Yumi Haruna - Amai Hanazono(Game Version) [CatchTheBeat|Taik · forum

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Title:Amai Hanazono(Game Version)
TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
Version:Deceit's Rain
Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを
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PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-02-14T13:26:37+00:00

futsuu no changes
muzu a bit
thanks for mod rew
updated

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-02-21T17:23:02+00:00

http://puu.sh/g6zja.rar
I don't know if the spread is rankable LOL

PatZar

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-02-22T03:32:33+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
I don't know if the spread is rankable LOL

rip my posting count 1169

Razorflamekun

162 posts

Joined October 2014

Razorflamekun 2015-02-22T03:53:52+00:00

M4M request:

General: Remove Taiko from all Taiko difficulties names.

Futsuu

00:01:473 - Add a note here. Not sure which color would work best as both could work in this instance, so I'll let you decide.
00:05:759 - ^
00:10:045 - Add small red here.
00:14:866 - ^
00:20:759 - ^
00:22:902 - Add a note here. Both colors could work here, so it's up to you to decide.
00:29:598 - Add small red here.
00:36:830 - ^
00:44:330 - ^
00:49:420 - ^
00:53:705 - Add small blue here.
00:57:991 - Add small red here.
01:04:687 - ^
01:06:027 - Add small blue here.
01:10:312 - ^
01:12:455 - ^
01:16:473 - Add note here. Either colors works, so it's up to you.
01:17:277 - ^
01:25:045 - ^

Muzukashii:

After playing through this difficulty, I found no glaring issues that needed to be addressed. I really liked this difficulty

Hope this helps

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-02-22T03:58:54+00:00

your mod is unnecessary note on my futsuu
thanks for your comment and mod!

Razorflamekun

162 posts

Joined October 2014

Razorflamekun 2015-02-22T04:18:23+00:00

Genocide wrote:
your mod is unnecessary note on my futsuu
thanks for your comment and mod!

In the future, people might want more information that this as to why you don't accept any of the changes.

Krah

osu! Alumni

1,023 posts

Joined March 2012

Krah 2015-02-24T17:57:30+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
http://puu.sh/g6zja.rar
I don't know if the spread is rankable LOL

It's not ... Basic rc

toybot

1,050 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2015-02-24T18:20:12+00:00

hello, in game req

[General]
I feel like you need a less dense and less complicated diff for standard, since this normal is quite dense in notes, trying to get all the rhythms into a normal difficulty; perhaps get someone to make a beginner difficulty and make the normal difficulty a bit harder to get normal star rating? Otherwise this set is really nice.

[KwaN's Normal]
00:52:634 (1) - Clap on head?
00:56:920 (1) - I think that this slider's change in direction should land right on the white beat instead of a little after. It's a strong beat, so even though there isn't any audible effect corresponding to the beat, the change in cursor direction would be able to do the trick.
00:58:527 (3) - Shouldn't this lead into the next circle more directly
00:59:866 (5) - This calls for a soft-finish for the impact, normal-whistle doesn't really give that
01:27:187 (3,1) - Arrange so that these aren't touching? it looks kind of bad barely touching like that.
01:28:527 (1) - Missing clap at end
Nice difficulty!

[KwaN's Hard]
01:26:383 (1) - Unsnapped slider tail
00:15:670 (1) - Perhaps this blanket around 00:17:812 (1) - 's head can look better
00:59:867 (2) - Soft-finish on head?
01:09:777 (2) - I recommend moving this to around 224|344, the two circles are different
01:04:420 (4,5,6) - Having the triplet stack start on a solid quarter beat instead of an eighth makes this inconsistent. Personally I'm not really fond of this whole combo and would change it to something like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2818780
Your choice on how you want it though, I just think the triplet should start on red tick instead of white
01:12:455 (3,4,5,6,7) - Having these two stacks next to each other can be confusing
01:32:277 (4) - Maybe move this down so that it flows from (2) - (4) in a zigzag motion, giving impact to (3)? Move the following slider after, ofc.

[Deceit's Rain]
Lol, it just suddenly gets complicated at the beginning
Also, you should've hitsounded it like the standard difficulties, they sound way better
00:05:759 (1) - Move slider tail to the right of the slider head so that the direction goes right -> left instead of left -> right
00:09:777 (3) - you should move this closer to the previous slider, it feels weird to have to dash on the slider tail
00:33:884 (1,3) - these sliders play better when bent outwards and get hyper imo
00:35:223 (2) - You should remove this circle to give more impact to the previous one and not make the movement seem too forced
00:37:902 (1) - ctrl+g?
00:42:455 (1) - would be nice if you put this further away from the slider so that it takes a hyper to hit this, or else this jump is really hard
01:06:295 (1,2,3) - make (2) equal in distance from (1) and (3)?
01:07:634 (4) - Make this hyper to impact the next slider more. The full screen hyper jumps aren't really challenging at this BPM tbh, and this is like the pinnacle of the map.
01:07:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern just seems off. the other times where you put 1/4 sliders on blue ticks were okay, but this time it just doesn't feel right and jumps aren't so smooth. I think the pattern would work way better with dashes like this:
http://puu.sh/gaT08/2d1f9fd04c.jpg
01:18:348 (1,2,3) - Make pattern rhythm be like

for variety. Also if you do this, i recommend 2-3 and 4-5 be stacked outwards
01:32:277 (5,6) - Maybe you could make this a bigger jump, since pretty much last sounds; you could place it around x304?
01:32:857 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like this should all be one color, so make it a reverse slider instead on the opposite side for movement effect? And also, the sounds aren't on 1/8 beats, they're on 1/12ths.
All of what I mean in this suggestion.

I think that's it from me. Good luck!

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2015-02-24T21:26:51+00:00

Hi, asked via pm \o

[Normal]

00:04:955 - I believe a whistle here will fit well
00:19:420 (2) - Instead of just remove the clap to have the decrease volume of hit sound, why not just decrease the hit sound volume, only for this note ? I think 20% is fine with clap + whistle.
00:39:777 (2) - I know you made the pattern for the symmetry, but with the symmetry, the pattern make some important vocal passively played. As exemple, when she start a new sentence, on the "ha", it's just an arrow on slider. But I think ignoring the "ha" would be better to map the "na" here 00:40:848 - which is stronger. Also, this voice note here 00:41:384 - is strong for this part, and I think should be clicked.
There is something which I find inconsistent on this diff : 00:17:812 - 00:34:955 - This part is harder than this one 00:34:955 - 00:52:098 - but the 2nd part is actually louder.
00:49:420 (2) - I know you are following the melody which start on the blue tick. But I don't think a lot of player who play Normal diff will notice it. They will mainly notice the vocal which is a way stronger and they might think the slider is offbeat.
00:58:527 (3,4,5) - I personally find the transition kinda weird. https://puu.sh/gb6lf/8dd90f8815.jpg

[Hard]

00:04:955 - Same as normal ? Add whistle.
00:19:420 - Same as normal ? copy/paste : Instead of just remove the clap to have the decrease volume of hit sound, why not just decrease the hit sound volume, only for this note ? I think 20% is fine with clap + whistle.
00:49:955 (1,2) - same thing as normal.

well, standard diff are arleady well made, there's nothing more to add !
good luck !

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-02-24T23:34:48+00:00

How to make my shit rankable please
Will reply mods once i'm home

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-02-25T01:14:05+00:00

Modding as requested. For Standard diffs only.

[General]
BG dimensions are a bit inadequate (1228 x 767). I'd fixed it to (1366 x 768), you can get it here >>> http://puu.sh/gbq8Q/abb6a19597.jpg

[KwaN's Hard]
♥ Almost perfect for me. Good hitsounds, amazing patterns and flow.
01:33:036 (1) - Here you could use progressive suavization of sound (green lines from 20% to 10% in degrees, like 20% - 18% - 16% as well) -- even though it could be more suitable if spinner starts with a more higher volume (at least 40%, which's not the case).

[KwaN's Normal]
00:49:420 (2) - Rhythm of this repeating slider feels very strange, hm... Consider shorten it to 1/1 as below:

. And don't forget to adjust the spacing as well.
01:33:036 (1) - Same as told in Hard diff.

That's all (:

Let's Qualify soon !

Deceitful

390 posts

Joined February 2012

Deceitful 2015-02-25T11:55:21+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
[ Deceit's Rain]
00:09:777 (3) - move to x:240
00:12:723 (3) - move to x:464 and 00:12:991 (4) - move to x:224
00:33:884 (1,2) - on 00:34:018 and 00:34:152 (2) - look want Hdash move to x:272
00:34:420 (3,4) - ^^^ 00:34:687 (4) - move to x:240
00:35:223 (2) - Delete for some break
00:37:366 (2) - ^^^
00:38:973 (1) - move tail to right
00:39:241 (2) - change to this
00:42:455 (1,2,3,4) - on this should use pattern is same 00:33:884 (1,2,3,4) -
00:43:795 (1) - Delete for some break

all rejected

GAMI wrote:
pm mod req

Deceit's Rain
00:16:473 (2) - di akhir slidernya bisa pake hitsound ini biar lebih cantik ga ngerti ah
00:19:687 (4) - whistle biar enak didengar added
00:19:687 (4) - (suggest) mending note ini di hapus dan di note 00:21:562 (4) - dikasih whistle yg ane beri tadi balik ke mod paling atas
00:26:384 (5) - (suggest) kasih whistle yg ane beri tadi balik ke mod paling atas [2]
00:30:134 (3) - whistle biasa added
00:43:527 (5) - (suggest) kasih whistle yg ane beri tadi balik ke mod paling atas[3]
00:55:580 (4) - (suggest) add note udah dari mod sebelumnya
00:55:982 (5) - (suggest) add note ngikutin irama drumnya udah dari mod sebelumnya [2]
01:08:571 (2) - dan 01:09:107 (4) - sumpah clapnya ga enak didengar ya gue ngikutin nada belakang, anyway rada dibetulin
01:17:277 (4) - (suggest) mix ato ubah whistle yg ane beri tadi udah bagus gini kok
01:19:420 (4) - ^ udah bagus gini kok [2]
01:30:134 (5) - whistle plez stream yang dibelakang dah rame whistle itu
00:38:170 (2) - x: 228 no
00:39:241 (2) - ga cocok di ksh slide sampe 4 note gitu, usahain kasih double slide biasa aja (suggest) udah dari mod lain
00:38:973 (1) - x:176 no [2]
01:11:250 (2,3) - perih banget jump gini ga ada red-dashnya ;; dah rada diperbaikin jadi lebih gampang
01:23:705 (4) - (suggest ) x :320 & 01:23:973 (5) - ctrl g + 416 suggest macam apa ini cuk apalah ini kawakwkakwak
01:32:879 (6,7,8,9) - notenya agak jelek , ganti aja dengan spin biasa udah dirubah jadi lebih baik sama mod orang
00:43:795 (1) - usahain note ini ga jauh dari note sebelumnya karna sebagian org pasti akan miss (suggest) biasa aja ah
00:45:670 (2) - x: 48 :^) nononono

well ... sory klo mod w jelek ( udah lama g ngemod lol + noob dalam modding rain )

ok gl ye

toybot wrote:
[Deceit's Rain]
Lol, it just suddenly gets complicated at the beginning
Also, you should've hitsounded it like the standard difficulties, they sound way better
00:05:759 (1) - Move slider tail to the right of the slider head so that the direction goes right -> left instead of left -> right added
00:09:777 (3) - you should move this closer to the previous slider, it feels weird to have to dash on the slider tail added
00:33:884 (1,3) - these sliders play better when bent outwards and get hyper imo added
00:35:223 (2) - You should remove this circle to give more impact to the previous one and not make the movement seem too forced added
00:37:902 (1) - ctrl+g? added
00:42:455 (1) - would be nice if you put this further away from the slider so that it takes a hyper to hit this, or else this jump is really hard added
01:06:295 (1,2,3) - make (2) equal in distance from (1) and (3)? added
01:07:634 (4) - Make this hyper to impact the next slider more. The full screen hyper jumps aren't really challenging at this BPM tbh, and this is like the pinnacle of the map. added
01:07:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern just seems off. the other times where you put 1/4 sliders on blue ticks were okay, but this time it just doesn't feel right and jumps aren't so smooth. I think the pattern would work way better with dashes like this:
http://puu.sh/gaT08/2d1f9fd04c.jpg added
01:18:348 (1,2,3) - Make pattern rhythm be like for variety. Also if you do this, i recommend 2-3 and 4-5 be stacked outwards added
01:32:277 (5,6) - Maybe you could make this a bigger jump, since pretty much last sounds; you could place it around x304? added
01:32:857 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like this should all be one color, so make it a reverse slider instead on the opposite side for movement effect? And also, the sounds aren't on 1/8 beats, they're on 1/12ths.
All of what I mean in this suggestion. added

damn senpai best mod <3

Thanks for the mod guys!

btw itu hitson customnya delete aja genotod

Deceit's Rain

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Cuthue.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52232
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 97098
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Amai Hanazono(Game Version)
TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
Version:Deceit's Rain
Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを
BeatmapID:612819
BeatmapSetID:269177

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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128,240,29062,6,0,L|384:240,1,210.000008010865,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,144,29866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,30134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,288,30670,6,0,B|96:208|96:160|192:80,1,210.000008010865,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,112,31473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,31741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,128,32812,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,33080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,33348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,33616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,304,33884,6,0,L|14:257,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,34152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,144,34687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,34955,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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304,176,40312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,47009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,47277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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432,96,57455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,58795,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,176,60402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,63080,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,80,64420,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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112,192,65223,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,65491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,128,65759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,96,65893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,66027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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249,192,66964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,192,67902,6,0,P|16:144|64:64,1,183.750001752377,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,96,70714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,192,72723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,72991,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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144,192,75134,1,8,2:0:0:0:
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368,192,75402,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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368,64,76473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,76607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,76875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,77009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,77277,2,2,L|480:272,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,304,78348,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,78616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,78750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,79018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,320,79955,6,0,L|32:80,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,256,81295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,81562,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,81830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,82098,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,192,82232,2,0,L|208:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,82902,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,83036,2,0,P|336:144|368:80,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,84241,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,84375,2,0,L|224:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,84777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,85045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,85178,2,0,P|208:224|176:176,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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347,176,86116,2,0,L|400:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,86384,6,0,L|32:96,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,87187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,87589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,112,87991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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400,192,89062,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,112,89866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,90937,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,91205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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219,200,92009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,144,92545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Last edited by Deceitful 2015-02-27T11:23:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-25T15:27:28+00:00

untung bukan lagu t+pajolit

/me runs

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2015-02-26T00:41:55+00:00

Random mod time

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Rain]

00:00:670 (2,3) - This movement is a bit... unexpected? I think players will tend to move right because of the huge distance in the timeline. I suggest moving (3) to x:368 to make this more intuitive to play.
00:12:723 (3,4,5) - I think the song is not that strong to add such jumps, so reduce them a bit. Moving (3) to x:112 and (5) to x:416 seems better to me.
00:19:687 (4,5) - I think a larger jump would fit here to emphasize vocals and the 1/1 pattern, so I suggest doing Ctrl+H on 00:19:955 (5,1,1,2) -
00:18:884 (3) - Remove finish on tail
00:19:955 (5) - Add finish
00:20:491 (1) - Add whistle
00:26:920 (1,3) - Remove finish on these, I think it's too strong. Maybe replacing them with whistles is better. Also, I think finish on (3)'s tail fits better than whistle.
00:37:098 (4) - Finish on this one's head will emphasize the vocal a bit more
00:38:170 (2) - I think this flows better if it moves to the left
00:43:795 (1) - Moving this to x:368 will make a nice left-right pattern
01:00:134 (1,2,3) - I think Ctrl+H on this will emphasize things a bit more
01:03:080 (1) - If you move this to x:384 you'll add more movement
01:10:178 (2,3) - This one is a bit hard, since it's one grid space away from being an hyperdash. I suggest moving (3) to x:48 to make it easier to catch
01:23:973 (5,1,2) - This movement quite breaks the flow, so I suggest Ctrl+H on 01:24:241 (1,2) -

Deceitful

390 posts

Joined February 2012

Deceitful 2015-02-26T13:59:18+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Random mod time

[ Rain]
00:00:670 (2,3) - This movement is a bit... unexpected? I think players will tend to move right because of the huge distance in the timeline. I suggest moving (3) to x:368 to make this more intuitive to play. it's already match the song
00:12:723 (3,4,5) - I think the song is not that strong to add such jumps, so reduce them a bit. Moving (3) to x:112 and (5) to x:416 seems better to me. no need
00:19:687 (4,5) - I think a larger jump would fit here to emphasize vocals and the 1/1 pattern, so I suggest doing Ctrl+H on 00:19:955 (5,1,1,2) - it's weird, really
00:18:884 (3) - Remove finish on tail i was following the song
00:19:955 (5) - Add finish whistle is better
00:20:491 (1) - Add whistle it didn't match the vocal
00:26:920 (1,3) - Remove finish on these, I think it's too strong. Maybe replacing them with whistles is better. Also, I think finish on (3)'s tail fits better than whistle. i was following the song [2]
00:37:098 (4) - Finish on this one's head will emphasize the vocal a bit more changed my mind, finish is too strong for the vocal
00:38:170 (2) - I think this flows better if it moves to the left well, this is toybot's mod and i added it, but i think it fit more better to the left, added
00:43:795 (1) - Moving this to x:368 will make a nice left-right pattern it's better with hyper on
01:00:134 (1,2,3) - I think Ctrl+H on this will emphasize things a bit more it's weird
01:03:080 (1) - If you move this to x:384 you'll add more movement added
01:10:178 (2,3) - This one is a bit hard, since it's one grid space away from being an hyperdash. I suggest moving (3) to x:48 to make it easier to catch no need, it's not really hard
01:23:973 (5,1,2) - This movement quite breaks the flow, so I suggest Ctrl+H on 01:24:241 (1,2) - added

Thanks for the mod!

Last edited by Deceitful 2015-02-27T11:23:03+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2015-02-26T23:27:44+00:00

[Rain]

Necessary such broken numbers for CS and HP, instead round them up to the next even number.
00:05:759 (1) - CTRL + G and move it back to x160 afterwards, will give a better interlude for 00:07:098 (1) - .
00:07:902 (1,2,3,4) - For a Rain that's way too simple, such a pattern could maybe be used in a Cup or Salad. The music is raising its volume here, so try to follow it with this for example:
SPOILER
00:10:045 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I like how you used these Hypers, fits the music well but why did you totally neglect it at 00:12:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - even though the rhythm is repetitive here? It's too surprising and feels weird when suddenly the whole pattern changes and within that the rhythm feeling.
00:14:330 (2,1,2) - To follow the music better try the following:
00:15:402 (4,5) - Might be a valid place for some little Hyper concerning the higher noise at (5). Same goes with 00:25:982 (3,4) - .
00:34:420 (3,4,1) - Listening to the music the Hyper should appear from (4) to (1) to fit the drum. Not from (3) to (4). If you want to keep that Hyper you can also include a Double Hyper though.
00:37:902 (1) - Make this a single note instead and skip this slight beat at 00:38:036 - . It can be very confusing because it simply goes too fast. Another option is to CTRL + G 00:37:902 (1) - and move 00:37:902 (1,2) - slightly to the left to decrease this jumpy effect at least a bit.
00:41:116 (1,2) - Increase distance. Fits the music well imo.
00:55:848 (5) - Rotate this to the right to create a triangle pattern, will be a better intro for the following jump.
00:57:723 (1) - Nerf just a bit, 1-2 grids to the right.
01:09:241 (7) - If you move this more to the left we have some troll pattern. Would be fun for the Kiai :3
This map has 0 spinners, instead of the slider at 01:13:527 (2) - consider adding a spinner here, also please have at least a 1/2 distance before and after spinner to leave this rankable for others. However, if you disagree with this point for a spinner look for another one. But add it somewhere, please.
01:17:277 (6) - CTRL G this and move it FAR to the left just right after!

Call me back once you found 2 more nominators for this, I will give it a deeper recheck just right after and hopefully we can move it forward. Very clean mapping style. Not much to complain.

Deceitful

390 posts

Joined February 2012

Deceitful 2015-02-27T11:23:24+00:00

Sey wrote:
[Rain]
Necessary such broken numbers for CS and HP, instead round them up to the next even number. well, k
00:05:759 (1) - CTRL + G and move it back to x160 afterwards, will give a better interlude for 00:07:098 (1) - . added
00:07:902 (1,2,3,4) - For a Rain that's way too simple, such a pattern could maybe be used in a Cup or Salad. The music is raising its volume here, so try to follow it with this for example: added with more distance
SPOILER
00:10:045 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I like how you used these Hypers, fits the music well but why did you totally neglect it at 00:12:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - even though the rhythm is repetitive here? It's too surprising and feels weird when suddenly the whole pattern changes and within that the rhythm feeling. changed with 01:23:437 (3,4,5) - pattern
00:14:330 (2,1,2) - To follow the music better try the following: i was following the drum with putting 3 circles after the sliders
00:15:402 (4,5) - Might be a valid place for some little Hyper concerning the higher noise at (5). Same goes with 00:25:982 (3,4) - . can't made it into hyper but increasing the distance
00:34:420 (3,4,1) - Listening to the music the Hyper should appear from (4) to (1) to fit the drum. Not from (3) to (4). If you want to keep that Hyper you can also include a Double Hyper though. no need, even the volume is raised it's better with non hyper jump
00:37:902 (1) - Make this a single note instead and skip this slight beat at 00:38:036 - . It can be very confusing because it simply goes too fast. Another option is to CTRL + G 00:37:902 (1) - and move 00:37:902 (1,2) - slightly to the left to decrease this jumpy effect at least a bit. only decreasing the distance, using ctrl + g will only made the pattern more harder
00:41:116 (1,2) - Increase distance. Fits the music well imo. added
00:55:848 (5) - Rotate this to the right to create a triangle pattern, will be a better intro for the following jump. added
00:57:723 (1) - Nerf just a bit, 1-2 grids to the right. added
01:09:241 (7) - If you move this more to the left we have some troll pattern. Would be fun for the Kiai :3 it's not too troll but added
This map has 0 spinners, instead of the slider at 01:13:527 (2) - consider adding a spinner here, also please have at least a 1/2 distance before and after spinner to leave this rankable for others. However, if you disagree with this point for a spinner look for another one. But add it somewhere, please. added
01:17:277 (6) - CTRL G this and move it FAR to the left just right after! only do the ctrl +g
Call me back once you found 2 more nominators for this, I will give it a deeper recheck just right after and hopefully we can move it forward. Very clean mapping style. Not much to complain. Sure, thanks

Thanks for the mod!

Deceit's Rain

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TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
Version:Deceit's Rain
Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを
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PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-02-27T14:38:37+00:00

updated
still waiting for kwan's reply >_>

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-02-27T15:43:56+00:00

I skip commenting and delete what I have fixed!

toybot

[General]
I feel like you need a less dense and less complicated diff for standard, since this normal is quite dense in notes, trying to get all the rhythms into a normal difficulty; perhaps get someone to make a beginner difficulty and make the normal difficulty a bit harder to get normal star rating? Otherwise this set is really nice. i don't agree because of the low BPM and nothing tricky in Normal LOL

[KwaN's Normal]
00:52:634 (1) - Clap on head? but it's a bass instead of snare :<
Nice difficulty! thanks!

[KwaN's Hard]
01:09:777 (2) - I recommend moving this to around 224|344, the two circles are different it's intentionally doing a stack like this
01:04:420 (4,5,6) - Having the triplet stack start on a solid quarter beat instead of an eighth makes this inconsistent. Personally I'm not really fond of this whole combo and would change it to something like this. it sounds like overmapping if i do it like this
01:12:455 (3,4,5,6,7) - Having these two stacks next to each other can be confusing there's obvious difference in AR, i hope it's fine
01:32:277 (4) - Maybe move this down so that it flows from (2) - (4) in a zigzag motion, giving impact to (3)? Move the following slider after, ofc. i prefer mine o_O

I think that's it from me. Good luck!

Kin

Hi, asked via pm \o hello o/

[Normal]

00:04:955 - I believe a whistle here will fit well the piano is of too low pitch which doesn't deserve a whistle imo
00:39:777 (2) - I know you made the pattern for the symmetry, but with the symmetry, the pattern make some important vocal passively played. As exemple, when she start a new sentence, on the "ha", it's just an arrow on slider. But I think ignoring the "ha" would be better to map the "na" here 00:40:848 - which is stronger. Also, this voice note here 00:41:384 - is strong for this part, and I think should be clicked. will listen for more opinions on this :c
There is something which I find inconsistent on this diff : 00:17:812 - 00:34:955 - This part is harder than this one 00:34:955 - 00:52:098 - but the 2nd part is actually louder. ;w; i am sorry, i don't understand
00:49:420 (2) - I know you are following the melody which start on the blue tick. But I don't think a lot of player who play Normal diff will notice it. They will mainly notice the vocal which is a way stronger and they might think the slider is offbeat. i have no idea how to fix it and it's my way to map the music instead of vocals ;w;

[Hard]

00:04:955 - Same as normal ? Add whistle. same as Normal!
00:49:955 (1,2) - same thing as normal. :<

well, standard diff are arleady well made, there's nothing more to add !
good luck !

Alarido

Modding as requested. For Standard diffs only.

[General]
BG dimensions are a bit inadequate (1228 x 767). I'd fixed it to (1366 x 768), you can get it here >>> http://puu.sh/gbq8Q/abb6a19597.jpg

[KwaN's Hard]
♥ Almost perfect for me. Good hitsounds, amazing patterns and flow. thank you!

[KwaN's Normal]
00:49:420 (2) - Rhythm of this repeating slider feels very strange, hm... Consider shorten it to 1/1 as below:

. And don't forget to adjust the spacing as well. i am following the guitar :<

That's all (:

Let's Qualify soon !

Normal

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Thanks for modding, guys! \3/

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-03-10T22:09:01+00:00

Hi hi:3~~
requested via PM by Genocide..

[KwaN's Normal]

00:33:884 (4) - isn't this slider must be started at 00:33:616 - since there's a clearly instrument there not 00:33:884 - it's same to 00:21:027 (4) - but at 00:21:027 (4) - I see you follow the vocal so it'll be fine.
01:13:259 (1) - I think clap with normal additions isn't good here (on the head). I know there's a volume up instrument here. But I think you can use another hitsound that will more fit with this, like whistle with soft additions (to be honest I better like if it was no hitsound with soft sampleset)
You're amazing in this diff

[KwaN's Hard]

00:22:098 (1,2,1,2) - I really enjoyed to hear the song and notes that match each other until I see those extended. Did you make it extended because of vocal at 00:22:634 - and 00:24:777 - ? But I think to make it not extended is really nice the hear.
01:01:741 (3) - I think this curve should face to the right http://puu.sh/gv0QD/33444bfb7e.jpg since the note before it and after it (not including the stacks) 01:01:473 (2,6) - were at the right of this slider
Amazing too in this diff

Sorry for a short mod..
I like how it's designed and the pattern, so I'll leave a star...
Go!!~~

Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-03-11T10:55:56+00:00

Random check. o/

[General]

Your background's resolution is unrankable 1228x767. You need to make this 1366x768 or 1024x768 to make it rankable.

[Rain]

00:09:375 (2) - Wtf, this makes no sense. There is clearly no beat on blue tick while there is one on red. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/gvEWv/d62d3b8d02.png
00:11:518 (2) - Same here as before.
00:14:330 (2) - There is a little strong beat at 00:14:464. How about this instead: http://puu.sh/gvF0C/d758b0290f.png
00:15:670 (3) - I think this would be better as a slider which ends at 00:16:205.
00:18:348 (2,3) - This sounds and plays really weird. Try this: http://puu.sh/gvF8u/435b7e88ff.png
00:21:027 (1) - Why this sudden NC?
00:26:384 (4,1,2,3,1) - Weird rhythm again imo. This sounds a little better but still weird: http://puu.sh/gvFiX/b7e91ed094.png
00:35:491 (2,3) - This sounds much better imo: http://puu.sh/gvFlU/38dc401db3.png
00:40:580 (1) - Sudden NC.
00:42:455 (1,2,3) - This big jump here makes no sense as the rhythm itself is really weak. Make it a little bit smaller.
00:52:366 (1,2) - Add HDash here to follow the vocal.
01:08:705 (5,6) - Why this sudden claps? They sounds really weird.
01:22:232 (2) - What I already said at the beginning applies here as well.
01:23:036 (2) - Use 1/4 stream instead. Leaving that strong beat blank is a bad idea.
01:24:375 (2) - Again.

Its a clean map but I'm not sure if its really ready for ranking. The rhythm is switching back and forth between vocal and music constantly which makes it really hard to play. And those sliders on blue ticks makes it much worse.
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Since Sey said to call him back I won't steal his apple. I leave this to his decision but a few more mod on rhythm would be nice for sure. Good luck. o/

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-03-11T11:24:12+00:00

The background image is rankable as long as it's within 1366*768, but the ratio is somewhat weird.

I will reply to mods when there are several more of them.

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-11T12:17:17+00:00

:'(

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2015-03-11T13:10:35+00:00

Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
Gray - Personal preference

[General]

Futsuu and Muzu: 00:09:239 - unsnapped (and useless) green line, please remove

[

KwaN's Normal]

00:33:884 (4) - 开头clap一下跟背景声（还有和3的blanket……如果愿意修的话）
00:42:456 (4) - clap (and 1ms unsnap)

[

KwaN's Hard]

和Normal一样

Star for standard diffs, really nice work!

[

Futsuu]

00:14:866 - Consider to have k here and change 00:14:598 (17) - to d
Personally I'm not so fond of vocal mapping in Futsuu but your mapping follows pitch well so I don't have much advice here..

[

Muzukashii]

00:10:848 (19) - change to d for pitch
00:12:187 (22) - k here fits better imo, it also provide better flows.
00:14:330 - add d here?
00:37:634 (77,78,79) - I personally dislike dkd/kdk pattern in muzu, ddd fits enough
01:00:402 - maybe add d here, i feel quite empty.
01:12:991 (185) - change to k for vocal pitch
01:29:330 - add d here

I recommend you to have about two more mods in Taiko since you have only one useful taiko mod before mine.
Maybe you can call me back after it is apple'd then I'll try to recheck and bubble if possible, if you have already found a taiko BN to check, I'll leave a circle after KwaN's reply.
Good luck!

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-11T13:37:36+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
Gray - Personal preference
[General]
Futsuu and Muzu: 00:09:239 - unsnapped (and useless) green line, please remove
[ KwaN's Normal]
00:33:884 (4) - 开头clap一下跟背景声（还有和3的blanket……如果愿意修的话）
00:42:456 (4) - clap (and 1ms unsnap)
[ KwaN's Hard]
和Normal一样
Star for standard diffs, really nice work!

[ Futsuu]
00:14:866 - Consider to have k here and change 00:14:598 (17) - to d
Personally I'm not so fond of vocal mapping in Futsuu but your mapping follows pitch well so I don't have much advice here..
[ Muzukashii]
00:10:848 (19) - change to d for pitch
00:12:187 (22) - k here fits better imo, it also provide better flows.
00:14:330 - add d here? no
00:37:634 (77,78,79) - I personally dislike dkd/kdk pattern in muzu, ddd fits enough. 79 as kat
01:00:402 - maybe add d here, i feel quite empty.
01:12:991 (185) - change to k for vocal pitch if am i not wrong, that ddd is loud already so keep
01:29:330 - add d here
I recommend you to have about two more mods in Taiko since you have only one useful taiko mod before mine.
Maybe you can call me back after it is apple'd then I'll try to recheck and bubble if possible, if you have already found a taiko BN to check, I'll leave a circle after KwaN's reply.
Good luck!

thanks for mod
BUB IT THANKS

Ginshu

1,042 posts

Joined May 2014

Ginshu 2015-03-11T14:00:36+00:00

=w=)/

Futsuu

• 00:21:027 - add d
• 01:10:848 - add k

Muzukashii

• 00:37:768 (78) - delete
• 00:38:170 (80) - pindah ke 00:38:036 -

• 01:12:991 (186) - k
• 01:13:259 (187) - d

maaf kalau mod nya gak membantu

good luck~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-03-11T15:00:53+00:00

Fantastica wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:33:884 (4) - isn't this slider must be started at 00:33:616 - since there's a clearly instrument there not 00:33:884 - it's same to 00:21:027 (4) - but at 00:21:027 (4) - I see you follow the vocal so it'll be fine. you're right!
01:13:259 (1) - I think clap with normal additions isn't good here (on the head). I know there's a volume up instrument here. But I think you can use another hitsound that will more fit with this, like whistle with soft additions (to be honest I better like if it was no hitsound with soft sampleset) i've tried to lower the volume, see if it's better~
You're amazing in this diff thanks!
[KwaN's Hard]
00:22:098 (1,2,1,2) - I really enjoyed to hear the song and notes that match each other until I see those extended. Did you make it extended because of vocal at 00:22:634 - and 00:24:777 - ? But I think to make it not extended is really nice the hear. yea i make them for vocals, and i found them fit :C
01:01:741 (3) - I think this curve should face to the right http://puu.sh/gv0QD/33444bfb7e.jpg since the note before it and after it (not including the stacks) 01:01:473 (2,6) - were at the right of this slider LOL you're right!
Amazing too in this diff
Sorry for a short mod..
I like how it's designed and the pattern, so I'll leave a star... thank you~
Go!!~~

OniJAM wrote:
[ KwaN's Normal]
00:33:884 (4) - 开头clap一下跟背景声（还有和3的blanket……如果愿意修的话）換了節奏呢
00:42:456 (4) - clap (and 1ms unsnap)
[ KwaN's Hard]
和Normal一样 fixed both~
Star for standard diffs, really nice work! thanks C:

Thanks for mods!

@Genocide: Why isn't the artist Haruna Yumi? Why isn't 'yuri' in the tag?? This is unacceptable!!! May also add '5pb' into the tags. http://5pb.jp/records/release/detail/de ... =FPBD-0076

Hard

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52232
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:Amai Hanazono(Game Version)
TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
Version:KwaN's Hard
Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを
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OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
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Title:Amai Hanazono(Game Version)
TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
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Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを
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PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-11T15:53:58+00:00

i was lazy to edit tags

added yuri.
updated

LNP- wrote:
=w=)/

Futsuu
• 00:21:027 - add d
• 01:10:848 - add k

Muzukashii
• 00:37:768 (78) - delete
• 00:38:170 (80) - pindah ke 00:38:036 - no

• 01:12:991 (186) - k no
• 01:13:259 (187) - d no

maaf kalau mod nya gak membantu

good luck~

thanks for mod
updated

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2015-03-12T09:43:23+00:00

hi~ from game-in chat

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

good?

[

Futsuu]

00:05:763 - add note?

01:03:888 - delete.

01:04:955 (100,101) - swap & 01:06:029 - add d. I think k d k d=good flow

[

Muzukashii]

00:09:233 - more good pattern (my suggesution)　→　http://puu.sh/gwYCO.jpg

00:38:179 - move to 00:38:045 - because,follow the vocal.

00:39:116 - add k & 00:39:247 - change to k.I think 1/4 pattern is good.

01:04:946 - move to 01:04:831 - & 01:05:771 - change to d & 01:06:036 - delete.because, I think same part.so same pattern is good.

Good luck

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-13T07:46:46+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
hi~ from game-in chat

[ about]
d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note
[ General]

good?
[ Futsuu]

00:05:763 - add note? i want to keep it blank

01:03:888 - delete.

01:04:955 (100,101) - swap & 01:06:029 - add d. I think k d k d=good flow ctrl + g 'd
[ Muzukashii]

00:09:233 - more good pattern (my suggesution)　→　http://puu.sh/gwYCO.jpg nope.

00:38:179 - move to 00:38:045 - because,follow the vocal.

00:39:116 - add k & 00:39:247 - change to k.I think 1/4 pattern is good.

01:04:946 - move to 01:04:831 - & 01:05:771 - change to d & 01:06:036 - delete.because, I think same part.so same pattern is good. a bit i have to changed.
Good luck

time to call CTBNs.

Deceitful

390 posts

Joined February 2012

Deceitful 2015-03-13T13:03:04+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Random check. o/

[General]
Your background's resolution is unrankable 1228x767. You need to make this 1366x768 or 1024x768 to make it rankable.
[Rain]

00:09:375 (2) - Wtf, this makes no sense. There is clearly no beat on blue tick while there is one on red. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/gvEWv/d62d3b8d02.png there's a beat on it, you can't hear it?
00:11:518 (2) - Same here as before. there's a beat on it, you can't hear it? [2]
00:14:330 (2) - There is a little strong beat at 00:14:464. How about this instead: http://puu.sh/gvF0C/d758b0290f.png added
00:15:670 (3) - I think this would be better as a slider which ends at 00:16:205. nah, following the long beat
00:18:348 (2,3) - This sounds and plays really weird. Try this: http://puu.sh/gvF8u/435b7e88ff.png not using circles but 1/4 slider, added
00:21:027 (1) - Why this sudden NC? vocal change
00:26:384 (4,1,2,3,1) - Weird rhythm again imo. This sounds a little better but still weird: http://puu.sh/gvFiX/b7e91ed094.png nah, it's perfect like this
00:35:491 (2,3) - This sounds much better imo: http://puu.sh/gvFlU/38dc401db3.png nah, it's perfect like this [2]
00:40:580 (1) - Sudden NC. vocal change [2]
00:42:455 (1,2,3) - This big jump here makes no sense as the rhythm itself is really weak. Make it a little bit smaller. well sure, added
00:52:366 (1,2) - Add HDash here to follow the vocal. added
01:08:705 (5,6) - Why this sudden claps? They sounds really weird. the song has some clap-like sound, so i use clap on it
01:22:232 (2) - What I already said at the beginning applies here as well. there's a beat on it, you can't hear it? [3]
01:23:036 (2) - Use 1/4 stream instead. Leaving that strong beat blank is a bad idea. added
01:24:375 (2) - Again. can't hear any strong beat

Its a clean map but I'm not sure if its really ready for ranking. The rhythm is switching back and forth between vocal and music constantly which makes it really hard to play. And those sliders on blue ticks makes it much worse.
[]

Since Sey said to call him back I won't steal his apple. I leave this to his decision but a few more mod on rhythm would be nice for sure. Good luck. o/

Thanks for the mod!

Deceit's Rain

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52232
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:Amai Hanazono(Game Version)
TitleUnicode:甘い花園（ゲームバージョン）
Artist:Yumi Haruna
ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
Creator:Genocide
Version:Deceit's Rain
Source:Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke o
Tags:iamkwan deceitful ending eroge visual novel short game version Itoshisa no Photograph Anata o Suki na Shiawase Kuchibiru to Kiss de Tsubuyaite その花びらにくちづけを yuri
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352,96,71920,6,0,L|432:208,1,122.500001168251,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,72455,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,72723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,72991,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,192,73259,2,0,L|96:192,1,61.2500005841255
256,192,73527,12,0,74598,0:0:0:0:
32,192,75000,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,75134,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,75268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,75402,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,320,75670,6,0,L|32:96,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,76473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,76607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,76875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,77009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,256,77277,2,2,L|422:169,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,304,78348,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,78616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,78750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,79018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,192,79152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,79420,2,0,L|304:80,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,79955,6,0,L|32:80,1,210.000008010865,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,80759,6,0,L|320:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,81027,2,0,L|192:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,81295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,81562,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,81830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,82098,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,192,82232,2,0,L|208:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,82634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,96,82902,6,0,L|320:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,83170,2,0,L|192:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,96,83437,2,0,L|400:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,83705,2,0,L|144:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,83973,2,0,L|224:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,84241,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,84375,2,0,L|288:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,84777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,85045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,85178,2,0,P|208:224|176:176,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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347,176,86116,2,0,L|400:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,112,87187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,87589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,87723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,87991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,112,88259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,88527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,89062,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,89330,2,0,L|112:160,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,112,89866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,112,90134,2,0,L|448:48,2,105.000004005432,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90937,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,91205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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219,200,92009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,92277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,92545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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PatZar

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PatZar 2015-03-13T13:05:09+00:00

updated, need 1 more CTBn ;-;

Kin

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Kin 2015-03-15T14:36:44+00:00

no kd, because I already modded it \o
I forgot how to mod ctb ;w;

[Rain]

00:18:348 (2,3) - here, the music is like a reverse of the sound here 00:17:812 (1) - . To emphasize the fact it's like a reverse, I think to emphasize this fact, it can be better to make it more simular to (1). I mean, change it as left, right instead of right, left. Just ctrl+g this one 00:18:348 (2) - .

[Futsuu]

00:38:973 - Since you're following the vocal, why not add a k ?
00:58:259 - add a d for the vocal ? you did something simular here 00:53:973 (79,80) - .
01:09:777 (107) - Maybe just me, but I think this one as k is better for the melody.
Why don't you add something here 01:17:277 - or here 01:16:473 - ? It's not consistent with the fact you did it on other simular part >_>

[Muzukashii]

00:32:009 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - I feel kinda weird for this pattern. You followed only the vocal in all previous pattern (and also next), but not on this one.
00:38:973 (80,81,82) - I think change it as kkd will be better with the vocal, since the voice goes down here 00:39:241 - . Also, if you changed as kkd, I think this one 00:39:777 (83) - should be a k
00:49:152 (107,108,109) - Change it as ddk? The voice goes up and more high pitched here 00:49:420 (109) - .
00:49:955 (111) - Maybe move this one 1/4 earlier for the vocal ? >_>
00:59:598 (140) - I dunno why, but I find this one as k better.
01:06:027 (163,164) - swap it a d k ? the voice goes down on the first note, and then suddenly up on the 2nd.

well, that's all from me >_>

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-03-15T15:04:27+00:00

Kin wrote:
no kd, because I already modded it \o
I forgot how to mod ctb ;w;

[Rain]

00:18:348 (2,3) - here, the music is like a reverse of the sound here 00:17:812 (1) - . To emphasize the fact it's like a reverse, I think to emphasize this fact, it can be better to make it more simular to (1). I mean, change it as left, right instead of right, left. Just ctrl+g this one 00:18:348 (2) - .
[Futsuu]

00:38:973 - Since you're following the vocal, why not add a k ? i want to keep it blank.
00:58:259 - add a d for the vocal ? you did something simular here 00:53:973 (79,80) - .
01:09:777 (107) - Maybe just me, but I think this one as k is better for the melody.
Why don't you add something here 01:17:277 - or here 01:16:473 - ? It's not consistent with the fact you did it on other simular part >_> >_> added
[Muzukashii]

00:32:009 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - I feel kinda weird for this pattern. You followed only the vocal in all previous pattern (and also next), but not on this one. my style
00:38:973 (80,81,82) - I think change it as kkd will be better with the vocal, since the voice goes down here 00:39:241 - . Also, if you changed as kkd, I think this one 00:39:777 (83) - should be a k i want to keep it as k, since i have DQ'd about oox xxo and etc
00:49:152 (107,108,109) - Change it as ddk? The voice goes up and more high pitched here 00:49:420 (109) - . ^
00:49:955 (111) - Maybe move this one 1/4 earlier for the vocal ? >_> nope
00:59:598 (140) - I dunno why, but I find this one as k better.
01:06:027 (163,164) - swap it a d k ? the voice goes down on the first note, and then suddenly up on the 2nd. nope
well, that's all from me >_>

>_>
thanks

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2015-03-23T13:35:36+00:00

plak pt2

20:07 Niko-nyan: pt2 modding
20:07 *Niko-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/629415 Yumi Haruna - Amai Hanazono(Game Version) [Muzukashii]]
20:07 Genocide: asek
20:07 Genocide: ayok
20:07 Niko-nyan: bentar ada nyokap :<
20:08 Genocide: `-`
20:09 Niko-nyan: k here it is
20:09 Niko-nyan: 00:03:616 - k ( nada sama kayak (4) )
20:10 Genocide: no, 00:03:616 (5) - suaranya kecil klo di d
20:10 Genocide: klo di kat suaranya kekencengan
20:11 Niko-nyan: gak terlalu kok
20:11 Genocide: di gw iya wkwk
20:11 Niko-nyan: 50% gak terlalu kenceng kok
20:11 Genocide: digw uda kenceng
20:11 Genocide: orz
20:12 Niko-nyan: -5% lah
20:12 Niko-nyan: :<
20:12 Genocide: gk
20:12 Genocide: `0`
20:12 Genocide: next
20:13 Niko-nyan: 00:07:098 - k
20:13 Niko-nyan: entar kenapa kedengeran mirip 1
20:13 Genocide: 00:00:670 (1) - suara snare kyk gitar, dan 00:07:098 (10) - suaranya kyk monotune
20:13 Niko-nyan: antara 1 / 4 gitu
20:14 Niko-nyan: gw lupa nadanya :<
20:14 Genocide: beda
20:14 Niko-nyan: ddk kalau muzu gpp kan
20:14 Niko-nyan: :>
20:15 Genocide: gw gk mw ada ddk xox bla etc
20:15 Genocide: gw uda apus semua wkwk
20:16 Niko-nyan: 01:00:937 (144,145) - gak fit deh biar ada break sejenak buat muzu lagi
20:16 Niko-nyan: atau remove 145 sih
20:16 Genocide: fit kok itu
20:17 Niko-nyan: gak terlalu di gue
20:17 Genocide: itu style gueh
20:17 Niko-nyan: 145 :< yg agak aneh
20:17 Niko-nyan: nyelip gitu
20:17 Genocide: di gw fit amt sangat
20:18 Niko-nyan: dan mulai aneh disitu doang
20:18 Genocide: wkkw
20:18 Genocide: sttyle muzu gw anti mainstrum
20:18 Niko-nyan: tapi kebanyakan note kayaknya di pattern yg itu doang
20:19 Niko-nyan: :< makanya agak susah gitu
20:19 Genocide: kan muzu
20:19 Genocide: susah
20:19 Genocide: awkakw
20:19 Genocide: :v
20:19 Niko-nyan: susah to suram
20:19 Niko-nyan: :<
20:19 Genocide: :<
20:19 Genocide: uda post sono
20:19 Genocide: awkkaw
20:20 Niko-nyan: 00:53:973 - Futsuu swap plz 79,80
20:21 Genocide: 00:53:973 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - hithat sound
20:21 Genocide: no tidak
20:22 Niko-nyan: 81 : d k k d
20:22 Niko-nyan: why i hear like that
20:22 Niko-nyan: wkawkakwa
20:23 Genocide: gw gk gitu suka ikutin nada pitchnya si penyayi
20:23 Genocide: penyanyi*
20:23 Genocide: jhadi gw ganti jadi hithat
20:24 Niko-nyan: hithat gak terlalu mainstream agan?
20:24 Niko-nyan: :>
20:24 Genocide: iya sih :^(
20:24 Genocide: tp tetep keep kawkaw
20:27 Genocide: mana modnya
20:27 Genocide: jngan nnton indog
20:27 Niko-nyan: :< itu
20:28 Niko-nyan: itu ctb si izza yg harus ganti atau lu boleh?
20:29 Genocide: gw yang ganti
20:29 Genocide: wkwk
20:29 Niko-nyan: 00:05:759 - uhm geser dikit entar lebih enak
20:29 Niko-nyan: ctb btw
20:30 Niko-nyan: 00:42:991 - nyimpang lebih bagus btw kalau menurut gw
20:31 Genocide: dah
20:31 Niko-nyan: 00:50:089 - distance snap gak simetris sama 1 2 3
20:32 Genocide: itu fine kok flow ctb rain emng kyk gini
20:32 Niko-nyan: itu kok NOTE TERAKHIRNYA UNSYNC
20:32 *Niko-nyan slaps izza then*
20:33 Genocide: suaranya emng dimulai dari situ
20:33 Genocide: awkkaw
20:33 Niko-nyan: lebih enak spinner sih
20:33 Genocide: tunggu ieza berkata aja
20:33 Genocide: wkwk
20:34 Niko-nyan: k just that ctb got my mod
20:34 Niko-nyan: :<
20:34 Genocide: :O
20:34 Genocide: k post

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-03-23T13:37:24+00:00

mantap gan

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2015-04-03T11:38:56+00:00

2nd mod for ctb diff!

Deceit's Rain
00:08:170 (2,3) - remove whistle soalnya gak ada nada yang mendukung
00:09:241 (3,4,3,4) - ganti whistle ke clap (snapping suara "tak")
00:14:062 (1) - buntut slidernya diganti ke clap
00:15:134 (1) - clap lebih dapet flownya
00:18:884 (3) - buntutnya kok ada cymbal ? remove untuk memberikan flow yang lebih
00:26:384 (4) - remove cymbalnya lebih dapet flow
00:36:027 (2,3) - remove finishernya plz
00:44:598 (3,5) - ^

;w;

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