Yumi Haruna - Amai Hanazono(Game Version) [CatchTheBeat|Taik · forum

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-03-13T13:05:09+00:00

updated, need 1 more CTBn ;-;

Kin

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Joined August 2010

Kin 2015-03-15T14:36:44+00:00

no kd, because I already modded it \o
I forgot how to mod ctb ;w;

[Rain]

00:18:348 (2,3) - here, the music is like a reverse of the sound here 00:17:812 (1) - . To emphasize the fact it's like a reverse, I think to emphasize this fact, it can be better to make it more simular to (1). I mean, change it as left, right instead of right, left. Just ctrl+g this one 00:18:348 (2) - .

[Futsuu]

00:38:973 - Since you're following the vocal, why not add a k ?
00:58:259 - add a d for the vocal ? you did something simular here 00:53:973 (79,80) - .
01:09:777 (107) - Maybe just me, but I think this one as k is better for the melody.
Why don't you add something here 01:17:277 - or here 01:16:473 - ? It's not consistent with the fact you did it on other simular part >_>

[Muzukashii]

00:32:009 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - I feel kinda weird for this pattern. You followed only the vocal in all previous pattern (and also next), but not on this one.
00:38:973 (80,81,82) - I think change it as kkd will be better with the vocal, since the voice goes down here 00:39:241 - . Also, if you changed as kkd, I think this one 00:39:777 (83) - should be a k
00:49:152 (107,108,109) - Change it as ddk? The voice goes up and more high pitched here 00:49:420 (109) - .
00:49:955 (111) - Maybe move this one 1/4 earlier for the vocal ? >_>
00:59:598 (140) - I dunno why, but I find this one as k better.
01:06:027 (163,164) - swap it a d k ? the voice goes down on the first note, and then suddenly up on the 2nd.

well, that's all from me >_>

PatZar

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Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-15T15:04:27+00:00

Kin wrote:
no kd, because I already modded it \o
I forgot how to mod ctb ;w;

[Rain]

00:18:348 (2,3) - here, the music is like a reverse of the sound here 00:17:812 (1) - . To emphasize the fact it's like a reverse, I think to emphasize this fact, it can be better to make it more simular to (1). I mean, change it as left, right instead of right, left. Just ctrl+g this one 00:18:348 (2) - .
[Futsuu]

00:38:973 - Since you're following the vocal, why not add a k ? i want to keep it blank.
00:58:259 - add a d for the vocal ? you did something simular here 00:53:973 (79,80) - .
01:09:777 (107) - Maybe just me, but I think this one as k is better for the melody.
Why don't you add something here 01:17:277 - or here 01:16:473 - ? It's not consistent with the fact you did it on other simular part >_> >_> added
[Muzukashii]

00:32:009 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - I feel kinda weird for this pattern. You followed only the vocal in all previous pattern (and also next), but not on this one. my style
00:38:973 (80,81,82) - I think change it as kkd will be better with the vocal, since the voice goes down here 00:39:241 - . Also, if you changed as kkd, I think this one 00:39:777 (83) - should be a k i want to keep it as k, since i have DQ'd about oox xxo and etc
00:49:152 (107,108,109) - Change it as ddk? The voice goes up and more high pitched here 00:49:420 (109) - . ^
00:49:955 (111) - Maybe move this one 1/4 earlier for the vocal ? >_> nope
00:59:598 (140) - I dunno why, but I find this one as k better.
01:06:027 (163,164) - swap it a d k ? the voice goes down on the first note, and then suddenly up on the 2nd. nope
well, that's all from me >_>

>_>
thanks

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2015-03-23T13:35:36+00:00

plak pt2

20:07 Niko-nyan: pt2 modding
20:07 *Niko-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/629415 Yumi Haruna - Amai Hanazono(Game Version) [Muzukashii]]
20:07 Genocide: asek
20:07 Genocide: ayok
20:07 Niko-nyan: bentar ada nyokap :<
20:08 Genocide: `-`
20:09 Niko-nyan: k here it is
20:09 Niko-nyan: 00:03:616 - k ( nada sama kayak (4) )
20:10 Genocide: no, 00:03:616 (5) - suaranya kecil klo di d
20:10 Genocide: klo di kat suaranya kekencengan
20:11 Niko-nyan: gak terlalu kok
20:11 Genocide: di gw iya wkwk
20:11 Niko-nyan: 50% gak terlalu kenceng kok
20:11 Genocide: digw uda kenceng
20:11 Genocide: orz
20:12 Niko-nyan: -5% lah
20:12 Niko-nyan: :<
20:12 Genocide: gk
20:12 Genocide: `0`
20:12 Genocide: next
20:13 Niko-nyan: 00:07:098 - k
20:13 Niko-nyan: entar kenapa kedengeran mirip 1
20:13 Genocide: 00:00:670 (1) - suara snare kyk gitar, dan 00:07:098 (10) - suaranya kyk monotune
20:13 Niko-nyan: antara 1 / 4 gitu
20:14 Niko-nyan: gw lupa nadanya :<
20:14 Genocide: beda
20:14 Niko-nyan: ddk kalau muzu gpp kan
20:14 Niko-nyan: :>
20:15 Genocide: gw gk mw ada ddk xox bla etc
20:15 Genocide: gw uda apus semua wkwk
20:16 Niko-nyan: 01:00:937 (144,145) - gak fit deh biar ada break sejenak buat muzu lagi
20:16 Niko-nyan: atau remove 145 sih
20:16 Genocide: fit kok itu
20:17 Niko-nyan: gak terlalu di gue
20:17 Genocide: itu style gueh
20:17 Niko-nyan: 145 :< yg agak aneh
20:17 Niko-nyan: nyelip gitu
20:17 Genocide: di gw fit amt sangat
20:18 Niko-nyan: dan mulai aneh disitu doang
20:18 Genocide: wkkw
20:18 Genocide: sttyle muzu gw anti mainstrum
20:18 Niko-nyan: tapi kebanyakan note kayaknya di pattern yg itu doang
20:19 Niko-nyan: :< makanya agak susah gitu
20:19 Genocide: kan muzu
20:19 Genocide: susah
20:19 Genocide: awkakw
20:19 Genocide: :v
20:19 Niko-nyan: susah to suram
20:19 Niko-nyan: :<
20:19 Genocide: :<
20:19 Genocide: uda post sono
20:19 Genocide: awkkaw
20:20 Niko-nyan: 00:53:973 - Futsuu swap plz 79,80
20:21 Genocide: 00:53:973 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - hithat sound
20:21 Genocide: no tidak
20:22 Niko-nyan: 81 : d k k d
20:22 Niko-nyan: why i hear like that
20:22 Niko-nyan: wkawkakwa
20:23 Genocide: gw gk gitu suka ikutin nada pitchnya si penyayi
20:23 Genocide: penyanyi*
20:23 Genocide: jhadi gw ganti jadi hithat
20:24 Niko-nyan: hithat gak terlalu mainstream agan?
20:24 Niko-nyan: :>
20:24 Genocide: iya sih :^(
20:24 Genocide: tp tetep keep kawkaw
20:27 Genocide: mana modnya
20:27 Genocide: jngan nnton indog
20:27 Niko-nyan: :< itu
20:28 Niko-nyan: itu ctb si izza yg harus ganti atau lu boleh?
20:29 Genocide: gw yang ganti
20:29 Genocide: wkwk
20:29 Niko-nyan: 00:05:759 - uhm geser dikit entar lebih enak
20:29 Niko-nyan: ctb btw
20:30 Niko-nyan: 00:42:991 - nyimpang lebih bagus btw kalau menurut gw
20:31 Genocide: dah
20:31 Niko-nyan: 00:50:089 - distance snap gak simetris sama 1 2 3
20:32 Genocide: itu fine kok flow ctb rain emng kyk gini
20:32 Niko-nyan: itu kok NOTE TERAKHIRNYA UNSYNC
20:32 *Niko-nyan slaps izza then*
20:33 Genocide: suaranya emng dimulai dari situ
20:33 Genocide: awkkaw
20:33 Niko-nyan: lebih enak spinner sih
20:33 Genocide: tunggu ieza berkata aja
20:33 Genocide: wkwk
20:34 Niko-nyan: k just that ctb got my mod
20:34 Niko-nyan: :<
20:34 Genocide: :O
20:34 Genocide: k post

PatZar

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Topic Starter

PatZar 2015-03-23T13:37:24+00:00

mantap gan

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2015-04-03T11:38:56+00:00

2nd mod for ctb diff!

Deceit's Rain
00:08:170 (2,3) - remove whistle soalnya gak ada nada yang mendukung
00:09:241 (3,4,3,4) - ganti whistle ke clap (snapping suara "tak")
00:14:062 (1) - buntut slidernya diganti ke clap
00:15:134 (1) - clap lebih dapet flownya
00:18:884 (3) - buntutnya kok ada cymbal ? remove untuk memberikan flow yang lebih
00:26:384 (4) - remove cymbalnya lebih dapet flow
00:36:027 (2,3) - remove finishernya plz
00:44:598 (3,5) - ^

;w;

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined February 2011

Spectator 2015-05-01T10:49:31+00:00

General

Difficulty Spread : ☑
Unsnapped objects : ☑
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
Metadata Issues : ☑
Timeline Issues : ☑
Combo Colors : ☑
Unused hitsounds : ☑
Hitsounds Issues : ☑
Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Deceit's Rain

00:05:759 (1) - I think the NC here isn't really needed
00:07:098 (1) - ^
00:37:098 (4,1,2) - It's pretty optional, but how about trying this?
00:47:009 (2) - I'd move this to about x:96 for a better movement
00:51:964 (6,1,2) - The edge jump coming right after the HDash must be avoided. You'd better reduce the distance between 1 and 2 for a bit
00:55:848 (5) - You better move this to a bit right to make the movement better. I feel like the space between 4 and 5 isn't enough
00:57:455 (4,1,2) - Blind jumps should be avoided.. how about moving (1) to the right slightly?
01:00:402 (2,3) - Here's an another unexpected jump which is pretty hard to get. Please consider reducing the distance
01:01:607 (2,1) - This is exactly the same as what I said on 00:51:964 (6,1,2) - . Please get rid of timed jumps coming right after the hdashes
01:10:580 (3,4) - Moving these to a bit right would be better as they are pretty tough atm
01:11:920 (1) - Unnecessary NC?
01:28:527 (8) - Please move this to about x:224. It's way too tricky and based on memorization

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-05-01T11:24:03+00:00

Niko-nyan wrote:
2nd mod for ctb diff!

Deceit's Rain
00:08:170 (2,3) - remove whistle soalnya gak ada nada yang mendukung
00:09:241 (3,4,3,4) - ganti whistle ke clap (snapping suara "tak")
00:14:062 (1) - buntut slidernya diganti ke clap
00:15:134 (1) - clap lebih dapet flownya
00:18:884 (3) - buntutnya kok ada cymbal ? remove untuk memberikan flow yang lebih
00:26:384 (4) - remove cymbalnya lebih dapet flow
00:36:027 (2,3) - remove finishernya plz
00:44:598 (3,5) - ^

;w;

nothing change here ;w;
serius akwawk

Spectator wrote:
General
Difficulty Spread : ☑
Unsnapped objects : ☑
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
Metadata Issues : ☑
Timeline Issues : ☑
Combo Colors : ☑
Unused hitsounds : ☑
Hitsounds Issues : ☑
Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Deceit's Rain
00:05:759 (1) - I think the NC here isn't really needed
00:07:098 (1) - ^
00:37:098 (4,1,2) - It's pretty optional, but how about trying this? umm the current his is better imo, them are walking from 1->4
00:47:009 (2) - I'd move this to about x:96 for a better movement 00:51:964 (6,1) - the tail of (6) gives some emphasis jump onto 1, so if i make both closer it will be a lack movement imo.
00:51:964 (6,1,2) - The edge jump coming right after the HDash must be avoided. You'd better reduce the distance between 1 and 2 for a bit
00:55:848 (5) - You better move this to a bit right to make the movement better. I feel like the space between 4 and 5 isn't enough
00:57:455 (4,1,2) - Blind jumps should be avoided.. how about moving (1) to the right slightly?
01:00:402 (2,3) - Here's an another unexpected jump which is pretty hard to get. Please consider reducing the distance imo, there is the flow one
01:01:607 (2,1) - This is exactly the same as what I said on 00:51:964 (6,1,2) - . Please get rid of timed jumps coming right after the hdashes
01:10:580 (3,4) - Moving these to a bit right would be better as they are pretty tough atm
01:11:920 (1) - Unnecessary NC?
01:28:527 (8) - Please move this to about x:224. It's way too tricky and based on memorization

no reply = changed
thanks for revived\:D/

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-05-04T19:10:27+00:00

cincungs.. <(``) ngek *well ga kuat, halo mastah~

[Futsuu]
00:59:866 (92) - K?
01:23:705 - tambah dhe lel

[Muzukashii]
mantap lupa ini *edit
01:19:420 - kha
01:20:491 - add kha

well ga membantu maaf hueeeeee ;w; *wes nice bagiku, atau aku yg telinganya kek patrick star? lel GL
*mitologi 36~ *matanya mecotot kluars *my map maz bangaw *utek2 yg awesem mapku, yg ancur jgn lel

Deceitful

390 posts

Joined February 2012

Deceitful 2015-05-08T07:54:30+00:00

Kin wrote:
no kd, because I already modded it \o
I forgot how to mod ctb ;w;

[Rain]

00:18:348 (2,3) - here, the music is like a reverse of the sound here 00:17:812 (1) - . To emphasize the fact it's like a reverse, I think to emphasize this fact, it can be better to make it more simular to (1). I mean, change it as left, right instead of right, left. Just ctrl+g this one 00:18:348 (2) - .
i think it's the same, i can't find any reverse sound or anything

Niko-nyan wrote:
2nd mod for ctb diff!

Deceit's Rain
00:08:170 (2,3) - remove whistle soalnya gak ada nada yang mendukung added
00:09:241 (3,4,3,4) - ganti whistle ke clap (snapping suara "tak") added
00:14:062 (1) - buntut slidernya diganti ke clap added
00:15:134 (1) - clap lebih dapet flownya added
00:18:884 (3) - buntutnya kok ada cymbal ? remove untuk memberikan flow yang lebih ngikutin suara dibelakang
00:26:384 (4) - remove cymbalnya lebih dapet flow ngikutin suara dibelakang [2]
00:36:027 (2,3) - remove finishernya plz ngikutin suara dibelakang [3]
00:44:598 (3,5) - ^ ngikutin suara dibelakang [4]

;w;

Spectator wrote:

Deceit's Rain
00:05:759 (1) - I think the NC here isn't really needed i'm following the change of the sound
00:07:098 (1) - ^ i'm following the change of the sound
00:37:098 (4,1,2) - It's pretty optional, but how about trying this? no need
00:47:009 (2) - I'd move this to about x:96 for a better movement it's already there lol
00:51:964 (6,1,2) - The edge jump coming right after the HDash must be avoided. You'd better reduce the distance between 1 and 2 for a bit added
00:55:848 (5) - You better move this to a bit right to make the movement better. I feel like the space between 4 and 5 isn't enough added
00:57:455 (4,1,2) - Blind jumps should be avoided.. how about moving (1) to the right slightly? added
01:00:402 (2,3) - Here's an another unexpected jump which is pretty hard to get. Please consider reducing the distance it's still better than 00:51:964 though
01:01:607 (2,1) - This is exactly the same as what I said on 00:51:964 (6,1,2) - . Please get rid of timed jumps coming right after the hdashes there's no any hdashes on this one, just a normal jump
01:10:580 (3,4) - Moving these to a bit right would be better as they are pretty tough atm it's already hdashed
01:11:920 (1) - Unnecessary NC? nope
01:28:527 (8) - Please move this to about x:224. It's way too tricky and based on memorization it's already there too

Thanks for the mod guys!

Anyway it seems like someone has edited my diff, i don't know who is it, but i can say this when i checked spec's map, some of his mod is already applied :\

Deceit's Rain

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ArtistUnicode:春奈有美
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48,160,25848,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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272,144,30134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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352,208,44598,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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304,192,47277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,176,51027,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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80,192,51964,2,0,L|0:192,1,52.5000020027161,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,176,52634,2,0,P|64:96|16:64,1,122.500001168251,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,55312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,55580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,192,56384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,144,57321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,57455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,176,60134,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,176,60402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,192,62009,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,64,76607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,76875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,77009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,256,77277,2,2,L|422:169,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,304,78348,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,304,78616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,192,79018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,79420,2,0,L|304:80,1,105.000004005432,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,79955,6,0,L|32:80,1,210.000008010865,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,256,81295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,192,81562,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,81830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,82098,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,192,82232,2,0,L|208:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,82634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,96,82902,6,0,L|320:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,96,83973,2,0,L|224:96,1,52.5000020027161,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,84241,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,84375,2,0,L|288:192,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,84777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,288,85045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,85178,2,0,P|208:224|176:176,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,176,85580,2,0,L|336:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,175,85848,2,0,L|80:176,1,52.5000020027161,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,176,86116,2,0,L|400:176,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,86384,6,0,L|32:96,1,210.000008010865,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,87187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,87321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,87589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,112,87723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,87991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,112,88259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,88527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,89062,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,192,89330,2,0,L|112:160,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,89598,2,0,L|384:144,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,89866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,112,90134,2,0,L|448:48,2,105.000004005432,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90937,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,91205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,91473,2,0,L|448:160,2,52.5000020027161,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,200,92009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,92277,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,144,92545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,92857,6,0,L|16:144,3,17.500000667572,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

EDIT : Changed some of the pattern cause looked so ugly thanks to this faggot patzar :^)
EDIT 2 : Fixed some hitsounds, so using clap is better than finish lol

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-05-13T07:58:57+00:00

ok updated, probably we can go now
!summon specxkotoridesuftw

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Spectator 2015-05-13T14:39:48+00:00

Appled

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-05-13T14:41:34+00:00

\:D/

Kayano

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Kayano 2015-05-13T15:14:37+00:00

Removed a useless folder, others are fine.
Standard and Taiko diffs look good to me, also there has an apple now, so

Bubbled!

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-05-13T15:20:41+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Removed a useless folder, others are fine.
Standard and Taiko diffs look good to me, also there has an apple now, so

Bubbled!

\:D/ hype!

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-13T19:17:56+00:00

Hi~

[Kwan's Normal]

00:49:420(2)- The slider is unsnapped.Setting the Beat Snap Divisor to 1/4,you can see the slider is snapped to red tick which sounds very weird so the slider should be snapped on 00:50:491()- on white tick like here http://puu.sh/hM2FT/9a93b35cbc.jpg
01:32:857(1)- At this point is very visible that the green line is unsnapped and that means the green line is placed towards the white tick instead being placed exacly on white tick I mean on 01:32:812()- to be snapped correctly or you can delete it your choise

[Kwan's Hard]

00:49:955(1,2)- This rhythm sounds really weird to me and the vocals are not emphasized so good in my opinion ;_; I suggest to do a rhythm like here owo I mean to put a note on 00:49:821()- instead placing it on 00:49:955()- and the slider's head can be moved to 00:49:955()- and the slider's tail to 00:50:759()- to catch better the vocals

That's all from me for STD diffs

Call me back

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-05-14T12:26:14+00:00

Kwan's Normal
00:49:420(2)- The slider is unsnapped.Setting the Beat Snap Divisor to 1/4,you can see the slider is snapped to red tick which sounds very weird so the slider should be snapped on 00:50:491()- on white tick like here look at Hard and listen to the music, guitar on 00:50:089 -
01:32:857(1)- At this point is very visible that the green line is unsnapped and that means the green line is placed towards the white tick instead being placed exacly on white tick I mean on 01:32:812()- to be snapped correctly or you can delete it your choise i want the green line sticking to the spinner head, and it isn't unsnapped, it's 1/12 snapped

Kwan's Hard
00:49:955(1,2)- This rhythm sounds really weird to me and the vocals are not emphasized so good in my opinion ;_; you catch me wrong since the beginning as I am not following the vocal, same in Normal lel

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-05-14T12:46:13+00:00

:\v/
let me update my taikos for length of diffs..... after byby pm me

EDIT:
UPDATED SO QUALIFY THIS NOW

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-15T17:07:27+00:00

Ok about that slider in normal and that green line from last spinner.....it's ok

Everything looks fine to me

Qualified