updated
fixed exclude write red type.pieguy1372 wrote:
[General]
01:27:294 - end kiai here? Nope
[Normal]
00:20:900 (1,2) - down 1 grid for stack
[Hard]
00:03:687 (3) - shouldn't whistle be on start instead?
00:58:277 (1,2,3) - imo it'd be more fun if it wasn't stacked. long stack feel kind of boring imo. just a suggestion
01:06:146 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:491 (1) - i don't think using anti-jump in [Hard] is a good idea...
01:19:425 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:01:228 (2,3,1,2,3) - don't get spacing here @_@ make it use consistent 1.3x DS?
00:22:130 (2,3) - use 1.3x distance? i don't get the reason why DS is suddenly lower here o.o// u might have to rearrange the notes after to keep pattern
00:25:327 (4) - add whistle here? imo better to keep whistle pace since there's whistle every 2 beats after it. (also on 00:29:261 (4) - , 00:33:196 (4) - ,
00:37:130 (5) - ) also applies to [Hard] diff. nope
00:27:171 (4) - i usually find stack in the middle of a stream awkward to play; i would stack 00:27:171 (4) - on 00:27:294 (5) - instead. might just be me. (also 00:31:105 (4) - , 00:35:040 (6) - , 00:38:974 (6) - ) no, i like now
00:37:868 (1,2,3) - unstack? might be more interesting imo nope
00:46:474 (2) - x308 y292? better to keep DS consistent with jumps after imo.
00:47:458 (5) - whistle here instead of 00:47:212 (4) -
00:57:294 (6) - i think place it at x268 y44 is better. vocal is strongest at 00:57:540 - , so having the spacing lower feels awkward to me.all suggestions
- similarly to [Hard], i think the map would be more fun without so many stacks. this is just my opinion though
map is generally ok, i think it should just need more polishing.
hope this helps, GL >w<
i use hit sound clap = normalhitnormal <=> finish, should i'll do'not add finish thispieguy1372 wrote:
[General]
01:27:294 - end kiai here?
[Easy]
00:40:081 - 60% volume? this part is stronger than the part before it, so volume decrease feels out of place for me; also imo it should be the same as 00:45:982 - since the song sounds the same.
00:40:081 (1) - finish instead of whistle? imo more suitable here
00:55:818 (1) - finish instead of whistle? for kiai
01:02:212 (3) - remove clap on end? it doesn't seem to follow anything 0.0
all suggestions
map is generally ok, i think it should just need more polishing.
hope this helps, GL >w<
fixed that :3Inyuschan wrote:
Apparently you have some stuff wrong in Easy. Basically this: http://puu.sh/fPf7z/268b0bacec.png
Anyways, I've checked metadata more properly and I'd say it's not correct actually. Add this instead:
Artist: 早見 沙織
Romanised Artist: Hayami Saori
Title: オレンジミント (TV-size)
Romanised Title: Orange Mint (TV-size)
Source: 憑物語
Basically title needs to be fixed, at least for me; if you're still unsure ask a japanese user experienced with this(like KSHR or Melophobia)
No kudosu for now, I might mod this tomorrow or the weekend, since we did M4M.
fixed all maybeInyuschan wrote:
M4M here.
[General][Normal]
- Romanised Title should be Orange Mint (TV-size). You still have this wrong.
- Hitsounds in some diffs don't fit so much or they're not consistent, I'd check this stuff.
[Hard]
- 00:46:966 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
[Insane]
- 00:07:130 (3,5) - This overlap looks a bit untidy if you ask me, I think you could do something better.
- 01:11:064 (3,4,1) - These stacks are kinda annoying and they break the flow a bit, try to avoid them.
Good luck.
- Nothing to say.
thank you for mod InyuschanInyuschan wrote:
M4M here.
[Easy]Good luck.
- Slider Tick 2 doesn't fit for this song, also the other diffs have Slider Tick 1, so I'd change it.
- 00:00:737 (1,2,1,2) - Claps don't really fit at this part. However, the other diffs have whistles here. Why not being consistent? Also whistles fit better.
- 00:38:114 (2,1) - Bad spacing here, 00:40:081 (1) - should be a bit further.
- 00:44:015 (1) - I think a finish would sound good here to emphasize the cymbal that I can hear.
- 00:46:474 (2) - !nazi - Move the end of this a bit down for a better blanket with 00:47:950 (3).
- 00:55:818 (1) - Finish here? More or less like I've said before.
나머진 다 고쳤어요~HabiHolic wrote:
안녕하세요~ m4m입니다~
[General][Normal]
- (TV-size) 가 아니라 (TV size) 네요 바꿔주세요
[Hard]
- 00:07:130 - 여기도 휘슬 넣어주시는게 어떠세요? 안어색하고 좋은데 전..
- 00:20:900 (1) - 이건 따로 뺴두시는게 좋을것 같아요 겹치는것 보다 나은것 같네요 앞에부분도 다 겹처놓아서요...ㅠ 같게 하고 싶습니다
- 00:41:802 (5,1) - 5번이 보컬 시작이니까 여긴 뉴콤보 바꿔주셔야 할 것 같아요
- 00:44:015 (1) - 끝부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요
- 01:11:064 (3,1) - 애매한 부분이긴 한데 슬라 하나로 맞춰주시는게 좋다고 생각합니다.
[Insane]
- 00:35:532 (6) - 패턴 제안이긴 하지만 이런 슬라도 괜찮을듯 싶네요
- 01:05:409 (5) - blanket이 어긋났습니다. 확인해주세요~
- 01:09:097 (4) - 간격이 안맞네요. 수정해주세요
- 01:12:786 (4) - 제 생각에는 이 노트 없어도 표현이 잘 된다고 생각하기에 노트 지우시는걸 추천드립니다.
- 01:14:507 (4) - 이것도 blanket이 어긋났습니다. 그래서 슬라이더를 바꿔봤는데 어떤지는...ㅠ
- 01:16:720 (4) - 위와 같이 노트 지우시는걸 추천
- 01:20:655 (4) - same (^)
- 01:24:589 (4) - same (^)
다 수정하신 후에 불러주세요~
- 00:05:163 (2) - 슬라를 왼쪽에서 시작하는게 흐름이 더 좋아요 따라서 Ctrl+G? 이건 유지하고 싶습니다
- 00:49:671 (6,1) - 뉴콤보 바꿔주세요~
- 01:05:409 (6) - 이것도 Ctrl+G? 점프해서 가는게 오히려 더 편해요~
fixed allHabiHolic wrote:
Recheck
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:44:015 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬가 좀 안어울리니까 휘슬로 바꿔주시는게 어떠신가요?
- 01:11:064 (3) - blanket 이 어긋났습니다.
Ok. call me back~
- 01:05:409 (5) - 아직도 어긋나있네요 blanket 수정바랍니다.
thx a lot :3HabiHolic wrote:
Normal diff small hitsound suggust Fixed via IRC good job~
Bubbled
bbj0920 wrote:
그레잇 잡
Euny wrote:
몰래 별쏘고 가셨길래 저도 쏘고 도망가려했더니 버블받으셨네요 축하합니다
go for rank!
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W h i t e wrote:
bbj0920 wrote:
그레잇 잡
i'm going to a country now, so i can't cheak this from now onGamu wrote:
hello~ :3
[ General]
- Remove "(TV size)". Download title of amazon isn't official, so it isn't allowed as the correct title.
Correct Title: オレンジミント
Correct Romanised Title: Orange Mint- Correct Artist: 早見沙織
Space's unnecessary.- Tags: Add "meg rock ミト mito 斧乃木余接"? Please look at the image above.
[ Normal]
- 00:04:179 (2) - spacing error. It should be in about 1.1x.
[ Insane]
- 00:08:237 (5) - I don't hear this sound in music, so remove this circle.
call me back~
옙HabiHolic wrote:
태그에 이지겟난매퍼이름 빼주세요~
\:D/Gamu wrote:
Rebubbled~
Everything looks fine o3o
모딩 감사합니다~No Dap wrote:
전체적으로 맵에 스택이 너무 많아서 팝했습니다.
가장 큰 이유는 노말이 되겠네요.
00:11:310 (3,4,1,2) - 이렇게 1/2 스택과 1/1 스택을 번갈아 가면서 계속 쓰시면 아주 안좋습니다. 스택의 양을 줄여주세요. 나름대로 바꿔봤는데 어떤지는 잘 모르겠네요
필요없는 오버래핑도 줄여주세요.
00:36:146 (1,2) - 네
01:06:638 (4,2) - 개인적으로 이건 괜찮다고 생각합니다
01:08:359 (2,2) - ^
00:51:884 (4) - 여긴 뉴콤 넣어주세요 네
-하드-
00:12:540 (1,2,3) - 이런 패턴의 3겹타 우려먹기가 너무 많으신데 줄여주시길 바랍니다. 넵
-인센=
00:27:048 (3,4,5) - 이런패턴도 많으신데 느린 노래와 분위기에 맞춰서 쓸대없이 난이도를 올리는 패턴을 줄여주셨으면 좋겟습니다. 좀 어렵게 만들고 싶어서 크게 문제되는것 아니면 내버려두고 싶어요ㅜ
개인적으로 NHI 보다는 ENH가 더 어울리는 분위기의 노래라고 생각됩니다.
감사합니다~No Dap wrote:
축하드립니다~
koreapenguin wrote:
굳
ㄳㄳㄳㄳㄳ :3HabiHolic wrote:
ㅊㅋㅊㅋㅊㅋㅊㅋ
감사합니당~W h i t e wrote:
ㅊㅋ드립니다~~
thanks :3lehmakari wrote:
nice ur map is ranked
감사합니다~!Euny wrote:
축하드려요~!