orioncomet wrote:

Just some suggestions.

[General]
- Sorry I don't like peoples who force me to do an Easy diff because of my Normal have 4.00 star or 3+, But your [romantic poem] seem too hard for beginner really (I don't see the star of the diff though), then can you make easier diff more then this? I knew someone would say about this. ;w; I really don't think the easier difficulty is worth of 4,5 stars, don't understand why it's so high. But I guess I'll do one more difficulty, then.

[romantic poem]
- HP Drain Rate -1? OK~

[love song]
- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2? +1

starr ~

H-boy wrote:

sweet lullaby

02:21:250(3) - remove whistle and add finish OK~

romantic poem
nice

love song
00:59:450(2) - move one grid right I'd like to keep the pattern centered. ;w;
01:00:650(4) - ^
01:04:450(3) - ^ ^
01:40:850(4) - new combo OK~

star~

Leorda wrote:

Moi! Moi<3

[General]
Would be nice if uppercase the diff name. Example : Sweet Lullaby, Romantic Poem, and Love Song OK~

[Skin]
1) The lifebar is looks ugly, you need a scorebar-bg.png Added~
2) Your spinner-circle is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too confusing, because there's no dot in middle of spinner-circle Is it better now? The black circle looked really rough so I added a white dot. ;w;

[romantic poem]
02:11:450 (x) - Add note? OK~

PERFECT SONG
KUDOSU STAR ajkdshfj awww<3 ;A;

soulfear wrote:

I think you should add more combo color.
Don't use Blue like yours,it's hard to see. I think the colors are just fine and I can see them well. ;_; But if someone other disagrees with me then I will change them.

[Sweet Lullaby]
Good. ♥
[Romantic Poem]
OA+1 OK~
00:44:050 (4) - new combo,it's hard to see. I- I really don't think new combo fits here. ._.;
[Love Song]
OA+1 OK~

star.

Lissette wrote:

you have unnecessary transparence in some .png files, crop it plz Cropped~
Love Song
00:43:250 (4) - new combo, cuz the spacing change OK~
00:48:050 (5) - same
00:49:250 (9) - same
00:52:850 (6) - same
01:43:250 (4) - same

Romantic Poem
if this suposed to be normal, look at this there are two Insane@.@ Oughhhgh @_@;; But it doesn't feel like insane at all to me. ;_;
and dont put jumps in normal Took off the jumps..
01:19:250 (1) - end point here 01:20:450 - like in Love Song and Sweet Lullaby ^^ OK~

really like this map ♥
Star!

call me back when you fix it :)

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<

Lanttu wrote:

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<

Oughh ;A; Sure, fullsubmitted.

Lissette wrote:

still can't import, I tried in other PC and couldn't either >.<

Lissette wrote:

much better!

Proto-Bubble +kudosu star 'cuz i really like this map :3 Adsfjdh~ ♥ ;w;

some nazi mod on Romantic Poem
01:40:450 (3,4) - put these two a bit closer ^^ OK~

yaya wrote:

offset : 22866

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
I dont see why you dont use kiai, but use kiai fountains, although it does look pretty It's because with such a light colors it would be kind of blinding I guess. X)
I like your difficulty names ^^

[Sweet Lullaby]
No tags? Added one tag~ ;w;
No problems found

[Romantic Poem]
00:42:866 (2,4) - Umm try moving theese 1 or 2 grids down? OK~
No problems found

[Love Song]
No problems found

Ok so this means +Star

YGOkid8 wrote:

a reminder from #mod...

Title: To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta

NOT

Title: Toaru Ryuuno Koi no Uta

fartownik wrote:

Lanttu, you totally made my day. This map is something... awesome. Skinning, flawless map outline, hitsounds, storyboard... it's just beautiful. And the song... grr, I love it.

Please cut the unmapped space of the mp3. Cut~

[Romantic Poem]

02:20:866 (2) - One tick up. I had to do nazi, it's just differing from the whole :D I can't believe I haven't noticed a mistake like that. ^^; Fixed~

[Love Song]

01:04:466 (3,4) - A little spacing issue. Fixed~

This mapset is totally amazing and needs more support than a regular star. Have a pink one too.
I'm glad that we have good appearing mappers like you. Y-you have no idea how happy this whole post made me feel now. ;3;

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon".
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too?
01:13:266 - ^
01:46:866 - ^
01:56:466 - ^
02:06:066 - ^

Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2).

Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right.

Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down.
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up.

Fuuko wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I seriously didn't expect this map to be this great...eh. I will rate it 10, for sure, once it get ranked. ♥ ;w;

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon". Dragon added, I seriously suck at coming up with tags, sorry. XD;
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too? OK~


Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2). OK~

Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right. OK~

Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down. OK~
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up. OK~

Eh...super ultra star, GO!
<3

soulfear wrote:

you should make a [N] or [H] diff.

Sutsuka wrote:

I have no words... ;A;♥

Star~

adron zhero wrote:

Let's begin...
[:]You can change
[>>]You ned to change

Romantic Poem
>>2:21:866 Spacing(one grid to left) It's for the symmetry, so no change. ^^;

Nice, nice...

strager wrote:

Skin
The numbers don't seem to be centred on the hit circles properly. Now that you say it, I kind of see it, too. But unfortunately, I.. kind of don't have a chance to do anything about it right now. ;__;
The skin is really nice, though, especially the spinner. =] ~<3

Sweet Lullaby
Good Normal.

Romantic Poem
00:58:866 (1) - Remove one repeat. OK~

Love Song
I'm impressed. =]

00:46:466 (8) - Unstack. OK~
01:18:066 (1,3) - Swap. OK~

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Pretty skin

Sweet Lullaby
Fine

Romantic Poem
02:14:466 (3) - Unrankable overlap... Fixed~

Love Song
Fine

Nice sweet map, with few problems to be seen :) Take this star, you deserve it~

dvorak wrote:

everything is good except title

To Aru > Toaru

If you want to know why, I will explain more detail.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- As some people already said, change the title to "To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta". I will believe dvorak and keep it Toaru, because s/he(?) is a native Japanese speaker and asked me to write it like that. :3
Skin:
- Make a completely white reverse arrow, the default one looks a bit ugly here xD Lol nevermind, I have to remember to mod with default skin on... xD' :'3

~Sweet Lullaby~
Lovely <3

~Romantic Poem~
01:54:066 (1) - Whoops~ Enlarge until the white tick =x Whoops, OK~

~Love Song~
Awesome.

;w; beautiful song and map <3 Good Luck!! *star*

Shinxyn wrote:

so is it To Aru or Toaru...? .......wait a...second... what? It's Toaru, toaru toaru. o/
[Sweet Lullaby] diff is still "To Aru" o___o , and there are two .osb, one is "To Aru" the other is "toaru"...... major problem >_< Oops, name changed and other .osb deleted.

Sweet Lulluby-
02:18:066 (1) - is this slider whistle on purpose? o__o? (since theres no whistle on either side...?) It was a mistake, fixed~
Great!

Romantic Poem-
Awesome!

Love Song-
01:52:866 (4) - ooh finish on repeat? Ooh sure~ .. Added it also to slider end. o/
02:00:866 (6) - up a tick, match spacing on 4-5-6 OK~
Awesome!

Lovely song, skin and map...
Hmm, are the slider slide whistles on purpose? Where there more of those? I tried to look but.. I didn't found any others. ^^;
would prefer shorter break... (18s is kinda long) Yeahh, it's kinda long but we just have to endure it. ;u;

No fair, I like this kind of music >_> Willing to bubble~!

Shinxyn wrote:

^^~

Gens wrote:

Sorry to tell you that you must add an approachcircle and a cursortrail.

And by the way, BPM is a bit too fast... 149.98 should do the trick. Also, use offset 1,272 instead.
Aside from that, nice. Glad to see an anime song that actually is different.

Gens wrote:

Rebubbled.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[All difficulties]
Get rid of some of the kiai. Going a bit over the one-a-minute rule is fine, but these don't all feel necessary. Plus, the colours already blend a bit much for my liking (but only a little bit), and the flashiness only makes it worse. Got rid of some kiai and made the rest even more shorter than they were, I hope it's alright now.
02:01:288 (1,1) - It feels strange to end the spinner here because of where the rest of the mapping starts. It's not so bad on Love Song, though, so you can leave it on that one if you really want. But it really doesn't feel that strange to me. :/ I left it like that in all diffs, sorry.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I didn't have a problem with the regular kiai flash, just the initial burst. Actually, I liked it better when they extended. Here's what I'd do from here (but it's not the only option): Delete the third and fifth kiai, since the refountain works best when it feels like it's going into another chorus. Extend the second and fourth so that the whole chorus has kiai. Do whatever you want with the first one and leave the last one short like that.