1. If the easy is a GD why not add the creator's name?
2. Great map, really fun to play

1. Good map, all I will mention will be purely aesthetics
2. I know you're trying to keep the same curvature, but I think some sliders could be blankets without ruining the flow of your map, the ones I'm talking about are the following:
3. 00:09:097 (2) - , 00:16:966 (2) - , 00:46:474 (2) -
4. 00:28:277 (1) - ~x:136 y:176
5. 00:34:179 (2) - the first curve of this slider isn't perfect, it's a minimal thing, I just think you could make it look better :3
6. 00:56:310 (2) - rotate this one clockwise, by ~ 13º, it could also blanket 00:58:277 (4)

1. 00:32:212 (1,2) - could be a blanket just by rotating
2. 00:36:146 (1,2) - unnecessary overlap, would be better if 2 was inverted
3. Nothing else, good diff

1. 00:11:802 (7) - imo would be better if curved down instead of upwards
2. 00:19:671 (7) - ^ (with the right curvature)
3. 00:14:999 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this grooup of jumps could flow better, the pattern feels a bit weird to play, just see if you can rearrange them in another fun pattern
4. 01:26:310 (4) - how about inverting this slider? the flow would be better imo, I mean ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and reposition

-Bakari- wrote:

don't kudosu, obviously.

well, how about placing one somewhere in the beginning? Picture

anyways, this is not a rule, so you might keep it as it is if you REALLY want to

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[General]

[Easy]

1. Good map, all I will mention will be purely aesthetics
2. I know you're trying to keep the same curvature, but I think some sliders could be blankets without ruining the flow of your map, the ones I'm talking about are the following:
   
3. 00:34:179 (2) - the first curve of this slider isn't perfect, it's a minimal thing, I just think you could make it look better :3 | fix

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[General]

1. If the easy is a GD why not add the creator's name?
2. Great map, really fun to play

[Normal]

1. 00:32:212 (1,2) - could be a blanket just by rotating fixed
2. 00:36:146 (1,2) - unnecessary overlap, would be better if 2 was inverted it`s ok maybe
3. Nothing else, good diff

[Insane]

1. 00:11:802 (7) - imo would be better if curved down instead of upwards sry,i like now
2. 00:19:671 (7) - ^ (with the right curvature) ^
3. 00:14:999 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this grooup of jumps could flow better, the pattern feels a bit weird to play, just see if you can rearrange them in another fun pattern ok,try this
4. 01:26:310 (4) - how about inverting this slider? the flow would be better imo, I mean ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and reposition sry

Didn't find anything in the hard diff. Sorry for the short mod, the song is short and the map is already pretty polished. So gl, you have a nice set here

1. similarly to [Hard], i think the map would be more fun without so many stacks. this is just my opinion though

pieguy1372 wrote:

[General]
01:27:294 - end kiai here? Nope

[Normal]
00:20:900 (1,2) - down 1 grid for stack

[Hard]
00:03:687 (3) - shouldn't whistle be on start instead?
00:58:277 (1,2,3) - imo it'd be more fun if it wasn't stacked. long stack feel kind of boring imo. just a suggestion
01:06:146 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:491 (1) - i don't think using anti-jump in [Hard] is a good idea...
01:19:425 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:01:228 (2,3,1,2,3) - don't get spacing here @_@ make it use consistent 1.3x DS?
00:22:130 (2,3) - use 1.3x distance? i don't get the reason why DS is suddenly lower here o.o// u might have to rearrange the notes after to keep pattern
00:25:327 (4) - add whistle here? imo better to keep whistle pace since there's whistle every 2 beats after it. (also on 00:29:261 (4) - , 00:33:196 (4) - ,
00:37:130 (5) - ) also applies to [Hard] diff. nope
00:27:171 (4) - i usually find stack in the middle of a stream awkward to play; i would stack 00:27:171 (4) - on 00:27:294 (5) - instead. might just be me. (also 00:31:105 (4) - , 00:35:040 (6) - , 00:38:974 (6) - ) no, i like now
00:37:868 (1,2,3) - unstack? might be more interesting imo nope
00:46:474 (2) - x308 y292? better to keep DS consistent with jumps after imo.
00:47:458 (5) - whistle here instead of 00:47:212 (4) -
00:57:294 (6) - i think place it at x268 y44 is better. vocal is strongest at 00:57:540 - , so having the spacing lower feels awkward to me.

1. similarly to [Hard], i think the map would be more fun without so many stacks. this is just my opinion though

all suggestions
map is generally ok, i think it should just need more polishing.
hope this helps, GL >w<

pieguy1372 wrote:

[General]
01:27:294 - end kiai here?

[Easy]
00:40:081 - 60% volume? this part is stronger than the part before it, so volume decrease feels out of place for me; also imo it should be the same as 00:45:982 - since the song sounds the same.
00:40:081 (1) - finish instead of whistle? imo more suitable here
00:55:818 (1) - finish instead of whistle? for kiai
01:02:212 (3) - remove clap on end? it doesn't seem to follow anything 0.0

all suggestions
map is generally ok, i think it should just need more polishing.
hope this helps, GL >w<

Inyuschan wrote:

Apparently you have some stuff wrong in Easy. Basically this: http://puu.sh/fPf7z/268b0bacec.png

Anyways, I've checked metadata more properly and I'd say it's not correct actually. Add this instead:

Artist: 早見 沙織
Romanised Artist: Hayami Saori
Title: オレンジミント (TV-size)
Romanised Title: Orange Mint (TV-size)
Source: 憑物語

Basically title needs to be fixed, at least for me; if you're still unsure ask a japanese user experienced with this (like KSHR or Melophobia)

No kudosu for now, I might mod this tomorrow or the weekend, since we did M4M.

1. Romanised Title should be Orange Mint (TV-size). You still have this wrong.
2. Hitsounds in some diffs don't fit so much or they're not consistent, I'd check this stuff.

1. Slider Tick 2 doesn't fit for this song, also the other diffs have Slider Tick 1, so I'd change it.
2. 00:00:737 (1,2,1,2) - Claps don't really fit at this part. However, the other diffs have whistles here. Why not being consistent? Also whistles fit better.
3. 00:38:114 (2,1) - Bad spacing here, 00:40:081 (1) - should be a bit further.
4. 00:44:015 (1) - I think a finish would sound good here to emphasize the cymbal that I can hear.
5. 00:46:474 (2) - !nazi - Move the end of this a bit down for a better blanket with 00:47:950 (3).
6. 00:55:818 (1) - Finish here? More or less like I've said before.

1. 00:46:966 (1) - Unnecessary NC.

1. 00:07:130 (3,5) - This overlap looks a bit untidy if you ask me, I think you could do something better.
2. 01:11:064 (3,4,1) - These stacks are kinda annoying and they break the flow a bit, try to avoid them.

1. Nothing to say.

Inyuschan wrote:

M4M here.

[General]

1. Romanised Title should be Orange Mint (TV-size). You still have this wrong.
2. Hitsounds in some diffs don't fit so much or they're not consistent, I'd check this stuff.

[Normal]

1. 00:46:966 (1) - Unnecessary NC.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:130 (3,5) - This overlap looks a bit untidy if you ask me, I think you could do something better.
2. 01:11:064 (3,4,1) - These stacks are kinda annoying and they break the flow a bit, try to avoid them.

[Insane]

1. Nothing to say.

Good luck.

Inyuschan wrote:

M4M here.

[Easy]

1. Slider Tick 2 doesn't fit for this song, also the other diffs have Slider Tick 1, so I'd change it.
2. 00:00:737 (1,2,1,2) - Claps don't really fit at this part. However, the other diffs have whistles here. Why not being consistent? Also whistles fit better.
3. 00:38:114 (2,1) - Bad spacing here, 00:40:081 (1) - should be a bit further.
4. 00:44:015 (1) - I think a finish would sound good here to emphasize the cymbal that I can hear.
5. 00:46:474 (2) - !nazi - Move the end of this a bit down for a better blanket with 00:47:950 (3).
6. 00:55:818 (1) - Finish here? More or less like I've said before.

Good luck.

1. (TV-size) 가 아니라 (TV size) 네요 바꿔주세요
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:07:130 - 여기도 휘슬 넣어주시는게 어떠세요? 안어색하고 좋은데 전..
2. 00:20:900 (1) - 이건 따로 뺴두시는게 좋을것 같아요 겹치는것 보다 나은것 같네요
3. 00:41:802 (5,1) - 5번이 보컬 시작이니까 여긴 뉴콤보 바꿔주셔야 할 것 같아요
4. 00:44:015 (1) - 끝부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요
5. 01:11:064 (3,1) - 애매한 부분이긴 한데 슬라 하나로 맞춰주시는게 좋다고 생각합니다.

1. 00:35:532 (6) - 패턴 제안이긴 하지만 이런 슬라도 괜찮을듯 싶네요
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:409 (5) - blanket이 어긋났습니다. 확인해주세요~
3. 01:09:097 (4) - 간격이 안맞네요. 수정해주세요
4. 01:12:786 (4) - 제 생각에는 이 노트 없어도 표현이 잘 된다고 생각하기에 노트 지우시는걸 추천드립니다.
5. 01:14:507 (4) - 이것도 blanket이 어긋났습니다.
6. 01:16:720 (4) - 위와 같이 노트 지우시는걸 추천
7. 01:20:655 (4) - same (^)
8. 01:24:589 (4) - same (^)

1. 00:05:163 (2) - 슬라를 왼쪽에서 시작하는게 흐름이 더 좋아요 따라서 Ctrl+G?
2. 00:49:671 (6,1) - 뉴콤보 바꿔주세요~
3. 01:05:409 (6) - 이것도 Ctrl+G? 점프해서 가는게 오히려 더 편해요~

HabiHolic wrote:

안녕하세요~ m4m입니다~

[General]

1. (TV-size) 가 아니라 (TV size) 네요 바꿔주세요
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:07:130 - 여기도 휘슬 넣어주시는게 어떠세요? 안어색하고 좋은데 전..
2. 00:20:900 (1) - 이건 따로 뺴두시는게 좋을것 같아요 겹치는것 보다 나은것 같네요 앞에부분도 다 겹처놓아서요...ㅠ 같게 하고 싶습니다
3. 00:41:802 (5,1) - 5번이 보컬 시작이니까 여긴 뉴콤보 바꿔주셔야 할 것 같아요
4. 00:44:015 (1) - 끝부분에 휘슬 넣어주세요
5. 01:11:064 (3,1) - 애매한 부분이긴 한데 슬라 하나로 맞춰주시는게 좋다고 생각합니다.

[Hard]

1. 00:35:532 (6) - 패턴 제안이긴 하지만 이런 슬라도 괜찮을듯 싶네요
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:409 (5) - blanket이 어긋났습니다. 확인해주세요~
3. 01:09:097 (4) - 간격이 안맞네요. 수정해주세요
4. 01:12:786 (4) - 제 생각에는 이 노트 없어도 표현이 잘 된다고 생각하기에 노트 지우시는걸 추천드립니다.
5. 01:14:507 (4) - 이것도 blanket이 어긋났습니다. 그래서 슬라이더를 바꿔봤는데 어떤지는...ㅠ
6. 01:16:720 (4) - 위와 같이 노트 지우시는걸 추천
7. 01:20:655 (4) - same (^)
8. 01:24:589 (4) - same (^)

[Insane]

1. 00:05:163 (2) - 슬라를 왼쪽에서 시작하는게 흐름이 더 좋아요 따라서 Ctrl+G? 이건 유지하고 싶습니다
2. 00:49:671 (6,1) - 뉴콤보 바꿔주세요~
3. 01:05:409 (6) - 이것도 Ctrl+G? 점프해서 가는게 오히려 더 편해요~

다 수정하신 후에 불러주세요~

1. 00:44:015 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬가 좀 안어울리니까 휘슬로 바꿔주시는게 어떠신가요?
2. 01:11:064 (3) - blanket 이 어긋났습니다.

1. 01:05:409 (5) - 아직도 어긋나있네요 blanket 수정바랍니다.

HabiHolic wrote:

Recheck

[Normal]

1. 00:44:015 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬가 좀 안어울리니까 휘슬로 바꿔주시는게 어떠신가요?
2. 01:11:064 (3) - blanket 이 어긋났습니다.

[Hard]

1. 01:05:409 (5) - 아직도 어긋나있네요 blanket 수정바랍니다.

Ok. call me back~

HabiHolic wrote:

Normal diff small hitsound suggust Fixed via IRC good job~

Bubbled

bbj0920 wrote:

그레잇 잡

bbj0920 wrote:

그레잇 잡

Euny wrote:

몰래 별쏘고 가셨길래 저도 쏘고 도망가려했더니 버블받으셨네요 축하합니다

go for rank!

> <

W h i t e wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

그레잇 잡

Gamu wrote:

hello~ :3

[ General]

1. Remove "(TV size)". Download title of amazon isn't official, so it isn't allowed as the correct title.
   Correct Title: オレンジミント
   Correct Romanised Title: Orange Mint
2. Correct Artist: 早見沙織
   Space's unnecessary.
   
   Image

   
3. Tags: Add "meg rock ミト mito 斧乃木余接"? Please look at the image above.

[ Normal]

1. 00:04:179 (2) - spacing error. It should be in about 1.1x.

[ Insane]

1. 00:08:237 (5) - I don't hear this sound in music, so remove this circle.

call me back~

HabiHolic wrote:

태그에 이지겟난매퍼이름 빼주세요~

Gamu wrote:

Rebubbled~

Everything looks fine o3o

No Dap wrote:

전체적으로 맵에 스택이 너무 많아서 팝했습니다.

가장 큰 이유는 노말이 되겠네요.

00:11:310 (3,4,1,2) - 이렇게 1/2 스택과 1/1 스택을 번갈아 가면서 계속 쓰시면 아주 안좋습니다. 스택의 양을 줄여주세요. 나름대로 바꿔봤는데 어떤지는 잘 모르겠네요

필요없는 오버래핑도 줄여주세요.
00:36:146 (1,2) - 네
01:06:638 (4,2) - 개인적으로 이건 괜찮다고 생각합니다
01:08:359 (2,2) - ^
00:51:884 (4) - 여긴 뉴콤 넣어주세요 네

-하드-
00:12:540 (1,2,3) - 이런 패턴의 3겹타 우려먹기가 너무 많으신데 줄여주시길 바랍니다. 넵

-인센=
00:27:048 (3,4,5) - 이런패턴도 많으신데 느린 노래와 분위기에 맞춰서 쓸대없이 난이도를 올리는 패턴을 줄여주셨으면 좋겟습니다. 좀 어렵게 만들고 싶어서 크게 문제되는것 아니면 내버려두고 싶어요ㅜ

개인적으로 NHI 보다는 ENH가 더 어울리는 분위기의 노래라고 생각됩니다.

Kodora wrote:

Qualified.

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Gratz ~