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Itou Kanako - Toaru Ryuu no Koi no Uta

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Lanttu

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<
Oughh ;A; Sure, fullsubmitted.
Lissette

Lanttu wrote:

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<
Oughh ;A; Sure, fullsubmitted.
still can't import, I tried in other PC and couldn't either >.<
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Lissette wrote:

still can't import, I tried in other PC and couldn't either >.<
Full upload for the fourth time, seriously what I'm going to do if it's not working? ;___;
Lissette
much better!

Proto-Bubble +kudosu star 'cuz i really like this map :3

some nazi mod on Romantic Poem
01:40:450 (3,4) - put these two a bit closer ^^
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Lissette wrote:

much better!

Proto-Bubble +kudosu star 'cuz i really like this map :3 Adsfjdh~ ♥ ;w;

some nazi mod on Romantic Poem
01:40:450 (3,4) - put these two a bit closer ^^ OK~
Thank you very much~♥ *w*
yaya
offset : 22866
Topic Starter
Lanttu

yaya wrote:

offset : 22866
Fixed. Thank you~ ・w・
Sakura
Red = Major Issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
I dont see why you dont use kiai, but use kiai fountains, although it does look pretty
I like your difficulty names ^^

[Sweet Lullaby]
No tags?
No problems found

[Romantic Poem]
00:42:866 (2,4) - Umm try moving theese 1 or 2 grids down?
No problems found

[Love Song]
No problems found

Ok so this means +Star
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
I dont see why you dont use kiai, but use kiai fountains, although it does look pretty It's because with such a light colors it would be kind of blinding I guess. X)
I like your difficulty names ^^

[Sweet Lullaby]
No tags? Added one tag~ ;w;
No problems found

[Romantic Poem]
00:42:866 (2,4) - Umm try moving theese 1 or 2 grids down? OK~
No problems found

[Love Song]
No problems found

Ok so this means +Star
Thank you~ ^w^
YGOkid8
a reminder from #mod...

Title: To Aru Kyuu no Koi no Uta

NOT

Title: Toaru Ryuuno Koi no Uta
Topic Starter
Lanttu

YGOkid8 wrote:

a reminder from #mod...

Title: To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta

NOT

Title: Toaru Ryuuno Koi no Uta
Fixed, thank you~♥ ^^
Teras
Star~
fartownik
Lanttu, you totally made my day. This map is something... awesome. Skinning, flawless map outline, hitsounds, storyboard... it's just beautiful. And the song... grr, I love it.

Please cut the unmapped space of the mp3.

[Romantic Poem]

02:20:866 (2) - One tick up. I had to do nazi, it's just differing from the whole :D

[Love Song]

01:04:466 (3,4) - A little spacing issue.

This mapset is totally amazing and needs more support than a regular star. Have a pink one too.
I'm glad that we have good appearing mappers like you.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

fartownik wrote:

Lanttu, you totally made my day. This map is something... awesome. Skinning, flawless map outline, hitsounds, storyboard... it's just beautiful. And the song... grr, I love it.

Please cut the unmapped space of the mp3. Cut~

[Romantic Poem]

02:20:866 (2) - One tick up. I had to do nazi, it's just differing from the whole :D I can't believe I haven't noticed a mistake like that. ^^; Fixed~

[Love Song]

01:04:466 (3,4) - A little spacing issue. Fixed~

This mapset is totally amazing and needs more support than a regular star. Have a pink one too.
I'm glad that we have good appearing mappers like you. Y-you have no idea how happy this whole post made me feel now. ;3;
Thank you so much♥ ;w;
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I seriously didn't expect this map to be this great...eh. I will rate it 10, for sure, once it get ranked.

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon".
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too?
01:13:266 - ^
01:46:866 - ^
01:56:466 - ^
02:06:066 - ^
Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2).
Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right.
Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down.
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up.
Eh...super ultra star, GO!
<3
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Fuuko wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I seriously didn't expect this map to be this great...eh. I will rate it 10, for sure, once it get ranked. ♥ ;w;

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon". Dragon added, I seriously suck at coming up with tags, sorry. XD;
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too? OK~


Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2). OK~

Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right. OK~

Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down. OK~
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up. OK~

Eh...super ultra star, GO!
<3
Thank you very much~♥ ^3^
Fuuko
Now plus a SUPAH PINK STAR~
soulfear
you should make a [N] or [H] diff.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

soulfear wrote:

you should make a [N] or [H] diff.
Bu-but I think that Romantic Poem plays like hard difficulty though it's marked [I].. ;_;
Sutsuka
I have no words... ;A;

Star~
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Sutsuka wrote:

I have no words... ;A;

Star~
Thank you I wuw you~♥ ;w;
AdRon Zh3Ro
Let's begin...
[:]You can change
[>>]You ned to change

Romantic Poem
>>2:21:866 Spacing(one grid to left)

Nice, nice...
Topic Starter
Lanttu

adron zhero wrote:

Let's begin...
[:]You can change
[>>]You ned to change

Romantic Poem
>>2:21:866 Spacing(one grid to left) It's for the symmetry, so no change. ^^;

Nice, nice...
Thank you~♥ ;w;
anonymous_old
Skin
The numbers don't seem to be centred on the hit circles properly.
The skin is really nice, though, especially the spinner. =]

Sweet Lullaby
Good Normal.

Romantic Poem
00:58:866 (1) - Remove one repeat.

Love Song
I'm impressed. =]

00:46:466 (8) - Unstack.
01:18:066 (1,3) - Swap.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

strager wrote:

Skin
The numbers don't seem to be centred on the hit circles properly. Now that you say it, I kind of see it, too. But unfortunately, I.. kind of don't have a chance to do anything about it right now. ;__;
The skin is really nice, though, especially the spinner. =] ~<3

Sweet Lullaby
Good Normal.

Romantic Poem
00:58:866 (1) - Remove one repeat. OK~

Love Song
I'm impressed. =]

00:46:466 (8) - Unstack. OK~
01:18:066 (1,3) - Swap. OK~
Thank you~♥ ^^
thr1ve
Such a calm song. ^^ I still suck at mapping so for me it's ok. ^^ star ofc.
Dusty
This is one of the best maps on osu!.

so awesome :O
Topic Starter
Lanttu
HNNNGGGHFgsfkjsjfk, thank you so much~♥ ;u;
Mashley
Pretty skin

Sweet Lullaby
Fine

Romantic Poem
02:14:466 (3) - Unrankable overlap...

Love Song
Fine

Nice sweet map, with few problems to be seen :) Take this star, you deserve it~
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Pretty skin

Sweet Lullaby
Fine

Romantic Poem
02:14:466 (3) - Unrankable overlap... Fixed~

Love Song
Fine

Nice sweet map, with few problems to be seen :) Take this star, you deserve it~
Thank you very much~♥ ;w;
dvorak_old
everything is good except title

To Aru > Toaru

If you want to know why, I will explain more detail.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

dvorak wrote:

everything is good except title

To Aru > Toaru

If you want to know why, I will explain more detail.
Changed back, thank you~ ^^
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- As some people already said, change the title to "To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta". This thread will help you ^^ viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Skin:
- Make a completely white reverse arrow, the default one looks a bit ugly here xD Lol nevermind, I have to remember to mod with default skin on... xD'

~Sweet Lullaby~
Lovely <3

~Romantic Poem~
01:54:066 (1) - Whoops~ Enlarge until the white tick =x

~Love Song~
Awesome.

;w; beautiful song and map <3 Good Luck!! *star*
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- As some people already said, change the title to "To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta". I will believe dvorak and keep it Toaru, because s/he(?) is a native Japanese speaker and asked me to write it like that. :3
Skin:
- Make a completely white reverse arrow, the default one looks a bit ugly here xD Lol nevermind, I have to remember to mod with default skin on... xD' :'3

~Sweet Lullaby~
Lovely <3

~Romantic Poem~
01:54:066 (1) - Whoops~ Enlarge until the white tick =x Whoops, OK~

~Love Song~
Awesome.

;w; beautiful song and map <3 Good Luck!! *star*
Thank you~~♥ ;w;
Shinxyn
so is it To Aru or Toaru...? .......wait a...second... what?
[Sweet Lullaby] diff is still "To Aru" o___o , and there are two .osb, one is "To Aru" the other is "toaru"...... major problem >_<

Sweet Lulluby-
02:18:066 (1) - is this slider whistle on purpose? o__o? (since theres no whistle on either side...?)
Great!

Romantic Poem-
Awesome!

Love Song-
01:52:866 (4) - ooh finish on repeat?
02:00:866 (6) - up a tick, match spacing on 4-5-6
Awesome!

Lovely song, skin and map...
Hmm, are the slider slide whistles on purpose?
would prefer shorter break... (18s is kinda long)

No fair, I like this kind of music >_> Willing to bubble~!
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Shinxyn wrote:

so is it To Aru or Toaru...? .......wait a...second... what? It's Toaru, toaru toaru. o/
[Sweet Lullaby] diff is still "To Aru" o___o , and there are two .osb, one is "To Aru" the other is "toaru"...... major problem >_< Oops, name changed and other .osb deleted.

Sweet Lulluby-
02:18:066 (1) - is this slider whistle on purpose? o__o? (since theres no whistle on either side...?) It was a mistake, fixed~
Great!

Romantic Poem-
Awesome!

Love Song-
01:52:866 (4) - ooh finish on repeat? Ooh sure~ .. Added it also to slider end. o/
02:00:866 (6) - up a tick, match spacing on 4-5-6 OK~
Awesome!

Lovely song, skin and map...
Hmm, are the slider slide whistles on purpose? Where there more of those? I tried to look but.. I didn't found any others. ^^;
would prefer shorter break... (18s is kinda long) Yeahh, it's kinda long but we just have to endure it. ;u;

No fair, I like this kind of music >_> Willing to bubble~!
Yay, thank you~ ♥ ^^/
Shinxyn
^^~
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Shinxyn wrote:

^^~
Thankyuu~ ♥ *u*
Gens
Sorry to tell you that you must add an approachcircle and a cursortrail.

And by the way, BPM is a bit too fast... 149.98 should do the trick. Also, use offset 1,272 instead.
Aside from that, nice. Glad to see an anime song that actually is different.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Gens wrote:

Sorry to tell you that you must add an approachcircle and a cursortrail.

And by the way, BPM is a bit too fast... 149.98 should do the trick. Also, use offset 1,272 instead.
Aside from that, nice. Glad to see an anime song that actually is different.
Oh damn. Approachcircle and cursortail added, BPM and offset changed. =3= Thank you~
Gens
Rebubbled.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Gens wrote:

Rebubbled.
Yay~ :3
CheeseWarlock
Neat song choice. Mapping 5/4 time is tough sometimes but it's pretty good here.

[All difficulties]
Get rid of some of the kiai. Going a bit over the one-a-minute rule is fine, but these don't all feel necessary. Plus, the colours already blend a bit much for my liking (but only a little bit), and the flashiness only makes it worse.
02:01:288 (1,1) - It feels strange to end the spinner here because of where the rest of the mapping starts. It's not so bad on Love Song, though, so you can leave it on that one if you really want.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[All difficulties]
Get rid of some of the kiai. Going a bit over the one-a-minute rule is fine, but these don't all feel necessary. Plus, the colours already blend a bit much for my liking (but only a little bit), and the flashiness only makes it worse. Got rid of some kiai and made the rest even more shorter than they were, I hope it's alright now.
02:01:288 (1,1) - It feels strange to end the spinner here because of where the rest of the mapping starts. It's not so bad on Love Song, though, so you can leave it on that one if you really want. But it really doesn't feel that strange to me. :/ I left it like that in all diffs, sorry.
Sorry about late reply, I was travelling. @_@; But thank you~♥
CheeseWarlock
I didn't have a problem with the regular kiai flash, just the initial burst. Actually, I liked it better when they extended. Here's what I'd do from here (but it's not the only option): Delete the third and fifth kiai, since the refountain works best when it feels like it's going into another chorus. Extend the second and fourth so that the whole chorus has kiai. Do whatever you want with the first one and leave the last one short like that.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I didn't have a problem with the regular kiai flash, just the initial burst. Actually, I liked it better when they extended. Here's what I'd do from here (but it's not the only option): Delete the third and fifth kiai, since the refountain works best when it feels like it's going into another chorus. Extend the second and fourth so that the whole chorus has kiai. Do whatever you want with the first one and leave the last one short like that.
Ahh, sorry. =x=; Well, now the last chorus has kiai and those two fountains were deleted.
CheeseWarlock
Looks good.
hoozimajiget
nice map & song

love the skin *_*
AngelHoney
really nice <3333333333
Kodora
Love this!
Heatherfield
いとうかなこ、soul of Nitroplus.
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