From my modding queue~
From M4M. Nicely mapped~
Overall, just look for places where you can replace a straight slider with a curvy one by listening to the music. Very beautiful song
Have fun mapping~!
From M4M. Nicely mapped~
[Normal]
00:16:412 (3,4) - you have lots of hit circles in a row at this place, maybe it might feel kind of boring to some people. You can replace (3,4) with a slider. This also matches the vocal since the singer is singing "be-taaaaa-pa" and the "taaa" part is accented by where the new slider will be Another part where you can apply this change is at 00:51:706 (3,4) -
Parts where you have done this correctly include 00:18:177 (1) - where you have a slider when the singer sings "ciiiiiiiiiiiin-taaa"~ . Another part where you do this correctly is at 01:19:941 (2) - .
00:23:471 (3,4) - this is optional, but I would prefer this slider as a repeat like this:
The reason for this is because each tick of the slider matches each syllable sung by the singer: (2) - "se" (3)- "la-lu-men" (4) -ja. It feels nicer this way as it matches the vocal~
00:25:235 (1) - since you have quite a few straight sliders, I would recommend changing this to a curvy one, like this one: The change in slider shape will also make sense because of the singer putting emphasis on this part. It doesn't make much sense when you have two straight sliders and on one of them the singer is passionately singing and on the other nothing much is happening
00:28:765 (1,2,3,4) - quite a few normal hitcircles in a row. Even if it is intentional, I feel that you should replace two of them with one slider, but that is just my preference. There are other parts like this ( 00:44:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
00:39:353 (1) - this one feels better as a curved slider
00:46:412 (1) - this one is a bit close to the top of the screen, it overlaps the HP bar. Maybe you can rearrange the notes before it so the slider ends up being lower.
00:53:470 (1) - feels like it should be curved. I'll leave the rest of the straight sliders up to your decision.
00:16:412 (3,4) - you have lots of hit circles in a row at this place, maybe it might feel kind of boring to some people. You can replace (3,4) with a slider. This also matches the vocal since the singer is singing "be-taaaaa-pa" and the "taaa" part is accented by where the new slider will be Another part where you can apply this change is at 00:51:706 (3,4) -
Parts where you have done this correctly include 00:18:177 (1) - where you have a slider when the singer sings "ciiiiiiiiiiiin-taaa"~ . Another part where you do this correctly is at 01:19:941 (2) - .
00:23:471 (3,4) - this is optional, but I would prefer this slider as a repeat like this:
The reason for this is because each tick of the slider matches each syllable sung by the singer: (2) - "se" (3)- "la-lu-men" (4) -ja. It feels nicer this way as it matches the vocal~
00:25:235 (1) - since you have quite a few straight sliders, I would recommend changing this to a curvy one, like this one: The change in slider shape will also make sense because of the singer putting emphasis on this part. It doesn't make much sense when you have two straight sliders and on one of them the singer is passionately singing and on the other nothing much is happening
00:28:765 (1,2,3,4) - quite a few normal hitcircles in a row. Even if it is intentional, I feel that you should replace two of them with one slider, but that is just my preference. There are other parts like this ( 00:44:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
00:39:353 (1) - this one feels better as a curved slider
00:46:412 (1) - this one is a bit close to the top of the screen, it overlaps the HP bar. Maybe you can rearrange the notes before it so the slider ends up being lower.
00:53:470 (1) - feels like it should be curved. I'll leave the rest of the straight sliders up to your decision.
[Hard]
00:00:530 (1) - I know that you intentionally left this longer one tick just like many other areas in the song, but I feel that this part would sound a lot better if you shortened this by one tick so that the final tick on the slider matches the change in guitar. Same here 00:04:059 (1) -
00:05:824 (1,1) - I feel there is not enough time to transition from spinning into hitting the slider note. Consider moving the slider closer towards the centre of the spinner so the player does not have to jump so far.
00:10:235 (5) - shorten this by one tick. Just try this change if you don't believe me and play it a few times, I think it feels much better this way.
00:26:118 (2,3) - if possible try to avoid this overlap
00:32:294 (1) - since you have many straight sliders in a row, it would feel nice if this was curved in some way
00:38:471 (5) - shorten by one tick
01:17:293 (3,4) - you can replace this with a slider to better match vocal
00:00:530 (1) - I know that you intentionally left this longer one tick just like many other areas in the song, but I feel that this part would sound a lot better if you shortened this by one tick so that the final tick on the slider matches the change in guitar. Same here 00:04:059 (1) -
00:05:824 (1,1) - I feel there is not enough time to transition from spinning into hitting the slider note. Consider moving the slider closer towards the centre of the spinner so the player does not have to jump so far.
00:10:235 (5) - shorten this by one tick. Just try this change if you don't believe me and play it a few times, I think it feels much better this way.
00:26:118 (2,3) - if possible try to avoid this overlap
00:32:294 (1) - since you have many straight sliders in a row, it would feel nice if this was curved in some way
00:38:471 (5) - shorten by one tick
01:17:293 (3,4) - you can replace this with a slider to better match vocal
Overall, just look for places where you can replace a straight slider with a curvy one by listening to the music. Very beautiful song
Have fun mapping~!