the left hand has the LN, while the right has regular notes for hand balance.
09:41:628 (581628|0,581733|1) - Move these notes one column to the right to avoid mini-jacking
09:43:399 (583399|2) - Move to 2 for better readability
09:46:212 (586212|0,586316|3) - Switch these notes around by column, same reason as above
09:46:733 (586733|1) - Move to 3 for comfortability
09:54:962 (594962|3,595066|2) - Move one column to the left to avoid minijack
10:00:066 (600066|2) - Move to 2 for readability
Xilent – Boss Wave
10:49:858 (649858|1,649962|2,650066|3) - Move these notes one column to the left for pitch relevancy and pattern synergy
10:52:566 (652566|0,652618|1,652670|2) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy
11:13:608 (673608|1,673677|0,673746|1,673816|2) - Rearrange the arrangement here to 1,2,3,1 to reduce tension on the left index (column 2)?
If you applied the suggestion above, move 11:14:024 (674024|0) - to 3 for comfortability
11:20:274 (680274|2,680344|3,680413|2,680483|1) - Rearrange to 4,3,2,4 to reduce tension on column 3/right index finger.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 11:20:691 (680691|3) - to 2 for comfortability
01:36:941 (96941|1) - Move to 1 for better pattern flow
01:45:691 (105691|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
01:53:295 (113295|3,113399|0) - Switch these notes around by column for easier playability. Depending on the column, I think the LN that has regular notes beside it should be separate from each hand.
Sort of like how one LN is on the left hand and a regular note is on the right. Keep them separate so the patterns are easier to read and play on.
01:54:441 (114441|0,114649|3) - Same suggestion as above
01:56:316 (116316|1) - Move to the right hand or 4 for comfortability.
01:56:628 (116628|3,116733|0) - Switch these notes around by column, same idea as above
01:57:462 (117462|3,117566|0) - Same suggestion as above
01:59:441 (119441|0) - Move to 4 for hand balance
Torqux – T1
03:17:253 - Add a note here for the little hi-hat
03:19:649 - Add a 1/2 LN here for the wub
Emalkay – The Line feat. Glen Boden
03:56:177 (236177|0) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jack
04:02:844 (242844|0) - Same suggestion as above
04:06:576 (246576|1,246628|0) - Switch these around by column to avoid the little 1/4 shield there
04:09:510 (249510|0,249649|1) - Move these notes one column to the right to avoid minijacking
04:13:191 (253191|1,253243|0,253295|1,253347|2,253399|1) - I'm not so sure if this pattern plays well since it has a triple jack on the second column. Maybe try to find a way for this pattern to have better playability because the jack there might prove uncomfortable (and might be also responsible for some combo breaks woops)
KATFYR – Binary
05:26:212 (326212|3,326524|3) - Move these notes to 3 for a better pattern synergy
05:38:399 (338399|2) - Remove this note? You didn't have that mapped in on 05:41:733 - .
05:40:795 (340795|3) - Move to 2 to avoid mini-jack
Tristam – Truth (Candyland Remix)
No suggestions here. Looks nice!
Juventa – Move Into Light feat. Erica Curran (Koven Remix)
09:21:316 (561316|0,561524|0,561733|2) - Switch these notes around by column so the left hand has the LN, while the right has regular notes for hand balance.
09:41:628 (581628|0,581733|1) - Move these notes one column to the right to avoid mini-jacking
09:43:399 (583399|2) - Move to 2 for better readability
09:46:212 (586212|0,586316|3) - Switch these notes around by column, same reason as above
09:46:733 (586733|1) - Move to 3 for comfortability
09:54:962 (594962|3,595066|2) - Move one column to the left to avoid minijack
10:00:066 (600066|2) - Move to 2 for readability
Xilent – Boss Wave
10:49:858 (649858|1,649962|2,650066|3) - Move these notes one column to the left for pitch relevancy and pattern synergy
10:52:566 (652566|0,652618|1,652670|2) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy
11:13:608 (673608|1,673677|0,673746|1,673816|2) - Rearrange the arrangement here to 1,2,3,1 to reduce tension on the left index (column 2)?
If you applied the suggestion above, move 11:14:024 (674024|0) - to 3 for comfortability
11:20:274 (680274|2,680344|3,680413|2,680483|1) - Rearrange to 4,3,2,4 to reduce tension on column 3/right index finger.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 11:20:691 (680691|3) - to 2 for comfortability
We need more marathons up in this game.
Best of luck to you guys on approval!